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yanaginagi - Tokohana (TV Size) [OsuMania]

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asd123iii
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年5月29日 at 下午 01:48:21

Artist: yanaginagi
Title: Tokohana (TV Size)
Source: ブラック・ブレット
Tags: Black Bullet ending rumia-
BPM: 150
Filesize: 2801kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. 4K EZ - 4Key (1.56 stars, 291 notes)
  2. 4K HD+ - 4Key (3.63 stars, 656 notes)
  3. 4K NM - 4Key (2.44 stars, 455 notes)
  4. Rumi's 7K HD - 7Key (3.13 stars, 507 notes)
  5. Rumi's 7K MX - 7Key (4.63 stars, 756 notes)
  6. Rumi's 7K NM - 7Key (1.89 stars, 314 notes)
Download: yanaginagi - Tokohana (TV Size)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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5th Beatmap, PC, S.Star, and victorica style XD
2nd Ranked Beatmap, take a new try ~
7K Diffs by rumia-
Taiwan-NAK
搶沙發啊

MX
00:05:995 - 這邊開始你仔細聽 背景有提琴音 我建議你把這段刪光 抓提琴音

00:52:949 - 後面你的鋼琴音沒抓齊 建議check

01:01:470 (61470|1) - 應該要在01:02:713 - 結束

01:03:245 (63245|3,63600|0,63955|2) - 這個我建議留空 人聲很美的 聽聽不好嗎 :D

01:25:612 (85612|3,85967|2,86322|0,86677|1) - 同上
Topic Starter
asd123iii

Taiwan-NAK wrote:

搶沙發啊

MX
00:05:995 - 這邊開始你仔細聽 背景有提琴音 我建議你把這段刪光 抓提琴音 只抓提琴音估計被吐槽

00:52:949 - 後面你的鋼琴音沒抓齊 建議check 點一下而已, 放break太蠢

01:01:470 (61470|1) - 應該要在01:02:713 - 結束 Fixed

01:03:245 (63245|3,63600|0,63955|2) - 這個我建議留空 人聲很美的 聽聽不好嗎 :D

01:25:612 (85612|3,85967|2,86322|0,86677|1) - 同上
edit:
NM -> EZ
HD -> NM
MX -> HD+
arcwinolivirus
From Arcwinolivirus' Speed Modding Queue!

Take note that I'm only focusing on note patterns, note placements and note consistency. Not the actual hitsound itself (Just in case if you already implemented hitsounds).

[General]
Audio: OK!
BG: OK!
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: OK!
AiMod:
• Alot of problem. Check the aimod. Fix those.


Column:
_ _ _ _ _ _ _
7K - |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

[7K NM]
SPOILER
00:04:995 (4995|4) - change to LN until 00:05:995 it actually feels empty here. The single note is very lonely like it doesnt represent an instrument o.o also changing the LN like you did at HD.

00:25:967 (25967|1) - move to 00:26:145 since the long sound starts there.
and reduce length until 00:27:387

00:25:967 - then add a note for the beat. If above applied.

00:26:145 (26145|4,26500|6,26855|4) - move to 00:26:322 because it feels off not to focus on snare and beat.

00:27:920 (27920|2) - move to 4 for more comfortable press and to be at center of the next two notes.

00:35:908 - add note since strong sound.

01:01:470 - add another LN to 6 like 01:01:470 (61470|1) since its a strong LN sound.

01:12:831 - add note for strong sound.

01:13:364 - ^

01:14:074 - ^

01:22:772 (82772|1,83127|1,83482|1,83837|1) - I suggest to remove as the previous notes with the same sounds and same strength are only 1-noted 01:21:707 (81707|3,82062|3,82417|3)

01:25:612 (85612|5) - move to 5 to be more comfortable and open 2-noted.

[7K HD]
coool~
SPOILER
00:32:713 (32713|3) - move to 6 to avoid the stacking and not same pitch o.o

00:33:423 (33423|4,33778|5,34133|6) - move 1 column to the left. Same reason above.

