Spec's DelugeNote : Well, the overall pattern is truly shows your mapping stlye
. but there's some stream part that you should check.
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G = a suggestion that not too important to change
Y = a suggestion that seems need to be change
R = You Should Change it !!
00:14:554 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - nah , raise stream distance
*pic it'll suits with the next pattern
Y sorry, but I think it's ok00:17:633 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - well, using a straight stream like that after hyperjump i think it's bad idea because it will easily fail to catch.
imo , i suggest you should try this pattern
*pic, it'll make a nicer flow after hyperjump & the next part
Y fixed!00:18:265 (1,2,3) - *just an extra to adjust the distance if you apply the changes above. ^
G fixed!00:19:212 (4) - move it a bit to left ( like x = 428) to make the next jump nicer to catch
Y moved00:24:344 (4,5,6) - raise the stream distance like the part i've pointed before. (It just a little suggestion because it feels a bit trolling because it looks easied to catch withot moving)
G 00:30:265 (4,5) - imo , it feels nicer to catch if you make the slider a bit curved
G fixed00:34:686 (1,2,3) -
*High Chain Red jump Detected* ,I suggest , you should move 00:34:923 (2) - to right (like X = 128) because if you keep this part, it'lll make your diff bad
R moved to X = 11200:35:949 (1,2,3,4) - imo, it feels better to using slider here instead of circle
G you're right, fixed~00:37:212 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - *same case like 00:14:554 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7)
G sorry00:40:054 (2) - i suggest you should ctrl+g this slider to make the next part a bit nicer to catch
Y I want to keep those red jumps, sorry!00:44:791 (1,2) - well, i think you should make this part like the next one (00:49:844 (1,2) - ) because it'll fit better.
Y great00:58:528 (5) - * change it into normal beat instead of repeated slider
Y changed it something like
this01:10:212 (2) - try this placement ,to make a nicer effect
*Pic G thanks01:13:212 (3,4,5) - well it's a bit tricky to catch this part generally (especialy this 01:13:370 (4) - slider) i suggest you should adjust the pattern to make that a bit easier to catch
Y umm.. I should think more about this pattern to make it easier. thanks~01:25:212 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - uhmm, i think you should make this part more vary,
G sorry01:54:265 (1,2) - *too far distance (it's ok to me to make a bitter ending , but at least make the distance not too long)
G sorry, but I think it's not too long for me