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Topic Starter
Aldwych
Very late! :<

mintong89 wrote:

Hi, M4M.

[Muzukashii]

00:56:001 (205,206,207,208,209,210) - These sound too hard for Muzukashii player imo, the player might be not able to click kd to kd fastly and will miss. So try k dd dd k? Ok i did the same for all patterns, it fits good.
01:03:385 - ^ same and apply to same pattern at after this.
01:54:616 (400,401,402) - Kkk is unrankable. Check this for more information. Yep sorry! :<
01:59:924 (422,423,424) - Same ^

Good Luck!
Thank you mint! :D
Topic Starter
Aldwych
Double post coz since i don't have news from totoro, i'll making the change (and for up tho)

mintong89 wrote:

Hi, M4M.

[Pacha's Taiko Oni]
Uncheck "Widescreen Support". This unused at Taiko.Fixed

00:14:578 (59) - Any reason to put to blue line? It seem didn't fit any sound of the song and it quite awkward at gameplay. Move to 00:14:462 - here? The previous patterns shows 3/4 distance, so 'ill keep it on this one.
00:27:847 - => 00:29:462 - The pattern rhythm at here seem didn't fit with song and it quite different to other pattern you made before. Try k d k dk dk d k? Imo, a visual example would be better cause i've to change all the part and i don't know where these notes goes, and i found my self good.
00:35:231 - => 00:36:155 - The flow of gameplay at here quite weird, how about kdk d d k or change to other else? I found it weird too but i prefer kdk dd dk, i think it's better.
00:48:616 (241) - k here to follow clap/snare ? I changed the part to kddk dddk. Better to hear.
02:03:616 (628) - k, the sound at here at least isn't lower than 02:03:847 (629) - this. Done
02:11:693 (675) - k here to continue the d k d k pattern rhythm. Yea but no, follow the d k d pattern isn't necessary here, plus, the sound doesn't diserve a k.
02:26:462 - => 02:27:616 - These sound weird too, I'd prefer you to make these to k dk dkdk k. Yea, it fits well.
02:34:539 (800) - The SV at here is weird and unnecessary, player might be confuse because of misread kd to k d. You can delete the green line or delete the k the previous note. Gezo said #Paladin, so i'm gonna respect it.
02:37:078 (814) - k, the sound pitch of the song is higher than 02:37:308 (815) - this place.
02:44:462 (859) - ^
02:51:847 (902) - ^ Done ^3
03:31:770 - => 03:34:308 - wtf is these... New feature.

Good Luck!
Updated!
Tician
So many mods already, hope I can find anything wrong x.x

General
Timing Check - OK
Settings - a dark-purple Combocolour would be nice too^^
AIMod - OK

Insane
Testplay: Feels like too much Lifedrain. I completely disagree with 130 BPM stream-jumps, streamjumps is something for extra diffs, never saw it in insane. There are some strange spaces you used not fitting to the song

00:08:001 (2,3,4) - fix the spacing here pls, it feels terrible to play
00:36:385 (4,5,1) - same here it's not fitting
00:52:308 (3,4,5,6,7) - looks nice but like I said i disagree wth those spaced streams, that's something for Extra not for insane
00:52:885 (8) - hearing the sound it would fit better of you start the slider 1/4 earlier and delete the circle instead
01:00:270 (8) - ^
01:16:885 (13) - delete, fitting more to the sound
01:41:001 (5,1,2) - even if it's blanket this is looking bad, use a triangle for the 3 points in the middle, blank a bit and it will be better =)
01:41:462 (1) - I can imagine you don't want to ctrl+g this? If not how about using the bow of 01:41:001 (5) - to the other direction for a better flow
02:08:347 (2) - even if there is a sound this ruins the rhythm, try to use circles 02:08:231 and/or 02:08:462
02:19:770 (11,12,1) - space
02:21:155 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3) - This needs a bit more symmetry
02:43:770 (5) - move it to 02:43:885 sounds much better

Hard
Testplay: Same spacing-issues as insane. I miss a spread, this feels same like insane, just a little less objects
I would recommend using 3.5 CS

00:36:616 (4,5,1) - spacing
00:38:924 (1,2,3) - would be better of you rotate it so 00:38:462 (7,2) - will overlap
00:43:424 I am missing a object here for the sound
00:52:770 (4) - use only a circle here instead to fit the music
01:00:039 (3,4) - ^
01:13:193 (4) - you don't need it here, delete
02:20:001 (10,11,1) - spacing
02:40:539 (5) - move it closer to the head of 02:39:385 (2) - so the distance of 02:39:155 (1,2,3,4,5) - them all looks nice (even if they were switched)

normal
Testplay: What have you done with the DS? This diff needs a completely rework with a DS of 1.1 or 1.2 to avoid this overlaps and ugly blankets

00:42:847 (3,4) - this blanket is terrible, just as an example I saw you sometime higher the DS, use only 1 DS and keep that the whole easy diff. I will not metnion any other bad blankets caused by the DS
01:37:078 (2,3,4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2207170 try this for a better active/passive playing
01:44:462 (2,3,4) - ^
Btw normaly claps land on the upbeats (2nd and 4th white tick) I think that woul fit better
02:24:155 (1,2) - 02:24:962 there is a sound here, I would prefer if you try this it fits perfectly https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2207192

I think some of the spinner got too less time after them for newbies to recoordinate themselves

All in all a good song, nice maps, take a star for it =)
Topic Starter
Aldwych
Hi Tician!
Thanks for the star, actually i'm a bit busy with work, but i think that some points wil need rework and you're right. I'm gonna correct next week or earlier, but take your cookie! :D

Edit : I've some time so...

Tician wrote:

So many mods already, hope I can find anything wrong x.x You did don't worry :D

General
Timing Check - OK
Settings - a dark-purple Combocolour would be nice too^^ Added + changing a bit the current violet one.
AIMod - OK

Insane
Testplay: Feels like too much Lifedrain. I completely disagree with 130 BPM stream-jumps, streamjumps is something for extra diffs, never saw it in insane. There are some strange spaces you used not fitting to the song

00:08:001 (2,3,4) - fix the spacing here pls, it feels terrible to play Ok (cause you're not the only one you notice it) but i keep the stack on 4,5 to prepare for the jump coz of the unflow
00:36:385 (4,5,1) - same here it's not fitting Well ok... i will change it by stacking the 5th on 1st, let's try this
00:52:308 (3,4,5,6,7) - looks nice but like I said i disagree wth those spaced streams, that's something for Extra not for insane Ok so i didn't change the main pattern but i've reduced the DS between all circles and the 2 littles sliders + updated the flow on theses one, we've not a better approch for the next stream.
00:52:885 (8) - hearing the sound it would fit better of you start the slider 1/4 earlier and delete the circle instead Why not.It's not so bad, but i won't make a curve slider to keep the same pattern as before
01:00:270 (8) - ^ Same but curving this time, and i've updated the DS, changed to 1.0 on stream
01:16:885 (13) - delete, fitting more to the sound I disagree, if you said the 12th, yea, but here no. :<
01:41:001 (5,1,2) - even if it's blanket this is looking bad, use a triangle for the 3 points in the middle, blank a bit and it will be better =) I don't really understand what you really wanted to, but i found a problem i fixed it (maybe i'm doing what you want to).
01:41:462 (1) - I can imagine you don't want to ctrl+g this? If not how about using the bow of 01:41:001 (5) - to the other direction for a better flow Fixed + changing the direction of 4th for the flow
02:08:347 (2) - even if there is a sound this ruins the rhythm, try to use circles 02:08:231 and/or 02:08:462 and
02:19:770 (11,12,1) - space stacked
02:21:155 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3) - This needs a bit more symmetry it has (coz i used the rotate tool), or make a solution.
02:43:770 (5) - move it to 02:43:885 sounds much better I don't found why, plus it'll be hard to make a good slider by the previous slider pattern

Hard
Testplay: Same spacing-issues as insane. I miss a spread, this feels same like insane, just a little less objects
I would recommend using 3.5 CS Accepted

00:36:616 (4,5,1) - spacing same as insane
00:38:924 (1,2,3) - would be better of you rotate it so 00:38:462 (7,2) - will overlap Tried
00:43:424 I am missing a object here for the sound Waat?
00:52:770 (4) - use only a circle here instead to fit the music Imo it's not really fit well. And it's weird to play it on the keyboard.
01:00:039 (3,4) - ^ same
01:13:193 (4) - you don't need it here, delete Right
02:20:001 (10,11,1) - spacing Same as others
02:40:539 (5) - move it closer to the head of 02:39:385 (2) - so the distance of 02:39:155 (1,2,3,4,5) - them all looks nice (even if they were switched) I don't really understand what you really want, plus here the DS between the 4th and 6th is the same

normal
Testplay: What have you done with the DS? This diff needs a completely rework with a DS of 1.1 or 1.2 to avoid this overlaps and ugly blankets Maybe, but right now, i don't really have time for a complete rework.

00:42:847 (3,4) - this blanket is terrible, just as an example I saw you sometime higher the DS, use only 1 DS and keep that the whole easy diff. I will not metnion any other bad blankets caused by the DS I'd corrected the nearest one
01:37:078 (2,3,4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2207170 try this for a better active/passive playing Ok
01:44:462 (2,3,4) - ^ ^
Btw normaly claps land on the upbeats (2nd and 4th white tick) I think that woul fit better Keep noticing it
02:24:155 (1,2) - 02:24:962 there is a sound here, I would prefer if you try this it fits perfectly https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2207192
Updated
I think some of the spinner got too less time after them for newbies to recoordinate themselves I find them good enough imo.

All in all a good song, nice maps, take a star for it =)
Finish! Thank you very much, it was a good mod.
Ultima Fox
Hi!!, From your modding queue :)

[Normal]

00:02:462 (4) - Make this slider go with the beat of the song
00:23:693 (2,3,4) - Maybe try to blanket these
00:27:847 (4) - Curve this little stream towards the next note
00:56:001 (2,3) - Blanket
02:00:616 (5) - This slider doesn't go with the beat

[Hard]

00:37:078 (1) - This slider vel. is really fast and really sudden, i think you should either remove it or lower it
02:53:347 (6,7) - Possibly change these two to a circle and a repeating slider
03:00:155 (5,6) - Why not blanket these

[Insane]

00:37:078 (1) - Same as the hard, this is really sudden and really fast
01:14:001 (7) - NC
01:14:462 (1) - Remove NC
02:03:385 (1,2,3) - Why did you decrease the slider vel. here?
02:26:001 (8) - NC
02:18:616 (7) - ^
02:40:770 (8) - ^
02:37:078 (6) - Start combo here instead of here: 02:37:539 (1)
02:48:385 (8) - NC
02:51:847 (7) - ^
03:03:155 (7) - ^

Hope this map gets ranked!
Topic Starter
Aldwych
Hi GyroX20!

