Various Artists - TANO*C Hardcore Syndrome Compilation

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Teru21
awkay.. via PM D: timing check ;; and here is what I got, Idk between some song it got delayed 2 or 4 ms ._. some are faster. just check it out, you can delete some if you feel its not really right XD



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regenz
update thanks!
CrazyrabbitKGE
Looks amazing for me :) Must have taken a very long time; I admire you...

These are some trivial suggestions, primarily regarding aesthetics:

01:32:184 (1,2,3,4) - doesn't look very symmetrical.
01:51:684 (4) - move it down a bit. it would look better.
03:02:017 (1) - just looks a tiny bit awkward!
05:11:436 (6,7,8) - those guys are on the wrong spots. Try moving them down so the curve would be more consistent.
05:13:602 (8) - it should go up a bit. You might have to change every circle's location of that stream but it won't take very long, you know.
06:05:018 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I think this should be smoother.
07:14:999 (4) - doesn't look very right for me...
08:21:332 (2) - should it really be that far away?
08:24:999 (1,2,3) - move these two sliders and one circle so they would look balanced.
09:52:499 (4) - the circle looks very wrong imo; try moving it a bit towards the upper left corner considering 1,2,3's locations.
12:50:331 (1) - it doesn't look like the right place for a stream.
14:09:504 (2,4) - the angles of the sliders could be different.

That's all! Good luck with your big project! :D
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regenz
thanks alot for moding ,I've check your mod already.some is my intention and some is non perfect ( which just rush to complete )

Still in Wip current, I 've no idea to mapping the last part of track 14

some section is not map by mine ( mine are 10 tracks the rest 4 traks is other co-mapper )

I'll check again when map complete ( need to re-adjust note alot. )
Natsuki Nanaka

Play test :P
Topic Starter
regenz
BetaTest!
Fumika

P A N

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xxdeathx
hi, m4m from your queue

Test play (didn't need no-fail but almost died at the streams a few times):

It looks like you have a lot of experience in mapping because this beatmap played very well! It's better than most BATs' maps (no offense, BAT's, this one was just great)

I guess I'll do part B: Tracks 6-10

Track 6
  1. 05:30:185 (2) - since you were just mapping vocals on 1/8 and 1/4 ticks on 05:27:601 (2,3) you should stay consistent and do the same here. shorten slider to 05:30:601
  2. 05:37:351 - 05:38:018 - 05:38:351 - 05:38:684 - put circles here, i can hear stuff on these ticks. also triples are much better than double circles.
  3. 05:40:101 put circle here
  4. 05:40:684 ^ significant beat here although you might want to make the whole thing into a stream
  5. 05:48:018 - strong drum here and 05:48:684 , don't ignore it
  6. 05:50:684 - 05:51:351^
  7. 05:53:351 - 05:54:017 ^
  8. 05:54:684 ^
  9. 05:56:017 ^
  10. 05:57:351 ^ also undermapped
  11. 06:02:684 ^
  12. 06:11:685 (1,3) - the slider ends are very strong so i wouldn't use repeating sliders because i'd rather have a new keypress on them. also stay consistent with four 1/2 sliders like the other parts 06:14:351 (1,2,3,4)
  13. 06:23:685 (1,2) - blanket?


Track 7
  1. 06:32:023 (2,5) - blanket
  2. 06:44:928 (1,2,3) - i'd blanket these


Track 8
  1. 07:57:499 (3,5) - flip them horizontally separately for better flow
  2. 08:22:499 - 08:22:999 don't ignore these beats
  3. 08:28:332 - 08:28:499 ^
  4. 08:36:832 (6) - move northeast a bit for better flow with previous object
  5. 08:39:499 (4,1) - blanket better
  6. 08:48:916 (8) - curve slider less so it looks more similar to previous sliders


