jonawaga wrote:

Hey, m4m on your queue

Normal-

SPOILER

00:17:849 (2,3,4) - (4) isn't stacked with (2) correctly, try snapping the end of (2) to the grid, and re blanketing (3)fixed
00:26:163 (1,2) - these should be a bit less curved, to keep it consistent with 00:23:994 (3,4) - these,
or make 00:23:994 (3,4) - these look more curvesprefer mine
00:36:283 (4,5) - blanket this a bit better by making it a bit more curved prefer mineexample
00:43:512 (1) - this should look like 00:42:066 (3) - this because it sounds similarunnecessary IMO
00:50:017 (2) - this is a tight curve and a bad blanket, make it a bit less curvedfixed
00:51:464 (5) - x-64 y-64 examplefixed
00:53:271 (2,3) - this is spaced weirdly, try something like this and then thisfixed
01:35:560 (1) - overlap, try rotating example i did it by 20 clockwiseunnecessary
01:55:078 (4,1) - blanketfixed
02:15:319 (5,1) - ^fixed
02:23:632 (3) - x-352 y-136, then stack the next (1) and (5)It still stack at x-333 y-133,
02:26:524 (5,1) - these aren't perfectly aligned no problem IMO
03:02:307 (1) - flipping this vertically would avoid overlap and improve flow here examplefixed

Hard-

SPOILER

00:13:873 (4) - this is a bit far away, so either move it closer or move 00:13:151 (1) - this farther awayno problem IMO
01:03:753 - 01:03:753 - add note? at x-200 y-288, then stack 01:04:838 (6) - this to itfixed
01:14:054 (2) - overlap, try moving (2) to x-484 y-128 fixed
01:37:006 (1,2) - blanketfixed
01:57:157 - add note here, stacked with 01:57:247 (5) - thisI think the rhythm at there shouldn't jump there
02:16:042 (1,2,3,4) - this should be centered?
02:57:066 - add note, stacked with 02:57:247 (3) - this, you do have harder jumps than this in this diff, so it's not so badin order to same with 01:57:247 (5)

I would have modded insane, but you wrote on your queue not to mod it.

Good Luck!

kajiyatta wrote:

M4M
[General]
BG must be 4:3 or 16:9 aspect rate, but current is 10:6, so it looks Unrankble. You need to find another BG for Ranked.fixed
Uncheck Widescreen Support because there is no SB.fixed
Delete all SC2 hitsounds in this folder, you don't use these hitsounds.fixed
[Normal]
Prefer AR4 for newbie because there is no Easy diff, so this diff is the easiest diff. fixed
Placement
02:13:151(1) Change the direction of slider like this, and the flow to next note would be more good.fixed

SPOILER

02:36:283(1) Similar suggestion, upword curve would be better flow than current one.but It will stack with other circle

SPOILER

Rhythm
00:37:729(1) Prefer 1/2 slider than a circle becuase you followed vocal on next note(2), so to be consistence.unnecessary

SPOILER

Hit Sound
00:46:404(1) Add finish at head same as other diffs.fixed
01:25:440(3) Add whistle at head same as other diffs.fixed
01:55:078(4) Delete whistle at head.fixed
03:09:536(1) Add finish.fixed
[Hard]
Placement
00:22:367(3) I don't like to stack this note on the end of slider, it looks not good. So move this note like this?prefer mine

SPOILER

00:34:657(5) Similar suggestion, this flow from (4) is a bit odd for me. I don't think so

SPOILER

00:41:705(3) Bent this slider a bit? I feel better than current one.fixed

SPOILER

01:04:837(2) CTRL+G to make a jmping, I found similar part in previous.fixed
01:29:777(1,2,3,4) So weird placement, why these sliders start on the end of pre slider... these flow doesn't look good. fixed
01:32:669(1,2,3,4) ^fixed
02:50:199(1) Useless NC I suppose.fixed
02:55:259(2) Stack this note on (1) better to see clearly.fixed
Rhythm
01:50:018 Unnecessary green line.fixed
01:03:753 Add a note here because there is cymbal sound here, so I don't suppose it is better to ignore this. (You already picked the sound on Normal and Insane)fixed
01:38:452 ^fixed
02:47:849 ^fixed
Hit Sound
00:51:464(3) Missing clap.unnecessary,because the voice is too loudly there
01:15:319(1) Add finish.fixed
02:11:715(1) Add clap same as Insane.fixed
02:33:392(1,2,3) Too loudly on this part, down the voleme better.fixed
02:34:837(1,2,3) Missing hitsounds?fixed
03:08:090(1,4,1,8) Add finish to follow the cymbal sound. Whistles sound weakly. (allpy to all diffs)fixed

Good luck.