GyroX20 wrote:

Hi!!, From your modding queue :)

[Normal]

00:02:462 (4) - Make this slider go with the beat of the song Ugly to hear, and this slider is the easiest way to fit the music.
00:23:693 (2,3,4) - Maybe try to blanket these This will be so messy.
00:27:847 (4) - Curve this little stream towards the next note In preparation for the next slider, ok.
00:56:001 (2,3) - Blanket Cannot without a huge spacing.
02:00:616 (5) - This slider doesn't go with the beat Why? have you got another solution? Before this large one, it was a 3/4 x 5 slider-reversed. So i have to simplify this part for a normal diff one.

[Hard]

00:37:078 (1) - This slider vel. is really fast and really sudden, i think you should either remove it or lower it To 1.20 last modification about this part.
02:53:347 (6,7) - Possibly change these two to a circle and a repeating slider Accorded
03:00:155 (5,6) - Why not blanket these Coz of pattern, i don't want a 100% blanket mapset.

[Insane]

00:37:078 (1) - Same as the hard, this is really sudden and really fast Coz it's insane, so i'm gonna keep it, and will change if a bat will say it
01:14:001 (7) - NC Accorded
01:14:462 (1) - Remove NC
02:03:385 (1,2,3) - Why did you decrease the slider vel. here? Featured, moved to the origin
02:26:001 (8) - NC Yep
02:18:616 (7) - ^ ^
02:40:770 (8) - ^ ^
02:37:078 (6) - Start combo here instead of here: 02:37:539 (1) Okay
02:48:385 (8) - NC
02:51:847 (7) - ^
03:03:155 (7) - ^ Ok x3

Hope this map gets ranked!
Thank you very much, take your cookie! :D
Also fixed combo colours (only applied on Insane)
just click
Hi! M4M from your queue! Don't forget to mod my map! https://osu.ppy.sh/s/208506

I won't be able to mod Taiko at all, just standard!

Normal

SPOILER
00:02:462 (4) - Why not just turn this slider into something like 00:00:155 (1,2) It would have better flow in my opinion.

00:20:462 - You should add a circle here instead, and move the spinner to 00:20:693 Not sure though since spinners with a short time might be difficulty for some players.

00:46:078 - Adding a circle here would sound better.

01:15:847 (5) - If you want, you could make this slider go vertically down towards the reverse slider, instead of it going diagonally up.

01:38:001 (4) - Maybe turn this into a slider? If you do, end it at 01:38:231

02:00:616 (6) - Something about this slider doesn't fit in that well to me. I suggest maybe just removing it and keep with the current flow of the beat.

02:13:078 (1) - Try to make this reverse slider end towards the next note instead of away from it.

02:17:924 - Adding a circle here would give better flow.

03:21:847 (4) - Instead of this slider, I think it would look nice and play better if you make the head and tail of this as 2 seperate notes.

Hard

SPOILER
00:07:078 (9) - You could probably find a better placement for this note. It kind of throws you off of where the next circle will appear.

00:26:693 (2) - I think a triplet here would be better in my opinion.

00:32:924 (5) - Why not just end this slider at 00:33:385 instead of adding a note there?

00:37:770 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - You should do this same pattern somewhere around 00:39:385

00:41:462 (2) - Triplet here fits in better.

00:52:308 (2,3,4) - Pretty cool pattern! Fits in well!

00:55:539 (1) - Why start a NC here? I think you just start a NC at 00:55:770 (2)

01:57:847 (8,9) - At around here, you could create a doublet (however you want to call it :P ) I listened to the song closely and you could make one around there.

02:10:078 (3) - Triplet here would play better.

02:11:462 (7) - This is the only slider in this whole map that I saw that is it out of place and doesn't fit in, I suggest adding regular notes somewhere in place of the slider.

02:12:385 (9) - Same thing with this slider, it just doesn't play well.

02:26:001 (5,6,7) - A triangle pattern would look cooler.

02:40:539 (5) - The spacing on this note compared to 02:40:078 (3,4) looks a bit awkward. I think you might have done this so that it doesn't interfere with the slider at 02:39:385 (2) How about you stack 5 on the head of 2?

02:49:078 (12) - Looks a bit uneven with 02:48:616 (10,11)

02:56:347 - Add a circle here? Would play better with a bigger stream considering that it's almost the end of the Kiai.

03:26:462 (5) - I think you had a similar pattern like this in the beginning of the map, it's better to place it somewhere so that it doesn't throw off the player. Even a player on Hard might have trouble with this.

Insane

SPOILER
00:00:155 (1,2,3) - Kind of an awkward placement of notes right at the beginning of the song, don't you think?

00:11:001 (14) - These combos reach quite a high number, maybe start some new combos earlier where you think it would be appropriate? I didn't see any other part of the map with a combo going this high.

00:11:231 (1,2,3) - Would look cool if you made some kind of triangular pattern with these.

00:26:231 (2) - I think you placed this a little too far, but that's up to you. (Edit: I see that these are common patterns within the map. I think you should only use these on the most intense parts though.)

00:41:001 (2) - Same thing with this one, it's quite a jump, especially with how fast you have to do it.

00:51:847 (1) - Having something like this right after a spinner could easily throw off a player, I would place this a bit closer, maybe towards the middle.

00:56:001 (2,3,4,5,6) - This shape is awkward, especially for a stream. I know you could probably make this look better.

01:08:924 (1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe curve this stream?

01:16:308 (9,10,11,12,13,14) - I'm not sure if you intended this, but some of the circles look a bit uneven.

01:36:616 - Cool use of hitsounds! :)

01:46:770 (5,6,7) - I feel that you could find a better placement for these. Maybe at 296/296?

02:04:078 - This is a suggestion, but I think you could add a large stream here.

02:16:770 (1) - The placement of this should be closer to the end of the tail of the preceding slider. It plays awkwardly if too far.

02:38:708 (8) - This part might be a little too hard to hit, especially on how fast you need to move the cursor.

03:08:462 (1) - A triplet here sounds good.

03:10:078 - Adding a circle here would give a better flow in my opinion.

03:25:078 (6,7,8,9) - Instead of this current pattern, maybe space them farther apart from each other in a diagonal like way?



Overall, pretty cool map! Reminds me of the older maps.
Topic Starter
Aldwych

Breezy wrote:

Hi! M4M from your queue! Don't forget to mod my map! https://osu.ppy.sh/s/208506

I won't be able to mod Taiko at all, just standard!

Normal

SPOILER
00:02:462 (4) - Why not just turn this slider into something like 00:00:155 (1,2) It would have better flow in my opinion. Coz the second part is different from the begining so i cannot make the same stuff.

00:20:462 - You should add a circle here instead, and move the spinner to 00:20:693 Not sure though since spinners with a short time might be difficulty for some players. Yep why not, the spinner is enough large.

00:46:078 - Adding a circle here would sound better. Yep, but no, since it's the easiest diff of the map, i have to put some "breaks" to relax the beginners.

01:15:847 (5) - If you want, you could make this slider go vertically down towards the reverse slider, instead of it going diagonally up. Hmmm no, pefering follow the flow done before and try not to overlapping the next slider.

01:38:001 (4) - Maybe turn this into a slider? If you do, end it at 01:38:231 "Breaks"

02:00:616 (6) - Something about this slider doesn't fit in that well to me. I suggest maybe just removing it and keep with the current flow of the beat. Actually, the main beat is 3/4, so make something different than this big slider without a blank is not really possible and easy to play for beginners.

02:13:078 (1) - Try to make this reverse slider end towards the next note instead of away from it. Updated, it's more readable.

02:17:924 - Adding a circle here would give better flow. Let's try it.

03:21:847 (4) - Instead of this slider, I think it would look nice and play better if you make the head and tail of this as 2 seperate notes. Yep, nice choice.

Hard

SPOILER
00:07:078 (9) - You could probably find a better placement for this note. It kind of throws you off of where the next circle will appear. Maybe but this circle is not the problem and moving it won't make it easier to play, and a really want a jump here. :<

00:26:693 (2) - I think a triplet here would be better in my opinion. Yep, the slider sound is ugly here, fixed.

00:32:924 (5) - Why not just end this slider at 00:33:385 instead of adding a note there? It sounds interesting, and i wanted to keep what i did on the whole hard and insane as finishing this kind of slider at 3/4.

00:37:770 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - You should do this same pattern somewhere around 00:39:385 But it brokes my pattern. :'<

00:41:462 (2) - Triplet here fits in better. Yep, totally

00:52:308 (2,3,4) - Pretty cool pattern! Fits in well! Thank you! <3 #Paladin² cc Gezo

00:55:539 (1) - Why start a NC here? I think you just start a NC at 00:55:770 (2) Makes more sense

01:57:847 (8,9) - At around here, you could create a doublet (however you want to call it :P ) I listened to the song closely and you could make one around there. Yep you right, i can make a circle between these 2 one, but currently the pattern i use to make a jump, so i cannot add something around here without chaging a lot just for a doublet, but i you think i'm wrong or that's not what you meaned, i encourage you to explain me. :>

02:10:078 (3) - Triplet here would play better. Sure m9

02:11:462 (7) - This is the only slider in this whole map that I saw that is it out of place and doesn't fit in, I suggest adding regular notes somewhere in place of the slider. Well also the next one, i've updated this part, which fits better now. I also added NC better for better reading comprehension.

02:12:385 (9) - Same thing with this slider, it just doesn't play well. ^

02:26:001 (5,6,7) - A triangle pattern would look cooler. ILLUMINATI COMFIRMED!! WOW WOW WOW! More seriously, why not, but the next pattern will make it hard to join with a triangle, moreover when i need flow.

02:40:539 (5) - The spacing on this note compared to 02:40:078 (3,4) looks a bit awkward. I think you might have done this so that it doesn't interfere with the slider at 02:39:385 (2) How about you stack 5 on the head of 2? In this situation i've to change the whole next pattern, so 'im trying with deleting the circle (3) and finish the slider (2) at it's position.

