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Ryu* feat. Maki - Ponyo on the Cliff by the Sea

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Yes_old
525 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Yes_old
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, December 12, 2009 at 12:20:16 PM

Artist: Ryu* feat. Maki
Title: Ponyo on the Cliff by the Sea
Tags: Hayao Miyazaki
BPM: 144
Filesize: 7064kb
Play Time: 02:34
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.71 stars, 287 notes)
  2. Insane (5 stars, 454 notes)
  3. Normal (4.07 stars, 112 notes)
Download: Ryu* feat. Maki - Ponyo on the Cliff by the Sea
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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<3
Last edited by Yes_old , edited 30 times in total.
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
[Hard]
00:52:048 (8) - Finish?
01:29:980 () - If you're not going to stick other notes here, put a spinner from here until 1:31:230?

I really just posted to give you a star, though.
Yes_old
525 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Yes_old
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
GabrielRKF
992 posts
Joined September 2008
GabrielRKF
I don't mod WIP maps, but when you pend it, i'll definelly mod it.
But it's pretty fun until now.
You are every getting better and better Yes.
My star.
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
[Timing]
I think your Kiai is a little messy (1 ms off-beat?! :o), so...
Move first timing point to 00:01:653 for all difficulties
Then move the Kiai on beat.
Also, resnap all notes because AIMod is complaining.

Other stuff:

[Easy]
00:06:028 () - Note?

[Normal]
01:21:023 (1) - Mm, maybe delete this spinner and map using regular beats?
Yes_old
525 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Yes_old
(: Thank youu ~~
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
New "Detailed" modding style for help maps <3

You don't have to follow my post, remember there are not directions, but suggestions!

[File Checking...]

Video: No.
Storyboard: No.
Custom Skin: Yes.
Background: Yes.
Source: No. (Add some source.)
Tags: No. (Add some tags.)
File Size: 7,14MB/24,00MB

[Overall]

Timing: BPM: 144,01 - Offset: 1.653 (Remember to resnap all notes.)

[Difficulties]

[Easy]

Increase HP Drain by 1 or 2 ticks.

This difficulty is "Normal".

00:03:031 (1,2,3,1,2) - You have some notes before the first offset here, but if you use my offset you don't have this problem.
00:42:006 (4,5,6) - Adjust spacing.

[Normal]

This difficulty is "Hard".

00:03:031 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Same as "Easy."
02:18:093 (1) - Remove new combo.

[Hard]

This difficulty is "Insane".

00:03:031 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3) - Same as "Easy."
00:29:015 (12) - New combo.
01:12:048 (11) - You need a storyboarding warning due to BPM change.
01:19:014 (11) - New combo.
01:32:047 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:43:031 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - Sounds bad.
Kytoxid
osu! Alumni
1,369 posts
Joined April 2009
Kytoxid
[General]

Source? Tags?
You have 2 .osb files; please delete the redundant one (and possibly the other one too if you want).

[Easy]

Felt a little hard for an Easy.

00:58:073 (4,1,2,3) - I thought this might look a little better if the endpoint of 4 lined up with 1,2.

[Normal]

Definitely too hard for Normal.

00:31:085 (3,1) - I'd space this a bit more, even if it was obvious.
01:14:098 (1,2,3,4) - Could be a smoother curve; maybe move 2 inwards a bit and respace a little.
01:49:097 (1) - Too quiet, give it a little more volume.
01:54:014 (3) - Add whistle?
01:59:097 (1,3) - ^
02:11:064 (1) - Vertically align with 3?
02:35:028 - Timing section's a little pointless, but doesn't really matter.

[Hard]

I'd just call this Insane, and increase difficulty of each name by 1.

00:30:081 (5,1) - Slightly evil antijump.
00:38:031 (1) - A bit too quiet again.
00:51:064 (5,6,7) - Make these a nicer triangle?
01:02:089 (1) - 1 grid right for symmetry.
01:43:031 (1) - I recommend either putting new combos in the second bit of sliders, or making this section 1 combo.
01:49:097 (1) - Too quiet.
02:02:089 (4,1) - Ouch at the antijump.
02:33:010 (1,2,3) - Make these a straight line?

