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YELL - Kanojo ga Flag o Tateru Wake (TV Size)

posted 2014-04-16T10:12:07+00:00

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YoshinoSakura

Joined January 2011

Topic Starter

YoshinoSakura 2014-04-23T01:50:14+00:00

KillerGecko wrote:
From your M4M Queue! :3

Normal:
SPOILER
00:01:028 (1): So the easy and hard difficulty both start at 00:01:573, which start on a significant note of the song. For a normal difficult, I think it should follow the same trend as the hard and easy difficulty and have the first note start on 00:01:573. The slider at the beginning feels strange and doesn't add much here.ok
00:14:482 : Adding a hit sound between the hit circle and slider here feels intuitive here because the sound has a very audible triplet here. Adding the extra note helps the flow IMO. nope
00:30:664 (1): Adding a finish sound to the beginning of this slider sounds good.no finish in the music
01:24:300 (3): So you currently have the finish hit sound placed on the 1 slider next to this slider, but the vocal peaks at the end of the 3 slider. Perhaps consider moving the hitsound from the 1 slider on the right to the end of the 3 slider on the left?fixed

[CSGA]Ar3sgice

Joined July 2011

[CSGA]Ar3sgice 2014-05-01T13:37:22+00:00

insane
00:08:664 (6) - 这个是不是放错地方了.. x:467 y:179怎么样
00:36:300 (3) - 这个再加个clap https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1563484
00:58:300 (1) - 这个没包好, 下面比较细你看看是不是
01:29:937 (4) - 居然不放对称233
感觉kiai段的那些o-o o-o o的梗有些破坏节奏 yf的难度这一点做的就好些。不过跳放的挺好。

yf
00:47:209 (3) - add clap
00:59:755 (1) - 往左上移到差不多和2-3一样的距离
01:07:391 (2) - 用花式滑条啊不用可惜
01:13:573 (6) - 滑条尾 add clap
01:19:028 (2) - 滑条尾 add clap
01:25:209 (4) - clap
01:28:846 (1) - fin
01:29:573 (3) - ^
01:31:755 (1,3) - ^
01:38:119 (3) - 换成fin吧

truth revealer

Joined July 2013

truth revealer 2014-05-05T16:32:33+00:00

Hi.... Mod from me :

[Tags]
Add "Oraretara" to Tags.
[Normal]
00:15:937 -> How about, change the slider with circle (at position, X:344 Y:116) at 00:16:119 with finish hitsound.
00:20:119 -> Add Circle (at position, X:208 Y:112) with normal hitsound.
00:41:391 -> Add Circle (at position, X:120 Y:324) with normal hitsound.
00:41:755 -> Add Circle (at position, X:192 Y:268) with clap hitsound.
00:41:937 -> Add Circle (at position, X:236 Y:288) with clap hitsound.
01:07:755 -> How about, change the slider with circle at 01:07:755 (at position X:316 Y:288) and 01:08:119 (at position X:224 Y:364) with normal hitsound for both.
[Fycho's Hard]
00:21:755 -> Add circle (at position, X:128 Y:136) with normal hitsound.

Good luck with your beatmap.

YoshinoSakura

Joined January 2011

Topic Starter

YoshinoSakura 2014-05-08T11:26:36+00:00

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:
insane
00:08:664 (6) - 这个是不是放错地方了.. x:467 y:179怎么样好像确实是啊
00:36:300 (3) - 这个再加个clap https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1563484 不太明白，因为这个鼓不是很明显
00:58:300 (1) - 这个没包好, 下面比较细你看看是不是厉害
01:29:937 (4) - 居然不放对称233 233
感觉kiai段的那些o-o o-o o的梗有些破坏节奏 yf的难度这一点做的就好些。不过跳放的挺好。

truth revealer wrote:
[Tags]
Add "Oraretara" to Tags. added
[Normal]
00:15:937 -> How about, change the slider with circle (at position, X:344 Y:116) at 00:16:119 with finish hitsound.i like my previous version
00:20:119 -> Add Circle (at position, X:208 Y:112) with normal hitsound.
00:41:391 -> Add Circle (at position, X:120 Y:324) with normal hitsound.
00:41:755 -> Add Circle (at position, X:192 Y:268) with clap hitsound.
00:41:937 -> Add Circle (at position, X:236 Y:288) with clap hitsound.
01:07:755 -> How about, change the slider with circle at 01:07:755 (at position X:316 Y:288) and 01:08:119 (at position X:224 Y:364) with normal hitsound for both.sorry it wiil increase its difficulty

thx for mod

LZCSC

Joined July 2012

LZCSC 2014-05-15T14:37:39+00:00

from BMT
随便乱摸摸/w\

easy
00:19:755 (1,2) - 这样好看点？

00:52:482 (3,4) - 没包好
01:04:119 (3) - 在01:04:482 - 结束？刚好有个鼓点声
01:14:300 (1,3) - 这样？

01:17:937 (2) - 01:18:664 - 这里结束？感觉easy节奏越简单越好
01:24:119 - 放个circle或者01:24:300 (2) - 从这儿起

normal
00:35:028 (2) - 感觉太扭了点/w\弧度再小点嘛
00:36:482 (1,2,3,4) - 这一段全跟唱的？

01:24:119 (3,1) - 这样的吧

方一冲’s hard
01:08:846 (1,2) - 额，平胸？或者角度在大点？
01:31:755 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - ，重音都以滑条头起吧

insane
00:04:482 (1,2,3,4) - 换个摆法吧，感觉原先都是左右活蹦乱跳突然就老实了太突然

之类的

00:17:209 (3,4) - ctrl+G，感觉更顺手
01:35:755 (4) - ^

yf‘s insane
00:16:755 (4) - 删掉？然后拉开00:16:482 (3,4) - 的距离，来跟那个节奏？
00:17:482 (7) - ^同上然后00:17:209 (6,8) - 距离
00:18:664 (1) - 这个速度略突然 /w\
00:40:482 (8) - ctrl+G？

美丽;w;

祝好运

YoshinoSakura

Joined January 2011

Topic Starter

YoshinoSakura 2014-05-16T07:26:09+00:00

LZCSC wrote:
from BMT
随便乱摸摸/w\

normal
00:35:028 (2) - 感觉太扭了点/w\弧度再小点嘛没有blanket唔所谓
00:36:482 (1,2,3,4) - 这一段全跟唱的？
木有看懂。。
01:24:119 (3,1) - 这样的吧
有道理

insane
00:04:482 (1,2,3,4) - 换个摆法吧，感觉原先都是左右活蹦乱跳突然就老实了太突然
之类的
故意的
00:17:209 (3,4) - ctrl+G，感觉更顺手猴
01:35:755 (4) - ^ 木有必要

美丽;w;