02:49:078 (12) - Looks a bit uneven with 02:48:616 (10,11) About what?

02:56:347 - Add a circle here? Would play better with a bigger stream considering that it's almost the end of the Kiai. Kay'

03:26:462 (5) - I think you had a similar pattern like this in the beginning of the map, it's better to place it somewhere so that it doesn't throw off the player. Even a player on Hard might have trouble with this. I don't really understand the problem. If it's stacking then i rotate the slider (3) to make it appear clearly, else i need more explain.

Insane

SPOILER
00:00:155 (1,2,3) - Kind of an awkward placement of notes right at the beginning of the song, don't you think?

00:11:001 (14) - These combos reach quite a high number, maybe start some new combos earlier where you think it would be appropriate? I didn't see any other part of the map with a combo going this high.

00:11:231 (1,2,3) - Would look cool if you made some kind of triangular pattern with these.

00:26:231 (2) - I think you placed this a little too far, but that's up to you. (Edit: I see that these are common patterns within the map. I think you should only use these on the most intense parts though.)

00:41:001 (2) - Same thing with this one, it's quite a jump, especially with how fast you have to do it.

00:51:847 (1) - Having something like this right after a spinner could easily throw off a player, I would place this a bit closer, maybe towards the middle.

00:56:001 (2,3,4,5,6) - This shape is awkward, especially for a stream. I know you could probably make this look better.

01:08:924 (1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe curve this stream?

01:16:308 (9,10,11,12,13,14) - I'm not sure if you intended this, but some of the circles look a bit uneven.

01:36:616 - Cool use of hitsounds! :)

01:46:770 (5,6,7) - I feel that you could find a better placement for these. Maybe at 296/296?

02:04:078 - This is a suggestion, but I think you could add a large stream here.

02:16:770 (1) - The placement of this should be closer to the end of the tail of the preceding slider. It plays awkwardly if too far.

02:38:708 (8) - This part might be a little too hard to hit, especially on how fast you need to move the cursor.

03:08:462 (1) - A triplet here sounds good.

03:10:078 - Adding a circle here would give a better flow in my opinion.

03:25:078 (6,7,8,9) - Instead of this current pattern, maybe space them farther apart from each other in a diagonal like way?



Overall, pretty cool map! Reminds me of the older maps.
Ok so, i've not finished yet (well just the normal one), i'm gonna finish it later, but first, take your cookie! :D
Edit : lel continue.
Edit²: lel
Edit^3 : Fuck for the insane i deleted all my answer sorry! :(

Thank you for the mod. It was pretty good. :D
Yuzeyun

Aldwych wrote:

GyroX20 wrote:

00:37:078 (1) - Same as the hard, this is really sudden and really fast Coz it's insane, so i'm gonna keep it, and will change if a bat will say it
écoute ce qu'il dit abriti il a raison xdjk


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to answer with as much late as possible to mint's kiai
i use the same kiai thingies as in paladin. i'd rather avoid having too much kiai. and this is also my view on the map
Topic Starter
Aldwych

_Gezo_ wrote:

écoute ce qu'il dit abriti il a raison xdjk
{TGezo)! :<

Kay' gonna fix it too. :<

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to answer with as much late as possible to mint's kiai
i use the same kiai thingies as in paladin. i'd rather avoid having too much kiai. and this is also my view on the map[/quote]
Ameth Rianno
Mod request from the "just a Little Mod Queue."

- : a mod
+ : an oppinion


[General]
- Delete osb since there's no storyboard. lel

[Normal]
+ The diff is good mapping.

- 00:02:001 (3,4) - I think this pattern and the music is not fit, it feels like akward sound. http://puu.sh/d0S8O/52792453c1.jpg it may be perfect to the + music.
- 00:09:847 (4) - ^, this thing too is akward. the pattern is up to you, at least it fits the music.
- 00:17:231 (5) - ^

+ Maybe you can be ignore them, because it's yourselves.

- 00:28:308 (5,6,7) - Make it more perfect.
Fixes: the (6) distance snap, and the (7) will be the more same with the (5)
code
60,104,28308,2,0,P|44:176|104:240,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,264,29001,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,300,29231,2,0,P|268:304|318:258,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

+ 02:35:693 (1,2,3,4,5) - This objects looks like a stream for newbs.

[Hard]
+I really enjoyed this diff. Good joob bro.

- 00:01:539 (4,5) - Why not made it like this? http://puu.sh/d0ST9/e29c10bb18.jpg make it like "( (" isn't good, but proper if the (5) is CTRL+G-ed.
- 00:22:308 to 00:51:847 - just the streams.
- 00:32:924 (5) - Make it like a zig zag slider, it will fit the music, i believe.
- 00:42:616 (9) - New Combo.
+ 00:56:231 (2) - This slider is so ugly for me.
- 01:36:155 (1,2,3) - That distance snap is not good. Fix it. I prefer the (1) is moved.
- 01:54:847 (2) - This overlap doesn't give me some taste for the gameplay.
- 01:56:462 (6) - I'd better to make it straight slider. Not a good taste flow.
- 02:11:231 (10) - New Combo?
- 02:19:078 (8) - New Cembe?
- 02:22:770 (9) - Na Kamba?
- 03:17:693 (5) - No Na Kombeh?
- 03:17:693 (5) - I would have this reversed pattern. http://puu.sh/d0TQf/7b8a18af18.jpg

git guder

[Insane]
+I am enjoyed this to. damnit you make gud meps

- 00:02:001 (6) - Whistle + New Combo?
- 00:06:155 (9) - ^
- 00:09:385 (7) - New combo?
- 00:29:001 (5) - You have to reserve this. (CTRL+G)
- 00:53:693 (2) - ^
- 01:02:924 (1) - Move the 2nd white thick to this position: x228 y348. it makes the curve more like curve. loyo
- 02:43:078 (3,4,5) - um Look at the hit circle. It doesn't make an illuminati, i mean triangle. move the (5) to this position: x136 y224. Now it's an illuminati!

I think im gonna end it here.

Good luck on your map. i hope it's ranked.
Topic Starter
Aldwych
Hi Amethyianous!
Coz i'm currently working, i cannot correct right now.

But just coz of :
Now it's an illuminati!
I have to give you cookie! :D
Don't worry i'm gonna correct it later. But i'm pretty sure i've to modify some things from you mod.

Edit : Correcting

Amethyianous wrote:

Mod request from the "just a Little Mod Queue."

- : a mod
+ : an oppinion


[General]
- Delete osb since there's no storyboard. lel lel, i've osb file? wot?

[Normal]
+ The diff is good mapping.

- 00:02:001 (3,4) - I think this pattern and the music is not fit, it feels like akward sound. http://puu.sh/d0S8O/52792453c1.jpg it may be perfect to the + music.
- 00:09:847 (4) - ^, this thing too is akward. the pattern is up to you, at least it fits the music.
- 00:17:231 (5) - ^

For these 3, i have to reject to proposition, coz it's the easiest diff, and making circles with 3/4 distance is confusing for new players, for confirmed no ofc.


+ Maybe you can be ignore them, because it's yourselves.

- 00:28:308 (5,6,7) - Make it more perfect. sure m8
Fixes: the (6) distance snap, and the (7) will be the more same with the (5)
code
60,104,28308,2,0,P|44:176|104:240,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,264,29001,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,300,29231,2,0,P|268:304|318:258,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

+ 02:35:693 (1,2,3,4,5) - This objects looks like a stream for newbs. Deleting the (2)

[Hard]
+I really enjoyed this diff. Good joob bro.

- 00:01:539 (4,5) - Why not made it like this? http://puu.sh/d0ST9/e29c10bb18.jpg make it like "( (" isn't good, but proper if the (5) is CTRL+G-ed. Ye why not.
- 00:22:308 to 00:51:847 - just the streams. ?
- 00:32:924 (5) - Make it like a zig zag slider, it will fit the music, i believe. Ye you right, but i did a kind of "zig zag" at the begining, and modders said it's unnapropriate coz players have to see clearly the slider.
- 00:42:616 (9) - New Combo. Yep
+ 00:56:231 (2) - This slider is so ugly for me. Curved it less.
- 01:36:155 (1,2,3) - That distance snap is not good. Fix it. I prefer the (1) is moved. Upsss, also fixed the blanket.
- 01:54:847 (2) - This overlap doesn't give me some taste for the gameplay. Move the yellow slider.
- 01:56:462 (6) - I'd better to make it straight slider. Not a good taste flow. Accorded.
- 02:11:231 (10) - New Combo? Already did on the previous mod, but earlier to make it easy to read the whole pattern.
- 02:19:078 (8) - New Cembe? Ye
- 02:22:770 (9) - Na Kamba? Earlia.
- 03:17:693 (5) - No Na Kombeh? In orda to follow the previous Kombeh, i will still keep this Kamba.
- 03:17:693 (5) - I would have this reversed pattern. http://puu.sh/d0TQf/7b8a18af18.jpg For the pattern, no. :<

git guder

[Insane]
+I am enjoyed this to. damnit you make gud meps

- 00:02:001 (6) - Whistle + New Combo?
- 00:06:155 (9) - ^ ye x2
- 00:09:385 (7) - New combo? Nope, keeping the previous combo set. :>
- 00:29:001 (5) - You have to reserve this. (CTRL+G) wat is reserve? lel. Why? Coz my current pattern, makes the flow better.
- 00:53:693 (2) - ^ ^
- 01:02:924 (1) - Move the 2nd white thick to this position: x228 y348. it makes the curve more like curve. loyo wtf how looks like the slider now! xDD Nvm you're talking about the 3rd (starting on the begining not left to right.
- 02:43:078 (3,4,5) - um Look at the hit circle. It doesn't make an illuminati, i mean triangle. move the (5) to this position: x136 y224. Now it's an illuminati!
HAHAHAHHA, so i move a little bit the 4th to not make it inequals in terms of DS, ok now just https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kGJR4ju6DVY
I think im gonna end it here.