Regraz wrote:

要起飞了！哇加油啊

1. 00:48:211 (5) - Missing rhythm.
2. 01:07:007 (2) - This note hide under Slider it is Overlap. please changed another pattern.
3. 01:15:138 - Inherited Points unsnapped. please move 01:15:138 - (you are setting 01:15:139 - )
4. 01:35:922 (2) - add whistle on slider end.
5. 01:51:102 (2,3) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
   http://puu.sh/enrVv/a3f553c80b.jpg
6. 01:59:416 (3) - add whistle here? maybe forgot whistle.
7. 02:05:198 (2) - Same as above.
8. 02:10:259 (1) - Mmm.. I think not fit this spinner. please put some circle , slider ?
9. 02:24:716 (1) - This spacing is really awkward. Please don't use stack here.
10. 02:34:476 - add note. Why not add note here ? This rhythm is kind of questionable for me =w= About before 1st kiai section. 00:50:017 (2,3,4,5,6) -
11. 03:01:584 (4,5) - You must be changed distance 0.9

1. Please changed AR7 ? AR7.5 is too fast. and for mapset diffspread.
2. 00:34:837 (1) - Move X:120 Y:184 better. for distance and Triangle.
3. 00:59:416 (1) - I kinda want a regular clap on slider reverse.
4. 01:00:500 (2) - Same as above. You have forgotten the clap ?
5. 01:03:392 (6,7,8) - Overmapped ? This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. Try this rhythm ?
   
6. 01:05:560 (2) - add clap on slider head.
7. 01:38:632 - Not need break time here.
   
   changed here
   
8. 01:50:199 (2) - I kinda want a regular clap on slider reverse.
9. 01:52:187 (3,4) - Why used distance *1.5 jump ? I think not fit this part. please used distance snap *1.2
10. 01:55:079 (3,4) - Same as above.
11. 01:57:247 (4,5) - There is much overlap and is hard to look. Changed rhythm and placement here ?
    
12. 02:02:669 (4) - You forgot clap here. add clap please.
13. 02:03:753 (3,4) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this. and you forgot clap here 02:04:114 -
    
14. 02:06:645 (5,6) - Same as above. more better rhythm. try this.
    
15. 02:07:729 (3) - add clap on slider head. you are pattern.
16. 02:09:175 (2) - Same as above.
17. 02:10:620 (2) - add clap. why not add clap here ?
18. 02:11:343 (5) - and this. add clap. why... ? mistake ? Dx
19. 02:11:705 (1) - I think not fit this spinner. Changed some circle , slider ? Try this.
    
20. 02:21:825 (1) - Mmm... This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. changed this ?
    
21. 02:27:247 (5) - Why distance *1.00 ? I think *1.2 better.
22. 02:27:970 (2) - add clap on slider head.
23. 02:29:054 (1,2,3) - Mmmm... More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
    
24. 02:31:584 (3) - add clap on slider head. why not clap here ?
25. 02:33:392 (1) - Overlap is not preferable in Hard diff.
26. 02:33:753 (3,6) - add clap ? for you are pattern.
27. 02:34:837 (1,2,3) - Why *1.00 ? 1st kiai section used 1.8 00:50:741 (1,2,3) -
28. 02:36:283 (1) - add clap on slider end.
29. 02:38:271 (2,3,4) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
    
30. 02:40:259 (3) - add clap on slider head.
31. 02:40:982 (2) - Same as above.
32. 02:41:705 (4) - Overlap is not preferable in Hard diff.
33. 02:43:512 (1) - add clap on slider end. mistake ?
34. 02:44:054 (2,3) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
    
35. 02:48:572 (3) - Don't used this pattern. please changed another pattern. this overlap is not preferable in Hard diff.
36. 02:49:657 (3) - add clap ?
37. 03:02:669 (3) - add clap on slider head.
38. 03:03:753 (1) - add clap on slder end.
39. 03:09:898 (2) - add clap on slider head.
40. 03:10:259 (3,4,5,6,7) - Hard to look this pattern. please don't stack another pattern.