Track 9
  1. 09:32:666 (1) - shorten by one tick because the beat at 09:32:999 is very strong and you want to map a keypress there
  2. 09:43:166 (4,5,6) - spacing is too close, looks like 1/4 beats
  3. 09:53:749 (8,10,12,14) - overmapped. turn playback speed to 25%, don't hear anything on these ticks
  4. 10:02:666 (1,2,3,4) - not consistent with the sections around it, have the sliders start on white ticks
  5. 10:05:166 (2,3,4,5) - ^


Track 10
  1. 10:30:496 (1,2) - not perfectly lined up
  2. 10:40:663 (5,1) - improve blanket
  3. 10:49:663 - put something on this tick
  4. 10:54:996 ^
  5. 11:00:329 ^ white ticks are part of the main beat so you don't want to ignore it
  6. 11:01:663 - 11:02:996 - 11:04:329 - 11:05:663 ^


Good luck!
Natsuki Nanaka

xxdeathx wrote:

Track 10
  1. 10:30:496 (1,2) - not perfectly lined up ◄ Fixed
  2. 10:40:663 (5,1) - improve blanket ◄ Fixed

  3. 10:49:663 - put something on this tick
  4. 10:54:996 ^
  5. 11:00:329 ^ white ticks are part of the main beat so you don't want to ignore it
  6. 11:01:663 - 11:02:996 - 11:04:329 - 11:05:663 ^
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88,100,661329,2,0,L|88:192,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,364,661746,2,0,P|32:336|16:300,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,264,661996,2,0,L|148:264,1,90,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,344,662329,6,0,B|292:344|292:344|264:344|252:324,1,135,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,300,662663,2,0,L|336:300,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,168,663079,2,0,L|384:168,1,45,2|0,2:1|2:0,0:0:0:0:
428,68,663329,2,0,L|292:68,1,135,2|0,2:1|2:0,0:0:0:0:
248,100,663663,6,0,B|156:100|156:100|112:132,1,135,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,148,663996,2,0,L|136:240,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,348,664413,2,0,L|256:256,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,232,664663,1,10,0:0:0:0:
352,128,664829,1,2,0:0:0:0:
488,172,664996,6,0,P|452:240|472:316,1,135,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,316,665329,2,0,L|384:296,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,144,665746,1,2,0:0:0:0:
284,156,665829,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,252,665996,1,10,0:0:0:0:
140,244,666079,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,224,666163,1,2,0:0:0:0:
92,192,666246,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,156,666329,6,0,B|88:64|88:64|88:40|120:40,1,135,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,40,666663,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,136,666829,1,2,0:0:0:0:
340,72,667079,2,0,P|368:112|408:120,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,132,667329,1,10,0:0:0:0:
464,160,667413,1,0,0:0:0:0:
472,196,667496,1,2,0:0:0:0:
464,232,667579,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,256,667663,5,2,0:0:0:0:
344,208,667829,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,308,667996,2,0,L|188:348,2,45
104,192,668329,2,0,L|80:148,2,45,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,188,668579,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,184,668663,1,4,0:2:0:0:
160,184,668998,5,4,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
regenz

xxdeathx wrote:

hi, m4m from your queue

Test play (didn't need no-fail but almost died at the streams a few times):

It looks like you have a lot of experience in mapping because this beatmap played very well! It's better than most BATs' maps (no offense, BAT's, this one was just great) <<< ThankYou! but I'm still worry, about my outdated mapping style compare to the present beatmap.

