Tokisawa Nao - BRYNHILDR IN THE DARKNESS -Ver. EJECTED- · forum

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OblivioN 2014-05-08T04:06:13+00:00

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Celizavia

568 posts

Joined October 2013

Celizavia 2014-05-18T05:34:24+00:00

hello~
thanks for using my Q

the mods here are from my personal opinions, so please understand

easy

CS=3, since 2 is too big and doesnt really look nice to the map
put a slider at 00:13:949 to 00:14:499 should be nice
put a slider too at 00:22:756 to 00:23:031

Bless' Normal

HD=3/4
put a slider at 00:10:371 until 00:10:646
put a circle at 00:10:784
a slider at 00:11:472

i can only mod 2 diffs, so hope this become helpful^^

gxytcgxytc

200 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

gxytcgxytc 2014-05-18T06:44:03+00:00

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Celizavia wrote:
hello~
thanks for using my Q

the mods here are from my personal opinions, so please understand

easy
CS=3, since 2 is too big and doesnt really look nice to the map
put a slider at 00:13:949 to 00:14:499 should be nice
put a slider too at 00:22:756 to 00:23:031
i think no need to change it=_=

Bless' Normal
HD=3/4
put a slider at 00:10:371 until 00:10:646
put a circle at 00:10:784
a slider at 00:11:472

i can only mod 2 diffs, so hope this become helpful^^

thanks for your mod first.
but i didn't change my map so i cant give your kd

Cherry Blossom

3,185 posts

Joined October 2011

Cherry Blossom 2014-05-23T18:44:58+00:00

Hello ~
From my modding queue.

Easy

00:12:297 (2,3) - Even if the bpm is low, 1/2 spacing is still weird/hard for a Easy diff.
00:16:701 (3,4) - move (4) a bit on the left, because, due to the AR, the beginner player may will not finish the reversed slider.
00:24:407 (2,3,4,1) - this kind of pattern is really hard for an easy, too many 1/2, try to reduce the amount of 1/2
00:31:013 (4) - i'd remove 1 reverse, it fits more the song and the rhythm used by removing a reverse also sounds cool.
01:00:738 (1) - same here, use a note instead of a 1/2 slider.
01:10:646 (2,1) - this overlap is barely visible, try to avoid it.

Bless' Normal

00:16:976 (2,4) - why dont to make sliders like this ?
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00:35:417 (1,2,3) - this kind of pattern is really hard, and not suitable for a Normal diff, add notes instead.
01:01:563 (3,4,1) - same as ^
00:54:683 (2) - curve less this slider, it will fit better with 00:54:132 (1,3) -
01:08:444 (2,1) - spacing issue, it is really confusing
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Melt's Hard

00:05:248 (1,2) - increase the spacing between these sliders, it looks a bit odd because of the objects you placed before.
00:11:196 - This is strongest note, it has to be clicked !!!
00:20:004 - ^
00:22:206 - ^
00:16:288 (5) - i prefer to make 2 circles instead of this slider to emphasize the violins you can hear.
00:27:159 (5) - why ? D: make a wub slider as you did here 00:26:609 (4) -
00:35:967 (5) - idk but, i think this need a NC here, because you suddenly change the speed into 1/4.
00:59:086 (3,4,5,6,7) - wow. this is really creative but not suitable for a hard diff, because it is really hard to read and play, make a regular spacing.
01:15:600 (7,8,9,10,1) - reduce a bit the spacing, it is really overkill.
01:20:003 (7,8,9,10,1) - ^

yf's Insane

1. 00:07:824 (1) - unsnapped spinner ?
2. 00:12:297 (1,2) - This does not introduce the circles well, rotate it a bit, like 15~20 degrees.
3. 00:44:913 (2,3,4) - i prefer to see this pattern as semi square, i mean
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4. 00:50:417 - this note should be really played, it gives more sense to the pattern.
5. 00:56:151 (1) - Make 2 notes instead of this slider to emphasize the hitsounds you used.

Dark

00:03:127 (2,4) - why dont to swap these objects ? i mean doing this
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00:31:013 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - The square should be like this, flows better imo

SPOILER
00:51:930 (1,2,3) - uuuuuh, 1/8 is too dangerous, be careful, i prefer to place these 1/8 sliders like this
SPOILER
01:15:600 (1,2,3,4) - since 95% of your patterns are jumpy, so what dont to place objects like this ?
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Such a challenging map x.x
I hope my mod was useful
Good Luck ~

gxytcgxytc

200 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

gxytcgxytc 2014-05-24T07:06:37+00:00

Cherry Blossom wrote:
Hello ~
From my modding queue.

Easy
00:12:297 (2,3) - Even if the bpm is low, 1/2 spacing is still weird/hard for a Easy diff. i think it's okay /.\
00:16:701 (3,4) - move (4) a bit on the left, because, due to the AR, the beginner player may will not finish the reversed slider. change to another form~
00:24:407 (2,3,4,1) - this kind of pattern is really hard for an easy, too many 1/2, try to reduce the amount of 1/2
00:31:013 (4) - i'd remove 1 reverse, it fits more the song and the rhythm used by removing a reverse also sounds cool. fixed
01:00:738 (1) - same here, use a note instead of a 1/2 slider. cannot fit music well
01:10:646 (2,1) - this overlap is barely visible, try to avoid it. fixed

Dark
00:03:127 (2,4) - why dont to swap these objects ? i mean doing this I dont want begining so hard to play=.=
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00:31:013 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - The square should be like this, flows better imo ok

SPOILER
00:51:930 (1,2,3) - uuuuuh, 1/8 is too dangerous, be careful, i prefer to place these 1/8 sliders like this not so hard/.\
SPOILER
01:15:600 (1,2,3,4) - since 95% of your patterns are jumpy, so what dont to place objects like this ?fixed
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Such a challenging map x.x
I hope my mod was useful
Good Luck ~

thanks for your mod

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2014-05-24T07:21:00+00:00

Cherry Blossom wrote:
yf's Insane
00:07:824 (1) - unsnapped spinner ? Already snapped
00:12:297 (1,2) - This does not introduce the circles well, rotate it a bit, like 15~20 degrees. Fixed in another style
00:44:913 (2,3,4) - i prefer to see this pattern as semi square, i mean Fixed in another style
SPOILER
00:50:417 - this note should be really played, it gives more sense to the pattern.
00:56:151 (1) - Make 2 notes instead of this slider to emphasize the hitsounds you used.

thanks for modding

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296,216,30944,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,219,31013,6,0,P|251:209|229:179,1,77.0000023498536,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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288,192,32664,2,0,L|280:280,1,77.0000023498536,8|2,1:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,184,32940,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,176,33008,1,0,0:0:0:0:
411,168,33077,2,0,P|420:130|411:93,1,77.0000023498536,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
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204,64,33490,2,0,L|207:140,1,77.0000023498536
100,100,33765,1,8,1:3:0:0:
224,152,33903,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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264,232,35073,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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424,148,35967,5,0,1:0:0:0:
352,40,36105,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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Bless