祝好运

谢mod
我他妈怎么传不上图

ZZHBOY

Joined April 2012

ZZHBOY 2014-05-16T09:54:10+00:00

as in-game req

[Easy]
00:27:391 (3,1) - haven't blanket well
00:55:028 (2,3) - 1/2 spacing is not good in easy diff.make it easier
懒得打英文都怪食肉
[Normal]
00:11:028 (2) - 拆开吧别把00:11:391 - 这音漏了
00:56:119 - finish
01:03:391 (2) - 可以拉长半拍然后前移半拍
01:17:209 (5,1) - 建议交换nc
[hard]
01:29:755 - 这里可以别漏音
01:07:209 (1,2,1) - 我dt的时候这里断了好坑啊我日
[Insane]
00:01:028 (1) - 这里应该是八分拍的折返而且00:01:209 - 这里有个长音建议换成折返三次的八分拍滑条后接一个半拍的滑条像这样http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1611125
00:08:119 (4,5) - 不仅丑 flow也不好你这样http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1611128老老实实弄就好呗忽然来一个几把的stack滑条尾除非全图就几把不然就尽量少弄这样的让图整洁点
whistle加的好乱 00:26:300 - 这里是应该加个whistle的吧不太清楚你的想法所以不说这个了
00:31:028 (2,3,4) - 滑条可以和圈交换节奏感觉打起来舒服些
00:33:119 (5) - 这个圈去掉然后在00:33:482 - 这里加上圈会让你三连起到突出长白线重音的作用感觉会好些
00:51:937 (4,5) - ctrl+g感觉后面的flow好些
01:09:209 (4,5,6) - 感觉挤一块挺丑的看看别人怎么说吧
01:31:755 (1) - 建议在01:33:028 - 停然后从01:33:391 - 开始摆note不然你滑条结束离下一个note太近虽然是I但感觉很不爽的
01:38:846 - 这个可以换成个滑条跟一下长音啊像爱抚gd结尾一样跟到声音结束感觉作为I会好些
[yf]
00:18:664 (1,1) - huehue 四分拍间隔然后这么远还加速1pc肯定读不出要丢滑条尾啊建议上一个滑条提前1/4拍停不然太几把
00:56:300 (5) - nc?
01:18:482 (1) - 不来减速一下妈反正啦的不好看

美丽

moonlightleaf

Joined September 2011

moonlightleaf 2014-05-16T12:29:45+00:00

[easy]

00:20:482 (2) - try

00:39:391 (1,3) - i don't think those overlap is good

00:52:482 (3,4) - blanket

00:55:028 (2,3) - this new-lpayer can play?

01:04:119 (3,4) - ^

01:01:937 (3) - move to 01:01:573

01:05:573 (1,1) - too close

01:17:937 (2) - end at 01:18:664

01:15:755 (3) - overlap bad ,try move away

01:24:300 (2) - start from 01:24:119 to 01:24:846

[Insane]

00:08:119 (4,5) - 不好看

00:03:755 (3) - 能叠下面那个2上么

00:18:664 (5,1) - 叠

00:20:482 (1) - 不好看

00:24:482 (7) - ctrl+g

00:31:209 (3,4) - 我讨厌这种叠的

00:40:119 (1) - 这个1拿出来 4方

00:51:937 (4,5) - ctrl+g会更顺

00:55:028 (3) - 放(180.192)试试，还有试试这种顺序

01:01:755 (2,3) - 试试

01:03:391 (4,5) - ctrl+g看看

01:06:664 (6,7) - ^

01:20:846 (3,4) - 不太看好这类（虽然第一次见有点新颖

01:25:937 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 1234怎么这么坑，建议按照后面黄色圈1234的摆法

YoshinoSakura

Joined January 2011

Topic Starter

YoshinoSakura 2014-05-16T15:52:08+00:00

ZZHBOY wrote:
[Normal]
00:11:028 (2) - 拆开吧别把00:11:391 - 这音漏了那楼的也太多了
00:56:119 - finish 猴
01:03:391 (2) - 可以拉长半拍然后前移半拍好主意
01:17:209 (5,1) - 建议交换nc 嗯

ZZHBOY wrote:
[Insane]
00:01:028 (1) - 这里应该是八分拍的折返而且00:01:209 - 这里有个长音建议换成折返三次的八分拍滑条后接一个半拍的滑条像这样http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1611125 改成了八分音，但是不想跟那个长音，听起来和放屁一样OAO
00:08:119 (4,5) - 不仅丑 flow也不好你这样http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1611128老老实实弄就好呗忽然来一个几把的stack滑条尾除非全图就几把不然就尽量少弄这样的让图整洁点全图的这个节奏都是这样
whistle加的好乱 00:26:300 - 这里是应该加个whistle的吧不太清楚你的想法所以不说这个了钢琴
00:31:028 (2,3,4) - 滑条可以和圈交换节奏感觉打起来舒服些那样重音没压倒
00:33:119 (5) - 这个圈去掉然后在00:33:482 - 这里加上圈会让你三连起到突出长白线重音的作用感觉会好些不知为何我还是觉得原来好
00:51:937 (4,5) - ctrl+g感觉后面的flow好些没啥大变化
01:09:209 (4,5,6) - 感觉挤一块挺丑的看看别人怎么说吧猴
01:31:755 (1) - 建议在01:33:028 - 停然后从01:33:391 - 开始摆note不然你滑条结束离下一个note太近虽然是I但感觉很不爽的 [~~color=#FF0000]玩儿的就是坑[/color]~~
01:38:846 - 这个可以换成个滑条跟一下长音啊像爱抚gd结尾一样跟到声音结束感觉作为I会好些没想好怎么弄，柑橘三连后面加个slider太蠢了

moonlightleaf wrote:
[Insane]

00:08:119 (4,5) - 不好看唔

00:03:755 (3) - 能叠下面那个2上么隔得太远了，没有必要

00:18:664 (5,1) - 叠那个是手动修正stack。。

00:20:482 (1) - 不好看换了个更丑的

00:24:482 (7) - ctrl+g 猴

00:31:209 (3,4) - 我讨厌这种叠的隔得太远了其实等于没叠，只是找个快一点的放note的地方

00:40:119 (1) - 这个1拿出来 4方没看懂。。

00:51:937 (4,5) - ctrl+g会更顺则不呢泥萌都这么想，那样就会有一个anti flow

00:55:028 (3) - 放(180.192)试试，还有试试这种顺序
collapsed text我柑橘没啥问题啊

01:01:755 (2,3) - 试试柑橘没啥大变化
collapsed text

01:03:391 (4,5) - ctrl+g看看那间距也忒大

01:06:664 (6,7) - ^ 要影响后面的间距

01:20:846 (3,4) - 不太看好这类（虽然第一次见有点新颖那是我zz了

01:25:937 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 1234怎么这么坑，建议按照后面黄色圈1234的摆法会想法改的

谢谢mod

Fycho

Global Moderator

Joined August 2012

Fycho 2014-05-17T09:49:24+00:00

@truth revealer, no need to add more circles, I follow drum.
@LZCSC, 第一个故意不平行，角度正好，其他几个也是。第二个是为了突出那里和音乐里其他地方的不一样（没有人声而且是变化的鼓点
@zzh, 爷爷我那主跟人声不跟伴奏，那一句伴奏没后面一句强。。。第二个你太弱了。。
@sakura，真是的，只改了一些tiny things和音效

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Atrue

osu! Alumni

Joined July 2012

Atrue 2014-05-19T14:51:50+00:00

Hello~
As your request.