I guess I'll do part B: Tracks 6-10

Track 6
  1. 05:30:185 (2) - since you were just mapping vocals on 1/8 and 1/4 ticks on 05:27:601 (2,3) you should stay consistent and do the same here. shorten slider to 05:30:601 < use 1/8 instead of 1/4 fix more that this point whole this section is better at match vocal completely.
  2. 05:37:351 - 05:38:018 - 05:38:351 - 05:38:684 - put circles here, i can hear stuff on these ticks. also triples are much better than double circles.
    < the volume of your suggest place is too quite and I think it's don't match when listen compare to 2 circles
  3. 05:40:101 put circle here < same as above
  4. 05:40:684 ^ significant beat here although you might want to make the whole thing into a stream < I think follow the loop sampler is better
  5. 05:48:018 - strong drum here and 05:48:684 , don't ignore it < for this section I've intention to ignore the 1 beat loops here until the next vocal section start and I'll put note on that 1/1 loop.
  6. 05:50:684 - 05:51:351^
  7. 05:53:351 - 05:54:017 ^
  8. 05:54:684 ^
  9. 05:56:017 ^
  10. 05:57:351 ^ also undermapped
  11. 06:02:684 ^ < follow the 16 beats loop here is more good.
  12. 06:11:685 (1,3) - the slider ends are very strong so i wouldn't use repeating sliders because i'd rather have a new keypress on them. also stay consistent with four 1/2 sliders like the other parts 06:14:351 (1,2,3,4) < four sliders I 've use alot already so try slider + 2 circles 2x
  13. 06:23:685 (1,2) - blanket?


Track 7

  • All done
  1. 06:32:023 (2,5) - blanket
  2. 06:44:928 (1,2,3) - i'd blanket these


Track 8
  1. 07:57:499 (3,5) - flip them horizontally separately for better flow < Swap instead of flip
  2. 08:22:499 - 08:22:999 don't ignore these beats < it weird if you listen at 25 percent playback it should add but I listen at 75 percent playback and i think it's shouldn't there. there 're at least 2 sound loop here and i think focus both at same time is not good sorry.
  3. 08:28:332 - 08:28:499 ^[/color]
  4. 08:36:832 (6) - move northeast a bit for better flow with previous object < It should be good now.
  5. 08:39:499 (4,1) - blanket better < Done
  6. 08:48:916 (8) - curve slider less so it looks more similar to previous sliders
< Done

Track 9 and 10 is not my part.

Good luck!
Thanksalot , Don't forgot to PM me when you want to use my ticket. :)
mercury2004
Updated PG-13 Track
http://puu.sh/a9p8t.osu
Topic Starter
regenz
Kasen soo good
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1813488
Kasen
IRC Mod
Topic Starter
regenz
chatlog form above

19:04 regenz: hey
19:04 regenz: Can you play my map now
19:04 Kasen: yo
19:04 Kasen: okay
19:04 *regenz is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/406220 Various Artists - TANO*C Hardcore Syndrome Compilation]
19:04 regenz: redownload
19:04 regenz: prepare warmup + toilet
19:05 regenz: if you ready call me again
19:05 Kasen: ok lol
19:05 regenz: don't hesitate to pause wheen you tired.
19:07 Kasen: i dont need to warm up so im rdy
19:07 regenz: wow so fierce
19:07 Kasen: nice bg =O
19:08 regenz: thanks
19:24 Kasen: orz
19:24 regenz: wow monster Lv
19:24 regenz: Suggestion plz
19:25 regenz: mouse ?
19:25 regenz: or pen
19:25 Kasen: i used tablet
19:25 regenz: ok
19:25 Kasen: there are some part you need to fix spaces i think
19:26 Kasen: let me check
19:26 regenz: yes plz
19:31 regenz: careful your pc 'll freeze
19:31 Kasen: dont worry, is fine =P
19:31 regenz: ok
19:36 Kasen: 11:50:498 (2) - too near next one
19:37 regenz: you mean you want 3 , 4 is far form 2 more right?
19:37 Kasen: just a bit
19:41 regenz: http://puu.sh/a9pV1/474020f829.jpg
19:41 regenz: enough?
19:41 Kasen: yeah
19:41 regenz: ok
19:41 regenz: next plz
19:44 Kasen: 05:37:185 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - this part is weird
19:45 regenz: how ? you should tell me rhythm or placement
19:45 regenz: just "weird" i don't know how to fix man
19:45 Kasen: haha
19:46 Kasen: it doesnt feel is following the rhithm
19:48 regenz: yes
19:48 regenz: it has 2 or 3 rhythm are overlapping
19:49 regenz: 05:37:351 here is one tick beat every white
19:50 regenz: 05:39:851 (1) - it has a stream after this one but very very quite
19:50 Kasen: thats fine
19:52 Kasen: anyway the other things i saw meanwhile played are fine was just me
19:52 regenz: the things that i'm worry
19:52 regenz: is here
19:53 regenz: 10:20:996 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) -
19:53 regenz: but not my part
19:53 regenz: lol
19:53 Kasen: well... thats hard but there no problem
19:54 Kasen: its ok
19:55 regenz: ok
19:55 regenz: plz post just IRC mod
19:55 regenz: i'll post chat log
19:55 regenz: posting.php?mode=reply&f=10&t=202570
19:55 Kasen: how? o.o
19:56 regenz: just type IRC mod
19:56 regenz: you mean chatlog
19:56 regenz: ?
19:56 regenz: type /save
CelsiusLK
ดาวเหลือ เลยมายิง
Topic Starter
regenz

