yf_bmp wrote:

我操我随便说的

IamKwaN wrote:

Hi there, from my queue here.
Sorry for delay :O

General

1. Your background image is kinda low in resolution, try this one!
   
   SPOILER

   
2. Why not adding the full romanji name of this show as tag? I mean adding 'Gokukoku no Buryunhirude'.

Dark

1. 01:22:826 - Unsnapped time section, snap it to 01:22:825 like other diffs. In fact, there are many snapped green lines, but if u are way too lazy to fix them all, just fixing this would be fine enough.
2. 00:40:921 - Redundant green line, please delete it.
3. 00:14:912 (3,4) - I wonder if there are solid beats for these two. Personally, I don't prefer such overmapping technique but seems you love it so much throughout the diff. So, nah..
4. 00:13:949 (1,2,3,4) - I don't understand your intention of placing anti-jump here. As the four beats are too obvious and heavy, placing something even jumpier than 00:13:398 (1,2,3,4) would be nice imo.
5. 00:14:912 (3,4) - Mentioned above. Alrite, I know it's annoying to point out every single piece of overmap, so I should stop here.
6. 00:16:563 - Missing out a beat here, its awkward to have a halt here even the sound is low. Adding a circle would look nicer :> Same on 00:42:985
7. 00:31:013 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Again, why is the spacing opposite to the atmosphere of the beats? Aren't 00:31:563 (1,2,3,4) being stronger?
8. 00:33:490 (3,4) - These circles make me confused, what are u actually following? I think the instrument is a 1/8 snap instead of 1/4.
9. 00:34:316 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Spacing here makes me feel like, oh is this a Hard instead? I would say, it's rare to place so many anti-jumps in Insane, let alone the highest diff of a set. This is even the climax of the song, so please adjust these, please :c
10. 00:40:371 (1,2,3,4) - ;_; I don't really see your point of having annoying anti-jumps here..
11. 00:40:921 (1,2) - CTRL+G these two on timeline basis, stresses are on 00:41:196 instead of the blue tick.
12. 00:51:242 (3) - Start this slider on white tick, it's where the stress starts. I mean this:
    
    SPOILER

    
13. 00:53:582 (7,8) - These two looks similar to me, so if u add a whistle at tail of 00:53:857 (8), u may want to add a whistle of tail of (7) too.
14. 01:01:701 (2,3,4,5,6) - nah.. at least NC 01:01:839 (3,5) for the different spacing change from 01:01:701 (2,3)?
15. 01:05:692 (4) - I don't think the music lies on 1/8 here. Instead, it's something like this:
    
    SPOILER

    
16. In conclusion, changing spacing at incomprehensible places and switching to follow different instruments make your diff kinda messy imo.

Easy

1. Many redundant green lines, check them yourself please :>
2. 00:27:710 (1,2) - A bit nazi, using the same slider for these two would be more aesthetic. Apparently they are not identical now.
3. 00:43:123 (3) - Obviously stresses are on white ticks, drums are much more distinct than that on red ticks. So, why not separating them as two 1/1 sliders?
4. 01:13:123 (2) - Hmm.. I treat this as sudden switch of instruments, because the previous slider is following, obviously, drums, but for this one, you miss out 01:13:398, which is very awkward imo. How about this?
   
   SPOILER

   

Good luck!

1. BPM is actually 198/218. Wcx's ranked version uses those numbers. Besides the song is way too fast to be low bpm.
2. kiai time should start at 00:56:334 and end at 01:22:756

1. 00:12:297 (2) - end at 00:12:848 because it's a stronger beat
2. 00:54:132 (1) - shouldn't repeat more than once in easy or normal. also blanket is far in the middle
3. 01:02:389 (3) - ^
4. 01:07:343 (3) - ^
5. 01:20:554 (1) - end earlier on white tick for same reason i said earlier

1. 00:24:407 (2) - shorten by a tick to fit rhythm better
2. 00:25:508 (1,2) - redo this to fit the music. extend (1) to end at 00:25:784 and have (2) start at 00:26:059 and end at 00:26:334
3. 00:54:132 (1,2) - have the slider ends correspond to the music by ending them on the red ticks
4. 01:13:536 (1) - what are you doing here? this doesn't fit the music either. keep the slider end at the same time but start the slider later at 01:13:673
5. except for several spots where your mapping contrasts with the music, the rest of the rhythm you chose to map is very nice

