OTL im pretty sure i did :
oh well when another bat swoops around ill be sure to include it
oh well when another bat swoops around ill be sure to include it
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Disasterpeace - I Am Only a Man
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Random bubble check, let's go!
[ColdTooth's Beginner]
[Insane]
[ColdTooth's Beginner]
- Your spacing goes pretty much all the time from 0.9 to 0.96 which is pretty noticeable due to the low spacing, you could try 1.0 spacing, but that's your choice here.
- 00:10:020 (1) - This sliders curve isn't that great compared to 00:05:520 (2) - , you could move your white point to x:136 y:40 and copy it to 00:11:520 (2) - here
- 00:22:020 (1) - Curves aren't that great here either, as you can see, the first curve is more straight while the other curve is like curvy. Can you improve it a bit, like this? If you want the coordinates, here they are. 1st white point x:8 y:192, 2nd x:83, y130 3rd (red point) x:54, y:32 4th x:125 y:106 and the 5th x:234, y:71
- 00:01:020 (1,2) - Even though this might look cool, it's still considered a distance snap error, please fix this!
- 00:05:520 (3) - I don't like this slider because the head overlaps with the second slider tick, could you try copying 00:04:020 (1) - ?
- 00:20:895 (4,5) - DS error.
- 00:04:770 (3) - I dislike the way it's currently curved, you could make a nice blanket with 2, like this:
- THESE NEXT SUGGESTIONS ARE ONLY IF YOU CHANGED THE PREVIOUS ONE!! 00:05:520 (1) - Place this at x:192 y:112 to keep the nice flow, also while you're at it, you could add some variety to your map by making a zig-zag pattern with 00:06:270 (2,3,1,2) - , take this as an example:
Obviously snap next notes if you do decide to apply these. - K, back to normal suggestions: 00:10:770 (2) - While I do think your placement for this slider is absolutely fine, I think it'd look better if you would press CTRL + J and snap it, like this:
- 00:29:520 (1) - You can place this slider at x:80 y:368 to make the overlap better.
- 00:19:770 (5) - Curve this slider so it'd fit better with your next slider, while also doing a nice overlap with 00:19:395 (3) - like this:
- 00:31:863 (1) - Snap the spinner properly to the white tick.
[Insane]
- 00:09:082 (2,3,4) - Using 1.0 spacing here would make the overlap look so good, look at it:
- 00:09:645 (8) - This could be moved to x:96 y:336 to make it more fun to play while also doing a cute little triangle with 00:09:270 (7,8,1) -
- 00:23:520 (2,3,4) - This triplet seems to be rather inconsistent since it's the only triplet on the white tick, can you remove the note at 00:23:613 (3) - in order to make it play more better? If you listen at 25% this doesn't fit fairly well either. :/
- 00:06:832 (2) - The stack was rather uncomfortable to play, can you unstack it? An optional place for this note could be x:208 y:264, making a cool trianglish pattern with 00:06:270 (1,1) -
- 00:26:520 (1) - I think separating the two red points from each other more would make the slider look more stylish (i fixed the second white point too a bit in order to make this):
Fixed, thanks assfix.EXE
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Topic Starter
everything fixed and updated!
Asphyxia wrote:
Random bubble check, let's go!
[ColdTooth's Beginner]
- Your spacing goes pretty much all the time from 0.9 to 0.96 which is pretty noticeable due to the low spacing, you could try 1.0 spacing, but that's your choice here. Fixed hopefully .-.
- 00:10:020 (1) - This sliders curve isn't that great compared to 00:05:520 (2) - , you could move your white point to x:136 y:40 and copy it to 00:11:520 (2) - here Fixed
- 00:22:020 (1) - Curves aren't that great here either, as you can see, the first curve is more straight while the other curve is like curvy. Can you improve it a bit, like this? If you want the coordinates, here they are. 1st white point x:8 y:192, 2nd x:83, y130 3rd (red point) x:54, y:32 4th x:125 y:106 and the 5th x:234, y:71 Looks good now, thanks.
Hey Lust, let's Bust this up
AHUEHUEUHEUHE
Topic Starter
oh coldtooth you and your puns
updated
updated
Gratz for the rank~
Woo! Congrats for rank!
And damn, we definitly did bust somethi-
ok im done making puns for you lust
And damn, we definitly did bust somethi-
ok im done making puns for you lust
Nice song
Gratz
Gratz
Topic Starter
yeeeee thanks guys!
especially you kenezz and asphyxia <3
especially you kenezz and asphyxia <3
Congratz again Lust <3
gratz lel 
ha I'm late
grats!
grats!
Gratz!
Bit.Trip.Runner is great
Disasterpeace is great
Chiptune is great
Mapper in this Set are great
So.. Map is pretty sure great as well
Congrats!
Disasterpeace is great
Chiptune is great
Mapper in this Set are great
So.. Map is pretty sure great as well
Congrats!
Is it just me, or does this song give WAY WAY WAY too much pp? I went up 3000 ranks S'ing both the insane difficulties when S'ing a usual insane song would give me maybe 50-100. In all the songs I've played, this shows up as giving me the highest pp. I really think this needs to be looked into.
THE EXTRA DIFF MAKES ME WANT TO SLIT MY THROAT