Lin-Kun wrote:

Please don't hate me but...
I can't find anything wrong with your beatmap
I've been going over it for the last month now that my internet's fixed and i cant find anything wrong with it :<
(I'm new to modding and probably don't have enough experience)
please forgive me (offers cake) and it's no lie

Satellite wrote:

hitsound suggestion

23:39 *Satellite is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/415884 Chata - Kokkei to Iu Nakare [Normal]]
23:40 Satellite: 00:13:873 (4) - slider head add whistle
23:40 Satellite: 00:16:765 (4) - ^
23:40 4anke: ok
23:41 4anke: fixed
23:41 Satellite: 00:24:717 (4) - ^
23:41 Satellite: 00:31:946 (1) - ^
23:41 Satellite: 00:34:114 (5) - ^
23:41 Satellite: (slider head)
23:41 Satellite: 00:37:006 (5) - ^
23:41 Satellite: 00:42:788 (4) - ^
23:42 Satellite: 00:48:211 (5) - slider end
23:42 4anke: fixed
23:42 Satellite: 00:48:933 (6) - remove whistle
23:42 Satellite: 00:54:355 (4) - slider head
23:43 Satellite: 00:56:525 (3) - make more beautiful please. try this (please wait)
23:43 Satellite: [http://puu.sh/e3KLJ/15dc85bd82.jpg try this ?]
23:44 Satellite: 00:59:416 (3) - same as above.
23:44 Satellite: 00:56:525 (3) - add whistle on slider reverse
23:44 Satellite: 00:59:416 (3) - same as above.
23:46 Satellite: 01:01:223 (1) - slider end add whistle
23:46 Satellite: 01:03:753 (1) - ^
23:46 Satellite: 01:05:199 (3) - ^
23:46 Satellite: 01:07:367 (3) - add whistle on slider head
23:46 Satellite: 01:08:451 (5) - slider end
23:47 Satellite: 01:10:259 (2) - add whistle
23:47 Satellite: 01:10:982 (4) - slider end
23:47 Satellite: 01:13:151 (2) - head
23:47 Satellite: 01:14:596 (4) - head too
23:47 Satellite: 01:17:488 (5) - slider head
23:48 Satellite: 01:18:934 (2) - ^
23:48 Satellite: 01:20:379 (4) - ^
23:48 Satellite: 01:21:825 (2) - ^
23:48 Satellite: 01:23:271 (5) - ^
23:48 Satellite: 01:24:717 (2,4) - ^
23:48 Satellite: 01:27:247 (2) - make more beautiful :3
23:50 Satellite: [http://puu.sh/e3LwT/42337397fe.jpg try this ?]
23:50 Satellite: 01:31:946 (5) - slider head add whistle because you are pattern ~
23:51 Satellite: 01:33:030 (2) - add whistle on slider reverse
23:51 Satellite: 01:34:837 (4) - slider head
23:51 Satellite: http://puu.sh/e3LIb/49137e1eff.jpg
23:52 Satellite: why use this break ?
23:52 Satellite: I think add note better http://puu.sh/e3LL5/aec3c7dc16.jpg
23:52 Satellite: What do you think :3 ?
23:55 Satellite: fight ww
00:01 Satellite: 01:50:018 - ~ same as whislte suggestion :3
00:01 Satellite: fight !!
00:02 Satellite: and same as Hard diff ! If you are sure please use hitsound copy ?
00:02 Satellite: https://osu.ppy.sh/u/tari
00:02 Satellite: http://puu.sh/e3MX1/73f9de7dab.jpg
00:02 Satellite: hitsound copier :3 please dl w
00:03 4anke: ok,thank you :3 fixed nomal diff now
00:06 Satellite: fight ! I'm not modding placement now =3=
00:19 4anke: 01:50:018 - use finish and whistle?
00:19 Satellite: finish is okay
00:20 4anke: only finish?
00:20 Satellite: yes :3
00:21 4anke: 01:38:452 - add a note in all diff?
00:23 4anke: 0.0
00:29 4anke: all fixed now

Sorry late ~

[Normal]

1. 00:48:211 (5) - Missing rhythm.
2. 01:07:007 (2) - This note hide under Slider it is Overlap. please changed another pattern.
3. 01:15:138 - Inherited Points unsnapped. please move 01:15:138 - (you are setting 01:15:139 - )
4. 01:35:922 (2) - add whistle on slider end.
5. 01:51:102 (2,3) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
   http://puu.sh/enrVv/a3f553c80b.jpg
6. 01:59:416 (3) - add whistle here? maybe forgot whistle.
7. 02:05:198 (2) - Same as above.
8. 02:10:259 (1) - Mmm.. I think not fit this spinner. please put some circle , slider ?
9. 02:24:716 (1) - This spacing is really awkward. Please don't use stack here.
10. 02:34:476 - add note. Why not add note here ? This rhythm is kind of questionable for me =w= About before 1st kiai section. 00:50:017 (2,3,4,5,6) -
11. 03:01:584 (4,5) - You must be changed distance 0.9