194 posts

Joined January 2010

Bless 2014-05-24T07:52:52+00:00

Cherry Blossom wrote:
Bless' Normal
00:16:976 (2,4) - why dont to make sliders like this ? ugly
SPOILER
00:35:417 (1,2,3) - this kind of pattern is really hard, and not suitable for a Normal diff, add notes instead.i don't think so, it's common for a normal diff
01:01:563 (3,4,1) - same as ^ ^
00:54:683 (2) - curve less this slider, it will fit better with 00:54:132 (1,3) - i was not feel better after change this...
01:08:444 (2,1) - spacing issue, it is really confusing it's not imo
SPOILER

thanks mod, but changed nothing~

Mint

1,607 posts

Joined February 2013

Mint 2014-05-27T16:58:12+00:00

hey, from #modreq

General

-

Easy

00:01:612 (2) - Move this slider to x116,y312 for a blanket, and 1.00x spacing for both the note before and after.
00:02:824 (4) - Move this to x88,y84 if you followed the first suggestion, and if you didn't - try making a better blanket.
00:10:646 (1) - Move this slider to x336,y240 for a better blanket.
00:35:967 (4) - AIMod said that this is too far from the previous object - though I don't think it's a that big of a problem, but you could fix it by moving previous or later notes.
00:50:829 (2) - Move to x200,y320 for a better blanket.
Overall I think the diff is OK - but the sliders are a little too
standard to me - make it more wave-ish (or just keep it as it is)

Bless' Normal

Good job on the Normal diff!

Melt's Hard

01:02:939 (1) - Very very very minor (also for other diffs) - but this slider goes 'past' the background. Move it to the left, change the BG, or leave it. ( http://puu.sh/93xFo.jpg )

yf's Insane

00:32:664 (3) - Move this to x304,y208
00:56:403 - ~ 00:58:467 - What happened to this?
01:14:774 (4,5,6,7) - I love this <3

Dark

00:11:747 (4) - Move to x104,y100 and move the middle slider point a little bit to make a better blanket.
00:16:151 (5) - Move to x384,y260 for a better blanket.
00:25:646 (2) - Move to x380,y344 for a batter blanket.
00:26:196 (4) - Move to x232,y248 for a better blanket.
00:36:655 (2,3) - Move these one grid down, and one grid to the left.
00:48:628 (5,6,7,8) - Maybe make it like this? ( http://puu.sh/93xVD.jpg )
01:06:793 (1) - I added a 40% normal whistle here.
01:10:233 (4) - Move the last slider point a bit, and move it a couple grids down for a better blanket. ( http://puu.sh/93yAQ.jpg )

324,344,70233,2,0,P|260:381|192:352,1,153.750005865097,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Awesome map! Have a star ~

gxytcgxytc

200 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

gxytcgxytc 2014-05-28T05:05:04+00:00

appleeaterx wrote:
hey, from #modreq
:idea: General

-

Easy

00:01:612 (2) - Move this slider to x116,y312 for a blanket, and 1.00x spacing for both the note before and after.
00:02:824 (4) - Move this to x88,y84 if you followed the first suggestion, and if you didn't - try making a better blanket.
00:10:646 (1) - Move this slider to x336,y240 for a better blanket.
00:35:967 (4) - AIMod said that this is too far from the previous object - though I don't think it's a that big of a problem, but you could fix it by moving previous or later notes.
00:50:829 (2) - Move to x200,y320 for a better blanket.
Overall I think the diff is OK - but the sliders are a little too
standard to me - make it more wave-ish (or just keep it as it is)
all fixed!
Dark

00:11:747 (4) - Move to x104,y100 and move the middle slider point a little bit to make a better blanket.
00:16:151 (5) - Move to x384,y260 for a better blanket.
00:25:646 (2) - Move to x380,y344 for a batter blanket.
00:26:196 (4) - Move to x232,y248 for a better blanket.
00:36:655 (2,3) - Move these one grid down, and one grid to the left.
00:48:628 (5,6,7,8) - Maybe make it like this? ( http://puu.sh/93xVD.jpg ) not good
01:06:793 (1) - I added a 40% normal whistle here. sounds a little strange....
01:10:233 (4) - Move the last slider point a bit, and move it a couple grids down for a better blanket. ( http://puu.sh/93yAQ.jpg )
324,344,70233,2,0,P|260:381|192:352,1,153.750005865097,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
others fixed~
Awesome map! Have a star ~

thanks for your mod and star >_<

[Hijiri Byakuren]

169 posts

Joined April 2010

[Hijiri Byakuren] 2014-05-29T15:09:25+00:00

打了下。。
我就摸DARK好了其他难度感觉没什么问题

[Dark]
打了几次死了几次感觉好乱排列感觉就跟乱摆似的节奏也不咋滴总体建议 remap

00:11:196 (1) - 这个1我一开始怎么打都是100...后来我看一下。原来是紧跟00:11:059 (6) -的。。很好……我读不出来我觉得6的位置应该在196 168附近

00:11:403 (2,3) - 既然这里是弱拍起手的二连离 1 这么近也是服气。。

00:11:403 (2,3) - 这里是二连 00:12:710 (4,5,6) - 这里是三连。。hhh 玩二连你整段都玩啊别有一出是一出
而且我觉得00:12:710 (4,5,6) - 删4保二连比较好为什么这么说你看看456离3有多远

00:10:096 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 我不想吐槽这里的排列。。顺手吗？

00:13:536 (2,3,4) - 建议删2保二连

00:13:949 (1,2,3,4) - 这样的缓和段不要太蛋疼为什么是直的？还不如 22

00:19:453 (5) - 直的？前面那个可是弯的。。。而且你看看这方向违和不？

00:17:802 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 。。。。打得我蛋疼

00:21:586 (3) - nononono 建议删和前面保持一致

00:20:004 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 建议重摆。。

00:22:756 (3,4,5,6) - 真心的我还没打过这样蛋疼的缓和段一怒之下连打甩过去了

在这之前给我的感觉。。不咋滴很不咋地。你到底是要拖（有二连有3/4滑条）还是要层次感强（没二连没3/4滑条总之就是啪啪啪啪）？

00:24:407 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 不做评价我知道你故意的给人的感觉 hhh

00:26:609 (1,2,3,4,5) - 没连上过一次。。

00:31:013 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - hhhh 人性？

00:32:527 (4) - 冲这这里竟然有个滑条还在这么偏僻的地方 00:32:802 (5) -竟然还在河对面一分不谢

SPOILER

你还不如这样呢

00:35:417 (1,2,3,4,5) - 既然你前面是渐大你这里也不来一发变大？还减速+大跳打死你啊

SPOILER

00:40:233 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - MD我又以为一串连打

01:01:839 (3,4,5,6) - 你3不来个NC吗？还摆成二连模样。。

01:05:141 (2,3,4) - 你确定4没多拉长？还有就是你这仨滑条什么走向啊你什么节奏啊。。

01:02:940 (4,5,6) - 这仨是让别人拉100的么？好歹NC下啊。。。

再后面的节奏比较清晰虽然排列还是乱但是还是连上了。。

总之我建议你remap
建议你remap
remap
别以为CS4就能乱摆乱跳
我最讨厌这样了

跳的组合不行
滑条指向随意严重影响顺手程度实在没本事就CTRL H ； J
滑条组合不行即节奏组合不行
直滑条运用的相当差劲严重影响美观

gxytcgxytc

200 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

gxytcgxytc 2014-05-29T16:28:00+00:00

和莲妈探讨了一下人生

update~

paraoka_old_1

paraoka_old_1 2014-05-30T06:49:00+00:00

from modding queue.

[Basic]
Custom hitsound might can ignore taiko mode's hitsound.

and all of diffs so many have slider. use more circle.

