GD req done~
http://puu.sh/8vPnz.osu
http://puu.sh/8vPnz.osu
谢谢BL姐姐!Bless wrote:
GD req done~
http://puu.sh/8vPnz.osu
thx for modOniJAM wrote:
Mod request from Popner's Modding Team[General]
- Red - Unrankable issue, you must fixed
- Purple - Highly recommended, consider to use it
- Black - Suggestion, feel free to fixed or not
- Gray - Presonal preference
done
- Easy: SliderMultiplier:1.24999990463257 /make it 1.25
- Bless's Normal: SliderMultiplier:1.59999990463257 /make it 1.6
- Dark: SliderMultiplier:2.04999990463257 /make it 2.05
- All diffs: Offset: 390.666666666667 /Offset seems a bit off for me, make it 400.
- The second red line: BPM: 108.999, Offset: 10094.2978010165 /Change to BPM: 109.000, Offset: 10096
- PreviewTime: 10094 /Change to 10096 because of the timing changes
- Don't forget to resnap all notes after fixed the timing, then check the rest mod.
[ Easy]
RhythmHitsounds
- 00:17:940 (4) - It's not recommended to use 1/4 to map in Easy, so a circle at 00:18:353 - is enough
- 01:07:344 (1) - Not a good place to put spinner here, try 1/1 slider with 2 repeats.
Placement
- 00:02:824 (3) - Remove whistle to make consistent
- 00:31:839 - Sampleset Auto, Addition Drum, Finish. To meet with 00:31:013 - & 00:31:288 - .
all fixed
- 00:27:710 (1,2,3) - These notes are too close, try to move them plz
- 00:45:325 (4,1) - Swap NC
[ Dark]
RhythmHitsounds
- 01:09:545 (1,1,1,1) - This spinner spam seems odd, I recommend you to just put circle and slider here
Placement
- Fine
others all fix
- 00:20:554 (3) - I would Ctrl+G it for a better flow
- 00:53:031 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Weird arrangement, very difficult for player to read, please make this part easier to read i think it's okay
- 00:57:435 (7) - NC here
- 01:01:839 (3,4,5,6) - Using larger distance between 3 and 4/ 5 and 6 maybe better
================================
Good Luck!
thx[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:
送分
DarkBless' Normal
- 00:13:949 (1,2,3,4) - 我觉得这样比较好玩 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1579761
- 00:22:894 (4,5) - ctrl+g(总之把顺序弄成这样比较爽
- 00:40:508 (4,5) - ^ 音调下降 跳起来就没感觉了
- 00:36:793 (3) - blanket( 美丽
- 00:54:683 (3) - 这个clap加的不好 告诉我应该怎么加啊
- 01:14:224 (2,3,4,5) - 感觉没压到重点上啊.. 01:18:352之后的部分re了 看一眼?
- 后面每组的第一个那个reverse改成1/2长的滑条试试.. 就是 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1579775 这样的节奏
a
- 00:16:976 (2,3) - 我觉得很容易引起误解
- 00:45:325 (1) - 建议改成一个单点 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1579789
其实我推荐你bpmx2
已改[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:
Bless' Normal
- 00:16:976 (2,3) - 我觉得很容易引起误解
- 00:45:325 (1) - 建议改成一个单点 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1579789
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all fixed thxLaurier wrote:
from my queue
General
this gray combo color is too hidden with BG x_x Try using white? it makes good effect
why dont have hard diff ? hard still wip =_=
Dark
00:04:642 (5,6,7,8) - why did you choose this flow ? I thought that you can use penta again. |have tried some forms but not good /.\
00:06:460 (5) - add NC ?
00:18:352 (5) - add nc
00:31:563 (5) - same as adove. those patterns has big gap.
01:13:949 (1) - this slider end is not followed any sounds. you should change to one slider between 01:13:949 - to 01:14:224 -. also same as all patterns should be changed.
