23:27 Irreversible: here now!
23:27 Sulker: hmm
23:27 *Sulker is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/405003 yanaginagi - Tokohana (TV Size) [Sulkie's Normal]]
23:27 Irreversible: ding
23:27 Sulker: and welcome back and thanks again.
23:27 Irreversible: thanks and yw :b
23:30 Sulker: Whoa...Quick d/c lol
23:33 Irreversible: and this is your first normal?
23:34 Sulker: Mhm
23:35 Irreversible: hm, pretty nice :B
23:35 Irreversible: about the hitsounds; they are barely audible
23:36 Sulker: Yeah...
23:36 Sulker: I am not good with hitsounds sadly T.T
23:36 Irreversible: 3just make them louder
23:36 Irreversible: xD
23:36 Sulker: and it was bad before though...
23:36 Irreversible: well, some comments
23:36 Sulker: Flow was hooooorrrible
23:36 Irreversible: 00:29:343 (3,4) - be careful with stuff like this
23:36 Irreversible: uhm..
23:36 Irreversible: let me explain once with paint
23:37 Sulker: mhm?
23:37 Irreversible:
http://puu.sh/8i4Ro/8ab5dd3697.jpg23:37 Irreversible: look at this
23:37 Irreversible: it's how i think, and how i think a normal can be the most decent so, feel free to deny after all
23:37 Irreversible: but as you can see, DS might be true, yet it seems like it's not because the sliders are so close together
23:38 Irreversible:
http://puu.sh/8i4VJ/8b8633eed8.jpg for next time, you'd better go for something like this, so you can avoid stuff like that
23:39 Irreversible: 00:35:379 (3,4) - same here, you can see how slider end 4 is so close to 3? it just doesn't look correct to me, i like avoid stuff like this
23:40 Sulker: mhm. kk
23:41 Sulker: I may try to make a circle with the sliders then
23:41 Irreversible: 00:38:929 (1) - and you'd better go have a look at other maps so you can get ideas for nice sliders
23:41 Sulker: LOL
23:41 Sulker: Another player said the same too
23:41 Sulker: One said it wasnt creative the first time with a long slider
23:41 Sulker: So I used an S
23:42 Sulker: S shaped slider*
23:42 Irreversible:
http://puu.sh/8i5eO/94537b8b41.jpg just be creative with angles and curves haha
23:42 Sulker: Another said that might be a little dangerous, so I went with a W
23:42 Irreversible: 00:55:616 (1,2,3,4,5) - and this part, well i think it's rather bad
23:43 Sulker: mhm kk
23:43 Sulker: yeah....
23:43 Sulker: I am trying to find a good idea...but it not coming to me..
23:43 Irreversible: hm.. let me try helping you then
23:48 Irreversible: the part would look like this then
23:48 Irreversible:
http://puu.sh/8i5Kt/afa171e719.jpg23:49 Irreversible: 00:53:485 - slider start 00:55:616 - end
23:49 Irreversible: 00:55:971 - circle
23:49 Irreversible: 00:56:326 - slider start 00:58:456 - end
23:49 Irreversible: 00:58:811 - circle
23:49 Irreversible: 00:59:166 - slider start
23:49 Irreversible: 01:01:296 - end
23:49 Irreversible: 01:01:651 - circle
23:49 Irreversible: 01:02:006 - spinner start 01:03:426 - end
23:50 Irreversible: and for the long sliders you could go for slider art again; 01:03:426 - lolol
23:50 Irreversible: oh
23:50 Irreversible:
http://puu.sh/8i5PP/8e0a185ea4.jpg23:51 Irreversible: (with 0.75 X slider speed !)
23:51 Irreversible: 01:11:947 (7) - this doesn't go so good with the flow, i'd go with a curve (5 6 7 and 8 would build one then)
23:51 Irreversible: 01:14:787 (4) - and avoid the overlap
00:04 Sulker: okay fixed the issues with overlapping, flow as well as those sliders
00:05 Sulker: You would have also ask me to fix this right 00:19:403 (1,2) -
00:14 Irreversible: yes
00:14 Irreversible: although they aren't that bad