kanpakyin wrote:

等一下我把最新版的Taiko up上來

IamKwaN wrote:

Hi, new mapper request

General

1. Take this BG, I have resized it to 1024*768, which is a standard ratio, for you: http://puu.sh/bgRcF/4a974d3b92.jpg-猴
2. Taiko難度不用Video-notepad里删掉了;w;不知道行不行
3. Remove the tag '一週間フレンズ。' as it's in the source. Add 'tv size' instead.-好，去掉了
4. Disable Widescreen Support for all diffs as there is no storyboard.-关掉啦
5. S:C4也加個靜音sliderslide,不加的話前奏的音效有點吵.-added

Insane

1. 00:05:217 (3) - 因為這鼓點弱的可憐,所以用滑條尾比用圓圈更適合,將00:04:990 (2,3) - 換成滑條-好，稍微改了一下排列
2. 00:05:444 (5) - Drum finish-done
3. 00:05:672 (6) - Drum clap-done
4. 00:10:217 (2,3) - 可以大約包一下-包了一下
5. 00:18:285 (5) - 我感覺這overmap了,沒有吉他的聲音,刪除-好，改了一下排列;w;
6. 00:21:353 (3) - 這個角度好不舒服,嘗試跟00:22:035 (4)堆疊一下-叠好啦
7. 00:21:694 (2) - Drum finish sounds better as it isn't that high pitch or you can even remove it.-改成drum finish了
8. 00:22:035 (4,6) - 交換音效,(4)finish (6)clap,(6)的鼓點比較響,00:22:148 (5,7) 的whistle能不能去掉-好，(5,7)的whistle去掉了
9. 00:23:172 (2,4) - 可以stack更好; 00:54:308 (3,3) - 01:11:126 (5,2,4,5) - 01:14:308 (4,1) - 01:21:126 (3,1) - 01:20:672 (1,1) - 也是-fixed
10. 00:26:012 - 可以放3連,背後有吉他聲,但好像整個pattern都會被破壞,所以還是算了吧lol-于是没有放;w;
11. 00:37:035 (1) - 尾巴轉成drum clap,背景音樂沒有cymbal; 00:38:853 (1) - 00:40:672 (1) - 同樣-改好啦
12. 00:37:717 (2,3,4,5) - DS有點隨機,嘗試按DS放然後用CTRL+G的功能: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1991119 --好，改了
13. 00:38:399 (5,5,4) - drum clap instead of normal sampleset?-好的w
14. 00:49:535 (1,2) - 交換NC,因為00:49:990 (2)才開始大跳-fixed
15. 01:04:308 (1,2,3,4) - DS誤導,01:04:308 (1,2)是1/2,01:04:535 (2,3)是1/4跳,但距離差不多,可以把(1)放遠點-好的
16. 01:04:762 (3) - CTRL+G的話flow會比較好,跟01:05:672 (5,6) 類似: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1991155 -好~
17. 01:17:944 (3,4) - 兩個滑條在中間比較舒服耶,01:17:490 (2,3)的移動我testplay了幾次都覺得很彆扭,改了的話01:18:853 (1)也是一個跳 -稍微改了一下，然后(1)放远了一些
18. 01:25:444 (1) - 不用NC? 我看00:03:626 (4)也沒有NC-NC 删掉了

Melt's Hard

1. SL用0.3有啥特別的意義嗎? 我感覺比Insane還要小有點好奇-为了避免自动堆叠
2. 00:04:308 (1) - 尾巴的normal whistle超不合曲,非常違和, soft-whistle please.-done
3. 00:07:490 (5) - Drum finish.-done
4. 00:14:990 (1) - 碰到下面的誤差提示條-done
5. 00:15:899 (2) - Soft whistle.-done
6. 00:21:353 (4,8) - 不要用drum whistle,clap已經足夠-done
7. 00:27:944 (1) - 怎麼中間的點出界了-泡泡说过，开EZ不出界就可以
8. 00:27:262 (5) - Remove clap on tail.-done
9. 00:32:035 (7) - Finish on tail.-done
10. 00:32:717 (1,2) - Drum claps?-done
11. 00:46:581 (2) - Missing clap.-done
12. 00:58:853 (1) - Finish on head.-done
13. 01:13:399 (1) - ^ -done
14. 01:20:558 (1) - Shorten to 01:22:262 as there's a much louder whistle.-done and add whistle at 01:22:262
15. 01:24:308 (1) - Whistle.-done