Good luck on your map. i hope it's ranked.
Thank you, you made me laugth! :D
AruOtta
Here comes my mod :3


Normal

00:01:078 (2,4) - Essaye de faire en sorte que la deuxième partie de ces sliders (après le red anchor) soient parallèle, ça peut être intéressent comme pattern.
00:08:001 (2,3) - Aaaarf y'a un léger overlap ici, je te conseille de bouger un peu (2) pour éviter ce problème (j'ai aussi un peu changé (1) dans mon screen pour éviter l'overlap avec (3) quand il est tout droit, et au passage j'ai fait un blanket) :
00:08:924 (3,4) - Tu peux aussi faire le même genre de pattern avec le bkanket que tu a fait juste avant (pour (2,3)), je pense que ça rendra mieux que actuellement.
00:13:539 (4) - Tu pourrais presque lui ajouter un reverse, et puis y'aura une justification au placement de 00:14:924 (1) qui parait un peu bizarre (le mouvement que ça créé est pas top)
00:16:308 (3,4) - Ce pattern rend assez moche... Je te conseille soit de faire un beau blanket en ignorant la distance snap, ou alors de bouger (4) d'un carreau vers la gauche, ça rend assez bien aussi.
00:17:231 (5) - C'est dommage que le finish soit à la fin d'un slider, c'est un emphasized beat donc ça serait mieux qu'il soit cliqué pour moi.
00:25:539 - C'est juste un avis personnel, mais je pense que ça aurait bien rendu avec la musique s'il y avait un slider ici.
00:57:155 (4,5) - Tu devrais bouger un peu ces deux cercles pour qu'ils soient bien alignés avec la forme de (2) (représenté par un slider violet dans le screen ci-dessous) :
01:54:155 (6,1,2) - Les distance snap entre (6,1) et (1,2) ne sont pas les mêmes, et ça se voit quand on regarde comment est construit le blanket. Tu devrais corriger ça je pense, en bougeant 01:54:847 (1,2) d'un carreau vers le haut
02:24:616 (2,3,4,5) - Ce pattern est bizarre, on dirait un mélange entre "ces 4 objects sont alignés" et "c'est 4 objects forment un arc de cercle". Le mélange entre les deux rends le tout assez particulier, je te conseille de choisir entre l'un des deux.
02:29:231 (2,3,4) - Ici, la distance snap entre (2,3) et (3,4) est pas la même, et ça se voit, donc je te conseille de le changer.
(02:40:539 (4) - Ce slider est tellement bien placé <3)
03:01:078 (7) - Je te conseille d'ajouter un NC ici, car cette partie en manque clairement d'un.

Hard

00:08:001 (2,3,5) - La distance entre (3) et la queue de (2) et entre (5) et la queue de (2) est pas la même, ça pourrais être intéressent de faire en sort qu'elle soit égale (c'est juste une suggestion)
00:12:616 (3,4,5) - Pourquoi ce jump ? (je dis juste ça parce que ça parait un peu random)
00:18:270 (9) - Tu pourrais essayer de l'écarter un peu de (8) car on pourrais facilement penser que y'a 1/2 beat d'écart alors que non. Essaye peut être de le placer à x36|y200 par exemple ?
00:31:770 (1,2,3) - Je pense que avoir la même distance entre (1,2) et (2,3) pourrais se révéler intéressent comme pattern.
00:40:308 (4,6) - Pourquoi ne pas avoir un sliderslide avec un whistle comme pour 00:25:539 (7,5) ?
00:56:231 (2,3) - Tu pourrais peut être avoir la même distance ici qu'entre 00:56:924 (3,4,5,6,7) pour continuer le pattern ?
01:42:847 (8,1) - La distance snap est trop faible, on dirait pas que c'est du 3/4 de différence mais plutot du 1/2 de différence =/
02:05:693 (1) - Pourquoi cette accélération si soudaine ? (c'est pas vraiment gênant lors du play mais c'est la seule fois ou tu le fais)
02:20:462 (1) - ^
02:56:001 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Le rond est assez mal fait, je te conseille de faire un slider rond, de le sélectionner, d'aller dans l'onglet "Compose", de sélectionner "Convert Slider to Stream", de choisir le nombre de circle et d'admirer le résultat (cette dernière étape est facultative)
03:11:116 (4) - Ce circle ne correspond pas à un beat dans la musique, il est donc overmappé et DOIT être détruit =/

Insane

AiMod il te dit que t'as pas snappé tes kiai à 00:22:307 et 00:22:423.

00:11:231 (1,2,3) - C'est juste une suggestion, mais je te conseille de les rapprocher, ça fait un peu êtrange actuellement, et c'est difficile de savoir quand faut appuyer =/
00:13:770 (8) - Tu pourrais ajouter un whistle comme tu as fait pour 00:12:039 (4) ?
00:26:001 (1,2) - Wow.. Le jump est vraiment large, c'est assez chaud à jouer comparé aux patterns précedents
00:40:770 (1,2) - ^
01:09:616 (6,7,8,9,10) - La distance snap parait vraiment élevée ici... Plusieurs players pourrait faire des miss ici et ça serai dommage =/
01:14:924 (6,7) - Comparé aux distance snap lors du stream, celui là est vraiment faible, on dirait du 1/4 d'écart. Je te conseille te le bouger par exemple autour de x288|y176
01:37:770 (6,2) - Un peu embêtant l'overlap.. Tu pourrais stacker leurs queue peut être ? (cette phrase est vraiment bizarre xD)
01:47:231 (1,2) - Jump encore assez difficile pour une partie de la musique assez lente. Tu peux essayer de bouger (2) à x160|y192 ?
01:51:501 (3) - Cette note est overmappé car il n'y a pas de beat qui lui corresponde dans la musique, ils faut donc l'enlever.
01:52:770 (7) - Tu pourrais rajouter un NC ici, ça suivrai ta logique de placement de new combo.
02:49:308 (5,1) - La distance snap laisse clairement penser que y'a 1/4 d'écart là, essaye de doubler la distance snap je pense.
02:52:308 (2,3,4) - Pourquoi ne pas essayer de faire blanket ces sliders avec (3) ?

Très bonne map, elle est fun à jouer en plus :3

Bonne chance pour le rank :3
Topic Starter
Aldwych
OwO

Kenterz wrote:

Here comes my mod :3

LE BAGUETTE POUR LE DESSERT!!

Normal

00:01:078 (2,4) - Essaye de faire en sorte que la deuxième partie de ces sliders (après le red anchor) soient parallèle, ça peut être intéressent comme pattern. A la base c'était un slider similaire au 1er, mais vu que personne remarquera la différence, j'ai appliqué ton mod.
00:08:001 (2,3) - Aaaarf y'a un léger overlap ici, je te conseille de bouger un peu (2) pour éviter ce problème (j'ai aussi un peu changé (1) dans mon screen pour éviter l'overlap avec (3) quand il est tout droit, et au passage j'ai fait un blanket) :
C'est dans ce genre de situations que j'aime avoir le code. :> Mais j'ai pu faire qqch de similaire.
00:08:924 (3,4) - Tu peux aussi faire le même genre de pattern avec le bkanket que tu a fait juste avant (pour (2,3)), je pense que ça rendra mieux que actuellement. La seule chose que je peux faire actuellement, c'est agrandir le DS, je peux pas faire un blanket propre et garder un flow avec le combo suivant. :/
00:13:539 (4) - Tu pourrais presque lui ajouter un reverse, et puis y'aura une justification au placement de 00:14:924 (1) qui parait un peu bizarre (le mouvement que ça créé est pas top) On va tenter le reverse bien que je suis pas méga fan du 3/4 spacing, on va dire que le flow l'emporte ici.
00:16:308 (3,4) - Ce pattern rend assez moche... Je te conseille soit de faire un beau blanket en ignorant la distance snap, ou alors de bouger (4) d'un carreau vers la gauche, ça rend assez bien aussi. J'opte pour la solution la plus feignasse (a savoir le move).
00:17:231 (5) - C'est dommage que le finish soit à la fin d'un slider, c'est un emphasized beat donc ça serait mieux qu'il soit cliqué pour moi. Kwa? Je l'ai supprimé mais j'ai pas compris le "cliqué".
00:25:539 - C'est juste un avis personnel, mais je pense que ça aurait bien rendu avec la musique s'il y avait un slider ici. Oui mais d'un coté ca simplifie la tache au niveau des NC (oui excuse de merde en passant). Et vu que si je le fais pour celui-ci, bah ca sera pareil pour les autres donc work++
00:57:155 (4,5) - Tu devrais bouger un peu ces deux cercles pour qu'ils soient bien alignés avec la forme de (2) (représenté par un slider violet dans le screen ci-dessous) : Fixed avec ta technique
01:54:155 (6,1,2) - Les distance snap entre (6,1) et (1,2) ne sont pas les mêmes, et ça se voit quand on regarde comment est construit le blanket. Tu devrais corriger ça je pense, en bougeant 01:54:847 (1,2) d'un carreau vers le haut Parfait
02:24:616 (2,3,4,5) - Ce pattern est bizarre, on dirait un mélange entre "ces 4 objects sont alignés" et "c'est 4 objects forment un arc de cercle". Le mélange entre les deux rends le tout assez particulier, je te conseille de choisir entre l'un des deux. Ligne, plus simple a créer.
02:29:231 (2,3,4) - Ici, la distance snap entre (2,3) et (3,4) est pas la même, et ça se voit, donc je te conseille de le changer. J'ai changé le 2 en un slider de 1, par contre le pattern entier a été bougé pour que le flow reste correct.
(02:40:539 (4) - Ce slider est tellement bien placé <3 OwO)
03:01:078 (7) - Je te conseille d'ajouter un NC ici, car cette partie en manque clairement d'un. Oups, my bad

