Wow I'm late to the party this time
I guess I can't leave this one as the only map of yours I haven't starred, can I?
There's only one part that kind of bugs me because it sounds weird:
04:40:030 (1,2)
I think the 1 should be a circle on the next blue tick and then adjust the 2 to start on the next red tick after and extend it through where the 2 finishes now
Sounds better imo, though not like it matters a whole lot since it's not for ranking/approval