Normal

1. kiai跟其他的難度不同是kiai结束那里吗？修正了;w;
2. OD5太高啦,畢竟最低難度,4就好了吧-好
3. 有很多多餘綠線: 00:02:262 - 00:03:172 - 00:05:899 - 00:06:581 - 00:07:944 - 00:37:035 - 00:37:262 - 00:40:672 - 00:40:899 - 00:52:944-删掉惹
4. 00:05:444 (2) - Drum finish.-fixed
5. 00:22:035 (4) - Drum clap.-fixed
6. 00:37:035 (1,1,1) - 尾巴全部轉成drum clap as Insane.-fixed
7. 01:01:126 (5) - DS-好
8. 01:25:899 (4) - NC這個,這種堆疊方式有點難讀-ok，NC

Call me back!

IamKwaN wrote:

Did some hitsound adjustments. Looks good now!

Log

12:44 OblivioN: 骏喵w我改好啦
12:44 IamKwaN: 好的
14:01 IamKwaN: o_O
14:01 OblivioN: ;w;
14:01 IamKwaN: 00:05:444 (4) - 
14:02 IamKwaN: 現在是soft-finish
14:02 OblivioN: orz
14:02 IamKwaN: lol
14:02 OblivioN: 不知道什么时候开了additions w;w;
14:02 OblivioN: 去掉了;w;
14:02 IamKwaN: haha
14:03 OblivioN: 改晕了……
14:03 IamKwaN: loll
14:03 IamKwaN: 我好像寫得有點長
14:03 OblivioN: qwq
14:03 OblivioN: 是的
14:03 IamKwaN: qwq
14:04 OblivioN: qwq
14:04 IamKwaN: ww
14:04 OblivioN: 明明核对了好几遍最后还是出错orz我也是相当服气我自己
14:05 IamKwaN: www
14:06 OblivioN: go on go on！
14:06 IamKwaN: :3 好的
14:06 OblivioN: w
14:11 IamKwaN: 00:07:262 (3) - 這個clap去掉
14:11 OblivioN: 好
14:12 IamKwaN: 00:07:490 (4) - drum finish
14:13 OblivioN: 好
14:13 IamKwaN: 00:07:717 (5) - drum whistle
14:13 IamKwaN: 00:07:831 (6) - 去掉whistle
14:13 IamKwaN: 中間那條90%可以刪除
14:13 OblivioN: ok
14:13 OblivioN: 好的
14:16 IamKwaN: 00:07:944 (1) - drum clap
14:17 OblivioN: 好
14:18 IamKwaN: 00:53:285 (8,1) - 可以跟00:52:944 (7) - 分開一點點
14:18 OblivioN: 好
14:20 OblivioN: http://puu.sh/bmgoe/2b6bf9071f.png
14:20 OblivioN: 这样可以吗？
14:20 IamKwaN: 可以哇
14:20 OblivioN: ok哇
14:21 IamKwaN: 00:05:444 (5) - drum finish
14:21 IamKwaN: 00:05:672 (6) - drum clap
14:21 IamKwaN: Hard
14:22 OblivioN: 好
14:25 IamKwaN: 00:27:944 (1) - 這個保險一點放左一點
14:26 OblivioN: 好
14:27 OblivioN: http://puu.sh/bmgFO/de722d3a4d.png
14:28 OblivioN: 弄成这样了
14:28 IamKwaN: haohaohao
14:28 OblivioN: 嗯
14:31 IamKwaN: 01:24:308 (1) - lol 這個不用whistle 我沙皮
14:31 OblivioN: 好
14:31 OblivioN: 你moe w
14:32 IamKwaN: >.<
14:34 IamKwaN: 01:20:558 - normal
14:34 IamKwaN: kiai --> 01:20:672 - 
14:34 IamKwaN: end
14:35 IamKwaN: Normal
14:35 OblivioN: 好;w;
14:35 IamKwaN: 01:20:558 - 這個kiai end移到01:20:672 - 
14:35 OblivioN: 好
14:39 IamKwaN: 00:00:672 (1) - DS
14:39 IamKwaN: 00:04:308 (1) - ^
14:40 OblivioN: 好
14:41 IamKwaN: 00:46:126 - 這個fnish可去掉
14:41 IamKwaN: insane那個也去掉