Hard

00:08:001 (2,3,5) - La distance entre (3) et la queue de (2) et entre (5) et la queue de (2) est pas la même, ça pourrais être intéressent de faire en sort qu'elle soit égale (c'est juste une suggestion) Exact, mais je ne peux pas faire un truc parfait, j'ai préféré faire une distance presque similaire et faire en sorte que le slider 7 se stack sur le 2
00:12:616 (3,4,5) - Pourquoi ce jump ? (je dis juste ça parce que ça parait un peu random) Auditivement ca parait correct. Je garde cette remarque au cas ou j'ai une autre remarque. :>
00:18:270 (9) - Tu pourrais essayer de l'écarter un peu de (8) car on pourrais facilement penser que y'a 1/2 beat d'écart alors que non. Essaye peut être de le placer à x36|y200 par exemple ? Seems legit, en + tu me permet de ne pas modifier le reste. :>
00:31:770 (1,2,3) - Je pense que avoir la même distance entre (1,2) et (2,3) pourrais se révéler intéressent comme pattern. C'est vrai que c'était pas consistent en terme de DS donc done. >
00:40:308 (4,6) - Pourquoi ne pas avoir un sliderslide avec un whistle comme pour 00:25:539 (7,5) ? My bad
00:56:231 (2,3) - Tu pourrais peut être avoir la même distance ici qu'entre 00:56:924 (3,4,5,6,7) pour continuer le pattern ? Yeye, mais je suis pas fan du résultat. :x
01:42:847 (8,1) - La distance snap est trop faible, on dirait pas que c'est du 3/4 de différence mais plutot du 1/2 de différence =/ J'ai reverse le 1 et 2 ca devrait aller mieux now, pas niveau flow par contre. :<
02:05:693 (1) - Pourquoi cette accélération si soudaine ? (c'est pas vraiment gênant lors du play mais c'est la seule fois ou tu le fais) La double notif non :> Plus serieusement ces accélérateurs sont plus considérés comme des boost par rapport à la précédente séquence musicale (c'est pas faux²)
02:20:462 (1) - ^
02:56:001 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Le rond est assez mal fait, je te conseille de faire un slider rond, de le sélectionner, d'aller dans l'onglet "Compose", de sélectionner "Convert Slider to Stream", de choisir le nombre de circle et d'admirer le résultat (cette dernière étape est facultative) OMFG 3illuminati5me!
03:11:116 (4) - Ce circle ne correspond pas à un beat dans la musique, il est donc overmappé et DOIT être détruit =/ Y U not NO taiko? :q

Insane

AiMod il te dit que t'as pas snappé tes kiai à 00:22:307 et 00:22:423. Ah? Perso il me le dit pas mais okay.

00:11:231 (1,2,3) - C'est juste une suggestion, mais je te conseille de les rapprocher, ça fait un peu êtrange actuellement, et c'est difficile de savoir quand faut appuyer =/ Done
00:13:770 (8) - Tu pourrais ajouter un whistle comme tu as fait pour 00:12:039 (4) ? Effectivement c'est plus cohérent comme ça.
00:26:001 (1,2) - Wow.. Le jump est vraiment large, c'est assez chaud à jouer comparé aux patterns précedents En fait je me retouve bloqué sur cette situation car je fais un overlap avec le slider 5, du coup j'ai complêtement déplacé le 2, on a un flow correct et un jump de 2, ce qui est un peux mieux. Also le banket du 5 a été amélioré.
00:40:770 (1,2) - ^ Pareil qu'au dessus, c'est passé a 1.5.
01:09:616 (6,7,8,9,10) - La distance snap parait vraiment élevée ici... Plusieurs players pourrait faire des miss ici et ça serai dommage =/ Exact, il est repassé a 1.
01:14:924 (6,7) - Comparé aux distance snap lors du stream, celui là est vraiment faible, on dirait du 1/4 d'écart. Je te conseille te le bouger par exemple autour de x288|y176 Pas mal du tout ca!
01:37:770 (6,2) - Un peu embêtant l'overlap.. Tu pourrais stacker leurs queue peut être ? (cette phrase est vraiment bizarre xD) HUEHUEHUAHUE
01:47:231 (1,2) - Jump encore assez difficile pour une partie de la musique assez lente. Tu peux essayer de bouger (2) à x160|y192 ? Kay'
01:51:501 (3) - Cette note est overmappé car il n'y a pas de beat qui lui corresponde dans la musique, ils faut donc l'enlever. Oui mais par contre je dois bouger le 2 afin d'avoir une consistance dans les DS.
01:52:770 (7) - Tu pourrais rajouter un NC ici, ça suivrai ta logique de placement de new combo. Yep
02:49:308 (5,1) - La distance snap laisse clairement penser que y'a 1/4 d'écart là, essaye de doubler la distance snap je pense. Peux pas. :> Autant essayer un stack, ca se vera visuellement que c'est un 1/2 :>
02:52:308 (2,3,4) - Pourquoi ne pas essayer de faire blanket ces sliders avec (3) ? Déja un blanket avec le 1 et essayer des pattern différent.

Très bonne map, elle est fun à jouer en plus :3

Bonne chance pour le rank :3
Merci pour le mod, il est au top! Ton up de bat est clairement mérité, prends ton cookie! :D
Ps : Comme tu peux le voir, je n'ai pas fini la correction, j'ai plus de batterie. :'( , je continuerai donc plus tard. :D
Hard donc updated
Edit^3 Youhou fini :D Insane updated!
Fushimi Rio
From queue, sorry for delay

[Normal]

00:07:539 (1,2) - use 1.2x ds since you used 1.2x between 2,3 to keep consistent
01:40:078 (1,2) - ^

This diff isn't very good-looking imo. but I got no idea to help, sorry.

[Hard]

00:00:155 (1) - x48 y128
00:05:231 (4,5) - jump is a bit too big imo. you don't need to stack the circles. try this?
00:17:578 (8,9) - too close
01:58:770 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - nice idea
02:01:308 (8,2) - don't stack notes on reverse arrows

Same to normal. It may be hard to improve its looking just by some mods. Look through some others‘ maps to get some ideas?

[Insane]

00:07:308 (5) - x220 y336

Not much to say. Some big jumps such as 00:26:001 (1,2) - are not reasonable imo.
Map still need some work. Maybe you need more experience in stantard mapping. Sorry I can't help much.
Eni
Rank soon!
Topic Starter
Aldwych

Project Railgun wrote:

Rank soon!
Hope so. :>

Edit:

Hi imoutosan

imoutosan wrote:

From queue, sorry for delay (also sorry for delay. :>)

[Normal]

00:07:539 (1,2) - use 1.2x ds since you used 1.2x between 2,3 to keep consistent okay
01:40:078 (1,2) - ^ 1.1 so, it's better.

This diff isn't very good-looking imo. but I got no idea to help, sorry.

[Hard]

00:00:155 (1) - x48 y128 Why not, the flow isn't that bad.
00:05:231 (4,5) - jump is a bit too big imo. you don't need to stack the circles. try this? Nope coz you create inconsistent DS between your circles.
00:17:578 (8,9) - too close Since the previus mod it's not. :>
01:58:770 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - nice idea Thanks. :>
02:01:308 (8,2) - don't stack notes on reverse arrows Well coz it's 2 sliders, i don't think it's a problem, keep noticing this.

Same to normal. It may be hard to improve its looking just by some mods. Look through some others‘ maps to get some ideas?

[Insane]

00:07:308 (5) - x220 y336 Why not.

Not much to say. Some big jumps such as 00:26:001 (1,2) - are not reasonable imo.
Map still need some work. Maybe you need more experience in stantard mapping. Sorry I can't help much.
- Love1yV1ruS -
Ummm... From my modding queue ;)

Guest Oni
00:10:885 (42) - this note, and also 00:14:578 (59) - very strange note for me(as a player). I checked the song and cannot understand why put a single k here after 'dk dk'. May change this single k to 'dk'?(just like former two dk) or make it to be 'dkd'?
00:28:308 (136,137,138,139) - rhythm here is completely different from former ones, there for no need to force it to be 'kd dk'. I think you want to make more variaty for this map, but this is not a good attemption.
00:30:731 (151,152,153,154) - some mapper told me never use 'ddkk' or 'kkdd' in your map, its not good for player. so i recommand you change it to 'dddk'?
00:37:539 (185,186,187,188,189,190,191) - not a good choice. THE MAIN RHYTHM IS 'x x x xx xx x x x x x xx xx x' in you map, so i think all change should be based on this main rhythm.
00:41:231 (203,204,205,206,207) - 'kd dk d' to 'k kd dk' (reason is the same as above)
00:43:078 (214,215,216,217,218) - 'kd dd d' to 'k dd dd' (^)
About the main rhythm, you can have a look on you map: all part of rhythm must has note at the postion given above(blue one)
And remaining part is awesome.

Muzukashii
00:30:616 (105) - 1/4 forward (the melody of song is sooooooo strong!)
00:38:001 (133) - 1/4 forward
00:45:385 (163) - 1/4 forward
01:41:231 (354) - d to k?
01:55:539 (404) - 1/4 forward
01:57:385 (413) - 1/4 forward
02:02:924 (436) - 1/4 forward
02:28:770 (533) - 1/4 forward

Good futsuu. No need to change anything

Question after modding:
See balabalaZoda again. Who is the mapper? Ok its Gezo. I found it at the first page..

Enjoy ;)
Topic Starter
Aldwych
Hi love, currently i'm a bit busy and i cannot correct your mod, but take your cookie. :D

Good futsuu. No need to change anything
FUUUUU GEZO TITCH ME HOW2MAPTAIKO PLZ! :'(

Edit:

- Love1yV1ruS - wrote:

Ummm... From my modding queue ;)

Muzukashii
00:30:616 (105) - 1/4 forward (the melody of song is sooooooo strong!)
00:38:001 (133) - 1/4 forward
00:45:385 (163) - 1/4 forward
01:41:231 (354) - d to k? it's a muzukashi, so i won't do ddk pattern coz players have to learn simple triplet pattern.
01:55:539 (404) - 1/4 forward
01:57:385 (413) - 1/4 forward
02:02:924 (436) - 1/4 forward Noop, here a i prefer follow the finish hitsound.
02:28:770 (533) - 1/4 forward

For the others 1/4, these were applied coz you riht, it fits much better.
Thank you for the mod :D
~Updated
SkyDevil
Soo recently they added a custom song mode on Geometry Dash and someone made a level of this song too which reminded me of this map

thus I checked this map and noticed you didn't add a soft-slidertick yet for normal .w. so uh have a link http://puu.sh/daaQP/c2b8aa254a.wav
Totoro le Pacha
Thanks, I remapped the beginning, I took your opinions in considerations and remapped the first 50 seconds

