Nymph wrote:

看了一遍 感觉mod也就是狂喷dark diff摆的一般 别的都还好啊 我可不可以skip

Nymph wrote:

看了一遍 感觉mod也就是狂喷dark diff摆的一般 别的都还好啊 我可不可以skip

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:

[Bless' Normal]

1. 00:10:921 (1) - 尾whi 不太喜欢哨声，一般不是特别适合我都不会加，鉴于后边整体都是加哨就都不改了
2. 00:13:123 (2) - ^
3. 00:15:325 (2) - ^
4. 00:20:004 (2,2) - whi更合适
5. 00:24:407 (2) - 头^
6. 00:45:325 (1) - 不如从00:45:187 - 开始放个1/4滑条 一开始的确是这样的，后来根据别人的意见改成了单点我觉得也不错
7. 00:56:334 (1) - 尾whi
8. 01:22:894 (1) - same mentioned in Easy 稍微有点违和

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:

From your request of M4M

1. Grey——Just some complaints.
2. Black——My personal suggestions.
3. Bold——Highly recommended.
4. Red——(Maybe) Unrankable, you'd better fix it.

[General]

1. 这是op？别忘了在tag里面加上Opening

加了~

[Easy]

1. 00:05:248 (1) - 和前面那个间距0.96了，稍微动下
2. 00:34:316 (3) - 间距0.93了啊
3. 01:04:591 (4,1) - blanket？
4. 01:22:894 (1) - 最后转盘可以20%fin结尾，挺不错的
5. all fixed .
   SPOILER

   Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
   00:05:239 - snap to 00:05:248
   00:06:451 - snap to 00:06:460
   00:09:746 - snap to 00:09:793
   00:10:231 - snap to 00:10:096
   00:16:699 - snap to 00:16:701
   00:18:901 - snap to 00:18:903
   00:31:493 - snap to 00:31:563
   00:35:415 - snap to 00:35:417
   00:36:516 - snap to 00:36:518
   00:40:300 - snap to 00:40:371
   00:40:438 - snap to 00:40:371
   00:43:534 - snap to 00:43:398
   00:46:424 - snap to 00:46:426
   00:47:525 - snap to 00:47:527
   00:48:626 - snap to 00:48:628
   00:49:727 - snap to 00:49:729
   00:57:502 - snap to 00:57:435

绿线都没影响音效和kiai所以算了/.\
[Dark]

1. Unsnap

   Snapping 00:26:953 (3) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
   00:26:953 (3) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
   00:26:953 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:27:160 (4) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
   00:27:160 (4) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
   00:27:160 (4) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
   00:27:160 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:27:435 (5) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
   00:27:435 (5) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
   00:27:435 (5) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
   00:27:435 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   01:04:866 (1) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
   01:04:866 (1) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
   01:04:866 (1) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
   01:04:866 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
   00:05:239 - snap to 00:05:248
   00:05:845 - snap to 00:05:854
   00:06:451 - snap to 00:06:460
   00:07:057 - snap to 00:07:066
   00:09:746 - snap to 00:09:718
   00:26:988 - snap to 00:27:022
   同上...slider是1/16于是误报么 ..
2. 00:07:369 (4) - 3,4间距和1,2间距差不多比较好 改了
3. 00:16:701 (1,2,3,4) - 这个可以做难点 加大了间距...恩确实不会改..
4. 00:24:958 (5) - NC ok
5. 00:25:508 (1,2,3,4) - 这里节奏不好，建议重弄下，不像进kiai的那种感觉 [#思考]
6. 00:32:389 (3) - 往下摆啊怕出界吗？这个位置不好看啊 fixed
7. 00:34:316 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 每两个nc一次，可以再摆点pattern 渐进的话不要NC比较好吧..
8. 00:48:628 (5) - NC？ 猴
9. 00:51:242 (3) - 两折返滑条看着不舒服 而且也不太适合 我听着挺好的/w\
10. 00:53:031 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 三分拍间距放的和前面的二分拍antijump一样是闹哪样 (其实antijump是啥...) 改成两个直线三连了=_=虽然间距还是个坑
11. 01:00:738 (1,2,1) - 前面1,2的停滞感太强了，不舒服，把这三个间距拉开点 好!
12. 01:13:398 (7,8) - blanket 噢
13. 01:13:123 (6,7,8) - 不好看其实，6,8碰头了
14. 01:18:077 (9) - 移开？ok
15. 01:22:894 (1) - same mentioned in Easy