14:42 IamKwaN: 背景好像沒cymbal
14:42 OblivioN: 好的
14:43 IamKwaN: 01:20:672 (1) - whistle
14:44 OblivioN: 好
14:44 IamKwaN: 先update
14:45 OblivioN: 嗯w
14:47 OblivioN: 好了
14:47 IamKwaN: 好
14:47 OblivioN: 等下等下
14:47 IamKwaN: lol
14:47 OblivioN: insane？
14:47 OblivioN: 等下
14:47 OblivioN: 看错了
14:48 IamKwaN: lol
14:49 OblivioN: 好了;w;
14:49 IamKwaN: 好233
14:52 IamKwaN: lol 怎麼00:53:285 (8,1) - 
14:52 OblivioN: 卧槽……那两个地方怎么有粘到以求了orz
14:52 OblivioN: 一起去了
14:52 IamKwaN: lolll
14:54 IamKwaN:  00:07:717 (5) - drum whistle o_O
14:54 IamKwaN: 00:07:831 (6) - 這個whistle不要 Insane O_o
14:54 OblivioN: ;w;我疯了
14:54 OblivioN: 改好了的怎么save上传又成原来的样子了
14:54 IamKwaN: loll
14:55 IamKwaN: 有些改了
14:55 IamKwaN: 有些沒改ww
14:55 OblivioN: ;w;
14:55 OblivioN: mad
14:55 OblivioN: 90的线也给我保存的好好的orzorzorzorz
14:56 IamKwaN: ww
14:56 OblivioN: 我再去确认一遍;w;
14:56 IamKwaN: 恩恩ww
15:04 OblivioN: 这下
15:04 OblivioN: 真的
15:04 OblivioN: 好了
15:04 IamKwaN: 233 好
15:04 OblivioN: ;w;
15:14 IamKwaN: hard耶
15:14 IamKwaN: Macuilxochitl
15:14 IamKwaN: 阿
15:14 IamKwaN: 複製錯了==
15:14 OblivioN: ;w;?
15:14 IamKwaN: 00:37:717 (2) - 尾巴drum finish
15:14 IamKwaN: 00:38:172 (3) - 尾巴drum clap
15:14 OblivioN: 好
15:15 IamKwaN: 00:39:535 (2,3) - 這裡都是
15:15 OblivioN: ok
15:15 IamKwaN: 00:41:353 (2,3) - ^
15:15 OblivioN: 嗯嗯
15:15 IamKwaN: 00:42:944 (3) - 頭drum clap 尾soft finish
15:16 OblivioN: 好
15:18 IamKwaN: 做好了叫我
15:19 OblivioN: 好;w;
15:19 IamKwaN: 不用update
15:19 IamKwaN: 一會兒再up
15:19 IamKwaN: insane這個stack好00:16:581 (5,1) - 
15:19 OblivioN: 嗯;w;我先出个门;w; 4学校老师有事找我;w;
15:19 IamKwaN: 好w
15:19 OblivioN: 估计不久就回来
15:19 OblivioN: ;w;
15:19 OblivioN: sorrrrrrry
15:19 IamKwaN: 好哇w
15:19 IamKwaN: 沒事o.o
15:19 OblivioN: 嗯嗯w
16:55 OblivioN: 回来啦;w;
16:55 IamKwaN: 終於回來啦!!!
16:55 IamKwaN: 還打算去跑步lol
16:55 IamKwaN: Insane w
16:56 OblivioN: ;w;
16:56 OblivioN: 好w
16:56 IamKwaN: 00:16:581 (5,1) - stack好 美麗
16:57 IamKwaN: 然後我看看normal
16:57 OblivioN: 嗯w
16:57 IamKwaN: 00:07:490 (3) - normal這裡drum finish
16:58 OblivioN: 好w
16:58 IamKwaN: 00:07:944 (1) - head drum clap
16:59 OblivioN: 好
17:00 IamKwaN: 美麗
17:00 OblivioN: 好，我upload  w
17:00 IamKwaN: wait!!!
17:00 OblivioN: ;w;
17:01 IamKwaN: insane的kiai在01:20:672 - end
17:02 OblivioN: 好
17:04 IamKwaN: update please :D
17:04 OblivioN: 好:D
17:04 IamKwaN: :D
17:11 OblivioN: 我自己check一下w
17:11 IamKwaN: w
17:13 OblivioN: 好了w
17:13 IamKwaN: 好w