[Hard]

1. Please changed AR7 ? AR7.5 is too fast. and for mapset diffspread.
2. 00:34:837 (1) - Move X:120 Y:184 better. for distance and Triangle.
3. 00:59:416 (1) - I kinda want a regular clap on slider reverse.
4. 01:00:500 (2) - Same as above. You have forgotten the clap ?
5. 01:03:392 (6,7,8) - Overmapped ? This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. Try this rhythm ?
   
6. 01:05:560 (2) - add clap on slider head.
7. 01:38:632 - Not need break time here.
   
   changed here
   
8. 01:50:199 (2) - I kinda want a regular clap on slider reverse.
9. 01:52:187 (3,4) - Why used distance *1.5 jump ? I think not fit this part. please used distance snap *1.2
10. 01:55:079 (3,4) - Same as above.
11. 01:57:247 (4,5) - There is much overlap and is hard to look. Changed rhythm and placement here ?
    
12. 02:02:669 (4) - You forgot clap here. add clap please.
13. 02:03:753 (3,4) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this. and you forgot clap here 02:04:114 -
    
14. 02:06:645 (5,6) - Same as above. more better rhythm. try this.
    
15. 02:07:729 (3) - add clap on slider head. you are pattern.
16. 02:09:175 (2) - Same as above.
17. 02:10:620 (2) - add clap. why not add clap here ?
18. 02:11:343 (5) - and this. add clap. why... ? mistake ? Dx
19. 02:11:705 (1) - I think not fit this spinner. Changed some circle , slider ? Try this.
    
20. 02:21:825 (1) - Mmm... This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. changed this ?
    
21. 02:27:247 (5) - Why distance *1.00 ? I think *1.2 better.
22. 02:27:970 (2) - add clap on slider head.
23. 02:29:054 (1,2,3) - Mmmm... More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
    
24. 02:31:584 (3) - add clap on slider head. why not clap here ?
25. 02:33:392 (1) - Overlap is not preferable in Hard diff.
26. 02:33:753 (3,6) - add clap ? for you are pattern.
27. 02:34:837 (1,2,3) - Why *1.00 ? 1st kiai section used 1.8 00:50:741 (1,2,3) -
28. 02:36:283 (1) - add clap on slider end.
29. 02:38:271 (2,3,4) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
    
30. 02:40:259 (3) - add clap on slider head.
31. 02:40:982 (2) - Same as above.
32. 02:41:705 (4) - Overlap is not preferable in Hard diff.
33. 02:43:512 (1) - add clap on slider end. mistake ?
34. 02:44:054 (2,3) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
    
35. 02:48:572 (3) - Don't used this pattern. please changed another pattern. this overlap is not preferable in Hard diff.
36. 02:49:657 (3) - add clap ?
37. 03:02:669 (3) - add clap on slider head.
38. 03:03:753 (1) - add clap on slder end.
39. 03:09:898 (2) - add clap on slider head.
40. 03:10:259 (3,4,5,6,7) - Hard to look this pattern. please don't stack another pattern.

Hard diff needs more work orz
Call me again. I'll rerecheck next week. and full mod again.
There are a lot of mistakes of hitsound. Please check all yourself.

234,292,176524,6,0,B|164:292|164:292|128:328|72:304,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
234,292,177247,2,0,B|302:292|302:292|338:328|394:304,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

pkhg wrote:

hi random modding cuz chata <3

[General]
Found unused .wav files:
- normal-sliderslide.wav
- normal-hitclap.wav
- soft-slidertick2.wav
- soft-sliderslide2.wav
- normal-hitnormal.wav
You must delete them.fixed

[Collab Insane]

00:40:620 (1,3) - fix overlapfixed
00:53:994 (3,4) - ctrl+g maybe? better rhythm (you must adjust placement after doing this )fixed
00:55:620 (3) - remove whistlefixed
01:15:139 - unsnapped greenlinefixed
01:54:717 (2,3,4,5,1) - too many stacks. maybe you can unstack some
02:24:537 - unsnapped greenlinefixed
02:26:524 (3,4) - ctrl+g maybe? for rhythm i mean :3unnecessary IMO
02:39:536 - why you skipped this? feels weird imoprefer mine