Good luck

kamisamaaa wrote:

from BMT queue
[dark]
整体看了一下感觉节奏还好 但是摆放乱七八糟。。妮妮说的很对额 各种梗都是强行加进去的 不管和音乐搭不搭调 建议仔细听听音乐找找音乐的感觉
还有一个问题是各种拘束的小间距完全放不开 然后没事突然地大跳简直坑爹 下面是一些具体的举例额
00:05:248 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这里感觉可以每个缩小一点间距 每个滑条速度减小一点 然后排成一个整体 感觉比你这样更能表现歌曲 速度没改 间距缩了
00:13:949 (1,2,3,4,1) - 这种小间距简直没法玩 这四声明明这么强烈因为是降音 一个降一度所以自然想这么放了 后面也是 小跳感觉不是很适合这个降调 建议用正常的小跳 你看看00:14:774 (2,3) - 这里 这么柔和的地方你用这么大间距 然后四个重音你用小间距。。 球帮摆QAQ
00:15:325 (6,1) - 这个也是 这么重的音用大间距 别用这种小间距 顺便00:15:050 (5,6) - 这个两个做成平行是平行的啊 00:15:325 (6,4) - 这个blanket没必要 不要这么勉强包起来 高的间距难受死了 想不出其他的摆放了=A=
00:20:554 (3) - 这个是一个上扬 滑条尾比滑条头强烈 建议换成两个note fixed
00:22:756 (1,2,3,4) - 一样^
00:25:508 (1,2,3,4) - 这里明明是一堆单点。漏音严重 而且前面那些单点摆放单调 这里没有跟背景琴声的意思 琴声也比较淡 转而出现的是鼓声而且很强烈 就跟着过来了
00:31:013 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 音乐完全不是这个感觉 为啥做两个正方形 不要强行使用梗 要根据音乐摆放 想不出>_>
00:32:114 (1,2,3) - 比如说这三个音 明显前两个是一样的音 第三个明显有别于前两个 可是你用完全一样间距的三个note就完全没法体现音乐感觉 最简单的一个合适的摆放是吧前两个note叠起来 然后第三个note是个跳 这样才是一种符合歌曲的摆放 改成其他形式了,顺便之前这样放的原因是刚做完跳所以原地放note十分不舒服不顺
00:32:527 (4) - 这个也是尾巴重音被滑条带过去了节奏不合适^
00:33:077 (1,2,3,4) - 你听听音乐在看看你这个摆放你就知道啥问题了 做过note转重音不过效果不太理想=-=
00:34:866 (5,6,7,8) - 这个强烈的感觉你可以通过拿这四个note放开来表现 前面四个是2组2组叠起来的 然后后面这四个就用分开的2个一组的跳 同 叠音 音调一样的我都叠在一起了 跳的话不太合适
00:35:967 (1,2,3) - 这个大跳太突然 你前面都是小的一塌糊涂的间距 突然来这种极端大跳让人怎么玩。 全图都有这问题 间距变化太突兀音乐就是从这里突发3个finish的 我认为表现没有问题..
00:59:086 (3,4,1,2,3) - 这段这么急促的音乐你就这么稀疏的节奏啊。。。。。。。。。。。这反差没跟那音
01:13:949 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这段建议用循环梗 想四种loop方式 是循环了啊=_=

先说这么多吧 基本意思都说到了额 也尽量举例说明了 要是有什么不懂得可以ingame问我 或者邮件什么的都可以
可能有时候语气不是很好额 多包涵>.<

其实你可以多看看爱抚的diff 虽然我不喜欢那个风格 但是他对歌曲的表现是没问题的 你可以体会体会撒

yf_bmp wrote:

打骏马 看不懂

IamKwaN wrote:

yf's Insane

1. 00:36:517 - Snap this kiai time section to 00:36:518. // kiai的綠線unsnap
2. 01:07:894 - Redundant green line, please delete it. // 多餘綠線,刪除
3. 00:11:472 (6,7) - The rhythm sounds strange to me because of the stress, it would make me feel much more comfortable if you change them to these. Of coz this applies on similar rhythm at the back: // 重音不對
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:33:077 (6) - The stress is misplaced, it's worthwhile to be put as a slider head or a circle like what u did throughout the diff. Consider sth like this: // 也是重音不對
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:17:802 (8) - NC for reminding players of 1/6 snap like 00:53:031 (1). // snap是1/6所以NC

yf_bmp wrote:

我操我随便说的

IamKwaN wrote:

Hi there, from my queue here.
Sorry for delay :O

General

1. Your background image is kinda low in resolution, try this one!
   
   SPOILER

   
2. Why not adding the full romanji name of this show as tag? I mean adding 'Gokukoku no Buryunhirude'.

Dark

1. 01:22:826 - Unsnapped time section, snap it to 01:22:825 like other diffs. In fact, there are many snapped green lines, but if u are way too lazy to fix them all, just fixing this would be fine enough.
2. 00:40:921 - Redundant green line, please delete it.
3. 00:14:912 (3,4) - I wonder if there are solid beats for these two. Personally, I don't prefer such overmapping technique but seems you love it so much throughout the diff. So, nah..
4. 00:13:949 (1,2,3,4) - I don't understand your intention of placing anti-jump here. As the four beats are too obvious and heavy, placing something even jumpier than 00:13:398 (1,2,3,4) would be nice imo.
5. 00:14:912 (3,4) - Mentioned above. Alrite, I know it's annoying to point out every single piece of overmap, so I should stop here.
6. 00:16:563 - Missing out a beat here, its awkward to have a halt here even the sound is low. Adding a circle would look nicer :> Same on 00:42:985
7. 00:31:013 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Again, why is the spacing opposite to the atmosphere of the beats? Aren't 00:31:563 (1,2,3,4) being stronger?
8. 00:33:490 (3,4) - These circles make me confused, what are u actually following? I think the instrument is a 1/8 snap instead of 1/4.
9. 00:34:316 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Spacing here makes me feel like, oh is this a Hard instead? I would say, it's rare to place so many anti-jumps in Insane, let alone the highest diff of a set. This is even the climax of the song, so please adjust these, please :c
10. 00:40:371 (1,2,3,4) - ;_; I don't really see your point of having annoying anti-jumps here..
11. 00:40:921 (1,2) - CTRL+G these two on timeline basis, stresses are on 00:41:196 instead of the blue tick.
12. 00:51:242 (3) - Start this slider on white tick, it's where the stress starts. I mean this:
    
    SPOILER

    
13. 00:53:582 (7,8) - These two looks similar to me, so if u add a whistle at tail of 00:53:857 (8), u may want to add a whistle of tail of (7) too.
14. 01:01:701 (2,3,4,5,6) - nah.. at least NC 01:01:839 (3,5) for the different spacing change from 01:01:701 (2,3)?
15. 01:05:692 (4) - I don't think the music lies on 1/8 here. Instead, it's something like this:
    
    SPOILER

    
16. In conclusion, changing spacing at incomprehensible places and switching to follow different instruments make your diff kinda messy imo.

Easy

1. Many redundant green lines, check them yourself please :>
2. 00:27:710 (1,2) - A bit nazi, using the same slider for these two would be more aesthetic. Apparently they are not identical now.
3. 00:43:123 (3) - Obviously stresses are on white ticks, drums are much more distinct than that on red ticks. So, why not separating them as two 1/1 sliders?
4. 01:13:123 (2) - Hmm.. I treat this as sudden switch of instruments, because the previous slider is following, obviously, drums, but for this one, you miss out 01:13:398, which is very awkward imo. How about this?
   
   SPOILER

   

Good luck!

1. BPM is actually 198/218. Wcx's ranked version uses those numbers. Besides the song is way too fast to be low bpm.
2. kiai time should start at 00:56:334 and end at 01:22:756

1. 00:12:297 (2) - end at 00:12:848 because it's a stronger beat
2. 00:54:132 (1) - shouldn't repeat more than once in easy or normal. also blanket is far in the middle
3. 01:02:389 (3) - ^
4. 01:07:343 (3) - ^
5. 01:20:554 (1) - end earlier on white tick for same reason i said earlier

1. 00:24:407 (2) - shorten by a tick to fit rhythm better
2. 00:25:508 (1,2) - redo this to fit the music. extend (1) to end at 00:25:784 and have (2) start at 00:26:059 and end at 00:26:334
3. 00:54:132 (1,2) - have the slider ends correspond to the music by ending them on the red ticks
4. 01:13:536 (1) - what are you doing here? this doesn't fit the music either. keep the slider end at the same time but start the slider later at 01:13:673
5. except for several spots where your mapping contrasts with the music, the rest of the rhythm you chose to map is very nice