Pretty nice overall, starred.
Sure
4,219 posts
Joined February 2009
Sure
[Easy]
Rename to Normal
00:46:002 (6,7) - claps


[Normal]
Rename to Hard
01:22:037 (1) - move to left by 1/8 tick


[Hard]
Rename to Insane
02:06:064 (6) - new combo
02:18:031 (7) - ^
02:18:093 (1) - remove new combo
02:19:014 (1) - new combo


Nice map :D
yaya
osu! Alumni
1,164 posts
Joined November 2008
yaya
hard
00:31:442 (1) - ehh. too close to (5) . cheat me. :o

Normal
use offset 1653 .same as hard.

others really good . fun fun
Yes_old
525 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Yes_old
thanks osuplayer111, kytoxid, ykcarrot and osu_CN_yaya. i updated :)
Diasios
3,966 posts
Joined August 2008
Diasios
Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Starts Suggestions:

BPM = 140 || Offset = 1655 (resnap all notes)

[Normal]

It's ok

[Hard]

It's ok

[Insane]

00:26:002 (6) - New combo
00:28:052 (8) - ^
01:19:014 (11) - ^
01:56:064 (7) - ^
02:06:064 (6) - ^
02:24:014 (12) - ^

Starred~
James2250
osu! Alumni
4,059 posts
Joined July 2008
James2250
normal:
looks good

hard:
looks good

insane:
01:34:014 (1,2,1) - spacing?

nicely done map :)
*star*
Cyril Scarlet
osu! Alumni
3,877 posts
Joined May 2009
Cyril Scarlet
Po~nyo ponyuo ponyo sakan no ko ~
abalee
osu! Alumni
1,994 posts
Joined June 2008
abalee
no bad stuffs for playing found.
only starz. :)
DJPop
osu! Alumni
3,549 posts
Here since the beginning
DJPop
~Normal~
Fine.

~Hard~
00:21:065 (5) - new combo
00:28:052 (7) - ^
01:11:002 (4) - ^
01:21:023 (1) - start on red tick
02:06:064 (5) - new combo
02:08:031 (8) - ^
02:08:051 (1) - remove new combo

~Insane~
00:45:060 (7) or 00:45:081 (8) - new combo
00:58:031 (8) - new combo
01:06:064 (6) - ^
01:10:039 (2) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
01:14:035 (8) - new combo
01:18:052 (7) or 01:18:093 (10) - new combo
01:21:023 (1) - start on red tick
01:28:093 (7) or 01:29:014 (8) - new combo
01:33:072 (1,1,2,1,1,2,1) - D:
01:57:026 (8) - new combo
02:06:064 (6) - ^


+Star
Alace
osu! Alumni
3,088 posts
Joined August 2008
Alace
I got BPM 144.00 offset:1658
if you accept this timing,watch out those x2 bpm green kibes maybe you need reset some of them)

<Insane>
01:29:14 (8,9,10,11,12) - I suggest use jumps like 01:25:81 (1,1,1,1) (follow vocals)

Pretty nice mapset
Last edited by Alace , edited 1 time in total.
Shinxyn
osu! Alumni
1,179 posts
Joined June 2008
Shinxyn
Ponyo?