[Easy]

pretty done. but it might can be hard to new user.

[Melt's Hard]

sv so high. why so high sv used?

01:13:949 ~ 01:22:740 : might can be insane.

01:16:013 (10) - delete
01:20:417 (10) - delete

[yi's Insane]

sv so high. really high.
109 bpm and 2.8 sv lolol

gl for rank <3

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2014-05-30T07:42:30+00:00

in fact it is 218 bpm & 1.4x sv

Nymph

osu! Alumni

3,243 posts

Joined December 2010

Nymph 2014-05-30T09:18:09+00:00

看了一遍感觉mod也就是狂喷dark diff摆的一般别的都还好啊我可不可以skip

gxytcgxytc

200 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

gxytcgxytc 2014-05-30T09:52:40+00:00

Nymph wrote:
看了一遍感觉mod也就是狂喷dark diff摆的一般别的都还好啊我可不可以skip

那也提几类我去修修啊

wantuol

107 posts

Joined October 2010

wantuol 2014-05-31T05:01:08+00:00

Nymph wrote:
看了一遍感觉mod也就是狂喷dark diff摆的一般别的都还好啊我可不可以skip

吃药吃药吃药

Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2014-05-31T17:03:48+00:00

From your request of M4M

Grey——Just some complaints.
Black——My personal suggestions.
Bold——Highly recommended.
Red——(Maybe) Unrankable, you'd better fix it.

[General]

这是op？别忘了在tag里面加上Opening

[Easy]

00:05:248 (1) - 和前面那个间距0.96了，稍微动下
00:34:316 (3) - 间距0.93了啊
01:04:591 (4,1) - blanket？
01:22:894 (1) - 最后转盘可以20%fin结尾，挺不错的
SPOILER
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:05:239 - snap to 00:05:248
00:06:451 - snap to 00:06:460
00:09:746 - snap to 00:09:793
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00:16:699 - snap to 00:16:701
00:18:901 - snap to 00:18:903
00:31:493 - snap to 00:31:563
00:35:415 - snap to 00:35:417
00:36:516 - snap to 00:36:518
00:40:300 - snap to 00:40:371
00:40:438 - snap to 00:40:371
00:43:534 - snap to 00:43:398
00:46:424 - snap to 00:46:426
00:47:525 - snap to 00:47:527
00:48:626 - snap to 00:48:628
00:49:727 - snap to 00:49:729
00:57:502 - snap to 00:57:435

[Bless' Normal]

00:10:921 (1) - 尾whi
00:13:123 (2) - ^
00:15:325 (2) - ^
00:20:004 (2,2) - whi更合适
00:24:407 (2) - 头^
00:45:325 (1) - 不如从00:45:187 - 开始放个1/4滑条
00:56:334 (1) - 尾whi
01:22:894 (1) - same mentioned in Easy

[Melt's Hard]

00:00:399 (1,1,1,1) - whistle？后面滑条啊啥的也一样
01:02:939 (1) - 这个还是改一下，出的有点厉害，如果有player打图右边开按键的话基本滑条就全被挡住了
01:22:894 (1) - same mentioned in Easy
后面有点偏难，不太像hard

[yf's Insane]

00:00:400 (1,1) - whistle？
00:38:444 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end). 不知道是不是1/12惹的祸？
01:22:894 (1) - same mentioned in Easy
没啥，我觉得挺好玩的

[Dark]

Unsnap
Snapping 00:26:953 (3) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:26:953 (3) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:26:953 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:27:160 (4) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:27:160 (4) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:27:160 (4) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:27:160 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:27:435 (5) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:27:435 (5) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:27:435 (5) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:27:435 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:04:866 (1) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:04:866 (1) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:04:866 (1) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:04:866 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:05:239 - snap to 00:05:248
00:05:845 - snap to 00:05:854
00:06:451 - snap to 00:06:460
00:07:057 - snap to 00:07:066
00:09:746 - snap to 00:09:718
00:26:988 - snap to 00:27:022
00:07:369 (4) - 3,4间距和1,2间距差不多比较好
00:16:701 (1,2,3,4) - 这个可以做难点
00:24:958 (5) - NC
00:25:508 (1,2,3,4) - 这里节奏不好，建议重弄下，不像进kiai的那种感觉
00:32:389 (3) - 往下摆啊怕出界吗？这个位置不好看啊
00:34:316 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 每两个nc一次，可以再摆点pattern
00:48:628 (5) - NC？
00:51:242 (3) - 两折返滑条看着不舒服而且也不太适合
00:53:031 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 三分拍间距放的和前面的二分拍antijump一样是闹哪样
01:00:738 (1,2,1) - 前面1,2的停滞感太强了，不舒服，把这三个间距拉开点
01:13:398 (7,8) - blanket
01:13:123 (6,7,8) - 不好看其实，6,8碰头了
01:18:077 (9) - 移开？
01:22:894 (1) - same mentioned in Easy

Good luck

Bless

194 posts

Joined January 2010

Bless 2014-06-01T02:18:07+00:00

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:
[Bless' Normal]
00:10:921 (1) - 尾whi 不太喜欢哨声，一般不是特别适合我都不会加，鉴于后边整体都是加哨就都不改了
00:13:123 (2) - ^
00:15:325 (2) - ^
00:20:004 (2,2) - whi更合适
00:24:407 (2) - 头^
00:45:325 (1) - 不如从00:45:187 - 开始放个1/4滑条 一开始的确是这样的，后来根据别人的意见改成了单点我觉得也不错
00:56:334 (1) - 尾whi
01:22:894 (1) - same mentioned in Easy 稍微有点违和

thx

gxytcgxytc

200 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

gxytcgxytc 2014-06-01T02:21:13+00:00

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:

From your request of M4M

Grey——Just some complaints.
Black——My personal suggestions.
Bold——Highly recommended.
Red——(Maybe) Unrankable, you'd better fix it.

[General]
这是op？别忘了在tag里面加上Opening
加了~

[Easy]
00:05:248 (1) - 和前面那个间距0.96了，稍微动下
00:34:316 (3) - 间距0.93了啊
01:04:591 (4,1) - blanket？
01:22:894 (1) - 最后转盘可以20%fin结尾，挺不错的
all fixed .
SPOILER
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:05:239 - snap to 00:05:248
00:06:451 - snap to 00:06:460
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00:16:699 - snap to 00:16:701
00:18:901 - snap to 00:18:903
00:31:493 - snap to 00:31:563
00:35:415 - snap to 00:35:417
00:36:516 - snap to 00:36:518
00:40:300 - snap to 00:40:371
00:40:438 - snap to 00:40:371
00:43:534 - snap to 00:43:398
00:46:424 - snap to 00:46:426
00:47:525 - snap to 00:47:527
00:48:626 - snap to 00:48:628
00:49:727 - snap to 00:49:729
00:57:502 - snap to 00:57:435