00:34:310 - add note for guitar.

00:35:109 (35109|5,35464|1) - remove? as the hithat is so low volume kinda inconsistent for HD :v

00:46:204 (46204|6) - remove to avoid sudden 3-noted with LN without strong sound.

[7K MX]
SPOILER
00:07:195 (7195|1) - move to 3
00:11:195 (11195|2) - move to 7
00:34:665 (34665|1,35020|1,35375|1,35730|1) - move to 3 to avoid the stacking of notes.
00:38:393 (38393|5) - remove to avoid 4-noted with LN
00:43:364 (43364|4) - ^
00:47:624 (47624|0) - ^
00:47:624 (47624|0,50819|5,50997|1) - ^ to avoid 3-noted. 2-noted already good for guitar + beat.
00:51:174 (51174|4) - ^ 4-noted with LN.
00:55:790 - add note to 4 for the cymbals.
01:01:470 - ^
01:06:795 (66795|5) - remove 4-noted ;w;
01:07:506 (67506|5) - ^
01:11:766 (71766|4) - ^

[Overall]
Cool mania GD of rumi, ferking ya deserve dori lol. Thank you for request and good luckman~ :)
Topic Starter
asd123iii

arcwinolivirus wrote:

From Arcwinolivirus' Speed Modding Queue!

Take note that I'm only focusing on note patterns, note placements and note consistency. Not the actual hitsound itself (Just in case if you already implemented hitsounds).

[General]
Audio: OK!
BG: OK!
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: OK!
AiMod:
• Alot of problem. Check the aimod. Fix those.
All fixed.
Just wait for rumi's mod change.

BTW, can you help me check 4K diff? :D
Rumia-

arcwinolivirus wrote:

From Arcwinolivirus' Speed Modding Queue!

Take note that I'm only focusing on note patterns, note placements and note consistency. Not the actual hitsound itself (Just in case if you already implemented hitsounds).

[General]
Audio: OK!
BG: OK!
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: OK!
AiMod:
• Alot of problem. Check the aimod. Fix those.


Column:
_ _ _ _ _ _ _
7K - |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

[7K NM]
SPOILER
00:04:995 (4995|4) - change to LN until 00:05:995 it actually feels empty here. The single note is very lonely like it doesnt represent an instrument o.o also changing the LN like you did at HD. a fixed my bad

00:25:967 (25967|1) - move to 00:26:145 since the long sound starts there.
and reduce length until 00:27:387 nope , the hold really starts here , the piano you were hearing starts at 00:26:145

00:25:967 - then add a note for the beat. If above applied. x

00:26:145 (26145|4,26500|6,26855|4) - move to 00:26:322 because it feels off not to focus on snare and beat. i personally follow piano here . because its easy to be heard

00:27:920 (27920|2) - move to 4 for more comfortable press and to be at center of the next two notes. added another hold on red line to make it symetry and follow beats

00:35:908 - add note since strong sound. added

01:01:470 - add another LN to 6 like 01:01:470 (61470|1) since its a strong LN sound. no for the purpose of hand balance , previous notes on right hand.

01:12:831 - add note for strong sound. feel like following the snare only

01:13:364 - ^ ^

01:14:074 - ^ ^

01:22:772 (82772|1,83127|1,83482|1,83837|1) - I suggest to remove as the previous notes with the same sounds and same strength are only 1-noted 01:21:707 (81707|3,82062|3,82417|3) its clearly the sound of the snare getting louder and intense . thats why i put 2 noted here , to enhance the feeling of player to enjoy the song

01:25:612 (85612|5) - move to 5 to be more comfortable and open 2-noted. fixed

[7K HD]
coool~
SPOILER
00:32:713 (32713|3) - move to 6 to avoid the stacking and not same pitch o.o the bass is repeating the same note

00:33:423 (33423|4,33778|5,34133|6) - move 1 column to the left. Same reason above. ^