1. 00:59:086 (3,4,5,6) - don't do such a sudden change in spacing. for most of your song, notes that were this long apart in time were touching/overlapping each other so players would assume that these notes are twice as slow because of their spacing
2. 01:15:600 (7,8,9,10,1) - ^ you were using regular spacing for 01:14:224 (2,3,4,5,6) and this is only hard difficulty, there's no reason to suddenly double the spacing
3. 01:20:003 (7,8,9,10,1) - also, this is a very high BPM so single tapping a lot of hit circles like this is too hard, especially with the spacing when it isn't a linear pattern

1. 00:19:591 (3,4,5) - the way these are almost stacked but not exactly makes them look like a triple, but it's much easier to read their timing if they're stacked exactly on top of each other (and let the game shift the circles ever so slightly for you)
2. 00:21:792 (3,4,5) - ^
3. 00:23:994 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - ^ and i wouldn't put 00:24:614 (2,3) so close
4. 00:59:086 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1) - redo the rhythm here, it's a little awkward

1. use HP drain 7. it's too hard with 8 hp drain.
2. 00:10:096 (1,2,3,4) - spacing makes (4) look like it comes right after (3). move it further away or make (3) a slider so the rhythm is consistent
3. 00:10:921 (5,6) - on the same note, the jump here is far even though the note comes right after in time. don't say it's to make things harder and it's okay because it's the hard difficulty, this sort of time-distance spacing is just too confusing. highly recommend fixing it.
4. 00:11:747 (9,10) - ^
5. 00:12:573 (3,4) - now if you fixed those above ones, then this one will make more sense
6. spacing with regard to time seems to be a recurring issue in this difficulty, so i won't touch on it more but you should go through and readjust objects where the spacing is misleading
7. 00:27:435 (5) - repeat one less time
8. 00:29:224 (3,4,5) - remove (4), not part of the rhythm
9. 00:45:325 (1) - end at 00:47:114

xxdeathx wrote:

Ah I love this anime. Such an amazing OP and cute witches.

[General]

1. BPM is actually 198/218. Wcx's ranked version uses those numbers. Besides the song is way too fast to be low bpm.
2. kiai time should start at 00:56:334 and end at 01:22:756

x

[Easy]

1. 00:12:297 (2) - end at 00:12:848 because it's a stronger beat
2. 00:54:132 (1) - shouldn't repeat more than once in easy or normal. also blanket is far in the middle
3. 01:02:389 (3) - ^
4. 01:07:343 (3) - ^
5. 01:20:554 (1) - end earlier on white tick for same reason i said earlier

[Dark]

1. use HP drain 7. it's too hard with 8 hp drain.
2. 00:10:096 (1,2,3,4) - spacing makes (4) look like it comes right after (3). move it further away or make (3) a slider so the rhythm is consistent
3. 00:10:921 (5,6) - on the same note, the jump here is far even though the note comes right after in time. don't say it's to make things harder and it's okay because it's the hard difficulty, this sort of time-distance spacing is just too confusing. highly recommend fixing it.
4. 00:11:747 (9,10) - ^
5. 00:12:573 (3,4) - now if you fixed those above ones, then this one will make more sense
6. spacing with regard to time seems to be a recurring issue in this difficulty, so i won't touch on it more but you should go through and readjust objects where the spacing is misleading
7. 00:27:435 (5) - repeat one less time
8. 00:29:224 (3,4,5) - remove (4), not part of the rhythm
9. 00:45:325 (1) - end at 00:47:114

fixed almost all....
Mapset needs some more work with rhythm and spacing before pushing for rank imo. wcx19911123 himself said this song is quite hard to map because of its rhythm and high BPM.

IamKwaN wrote:

In conclusion, changing spacing at incomprehensible places and switching to follow different instruments make your diff kinda messy imo.