Easy
00:45:325 (1,2,3,4,5) - I can't understand. those notes aren't followed any sounds. you can choose add break
01:13:949 (3) - I don't like this acute angle. you can make more smooth flow http://puu.sh/8CKhz.jpg
thats it
fixed, thanks~Laurier wrote:
Normal
00:45:325 (3) - add NC with unification from same pattern as 01:22:756 (1) -
00:54:132 (1) - make a smooth curve ? http://puu.sh/8CJYH.jpg
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Celizavia wrote:
hello~
thanks for using my Q
the mods here are from my personal opinions, so please understandeasy i think no need to change it=_=
- CS=3, since 2 is too big and doesnt really look nice to the map
- put a slider at 00:13:949 to 00:14:499 should be nice
- put a slider too at 00:22:756 to 00:23:031
Bless' Normal
i can only mod 2 diffs, so hope this become helpful^^
thanks for your modCherry Blossom wrote:
Hello ~
From my modding queue.Easy
- 00:12:297 (2,3) - Even if the bpm is low, 1/2 spacing is still weird/hard for a Easy diff. i think it's okay /.\
- 00:16:701 (3,4) - move (4) a bit on the left, because, due to the AR, the beginner player may will not finish the reversed slider. change to another form~
- 00:24:407 (2,3,4,1) - this kind of pattern is really hard for an easy, too many 1/2, try to reduce the amount of 1/2
- 00:31:013 (4) - i'd remove 1 reverse, it fits more the song and the rhythm used by removing a reverse also sounds cool. fixed
- 01:00:738 (1) - same here, use a note instead of a 1/2 slider. cannot fit music well
- 01:10:646 (2,1) - this overlap is barely visible, try to avoid it. fixed
Dark
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- 00:03:127 (2,4) - why dont to swap these objects ? i mean doing this I dont want begining so hard to play=.=
- 00:31:013 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - The square should be like this, flows better imo ok
- 00:51:930 (1,2,3) - uuuuuh, 1/8 is too dangerous, be careful, i prefer to place these 1/8 sliders like this not so hard/.\
- 01:15:600 (1,2,3,4) - since 95% of your patterns are jumpy, so what dont to place objects like this ?fixed
Such a challenging map x.x
I hope my mod was useful
Good Luck ~
thanks for moddingCherry Blossom wrote:
yf's Insane
- 00:07:824 (1) - unsnapped spinner ? Already snapped
- 00:12:297 (1,2) - This does not introduce the circles well, rotate it a bit, like 15~20 degrees. Fixed in another style
- 00:44:913 (2,3,4) - i prefer to see this pattern as semi square, i mean Fixed in another style
- 00:50:417 - this note should be really played, it gives more sense to the pattern.
- 00:56:151 (1) - Make 2 notes instead of this slider to emphasize the hitsounds you used.
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thanks mod, but changed nothing~Cherry Blossom wrote:
Bless' Normal
- 00:16:976 (2,4) - why dont to make sliders like this ? ugly
- 00:35:417 (1,2,3) - this kind of pattern is really hard, and not suitable for a Normal diff, add notes instead.i don't think so, it's common for a normal diff
- 01:01:563 (3,4,1) - same as ^ ^
- 00:54:683 (2) - curve less this slider, it will fit better with 00:54:132 (1,3) - i was not feel better after change this...
- 01:08:444 (2,1) - spacing issue, it is really confusing it's not imo
thanks for your mod and star >_<appleeaterx wrote:
hey, from #modreq:idea: General
-all fixed!Easy
00:01:612 (2) - Move this slider to x116,y312 for a blanket, and 1.00x spacing for both the note before and after.
00:02:824 (4) - Move this to x88,y84 if you followed the first suggestion, and if you didn't - try making a better blanket.
00:10:646 (1) - Move this slider to x336,y240 for a better blanket.
00:35:967 (4) - AIMod said that this is too far from the previous object - though I don't think it's a that big of a problem, but you could fix it by moving previous or later notes.
00:50:829 (2) - Move to x200,y320 for a better blanket.
Overall I think the diff is OK - but the sliders are a little too
standard to me - make it more wave-ish (or just keep it as it is)others fixed~Dark
00:11:747 (4) - Move to x104,y100 and move the middle slider point a little bit to make a better blanket.