00:34:310 - add note for guitar. added

00:35:109 (35109|5,35464|1) - remove? as the hithat is so low volume kinda inconsistent for HD :v not really inconsistent , the intense part is getting started so why not

00:46:204 (46204|6) - remove to avoid sudden 3-noted with LN without strong sound. the feeling of snare is always 2 notes , no matter how many longnotes in the line , it is not considered as snare

[7K MX]
SPOILER
00:07:195 (7195|1) - move to 3 for symetry with next and previous note , i prefer to keep it at 2
00:11:195 (11195|2) - move to 7 doesnt feel right
00:34:665 (34665|1,35020|1,35375|1,35730|1) - move to 3 to avoid the stacking of notes.
00:38:393 (38393|5) - remove to avoid 4-noted with LN
00:43:364 (43364|4) - ^
00:47:624 (47624|0) - ^
00:47:624 (47624|0,50819|5,50997|1) - ^ to avoid 3-noted. 2-noted already good for guitar + beat.
00:51:174 (51174|4) - ^ 4-noted with LN.
00:55:790 - add note to 4 for the cymbals. didnt feel like mapping the cymbals , long note section this looks a bit cleaner here , i purposely ignore the drums finisher here.
01:01:470 - ^ ^
01:06:795 (66795|5) - remove 4-noted ;w;
01:07:506 (67506|5) - ^
01:11:766 (71766|4) - ^PLEASE DONT CONSIDER A HOLD AS 4 NOTES!!!!im not removing it.
as i said my concept of noting a drum is always 3 notes for snare , 2 for bass , 1 for hihat , its still have 4~6 collumns left to focus on other instrument besides , it is not hard and playable. its not overmapping.its not like i add 5 notes for hihat <- this is real overmapping no changes on this diff~

[Overall]
Cool mania GD of rumi, ferking ya deserve dori lol. Thank you for request and good luckman~ :)
thanks for mod!
updated diff : http://puu.sh/8A2R6.rar
Topic Starter
asd123iii
Uploaded
Akasha-
Can I make 7K EZ? I love this song >w<
Topic Starter
asd123iii

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Can I make 7K EZ? I love this song >w<
Sorry, no plan for more diff :(
yoshilove
hi~ from queue :3
column : 1 2 3 4 5 6 7

4K
[4K EZ]
00:09:595 (9595|0) - LN end 00:11:195
00:11:395 (11395|3) - move to 00:11:195 end 00:17:795

[4K NM]
00:51:884 - add note to 1
00:52:949 - ^

[4K HD+]
00:24:192 - add note to 1
00:52:949 - add note to 4
00:55:435 (55435|0) - change LN? end 00:55:790
00:55:790 - add note to 3
00:58:630 (58630|0) - move to 2?
01:07:506 - add note to 2

7K
[Rumi's 7K NM]
00:06:595 (6595|5) - LN end 00:07:995
00:08:195 (8195|3) - move to 00:07:995 ~ end 00:08:795

00:08:795 (8795|2) - LN end 00:09:595
00:09:795 (9795|0) - move to 00:09:595 ~ end 00:10:595

00:30:227 (30227|1) - add finish?
00:47:269 (47269|5) - move to 5?

01:06:085 (66085|1,66795|3) - remove (difficult)
01:07:506 (67506|3,68216|1) - ^ (difficult)
01:06:263 (66263|2,66973|0) - ^
(Do not forget hit sound)

[Rumi's 7K HD]
00:06:595 (6595|0,6595|6) - LN end 00:07:995
00:08:195 (8195|5,8195|1) - move to 00:07:995 ~ end 00:08:795

00:28:275 - add note to 6?
01:18:334 - ^

[Rumi's 7K MX]
00:35:375 - add note to 7
neko
Rumia-

yoshilove wrote:

hi~ from queue :3
column : 1 2 3 4 5 6 7


7K
[Rumi's 7K NM]
00:06:595 (6595|5) - LN end 00:07:995
00:08:195 (8195|3) - move to 00:07:995 ~ end 00:08:795

00:08:795 (8795|2) - LN end 00:09:595
00:09:795 (9795|0) - move to 00:09:595 ~ end 00:10:595

00:30:227 (30227|1) - add finish?
00:47:269 (47269|5) - move to 5?