135,105,23307,6,0,L|53:98,1,70,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

LordRaika wrote:

Hitsound Mod request from my Modding Queue

osuu~
Here is my mod as request :

Hitsound

Nice to see you can use drum inside soft timing, so here goes the hitsound mod
simply following it without adding lots of work, will already improve the hitsound :

[Hitsound]

• i use "DARK" dif as reference , use this hitsound and check them on "DARK" dif :

1. Download and rename this as drum-hitclap.wav and this is where it does take effect 00:16:701 - ( adding S:C1 ) and will automatically add snare for all of this note for you :
   00:17:251 - , 00:17:802 (1,2) - , 00:18:352 (1) -
   So yes, its suggest that every S timing (that have drum clap) to be changed into S:C1 timing....
2. and u can make a copy of the hitsound above and rename it into drum-hitclap2.wav , WHY? it will add the same effect for S:C2 timing too
   and AUTOMATICALLY add the custom hitsound here : 00:20:004 - without needing lots of works ^^
3. one more crazy information for you.... that you CAN do this for all similar part :
   00:28:261 - click the start of the slider , set the sampleset auto into sampleset normal (or SHIFT+W)
   what you will heard is : normal-hitnormal + drum-hitclap hitsound , pretty damn good right?
   00:29:362 - same, shift+W the start of the slider.
   do this for all similar wet snare part.
4. 00:44:362 - and also, dont forget that u can add additional drum, and add clap on it here too....
5. Final note : just to let you know, if you need or want to add crazy dubstep hitsound.... i have it
   Here.... but i won't tell you how you use it, since you organize your own hitsound sampleset... ^^ , choose the kind of wub wub or scratching you want and add it on sampleset where you see fits and can be used easily.

That's all ^^b
pretty much cool now.... GL on hitsounding

sounds fine now
thanks for your mod and that wav files XDDD



update~~~~

edit:yf难度里有几个受到新加的drumclap1/2影响了0.0 于是我给加了几条绿线改回去了=A=

[Ranger] wrote:

lol so many diffs
nothing to say the placement. doesn't have problem maybe. so i`m doing mod intensively hitsound.

[Easy]

can`t found something from the note. nice work

◎ 00:11:196 (1) - change whistle as finish. it`s much socialize the music i think. or just add finish.
◎ 00:12:297 (2) - hm...how about blanket this? just suggestion. ok
◎ 00:13:398 (3) - ^^ ?=A= idk what you mean about this note....
◎ 00:15:600 (2) - ^ after same part fix that.plz
◎ 00:18:352 (4) - add finish here. ok
◎ 01:08:995 (6) - move 1 dot down. this is nothing but nervous inwardly.
◎ 01:07:894 (4) - how about add clap here? added
◎ 01:08:995 (6) - ^ ^
◎ 01:09:545 (1) - ^ at the end.^
◎ 01:11:196 (3) - ^ ^
◎ 01:11:747 (1) - ^ at reverse.
◎ 01:23:031 (1) - add whistle here.

[Dark]

make the hitsound as i wish from easy plz
and this diff so hard so, i can`t play this that`s just my talent,never mind.

◎ 00:16:151 (5) - move to the 00:16:185.
◎ 00:51:930 (1) - make this repeat slider. it lost a beat.


well, i've done!
good luck for Rank~

1. you might wanna look for a 16:9 background cause atm it looks a little awkward in the beginning, before the video starts. cause borders on the side
2. video is missing in Normal diff
3. I am kinda concerned about the driff spread.. you have a nice Easy, but in comparison to that the Normal seems a little too hard (cause of patterns) and the Hard is too hard as well (imo, espceially looking at the jumps >< ..). and only judging by SR the increase from 1.98 to 3.72.. uuhm. I don't really feel comfortable with that.
   looking at these three diffs, I'd suggest to rename Normal to Advanced or something similar and increase the difficulty slightly with more 1/2 rhythms. and then add another standard Normal diff. Would be best for the spead, I think, but all of that is up to you ofcourse ~