绿线都没影响音效和kiai所以算了/.\
[Dark]
Unsnap
Snapping 00:26:953 (3) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:26:953 (3) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:26:953 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:27:160 (4) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:27:160 (4) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:27:160 (4) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:27:160 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:27:435 (5) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:27:435 (5) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:27:435 (5) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:27:435 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:04:866 (1) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:04:866 (1) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:04:866 (1) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:04:866 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:05:239 - snap to 00:05:248
00:05:845 - snap to 00:05:854
00:06:451 - snap to 00:06:460
00:07:057 - snap to 00:07:066
00:09:746 - snap to 00:09:718
00:26:988 - snap to 00:27:022
同上...slider是1/16于是误报么 ..
00:07:369 (4) - 3,4间距和1,2间距差不多比较好改了
00:16:701 (1,2,3,4) - 这个可以做难点加大了间距...恩确实不会改..
00:24:958 (5) - NC ok
00:25:508 (1,2,3,4) - 这里节奏不好，建议重弄下，不像进kiai的那种感觉 [#思考]
00:32:389 (3) - 往下摆啊怕出界吗？这个位置不好看啊 fixed
00:34:316 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 每两个nc一次，可以再摆点pattern 渐进的话不要NC比较好吧..
00:48:628 (5) - NC？猴
00:51:242 (3) - 两折返滑条看着不舒服而且也不太适合我听着挺好的/w\
00:53:031 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 三分拍间距放的和前面的二分拍antijump一样是闹哪样 (其实antijump是啥...) 改成两个直线三连了=_=虽然间距还是个坑
01:00:738 (1,2,1) - 前面1,2的停滞感太强了，不舒服，把这三个间距拉开点好!
01:13:398 (7,8) - blanket 噢
01:13:123 (6,7,8) - 不好看其实，6,8碰头了
01:18:077 (9) - 移开？ok
01:22:894 (1) - same mentioned in Easy

Good luck

谢谢mod :3
~~妮妮说很乱啊有没有在线指导什么的杀必死啊求助攻求人头~~

kamisamaaa

605 posts

Joined July 2011

kamisamaaa 2014-06-05T12:57:04+00:00

from BMT queue
[dark]
整体看了一下感觉节奏还好但是摆放乱七八糟。。妮妮说的很对额各种梗都是强行加进去的不管和音乐搭不搭调建议仔细听听音乐找找音乐的感觉
还有一个问题是各种拘束的小间距完全放不开然后没事突然地大跳简直坑爹下面是一些具体的举例额
00:05:248 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这里感觉可以每个缩小一点间距每个滑条速度减小一点然后排成一个整体感觉比你这样更能表现歌曲
00:13:949 (1,2,3,4,1) - 这种小间距简直没法玩这四声明明这么强烈建议用正常的小跳你看看00:14:774 (2,3) - 这里这么柔和的地方你用这么大间距然后四个重音你用小间距。。
00:15:325 (6,1) - 这个也是这么重的音用大间距别用这种小间距顺便00:15:050 (5,6) - 这个两个做成平行 00:15:325 (6,4) - 这个blanket没必要不要这么勉强包起来高的间距难受死了
00:20:554 (3) - 这个是一个上扬滑条尾比滑条头强烈建议换成两个note
00:22:756 (1,2,3,4) - 一样
00:25:508 (1,2,3,4) - 这里明明是一堆单点。漏音严重而且前面那些单点摆放单调
00:31:013 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 音乐完全不是这个感觉为啥做两个正方形不要强行使用梗要根据音乐摆放
00:32:114 (1,2,3) - 比如说这三个音明显前两个是一样的音第三个明显有别于前两个可是你用完全一样间距的三个note就完全没法体现音乐感觉最简单的一个合适的摆放是吧前两个note叠起来然后第三个note是个跳这样才是一种符合歌曲的摆放
00:32:527 (4) - 这个也是尾巴重音被滑条带过去了节奏不合适
00:33:077 (1,2,3,4) - 你听听音乐在看看你这个摆放你就知道啥问题了
00:34:866 (5,6,7,8) - 这个强烈的感觉你可以通过拿这四个note放开来表现前面四个是2组2组叠起来的然后后面这四个就用分开的2个一组的跳
00:35:967 (1,2,3) - 这个大跳太突然你前面都是小的一塌糊涂的间距突然来这种极端大跳让人怎么玩。全图都有这问题间距变化太突兀
00:59:086 (3,4,1,2,3) - 这段这么急促的音乐你就这么稀疏的节奏啊。。。。。。。。。。。这反差
01:13:949 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这段建议用循环梗想四种loop方式

先说这么多吧基本意思都说到了额也尽量举例说明了要是有什么不懂得可以ingame问我或者邮件什么的都可以
可能有时候语气不是很好额多包涵>.<

其实你可以多看看爱抚的diff 虽然我不喜欢那个风格但是他对歌曲的表现是没问题的你可以体会体会撒

gxytcgxytc

200 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

gxytcgxytc 2014-06-06T12:02:33+00:00

kamisamaaa wrote:
from BMT queue
[dark]
整体看了一下感觉节奏还好但是摆放乱七八糟。。妮妮说的很对额各种梗都是强行加进去的不管和音乐搭不搭调建议仔细听听音乐找找音乐的感觉
还有一个问题是各种拘束的小间距完全放不开然后没事突然地大跳简直坑爹下面是一些具体的举例额
00:05:248 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这里感觉可以每个缩小一点间距每个滑条速度减小一点然后排成一个整体感觉比你这样更能表现歌曲速度没改间距缩了
00:13:949 (1,2,3,4,1) - 这种小间距简直没法玩这四声明明这么强烈因为是降音一个降一度所以自然想这么放了后面也是小跳感觉不是很适合这个降调建议用正常的小跳你看看00:14:774 (2,3) - 这里这么柔和的地方你用这么大间距然后四个重音你用小间距。。球帮摆QAQ
00:15:325 (6,1) - 这个也是这么重的音用大间距别用这种小间距顺便00:15:050 (5,6) - 这个两个做成平行是平行的啊 00:15:325 (6,4) - 这个blanket没必要不要这么勉强包起来高的间距难受死了想不出其他的摆放了=A=
00:20:554 (3) - 这个是一个上扬滑条尾比滑条头强烈建议换成两个note fixed
00:22:756 (1,2,3,4) - 一样^
00:25:508 (1,2,3,4) - 这里明明是一堆单点。漏音严重而且前面那些单点摆放单调这里没有跟背景琴声的意思琴声也比较淡转而出现的是鼓声而且很强烈就跟着过来了
00:31:013 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 音乐完全不是这个感觉为啥做两个正方形不要强行使用梗要根据音乐摆放想不出>_>
00:32:114 (1,2,3) - 比如说这三个音明显前两个是一样的音第三个明显有别于前两个可是你用完全一样间距的三个note就完全没法体现音乐感觉最简单的一个合适的摆放是吧前两个note叠起来然后第三个note是个跳这样才是一种符合歌曲的摆放改成其他形式了,顺便之前这样放的原因是刚做完跳所以原地放note十分不舒服不顺
00:32:527 (4) - 这个也是尾巴重音被滑条带过去了节奏不合适^
00:33:077 (1,2,3,4) - 你听听音乐在看看你这个摆放你就知道啥问题了做过note转重音不过效果不太理想=-=
00:34:866 (5,6,7,8) - 这个强烈的感觉你可以通过拿这四个note放开来表现前面四个是2组2组叠起来的然后后面这四个就用分开的2个一组的跳同叠音音调一样的我都叠在一起了跳的话不太合适
00:35:967 (1,2,3) - 这个大跳太突然你前面都是小的一塌糊涂的间距突然来这种极端大跳让人怎么玩。全图都有这问题间距变化太突兀音乐就是从这里突发3个finish的我认为表现没有问题..
00:59:086 (3,4,1,2,3) - 这段这么急促的音乐你就这么稀疏的节奏啊。。。。。。。。。。。这反差没跟那音
01:13:949 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这段建议用循环梗想四种loop方式是循环了啊=_=