01:06:085 (66085|1,66795|3) - remove (difficult)
01:07:506 (67506|3,68216|1) - ^ (difficult)
01:06:263 (66263|2,66973|0) - ^
(Do not forget hit sound)

[Rumi's 7K HD]
00:06:595 (6595|0,6595|6) - LN end 00:07:995
00:08:195 (8195|5,8195|1) - move to 00:07:995 ~ end 00:08:795

00:28:275 - add note to 6?
01:18:334 - ^

[Rumi's 7K MX]
00:35:375 - add note to 7
neko
fixed alll great mod! arigatou!
update : http://puu.sh/8BVFF.rar
Topic Starter
asd123iii

yoshilove wrote:

hi~ from queue :3
column : 1 2 3 4 5 6 7

4K
[4K EZ]
00:09:595 (9595|0) - LN end 00:11:195
00:11:395 (11395|3) - move to 00:11:195 end 00:17:795
All fixed

[4K NM]
00:51:884 - add note to 1
00:52:949 - ^
Fixed, but change the pattern

[4K HD+]
00:24:192 - add note to 1
00:52:949 - add note to 4
00:55:435 (55435|0) - change LN? end 00:55:790 not fix, I don't want to use LN in this section.
00:55:790 - add note to 3
00:58:630 (58630|0) - move to 2?
01:07:506 - add note to 2
All fixed except that one
neko
Thank you :D

All of the diff changed and Uploaded
Deep Sea
Hello asd123iii
mod ready

[4K EZ]
00:22:062 - move note 2 column in 3
00:23:482 - move note 4 column in 1

[4K NM]
00:05:395 - move to 4 column
01:13:364 - Suggesting : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1595115

in my opinion, done perfectly beatmap
Good luck :)

p.s Rumi great GD
Topic Starter
asd123iii

[Shana Lesus] wrote:

Hello asd123iii
mod ready

[4K EZ]
00:22:062 - move note 2 column in 3 Fixed
00:23:482 - move note 4 column in 1 Fixed

[4K NM]
00:05:395 - move to 4 column Redo this part
01:13:364 - Suggesting : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1595115 Redo this part

in my opinion, done perfectly beatmap
Good luck :)

p.s Rumi great GD
Thanks
Spy
asd大詩人我來騙kud

Column : 1 2 3 4

[General]
Tag不一致,你自己看看哪幾個diff不一樣
Rumia改名了,重新tag他的新名字

[4K EZ]
00:06:595 (6595|1,7995|3,8795|2,9595|0) - 個人覺得你照前面一樣繼續那樣note擺放就很好了,換成LN感覺有點奇怪,這裡看一看應該不是抓人聲,我是覺得繼續抓人聲好些
01:00:760 (60760|2) - 保持跟原本一樣放4如何 ?
{
01:13:009 (73009|2) - 移到1
01:13:541 (73541|1,73719|2) - 這2個位置對調
主要考慮手感,還有其實你這樣擺好像沒有說符合音高
}
01:14:074 (74074|0) - 這個是人聲對吧 ?
01:14:606 (74606|1,74961|2,75316|3) - 這3個跟人聲放在一起會讓人搞混抓音,01:14:606 (74606|1) - 這個也不是一個LN就能解決的,至少要拉2根,不如試試01:14:606跟 01:14:784同一個位置都放note
01:14:961 (74961|2,75316|3) - 至於這2根,我也不推薦放在一起,一個是背景音,一個是Vocal
01:24:547 - 加一個note給Vocal吧 ?