Normal-
nazi-
00:56:064 (7) - left a tick, that is all

Hard-
Fine

Insane-
01:45:081 (4) - why does this end on 1/6?
It's messy compared to Hard, I suggest you go through the map and clean up on some of the arrangements?
Like..
SPOILER
00:06:044 (3,4) - these could have been flips of (1,2)
00:21:085 (6,9) - I think this was on purpose, but was this to be aligned?
00:46:002 (10) - if you were ganna curve the ends, might as well curve the middle, too (left a tick)
00:52:027 (3,4) - left a tick to center from (1,2)
01:11:064 (7) - right a tick? (for equal distance)
01:12:006 (9) - left two ticks, so it barely touches 5 like 4-8 and 6-10
01:12:048 (11) - right a tick or two ticks (if you moved 7) for same reason as ^
01:26:023 (1) - right one, down 2
02:14:076 (2) - right a tick so its a flip of 1?
02:18:051 (9) - left a tick (curve a bit more)
02:24:024 (2) - down a tick (make the whole stream curve instead of just the end)
02:27:068 (3) - left+down
-runs-

The music/vocal dominates the hitsounds more, so I don't mind all those whistles and places where there could have been some hitsounds
Yes_old
525 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Yes_old
thanks!! i'll add these in when i get home n-n
Tanmak
896 posts
Joined August 2009
Tanmak
Ponyo Ponyo~

[Normal] and [Hard] are Fine.

[Insane]
01:45:812 (4,5) What is this? Extend slide note until blue tick.

Oh~ I can't find problem.
Beatmap is Great~
Starred~
:D
Kitty McWittles
141 posts
Joined September 2008
Kitty McWittles
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Vanmonky
986 posts
Joined June 2009
Vanmonky
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
gdeath
1,598 posts
Joined May 2009
gdeath
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Hi!

[General]
Source? Tags?

[Normal]
00:34:122 (1) - No new combo
00:34:979 (1) - ^
00:35:836 (1) - ^
00:36:693 (1) - ^
00:37:443 (1) - ^
00:44:943 (4) - Make parallel
00:52:229 (x) - Place note here
01:10:015 (1) - Make parallel

[Hard]
00:21:908 (2,3) - Spacing please
00:30:800 (4) - Allign with 3
00:34:122 (1) - No new combo
00:34:979 (1) - ^
00:35:836 (1) - ^
00:36:693 (1) - ^
00:37:443 (1) - ^
00:51:693 (1,2) - Spacing please
01:21:265 (1,1) - These 2 spinner make all player boring....
01:55:443 (2) - Allign with the end of slider (1)
01:55:550 (3,4) - Make it like in attachment (picture no.1)
02:05:193 (1) - Make parallel

[Insane]
00:34:150 (1) - No new combo
00:34:984 (1) - ^
00:35:817 (1) - ^
00:36:650 (1) - ^
00:37:483 (1) - ^

I Love this song! Star!

alvisto
881 posts
Joined April 2009
alvisto
TIMING is wrong imo.

BPM : 144
Offset : 0ms (weird huh lol) or 3322 ms , either one is the same.

Feel free to ask me to remod if you decided to use this timing.
Alace
osu! Alumni
3,088 posts
Joined August 2008
Alace
No one noticed lol
i made a mistake in my post
BPM is 144.00 not 140.00 lol,you guys are really fun (well i fixed my post now)

to YES this is the way to change timing
STEP1:+5ms to all timing sections
STEP2:resnap all notes by 1/4 divisor
STEP3:change BPM to 140.00
STEP4:resnap all notes by 1/4 divisor
STEP5: check all x2 or x0.5 timing sections (very important, if the timing section is wrong,sliders will mess up)
STEP6:AIMod for snapping
STEP7:play or auto play

because it is my mistake,so i fixed the whole thing for you
BPM:144.00
Offset:3324(1658)
I didn`t reset those X2 timing sections,because they are fine after changing the bpm and offset
take this

Download: 10776 Ryu feat Maki - Ponyo.rar
Yes_old
525 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Yes_old
okay n_n updated with new timing (thanks Alace!)
Vanmonky
986 posts
Joined June 2009
Vanmonky
Haha this is the first time my timing is almost almost correct! Hope I'll get better. Now for the mod as your request in my queue.

[General]
Don't place whistles randomly. That's not ponyo ponyo! Keep the clap sounds in pattern. It'll be ponyoer!