1. 00:04:642 (5,1) - movement could be smoother (= easier to play), rotate 1 and 00:06:460 (2) - by -45° and place them like this http://puu.sh/eShwh.jpg ?
2. 00:07:672 (1,1) - this is too less recovery time for Easy. no object should be on-screen until the spinner isn't visible anymore, cause that's confusing. you can read more about this here: t/241019
   > shorten the spinner or remove 00:10:096 (1) - so you have a full measure recovery time, preferably 1500ms
3. 00:13:949 - gap feels so empty, I'd add a circle here
4. 00:20:004 (2,3) - this might confuse beginners, cause when they follow the movement indicated by 2 you end on 3's end instead of the end. ctrl+g 3 and move 00:22:206 (4) - to 28|236 ?
5. 00:31:013 (4,1) - movement here could be better, too. you can move 4 up a bit and rotate it, then adjust 1+following to match DS, screen: http://puu.sh/eSicZ.jpg
6. 00:38:719 (3) - aah, nitpicking, move the last anchor a grid to the left xD
   to avoid confusion I'd prefer if you rotate this by ~ -35°, but that's not a must
7. 00:43:123 (4) - is this missing a NC?
8. 00:51:930 (1,1) - mentioned above, too less recovery time. you could replace the slider or shorten the spinner. replacing the spinner with another long slider would work, too
9. 00:59:637 (5,1) - gap feels off, you could follow the background.. Idk what thy're called-sounds. might play more interesting cause variety :3
   
10. 01:04:040 (4) - imo, this should be split. cause of the absolutely unnoticeable break after 01:04:316 - try this:
    
    (if you do that you might want to put a NC somewhere in this combo, it gets a little long, maybe 01:07:343 (3) - )
11. 01:11:196 (3,1) - as mentioned, this is confusing because of the movement indicated by 01:09:545 (1,2,3) - . you can rotate 1 to avoid that

• 00:10:921 (1) - cause the downbeat is waaay louder than the sliderstart I'd prefer if you replace this with two circles, or circle + slider on downbeat. http://puu.sh/eSkjj.jpg
  same applies to the following sliders then 00:13:123 (2) - 00:15:325 (2) -

1. 00:25:508 (1,2) - feels a little off to ignore th white tick cause it's slightly louder than the red ones, consider alternating the rhythm? examples:
   
   
   ( ^ my favourite, cause it's more consistent than the others)
   
2. 00:35:967 (3,1,2) - placement of 2 is very confusing for beginners, cause it's visible before 3 is finished > players might accidentally let go of 3 and hit 2 (they don't pay that much attention to reverse arrows when the supposed next object gets that close x: )
   so please place 2 differently, example: http://puu.sh/eSlMD.jpg
3. 00:40:921 (1,2,3,4) - very tricky to read, considering the Easy is super easy you might want to reconider using patterns that are confusing even for some Hard players.
4. 00:45:325 (1,1) - iirc the distance from object - spinner should be 1/2 at least for easier difficulties. (better confirm that with some other people, just ask in modhelp or wherever)
   same for 01:22:756 (1,1) - ofc
5. 00:56:334 (1) - downbeat should be clickable, not only is it way louder than the rest, it's also a new sound you can follow. so I'd prefer if you split this into slider + circle
6. 01:07:343 (1,2,1) - don't let them overlap, that's super confusing. also, what's with the distance error of 2-1? that's too much of 'variation' for Normal, why don't you just use a copypasta-version of 01:07:343 (1) - , ctrl+g it and place it somewhere on the left?

1. 00:07:066 (3,4) - increasing DS for just one object seems a little awkward. '_' what's with all the othes before? the rhythm/volume/speed/pace doesn't change so this should be the same as all the others, imo
2. 00:11:196 - downbeat is clearly louder than the other beats but the only one not mapped. you could move 00:11:333 (6) - to here or replace it with a 1/2 slider starting on the downbeat. or two circles..
3. 00:20:004 - ^
4. 01:11:747 (1,2,3,1) - 3.1+ DS jumps seem a little exaggerated, even if the music is louder than everything in the beginning, it's overdoing it a little, imo
   and compared to the following Kiai it's so much harder.. to me the Kiais sounds more exciting and faster paced than the rest of the song, but here the build-up is much harder.. :n

Squirrel wrote:

helloooow there!
from my queue, just making suggestions unless bold

General

1. you might wanna look for a 16:9 background cause atm it looks a little awkward in the beginning, before the video starts. cause borders on the side
2. video is missing in Normal diff thanks=A=
3. I am kinda concerned about the driff spread.. you have a nice Easy, but in comparison to that the Normal seems a little too hard (cause of patterns) and the Hard is too hard as well (imo, espceially looking at the jumps >< ..). and only judging by SR the increase from 1.98 to 3.72.. uuhm. I don't really feel comfortable with that. considering that now ;w;
   looking at these three diffs, I'd suggest to rename Normal to Advanced or something similar and increase the difficulty slightly with more 1/2 rhythms. and then add another standard Normal diff. Would be best for the spead, I think, but all of that is up to you ofcourse ~