1. 00:59:086 (3,4,5,6) - don't do such a sudden change in spacing. for most of your song, notes that were this long apart in time were touching/overlapping each other so players would assume that these notes are twice as slow because of their spacing
2. 01:15:600 (7,8,9,10,1) - ^ you were using regular spacing for 01:14:224 (2,3,4,5,6) and this is only hard difficulty, there's no reason to suddenly double the spacing
3. 01:20:003 (7,8,9,10,1) - also, this is a very high BPM so single tapping a lot of hit circles like this is too hard, especially with the spacing when it isn't a linear pattern

1. 00:19:591 (3,4,5) - the way these are almost stacked but not exactly makes them look like a triple, but it's much easier to read their timing if they're stacked exactly on top of each other (and let the game shift the circles ever so slightly for you)
2. 00:21:792 (3,4,5) - ^
3. 00:23:994 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - ^ and i wouldn't put 00:24:614 (2,3) so close
4. 00:59:086 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1) - redo the rhythm here, it's a little awkward

1. use HP drain 7. it's too hard with 8 hp drain.
2. 00:10:096 (1,2,3,4) - spacing makes (4) look like it comes right after (3). move it further away or make (3) a slider so the rhythm is consistent
3. 00:10:921 (5,6) - on the same note, the jump here is far even though the note comes right after in time. don't say it's to make things harder and it's okay because it's the hard difficulty, this sort of time-distance spacing is just too confusing. highly recommend fixing it.
4. 00:11:747 (9,10) - ^
5. 00:12:573 (3,4) - now if you fixed those above ones, then this one will make more sense
6. spacing with regard to time seems to be a recurring issue in this difficulty, so i won't touch on it more but you should go through and readjust objects where the spacing is misleading
7. 00:27:435 (5) - repeat one less time
8. 00:29:224 (3,4,5) - remove (4), not part of the rhythm
9. 00:45:325 (1) - end at 00:47:114

xxdeathx wrote:

Ah I love this anime. Such an amazing OP and cute witches.

[General]

1. BPM is actually 198/218. Wcx's ranked version uses those numbers. Besides the song is way too fast to be low bpm.
2. kiai time should start at 00:56:334 and end at 01:22:756

x

[Easy]

1. 00:12:297 (2) - end at 00:12:848 because it's a stronger beat
2. 00:54:132 (1) - shouldn't repeat more than once in easy or normal. also blanket is far in the middle
3. 01:02:389 (3) - ^
4. 01:07:343 (3) - ^
5. 01:20:554 (1) - end earlier on white tick for same reason i said earlier

[Dark]

1. use HP drain 7. it's too hard with 8 hp drain.
2. 00:10:096 (1,2,3,4) - spacing makes (4) look like it comes right after (3). move it further away or make (3) a slider so the rhythm is consistent
3. 00:10:921 (5,6) - on the same note, the jump here is far even though the note comes right after in time. don't say it's to make things harder and it's okay because it's the hard difficulty, this sort of time-distance spacing is just too confusing. highly recommend fixing it.
4. 00:11:747 (9,10) - ^
5. 00:12:573 (3,4) - now if you fixed those above ones, then this one will make more sense
6. spacing with regard to time seems to be a recurring issue in this difficulty, so i won't touch on it more but you should go through and readjust objects where the spacing is misleading
7. 00:27:435 (5) - repeat one less time
8. 00:29:224 (3,4,5) - remove (4), not part of the rhythm
9. 00:45:325 (1) - end at 00:47:114

fixed almost all....
Mapset needs some more work with rhythm and spacing before pushing for rank imo. wcx19911123 himself said this song is quite hard to map because of its rhythm and high BPM.

IamKwaN wrote:

In conclusion, changing spacing at incomprehensible places and switching to follow different instruments make your diff kinda messy imo.