[Notion]
This color means it is a suggestion. I prefer to do this, but you can either choose to fix or not.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.

[General]
Title: 彼女がフラグを立てる理由
Romanised Title: Kanojo ga Flag o Tateru Wake
Add tags:菜波・K・ブレードフィールド木戸衣吹魔法ヶ沢茜茅野愛衣召喚寺菊乃阿澄佳奈盗賊山恵花澤香菜英雄崎凜日笠陽子忍者林瑠璃諏訪彩花 Because They are members of YELL and are true singer of the song.

[Mochi's Easy]
General
Well made, but some "solid" stuffs to fix in the diff.
Beats
00:11:391 (2,3) - Really hard for a beginner to read the stack and the 1/2 beat here. Consider taking it into the next slider. Example:

00:55:028 - Same as above. And I'm not sure about my suggested example. Just have a try. Example:

01:05:573 (1,1) - The spinner is quite close to the next slider Try to get a more simple beat. Example:

(don't forget to remove the inherited point after the spinner if you do so)
01:17:937 (2) - Hitting the HP Bar... And next notes need to be adjusted. Example:

333,29,77937,2,0,P|252:20|176:36,1,145.5,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,224,79391,6,0,P|136:215|170:182,1,97,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,100,80119,1,4,0:0:0:0:

[Normal]
General
A little bit messy in placement, but fine overall.
Beats
00:52:300 (4) - It's better to be placed here at 00:52:119 . The drum is really more important than the weak vocal. And clap is missing if no note is here. Example:

Hitsound
00:55:028 - Missing clap here. If you intentionally made this, it is really blank on the drum and losing the weight.

[Fycho's Hard]
General
In good quality. Nothing to point out here.

[Insane]
General
Fine overall, some small patterns to discuss about.
Beats
00:33:437 (7) - I guess it is misplaced.. It is supposed to be at 00:33:391 .. And since it's really a weak vocal here, you don't need to emphasize it by making a bigger distance here. Example:

Placement
00:08:119 (4,5,6) - Ok.. It confused me when testplaying. The flow is intentionally made hard to catch but the style of the diff is not fit in the pattern and a little abrupt here. Here is my example:

01:29:937 (4) - Hitting HP Bar.. Example:

That's my suggestions. Thanks for requesting.

Irc modded yf's Insane. Fixed some hitsound, NC issue. Also checked General and Metadata.

