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The All-American Rejects - Fallin' Apart

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iPro_old
59 posts
Joined November 2008
Topic Starter
iPro_old
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, 19 December 2009 at 9:28:11 PM

Artist: The All-American Rejects
Title: Fallin' Apart
BPM: 128.06
Filesize: 8708kb
Play Time: 03:07
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4 stars, 225 notes)
  2. Normal (2.63 stars, 170 notes)
Download: The All-American Rejects - Fallin' Apart
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Enjoy :)
Last edited by iPro_old , edited 24 times in total.
alvisto
881 posts
Joined April 2009
alvisto
Timing :
1. Delete the first timing section with the 0ms offset.
2. Imo, BPM is too fast (example -> 00:34:426, you can hear it here..)
Try this
BPM : 128.055
Offset : 19690
With this, you won't need the 2nd offset, and I had doubke checked your whole map with this timing, sounds 90& correct.

HARD
00:49:088 (3) - I suggest you don't do this pattern, hidden slider (and a repeat one) behind a note would make people mad. xD
01:21:049 (9) - Consider stack them or seperate them ?
02:08:086 (2,3) - These are obviosuly off timing. I feel that the 3 is on 02:09:156 (1/8 beat divisor). To avoid confusion, you can make a slider connecting 2 and the newly placed 3.
02:10:073 (2,3) - ^
Kitty McWittles
141 posts
Joined September 2008
Kitty McWittles
[Easy]
00:34:071 (1,2,3,4) - Resnap + a hitsound or 2
00:36:059 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:36:096 - Kiai

[Hard]
Beginning seems a little rough (see below)
02:19:063 (2) - New combo
02:36:096 - Kiai

[Both]
Hitsounds though I'm sure you know already:P

I don't know why, but it all feels a bit rough to me (the point I noted in [Hard] seemed overly rough), even though you did a great job of matching the vocals... maybe fixing your offset/bpm will help.

Either way, nice song, and nice map for a WIP, have a star~
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
[Overall]

BPM: 128,10 - Offset: 4 (Remember to resnap all notes.)
BPM: 128,10 - Offset: 94.662 (Remember to resnap all notes.)

- Set a preview point on all difficulties.

[Easy]

Slider velocity is too high for an easy map. Lower it, please.

Seems "Normal".

Some breaks are too long.

00:19:672 - Delete this offset. Unuseful.
00:25:052 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:33:002 (1) - ^
00:34:071 (1,2,3,4) - 1/8 backward.
00:36:059 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:21:003 (4,5) - Too hard for an easy map.

[Hard]

Some breaks are too long.

00:19:672 - Delete this offset. Unuseful.
00:49:088 (3) - Slider repeat is completely hidden.
iPro_old
59 posts
Joined November 2008
Topic Starter
iPro_old
osuplayer why did u put 2 offset options?

anyway changed everything...:) enjoy!
Kytoxid
osu! Alumni
1,369 posts
Joined April 2009
Kytoxid
[General]

Preview points need to be set on all difficulties.
Source? Tags?
I'd recommend silencing a few of the slider hold sounds.

[Normal]

Closer to Easy than Normal.

01:21:006 (4,5) - A bit tougher than the rest.
02:08:039 (1,1) - A few mis-symmetries. For example, this set of sliders, one of them touches the vertical centre line, one doesn't. Use horizontal/vertical flip for perfection!

I felt there was too much empty space in this map, for example, 02:43:099. Fill them up a bit?

[Hard]

Timing section at 0 ms is unused, please remove.

Overall difficulty felt a bit high for the circle size, although not too bad.

Same thing as a whole, too many breaks, too much empty space. I'm a bit tired right now, can't really do a more detailed mod, sorry. :(
iPro_old
59 posts
Joined November 2008
Topic Starter
iPro_old
changes made

hitsounds added
LuigiHann
Resident Skinner
4,432 posts
Here since the beginning
LuigiHann
Not gonna nitpick your art direction, but at your own digression you should go over your slider curves, and make sure they look exactly the way you want. Quite a few are rough in both difficulties, but 00:38:431 (1) in Normal stands out as a real offender in terms of not being shaped in a very nice-looking way. You can leave it that way if that's the way you like it.