00:16:151 (5) - Move to x384,y260 for a better blanket.
00:25:646 (2) - Move to x380,y344 for a batter blanket.
00:26:196 (4) - Move to x232,y248 for a better blanket.
00:36:655 (2,3) - Move these one grid down, and one grid to the left.
00:48:628 (5,6,7,8) - Maybe make it like this? ( http://puu.sh/93xVD.jpg ) not good
01:06:793 (1) - I added a 40% normal whistle here. sounds a little strange....
01:10:233 (4) - Move the last slider point a bit, and move it a couple grids down for a better blanket. ( http://puu.sh/93yAQ.jpg )
Awesome map! Have a star ~
Nymph wrote:
看了一遍 感觉mod也就是狂喷dark diff摆的一般 别的都还好啊 我可不可以skip
吃药 吃药 吃药Nymph wrote:
看了一遍 感觉mod也就是狂喷dark diff摆的一般 别的都还好啊 我可不可以skip
thx[Minakami Yuki] wrote:
[Bless' Normal]
- 00:10:921 (1) - 尾whi 不太喜欢哨声,一般不是特别适合我都不会加,鉴于后边整体都是加哨就都不改了
- 00:13:123 (2) - ^
- 00:15:325 (2) - ^
- 00:20:004 (2,2) - whi更合适
- 00:24:407 (2) - 头^
- 00:45:325 (1) - 不如从00:45:187 - 开始放个1/4滑条 一开始的确是这样的,后来根据别人的意见改成了单点我觉得也不错
- 00:56:334 (1) - 尾whi
- 01:22:894 (1) - same mentioned in Easy 稍微有点违和
谢谢mod :3[Minakami Yuki] wrote:
From your request of M4M
- Grey——Just some complaints.
- Black——My personal suggestions.
- Bold——Highly recommended.
- Red——(Maybe) Unrankable, you'd better fix it.
[General]加了~
- 这是op?别忘了在tag里面加上Opening
[Easy]
- 00:05:248 (1) - 和前面那个间距0.96了,稍微动下
- 00:34:316 (3) - 间距0.93了啊
- 01:04:591 (4,1) - blanket?
- 01:22:894 (1) - 最后转盘可以20%fin结尾,挺不错的
- all fixed .
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绿线都没影响音效和kiai所以算了/.\
[Dark]
Unsnap同上...slider是1/16于是误报么 ..Snapping 00:26:953 (3) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
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00:26:988 - snap to 00:27:022- 00:07:369 (4) - 3,4间距和1,2间距差不多比较好 改了
- 00:16:701 (1,2,3,4) - 这个可以做难点 加大了间距...恩确实不会改..
- 00:24:958 (5) - NC ok
- 00:25:508 (1,2,3,4) - 这里节奏不好,建议重弄下,不像进kiai的那种感觉 [#思考]
- 00:32:389 (3) - 往下摆啊怕出界吗?这个位置不好看啊 fixed
- 00:34:316 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 每两个nc一次,可以再摆点pattern 渐进的话不要NC比较好吧..
- 00:48:628 (5) - NC? 猴
- 00:51:242 (3) - 两折返滑条看着不舒服 而且也不太适合 我听着挺好的/w\
- 00:53:031 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 三分拍间距放的和前面的二分拍antijump一样是闹哪样 (其实antijump是啥...) 改成两个直线三连了=_=虽然间距还是个坑
- 01:00:738 (1,2,1) - 前面1,2的停滞感太强了,不舒服,把这三个间距拉开点 好!