2014-05-19 20:21 Atrue: 人呢人呢人呢
2014-05-19 20:21 Yoshino-Sakura: 好
2014-05-19 20:21 Atrue: go
2014-05-19 20:23 Yoshino-Sakura: 卡卡卡
2014-05-19 20:23 Yoshino-Sakura: 等一下
2014-05-19 20:23 Atrue: 卡完了么= =
2014-05-19 20:23 Yoshino-Sakura: 看完了
2014-05-19 20:24 Yoshino-Sakura: 发现爱抚老爷适合做音游
2014-05-19 20:24 Atrue: 好,评价是还不错,里面有些节奏我得吐槽
2014-05-19 20:26 Yoshino-Sakura: 额
2014-05-19 20:26 Yoshino-Sakura: 然后你就可以喷喷我的diff惹
2014-05-19 20:26 Atrue: 没啥要喷的
2014-05-19 20:26 Atrue: 就是有个梗不是很好认
2014-05-19 20:26 Atrue: 跟风格不一致
2014-05-19 20:26 Atrue: 别的节奏上我觉得挺好的
2014-05-19 20:26 Yoshino-Sakura: 你不觉得那个3/2打着很奇怪么
2014-05-19 20:26 Atrue: 排版当然还得好好练练
2014-05-19 20:26 Atrue: 不记得了
2014-05-19 20:27 Atrue: 我觉得没有太奇怪的地方
2014-05-19 20:27 Atrue: 但是有个排列梗
2014-05-19 20:27 Atrue: 一会说
2014-05-19 20:27 Atrue: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/407493 YELL - Kanojo ga Flag wo Tateru Riyuu (TV Size)]
2014-05-19 20:29 Yoshino-Sakura: 窝巢
2014-05-19 20:29 Yoshino-Sakura: 突然冒出10跳message
2014-05-19 20:30 Atrue: fycho hard我觉得除了有个可能碰滑条的地方得说一下之外别的不用说了..
2014-05-19 20:32 Yoshino-Sakura: 啊
2014-05-19 20:32 Yoshino-Sakura: dasdasd
2014-05-19 20:32 Yoshino-Sakura: 感觉漏了好多音效
2014-05-19 20:32 Atrue: normal不错,sv有点大了,不过不用改,另外你想补音效的话自己补吧
2014-05-19 20:33 Atrue: 我觉得排版有点乱
2014-05-19 20:33 Atrue: 233
2014-05-19 20:33 Atrue: 不如你的easy做得好
2014-05-19 20:37 Yoshino-Sakura: 我掉了？
2014-05-19 20:37 Atrue: 显然
2014-05-19 20:37 Atrue: 话说我觉得mochi的easy做的不认真啊2
2014-05-19 20:37 Yoshino-Sakura: 啊
2014-05-19 20:37 Atrue: 虽然蛮顺的
2014-05-19 20:37 Atrue: 但是细节方面做的不好
2014-05-19 20:38 Atrue: irc行?
2014-05-19 20:38 Yoshino-Sakura: 起卦里了
2014-05-19 20:38 Yoshino-Sakura: 奇怪了
2014-05-19 20:38 Yoshino-Sakura: 我挂vpn都能掉？
2014-05-19 20:38 Atrue: 嗯
2014-05-19 20:38 Yoshino-Sakura: 星
2014-05-19 20:38 Atrue: 我问你呢,irc可以么?
2014-05-19 20:38 Yoshino-Sakura: 星
2014-05-19 20:38 Atrue: 哦哦哦
2014-05-19 20:38 Yoshino-Sakura: 行
2014-05-19 20:39 Yoshino-Sakura: 打不出自来。。
2014-05-19 20:39 Atrue: 那个..gd我就post哈
2014-05-19 20:39 Yoshino-Sakura: 猴
2014-05-19 20:39 Atrue: 然后我想想..
2014-05-19 20:39 Yoshino-Sakura: yf就不用了
2014-05-19 20:39 Atrue: yf你替他改？
2014-05-19 20:39 Yoshino-Sakura: 直接irc
2014-05-19 20:39 Atrue: 好
2014-05-19 20:39 Yoshino-Sakura: 他一直都是这个态度
2014-05-19 20:39 Yoshino-Sakura: 爱死爱抚惹
2014-05-19 20:39 Yoshino-Sakura: 阿姨洗铁路
2014-05-19 20:40 Atrue: 我去查general
2014-05-19 20:40 Yoshino-Sakura: 嗯
2014-05-19 20:40 Atrue: 视频分辨率？
2014-05-19 20:41 Yoshino-Sakura: 854 480
2014-05-19 20:41 Atrue: ok
2014-05-19 20:41 Yoshino-Sakura: 看花花的教程设置的
2014-05-19 20:44 Atrue: general没问题了，看看metadata
2014-05-19 20:44 Yoshino-Sakura: 嗯
2014-05-19 20:44 Atrue: 我先问问有没有rank版本的
2014-05-19 20:44 Yoshino-Sakura: 木有
2014-05-19 20:44 Yoshino-Sakura: 我看了n变了
2014-05-19 20:44 Yoshino-Sakura: 其他都是抄我的
2014-05-19 20:44 Yoshino-Sakura: XD
2014-05-19 20:45 Atrue: 原来都是在抢坑啊
2014-05-19 20:45 Atrue: 行我今天晚上争取泡
2014-05-19 20:45 Yoshino-Sakura: 我上传后两周才有人传第二章
2014-05-19 20:45 Yoshino-Sakura: 但是我两周找了1mod
2014-05-19 20:45 Yoshino-Sakura: T.T
2014-05-19 20:45 Atrue: 找个mod怎么这么难
2014-05-19 20:46 Yoshino-Sakura: 我自己开m4m没人来
2014-05-19 20:46 Yoshino-Sakura: 群里除了zzh和菜市场没人送mod
2014-05-19 20:46 Atrue: 233
2014-05-19 20:49 Atrue: http://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E5%BD%BC%E5%A5%B3%E3%81%8C%E3%83%95%E3%83%A9%E3%82%B0%E3%82%92%E3%81%8A%E3%82%89%E3%82%8C%E3%81%9F%E3%82%89#.E4.B8.BB.E9.A1.8C.E6.AD.8C
2014-05-19 20:49 Atrue: 啊。。我还是截图
2014-05-19 20:49 Atrue: http://puu.sh/8SsVX.png
2014-05-19 20:49 Atrue: 把那帮人全写进tag里卖弄
2014-05-19 20:49 Atrue: 面
2014-05-19 20:50 Yoshino-Sakura: 吓死了
2014-05-19 20:50 Atrue: 毕竟是唱歌的
2014-05-19 20:50 Yoshino-Sakura: 突然冒出5条message
2014-05-19 20:50 Yoshino-Sakura: 然后我就断了
2014-05-19 20:51 Yoshino-Sakura: 窝巢
2014-05-19 20:51 Yoshino-Sakura: 居然这么多cv
2014-05-19 20:51 Yoshino-Sakura: 我居然布吉岛
2014-05-19 20:51 Atrue: 而且你的title有问题
2014-05-19 20:51 Atrue: 看看理由后边的括号
2014-05-19 20:51 Atrue: 那个也是title里的
2014-05-19 20:52 Yoshino-Sakura: 我又掉了
2014-05-19 20:52 Atrue: 换个靠谱点的vpn
2014-05-19 20:53 Yoshino-Sakura: >.<
2014-05-19 20:53 Atrue: 好了？
2014-05-19 20:53 Yoshino-Sakura: 我是看video里的那个写title的
2014-05-19 20:53 Atrue: 我看看video
2014-05-19 20:54 Atrue: 点成MP3了
2014-05-19 20:54 Atrue: 我还得卡一小会
2014-05-19 20:54 Yoshino-Sakura: 额
2014-05-19 20:54 Yoshino-Sakura: 我用的mxvpn
2014-05-19 20:54 Yoshino-Sakura: 那个tags是写罗马音还是日语
2014-05-19 20:55 Atrue: 日语
2014-05-19 20:55 Yoshino-Sakura: 咦
2014-05-19 20:55 Yoshino-Sakura: 你刚刚那个cv在哪儿
2014-05-19 20:56 Atrue: http://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E5%BD%BC%E5%A5%B3%E3%81%8C%E3%83%95%E3%83%A9%E3%82%B0%E3%82%92%E3%81%8A%E3%82%89%E3%82%8C%E3%81%9F%E3%82%89#.E4.B8.BB.E9.A1.8C.E6.AD.8C
2014-05-19 20:56 Atrue: 上日语维基搜
2014-05-19 20:56 Yoshino-Sakura: 为何木有显示全
2014-05-19 20:57 Atrue: 嘛。。
2014-05-19 20:57 Yoshino-Sakura: 看不懂
2014-05-19 20:58 Atrue: 把source放进搜索框找日语wiki搜索
2014-05-19 20:58 Yoshino-Sakura: 额
2014-05-19 20:58 Yoshino-Sakura: title后面两个字看不懂
2014-05-19 20:58 Yoshino-Sakura: 我问了群里人
2014-05-19 20:59 Yoshino-Sakura: ワケ（別、和気、和希、和介、委居、獲居）
2014-05-19 20:59 Atrue: 要写
2014-05-19 20:59 Atrue: http://puu.sh/8StnO.png
2014-05-19 20:59 Yoshino-Sakura: 如何翻译成罗马音啊
2014-05-19 20:59 Yoshino-Sakura: uke？
2014-05-19 21:00 Atrue: wake
2014-05-19 21:00 Yoshino-Sakura: 一片黑
2014-05-19 21:00 Atrue: hh
2014-05-19 21:02 Atrue: http://puu.sh/8Stvv.png
2014-05-19 21:02 Atrue: 不是
2014-05-19 21:02 Atrue: 所以说你得加这么一坨东西进去
2014-05-19 21:02 Atrue: 而且还得去掉tv size
2014-05-19 21:03 Atrue: 官方没写
2014-05-19 21:03 Yoshino-Sakura: yeye
2014-05-19 21:03 Yoshino-Sakura: 还是黑的
2014-05-19 21:03 Atrue: 你自己看视频
2014-05-19 21:03 Atrue: 怎么我这里能显示
2014-05-19 21:04 Atrue: 算了我一会给你post吧
2014-05-19 21:04 Yoshino-Sakura: 我说你的截图
2014-05-19 21:04 Atrue: 我知道
2014-05-19 21:04 Yoshino-Sakura: 嗯
2014-05-19 21:05 Atrue: 来看diff
2014-05-19 21:05 Yoshino-Sakura: tvsize必须加吧
2014-05-19 21:06 Atrue: 官方没有写不能加
2014-05-19 21:06 Yoshino-Sakura: 咦
2014-05-19 21:06 Yoshino-Sakura: 难道其他写了的
2014-05-19 21:06 Atrue: 现在我是能看到明文规定的
2014-05-19 21:06 Atrue: 虽然说这条执行力度一直不大
2014-05-19 21:07 Yoshino-Sakura: 不是啊
2014-05-19 21:07 Yoshino-Sakura: 官方的肯定是完整版啊
2014-05-19 21:07 Yoshino-Sakura: 我那个一周的炮友也没写
2014-05-19 21:08 Yoshino-Sakura: http://puu.sh/8StNv.png
2014-05-19 21:09 Atrue: 我给你找rc
2014-05-19 21:10 Yoshino-Sakura: 我找了kshr
2014-05-19 21:10 Atrue: 他说啥
2014-05-19 21:10 Yoshino-Sakura: 他说后面那个只是告诉我们理由应该读wake
2014-05-19 21:10 Atrue: 然后？
2014-05-19 21:11 Yoshino-Sakura: 所以不用写
2014-05-19 21:11 Atrue: 好，那你的罗马音得写
2014-05-19 21:11 Atrue: 你写的riyou吧
2014-05-19 21:11 Yoshino-Sakura: http://puu.sh/8StYe.jpg
2014-05-19 21:12 Atrue: http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/87323&start=0
2014-05-19 21:12 Atrue: http://puu.sh/8Su1W.png
2014-05-19 21:12 Atrue: 看tvsize应该是不能加的
2014-05-19 21:13 Atrue: 要是泡了让人戳了的话这个是只能reb的，也能导致unrank
2014-05-19 21:13 Atrue: 所以我建议还是不要加
2014-05-19 21:13 Yoshino-Sakura: 已改
2014-05-19 21:14 Yoshino-Sakura: 然后我发现没一个人写对了
2014-05-19 21:14 Atrue: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/406738 YELL - Kanojo ga Flag wo Tateru Riyuu (TV Size) [yf's Insane]]
2014-05-19 21:14 Atrue: 00:55:573 (2) - 
2014-05-19 21:14 Atrue: nc
2014-05-19 21:14 Atrue: 因为这里加速了
2014-05-19 21:14 Yoshino-Sakura: hhh叫他们朝我
2014-05-19 21:14 Atrue: 00:55:937 (3) - 还有这里
2014-05-19 21:14 Atrue: 加速了，也要nc
2014-05-19 21:15 Atrue: 00:58:664 - 忘加音效了
2014-05-19 21:15 Yoshino-Sakura: 等下
2014-05-19 21:15 Atrue: clap
2014-05-19 21:15 Atrue: 好
2014-05-19 21:15 Yoshino-Sakura: 我甘冈又卡惹
2014-05-19 21:15 Atrue: 那两个nc收到了吗？
2014-05-19 21:16 Yoshino-Sakura: 收到了
2014-05-19 21:16 Atrue: 家音效？
2014-05-19 21:16 Yoshino-Sakura: 我觉得还是要加tv的
2014-05-19 21:16 Yoshino-Sakura: 因为full都出了
2014-05-19 21:16 Yoshino-Sakura: 上次三妖没加都被要加了
2014-05-19 21:18 Atrue: http://puu.sh/8Sujx.png
2014-05-19 21:18 Atrue: 唉。。我觉得还是不加
2014-05-19 21:18 Atrue: 这是rc
2014-05-19 21:18 Yoshino-Sakura: 嗯
2014-05-19 21:18 Yoshino-Sakura: 改了title变成两张图惹
2014-05-19 21:19 Atrue: 那也是得改啊。。。
2014-05-19 21:19 Yoshino-Sakura: 现在哪一张rank的tv没加啊
2014-05-19 21:19 Atrue: 我是害怕被挑。。到时候还得提心吊胆
2014-05-19 21:20 Yoshino-Sakura: 额
2014-05-19 21:20 Atrue: 01:01:573 - 这里也是漏音效
2014-05-19 21:20 Atrue: 别纠结了，要不要提心吊胆你来决定
2014-05-19 21:21 Yoshino-Sakura: fixed
2014-05-19 21:21 Atrue: kiai加hitsound volume 到80%，70声音还是不够大
2014-05-19 21:22 Yoshino-Sakura: 前面的都fix惹
2014-05-19 21:22 Atrue: 好
2014-05-19 21:23 Atrue: 01:19:391 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 我感觉打击感不够，soft音效还是太软
2014-05-19 21:24 Atrue: 嘛。。不怎么好改
2014-05-19 21:24 Yoshino-Sakura: 我先吃个药
2014-05-19 21:24 Atrue: 好
2014-05-19 21:25 Yoshino-Sakura: hhh
2014-05-19 21:25 Atrue: 缺音效文件。。就先这样吧
2014-05-19 21:26 Yoshino-Sakura: 我柑橘音乐里面木有的sound都不加
2014-05-19 21:26 Yoshino-Sakura: 爱抚不是这么想的。。
2014-05-19 21:26 Atrue: 但是这小串子也是听上去有点弱了
2014-05-19 21:26 Atrue: 另外从排列上
2014-05-19 21:27 Atrue: 算了，这里问题不大
2014-05-19 21:27 Yoshino-Sakura: 日本流和天潮流没法交流
2014-05-19 21:28 Atrue: 大概就这样，不改太多了
2014-05-19 21:30 Atrue: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/404687 YELL - Kanojo ga Flag wo Tateru Riyuu (TV Size) [Insane]]
2014-05-19 21:30 Atrue: 好你的diff
2014-05-19 21:31 Atrue: 00:04:482 (1,2,3,4) - 吐个槽而已，这样的梗我觉得还是有点莫名
2014-05-19 21:31 Yoshino-Sakura: 我到底是加名字还是cv啊
2014-05-19 21:31 Atrue: 嗯？
2014-05-19 21:31 Atrue: tag吗？
2014-05-19 21:31 Atrue: artist就写YELL
2014-05-19 21:31 Atrue: tag不管cv还是角色名都写进去
2014-05-19 21:31 Atrue: 多了也是不算过
2014-05-19 21:32 Yoshino-Sakura: 嗯
2014-05-19 21:32 Yoshino-Sakura: 我只能写日文了
2014-05-19 21:32 Yoshino-Sakura: 翻译不来
2014-05-19 21:32 Atrue: 日文就行