Easy

1. 00:04:642 (5,1) - movement could be smoother (= easier to play), rotate 1 and 00:06:460 (2) - by -45° and place them like this http://puu.sh/eShwh.jpg ? okay
2. 00:07:672 (1,1) - this is too less recovery time for Easy. no object should be on-screen until the spinner isn't visible anymore, cause that's confusing. you can read more about this here: t/241019
   > shorten the spinner or remove 00:10:096 (1) - so you have a full measure recovery time, preferably 1500ms shotrer
3. 00:13:949 - gap feels so empty, I'd add a circle here
4. 00:20:004 (2,3) - this might confuse beginners, cause when they follow the movement indicated by 2 you end on 3's end instead of the end. ctrl+g 3 and move 00:22:206 (4) - to 28|236 ? rotared 34 for a better flow
5. 00:31:013 (4,1) - movement here could be better, too. you can move 4 up a bit and rotate it, then adjust 1+following to match DS, screen: http://puu.sh/eSicZ.jpg done
6. 00:38:719 (3) - aah, nitpicking, move the last anchor a grid to the left xD :3
   to avoid confusion I'd prefer if you rotate this by ~ -35°, but that's not a must
7. 00:43:123 (4) - is this missing a NC?
8. 00:51:930 (1,1) - mentioned above, too less recovery time. you could replace the slider or shorten the spinner. replacing the spinner with another long slider would work, too ok
9. 00:59:637 (5,1) - gap feels off, you could follow the background.. Idk what thy're called-sounds. might play more interesting cause variety :3
   
10. 01:04:040 (4) - imo, this should be split. cause of the absolutely unnoticeable break after 01:04:316 - try this:
    a short slider and next is a note i think it's a little hard as easy .-.
    (if you do that you might want to put a NC somewhere in this combo, it gets a little long, maybe 01:07:343 (3) - )
11. 01:11:196 (3,1) - as mentioned, this is confusing because of the movement indicated by 01:09:545 (1,2,3) - . you can rotate 1 to avoid that

can't play the other diffs, so I'll have to skip them. sorry, hope I could help with the other diffs tho. 'w'
good luck! (if anything's unclear about the mod, feel free to ask me)

Ayu wrote:

Easy

1. 00:54:132 (1) - You should work on this slider. Make the end of the slider blanket the next note.
2. 01:09:545 (1,2) - Blanket this.
3. 01:11:196 (3,1) - Blanket this too.

fixed

Dark

1. 00:32:389 (3,4) - I suppose this overmap right here could be alright if that's what you really want, because of the strong beat on (4). But, 00:32:802 (5,6) - this one is definitely out of place and should be changed. The beat (6) is covering is pretty weak, so there's no need to force user input. you are right
2. 00:54:958 (4) - Not sure about this hidden slider. Would fit a gimmick map more than an extra difficulty.

Man, why do people overmap? It's a really big turn off for me. Map would be lovely without.

1. http://puu.sh/fbiOF/b7000ed489.png you should match those kiai sections (it's a guideline though)

1. 00:04:036 (4) - add whistle for consistency?
2. 00:14:499 (1) - is the clap intended to be slider's head?
3. 00:43:123 (4) - add NC for consistency
4. 01:11:747 (1) - remove NC for consistency

1. 00:44:224 (1) - remove NC for consistency
2. 01:08:444 (2,1) - using anti jump distance isn't recommended on low diffs (E and N) becuase some of players may feel confusion on this plcement
   
   i wish you used more diverse rhythm on this diff
   

1. http://puu.sh/f7UKv/f684939710.png seems like this diff has 1ms unsnapped kiai sections
2. 00:28:260 (2) - missed drum clap
3. 00:35:967 (5,6) - this sudden jump distance is quite unreasonable(sorry i cannot find proper words asdf) what about decreasing the distance a bit?
   
   example

   
4. 00:41:471 (2,5) - missed drum claps?
5. 01:02:939 (1) - off screen
6. 01:16:150 (1) - missed soft finish and normal sampleset
7. 01:20:003 (7) - i think there are many missed hitsounds from this note, you'd better add them all
   
   it seems that there are lots of missed hitsounds throughout of this diff, i can point them all out if you want. but if those are intended, pls reconsider it