02:15:889 (1) in Normal, though, really ought to change a bit. It shouldn't overlap itself on the left side like that.

Spacing and everything seems to check out fine. Not much to complain about.

You can get rid of the "The All American Rejects" in the Tags field. That's redundant, since they're already tagged in the Artist field. I can't really think of any tags this map would need honestly, so you can leave that blank.
alvisto
881 posts
Joined April 2009
alvisto
If you are to use my suggested timing, then you forgot to delete the 2nd BPm/offset, which is this -> offset : 94,672 BPM : 128.100. You will notice that after you delete this 2nd offset, the notes that fall on the "initial 2nd offset" will be 94657 ms, which is quite close to osuplayer's 2nd offset (94662).

Remember to resnap all notes, and recalculate all the slider lengths since you changed both the BPM and offset.

Go to Timing -> select resnap all notes and recalculate slider lengths (red lines there).

After resnap and recalculate, go through the map yourself once map to check for wrongly recalculated slider, sometimes there will be some, and you will need to readjust the slider a bit.

Good luck in your mapping~ =D
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
[Normal]
00:50:614 (2) - Move backward to red tick (end of slider)
00:59:516 (x) - Move forward to white tick (end of spinner)
01:39:355 (5) - Move backward to red tick
02:43:056 (4) - ^
01:44:508 (x) - Add some note here and use finish hitsound

[Hard]
00:51:902 (1) - Move forward to white tick

Not too bad. Star for you
iPro_old
59 posts
Joined November 2008
Topic Starter
iPro_old
Thanks everyone :) changes made
Tanmak
896 posts
Joined August 2009
Tanmak
Hello~

[General]
Why are you set kiai time which is 02:32:874 - 02:37:560?
I recommend setting kiai time which is 00:44:991 - 00:59:985, 01:34:189 - 01:48:714 and 02:37:443 -.

And I can't find special problem.

Starred.
iPro_old
59 posts
Joined November 2008
Topic Starter
iPro_old
Hello~ changes made
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
iPro_old
59 posts
Joined November 2008
Topic Starter
iPro_old
Changes made
K-S-O
298 posts
Here since the beginning
K-S-O
You may need to shorten the third break. It seems a little long to me.

Other than that, I don't see too many problems.
DJPop
osu! Alumni
3,549 posts
Here since the beginning
DJPop
~Normal~
Fine.

~Hard~
00:27:018 (1) - epic slider lol
00:39:060 (8) - new combo
01:12:870 - move timing section to here
02:09:015 (3) - 1/3 snap
02:11:002 (3) - ^
02:12:014 (1) - ^
02:14:001 (2) - ^
02:19:098 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
02:42:012 (5) - new combo


+Star
iPro_old
59 posts
Joined November 2008
Topic Starter
iPro_old
dj pop i dont really get when u say 1/3 snap, forward or back?

anyway changes made
0_o
2,155 posts
Joined December 2008
0_o
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
al2e10
1,101 posts
Joined August 2008
al2e10
By Al2e10's Mod queue !!

[Hard]
01:48:128 (3) move to 01:48:245
Too many Break on it!!
I have to wait Many time and it is to boring ~

[Normal]
Fine !!

-[All]
You can change [Hard] to [Normal] and change [Normal] to [Easy]
Because Hard is not much hard ~
And that is grate map !!
Good job !! Star !!
iPro_old
59 posts
Joined November 2008
Topic Starter
iPro_old
I got rid of the 02:19:063 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) and i put a spinner because i was puzzled to try and get the timing right....:/

anyway i made the changes enjoy XD
Essien_old
21 posts
Joined November 2009
Essien_old
Normal:
02:21:512 (2): New combo, maybe?

Hard:
00:28:123 (3): Move a grid up.
00:40:306 (2): Move a grid left.


Nice song.
star~
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