CelsiusLK wrote:

ดาวเหลือ เลยมายิง
ขอบคุณฮะ
Hinsvar
Yo; modding here!

*Bolded = Unrankable or very, very strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.

>General
  1. Why are there two .osb files in the folder?


>Marathon
  1. 00:02:685 - 00:05:185 - Why not add whistles here too? It feels awkward to hear whistles late into the song. Might as well add some here.
  2. 00:34:102 - Why not add a note here so you can make a stream at 00:34:019 - 00:34:352? The instrument also sounds pretty strong here, and it feels weird to leave that unmapped.
  3. 00:43:519 (3,4,5,1) - Don't you think these notes are too close to each other? I personally would make them have a bigger distance/spacing from each other.
  4. 01:12:518 (2) - Make this curved like 01:12:184 (1)? You know, something like this? It'll make a better flow.
  5. 01:26:851 (1) - Move to (204,32) for a better transition to 01:27:184 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13)?
  6. 01:38:851 (1,2,3,4) - Try this? Plays better, IMO.
  7. 02:18:183 (5) - Why don't you make it more curved like 02:17:350 (1,4) for shape consistency?
  8. 02:17:350 (1,4) - Make them curved the same so they'll look neater?
  9. 02:34:683 (1,4) - ^
  10. 03:01:183 - Try begin the 1/4 stream from here if possible, since the music sounds pretty loud already starting from this point?
  11. 03:49:266 - Add a circle since the instrument is pretty noticeable here?
  12. 04:03:686 (1,2,3) - Why are they spaced the same visually while the rhythm suggests otherwise? Make the spacing at (1,2) smaller than (2,3) so this will be readable?
  13. 04:26:519 (1,2,3) - Don't you think these notes are too close to each other?
  14. 04:29:686 (1,2,1,2) - Any reason why the spacing looks random?
  15. 04:40:852 (5,1) - Why don't you make the spacing larger to emphasize the instrument at 04:41:019?
  16. 04:56:686 (5,2) - (5)'s tail overlaps (2)'s tail partially... Is this okay? I feel that this makes them look weird.
  17. 04:59:686 (1) - Rotate ~25 degrees anti-clockwise and move to (372,204) for a better flow from 04:59:519 (7)?
  18. 05:02:352 (1) - Move one grid down so it'll be in line with 05:02:519 (2,3,4)? Looks neater, you know.
  19. 05:11:019 (1) - I don't think this NC is needed... Why are you using this?
  20. 05:13:686 (1) - ^ (Applies to similar cases.)
  21. 05:37:185 (1,2) - Move to (484,112) so the flow to 05:37:518 (3) will be nicer and thus this part will be more comfortable to play?
  22. 06:27:185 (4) - Make this curved? Similar to 01:12:518 (2), btw.
  23. 07:28:999 (1) - Make it curved like this so this part will be, again, more comfortable to play? Adjust 07:29:333 (2,3) too if you did this.
  24. 08:08:499 (3,4) - Don't you think it'll flow better and be more fun if you swapped (3) and (4)'s place in the timeline?
  25. 08:25:499 (3) - Move to (304,308)? 08:24:999 (1,2,3) will look symmetrical, and thus neater this way.
  26. 09:43:666 (2) - NC to indicate that this is the beginning of a new stanza?
  27. 10:20:163 (2,3,4) - Why you don't just make the spacing consistent? That way, this part would be better to play.
  28. 10:49:996 (5,6,7,8,1) - I believe this stream can be made tidier. Right now, it looks a bit too wavy.
  29. 11:19:997 (3) - Rotate 15 degrees anti-clockwise for a better flow?
  30. 12:03:164 (4,5) - Same as 10:20:163 (2,3,4).
  31. 12:43:080 (3) - Consider using the same curving as 12:42:664 (2) for a nicer flow.
  32. 13:33:337 - (best timestamp ever hail our beloved goddesses) Add a note? I feel that it's very awkward to leave this empty and players might hit 13:33:421 (3) earlier because of this emptiness.
  33. 14:30:504 (2) - Make it look like this for a smoother play?
  34. 15:13:004 (1) - Move to (204,80) so the stream here will be curved better?
  35. 16:43:838 (1) - Make this curved similarly to 16:43:505 (6)?


