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My suggestions are more or less subjective, don't feel forced to apply them ;w;
Well, great song, nice challenging diff.
Good Luck ~
My suggestions are more or less subjective, don't feel forced to apply them ;w;
Dubu's Easy
- 00:16:666 (5,6) - first polarity issue, the solution may be this
or if you want to vary patterns, you also can add notes instead - 00:26:878 (1,2) - same polarity issue as ^, you can try the same pattern as ^ to fix it. And many more.
- 00:42:198 (1,2) - the direction of the wave slider is at the top and the next object is below the wave slider. It is kind of flow breaking.
- 00:46:027 (4) - sliderticks are enough audible, they do not really follow something, try to make them calm.
- 01:01:985 (3) - finish hitsound here to emphasize what you can hear.
- 01:19:857 (3) - what did you do with spacing here ;w; Prev : 1.41, next 1.31, fix spacing please.
- 01:41:878 (4,6) - reverses 1/2 sliders looks a bit extreme for a Easy diff, consider using 1/1 sliders instead.
Many polarity issues which can be fixed, but this might be unavoidable due to the nature of the song. Try to fix anyway, it will be better readable and playable.
Normal
- 00:14:113 (1) - try to move it a bit up, to increase the angle. It should improve a bit the flow.
- 00:19:219 (1,2) - first polarity issue, to fix it, make this instead
- 00:46:028 (1) - same as easy "sliderticks are enough audible, they do not really follow something, try to make them calm."
- 00:57:517 (1) - i prefer a curve like this imo, there is a better flow
- 01:11:719 (2,3,4) - use the same reverse slider as 01:09:166 (2) - , the 3 notes make this pattern really weird to play due to the polarity issue.
- 01:12:836 (1,2) - The spacing used here is really confusing, make it consistent.
- 01:42:517 - an important note is missing here, you can't ignore any claps during kiai part ;w;
Hard
- 00:11:559 (1,2) - the transition between "U" and "V" slider looks weird imo, try to make 2 same sliders.
- 00:16:187 (3,4,5,6) - i really have doubts about how it flows, the curve looks a bit weird, make something neater like this
- 01:14:272 (5,6,1) - these object look a bit closed, move these objects like this
- 01:26:878 - this has to be clicked, it sounds like the most audible note.
- 01:58:155 (1) - what is this ? sound a bit offbeat
Crying for jumps, you should add few jumps to add more difficulty, and it may will make the spread more balanced.
Zexous' Insane
- 00:13:474 (7,1) - stacking these notes may not be a good idea, if you want to emphasize the piano, it should be better if you unstack these objects.
- 00:18:740 (1) - same here ^
- 00:23:687 (5,1) - looks uncomfortable to play, this jump is surprising, to prevent players from sliderbreaking it should be better if the reversed slider's direction is :
- 00:34:378 (3,4) - this should be jumpy since you added a jump here 00:23:687 (5,1) -
- 00:44:112 (2) - there are both strong notes which have to be clicked, add 2 circles instead of a 1/2 slider, it will be better imo.
- 01:04:219 (3) - same as ^
- 00:45:948 (7) - this is not suitable, nothing here to force you to use a stream with 4 notes, so use 5.
- 00:54:325 (1,2) - it looks hard to read, make a little jump between (4) and (1,2), and it also emphasizes the louder note you can hear.
- 01:14:112 (3,1) - this is really overkill, this jump is really high, you need much aim to handle this jump pattern, you will make people ragequitting.
- 01:23:687 (3,4) - increase the spacing between these objects, spacing looks kinda random,
- 01:48:581 (5) - NC here to emphasize the strong note,
- 02:05:815 (5,1) - i heard that volume <25% on objects (spinner excluded). may be an unrankable issue, consider that.
Eternal
- OD 9 please ;w;
- 00:17:464 - this looks really empty without a note here, it surprised me a bit, you should add a note here.
- 00:26:878 (1,2,3,4) - if you compare spacing between 1's end-3 and 2-4 you see it is not the same, make them consistent ?
- 00:59:192 (3,4) - this is overkill, (3) could be considered as a 1/4 slider but it is note, make them overlapped. As you did here 01:00:549 (3,4) -
- 01:01:027 (5,6) - ^, even if they are overlapped, it is still confusing.
for 01:01:187 (6) - add notes instead - 01:13:793 (1,2,3) - The required movement is uncomfortable imo, try to make this instead
- 01:26:240 (8) - wrong jump placement, the jump is supposed to be here imo 01:26:081, not here 01:26:240
Well, great song, nice challenging diff.
Good Luck ~