先说这么多吧基本意思都说到了额也尽量举例说明了要是有什么不懂得可以ingame问我或者邮件什么的都可以
可能有时候语气不是很好额多包涵>.<

其实你可以多看看爱抚的diff 虽然我不喜欢那个风格但是他对歌曲的表现是没问题的你可以体会体会撒

neonat

Beatmap Nominator

3,528 posts

Joined April 2012

neonat 2014-06-16T07:44:32+00:00

Easy

00:27:710 (1) - why isn't it a soft finish on the start of slider
00:43:123 (3) - the beats are at 00:43:673 and 00:44:224 though, having it repeat at 00:43:949 is weird
00:49:729 (1) - sounds like it doesn't start on where it is supposed to be, 00:49:453 seems to be a more likely spot to start, the music can be heard clearly

Bless' Normal

Should use the custom whistle 2 for sounds like 00:31:563 (4)

Melt's Hard

00:04:642 (3,4) - same angle as 00:04:036 (1,2)
00:11:196 - important beat here, so maybe have a slider here to 00:11:334 and remove that circle
00:20:004 - ^
00:57:435 - ^
00:27:710 (1) - finish on start of slider
00:35:967 (5,6) - I feel that big a jump isn't necessary for this part of the song
01:20:553 (1) - finish

Good luck

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-06-30T09:28:30+00:00

Hi there, from my queue here.

Sorry for delay :O

General

Your background image is kinda low in resolution, try this one!
SPOILER
Why not adding the full romanji name of this show as tag? I mean adding 'Gokukoku no Buryunhirude'.

Dark

01:22:826 - Unsnapped time section, snap it to 01:22:825 like other diffs. In fact, there are many snapped green lines, but if u are way too lazy to fix them all, just fixing this would be fine enough.
00:40:921 - Redundant green line, please delete it.
00:14:912 (3,4) - I wonder if there are solid beats for these two. Personally, I don't prefer such overmapping technique but seems you love it so much throughout the diff. So, nah..
00:13:949 (1,2,3,4) - I don't understand your intention of placing anti-jump here. As the four beats are too obvious and heavy, placing something even jumpier than 00:13:398 (1,2,3,4) would be nice imo.
00:14:912 (3,4) - Mentioned above. Alrite, I know it's annoying to point out every single piece of overmap, so I should stop here.
00:16:563 - Missing out a beat here, its awkward to have a halt here even the sound is low. Adding a circle would look nicer :> Same on 00:42:985
00:31:013 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Again, why is the spacing opposite to the atmosphere of the beats? Aren't 00:31:563 (1,2,3,4) being stronger?
00:33:490 (3,4) - These circles make me confused, what are u actually following? I think the instrument is a 1/8 snap instead of 1/4.
00:34:316 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Spacing here makes me feel like, oh is this a Hard instead? I would say, it's rare to place so many anti-jumps in Insane, let alone the highest diff of a set. This is even the climax of the song, so please adjust these, please :c
00:40:371 (1,2,3,4) - ;_; I don't really see your point of having annoying anti-jumps here..
00:40:921 (1,2) - CTRL+G these two on timeline basis, stresses are on 00:41:196 instead of the blue tick.
00:51:242 (3) - Start this slider on white tick, it's where the stress starts. I mean this:
SPOILER
00:53:582 (7,8) - These two looks similar to me, so if u add a whistle at tail of 00:53:857 (8), u may want to add a whistle of tail of (7) too.
01:01:701 (2,3,4,5,6) - nah.. at least NC 01:01:839 (3,5) for the different spacing change from 01:01:701 (2,3)?
01:05:692 (4) - I don't think the music lies on 1/8 here. Instead, it's something like this:
SPOILER
In conclusion, changing spacing at incomprehensible places and switching to follow different instruments make your diff kinda messy imo.

yf's Insane

00:36:517 - Snap this kiai time section to 00:36:518.
01:07:894 - Redundant green line, please delete it.
00:11:472 (6,7) - The rhythm sounds strange to me because of the stress, it would make me feel much more comfortable if you change them to these. Of coz this applies on similar rhythm at the back:
SPOILER
00:33:077 (6) - The stress is misplaced, it's worthwhile to be put as a slider head or a circle like what u did throughout the diff. Consider sth like this:
SPOILER
01:17:802 (8) - NC for reminding players of 1/6 snap like 00:53:031 (1).

Melt's Hard

00:27:709 - Snap this kiai time section to 00:27:710 or you simply delete this coz u got one at this timing porint.
01:22:686 - Redundant green line, delete it please.
00:10:645 (4,5,6,7,8) - The stress is kinda weird imo, aren't the stress 00:11:059 and 00:11:747? Since you miss out that strong drum, using a slider would be more comfortable to transit imo. Maybe something like this, same for the next stanza and 00:57:022 (3,4) ;w;:
SPOILER
01:11:747 (1,2,3,4) - The jumps are too exaggerating and harsh, since it's not kiai, try reducing them a bit?

Bless' Normal

00:10:921 (1) - Kinda empty without any hitsounds, how about drum whistle?
00:13:123 (2) - ^ omg, all of the stresses lack hitsounds, I am too lazy to point them out one by one.
Nice diff, considering the spread of the whole set.

Easy

Many redundant green lines, check them yourself please :>
00:27:710 (1,2) - A bit nazi, using the same slider for these two would be more aesthetic. Apparently they are not identical now.
00:43:123 (3) - Obviously stresses are on white ticks, drums are much more distinct than that on red ticks. So, why not separating them as two 1/1 sliders?
01:13:123 (2) - Hmm.. I treat this as sudden switch of instruments, because the previous slider is following, obviously, drums, but for this one, you miss out 01:13:398, which is very awkward imo. How about this?
SPOILER

Good luck!

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2014-06-30T11:24:17+00:00

打骏马看不懂

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-06-30T12:03:28+00:00

yf_bmp wrote:
打骏马看不懂

特別服務只有今天喔 <3

IamKwaN wrote:
yf's Insane
00:36:517 - Snap this kiai time section to 00:36:518. // kiai的綠線unsnap
01:07:894 - Redundant green line, please delete it. // 多餘綠線,刪除
00:11:472 (6,7) - The rhythm sounds strange to me because of the stress, it would make me feel much more comfortable if you change them to these. Of coz this applies on similar rhythm at the back: // 重音不對
SPOILER
00:33:077 (6) - The stress is misplaced, it's worthwhile to be put as a slider head or a circle like what u did throughout the diff. Consider sth like this: // 也是重音不對
SPOILER
01:17:802 (8) - NC for reminding players of 1/6 snap like 00:53:031 (1). // snap是1/6所以NC