135,105,23307,6,0,L|53:98,1,70,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

LordRaika wrote:

Hitsound Mod request from my Modding Queue

osuu~
Here is my mod as request :

Hitsound

Nice to see you can use drum inside soft timing, so here goes the hitsound mod
simply following it without adding lots of work, will already improve the hitsound :

[Hitsound]

• i use "DARK" dif as reference , use this hitsound and check them on "DARK" dif :

1. Download and rename this as drum-hitclap.wav and this is where it does take effect 00:16:701 - ( adding S:C1 ) and will automatically add snare for all of this note for you :
   00:17:251 - , 00:17:802 (1,2) - , 00:18:352 (1) -
   So yes, its suggest that every S timing (that have drum clap) to be changed into S:C1 timing....
2. and u can make a copy of the hitsound above and rename it into drum-hitclap2.wav , WHY? it will add the same effect for S:C2 timing too
   and AUTOMATICALLY add the custom hitsound here : 00:20:004 - without needing lots of works ^^
3. one more crazy information for you.... that you CAN do this for all similar part :
   00:28:261 - click the start of the slider , set the sampleset auto into sampleset normal (or SHIFT+W)
   what you will heard is : normal-hitnormal + drum-hitclap hitsound , pretty damn good right?
   00:29:362 - same, shift+W the start of the slider.
   do this for all similar wet snare part.
4. 00:44:362 - and also, dont forget that u can add additional drum, and add clap on it here too....
5. Final note : just to let you know, if you need or want to add crazy dubstep hitsound.... i have it
   Here.... but i won't tell you how you use it, since you organize your own hitsound sampleset... ^^ , choose the kind of wub wub or scratching you want and add it on sampleset where you see fits and can be used easily.

That's all ^^b
pretty much cool now.... GL on hitsounding

sounds fine now
thanks for your mod and that wav files XDDD



update~~~~

edit:yf难度里有几个受到新加的drumclap1/2影响了0.0 于是我给加了几条绿线改回去了=A=

[Ranger] wrote:

lol so many diffs
nothing to say the placement. doesn't have problem maybe. so i`m doing mod intensively hitsound.

[Easy]

can`t found something from the note. nice work

◎ 00:11:196 (1) - change whistle as finish. it`s much socialize the music i think. or just add finish.
◎ 00:12:297 (2) - hm...how about blanket this? just suggestion. ok
◎ 00:13:398 (3) - ^^ ?=A= idk what you mean about this note....
◎ 00:15:600 (2) - ^ after same part fix that.plz
◎ 00:18:352 (4) - add finish here. ok
◎ 01:08:995 (6) - move 1 dot down. this is nothing but nervous inwardly.
◎ 01:07:894 (4) - how about add clap here? added
◎ 01:08:995 (6) - ^ ^
◎ 01:09:545 (1) - ^ at the end.^
◎ 01:11:196 (3) - ^ ^
◎ 01:11:747 (1) - ^ at reverse.
◎ 01:23:031 (1) - add whistle here.

[Dark]

make the hitsound as i wish from easy plz
and this diff so hard so, i can`t play this that`s just my talent,never mind.

◎ 00:16:151 (5) - move to the 00:16:185.
◎ 00:51:930 (1) - make this repeat slider. it lost a beat.


well, i've done!
good luck for Rank~

1. you might wanna look for a 16:9 background cause atm it looks a little awkward in the beginning, before the video starts. cause borders on the side
2. video is missing in Normal diff
3. I am kinda concerned about the driff spread.. you have a nice Easy, but in comparison to that the Normal seems a little too hard (cause of patterns) and the Hard is too hard as well (imo, espceially looking at the jumps >< ..). and only judging by SR the increase from 1.98 to 3.72.. uuhm. I don't really feel comfortable with that.
   looking at these three diffs, I'd suggest to rename Normal to Advanced or something similar and increase the difficulty slightly with more 1/2 rhythms. and then add another standard Normal diff. Would be best for the spead, I think, but all of that is up to you ofcourse ~