Taiko'd: p/3148737

Bubbled! ლ(╹◡╹ლ )

kanpakyin wrote:

http://puu.sh/bmInE.zip
Muzu進行了簡化工程
順便麻煩把Muzukashii的diff name換成 -> Taiko Muzukashii
(Oni我好像沒update就改了 -.- metadata甚麼的麻煩了)

把這些東西fix掉可以找IamKwan rebub

IamKwaN wrote:

kanpakyin wrote:

http://puu.sh/bmInE.zip
Muzu進行了簡化工程
順便麻煩把Muzukashii的diff name換成 -> Taiko Muzukashii
(Oni我好像沒update就改了 -.- metadata甚麼的麻煩了)

把這些東西fix掉可以找IamKwan rebub

哈哈哈哈 怕了Ono?

kanpakyin wrote:

http://puu.sh/bmInE.zip
Muzu進行了簡化工程
順便麻煩把Muzukashii的diff name換成 -> Taiko Muzukashii
(Oni我好像沒update就改了 -.- metadata甚麼的麻煩了)

把這些東西fix掉可以找IamKwan rebub

IamKwaN wrote:

Hey wait guys, I have a concern over the Oni diff. Is 1.5 SV rankable? I have no idea at all about Taiko. @kpy

Tari wrote:

I have to say something before mod :

The gap between Normal and Hard are HUGE.

I'd think you should rename Normal to Easy and make a Harder Normal.

Tari wrote:

I have to say something before mod :

The gap between Normal and Hard are HUGE.

I'd think you should rename Normal to Easy and make a Harder Normal.

Sellenite wrote:

normal

poooop

23:17 Sellenite: hi，有没有空irc啊
23:17 *Sellenite is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/497538 Kon Natsumi - Niji no Kakera [Normal]]
23:17 OblivioN: 好好好w
23:18 Sellenite: 00:04:990 (2,3) - 换个节奏，等我截图，这里漏音了
23:18 OblivioN: 好
23:19 Sellenite: http://puu.sh/btqgP/9c692a8f48.png
23:19 Sellenite: 00:13:399 (4) - NC吧
23:20 OblivioN: 好
23:20 OblivioN: 诶，这里为什么nc呢
23:20 Sellenite: 其实你这里的nc我觉得下得怪怪的
23:20 Sellenite: 连续几个都是
23:20 Sellenite: 你按什么来下的？
23:20 OblivioN: ;w;
23:21 OblivioN: 因为之前听说是隔一个大白线下一个
23:21 Sellenite: 这里NC效果挺好的，重音
23:21 Sellenite: 然后00:15:217 (3) -
23:21 Sellenite: 取消NC
23:21 OblivioN: 好
23:21 OblivioN: 好;w;
23:21 Sellenite: 00:17:035 (6) - NC
23:21 OblivioN: 唉，看来nc我还是没搞懂
23:21 OblivioN: 好
23:22 Sellenite: 调整了一下重音的NC
23:22 OblivioN: soga
23:22 OblivioN: 重音原来nc哦
23:22 Sellenite: 后面你才是隔一条大白线NC一次
23:22 OblivioN: soga ;w;
23:23 Sellenite: 01:02:490 (1,2) - 不知道能不能漂亮点ww
23:23 Sellenite: 不过没什么关系
23:23 OblivioN: 好;w;
23:23 Sellenite: 01:17:035 (1) - 爷爷..你这个
23:23 OblivioN: 其实摆了半天
23:24 Sellenite: ds呀
23:24 OblivioN: ctrl g? ;w;
23:24 Sellenite: 你ctrl+g的话后面的也要改
23:25 OblivioN: 嗯
23:25 OblivioN: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2021150
23:26 OblivioN: 弄成这样了;w;
23:26 Sellenite: 233
23:26 OblivioN: 似乎？;w;可以吗？
23:26 Sellenite: 没问题了
23:27 OblivioN: 吼吼w
23:29 OblivioN: 还有呢还有呢
23:30 Sellenite: 没问题了啊...
23:30 Sellenite: 找不出什么大家伙
23:30 OblivioN: 其实我总觉得
23:30 OblivioN: 01:20:672 (1,2) -
23:30 OblivioN: 这里的声音有点别扭
23:31 Sellenite: 指的是？
23:31 Sellenite: 节奏还是音效
23:31 OblivioN: 感觉比后面的要尖锐……
23:31 Sellenite: 哦对
23:32 Sellenite: 这里其实统一比较好
23:32 OblivioN: soga
23:32 Sellenite: 就是两个物件在时间轴上对调
23:32 OblivioN: 那就都55？
23:32 Sellenite: 不，我指的另一方面..
23:32 OblivioN: 噢~懂了
23:32 Sellenite: 因为你看后面
23:32 OblivioN: note在前面
23:32 Sellenite: 都是叮在折返的后面
23:33 OblivioN: soga
23:33 Sellenite: 01:20:672 这里放circle
23:33 OblivioN: 哦哦哦
23:33 Sellenite: 01:20:899 (1) - 这里放折返
23:33 Sellenite: 01:20:899
23:33 Sellenite: 注意把音效修正
23:33 OblivioN: 知道了w
23:34 OblivioN: 3Q XD
23:34 Sellenite: 恩，没问题了， 我po了
23:34 OblivioN: 好www
23:35 OblivioN: 麻烦啦XD
23:35 Sellenite: 啊等等
23:35 Sellenite: 01:24:081
23:35 Sellenite: 这里
23:35 Sellenite: 不要那个叮的音效
23:35 OblivioN: 好
23:35 Sellenite: ok
23:35 OblivioN: 顺耳多了w
23:36 Sellenite: 恩，那个叮很刺耳
23:36 Sellenite: 睡觉w

fm4a93au04 wrote:

哈囉來摸 ~

fm4a93au04's standard modding queue

不讓我摸 H 是對的 =ㄦ= .

做太好我也摸不出啥 ...

My 摸ding

[Easy]

* N-H = Normal Hit

* N-F = Normal Finish

其他類推 .

00:15:217 (1,2) – 我覺得 Easy 還是別出這種重疊比較好 . 新手有機率GG .

00:22:490 (1,2) – 我覺得連續鈴聲怪怪的 … 把2頭上的鈴聲拿掉比較好 .

00:24:762 (4) . 00:26:581 (1,2) . 比照辦理 =ㄦ= . ( 覺得還好就無視我 )

00:34:990 (3) – 放在 ( x,y ) – ( 212,260 ) 或 ( 208,260 ) . 原先的放置給人沒 Blanket 好的印象 . 也有可能是我的問題 …

00:44:308 (1,2,3,4,5) – 這裡跟 1/2 beat 有點呆板 , 試試 :



圖中的 1,2 也可以合成一個折返 .

00:47:944 (1,1) – 後面的轉盤太短了 ( 其實前面的也有點勉強 ) . 建議合成一個大轉盤 =ㄦ= .

00:51:581 (1,3) – 建議不要讓 N-F 那麼頻繁 , 一個 8 拍一次就好 , 因為它會蓋掉你的 N-H . 我會比較傾向於在這一段突出N-H .

00:58:399 (4) – 這個地方 … 你放了一個鼓聲 ( N:C1-C ) , 可是因為你用了N-H當底聲 , 基本上都被 N-H 蓋掉了 , 聽不出來 ( 要不是開編輯器根本沒感覺 ) … 建議把你的那個鼓聲當底 , N-H 當 C 來用會比較好 . 這樣可以更大程度的突出N-H . 不過要改好像挺麻煩 … 若覺得還好就先放著吧 =ㄦ= .