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2014-06-30T12:06:30+00:00

我操我随便说的

gxytcgxytc

200 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

gxytcgxytc 2014-06-30T12:09:05+00:00

围观cp卖萌

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-06-30T12:16:54+00:00

yf_bmp wrote:
我操我随便说的

:@

[GB]Rush_FTK

217 posts

Joined July 2013

[GB]Rush_FTK 2014-07-17T09:07:46+00:00

嘛，新人学习，不请自来了> <

Mod

都是同胞就用中文说了，有些意思英文不怎么会表达。
[General]
建议：
-这个曲子的BPM是198.如果用到了1/8 snap。除非特殊情况，建议将BPM翻倍处理。（这歌的节奏不应该是150BPM以下的节奏……）(以下Mod仍以99BPM的Beat Snap为标准)
看法：
-前面的kiai-time应该删除，由于节奏与开头类似。
-这有一个先行的Ranked版本可以参考https://osu.ppy.sh/b/419274。
当然现在ranked水平层次不齐，这个版本严格上来讲都不能rank(那个版本的Darkness难度Auto下正确率无法100%。)
上面的其实是原TV Size版
您这个版本肯定是从Soundstruck中提取的，因为音乐有些微的不同。

[Easy]
建议：
- 00:10:096 让转盘在这里截止。
- 00:13:398 (3) 换为滑条(截止至00:14:224)，用Circle略显突兀
- 00:22:206 (4) ^
- 01:00:738 (1) 改为单打。
看法:
- 00:51:930 (1,1) 转盘截止到00:51:132，在00:55:233增加一个note。

[Bless' Normal]
建议：
-00:34:591/00:35:141 增加两个note。因为四个音符具有相同的级别(重音)。
-00:43:398/00:43:949 ^
-00:45:394 (1)这个转盘的起始点并没有音符。直接00:45:325开始更舒服；背景音乐的重音在00:47:527处，应该在这里截止。
-01:22:756 (1,1) 同上前部分理由。

看法:
- 没有用movie？
- 00:10:921 (1,1,2,1,2) 这里没看懂要跟什么，总觉得note有些少点。
- 00:44:224 (1) 延长1/4 snap。
- 00:44:774 (2) ^
- 01:01:563 (3,4,1) 个人认为这里对normal稍难。

[Melt's Hard]
建议：
- 00:39:614 (5,6) 向前移动1/8个Snap。
- 01:00:462 增加一个note。

看法:
- 00:58:398 增加一个note？

[Dark]
看法:
- OD+1 Extra难度并且hard难度OD已经为6
- 01:06:793 (1) 后错1/16个Snap。
- 00:11:196 (7) NC？

[yf's Insane]
建议：
- 00:07:672 (1) - 这里开转盘吧，因为这里已经有风声了。

看法:
- 00:06:460 (1,2,3,4) 希望能排的开一点？
- 00:13:673 (6,7,8) 滑条6在00:13:811；在00:13:949放置note，将00:14:086 (7) 头尾处换成两个note。由于后面四个钢琴音都是重音(起码级别相同)。
- 00:57:435 (1) 奥义·强制锁血流（

祝阁下武运昌盛，地图早日被Ranked

武运昌盛，地图早日被Ranked

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gxytcgxytc

200 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

gxytcgxytc 2014-07-17T10:07:53+00:00

IamKwaN wrote:
Hi there, from my queue here.
Sorry for delay :O

General
Your background image is kinda low in resolution, try this one!
SPOILER
Why not adding the full romanji name of this show as tag? I mean adding 'Gokukoku no Buryunhirude'.

Dark
01:22:826 - Unsnapped time section, snap it to 01:22:825 like other diffs. In fact, there are many snapped green lines, but if u are way too lazy to fix them all, just fixing this would be fine enough.
00:40:921 - Redundant green line, please delete it.
00:14:912 (3,4) - I wonder if there are solid beats for these two. Personally, I don't prefer such overmapping technique but seems you love it so much throughout the diff. So, nah..
00:13:949 (1,2,3,4) - I don't understand your intention of placing anti-jump here. As the four beats are too obvious and heavy, placing something even jumpier than 00:13:398 (1,2,3,4) would be nice imo.
00:14:912 (3,4) - Mentioned above. Alrite, I know it's annoying to point out every single piece of overmap, so I should stop here.
00:16:563 - Missing out a beat here, its awkward to have a halt here even the sound is low. Adding a circle would look nicer :> Same on 00:42:985
00:31:013 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Again, why is the spacing opposite to the atmosphere of the beats? Aren't 00:31:563 (1,2,3,4) being stronger?
00:33:490 (3,4) - These circles make me confused, what are u actually following? I think the instrument is a 1/8 snap instead of 1/4.
00:34:316 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Spacing here makes me feel like, oh is this a Hard instead? I would say, it's rare to place so many anti-jumps in Insane, let alone the highest diff of a set. This is even the climax of the song, so please adjust these, please :c
00:40:371 (1,2,3,4) - ;_; I don't really see your point of having annoying anti-jumps here..
00:40:921 (1,2) - CTRL+G these two on timeline basis, stresses are on 00:41:196 instead of the blue tick.
00:51:242 (3) - Start this slider on white tick, it's where the stress starts. I mean this:
SPOILER
00:53:582 (7,8) - These two looks similar to me, so if u add a whistle at tail of 00:53:857 (8), u may want to add a whistle of tail of (7) too.
01:01:701 (2,3,4,5,6) - nah.. at least NC 01:01:839 (3,5) for the different spacing change from 01:01:701 (2,3)?
01:05:692 (4) - I don't think the music lies on 1/8 here. Instead, it's something like this:
SPOILER
In conclusion, changing spacing at incomprehensible places and switching to follow different instruments make your diff kinda messy imo.

Easy
Many redundant green lines, check them yourself please :>
00:27:710 (1,2) - A bit nazi, using the same slider for these two would be more aesthetic. Apparently they are not identical now.
00:43:123 (3) - Obviously stresses are on white ticks, drums are much more distinct than that on red ticks. So, why not separating them as two 1/1 sliders?
01:13:123 (2) - Hmm.. I treat this as sudden switch of instruments, because the previous slider is following, obviously, drums, but for this one, you miss out 01:13:398, which is very awkward imo. How about this?
SPOILER

Good luck!

sad 没post出去..
大部分fix掉了..
.-.

xxdeathx

2,661 posts

Joined July 2013

xxdeathx 2014-07-17T21:15:49+00:00

Ah I love this anime. Such an amazing OP and cute witches.

[General]

BPM is actually 198/218. Wcx's ranked version uses those numbers. Besides the song is way too fast to be low bpm.
kiai time should start at 00:56:334 and end at 01:22:756

[Easy]

00:12:297 (2) - end at 00:12:848 because it's a stronger beat
00:54:132 (1) - shouldn't repeat more than once in easy or normal. also blanket is far in the middle
01:02:389 (3) - ^
01:07:343 (3) - ^
01:20:554 (1) - end earlier on white tick for same reason i said earlier

[Normal]

00:24:407 (2) - shorten by a tick to fit rhythm better
00:25:508 (1,2) - redo this to fit the music. extend (1) to end at 00:25:784 and have (2) start at 00:26:059 and end at 00:26:334
00:54:132 (1,2) - have the slider ends correspond to the music by ending them on the red ticks
01:13:536 (1) - what are you doing here? this doesn't fit the music either. keep the slider end at the same time but start the slider later at 01:13:673
except for several spots where your mapping contrasts with the music, the rest of the rhythm you chose to map is very nice

[Hard]

00:59:086 (3,4,5,6) - don't do such a sudden change in spacing. for most of your song, notes that were this long apart in time were touching/overlapping each other so players would assume that these notes are twice as slow because of their spacing
01:15:600 (7,8,9,10,1) - ^ you were using regular spacing for 01:14:224 (2,3,4,5,6) and this is only hard difficulty, there's no reason to suddenly double the spacing
01:20:003 (7,8,9,10,1) - also, this is a very high BPM so single tapping a lot of hit circles like this is too hard, especially with the spacing when it isn't a linear pattern