Call me back when you are ready.

YoshinoSakura

Joined January 2011

Topic Starter

YoshinoSakura 2014-05-19T15:22:11+00:00

Atrue wrote:

Hello~
As your request.

[Notion]
This color means it is a suggestion. I prefer to do this, but you can either choose to fix or not.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.

[General]
Title: 彼女がフラグを立てる理由
Romanised Title: Kanojo ga Flag o Tateru Wake
Add tags:菜波・K・ブレードフィールド木戸衣吹魔法ヶ沢茜茅野愛衣召喚寺菊乃阿澄佳奈盗賊山恵花澤香菜英雄崎凜日笠陽子忍者林瑠璃諏訪彩花 Because They are members of YELL and are true singer of the song.

[Normal]
General
A little bit messy in placement, but fine overall.
Beats
00:52:300 (4) - It's better to be placed here at 00:52:119 . The drum is really more important than the weak vocal. And clap is missing if no note is here. Example:

changed

Hitsound
00:55:028 - Missing clap here. If you intentionally made this, it is really blank on the drum and losing the weight.

[Insane]
General
Fine overall, some small patterns to discuss about.
Beats
00:33:437 (7) - I guess it is misplaced.. It is supposed to be at 00:33:391 .. And since it's really a weak vocal here, you don't need to emphasize it by making a bigger distance here. Example:

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Placement
00:08:119 (4,5,6) - Ok.. It confused me when testplaying. The flow is intentionally made hard to catch but the style of the diff is not fit in the pattern and a little abrupt here. Here is my example:

changed to the similar pattern
01:29:937 (4) - Hitting HP Bar.. Example:

fixed

That's my suggestions. Thanks for requesting.