1. 00:04:642 (5,1) - movement could be smoother (= easier to play), rotate 1 and 00:06:460 (2) - by -45° and place them like this http://puu.sh/eShwh.jpg ?
2. 00:07:672 (1,1) - this is too less recovery time for Easy. no object should be on-screen until the spinner isn't visible anymore, cause that's confusing. you can read more about this here: t/241019
   > shorten the spinner or remove 00:10:096 (1) - so you have a full measure recovery time, preferably 1500ms
3. 00:13:949 - gap feels so empty, I'd add a circle here
4. 00:20:004 (2,3) - this might confuse beginners, cause when they follow the movement indicated by 2 you end on 3's end instead of the end. ctrl+g 3 and move 00:22:206 (4) - to 28|236 ?
5. 00:31:013 (4,1) - movement here could be better, too. you can move 4 up a bit and rotate it, then adjust 1+following to match DS, screen: http://puu.sh/eSicZ.jpg
6. 00:38:719 (3) - aah, nitpicking, move the last anchor a grid to the left xD
   to avoid confusion I'd prefer if you rotate this by ~ -35°, but that's not a must
7. 00:43:123 (4) - is this missing a NC?
8. 00:51:930 (1,1) - mentioned above, too less recovery time. you could replace the slider or shorten the spinner. replacing the spinner with another long slider would work, too
9. 00:59:637 (5,1) - gap feels off, you could follow the background.. Idk what thy're called-sounds. might play more interesting cause variety :3
   
10. 01:04:040 (4) - imo, this should be split. cause of the absolutely unnoticeable break after 01:04:316 - try this:
    
    (if you do that you might want to put a NC somewhere in this combo, it gets a little long, maybe 01:07:343 (3) - )
11. 01:11:196 (3,1) - as mentioned, this is confusing because of the movement indicated by 01:09:545 (1,2,3) - . you can rotate 1 to avoid that

• 00:10:921 (1) - cause the downbeat is waaay louder than the sliderstart I'd prefer if you replace this with two circles, or circle + slider on downbeat. http://puu.sh/eSkjj.jpg
  same applies to the following sliders then 00:13:123 (2) - 00:15:325 (2) -

1. 00:25:508 (1,2) - feels a little off to ignore th white tick cause it's slightly louder than the red ones, consider alternating the rhythm? examples:
   
   
   ( ^ my favourite, cause it's more consistent than the others)
   
2. 00:35:967 (3,1,2) - placement of 2 is very confusing for beginners, cause it's visible before 3 is finished > players might accidentally let go of 3 and hit 2 (they don't pay that much attention to reverse arrows when the supposed next object gets that close x: )
   so please place 2 differently, example: http://puu.sh/eSlMD.jpg
3. 00:40:921 (1,2,3,4) - very tricky to read, considering the Easy is super easy you might want to reconider using patterns that are confusing even for some Hard players.
4. 00:45:325 (1,1) - iirc the distance from object - spinner should be 1/2 at least for easier difficulties. (better confirm that with some other people, just ask in modhelp or wherever)
   same for 01:22:756 (1,1) - ofc
5. 00:56:334 (1) - downbeat should be clickable, not only is it way louder than the rest, it's also a new sound you can follow. so I'd prefer if you split this into slider + circle
6. 01:07:343 (1,2,1) - don't let them overlap, that's super confusing. also, what's with the distance error of 2-1? that's too much of 'variation' for Normal, why don't you just use a copypasta-version of 01:07:343 (1) - , ctrl+g it and place it somewhere on the left?

1. 00:07:066 (3,4) - increasing DS for just one object seems a little awkward. '_' what's with all the othes before? the rhythm/volume/speed/pace doesn't change so this should be the same as all the others, imo
2. 00:11:196 - downbeat is clearly louder than the other beats but the only one not mapped. you could move 00:11:333 (6) - to here or replace it with a 1/2 slider starting on the downbeat. or two circles..
3. 00:20:004 - ^
4. 01:11:747 (1,2,3,1) - 3.1+ DS jumps seem a little exaggerated, even if the music is louder than everything in the beginning, it's overdoing it a little, imo
   and compared to the following Kiai it's so much harder.. to me the Kiais sounds more exciting and faster paced than the rest of the song, but here the build-up is much harder.. :n