[Normal]
00:24:015 (3) - Add clap at the end.
00:25:082 (6) - Remove clap.
00:27:028 (2) - Add clap at the end.
00:29:057 (7) - Add clap.
00:32:028 (5) - Add whistle.
00:39:099 (1) - Too close to the spinner. It will be a bit hard for beginner player.
00:49:057 (6) - Add clap.
00:49:099 (1,2) - Add clap at the end.
01:04:015 (2,4) - Add clap.

[Hard]
Ponyo ponyo! Perfecto!

[Insane]
00:24:099 (1) - Remove clap.
00:29:036 (3,5) - Add clap.
00:31:086 (3) - Add whistle.
01:19:057 (6) - Add clap.
02:27:049 (1,2,3,5) - Add clap. (You should try this.)

---

One ponyo for you!
(It seem like 'ponyo' has so many sense)
anonymous_old
0 posts
Here since the beginning
anonymous_old
Normal
SPOILER

This is, in fact, a beatmap.

Hard
SPOILER

00:33:032 (1) : One grid up.


[size=150]
Make hitsounds a llouder.
[/size]

Insane
SPOILER

00:21:024 (3) : Two grids right.
00:21:086 (6) : One grid up.
01:12:049 (11) : Too fast, even for an insane.

alvisto
881 posts
Joined April 2009
alvisto
Now that timing is nice, I shall proceed with your PM mod request then.

NORMAL
Solid and nice diff.

HARD
Very good and solid diff. If you have time, I would suggest you map this break too 01:36:956.

INSANE
01:01:065 (1,2) - I would suggest moving these 2 somewhere else, coz when playing, it's very hard to see them (They are obscured by the hit combo), the jumps are fine though, don't change the spacing, just move it to somewhere else where it's more visible ?
01:33:032 (4,1) - Spacing between these 2 is different from these 2 01:34:036 (2,1) -> Kinda very hard to catch.
01:34:057 (1) - I know why you put new combo here, but it's very confusing here because it follows right after 01:34:036 (2), and people might press this 01:34:057 (1) immediately after this 01:34:015 (1). I suggest you ask more people to test play this part and see what you wanna do with it. xD
01:34:036 (2,1) - Jump between these 2 is different from jump between 01:34:015 (1,2) too, and since they are all 1/4 beats apart, it would be wise to equalize their jump spacing.
Besides all the jumps mentioned above, other jumps are fine, I like it.

Very good map and fun to map. Ponyo~ Ponyo~

Star.
Yes_old
525 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Yes_old
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Lokamp
2,530 posts
Joined January 2009
Lokamp
Normal
00:49:057 (6) - whistle and clap here
00:52:049 (3) - move this beat (and the next slider) a square down
00:57:007 (1) - clap here

Hard
00:40:061 (2) - move it a square up and a square left

Insane
00:42:049 (4) - end this slider with whistle
00:45:092 (3) - remove whistle
01:54:015 (4) - end this slider with whistle
01:57:059 (3) - remove whistle

a nice map from a nice film :3
Maybe add more claps, the rest was fine: star ^^
Mafiamaster
osu! Alumni
3,460 posts
Joined July 2008
Mafiamaster
IRC modded!

Bubbled!
Fuuko
486 posts
Joined June 2009
Fuuko
...Not even a single error...argh. ;-;
Star. :3
I am looking forward to play this once it get ranked.
orioncomet
osu! Alumni
2,684 posts
Joined May 2009
orioncomet
Sorry~ I'm really late for my star after I was playing <3
Yes_old
525 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Yes_old
thank you n_n
whymeman
osu! Alumni
3,432 posts
Joined November 2008
whymeman
The only thing that I see is an issue is the lack of a hitcircleoverlay.png. Without that, the hitcicle skin by itself (mixed with other skins) would look really wacky. Sorry, but once you have that in, i'll bubble.

Edit: Alright, looking good. Bubbled back.
Yes_old
525 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Yes_old
Thank you!

Fixed~!
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
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Andrea
Ranked.
Yes_old
525 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Yes_old
thank you so much osuplayer <3333
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