Irc modded yf's Insane. Fixed some hitsound, NC issue. Also checked General and Metadata.

2014-05-19 20:21 Atrue: 人呢人呢人呢
2014-05-19 20:21 Yoshino-Sakura: 好
2014-05-19 20:21 Atrue: go
2014-05-19 20:23 Yoshino-Sakura: 卡卡卡
2014-05-19 20:23 Yoshino-Sakura: 等一下
2014-05-19 20:23 Atrue: 卡完了么= =
2014-05-19 20:23 Yoshino-Sakura: 看完了
2014-05-19 20:24 Yoshino-Sakura: 发现爱抚老爷适合做音游
2014-05-19 20:24 Atrue: 好,评价是还不错,里面有些节奏我得吐槽
2014-05-19 20:26 Yoshino-Sakura: 额
2014-05-19 20:26 Yoshino-Sakura: 然后你就可以喷喷我的diff惹
2014-05-19 20:26 Atrue: 没啥要喷的
2014-05-19 20:26 Atrue: 就是有个梗不是很好认
2014-05-19 20:26 Atrue: 跟风格不一致
2014-05-19 20:26 Atrue: 别的节奏上我觉得挺好的
2014-05-19 20:26 Yoshino-Sakura: 你不觉得那个3/2打着很奇怪么
2014-05-19 20:26 Atrue: 排版当然还得好好练练
2014-05-19 20:26 Atrue: 不记得了
2014-05-19 20:27 Atrue: 我觉得没有太奇怪的地方
2014-05-19 20:27 Atrue: 但是有个排列梗
2014-05-19 20:27 Atrue: 一会说
2014-05-19 20:27 Atrue: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/407493 YELL - Kanojo ga Flag wo Tateru Riyuu (TV Size)]
2014-05-19 20:29 Yoshino-Sakura: 窝巢
2014-05-19 20:29 Yoshino-Sakura: 突然冒出10跳message
2014-05-19 20:30 Atrue: fycho hard我觉得除了有个可能碰滑条的地方得说一下之外别的不用说了..
2014-05-19 20:32 Yoshino-Sakura: 啊
2014-05-19 20:32 Yoshino-Sakura: dasdasd
2014-05-19 20:32 Yoshino-Sakura: 感觉漏了好多音效
2014-05-19 20:32 Atrue: normal不错,sv有点大了,不过不用改,另外你想补音效的话自己补吧
2014-05-19 20:33 Atrue: 我觉得排版有点乱
2014-05-19 20:33 Atrue: 233
2014-05-19 20:33 Atrue: 不如你的easy做得好
2014-05-19 20:37 Yoshino-Sakura: 我掉了？
2014-05-19 20:37 Atrue: 显然
2014-05-19 20:37 Atrue: 话说我觉得mochi的easy做的不认真啊2
2014-05-19 20:37 Yoshino-Sakura: 啊
2014-05-19 20:37 Atrue: 虽然蛮顺的
2014-05-19 20:37 Atrue: 但是细节方面做的不好
2014-05-19 20:38 Atrue: irc行?
2014-05-19 20:38 Yoshino-Sakura: 起卦里了
2014-05-19 20:38 Yoshino-Sakura: 奇怪了
2014-05-19 20:38 Yoshino-Sakura: 我挂vpn都能掉？
2014-05-19 20:38 Atrue: 嗯
2014-05-19 20:38 Yoshino-Sakura: 星
2014-05-19 20:38 Atrue: 我问你呢,irc可以么?
2014-05-19 20:38 Yoshino-Sakura: 星
2014-05-19 20:38 Atrue: 哦哦哦
2014-05-19 20:38 Yoshino-Sakura: 行
2014-05-19 20:39 Yoshino-Sakura: 打不出自来。。
2014-05-19 20:39 Atrue: 那个..gd我就post哈
2014-05-19 20:39 Yoshino-Sakura: 猴
2014-05-19 20:39 Atrue: 然后我想想..
2014-05-19 20:39 Yoshino-Sakura: yf就不用了
2014-05-19 20:39 Atrue: yf你替他改？
2014-05-19 20:39 Yoshino-Sakura: 直接irc
2014-05-19 20:39 Atrue: 好
2014-05-19 20:39 Yoshino-Sakura: 他一直都是这个态度
2014-05-19 20:39 Yoshino-Sakura: 爱死爱抚惹
2014-05-19 20:39 Yoshino-Sakura: 阿姨洗铁路
2014-05-19 20:40 Atrue: 我去查general
2014-05-19 20:40 Yoshino-Sakura: 嗯
2014-05-19 20:40 Atrue: 视频分辨率？
2014-05-19 20:41 Yoshino-Sakura: 854 480
2014-05-19 20:41 Atrue: ok
2014-05-19 20:41 Yoshino-Sakura: 看花花的教程设置的
2014-05-19 20:44 Atrue: general没问题了，看看metadata
2014-05-19 20:44 Yoshino-Sakura: 嗯
2014-05-19 20:44 Atrue: 我先问问有没有rank版本的
2014-05-19 20:44 Yoshino-Sakura: 木有
2014-05-19 20:44 Yoshino-Sakura: 我看了n变了
2014-05-19 20:44 Yoshino-Sakura: 其他都是抄我的
2014-05-19 20:44 Yoshino-Sakura: XD
2014-05-19 20:45 Atrue: 原来都是在抢坑啊
2014-05-19 20:45 Atrue: 行我今天晚上争取泡
2014-05-19 20:45 Yoshino-Sakura: 我上传后两周才有人传第二章
2014-05-19 20:45 Yoshino-Sakura: 但是我两周找了1mod
2014-05-19 20:45 Yoshino-Sakura: T.T
2014-05-19 20:45 Atrue: 找个mod怎么这么难
2014-05-19 20:46 Yoshino-Sakura: 我自己开m4m没人来
2014-05-19 20:46 Yoshino-Sakura: 群里除了zzh和菜市场没人送mod
2014-05-19 20:46 Atrue: 233
2014-05-19 20:49 Atrue: http://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E5%BD%BC%E5%A5%B3%E3%81%8C%E3%83%95%E3%83%A9%E3%82%B0%E3%82%92%E3%81%8A%E3%82%89%E3%82%8C%E3%81%9F%E3%82%89#.E4.B8.BB.E9.A1.8C.E6.AD.8C
2014-05-19 20:49 Atrue: 啊。。我还是截图
2014-05-19 20:49 Atrue: http://puu.sh/8SsVX.png
2014-05-19 20:49 Atrue: 把那帮人全写进tag里卖弄
2014-05-19 20:49 Atrue: 面
2014-05-19 20:50 Yoshino-Sakura: 吓死了
2014-05-19 20:50 Atrue: 毕竟是唱歌的
2014-05-19 20:50 Yoshino-Sakura: 突然冒出5条message
2014-05-19 20:50 Yoshino-Sakura: 然后我就断了
2014-05-19 20:51 Yoshino-Sakura: 窝巢
2014-05-19 20:51 Yoshino-Sakura: 居然这么多cv
2014-05-19 20:51 Yoshino-Sakura: 我居然布吉岛
2014-05-19 20:51 Atrue: 而且你的title有问题
2014-05-19 20:51 Atrue: 看看理由后边的括号
2014-05-19 20:51 Atrue: 那个也是title里的
2014-05-19 20:52 Yoshino-Sakura: 我又掉了
2014-05-19 20:52 Atrue: 换个靠谱点的vpn
2014-05-19 20:53 Yoshino-Sakura: >.<
2014-05-19 20:53 Atrue: 好了？
2014-05-19 20:53 Yoshino-Sakura: 我是看video里的那个写title的
2014-05-19 20:53 Atrue: 我看看video
2014-05-19 20:54 Atrue: 点成MP3了
2014-05-19 20:54 Atrue: 我还得卡一小会
2014-05-19 20:54 Yoshino-Sakura: 额
2014-05-19 20:54 Yoshino-Sakura: 我用的mxvpn
2014-05-19 20:54 Yoshino-Sakura: 那个tags是写罗马音还是日语
2014-05-19 20:55 Atrue: 日语
2014-05-19 20:55 Yoshino-Sakura: 咦
2014-05-19 20:55 Yoshino-Sakura: 你刚刚那个cv在哪儿
2014-05-19 20:56 Atrue: http://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E5%BD%BC%E5%A5%B3%E3%81%8C%E3%83%95%E3%83%A9%E3%82%B0%E3%82%92%E3%81%8A%E3%82%89%E3%82%8C%E3%81%9F%E3%82%89#.E4.B8.BB.E9.A1.8C.E6.AD.8C
2014-05-19 20:56 Atrue: 上日语维基搜
