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Kiyoura Natsumi - Hanabi

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GENDER BLENDER
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GENDER BLENDER
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 26 April 2014 at 19:32:14

Artist: Kiyoura Natsumi
Title: Hanabi
Source: Tamayura~Hitotose~
Tags: Tamayura ~hitotose~ Vocal Album - nanode.
BPM: 146
Filesize: 6566kb
Play Time: 04:24
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.82 stars, 586 notes)
  2. Insane (4.99 stars, 781 notes)
  3. Normal (3.42 stars, 353 notes)
Download: Kiyoura Natsumi - Hanabi
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My second attempt at Beatmapping~
Really calm song from Tamayura~ Hitotose~
Thanks to Mikhail712 for the combo burst!
Mods are welcome ^_^
Timeline
16.04.2014: Submitted
19.04.2014: Tuned the timing settings, should be better with this new timing. Also made the Normal difficulty a lot easier...
23.04.2014: Thanks to -Asagi for mod!
Last edited by GENDER BLENDER , edited 2 times in total.
Asagi
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Joined March 2013
Asagi
Hello :3
from my queue

[General]
  1. Reduce the hitsound volume of ALL diffs into 30-40% , its not really good to hear a soft song with a very loud hitsound
  2. Remove unnecessary red line,their is not reason to overuse so many timing point since all of them are the same BPM
  3. Audio Lead-in conflict (AiMod)
  4. Your Mp3 audio bitrate is not 192kbps

[Insane]
  1. 00:08:382 (6,1,2) - stack this 3, making a jump here is kinda confusing
  2. 00:17:012 (10) - NC here
  3. 00:22:354 (10) - ^
  4. 00:31:806 (5) - ^
  5. 00:34:889 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - why stream here? i cant hear any stream-like sound here, remove this stream here and change it into something
  6. 00:37:971 (8) - change it into slider so it can emphasize the vocal well
  7. 00:38:382 (9) - NC here since the vocal pitch change
  8. 00:43:930 (8) - NC
  9. 00:55:847 (11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - unnecessary stream again, remove this, follow the vocals instead
  10. 00:56:875 (1) - the spinner starts here 00:56:464 -
  11. 01:01:190 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is kinda confusing, the 1/2 jump is the same pattern as the triples , 01:01:806 (3,4,5) - move this somewhere
  12. 01:02:628 (8) - NC
  13. 01:21:829 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - again, remove this, youre just overmapping it , dont make your own rhythm
  14. 01:49:261 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - ^
  15. 02:03:850 (7) - NC
  16. 03:13:709 (5) - unrankable, this slider is out of range, put it down

I checked the other diffs, just minor stuff, insane needs more work
Good Luck ;3
GENDER BLENDER
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Joined July 2012
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GENDER BLENDER
Thank you very much for your mod! :)
Remove unnecessary red line,their is not reason to overuse so many timing point since all of them are the same BPM
Hmm, when I tried to map it, the timing always seemed to go out of beat, so I ended up adding a lot of them... maybe I should get someone check the timing.
Audio Lead-in conflict (AiMod)
But I'm sure I put the same lead-in (1000ms) in all the .osu files... and AiMod didn't show that when I checked it before submitting... o.O
00:34:889 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - why stream here? i cant hear any stream-like sound here, remove this stream here and change it into something
00:55:847 (11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - unnecessary stream again, remove this, follow the vocals instead
01:21:829 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - again, remove this, youre just overmapping it , dont make your own rhythm
01:49:261 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - ^
I initially had spaced triples here, which kind of didn't flow well... so I made them into spaced streams instead, which seemed to be better. I don't know if I should remove the streams and make into spaced triples, or let them be. Q.Q

Thank you very much for your suggestions; I'll try my best to make the map better. ^_^
10crystalmask01
10crystalmask01
Hey, timing check here - the BPM is correct, but adjust the offset to 569.

As said in your previous mod, you don't need that many timing points, so please remove all the other red lines after the first one.
Good luck!
GENDER BLENDER
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Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
GENDER BLENDER

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Hey, timing check here - the BPM is correct, but adjust the offset to 569.
Hi,

My previous timing setting had 569 offset, but the music gets a bit out of beat at ~3:29 min, so I probably have to add an uninherited timing section for playability. Can you please recheck the timing at ~3:29m? It comes back on beat at ~3:37m.

Thank you very much. ^_^

-Asagi wrote:

Reduce the hitsound volume of ALL diffs into 30-40% , its not really good to hear a soft song with a very loud hitsound
Audio Lead-in conflict (AiMod)
Your Mp3 audio bitrate is not 192kbps
Taken care of these issues, thanks! :)
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