Squirrel wrote:

helloooow there!
from my queue, just making suggestions unless bold

General

1. you might wanna look for a 16:9 background cause atm it looks a little awkward in the beginning, before the video starts. cause borders on the side
2. video is missing in Normal diff thanks=A=
3. I am kinda concerned about the driff spread.. you have a nice Easy, but in comparison to that the Normal seems a little too hard (cause of patterns) and the Hard is too hard as well (imo, espceially looking at the jumps >< ..). and only judging by SR the increase from 1.98 to 3.72.. uuhm. I don't really feel comfortable with that. considering that now ;w;
   looking at these three diffs, I'd suggest to rename Normal to Advanced or something similar and increase the difficulty slightly with more 1/2 rhythms. and then add another standard Normal diff. Would be best for the spead, I think, but all of that is up to you ofcourse ~

Easy

1. 00:04:642 (5,1) - movement could be smoother (= easier to play), rotate 1 and 00:06:460 (2) - by -45° and place them like this http://puu.sh/eShwh.jpg ? okay
2. 00:07:672 (1,1) - this is too less recovery time for Easy. no object should be on-screen until the spinner isn't visible anymore, cause that's confusing. you can read more about this here: t/241019
   > shorten the spinner or remove 00:10:096 (1) - so you have a full measure recovery time, preferably 1500ms shotrer
3. 00:13:949 - gap feels so empty, I'd add a circle here
4. 00:20:004 (2,3) - this might confuse beginners, cause when they follow the movement indicated by 2 you end on 3's end instead of the end. ctrl+g 3 and move 00:22:206 (4) - to 28|236 ? rotared 34 for a better flow
5. 00:31:013 (4,1) - movement here could be better, too. you can move 4 up a bit and rotate it, then adjust 1+following to match DS, screen: http://puu.sh/eSicZ.jpg done
6. 00:38:719 (3) - aah, nitpicking, move the last anchor a grid to the left xD :3
   to avoid confusion I'd prefer if you rotate this by ~ -35°, but that's not a must
7. 00:43:123 (4) - is this missing a NC?
8. 00:51:930 (1,1) - mentioned above, too less recovery time. you could replace the slider or shorten the spinner. replacing the spinner with another long slider would work, too ok
9. 00:59:637 (5,1) - gap feels off, you could follow the background.. Idk what thy're called-sounds. might play more interesting cause variety :3
   
10. 01:04:040 (4) - imo, this should be split. cause of the absolutely unnoticeable break after 01:04:316 - try this:
    a short slider and next is a note i think it's a little hard as easy .-.
    (if you do that you might want to put a NC somewhere in this combo, it gets a little long, maybe 01:07:343 (3) - )
11. 01:11:196 (3,1) - as mentioned, this is confusing because of the movement indicated by 01:09:545 (1,2,3) - . you can rotate 1 to avoid that

can't play the other diffs, so I'll have to skip them. sorry, hope I could help with the other diffs tho. 'w'
good luck! (if anything's unclear about the mod, feel free to ask me)

Ayu wrote:

Easy

1. 00:54:132 (1) - You should work on this slider. Make the end of the slider blanket the next note.
2. 01:09:545 (1,2) - Blanket this.
3. 01:11:196 (3,1) - Blanket this too.

fixed

Dark

1. 00:32:389 (3,4) - I suppose this overmap right here could be alright if that's what you really want, because of the strong beat on (4). But, 00:32:802 (5,6) - this one is definitely out of place and should be changed. The beat (6) is covering is pretty weak, so there's no need to force user input. you are right
2. 00:54:958 (4) - Not sure about this hidden slider. Would fit a gimmick map more than an extra difficulty.

Man, why do people overmap? It's a really big turn off for me. Map would be lovely without.