1. 00:29:637 (1) - hiding both slider's head and tail at the same time isn't really good idea, it may cause confusion easily imo even it has new combo and high AR
   
   adjusting like this would be nice

   
2. 00:38:307 (2,3) - i wish these two notes were reversedly located for better flow
3. 00:55:233 (1,2,3) - due to the characteristics of this rhythm, it is hard to play this pattern without breaking the combo. consider changing this rhythm a bit, for example like this
4. 00:59:086 (5,6) - actually, i expected 2 1/2 sliders rather than current one, it's not that bad but it's a bit awkward. try using 2 1/2 sliders instead
   
   example

   
5. 01:05:692 (1) - i think this slider's head should have normal sampleset and soft addtions for consistency
   
   impressive

1. 00:05:096 (8) - remove the whistle? sounds quite annyoing
2. 00:09:746 - is this green line intended to be here? i think this should be at 00:09:793 - here
3. 00:19:729 (4) - how about adding default drum finish on slider's head? it's quite nice to hear
4. 00:21:655 (3) - ^ like you did at 00:24:132 (4) - here
5. 00:32:802 (5) - it would be better if this slider is placed somewhere else. it doesn't mean current flow sucks (it's quite fine) but i just want to feel better flow while playing
   
   example

   
6. 00:40:233 (2) - actually i don't really enjoy this kind of pattern because it's quite hard to handle 00:40:233 (2,1,2) - this flow (well maybe because of my lack of playing skill?). so i recommend you to change this note's placement little bit.
   
   examples

   
   
   etc.
7. 00:44:912 (4) - i think this slider's tail should have normal sampleset according to the song
8. 01:12:848 (5) - try adding NC for consistency
9. 00:55:233 (5) - what about adding NC to indicate the sudden SV change?
10. 01:17:802 (8) - consider adding NC for both consistency and 1/3 beats indicator
11. 01:19:729 (1,2) - swap NC for consistency as well
12. 01:22:825 - finishing kiai times on blue ticks isn't that great idea, how about finishing it at 01:22:894 - here?
    
    brilliant

HelloSCV wrote:

from my queue

[General]

1. http://puu.sh/fbiOF/b7000ed489.png you should match those kiai sections (it's a guideline though)

fixed

[Easy]

1. 00:04:036 (4) - add whistle for consistency? ifxedfixed
2. 00:14:499 (1) - is the clap intended to be slider's head? ahh i forgot to cancel that
3. 00:43:123 (4) - add NC for consistency judge the whole kiai ,every 4 white line,i add a NC,so no .-. (sorry for my poor english, i cant describe my thinking clearly ;_;)
4. 01:11:747 (1) - remove NC for consistency fixed

[Dark]

1. 00:05:096 (8) - remove the whistle? sounds quite annyoing okay
2. 00:09:746 - is this green line intended to be here? i think this should be at 00:09:793 - here you are right
3. 00:19:729 (4) - how about adding default drum finish on slider's head? it's quite nice to hear yes
4. 00:21:655 (3) - ^ like you did at 00:24:132 (4) - here ^ at the tail?
5. 00:32:802 (5) - it would be better if this slider is placed somewhere else. it doesn't mean current flow sucks (it's quite fine) but i just want to feel better flow while playing
   
   example

   
6. 00:40:233 (2) - actually i don't really enjoy this kind of pattern because it's quite hard to handle 00:40:233 (2,1,2) - this flow (well maybe because of my lack of playing skill?). so i recommend you to change this note's placement little bit.
   
   examples

   
   
   etc.
   moved it to 00:40:646 (3) -
7. 00:44:912 (4) - i think this slider's tail should have normal sampleset according to the song added
8. 01:12:848 (5) - try adding NC for consistency 01:11:747 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - dont really want add nc here beacuse this six is a pattern
9. 00:55:233 (5) - what about adding NC to indicate the sudden SV change? okay
10. 01:17:802 (8) - consider adding NC for both consistency and 1/3 beats indicator ok
11. 01:19:729 (1,2) - swap NC for consistency as well yes ^
12. 01:22:825 - finishing kiai times on blue ticks isn't that great idea, how about finishing it at 01:22:894 - here? changed to 01:22:756 a long white line
    
    brilliant

i'll finish this by tomorrow good luck!