- 01:13:398 (7,8) - blanket 噢
- 01:13:123 (6,7,8) - 不好看其实,6,8碰头了
- 01:18:077 (9) - 移开?ok
- 01:22:894 (1) - same mentioned in Easy
Good luck
kamisamaaa wrote:
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[dark]
整体看了一下感觉节奏还好 但是摆放乱七八糟。。妮妮说的很对额 各种梗都是强行加进去的 不管和音乐搭不搭调 建议仔细听听音乐找找音乐的感觉
还有一个问题是各种拘束的小间距完全放不开 然后没事突然地大跳简直坑爹 下面是一些具体的举例额
00:05:248 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这里感觉可以每个缩小一点间距 每个滑条速度减小一点 然后排成一个整体 感觉比你这样更能表现歌曲 速度没改 间距缩了
00:13:949 (1,2,3,4,1) - 这种小间距简直没法玩 这四声明明这么强烈因为是降音 一个降一度所以自然想这么放了 后面也是 小跳感觉不是很适合这个降调 建议用正常的小跳 你看看00:14:774 (2,3) - 这里 这么柔和的地方你用这么大间距 然后四个重音你用小间距。。 球帮摆QAQ
00:15:325 (6,1) - 这个也是 这么重的音用大间距 别用这种小间距 顺便00:15:050 (5,6) - 这个两个做成平行是平行的啊 00:15:325 (6,4) - 这个blanket没必要 不要这么勉强包起来 高的间距难受死了 想不出其他的摆放了=A=
00:20:554 (3) - 这个是一个上扬 滑条尾比滑条头强烈 建议换成两个note fixed
00:22:756 (1,2,3,4) - 一样^
00:25:508 (1,2,3,4) - 这里明明是一堆单点。漏音严重 而且前面那些单点摆放单调 这里没有跟背景琴声的意思 琴声也比较淡 转而出现的是鼓声而且很强烈 就跟着过来了
00:31:013 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 音乐完全不是这个感觉 为啥做两个正方形 不要强行使用梗 要根据音乐摆放 想不出>_>
00:32:114 (1,2,3) - 比如说这三个音 明显前两个是一样的音 第三个明显有别于前两个 可是你用完全一样间距的三个note就完全没法体现音乐感觉 最简单的一个合适的摆放是吧前两个note叠起来 然后第三个note是个跳 这样才是一种符合歌曲的摆放 改成其他形式了,顺便之前这样放的原因是刚做完跳所以原地放note十分不舒服不顺
00:32:527 (4) - 这个也是尾巴重音被滑条带过去了节奏不合适^
00:33:077 (1,2,3,4) - 你听听音乐在看看你这个摆放你就知道啥问题了 做过note转重音不过效果不太理想=-=
00:34:866 (5,6,7,8) - 这个强烈的感觉你可以通过拿这四个note放开来表现 前面四个是2组2组叠起来的 然后后面这四个就用分开的2个一组的跳 同 叠音 音调一样的我都叠在一起了 跳的话不太合适
00:35:967 (1,2,3) - 这个大跳太突然 你前面都是小的一塌糊涂的间距 突然来这种极端大跳让人怎么玩。 全图都有这问题 间距变化太突兀音乐就是从这里突发3个finish的 我认为表现没有问题..
00:59:086 (3,4,1,2,3) - 这段这么急促的音乐你就这么稀疏的节奏啊。。。。。。。。。。。这反差没跟那音
01:13:949 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这段建议用循环梗 想四种loop方式 是循环了啊=_=
先说这么多吧 基本意思都说到了额 也尽量举例说明了 要是有什么不懂得可以ingame问我 或者邮件什么的都可以
可能有时候语气不是很好额 多包涵>.<
其实你可以多看看爱抚的diff 虽然我不喜欢那个风格 但是他对歌曲的表现是没问题的 你可以体会体会撒
yf_bmp wrote:
打骏马 看不懂
IamKwaN wrote:
yf's Insane
- 00:36:517 - Snap this kiai time section to 00:36:518. // kiai的綠線unsnap
- 01:07:894 - Redundant green line, please delete it. // 多餘綠線,刪除
- 00:11:472 (6,7) - The rhythm sounds strange to me because of the stress, it would make me feel much more comfortable if you change them to these. Of coz this applies on similar rhythm at the back: // 重音不對
- 00:33:077 (6) - The stress is misplaced, it's worthwhile to be put as a slider head or a circle like what u did throughout the diff. Consider sth like this: // 也是重音不對
- 01:17:802 (8) - NC for reminding players of 1/6 snap like 00:53:031 (1). // snap是1/6所以NC
:@yf_bmp wrote:
我操我随便说的