1. http://puu.sh/fbiOF/b7000ed489.png you should match those kiai sections (it's a guideline though)

1. 00:04:036 (4) - add whistle for consistency?
2. 00:14:499 (1) - is the clap intended to be slider's head?
3. 00:43:123 (4) - add NC for consistency
4. 01:11:747 (1) - remove NC for consistency

1. 00:44:224 (1) - remove NC for consistency
2. 01:08:444 (2,1) - using anti jump distance isn't recommended on low diffs (E and N) becuase some of players may feel confusion on this plcement
   
   i wish you used more diverse rhythm on this diff
   

1. http://puu.sh/f7UKv/f684939710.png seems like this diff has 1ms unsnapped kiai sections
2. 00:28:260 (2) - missed drum clap
3. 00:35:967 (5,6) - this sudden jump distance is quite unreasonable(sorry i cannot find proper words asdf) what about decreasing the distance a bit?
   
   example

   
4. 00:41:471 (2,5) - missed drum claps?
5. 01:02:939 (1) - off screen
6. 01:16:150 (1) - missed soft finish and normal sampleset
7. 01:20:003 (7) - i think there are many missed hitsounds from this note, you'd better add them all
   
   it seems that there are lots of missed hitsounds throughout of this diff, i can point them all out if you want. but if those are intended, pls reconsider it

1. 00:29:637 (1) - hiding both slider's head and tail at the same time isn't really good idea, it may cause confusion easily imo even it has new combo and high AR
   
   adjusting like this would be nice

   
2. 00:38:307 (2,3) - i wish these two notes were reversedly located for better flow
3. 00:55:233 (1,2,3) - due to the characteristics of this rhythm, it is hard to play this pattern without breaking the combo. consider changing this rhythm a bit, for example like this
4. 00:59:086 (5,6) - actually, i expected 2 1/2 sliders rather than current one, it's not that bad but it's a bit awkward. try using 2 1/2 sliders instead
   
   example

   
5. 01:05:692 (1) - i think this slider's head should have normal sampleset and soft addtions for consistency
   
   impressive

1. 00:05:096 (8) - remove the whistle? sounds quite annyoing
2. 00:09:746 - is this green line intended to be here? i think this should be at 00:09:793 - here
3. 00:19:729 (4) - how about adding default drum finish on slider's head? it's quite nice to hear
4. 00:21:655 (3) - ^ like you did at 00:24:132 (4) - here
5. 00:32:802 (5) - it would be better if this slider is placed somewhere else. it doesn't mean current flow sucks (it's quite fine) but i just want to feel better flow while playing
   
   example

   
6. 00:40:233 (2) - actually i don't really enjoy this kind of pattern because it's quite hard to handle 00:40:233 (2,1,2) - this flow (well maybe because of my lack of playing skill?). so i recommend you to change this note's placement little bit.
   
   examples

   
   
   etc.
7. 00:44:912 (4) - i think this slider's tail should have normal sampleset according to the song
8. 01:12:848 (5) - try adding NC for consistency
9. 00:55:233 (5) - what about adding NC to indicate the sudden SV change?
10. 01:17:802 (8) - consider adding NC for both consistency and 1/3 beats indicator
11. 01:19:729 (1,2) - swap NC for consistency as well
12. 01:22:825 - finishing kiai times on blue ticks isn't that great idea, how about finishing it at 01:22:894 - here?
    
    brilliant

HelloSCV wrote:

from my queue

[General]

1. http://puu.sh/fbiOF/b7000ed489.png you should match those kiai sections (it's a guideline though)

fixed

[Easy]

1. 00:04:036 (4) - add whistle for consistency? ifxedfixed
2. 00:14:499 (1) - is the clap intended to be slider's head? ahh i forgot to cancel that
3. 00:43:123 (4) - add NC for consistency judge the whole kiai ,every 4 white line,i add a NC,so no .-. (sorry for my poor english, i cant describe my thinking clearly ;_;)
4. 01:11:747 (1) - remove NC for consistency fixed

[Dark]

1. 00:05:096 (8) - remove the whistle? sounds quite annyoing okay
2. 00:09:746 - is this green line intended to be here? i think this should be at 00:09:793 - here you are right
3. 00:19:729 (4) - how about adding default drum finish on slider's head? it's quite nice to hear yes
4. 00:21:655 (3) - ^ like you did at 00:24:132 (4) - here ^ at the tail?
5. 00:32:802 (5) - it would be better if this slider is placed somewhere else. it doesn't mean current flow sucks (it's quite fine) but i just want to feel better flow while playing
   
   example

   
6. 00:40:233 (2) - actually i don't really enjoy this kind of pattern because it's quite hard to handle 00:40:233 (2,1,2) - this flow (well maybe because of my lack of playing skill?). so i recommend you to change this note's placement little bit.
   