[Insane]

00:19:591 (3,4,5) - the way these are almost stacked but not exactly makes them look like a triple, but it's much easier to read their timing if they're stacked exactly on top of each other (and let the game shift the circles ever so slightly for you)
00:21:792 (3,4,5) - ^
00:23:994 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - ^ and i wouldn't put 00:24:614 (2,3) so close
00:59:086 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1) - redo the rhythm here, it's a little awkward

[Dark]

use HP drain 7. it's too hard with 8 hp drain.
00:10:096 (1,2,3,4) - spacing makes (4) look like it comes right after (3). move it further away or make (3) a slider so the rhythm is consistent
00:10:921 (5,6) - on the same note, the jump here is far even though the note comes right after in time. don't say it's to make things harder and it's okay because it's the hard difficulty, this sort of time-distance spacing is just too confusing. highly recommend fixing it.
00:11:747 (9,10) - ^
00:12:573 (3,4) - now if you fixed those above ones, then this one will make more sense
spacing with regard to time seems to be a recurring issue in this difficulty, so i won't touch on it more but you should go through and readjust objects where the spacing is misleading
00:27:435 (5) - repeat one less time
00:29:224 (3,4,5) - remove (4), not part of the rhythm
00:45:325 (1) - end at 00:47:114

Mapset needs some more work with rhythm and spacing before pushing for rank imo. wcx19911123 himself said this song is quite hard to map because of its rhythm and high BPM.

gxytcgxytc

200 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

gxytcgxytc 2014-07-21T15:26:03+00:00

xxdeathx wrote:
Ah I love this anime. Such an amazing OP and cute witches.

[General]
BPM is actually 198/218. Wcx's ranked version uses those numbers. Besides the song is way too fast to be low bpm.
kiai time should start at 00:56:334 and end at 01:22:756
x

[Easy]
00:12:297 (2) - end at 00:12:848 because it's a stronger beat
00:54:132 (1) - shouldn't repeat more than once in easy or normal. also blanket is far in the middle
01:02:389 (3) - ^
01:07:343 (3) - ^
01:20:554 (1) - end earlier on white tick for same reason i said earlier
[Dark]
use HP drain 7. it's too hard with 8 hp drain.
00:10:096 (1,2,3,4) - spacing makes (4) look like it comes right after (3). move it further away or make (3) a slider so the rhythm is consistent
00:10:921 (5,6) - on the same note, the jump here is far even though the note comes right after in time. don't say it's to make things harder and it's okay because it's the hard difficulty, this sort of time-distance spacing is just too confusing. highly recommend fixing it.
00:11:747 (9,10) - ^
00:12:573 (3,4) - now if you fixed those above ones, then this one will make more sense
spacing with regard to time seems to be a recurring issue in this difficulty, so i won't touch on it more but you should go through and readjust objects where the spacing is misleading
00:27:435 (5) - repeat one less time
00:29:224 (3,4,5) - remove (4), not part of the rhythm
00:45:325 (1) - end at 00:47:114
fixed almost all....
Mapset needs some more work with rhythm and spacing before pushing for rank imo. wcx19911123 himself said this song is quite hard to map because of its rhythm and high BPM.

thx for mod;w;

Curisu

2,241 posts

Joined January 2010

Curisu 2014-07-24T05:43:22+00:00

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[Dark]
大方向
一句话解释的话

IamKwaN wrote:
In conclusion, changing spacing at incomprehensible places and switching to follow different instruments make your diff kinda messy imo.

小细节 Spacing就不多说了
00:10:371 (3) - 这spacing很明显的违和感
00:13:949 (1,2,3,4) - 要做spacing渐减的话2,3的处理没做好如果不是的话也想不通为什么这样放 ; 00:22:756 (1,2,3,4) - <
00:16:151 (7) - ctrl+G 1/8这样的spacing略过
00:24:407 (1,4,3) - 这三个的hitsound配置要注意统一
00:27:160 (4,5) - slience 有点刺耳 ; 01:04:866 (1) - <
00:34:316 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 音效 drum怎么放也是根据前后 soft-whis我会觉得放在00:34:866 (1,2)好些
00:52:756 - remove whis ; 00:52:894 - <
00:53:031 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 可以参考爱抚这里whis的放法放在4就够了overuse有点吵
01:01:839 (1,2,1,2) - 没太大必要小间距

[爱抚]
Awesome Diff
赞

00:04:036 (1,2,3,4) - 和前后一样的变速方式的话不太建议摆成对称比起另外那两个的话这个

会显得比较杂乱
00:23:306 (1) - 这里的blanket好像有点没做好试试下面这个?

135,105,23307,6,0,L|53:98,1,70,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:24:614 (2,3) - for blanket 这两个错开和00:23:994 (3,4,5)等间距放好
00:26:196 (4) - ...对比你整张图这样的slider略突兀 Try this:

http://puu.sh/anNL3/eb1b650925.jpg
00:31:839 (4) - 考虑blanket可以摆在x=308, y=200
00:35:692 (2) - 是觉得可以放开一点点sv 可以试试0.5x / 1.3x
00:40:647 (4) - x=204, y=180 同样理由
01:03:490 (3) - 拆成两个1拍长的1/4折返slider 后面的那一个加一点点sv作过渡?
01:06:655 (2) - 这个遮挡的梗略坑放在01:05:692 (1)的末端觉得会好点

[Hard]
00:00:400 ~ 00:07:672 - 什么hitsound都没有有点吓人简单的话就几根长白线+whistle
00:07:369 (4) - 柑橘没有必要设成1.50x
00:18:352 (5) - remove whis
01:02:389 - 加Normal-whistle 看在你前面都加了
01:18:352 ~ 01:20:554 - 跟前面两段一样的下soft-whis for consistance

a nice mapset overall :3

Ciyus Miapah

3,011 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2014-07-26T03:07:32+00:00

Nothing in Here

bye.
Twinkle twinkle little star~ how my star did you get up~ ↑

gxytcgxytc

200 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

gxytcgxytc 2015-01-05T06:52:38+00:00

挖挖挖....
终于考研美丽了(各种意义上..英语一那什么鬼f@rk!!
to curisu 大部分应该都改了....嗯...
thx for your mod!
sorry for delay;_;
update~

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2015-01-05T10:31:13+00:00

I'm still alive
原来工学院去考研惹

Frey

1,205 posts

Joined February 2011

Frey 2015-01-13T16:05:26+00:00

Star for you~

[Easy]

· 基本上都是Blanket的，如果你不重视美观问题，可以选择跳过那些条。

· 00:05:248 (1,2) - Blanket包的不是很好，开1/4拍检查下

· 00:14:499 (1) - 00:18:352 (4) - 00:18:903 (1) - 我想问问为什么只有这三处放了Sampleset Normal？如果是错放那就取消。如果是故意的，这三处地方看起来很随机，至少应该附近其他类似地方也放（比如00:12:297 (2) - 或者00:23:307 (1) - ）

· 00:20:004 (2,3) - 这里的Blanket没包好也有点明显

· 01:02:389 (3,4) - 这里也是

· 01:09:545 (1,2) - 同上

· 01:13:123 (2) - 前后DS差距有点大了，稍微调整一下DS

· 01:22:206 - 根据前面的音效，你这里不应该是Finish，而应该是Clap

[Bless' Normal]