01:11:581 (4) – 再結尾也加個 N:C1-W 吧 =ㄦ= . 那個音效超讚的 =ㄦ= + .

01:13:853 (2) – 我總覺得把他 Reverse 會比較好 ?

時間軸 :



排列範例 :



01:16:581 (1,2,3,4) – 我會這樣排 :



或 :



我個人不喜歡老是跟 1/2 , 而且在最後面放個簡單卻不同於之前的 Rhythm , 感覺可以當殺必死 = = + . <- 若你覺得是我的錯覺便無視罷

01:25:899 (1) – 這顆心 … 感覺怪怪的 … 自己試著做了 2 顆 :



阿~~~~ (( 閃逃 ~~~~ 做得超爛的 XD

沒有啦 = = . 原先的感覺上面有點空 :



只是希望他的頭尾可以拉近一點 .

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00:00:672 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) – 這個沒問題嘛 … 感覺距離一直變 =ㄦ= . 我想到了一個自認頗帥的梗 , 希望能幫上忙@W@ ” :-啊，这个没有问题的哦，我是按ds排的，你的这个梗也蛮帅气





以下說明是上面圖中的東西 ( 在你的圖裡找不到很正常 =ㄦ= ) :

1. 00:00:672 (1,2,3,4) 這組向下平移 .

2. 00:01:808 (4,5,6) 各轉 120 度 .

00:04:308 (1,2,3) – 這組小調整 .

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00:19:535 (2,3,4) – Normal 好像不能這樣疊 ( 之前有人摸我圖的時候對我這麼說 =ㄦ= 我有很多這種梗 , 害我改超久 …… ) … 再觀察看看好了 . 其他人也這麼說的時候再改 .-我之前也有这样叠过;w;在十六夜樱（ranked）里，看看bat怎么说吧

00:20:672 (4,6) – 擺開一點比較好看 .-好，往下移动了一些

00:21:581 (6) – 鍋牛欸 ~ @W@ + ~~~~ !!! <- PUNCH HIM ~~ ! -www

00:45:672 (4) – 既然決定要跟鼓就跟到底吧 . 這裡改成圈比較好 ( 我在這裡預期要要跟鼓結果突然 Vocal 害我有點無力 … ) . 或者 , 把 3 改成短滑條也不錯 ~ 剛好就是一個越來越快漸層效果 ^^ .

最終結果我覺得這樣最好 =ㄦ= 剛好作為此段結尾殺必死 :



然後鼓聲N-H還是放在同樣那 4 個地方 .

以後還是放圖吧 = = … 廢話一堆也不知道自己在幹麻 …

00:47:490 (7) – 鈴聲或 N-F 選一個吧 . 這兩個性質差太多合起來效果不佳 … 一個是高亮短暫性 , 一個是有低音附有延展效果 . 個人覺得合起來效果不佳 , 不如選一個放 , 或乾脆 N-H . 另外 00:44:308 . 00:46:126 . 也可以選擇性加入此鈴聲 .

01:00:217 (4,5) – Blanket 開一點比較好看 imo . <- 中英混血式

01:02:490 (1,2) - ~~~~~~~~~~~ 說好的 Blanket呢 = = ?-这里实在是非常不好弄，上去一点就和01:02:035 (7) - overlap了……

01:12:490 (6) – 把頭的鈴聲擺到尾巴去 .