Well that's it.

Good luck on the way 8-)
Topic Starter
regenz

Hinsvar wrote:

Yo; modding here!

*Bolded = Unrankable or very, very strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.

>General
  1. Why are there two .osb files in the folder?


>Marathon
  1. 00:02:685 - 00:05:185 - Why not add whistles here too? It feels awkward to hear whistles late into the song. Might as well add some here.
    I prefer to use the whiistle when new sampler start at 00:05:352
  2. 00:34:102 - Why not add a note here so you can make a stream at 00:34:019 - 00:34:352? The instrument also sounds pretty strong here, and it feels weird to leave that unmapped. < there are also here 00:34:935 and alot instead of stream all sometimes It's better to undermap for this kind of songs
  3. 00:43:519 (3,4,5,1) - Don't you think these notes are too close to each other? I personally would make them have a bigger distance/spacing from each other. < It's just first track in the map yeah I need players too warmup
  4. 01:12:518 (2) - Make this curved like 01:12:184 (1)? You know, something like this? It'll make a better flow.
  5. 01:26:851 (1) - Move to (204,32) for a better transition to 01:27:184 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13)? < Bend the tail of slider
  6. 01:38:851 (1,2,3,4) - Try this? Plays better, IMO.
  7. 02:18:183 (5) - Why don't you make it more curved like 02:17:350 (1,4) for shape consistency?
  8. 02:17:350 (1,4) - Make them curved the same so they'll look neater?
  9. 02:34:683 (1,4) - ^

    ---------------- PAN
  10. 03:01:183 - Try begin the 1/4 stream from here if possible, since the music sounds pretty loud already starting from this point?
  11. 03:49:266 - Add a circle since the instrument is pretty noticeable here?

    ----------------
  12. 04:03:686 (1,2,3) - Why are they spaced the same visually while the rhythm suggests otherwise? Make the spacing at (1,2) smaller than (2,3) so this will be readable?
  13. 04:26:519 (1,2,3) - Don't you think these notes are too close to each other?
  14. 04:29:686 (1,2,1,2) - Any reason why the spacing looks random?
  15. 04:40:852 (5,1) - Why don't you make the spacing larger to emphasize the instrument at 04:41:019?
  16. 04:56:686 (5,2) - (5)'s tail overlaps (2)'s tail partially... Is this okay? I feel that this makes them look weird.
  17. 04:59:686 (1) - Rotate ~25 degrees anti-clockwise and move to (372,204) for a better flow from 04:59:519 (7)?
  18. 05:02:352 (1) - Move one grid down so it'll be in line with 05:02:519 (2,3,4)? Looks neater, you know.
  19. 05:11:019 (1) - I don't think this NC is needed... Why are you using this? < just 4 beats NC
  20. 05:13:686 (1) - ^ (Applies to similar cases.) < it's too long for 16 -17 notes and i think it's help bad stream player to gain life also.