2014-05-19 20:56 Yoshino-Sakura: 为何木有显示全
2014-05-19 20:57 Atrue: 嘛。。
2014-05-19 20:57 Yoshino-Sakura: 看不懂
2014-05-19 20:58 Atrue: 把source放进搜索框找日语wiki搜索
2014-05-19 20:58 Yoshino-Sakura: 额
2014-05-19 20:58 Yoshino-Sakura: title后面两个字看不懂
2014-05-19 20:58 Yoshino-Sakura: 我问了群里人
2014-05-19 20:59 Yoshino-Sakura: ワケ（別、和気、和希、和介、委居、獲居）
2014-05-19 20:59 Atrue: 要写
2014-05-19 20:59 Atrue: http://puu.sh/8StnO.png
2014-05-19 20:59 Yoshino-Sakura: 如何翻译成罗马音啊
2014-05-19 20:59 Yoshino-Sakura: uke？
2014-05-19 21:00 Atrue: wake
2014-05-19 21:00 Yoshino-Sakura: 一片黑
2014-05-19 21:00 Atrue: hh
2014-05-19 21:02 Atrue: http://puu.sh/8Stvv.png
2014-05-19 21:02 Atrue: 不是
2014-05-19 21:02 Atrue: 所以说你得加这么一坨东西进去
2014-05-19 21:02 Atrue: 而且还得去掉tv size
2014-05-19 21:03 Atrue: 官方没写
2014-05-19 21:03 Yoshino-Sakura: yeye
2014-05-19 21:03 Yoshino-Sakura: 还是黑的
2014-05-19 21:03 Atrue: 你自己看视频
2014-05-19 21:03 Atrue: 怎么我这里能显示
2014-05-19 21:04 Atrue: 算了我一会给你post吧
2014-05-19 21:04 Yoshino-Sakura: 我说你的截图
2014-05-19 21:04 Atrue: 我知道
2014-05-19 21:04 Yoshino-Sakura: 嗯
2014-05-19 21:05 Atrue: 来看diff
2014-05-19 21:05 Yoshino-Sakura: tvsize必须加吧
2014-05-19 21:06 Atrue: 官方没有写不能加
2014-05-19 21:06 Yoshino-Sakura: 咦
2014-05-19 21:06 Yoshino-Sakura: 难道其他写了的
2014-05-19 21:06 Atrue: 现在我是能看到明文规定的
2014-05-19 21:06 Atrue: 虽然说这条执行力度一直不大
2014-05-19 21:07 Yoshino-Sakura: 不是啊
2014-05-19 21:07 Yoshino-Sakura: 官方的肯定是完整版啊
2014-05-19 21:07 Yoshino-Sakura: 我那个一周的炮友也没写
2014-05-19 21:08 Yoshino-Sakura: http://puu.sh/8StNv.png
2014-05-19 21:09 Atrue: 我给你找rc
2014-05-19 21:10 Yoshino-Sakura: 我找了kshr
2014-05-19 21:10 Atrue: 他说啥
2014-05-19 21:10 Yoshino-Sakura: 他说后面那个只是告诉我们理由应该读wake
2014-05-19 21:10 Atrue: 然后？
2014-05-19 21:11 Yoshino-Sakura: 所以不用写
2014-05-19 21:11 Atrue: 好，那你的罗马音得写
2014-05-19 21:11 Atrue: 你写的riyou吧
2014-05-19 21:11 Yoshino-Sakura: http://puu.sh/8StYe.jpg
2014-05-19 21:12 Atrue: http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/87323&start=0
2014-05-19 21:12 Atrue: http://puu.sh/8Su1W.png
2014-05-19 21:12 Atrue: 看tvsize应该是不能加的
2014-05-19 21:13 Atrue: 要是泡了让人戳了的话这个是只能reb的，也能导致unrank
2014-05-19 21:13 Atrue: 所以我建议还是不要加
2014-05-19 21:13 Yoshino-Sakura: 已改
2014-05-19 21:14 Yoshino-Sakura: 然后我发现没一个人写对了
2014-05-19 21:14 Atrue: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/406738 YELL - Kanojo ga Flag wo Tateru Riyuu (TV Size) [yf's Insane]]
2014-05-19 21:14 Atrue: 00:55:573 (2) - 
2014-05-19 21:14 Atrue: nc
2014-05-19 21:14 Atrue: 因为这里加速了
2014-05-19 21:14 Yoshino-Sakura: hhh叫他们朝我
2014-05-19 21:14 Atrue: 00:55:937 (3) - 还有这里
2014-05-19 21:14 Atrue: 加速了，也要nc
2014-05-19 21:15 Atrue: 00:58:664 - 忘加音效了
2014-05-19 21:15 Yoshino-Sakura: 等下
2014-05-19 21:15 Atrue: clap
2014-05-19 21:15 Atrue: 好
2014-05-19 21:15 Yoshino-Sakura: 我甘冈又卡惹
2014-05-19 21:15 Atrue: 那两个nc收到了吗？
2014-05-19 21:16 Yoshino-Sakura: 收到了
2014-05-19 21:16 Atrue: 家音效？
2014-05-19 21:16 Yoshino-Sakura: 我觉得还是要加tv的
2014-05-19 21:16 Yoshino-Sakura: 因为full都出了
2014-05-19 21:16 Yoshino-Sakura: 上次三妖没加都被要加了
2014-05-19 21:18 Atrue: http://puu.sh/8Sujx.png
2014-05-19 21:18 Atrue: 唉。。我觉得还是不加
2014-05-19 21:18 Atrue: 这是rc
2014-05-19 21:18 Yoshino-Sakura: 嗯
2014-05-19 21:18 Yoshino-Sakura: 改了title变成两张图惹
2014-05-19 21:19 Atrue: 那也是得改啊。。。
2014-05-19 21:19 Yoshino-Sakura: 现在哪一张rank的tv没加啊
2014-05-19 21:19 Atrue: 我是害怕被挑。。到时候还得提心吊胆
2014-05-19 21:20 Yoshino-Sakura: 额
2014-05-19 21:20 Atrue: 01:01:573 - 这里也是漏音效
2014-05-19 21:20 Atrue: 别纠结了，要不要提心吊胆你来决定
2014-05-19 21:21 Yoshino-Sakura: fixed
2014-05-19 21:21 Atrue: kiai加hitsound volume 到80%，70声音还是不够大
2014-05-19 21:22 Yoshino-Sakura: 前面的都fix惹
2014-05-19 21:22 Atrue: 好
2014-05-19 21:23 Atrue: 01:19:391 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 我感觉打击感不够，soft音效还是太软
2014-05-19 21:24 Atrue: 嘛。。不怎么好改
2014-05-19 21:24 Yoshino-Sakura: 我先吃个药
2014-05-19 21:24 Atrue: 好
2014-05-19 21:25 Yoshino-Sakura: hhh
2014-05-19 21:25 Atrue: 缺音效文件。。就先这样吧
2014-05-19 21:26 Yoshino-Sakura: 我柑橘音乐里面木有的sound都不加
2014-05-19 21:26 Yoshino-Sakura: 爱抚不是这么想的。。
2014-05-19 21:26 Atrue: 但是这小串子也是听上去有点弱了
2014-05-19 21:26 Atrue: 另外从排列上
2014-05-19 21:27 Atrue: 算了，这里问题不大
2014-05-19 21:27 Yoshino-Sakura: 日本流和天潮流没法交流
2014-05-19 21:28 Atrue: 大概就这样，不改太多了
2014-05-19 21:30 Atrue: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/404687 YELL - Kanojo ga Flag wo Tateru Riyuu (TV Size) [Insane]]
2014-05-19 21:30 Atrue: 好你的diff
2014-05-19 21:31 Atrue: 00:04:482 (1,2,3,4) - 吐个槽而已，这样的梗我觉得还是有点莫名
2014-05-19 21:31 Yoshino-Sakura: 我到底是加名字还是cv啊
2014-05-19 21:31 Atrue: 嗯？
2014-05-19 21:31 Atrue: tag吗？
2014-05-19 21:31 Atrue: artist就写YELL
2014-05-19 21:31 Atrue: tag不管cv还是角色名都写进去
2014-05-19 21:31 Atrue: 多了也是不算过
2014-05-19 21:32 Yoshino-Sakura: 嗯
2014-05-19 21:32 Yoshino-Sakura: 我只能写日文了
2014-05-19 21:32 Yoshino-Sakura: 翻译不来
2014-05-19 21:32 Atrue: 日文就行