[4K NM]
00:35:464 (35464|1) - 這個地方,有音嗎
01:14:961 (74961|0,75050|1,75139|2,75227|3,75316|0,75405|1,75494|2,75582|3) - 怎麼說呢,有一種能懂你在抓什麼,但又不推薦的感覺
問題也不大,畢竟抓音跟EZ好像差不多,只是難化了一些
很多1/4的音都不太明顯,但是我知道有那個音,只是不知道用在底難度上面打起來效果會如何了~

// 2014/05/15 Added

[4K HD+]
01:01:470 (61470|1) - 這裡都抓人聲了,01:03:245空著是不是有點違和 ?

[Rumi's 7K NM]
00:19:399 (19399|2,19399|4,19754|2,19754|4,20109|5,20109|1,20464|5,20464|1,20819|0,20819|6,21174|6,21174|0) - Sorry,I really don't know what are these ;w;
00:21:529 (21529|1,21884|3,22239|2,22594|1,22949|0) - Same ;w;
00:24:724 (24724|2) - You caught this,why not add again at 00:25:435 ?
00:32:890 (32890|3,32979|2,33068|1) - According to these,you should add a note here
01:24:369 (84369|0) - Feel strange about it :/

[Rumi's 7K HD]
00:32:269 (32269|6) - No sound,remove
01:16:648 (76648|5) - ↑

[Rumi's 7K MX]
00:29:162 (29162|0,29162|6,29340|6,29340|0) - Different pitches,notes in the same part are the same,suggest to change pattern :)


Maybe just about these,hope these are helpful :D
Good luck ~
Topic Starter
asd123iii

Spy wrote:

asd大詩人我來騙kud

Column : 1 2 3 4

[General]
Tag不一致,你自己看看哪幾個diff不一樣
Rumia改名了,重新tag他的新名字
Fixed

[4K EZ]
00:06:595 (6595|1,7995|3,8795|2,9595|0) - 個人覺得你照前面一樣繼續那樣note擺放就很好了,換成LN感覺有點奇怪,這裡看一看應該不是抓人聲,我是覺得繼續抓人聲好些Fixed
01:00:760 (60760|2) - 保持跟原本一樣放4如何 ?Fixed
{
01:13:009 (73009|2) - 移到1Fixed
01:13:541 (73541|1,73719|2) - 這2個位置對調Fixed
主要考慮手感,還有其實你這樣擺好像沒有說符合音高
}
01:14:074 (74074|0) - 這個是人聲對吧 ? 這幾個都是背景音,所以全部 not fix
01:14:606 (74606|1,74961|2,75316|3) - 這3個跟人聲放在一起會讓人搞混抓音,01:14:606 (74606|1) - 這個也不是一個LN就能解決的,至少要拉2根,不如試試01:14:606跟 01:14:784同一個位置都放note
01:14:961 (74961|2,75316|3) - 至於這2根,我也不推薦放在一起,一個是背景音,一個是Vocal

01:24:547 - 加一個note給Vocal吧 ?Fixed

[4K NM]
00:35:464 (35464|1) - 這個地方,有音嗎 有喔
01:14:961 (74961|0,75050|1,75139|2,75227|3,75316|0,75405|1,75494|2,75582|3) - 怎麼說呢,有一種能懂你在抓什麼,但又不推薦的感覺
問題也不大,畢竟抓音跟EZ好像差不多,只是難化了一些
很多1/4的音都不太明顯,但是我知道有那個音,只是不知道用在底難度上面打起來效果會如何了~
這裡我保留,有想到不錯的梗再改

剩下的記得提醒我補上~先這樣~加油asd神麻婆

// 2014/05/15 Added

[4K HD+]
01:01:470 (61470|1) - 這裡都抓人聲了,01:03:245空著是不是有點違和 ? Fixed
Thanks

Uploaded
Rumia-

Spy wrote:

[Rumi's 7K NM]
00:19:399 (19399|2,19399|4,19754|2,19754|4,20109|5,20109|1,20464|5,20464|1,20819|0,20819|6,21174|6,21174|0) - Sorry,I really don't know what are these ;w;
00:21:529 (21529|1,21884|3,22239|2,22594|1,22949|0) - Same ;w;
its the violin note since it is clearly to be heard and quite catchy
00:24:724 (24724|2) - You caught this,why not add again at 00:25:435 ? changing rhythm , didnt want to consistent 1/2 all wwwww
00:32:890 (32890|3,32979|2,33068|1) - According to these,you should add a note here add a note at where D:!
01:24:369 (84369|0) - Feel strange about it :/ ok re-do this part

[Rumi's 7K HD]
00:32:269 (32269|6) - No sound,remove its the guitar , you can hear it though
01:16:648 (76648|5) - ↑ removed

[Rumi's 7K MX]
00:29:162 (29162|0,29162|6,29340|6,29340|0) - Different pitches,notes in the same part are the same,suggest to change pattern :) re-arranged it to 2 and 6 :D


Maybe just about these,hope these are helpful :D
Good luck ~
thank you spypy <3
Spy

Rumia- wrote:

Spy wrote:

[Rumi's 7K NM]
00:32:890 (32890|3,32979|2,33068|1) - According to these,you should add a note here add a note at where D:!
No idea about pattern D; It's up to you !

thank you spypy <3
Good luck Rumimi <3
Topic Starter
asd123iii
Uploaded
Remillion Cross
hi asd123iii and Rumia-
mod reg via pm from Rumia

[4K EZ]
*orz i don't know where's the wrong in this diff, great pattern

[Rumi's 7K NM]
*01:05:198 (65198|2) - unnecessary notes, delete
*01:20:642 (80642|0) - perhaps you can move this to 01:20:464 - ?

[4K NM]
*00:00:195 - add a circle here
*00:38:571 (38571|3) - delete
*01:04:310 - add a circle in 4th column, the sound is bigger here

[Rumi's 7K HD]
*01:20:287 (80287|1) - move to 3rd column ?
*good, i don't see any odd here

[4K HD+]
*00:00:195 - add a circle here, maybe in 3rd column ?
*01:01:470 (61470|1) - this slider should end in 01:02:713 - ( see the other diff )

[Rumi's 7K MX]
*00:17:795 - um.. http://puu.sh/8NA3b.png
*00:41:943 (41943|4,43364|3) - what is this slider representing for ? i think the part of sound was same like 00:46:204 and 00:44:784
*01:25:612 (85612|0,85612|6) - this slider should end to 01:27:387 - ( see the other diff )

this map was too hard for me for mod it, because it's already great pattern all XD
the hitsound seems fine for me
well good luck~
Rumia-

Remillion Cross wrote:

hi asd123iii and Rumia-
mod reg via pm from Rumia



[Rumi's 7K NM]
*01:05:198 (65198|2) - unnecessary notes, delete , why is it unnecessary?
*01:20:642 (80642|0) - perhaps you can move this to 01:20:464 - ? nope dont look good for me


[Rumi's 7K HD]
*01:20:287 (80287|1) - move to 3rd column ? doesnt really make any changes...
*good, i don't see any odd here


[Rumi's 7K MX]
*00:17:795 - um.. http://puu.sh/8NA3b.png fixed this lol
*00:41:943 (41943|4,43364|3) - what is this slider representing for ? i think the part of sound was same like 00:46:204 and 00:44:784
no its the guitar
*01:25:612 (85612|0,85612|6) - this slider should end to 01:27:387 - ( see the other diff ) fixed

this map was too hard for me for mod it, because it's already great pattern all XD
the hitsound seems fine for me
well good luck~
fixed MX diff : http://puu.sh/8NSNE.osu
Topic Starter
asd123iii

Remillion Cross wrote:

hi asd123iii and Rumia-
mod reg via pm from Rumia

[4K EZ]
*orz i don't know where's the wrong in this diff, great pattern

[4K NM]
*00:00:195 - add a circle here Not fix
*00:38:571 (38571|3) - delete Not fix, this note follow the guitar.
*01:04:310 - add a circle in 4th column, the sound is bigger here Fixed