   examples

   
   
   etc.
   moved it to 00:40:646 (3) -
7. 00:44:912 (4) - i think this slider's tail should have normal sampleset according to the song added
8. 01:12:848 (5) - try adding NC for consistency 01:11:747 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - dont really want add nc here beacuse this six is a pattern
9. 00:55:233 (5) - what about adding NC to indicate the sudden SV change? okay
10. 01:17:802 (8) - consider adding NC for both consistency and 1/3 beats indicator ok
11. 01:19:729 (1,2) - swap NC for consistency as well yes ^
12. 01:22:825 - finishing kiai times on blue ticks isn't that great idea, how about finishing it at 01:22:894 - here? changed to 01:22:756 a long white line
    
    brilliant

i'll finish this by tomorrow good luck!

FaiVillager wrote:

来了来了~
刚放假事有点多所以晚了点 抱歉

[dark]
好一张单点图 手都戳烂了;w;
blanket问题可以不改 不过我写的这些多半是我玩出来的
00:01:612 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 好像不是正的？如果不是的话可以用作图里边的添加多边形圆圈重新弄个 后边那个一样 这图规则图形都是ctrl shiftD弄出来的=A=
00:11:059 (3,4) - 可以放个三连打 话说其实之前就是三连 后面类似的节奏也是..纠结了很久结果还是拿掉了 开头这样有点丧病
00:12:848 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这四个大白线节奏有点乱 把前两个滑条换成一个比较好？ 不好听..
00:15:875 (4) - blanket
00:16:701 (1,2,3,4) - 有点单调，可以考虑按音调做成不同方向的
00:23:307 (1,2,3,4) - 跟前边的梗节奏不一样 而且玩起来确实缺乏趣味 这里要进kiai啦.-.
00:25:646 (2,3,4) - 这么放听起来没问题 玩起来怪怪的 考虑中...不过没想好怎么改..
00:27:710 (1) - blanket
00:30:394 (3) - 这个地方不推荐放点 因为前边是三个音
00:32:802 (5) - blanket
00:33:490 (2) - ^
00:39:407 (5) - ^
00:49:453 (4) - 这个没摆好
00:50:004 (3) - blanket
00:54:132 (1) - ^
00:54:407 (2) - ^
01:03:490 (6) - ^
01:05:692 (4) - ^
01:11:747 (1,2,3,4) - 跟开始那梗一样
01:13:949 (1) - blanket
01:21:930 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个肯定不是正的 方法跟开始一样 不过调一下点的顺序就好了 真的是正的QAQ
blanket都修了修...
[hard]
开头的四方跳可以把角度多换换 看起来会更好
00:22:067 (5,6) - 这个遮盖不太好，影响玩
00:39:682 (5,6) - 这俩没平行？
01:07:343 (1,2,3,4) - 有点远
01:11:747 (1,2) - ^
01:15:600 (7,8,9,10,1) - 玩起来看着不太舒服..

简单普通我就先不做了 本身不是特别有经验而且是nm
祝你好运~

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

offset前380(-20), 后10106(+10)

dark
00:25:646 (2,4) - 这里我觉得有些强行blanket, 其实不需要那样, 摆成这样就行了 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2791651 虽然没看懂为啥不过好像也不赖..-.
00:54:693 (3) - 这个clap怎么是soft的 应该放drum的吧 嗯..
01:05:702 (4) - 这个blanket没摆好 而且不是1/2吗 怎么听都是1/3...

easy
00:27:710 (1) - 你把这个弄对称啊

1. 01:09:555 (1) - In bless' Normal, there must not be any antijumps in Normal diffs, there is an antijump clearly visible and confusing. Spacing must be consistent in Normal diffs, i've already told you a few months ago.
2. 00:07:652 (1) - In Easy and bless' Normal, this spinner must end here 00:10:106 - .
3. 01:06:803 (5) - In Melt's Hard this object is snapped wrongly, it is not 1/3, the reverse must be snapped on the blue tick.

DakeDekaane wrote:

BPM is doubled. Correct are 99 and 109.