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256,192,187770,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,187885,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,188001,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,188116,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,188231,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,188462,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,188578,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,188693,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,188924,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,189155,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,189385,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,189501,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,189616,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,189847,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,190078,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,190308,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,190424,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,190539,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,190770,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,191001,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,191231,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,191462,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,191578,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,191693,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,191808,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,191924,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,192155,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,192385,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,192501,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,192731,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,192847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,193078,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,193308,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,193539,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,193655,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,193770,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,194001,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,194231,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,194347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,194578,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,194693,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,194924,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,195155,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,195385,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,195501,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,195616,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,195847,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,196308,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,196770,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,197001,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,197231,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,197693,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,197924,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,198039,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,198155,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,198385,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,198616,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,198731,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,198847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,199078,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,199308,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,199539,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,199770,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,199885,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,200001,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,200231,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,200462,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,200693,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,200924,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,201385,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,201847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,202078,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,202539,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,202770,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,203231,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,203462,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,203693,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,203808,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,203924,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,204155,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,204385,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,204616,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,205078,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,205308,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,205539,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,205655,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,205770,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,206001,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,206231,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,206462,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,206693,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,206924,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,207385,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,207616,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,207847,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,208078,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,208308,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,208539,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,208770,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,209231,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,209462,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,209693,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,209924,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,210155,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,210385,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,210616,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,211078,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,211539,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,211770,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,212001,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,212462,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,212924,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,213385,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,213616,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,213847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,214308,1,4,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
Aldwych

SkyDevil wrote:

Soo recently they added a custom song mode on Geometry Dash and someone made a level of this song too which reminded me of this map

thus I checked this map and noticed you didn't add a soft-slidertick yet for normal .w. so uh have a link http://puu.sh/daaQP/c2b8aa254a.wav
Huh i forgot thanks, only added on normal diff, the others makes it ugly.
Also updated cafer taiko oni.
Birdy
[Normal]
1.90 stars, which is kind of brutal for the easiest diff of the mapset (it's almost marked as Hard).
00:08:924 (3,4) - Personally I don't like the design here, as the blanket doesn't work. Perhaps (4) should be aimed more leftwards? (4) could also have a sharp turn at the blue tick to match the synth.
01:48:616 (3,4) - Combine to one slider.
01:55:078 (2) - Shorten by 1/4 to match the synth like previously in the section.
02:16:770 (1,2) - They're touching. Lewd. Please adjust this part just a little bit to avoid unnecessary overlaps.
02:57:847 (1) - Why is the NC on this instead of 02:57:385 (6) ?
03:06:616 (3,4) - Though the design is fine, these could be combined to a slider. If you fix enough of the following difficulty reducing suggestions, this should be fine like it is currently, and no edit is required.

So, yeah. Remove these to reduce the difficulty. Like I said, 1.90 stars is pretty harsh for the easiest diff. These are mainly in sections with 1/2 circles in a row. I've pointed out quite many, so there's no need to remove every single one mentioned below.
SPOILER
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00:46:539 (4)
00:53:924 (3)
00:57:155 (4)
01:00:385 (2)
01:04:539 (2)
01:06:385 (5)
01:10:078 (5)
01:11:924 (2)
01:13:770 (5)
01:14:693 (2)
01:15:616 (4)
02:11:001 (4)
02:14:693 (3)
02:22:078 (4)
02:25:770 (4)
02:37:308 (3)
02:44:231 (4)
02:48:847 (6)
02:52:539 (5)
03:09:155 (2)
-

[Hard]
00:01:539 (4,5) - The design could have a bit more thought in it. There's nothing wrong, really, but it could look interesting.
01:18:731 (3,4,5,6,7) - Could be in a perfect square.
02:28:539 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Sure, I know, symmetry. But it doesn't play well.
02:39:385 (2) - Long, basic curved slider in a section like this? Doesn't fit the music, really. Either use a patterned slider, or just more circles/sliders to compliment the rhythm.
03:21:847 (3,4) - The slider should start at (3)'s current position and the circle should be at (4)'s end to match the music better.

[Insane]
00:54:155 (1,2,3,4,5) - BROOTAL JUMPS. Reduce pls.
Aside from slight overmapping, no big flaws. The intro could be less overmapped; that's the last place where you'd want to put circles in places with no noticeable beats.
Topic Starter
Aldwych
Hi SNB!

Static Noise Bird wrote:

[Normal]
1.90 stars, which is kind of brutal for the easiest diff of the mapset (it's almost marked as Hard).
00:08:924 (3,4) - Personally I don't like the design here, as the blanket doesn't work. Perhaps (4) should be aimed more leftwards? (4) could also have a sharp turn at the blue tick to match the synth. I understand the point, but like i said on kenterz, i can't find a solution here, coz i cannot move more on the left (altready 1.20 DS), and i also cannot make a proper blanket, also make a shake, won't make the desing more beatifull. :'<
01:48:616 (3,4) - Combine to one slider. Seems legit.
01:55:078 (2) - Shorten by 1/4 to match the synth like previously in the section. I didn't find a good reason why, first the pattern already given now will be disturbed, plus i will be forced to put a new object, which means by increase the diff (not highly but yeah this will be in contradiction of what you want me to do right.
02:16:770 (1,2) - They're touching. Lewd. Please adjust this part just a little bit to avoid unnecessary overlaps. huehue lewd yourself ¦>
02:57:847 (1) - Why is the NC on this instead of 02:57:385 (6) ? Coz i found the nc ugly to see where you're mentionning.
03:06:616 (3,4) - Though the design is fine, these could be combined to a slider. If you fix enough of the following difficulty reducing suggestions, this should be fine like it is currently, and no edit is required. Ok so i'm gonna see the following one, coz i find itself good.

So, yeah. Remove these to reduce the difficulty. Like I said, 1.90 stars is pretty harsh for the easiest diff. These are mainly in sections with 1/2 circles in a row. I've pointed out quite many, so there's no need to remove every single one mentioned below. So let's try a 50 - 75% ratio?
SPOILER
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00:46:539 (4) Accorded, i also updated the next blanket.
00:53:924 (3) No need, sounds good.
00:57:155 (4) Accorded, this really simplify the current process.
01:00:385 (2) Noop
01:04:539 (2) I could say yes, but the next slider says me no.
01:06:385 (5) Noop
01:10:078 (5) Why not.
01:11:924 (2) Noop
01:13:770 (5) Noop
01:14:693 (2) Yep
01:15:616 (4) Definitively agree
02:11:001 (4) This part needed some clean so yea.
02:14:693 (3) ^
02:22:078 (4) Sure
02:25:770 (4) Gonna keep this pattern.
02:37:308 (3) ^
02:44:231 (4) Agree
02:48:847 (6) Noop.
02:52:539 (5) Defnitivly.
03:09:155 (2) And... noop :D
-

Ok so 1.85 stars, a little less, maybe not enough, but it's still good to take.

[Hard]
00:01:539 (4,5) - The design could have a bit more thought in it. There's nothing wrong, really, but it could look interesting.Making curves, the flow will be easier to follow.
01:18:731 (3,4,5,6,7) - Could be in a perfect square. Fixed.
02:28:539 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Sure, I know, symmetry. But it doesn't play well. Didn't find another solution without breaking the next pattern. :<
02:39:385 (2) - Long, basic curved slider in a section like this? Doesn't fit the music, really. Either use a patterned slider, or just more circles/sliders to compliment the rhythm. Well i guess you didn't see the previous mod (and i can understand lol, but there was a long discussion about this part, i invite you to read the previous posts, coz i didn't find a solution and i'm open to new ones instrad of only put little streams of objects. xD
03:21:847 (3,4) - The slider should start at (3)'s current position and the circle should be at (4)'s end to match the music better. Fixed but you missed some parts xD

[Insane]
00:54:155 (1,2,3,4,5) - BROOTAL JUMPS. Reduce pls. Surprise (but seks...)
Aside from slight overmapping, no big flaws. The intro could be less overmapped; that's the last place where you'd want to put circles in places with no noticeable beats.
Thanks for the mod, take you cookie! :D
kouzuki_karen
FutsuuZoda

00:21:847 (11) - add d or large D
00:24:616 (17,18) - kk
00:52:539 (87) - d
01:13:539 (148) - d
01:23:231 (169) - k
01:37:078 (177,178,179) - kdk (i think it fits instruments)
01:40:770 (182,183,184) - ^
01:52:770 (199,200,201) - ddk or kdk would fit the melody better.
02:16:308 (253) - k
02:38:693 (314) - d
02:50:693 (348) - remove
03:05:693 (387,388,389,390,391) - kdkdk
03:19:539 (412,413,414) - kdk
03:23:231 (420,421,422) - ^
03:26:924 (428,429,430) - ^
03:30:616 (436,437,438) - ^

Muzukashi

set SV to 1.6

00:26:001 (87,88,89) - ddk
00:40:770 (143,144,145) - ^
00:45:616 (164,165,166) - ^
00:50:231 (182) - d
00:51:155 (185,186) - dd
00:52:424 (190) - d
01:23:231 (314) - d
01:24:155 (315,316) - remove
01:38:924 (345) - add d
01:51:847 (393) - add k
02:33:385 (553) - too close to 02:33:501 (1) -
02:42:154 (31) - d
Topic Starter
Aldwych
hi mrdumpling64!

Muzukashi

set SV to 1.6 why should i when the others are 1.40?

00:26:001 (87,88,89) - ddk No (reason n°1)
00:40:770 (143,144,145) - ^ No (reason n°1)
00:45:616 (164,165,166) - ^ No (reason n°1)
00:50:231 (182) - d Reason? Not the only one so ( (182 to 185) ), coz alone i don't see why soundly i will give a 'd'
00:51:155 (185,186) - dd See above
00:52:424 (190) - d No (reason n°1)
01:23:231 (314) - d Nope, if you see the next pattern, this k is correct
01:24:155 (315,316) - remove Why? This create an ugly void without reason.
01:38:924 (345) - add d Nope 777 object s will still be here, also it will make the whole pattern harder to play. But the sounds made could be interesting on oni
01:51:847 (393) - add k Nope 777 objects will still be here, also it will make the whole pattern harder to play. But the sounds made could be interesting on oni
02:33:385 (553) - too close to 02:33:501 (1) - Still readable and playable
02:42:154 (31) - d Clap hitsound here, plus this pattern is used on different part of the music that didn't surprised you
NB : reason 1 -> I don't want to make again kkd or ddk combos like, i want this muzukashi to be a way to learn the simplest triplet pattern (aka ddd & kkk) + some 3/4 stuff, nothing more.

Thank you for the mod, take your cookie (gonna see yours later).
rew0825
Hi from my mod requeue :)

[ General]
  1. In Muzukashii and Pacha's Taiko Oni should use SV 1.6 t/243350

[ FutsuuZoda]
  1. 00:28:539 (28) - d
  2. 00:59:001 (107) - d
  3. 01:56:924 (208,209) - ctrl+g
  4. 02:20:001 (263) - k

[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:07:539 (25,27) - ctrl+g
  2. 02:05:693 - Why not Add Kiai time because in FutsuuZoda you Add
  3. 03:27:616 (211) - k

[ Pacha's Taiko Oni]
  1. 00:27:039 (129,130) - ctrl+g
  2. 00:54:731 (279,280) - ctrl+g
  3. 01:57:155 (597,599) - k
  4. 02:05:683 - Why not Add Kiai time because in FutsuuZoda you Add

Good luck :)
Yuzeyun
I can still call Ono and tell your point is wrong about the SV, we said it is allowed, not mandatory.