[4K HD+]
*00:00:195 - add a circle here, maybe in 3rd column ? Not fix
*01:01:470 (61470|1) - this slider should end in 01:02:713 - ( see the other diff ) Fixed

this map was too hard for me for mod it, because it's already great pattern all XD
the hitsound seems fine for me
well good luck~
Thank you~

All diff changed and Uploaded
Mizukashii
daym i was planning to help this

can i help?
Mizukashii
video ? :">
Topic Starter
asd123iii
What?
You said you would help me add video?, or mod?
Mizukashii
Video :)
Bruce
Hi asd~时间比较仓促只mod你的4K哦 :?
[4K EZ]
00:00:195 - 重复线了(绿线红线)把绿线删了

00:34:488 (34488|0,34843|1,35198|2,35553|3) - 我感觉是慢慢变低的

00:37:328 (37328|3,37683|2,38038|1,38393|0) - 我感觉是慢慢变高的

[4K NM]
实在是非人性图 建议取缔(

01:09:991 - 重音 Add a Note at 1

01:14:074 (74074|3) - 我觉得这个还是粘起来吧

[4K HD+]
00:25:967 (25967|3,26500|2) - 这两个条子的起始与结束我觉得我应该在00:26:677 -

00:52:417 - Add a Note

01:24:636 - Add a Note at 3

01:24:724 (84724|2) - Move to 1

根本没什么好mod的 太诗 :)
Topic Starter
asd123iii

Simple_Star wrote:

Hi asd~时间比较仓促只mod你的4K哦 :?
[4K EZ]
00:00:195 - 重复线了(绿线红线)把绿线删了 這個部份我是為了壓掉變速放的 我懂你意思了, Fixed

00:34:488 (34488|0,34843|1,35198|2,35553|3) - 我感觉是慢慢变低的 Fixed

00:37:328 (37328|3,37683|2,38038|1,38393|0) - 我感觉是慢慢变高的 Fixed

[4K NM]
实在是非人性图 建议取缔( 有EZ的話NM難一點也沒關係吧XD

01:09:991 - 重音 Add a Note at 1 Fixed

01:14:074 (74074|3) - 我觉得这个还是粘起来吧 Fixed

[4K HD+]
00:25:967 (25967|3,26500|2) - 这两个条子的起始与结束我觉得我应该在00:26:677 - not fix, 應該沒有錯

00:52:417 - Add a Note 這段改了一些

01:24:636 - Add a Note at 3 Fixed

01:24:724 (84724|2) - Move to 1 Fixed

根本没什么好mod的 太诗 :)
感謝~ :)

Edit : Fix Timing point
Topic Starter
asd123iii

Mizukashii wrote:

Video :)
I don't want to put a video.....
And I will put it by myself if I want.
[Shi-Ra]
Hello, some modding before bubble ^w^

Shi-Ra's Pattern Review:

(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 for 7K diffs)
Rumi's 7K HD
Inside :3
00:06:595 (6595|3) - I suggest you to turn this note into LN with beginning at 00:06:395 - it'll be well suitable with sound which goes there

00:09:595 (9595|3) - only one LN here? you used pair of LNs for previous same sounds, so you need to place here one more

00:24:281 (24281|0) - there's no suitable sound for this note, the drums goes there in another way, theck it with lower playback

00:39:369 (39369|4) - I recommend you to move this note to 1st column, it'll be more suitable position in this triplet

00:47:801 (47801|1,48156|1) - move to right by one column, it's more comfortabe position for these notes with distance in one column between them

01:07:861 (67861|3) - hm...maybe move this one to 6th column? it plays more comfortable with your patterns here and it's suitable with your next going transition here

Rumi's 7K MX
Inside :3
00:07:195 (7195|1) - I suggest you to move this LN to 2nd column, make some distance between LNs, you always place them together here, it'll be more exciting to play different LN roads

00:07:595 (7595|6) - if you've followed my previous suggestion, move this LN to 3rd column to perform here smooth LN transition in whole pattern, it's more comfortable and harder than current position