01:13:399 (1,2) – 間距請修正為 x1.2 .-oh！！好好好

01:16:581 (7) – 改成一個點 , 為接下來的連續短 Slider 做個停頓 .-good idea！

01:17:035 (1,2,3,4) – 這裡音效略顯粗糙 , 咚咚咚質感不好 . 試著降低音量 , 或者去掉 1,2,3 尾巴的 N-H .为了和别的diff统一这里就算了;w;

=W= Nice 音效 ~ 給星星 ~

希望它可以被 Ranked ~ <- 英式中文 , Englinese ~~ ( 摸完快滾喇 ~ )

kanpakyin wrote:

https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/3378161/

:O)

[Kamiya] wrote:

先膜拜是四董
虽然应邀来摸图;w;
以我这种渣渣也摸不出什么了;w;
[easy]00:23:399 (2) - x:456 y:244 → x:452 y:244 fixed
00:32:944 (1,2) - 请换成1.0X的间距 后面的也要相对的进行移动惹-改了
00:34:081 (2,3) - 2移动后在x:284 y:324（slider前点）x:192 y:352(slider后点）并且将后点移至y:348-改啦
01:09:762 (1) - 移至x:324 y:92（可能会好看些? ;w;-k
01:18:399 (3) - x:232 y:208 → x:236 y:同-k
[normal]
00:02:717 (6,7) - 感觉断了 没有衔接上;w;？;w;slider改成直的了
00:11:581 (1,2) - 没包住的感觉;w;-这里不是blanket啊
[insane]
00:21:581 (1,2,3) -
00:24:081 (5,6) - 这两个地方的连打距离应该相等;w;-k
00:29:535 (5,6,1) - ^-这个不太好搞……
kiai部分的连打也是如此
00:54:990 (4,5,1) -
01:05:217 (1,2,3,4) - 这两个地方的连打距离也应该相等=w=吧
01:09:535 (6,7) - ^
改好了
因为音效部分我都没入门;w; 可能无法找出带有瑕疵的地方 所以就是这些啦
以上
good（also）luck(ranked）

Irie Miyuki wrote:

骗分

[Insane]
00:07:035 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - 身为一个强迫症 三角形没对好我有点痛苦-好好好，改了;w;
00:31:581 (1) - 有个重音 ctrl+G一下? -好主意~
00:32:262 (3) - 同上 反正滑条头都带了finish ctrl+G换个flow方向可能感觉会更好点?-这个试着ctrlg了一下，我个人的感觉不太好，先不改这里了;w;
00:34:535 (4) - 还是ctrl+G换方向 这样00:34:990 (1) - 就不会感觉是顺着下来的了 哎语文不好 .-.-挺好，改了
00:40:444 (6,1,2,3) - ...那个留下来的circle印感觉没有平行....(runs-看不出来吧大概……啊哈哈哈/me runs
00:49:535 (7,1,2,3) - 脑洞开了 觉得7这个滑条改成水平方向的比较好 后面三个circle也动一下.. ↓-棒棒棒！改了

SPOILER

01:17:944 (3,4) - 感觉这个flow不是很顺-自己试了一下感觉还好诶
01:21:808 (1,2,3) - 三角爆炸了-改改改w

好diff o3o

[Melt]
00:11:581 (1,2,3) - 不在一条直线上吗-移动了一下2
00:31:353 (6) - NC, 00:32:717 (1,4) - NC位置换一下?-k
00:43:853 (1,3) - 换NC?-k

还是节奏有点不符合我风格啊 o.o 不知怎么看了 别打我

[Normal]
妈呀 slider大师-哪有哪有
每个NC都太长了 都在8左右了 还是多加点NC-好，又加了一些nc
00:21:581 - 正在唱着突然就没obj了?? -这里是跟vocal的na的 ;w; 所以我举得还是保持这样就好
唔感觉这个normal还真是没什么好说的呢 xD 其实我挺喜欢这种风格 o3o

[Easy]
00:01:808 (2,3) - 搞个blanket?-好
00:47:944 (1,1) - 这个在normal里还好。。easy也这么搞合适吗。。-这个……我问问bat……
00:55:217 (1) - 这串combo都数到9了-加了nc


哈哈偷懒完毕 o3o 么么哒 不要嫌弃我渣摸

[Kamiya] wrote:

补充*
尝试着看看音效;w;
是妹儿贴的实在难摸/w\

Melt's Hard

1. 00:04:308 (1) - 感觉 soft-whistle会更好吧(并非单独本人意见
2. 00:07:490 (5) - drum finish也许会更好.
3. 01:24:308 (1) - 加whistle.