· Nice diff, find nothing to fix

[Melt's Hard]

· 妹儿特老大这Hard 3.72，和之前的2星的Normal相比，会不会有DIff Spread问题啊？

· 删掉offset 27709和82824的绿线，它们没有对齐时间轴

· 00:14:086 (6) - 这里可以不用Whistle的，我觉得。而且从后面来看，你还应该在00:14:223 (7) - 加Whistle

· 00:24:545 - 取消Whistle，加在00:24:682 (4) - 上

· 00:57:435 - 这里缺note，很明显你需要放个圆圈或者其他。

· 00:59:637 (7) - 我觉得从之前的大DS变成小DS，这里应该加个NC才好区别

· 01:16:150 (1) - 要么和之前的组成五角形，要么和之前的组成一个缺个角的六边形，我觉得更好看

· 01:16:150 (1) - 同时添加Finish

· 01:19:315 (4) - 添加Whistle

· 01:19:728 (6) - 同上

· 01:20:278 (9) - 同上

· 01:20:553 (1) - 添加Finish

· 01:21:104 (3,5) - 添加Whistle

[yf's Insane]

· offset 35416的绿线，offset+1

· offset 36517的绿线，offset+1

[Dark]

· 00:10:646 (4) - 或许需要NC

· 00:12:848 (4) - 同上

· 00:15:050 (3) - 同上

· 00:27:160 (4) - 我觉得为了区别和之前那个重复短滑的不同，这里应该NC

· 00:32:664 (4) - 没有叠好

· 00:38:307 (7) - 放在x148 y200如何？这里只是个人建议

· 00:53:582 (7) - 为了区分拍子的不同，我觉得需要NC

· offset 82826的绿线，offset-1

神图。祝好运！

Last edited by Frey 2015-01-17T06:58:45+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

LordRaika

Elite Mapper

1,438 posts

Joined September 2013

LordRaika 2015-01-16T00:22:19+00:00

Hitsound Mod request from my Modding Queue

osuu~

Here is my mod as request :

Hitsound

Nice to see you can use drum inside soft timing, so here goes the hitsound mod
simply following it without adding lots of work, will already improve the hitsound :

[Hitsound]

i use "DARK" dif as reference , use this hitsound and check them on "DARK" dif :

Download and rename this as drum-hitclap.wav and this is where it does take effect 00:16:701 - ( adding S:C1 ) and will automatically add snare for all of this note for you :
00:17:251 - , 00:17:802 (1,2) - , 00:18:352 (1) -
So yes, its suggest that every S timing (that have drum clap) to be changed into S:C1 timing....
and u can make a copy of the hitsound above and rename it into drum-hitclap2.wav , WHY? it will add the same effect for S:C2 timing too
and AUTOMATICALLY add the custom hitsound here : 00:20:004 - without needing lots of works ^^
one more crazy information for you.... that you CAN do this for all similar part :
00:28:261 - click the start of the slider , set the sampleset auto into sampleset normal (or SHIFT+W)
what you will heard is : normal-hitnormal + drum-hitclap hitsound , pretty damn good right?
00:29:362 - same, shift+W the start of the slider.
do this for all similar wet snare part.
00:44:362 - and also, dont forget that u can add additional drum, and add clap on it here too....
Final note : just to let you know, if you need or want to add crazy dubstep hitsound.... i have it
Here.... but i won't tell you how you use it, since you organize your own hitsound sampleset... ^^ , choose the kind of wub wub or scratching you want and add it on sampleset where you see fits and can be used easily.

That's all ^^b
pretty much cool now.... GL on hitsounding

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2015-01-16T12:19:42+00:00

Fixed a lot & remapped some parts

SPOILER

osu file format v13

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gxytcgxytc 2015-01-19T14:04:31+00:00

TO Frey

Frey wrote:
Star for you~

[Easy]

· 基本上都是Blanket的，如果你不重视美观问题，可以选择跳过那些条。

· 00:05:248 (1,2) - Blanket包的不是很好，开1/4拍检查下

· 00:14:499 (1) - 00:18:352 (4) - 00:18:903 (1) - 我想问问为什么只有这三处放了Sampleset Normal？如果是错放那就取消。如果是故意的，这三处地方看起来很随机，至少应该附近其他类似地方也放（比如00:12:297 (2) - 或者00:23:307 (1) - ）

· 00:20:004 (2,3) - 这里的Blanket没包好也有点明显

· 01:02:389 (3,4) - 这里也是

· 01:09:545 (1,2) - 同上

· 01:13:123 (2) - 前后DS差距有点大了，稍微调整一下DS

· 01:22:206 - 根据前面的音效，你这里不应该是Finish，而应该是Clap
应该都改了w

[yf's Insane]

· offset 35416的绿线，offset+1

· offset 36517的绿线，offset+1
改了

[Dark]

· 00:10:646 (4) - 或许需要NC

· 00:12:848 (4) - 同上

· 00:15:050 (3) - 同上

· 00:27:160 (4) - 我觉得为了区别和之前那个重复短滑的不同，这里应该NC

· 00:32:664 (4) - 没有叠好

· 00:38:307 (7) - 放在x148 y200如何？这里只是个人建议

· 00:53:582 (7) - 为了区分拍子的不同，我觉得需要NC

· offset 82826的绿线，offset-1
都改了 00:27:160 (4) - 换了梗
神图。祝好运！

谢摸!

LordRaika wrote:
Hitsound Mod request from my Modding Queue

osuu~
Here is my mod as request :

Hitsound
Nice to see you can use drum inside soft timing, so here goes the hitsound mod
simply following it without adding lots of work, will already improve the hitsound :

[Hitsound]
i use "DARK" dif as reference , use this hitsound and check them on "DARK" dif :
Download and rename this as drum-hitclap.wav and this is where it does take effect 00:16:701 - ( adding S:C1 ) and will automatically add snare for all of this note for you :
00:17:251 - , 00:17:802 (1,2) - , 00:18:352 (1) -
So yes, its suggest that every S timing (that have drum clap) to be changed into S:C1 timing....
and u can make a copy of the hitsound above and rename it into drum-hitclap2.wav , WHY? it will add the same effect for S:C2 timing too
and AUTOMATICALLY add the custom hitsound here : 00:20:004 - without needing lots of works ^^
one more crazy information for you.... that you CAN do this for all similar part :
00:28:261 - click the start of the slider , set the sampleset auto into sampleset normal (or SHIFT+W)
what you will heard is : normal-hitnormal + drum-hitclap hitsound , pretty damn good right?
00:29:362 - same, shift+W the start of the slider.
do this for all similar wet snare part.
00:44:362 - and also, dont forget that u can add additional drum, and add clap on it here too....
Final note : just to let you know, if you need or want to add crazy dubstep hitsound.... i have it
Here.... but i won't tell you how you use it, since you organize your own hitsound sampleset... ^^ , choose the kind of wub wub or scratching you want and add it on sampleset where you see fits and can be used easily.

That's all ^^b
pretty much cool now.... GL on hitsounding
sounds fine now
thanks for your mod and that wav files XDDD

update~~~~

edit:yf难度里有几个受到新加的drumclap1/2影响了0.0 于是我给加了几条绿线改回去了=A=

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