    ---------------------- I'll continue Later ------------------------

  21. 05:37:185 (1,2) - Move to (484,112) so the flow to 05:37:518 (3) will be nicer and thus this part will be more comfortable to play?
  22. 06:27:185 (4) - Make this curved? Similar to 01:12:518 (2), btw.
  23. 07:28:999 (1) - Make it curved like this so this part will be, again, more comfortable to play? Adjust 07:29:333 (2,3) too if you did this. < current is good for me no need to do more
  24. 08:08:499 (3,4) - Don't you think it'll flow better and be more fun if you swapped (3) and (4)'s place in the timeline?
  25. 08:25:499 (3) - Move to (304,308)? 08:24:999 (1,2,3) will look symmetrical, and thus neater this way.

    ---- mercury
  26. 09:43:666 (2) - NC to indicate that this is the beginning of a new stanza?

    ---------- 7Ka
  27. 10:20:163 (2,3,4) - Why you don't just make the spacing consistent? That way, this part would be better to play.
  28. 10:49:996 (5,6,7,8,1) - I believe this stream can be made tidier. Right now, it looks a bit too wavy.

    ------------
  29. 11:19:997 (3) - Rotate 15 degrees anti-clockwise for a better flow?
  30. 12:03:164 (4,5) - Same as 10:20:163 (2,3,4).

    ---------- 7Ka2
  31. 12:43:080 (3) - Consider using the same curving as 12:42:664 (2) for a nicer flow.

    -------------
  32. 13:33:337 - (best timestamp ever hail our beloved goddesses) Add a note? I feel that it's very awkward to leave this empty and players might hit 13:33:421 (3) earlier because of this emptiness. < After 6 Player test play this No one hit it early and this rhythm is easy catch
  33. 14:30:504 (2) - Make it look like this for a smoother play?
  34. 15:13:004 (1) - Move to (204,80) so the stream here will be curved better?
  35. 16:43:838 (1) - Make this curved similarly to 16:43:505 (6)?


Well that's it.

Good luck on the way 8-)
Thanks ( NO comment = Fix )
P A N

Hinsvar wrote:

Yo; modding here!

>Marathon
  1. 03:01:183 - Try begin the 1/4 stream from here if possible, since the music sounds pretty loud already starting from this point? it more comfortable to play if I keep placing four set of double to make the rhythm same as the previous one.
  2. 03:49:266 - Add a circle since the instrument is pretty noticeable here? it's weird imo to play 5 streams before the long one


Well that's it.

Good luck on the way 8-)
thanks for modding :3
Natsuki Nanaka

Hinsvar wrote:



  • ---------- 7Ka

  1. 10:20:163 (2,3,4) - Why you don't just make the spacing consistent? That way, this part would be better to play.
  2. 10:49:996 (5,6,7,8,1) - I believe this stream can be made tidier. Right now, it looks a bit too wavy.


    ---------- 7Ka2
  3. 12:43:080 (3) - Consider using the same curving as 12:42:664 (2) for a nicer flow.
Fix all!
Thanks :3


244,156,620496,1,2,2:0:0:0:

140,168,649996,1,10,0:0:0:0:
172,152,650079,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,128,650163,1,2,0:0:0:0:
220,100,650246,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,356,763081,2,0,P|224:352|257:323,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
New combo as 12:32:331(5) -
mercury2004
no fix in my part, nc to clarify antijump, not stanza.
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