Call me back when you are ready.

Momochikun

Joined October 2012

Momochikun 2014-05-20T02:25:20+00:00

Fixed the stuffs, thanks

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Atrue

osu! Alumni

Joined July 2012

Atrue 2014-05-20T14:34:49+00:00

Ok~ Rechecked and every thing looks fine~

Good luck!
Bubbled~

BeatofIke

Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 2014-05-23T04:15:07+00:00

This map is mine!
Modding this tomorrow!

EDIT: Modding time!

[Mochi's Easy]

00:39:391 (1,2,3) - This pattern can be better:

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00:58:300 (3) - A bit awkward slider. Just an observation.
01:14:300 (1,2,3) - I was thinking of doing this, but people will hate me for this especally for Easy difficulty XD
Image (for the lolz)
01:17:937 (2) - Not sure if you noticed or done intentionally, but this slider would match the rhythm better if you end it a red tick later at 01:18:664 (3). In addition, you could also blanket this slider with 01:20:119 (2) if you like.
01:24:300 (2) - Think it's better to just start this slider at 01:24:119 for better polarity and to follow the vocals better.
01:36:119 (2) - You can blanket this slider a tad bit better. Not really necessary though, I'm just giving suggestions.

EDIT: Mochi requested the mapper permission to fix diff: http://puu.sh/8ZanG.png

[Fycho's Hard]

For difficulty spread purposes, I recommend OD6 for difficulty since Normal difficulty only has OD4.
00:06:846 (4) - This clap sounds too loud compare to the music. I suggest reducing the clap volume here!
01:08:846 (1,2) - You could make these sliders parallel if you like.

[yf's Insane]

~~Very awkward flow imo. I'll need a few test-plays for this difficulty, before I can consider this for ranking.~~
EDIT: I received a test play from a skilled player and they give it a pass!

That's it for now! Fix the following and call me back!

Fycho

Global Moderator

Joined August 2012

Fycho 2014-05-23T15:37:42+00:00

BeatofIke wrote:
[Fycho's Hard]
For difficulty spread purposes, I recommend OD6 for difficulty since Normal difficulty only has OD4.fixed
00:06:846 (4) - This clap sounds too loud compare to the music. I suggest reducing the clap volume here!fixed
01:08:846 (1,2) - You could make these sliders parallel if you like.oh, this is on purpose

thanks~

EDIT: fixed a rhythm mistake.

osu file format v12

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Creator:Yoshino-Sakura
Version:Fycho's Hard
Source:彼女がフラグをおられたら
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275,263,71937,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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267,91,78482,1,6,0:0:0:0:
185,136,78664,6,0,P|139:131|106:117,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2014-05-23T15:50:43+00:00

BeatofIke wrote:
[yf's Insane]
Very awkward flow imo. I'll need a few test-plays for this difficulty, before I can consider this for ranking.

Oh>.<Ike
I think you may worry about the kiai part? Maybe 3/4 slider+note is hard to play...And mainly jumps are not equidistant and hard to play well?
Yes. I did these jumps since the music have ups and downs. I try to fit the music in fact... And I think the flow have no problem...
Thank you for modding and really thank you for your understanding... I did this map after lots of consideration...

BeatofIke

Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 2014-05-24T17:03:05+00:00

Rankku!

YoshinoSakura

Joined January 2011

Topic Starter

YoshinoSakura 2014-05-24T17:05:23+00:00

BeatofIke wrote:
Rankku!

more ike plz >w<

Fycho

Global Moderator

Joined August 2012

Fycho 2014-05-24T17:05:24+00:00

ome~ !

Maboyu

Joined November 2011

Maboyu 2014-05-24T17:10:02+00:00

恭喜RK>.<

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2014-05-25T01:00:54+00:00

wa

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