Re-read his post.

(will apply mods later 病気です uwu)
Topic Starter
Aldwych
Hi rew0825

rew0825 wrote:

Hi from my mod requeue :)

[ General]
  1. In Muzukashii and Pacha's Taiko Oni should use SV 1.6 t/243350 Imo for my muzukashii, i don't find the utility, also i'm using a 1.20 SV change, so i found the speed good enough, and what gezo said confirm what i want.

[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:07:539 (25,27) - ctrl+g hmmm no, coz after i used the same pattern, so it creates a disorder, and i doesnt sounds good enough, coz if you hear the main sound it sound moar like a dkk. :<
  2. 02:05:693 - Why not Add Kiai time because in FutsuuZoda you Add Well gezo and I, have not the same vision on where to put the kiai (and we're not forced to use on the same time (even if it's advised to)), and i'm mainly a std mapper so i'm using the same kaii as the std diff (except the shortest who who lasts 0.5 secs.
  3. 03:27:616 (211) - k Feels interested but i prefer put it on the next one, it sounds really better.

Good luck :)
Thank you, take your cookie :D
Yuzeyun

mrdumpling64 wrote:

FutsuuZoda

00:21:847 (11) - add d or large D makes no sense at all, leads to dumb overmap where there's nothing at all in the end
00:24:616 (17,18) - kk current pattern was to symbolize 3/4 without using 3/4
00:52:539 (87) - d melodic noting here
01:13:539 (148) - d i'd rather keep k (kipkaylol) on that point since a change would make the map feel very wonky
01:23:231 (169) - k i don't see the point at all, it's a calm part.
01:37:078 (177,178,179) - kdk (i think it fits instruments)
01:40:770 (182,183,184) - ^ both instances were meant to be kantan-level parts that follow the kick clap thing
01:52:770 (199,200,201) - ddk or kdk would fit the melody better. missed on purpose to have increasing difficulty as song gets more epic
02:16:308 (253) - k myeah
02:38:693 (314) - d keeping that way, better not have a weird noting here
02:50:693 (348) - remove a small 5note to melody isn't that hell
03:05:693 (387,388,389,390,391) - kdkd k kick clap noting
03:19:539 (412,413,414) - kdk
03:23:231 (420,421,422) - ^
03:26:924 (428,429,430) - ^
03:30:616 (436,437,438) - ^ same as before, KCN

rew0825 wrote:

Hi from my mod requeue :)

[ FutsuuZoda]
  1. 00:28:539 (28) - d i'd rather keep some variety (i don't want 4510 HDFL scores)
  2. 00:59:001 (107) - d same as the above mod, (314)
  3. 01:56:924 (208,209) - ctrl+g it's an augmented noting of the previous patterns
  4. 02:20:001 (263) - k it has a different anchor on that point.

Muzukashii | Pacha
  1. 02:05:693 - Why not Add Kiai time because in FutsuuZoda you Add I added, it's different because i decided i would make it so on my diff.

Good luck :)
you guys should try to understand the reasoning behind a map, if you think something is wrong, try to explain as much as you can (i don't expect you to make perfect mods on the first try, i started on that kind of mods too if you want to know) so it's way more helpful.
thanks nonetheless

@sandwych je me suis pété le crâne (j'suis en arrêt jusqu'à demain uwu) pour une note au final D:
02:16:308 (253) - remplace par un k
Topic Starter
Aldwych

_Gezo_ wrote:

you guys should try to understand the reasoning behind a map, if you think something is wrong, try to explain as much as you can (i don't expect you to make perfect mods on the first try, i started on that kind of mods too if you want to know) so it's way more helpful.
thanks nonetheless

@sandwych je me suis pété le crâne (j'suis en arrêt jusqu'à demain uwu) pour une note au final D:
02:16:308 (253) - remplace par un k
I agree with _Gezo_ most of my refuse is you didn't give me valuable reasons that i would change my parts, some of the suggestions can be interesting, but it doesn't respect how we map our respective way of map and i've sometimes to think i could be good with other ways to discover if it's better.

@ROEUN RIEV DROTE : Ca marche, c'est plus simple de cette façon.
Reste toroto :>.
Fryz3
hi! modder came from: p/3589186/
I want to say this first: i don't dislike the music, but for me it is harder to map.
i'm used to japanese songs and chinese if it comes to osu!, so forgive me if my mod doesn't help.

General
  1. you might want to take a look at Aimod. it says you toggled kai 6 times shorter then 15 seconds.
    when i took a look at the first time, it appears Aimod was right, and you toggled it for like 0.3 seconds?
    i don't know if you have not seen this or did it on purpose, but I should remove it.
    it might distract you if you see something change with the circles and sliders for 0.3 seconds and then see it has dissappeared.
normal
  1. What really bothers me in the beginning is that you use 5 different styles of combos on the same 'type' of track.
    it is original, but for me, as a player, i need to know which beats in the music i have to follow.
    in the first combo you leave a few beats, then you get all of them, then you skip one... it is bugging me.
    i suggest you try to skip the same beat in the music in all the 4 tracks(i'm not a musican, i dont know for sure how you call it).
    but it is from: 00:00:155 (1,2,3,4) - , 00:04:308 (1,2,3,4) -, 00:07:539 (1,2,3,4) - , 00:11:693 (1,2,3,4) - , 00:14:924 (1,2,3,4,5) -
    i hope you understand what i mean. i suggest you make two combos the same, so you 3 instead of 5.
  2. 00:26:924 (2) - this slider is not on the right spot. needs to be on: 00:26:808 (2)
    you have to make the slider a bit larger then.
  3. 01:57:270 (5) - ^
  4. 02:23:116 (5) - ^
  5. 02:54:501 (1) - ^
Hard
  1. 00:07:078 (9) - this note doesnt feel right. it suggest you remove that one and: 00:07:308 (10) -
    and replace it with: 00:07:193 (9) - ( you have removed now 2 circles and add 1 circle in the middle of those 2)
  2. 00:14:462 (8,9) - ^
  3. 01:00:270 (4) - it would sound better if your repeat this slider, but it is your choice.
  4. 02:00:385 (6) - i would place this one properly. Let the distance the same, i think that's better.
  5. 02:18:847 (7) - ^
Insane
  1. 00:08:001 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - needs better spacing. the 2 and 3 are closer to eachother compared to the others,
    but the beat difference is larger. you have to change something there i think.
  2. 01:15:847 (8) - NC here?
  3. 02:58:193 (4,5,6) - i should make the distance between 4 and 5, 5 and 6 bigger.
Hope it's usefull! gl with your map getting ranked :)
Topic Starter
Aldwych
Hi Fryz3 o/

Fryz3 wrote:

hi! modder came from: p/3589186/
I want to say this first: i don't dislike the music, but for me it is harder to map.
i'm used to japanese songs and chinese if it comes to osu!, so forgive me if my mod doesn't help.

General
  1. you might want to take a look at Aimod. it says you toggled kai 6 times shorter then 15 seconds.
    when i took a look at the first time, it appears Aimod was right, and you toggled it for like 0.3 seconds?
    i don't know if you have not seen this or did it on purpose, but I should remove it.
    it might distract you if you see something change with the circles and sliders for 0.3 seconds and then see it has dissappeared. My previous map (paladin) has been ranked with these kind of kiai. It's ok since i don't abuse of this on a short amount of time.
normal
  1. What really bothers me in the beginning is that you use 5 different styles of combos on the same 'type' of track.
    it is original, but for me, as a player, i need to know which beats in the music i have to follow.
    in the first combo you leave a few beats, then you get all of them, then you skip one... it is bugging me.
    i suggest you try to skip the same beat in the music in all the 4 tracks(i'm not a musican, i dont know for sure how you call it).
    but it is from: 00:00:155 (1,2,3,4) - , 00:04:308 (1,2,3,4) -, 00:07:539 (1,2,3,4) - , 00:11:693 (1,2,3,4) - , 00:14:924 (1,2,3,4,5) -
    i hope you understand what i mean. i suggest you make two combos the same, so you 3 instead of 5. I think i understand a bit what you said, but i used new combos on the same time for all the diff, i mean every 2 beats, so i don't really see the problem, maybe the amount of combo for each combo which are different?
  2. 00:26:924 (2) - this slider is not on the right spot. needs to be on: 00:26:808 (2) I'm following the beat here, not the synthetisor, if i'm following 1/4 ~ 3/4 notes, i'm gonna create a disorder normal.
    you have to make the slider a bit larger then.
  3. 01:57:270 (5) - ^
  4. 02:23:116 (5) - ^
  5. 02:54:501 (1) - ^ Reasons are the same
Hard
  1. 00:07:078 (9) - this note doesnt feel right. it suggest you remove that one and: 00:07:308 (10) -
    and replace it with: 00:07:193 (9) - ( you have removed now 2 circles and add 1 circle in the middle of those 2) Waiting for others opinions, coz i found it good imo.
  2. 00:14:462 (8,9) - ^
  3. 01:00:270 (4) - it would sound better if your repeat this slider, but it is your choice. This will be and overmapping issue + an unresolved high DS.
  4. 02:00:385 (6) - i would place this one properly. Let the distance the same, i think that's better. Distance the same with what? If you look closely the DS increasing is because of the pattern.
  5. 02:18:847 (7) - ^ Mhhh yeh fixed.
Insane
  1. 00:08:001 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - needs better spacing. the 2 and 3 are closer to eachother compared to the others,
    but the beat difference is larger. you have to change something there i think. If i've made a stack for 2 circles it the way to clearly separe the 2 patterns in order to make 2 different spacing with the mouse easier.
  2. 01:15:847 (8) - NC here? Ye you right.
  3. 02:58:193 (4,5,6) - i should make the distance between 4 and 5, 5 and 6 bigger. I don't find any sound which justify a jump here.
Hope it's usefull! gl with your map getting ranked :)
Thanks for the mod!
Take your cookie! :D
Nwolf
Last kiai: Futsuu is too Muzu (lacks breaks, 1/2 patterns are too long), Muzu is too Oni (lacks breaks, too much 1/4)