以上
实在不知道怎么摸/w\
GL

1. Widescreen support needs to be removed in normal diff.
2. Stack leniency in hard diff needs to be change back to 7.
3. Insane stack leniency needs to be changed back to 7 as well.

1. 00:03:626 (4) - Check the spacing. its different from regular 0.9
2. 00:08:853 (2) - Same, you need to check your spacing.
3. 00:15:217 (1) - Curve this slider more to fix spacing, and I don't like to use stacking sliders, in this diff can be confusing for newbie players. if you can should change imo.
4. 00:47:944 (1,1) - Better to just turn to 1 slider, will get same effect.

1. 00:14:081 (2) - Add a whistle to the start.
2. 00:59:990 (3,4) - The flow and the rhythm would be better if you turn to 1 slider. Remove 4 and turn 3 to a slider and add a reverse , it would fit the vocal much better,
3. 01:03:172 (2) - The blanket can be improved.
4. 01:18:399 (4) - Add a new combo here, the long break will hurt the drain. plus this breaks your pattern.
5. 01:25:899 (1) - End the spinner at 01:27:717 - to match with easy diff.

1. 00:14:990 (1) - Hmm 3/4 slider here, really strange, shorten to red tick and add a note on white tick. It'll follow better to me.
2. 00:21:581 (5) - New combo needs to be added here!
3. 00:31:353 (1) - Same, end as before end in red tick better.
4. 01:26:012 (1) - Same as normal, End the spinner at 01:27:717 - to match with easy diff

1. 00:30:444 (4) - So many notes blocking, I'd prefer you move somewhere else because of this. it might be hard to see the slider completely in this part D:
2. 00:36:581 (6) - New combo? the next jump is so sudden and big.
3. 00:50:444 (3) - Long pause needs new combo here.
4. 01:25:444 (5) - ^ Same but because this note is different from the rest.

Tari wrote:

[General]

1. Widescreen support needs to be removed in normal diff.-removed
2. Stack leniency in hard diff needs to be change back to 7. -k
3. Insane stack leniency needs to be changed back to 7 as well. -k

[Easy]

1. 00:03:626 (4) - Check the spacing. its different from regular 0.9-fixed
2. 00:08:853 (2) - Same, you need to check your spacing.-fixed
3. 00:15:217 (1) - Curve this slider more to fix spacing, and I don't like to use stacking sliders, in this diff can be confusing for newbie players. if you can should change imo.-fixed
4. 00:47:944 (1,1) - Better to just turn to 1 slider, will get same effect. -fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:14:081 (2) - Add a whistle to the start.-fixed
2. 00:59:990 (3,4) - The flow and the rhythm would be better if you turn to 1 slider. Remove 4 and turn 3 to a slider and add a reverse , it would fit the vocal much better,-fixed
3. 01:03:172 (2) - The blanket can be improved.-fixed
4. 01:18:399 (4) - Add a new combo here, the long break will hurt the drain. plus this breaks your pattern.-fixed
5. 01:25:899 (1) - End the spinner at 01:27:717 - to match with easy diff. -fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:14:990 (1) - Hmm 3/4 slider here, really strange, shorten to red tick and add a note on white tick. It'll follow better to me.-fixed
2. 00:21:581 (5) - New combo needs to be added here!-fixed
3. 00:31:353 (1) - Same, end as before end in red tick better.-its hard to make a better placement ：X
4. 01:26:012 (1) - Same as normal, End the spinner at 01:27:717 - to match with easy diff-fixed

[Insane]

1. 00:30:444 (4) - So many notes blocking, I'd prefer you move somewhere else because of this. it might be hard to see the slider completely in this part D:-fixed
2. 00:36:581 (6) - New combo? the next jump is so sudden and big.-fixed
3. 00:50:444 (3) - Long pause needs new combo here.-fixed
4. 01:25:444 (5) - ^ Same but because this note is different from the rest.-fixed

It's fine after you fix all of that.

Sonnyc wrote:

[Insane]
01:15:444 (2,3) - This seems to be a crucial distance error. I really hope this to be fixed before getting ranked.

1. Some missed htsound fixed
2. Fix some no reason jump placement in ins diff
3. Fix some cover make clear in ins diff