00:21:884 (21884|4) - move this one to 3rd column, it's more suitable here coz you leave it empty in next going pattern

00:27:565 (27565|2) - open this chord by moving this note to 3rd column too, you could connect your previous and next going patterns in this way here

00:39:281 (39281|2,39369|1) - I recommend you to move these notes to 1st and 3rd columns accordingly to make your pattern more balanced here

01:16:559 (76559|1) - move this one to 2nd column, make some difference here coz you have three notes in a row in the same column here for two tacts

Finally, you need to set kiai for this chart before going for rank~
Good luck :3/
Rumia-

[Shi-Ra] wrote:

Hello, some modding before bubble ^w^

Shi-Ra's Pattern Review:

(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 for 7K diffs)
Rumi's 7K HD
Inside :3
00:06:595 (6595|3) - I suggest you to turn this note into LN with beginning at 00:06:395 - it'll be well suitable with sound which goes there no , its the drum sound , just to put a normal note for the feeling of the beat

00:09:595 (9595|3) - only one LN here? you used pair of LNs for previous same sounds, so you need to place here one more suits the pattern as it goes to middle

00:24:281 (24281|0) - there's no suitable sound for this note, the drums goes there in another way, theck it with lower playback deleted

00:39:369 (39369|4) - I recommend you to move this note to 1st column, it'll be more suitable position in this triplet i think at 4 is already good enough , more hand balance and its on index finger , which easily to be press

00:47:801 (47801|1,48156|1) - move to right by one column, it's more comfortabe position for these notes with distance in one column between them uniform it with 00:47:446 (47446|1,47801|1,48156|1) -

01:07:861 (67861|3) - hm...maybe move this one to 6th column? it plays more comfortable with your patterns here and it's suitable with your next going transition here fixed

Rumi's 7K MX
Inside :3
00:07:195 (7195|1) - I suggest you to move this LN to 2nd column, make some distance between LNs, you always place them together here, it'll be more exciting to play different LN roads see the symetry pattern between 00:06:595 (6595|0,7195|1,7595|6,7795|5) - plz

00:07:595 (7595|6) - if you've followed my previous suggestion, move this LN to 3rd column to perform here smooth LN transition in whole pattern, it's more comfortable and harder than current position nope didnt follow

00:21:884 (21884|4) - move this one to 3rd column, it's more suitable here coz you leave it empty in next going pattern see 00:21:884 (21884|4,22062|5,22239|4,22594|4,22772|5,22949|4) -

00:27:565 (27565|2) - open this chord by moving this note to 3rd column too, you could connect your previous and next going patterns in this way here see this 00:27:565 (27565|1,27565|2,27920|1,27920|3,28275|4,28275|1) -

00:39:281 (39281|2,39369|1) - I recommend you to move these notes to 1st and 3rd columns accordingly to make your pattern more balanced here
dont like it
01:16:559 (76559|1) - move this one to 2nd column, make some difference here coz you have three notes in a row in the same column here for two tacts fixed

Finally, you need to set kiai for this chart before going for rank~ fixed~
Good luck :3/
Topic Starter
asd123iii
All of the map set kiai time and Uploaded
[Shi-Ra]
Fine then, all fixed! Bubbled! owo
Topic Starter
asd123iii

[Shi-Ra] wrote:

Fine then, all fixed! Bubbled! owo
Thanks :)
PROGUY
Hi there.

Hitsounds are too soft at the moment. Increase from 5% to 20%.
I'll check the rest later.
Topic Starter
asd123iii

PROGUY wrote:

Hi there.

Hitsounds are too soft at the moment. Increase from 5% to 20%.
I'll check the rest later.
I'll fix and upload after you check the whole map ;)

Fixed and Uploaded
imariL


I definitely forgot your mod request, sorry about this.
Already bubbed, maybe too late to mod. Anyway Good Luck!
Rumia-
bubble pop forever ┐(´д`)┌
Topic Starter
asd123iii

Rumia- wrote:

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