02:05:693 - This kiai should be removed in Gezo's diff



This is a not a mod, this is just me pointing out issues I want to see fixed before I do proper mod
Topic Starter
Aldwych
Ok here we are, it's updated, Gezo accepted the delete.
Rest in pasta 444, 777, 1111 combo! :'(

Also 100th post.
jonathanlfj
[General]
offset -4
combo 2 is a little too dark and blends in with the background a lot, recommend you to choose a lighter purple (the already-light purple can be even lighter to compensate for the change)
overall volume in the beginning is too quiet, i can barely hear any noticeable feedback when playing the first kiai. Consider raising at least the kiai volume to 70%+, and the rest by about 10%

[Normal]
recommend AR4 or 4.5 since this is meant for beginners
00:13:539 (4) - reduce a repeat so its consistent with 00:06:155 (4), this is difficult to read too
00:22:770 (1) - by today's ranking criteria, this is too soon after spinner. You are gonna have to ignore the beat at 00:22:770 to make this work. This applies to all spinners with an object directly after it.
00:35:693 (5) - using a soft sample + whistle is much better
00:37:539 - no need for this green line
00:42:847 (3) - why the sudden spacing increase? If you are gonna do it then do it for all objects in this section (or do it in the kiai)
01:08:001 (2) - this should be a circle judging by how you mapped other similar sections
01:40:078 (1) - again, if you are increasing spacing for aesthetics then do it for all of them in this section
02:20:001 (8) - same as 00:35:693 (5)
03:21:385 (3,4,5,6) - this is a cool pattern to use on something like Hard, but the variety in clicking action maybe too much for beginners. Stick to one type of pattern here

[Hard]
00:12:847 (4) - try x:328 y:88, flows better imo
00:25:539 (7) - extended sliders like this sounds better if you swap their end for soft samples. Applies to all of them
00:47:693 (6) - whistle?
00:57:616 (6,7) - the flow here is a bit awkward, you can try a gimmick pattern here by ctrl+g 00:57:385 (5,6)
00:59:808 (2,3,4) - this is really difficult to hit since you started the sliders on blue ticks, try removing the repeat on 00:59:231 (1) and map this like other patterns
01:54:847 (2) - try x:240 y:284 so its less cluttered with the previous slider
02:02:462 (2) - the repeat is hidden under 02:01:308 (8) making it difficult to react to, pretty sure this is unrankable too. To avoid this problem i recommend you use this rhythm for this section: 02:23:693 (5) - whistle? same to 02:31:078 (4)
02:45:039 (2,3,4) - another difficult pattern due to blue line short sliders, please fix this so it has the same clicking action as the other sections
02:48:155 (9) - missing NC; also for 02:49:539 (1) you need to silence the end as well as using soft sample
02:53:347 (6) - i would delete this circle because it covers a relatively weak beat, the combo is already pretty difficult to play as-is
02:54:270 (2,3,4) - fix them to snap on the red line
02:56:001 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - very long stream for a Hard diff, i would delete 02:56:577 (7)
03:00:155 (5,6,7) - for this one you can try something like this: 03:06:616 (5) - missing NC

[Insane]
00:13:308 (7) - missing NC here
00:32:001 (3) - forgot clap
01:07:078 (2,3,4,5,6) - this stream should not be touching based on how you handled the other ones in this section
01:12:616 (1,2,3,4,5) - try to make this smoother for playing: 02:23:001 (3,4,5) - this sudden spacing change threw me off when i first played this, recommend you to lower the distance or swap for a 1/4 slider
02:39:155 (1,2,3) - this pattern is a little difficult to perform, try to move 02:39:155 (1) out of stack and bring 02:39:616 (3) closer for the stream afterwards
02:43:308 (4,5) - based on the music emphasis here, the repeat slider should come after the 1/4 slider: 02:55:078 (1,2) - try a ctrl+g here, its really easy to misread the rhythm between 02:54:847 (11,1)

the difficulty spikes on Hard worries me a bit, but looking at the bpm it shouldn't be too demanding. Let me know afterwards
Topic Starter
Aldwych
Ow hi jonathanlfj! o/

jonathanlfj wrote:

[General]
offset -4 Ok fixed. (Hardly but fixed xD)
combo 2 is a little too dark and blends in with the background a lot, recommend you to choose a lighter purple (the already-light purple can be even lighter to compensate for the change) Yep, fixed, but i cannot make a too lighter coulour for the 5th since the next (the first one so) is "white".
overall volume in the beginning is too quiet, i can barely hear any noticeable feedback when playing the first kiai. Consider raising at least the kiai volume to 70%+, and the rest by about 10% Well yes, as you saw i increase the volume multiple time, so i don't really want to make all 70%, instead i'd rather make 70 - 80 - 90 - 100 (which is maybe what you want me to do).

[Normal]
recommend AR4 or 4.5 since this is meant for beginners Same as paladin so 4 is worth.
00:13:539 (4) - reduce a repeat so its consistent with 00:06:155 (4), this is difficult to read too Some modders talks also on this part to add a reverse but the argues and what i think about this part confirm what should be do, 3/4 spacing is a bit complicated to have on normal one, fixed.
00:22:770 (1) - by today's ranking criteria, this is too soon after spinner. You are gonna have to ignore the beat at 00:22:770 to make this work. This applies to all spinners with an object directly after it. Oh... ok. It's a bit ugly but i've no choice.
00:35:693 (5) - using a soft sample + whistle is much better Why not, seems legit (also i've to do the same on all i know :'( )
00:37:539 - no need for this green line ww sry
00:42:847 (3) - why the sudden spacing increase? If you are gonna do it then do it for all objects in this section (or do it in the kiai) Here is the problem, technicaly the spacing is not a real problem when playing, i mean i don't think the player will fail cause of the 1.10 DS on this part. But if you want the reason -> Overlapping when making blanket. Owell FFS fixed.
01:08:001 (2) - this should be a circle judging by how you mapped other similar sections Well fixed, but i've to remake this section, the remaining 1/2 slider was embarassing, so i've replace by a 2 circles and change the current long slider.
01:40:078 (1) - again, if you are increasing spacing for aesthetics then do it for all of them in this section Well i've no choice to remake this section.
02:20:001 (8) - same as 00:35:693 (5) Fixed.
03:21:385 (3,4,5,6) - this is a cool pattern to use on something like Hard, but the variety in clicking action maybe too much for beginners. Stick to one type of pattern here ermahged, fixed by 2 reversed slider.

[Hard]
00:12:847 (4) - try x:328 y:88, flows better imo why not.
00:25:539 (7) - extended sliders like this sounds better if you swap their end for soft samples. Applies to all of them uhhhh... I'm sorry but i don't really unsterstand what you mean. :( Edit explain by kurai : YOu want me to change this slider to soft? Ok.
00:47:693 (6) - whistle? Sry m8 missing one.
00:57:616 (6,7) - the flow here is a bit awkward, you can try a gimmick pattern here by ctrl+g 00:57:385 (5,6) Such interesting, plus it sounds good for a jump, accorded.
00:59:808 (2,3,4) - this is really difficult to hit since you started the sliders on blue ticks, try removing the repeat on 00:59:231 (1) and map this like other patterns Ok fixed, i've made a kind of next pattern.
01:54:847 (2) - try x:240 y:284 so its less cluttered with the previous slider Well... ok.
02:02:462 (2) - the repeat is hidden under 02:01:308 (8) making it difficult to react to, pretty sure this is unrankable too. To avoid this problem i recommend you use this rhythm for this section: Erhmaged, i guess this would have been happen, any way i kept the rythm and found an alternative way for this slider, fixed now.
02:23:693 (5) - whistle? same to 02:31:078 (4) uwu
02:45:039 (2,3,4) - another difficult pattern due to blue line short sliders, please fix this so it has the same clicking action as the other sections Yep fixed, i've also changed the next big slider which is now stacking with the next circle, do not hesitate to give feedback on this if you wanna.
02:48:155 (9) - missing NC; also for 02:49:539 (1) you need to silence the end as well as using soft sample All fxed.
02:53:347 (6) - i would delete this circle because it covers a relatively weak beat, the combo is already pretty difficult to play as-is Yep, agreed and the slider is more visible and easier to recognize.
02:54:270 (2,3,4) - fix them to snap on the red line more on the white line. I'd rather see this.
02:56:001 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - very long stream for a Hard diff, i would delete 02:56:577 (7) Yep.
03:00:155 (5,6,7) - for this one you can try something like this: I disagree for the rythm, the 5th is ugly to hear, but i agree that slider or 1/4 like the other, i'd rather make a 1/2 spacing and make 1/4 reversed slider
03:06:616 (5) - missing NC yup

[Insane]
00:13:308 (7) - missing NC here Fixed.
00:32:001 (3) - forgot clap my bad.
01:07:078 (2,3,4,5,6) - this stream should not be touching based on how you handled the other ones in this section uhhh what? Oo Ok not overlapping on the stream? Ok.
01:12:616 (1,2,3,4,5) - try to make this smoother for playing: Tried, but without position i'm not sure i can so same thing as you, but tried.
02:23:001 (3,4,5) - this sudden spacing change threw me off when i first played this, recommend you to lower the distance or swap for a 1/4 slider Change to 1.20
02:39:155 (1,2,3) - this pattern is a little difficult to perform, try to move 02:39:155 (1) out of stack and bring 02:39:616 (3) closer for the stream afterwards Change the pattern, but i really want to keep the stacking because it sounds interesting :'(
02:43:308 (4,5) - based on the music emphasis here, the repeat slider should come after the 1/4 slider: Yep, fixed.
02:55:078 (1,2) - try a ctrl+g here, its really easy to misread the rhythm between 02:54:847 (11,1) The flow is not so good but the DS wasn't worth too, lel.

the difficulty spikes on Hard worries me a bit, but looking at the bpm it shouldn't be too demanding. Let me know afterwards
Lot of work but i'm continuing.
Cookie time :D
Oh w8 m8... double cookie!

Wow such changements, god job jonathanlfg thank you so much! :D
Totoro le Pacha
GG for star Sandwych ! \:D/
Topic Starter
Aldwych
Dessert incoming! \:D/
jonathanlfj
on Normal, 00:49:997 (1) - 02:03:843 (1) - 02:33:381 (1) - these spinners need to be fixed as well
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