[Hard]

00:28:331 (4) - change it into a 1/2 slider with 1 reverseprefer mine
00:48:572 (3,4,5,6) - isn't this too hard?no
00:52:187 (1) - you forgot a clap on tailfinish is proper on there
02:50:199 (5) - looks a bit ugly :3I don't think so.
02:56:524 (1,2) - tweaked them a bit:fixed

234,292,176524,6,0,B|164:292|164:292|128:328|72:304,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
234,292,177247,2,0,B|302:292|302:292|338:328|394:304,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

03:10:259 (3,4,5,6,7) - too hard let me think...

[Normal]

Fine~

Idk exactly but maybe you'll need a diff between normal and hard. 1,96 to 3,46 is a big jump imoI am so lazy to map a new diff,if necessary,I will map a new different between the normal and hard

Anyway good luck ^^

think you to mod my map

1. 00:51:102 (4) - Hitsound changed clap better. please try.
2. 00:58:331 (1,2) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. Try changed this rhythm.
   
3. 01:06:645 (1) - overlaps to 01:05:199 (3) - this slider end. changed this pattern. and Try use this code.
   Code is 01:06:645 (1,2,3) - this part. please check this.
   

   492,96,66645,6,0,P|464:148|408:176,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   308,140,67367,2,0,P|254:120|188:136,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   120,208,68090,1,2,0:0:0:0:

4. 01:16:042 (2) - Forgot soft-whistle on slider head ?
5. 01:28:331 (3) - and this slider end add whistle ?
6. 02:11:705 (3) - hitsound is finish better and 02:12:428 (5) - add clap
7. 03:07:729 (1) - Missing New combo. remove Nc and 03:08:090 (2) - add Nc.
   

1. 00:52:187 (1) - Forgot clap on slider end.
2. 00:57:608 (6,1,2,3,1) - Try this code. for more clean object
   

   334,320,57608,2,0,P|370:271|348:189,1,150,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   291,249,58151,6,0,B|347:191|347:191|416:172,1,150
   487,209,58693,2,0,L|504:280,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   480,129,59054,2,0,L|462:56,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   414,173,59416,6,0,B|341:173|341:173|282:99,2,150,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

3. 01:04:115 (3,4,5) - Nazi. missing distance snap. and 01:05:922 (3,4,5) - this. please use 1.1 ds
4. 01:13:873 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. and This spacing is really awkward to me. Try an arrange like this.
   
   rhythm

   
   placement

   
   code (01:13:873 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - )

   426,72,73873,5,2,0:0:0:0:
   491,122,74054,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   485,204,74235,2,0,L|480:281,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   403,310,74596,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   338,260,74777,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   344,178,74958,2,0,L|349:101,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   350,61,75229,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   350,61,75319,5,4,0:0:0:0:
   266,213,75681,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   430,140,76042,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   266,213,76404,1,8,0:0:0:0:

5. 01:20:379 (4,5) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
   
6. 01:26:163 (4,5) - Same as above.
7. 01:27:247 (4,5) - Same as above. Try this rhythm.
   
8. 01:30:138 (2,3,4) - Why used jump this part ? not much imo.
9. 02:49:837 (4,5) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
   
10. 02:52:729 (2,3) - Same as above.
    
11. 03:04:476 (3,4,5) - please changed this part. not much jump pattern.
12. 03:10:259 (3,4,5,6,7) - This rhythm in Hard diff is too difficult imo. Please changed this pattern.
    

1. 00:11:795 (2) - Remove note. It's overmapped.
2. 00:12:247 (5,6) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
   
3. 00:37:910 - add note. why not add circle here? and this 00:39:355 -
4. 00:41:163 - add note better.
5. 00:42:247 (2) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
   
6. 00:46:946 - Same as 00:41:163 -
7. 00:54:355 (4,5) - Too large jump. not much imo.
8. 01:00:861 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Ramdom jump... ? This pattern is kind of questionable for me. Try this placement code.
   

   395,108,60861,5,2,0:0:0:0:
   297,121,61042,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   172,53,61223,5,8,0:0:0:0:
   185,151,61404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   117,276,61584,5,2,0:0:0:0:
   215,263,61765,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   340,331,61946,5,8,0:0:0:0:
   327,233,62127,1,0,0:0:0:0:

9. 01:24:536 - You forgot note. please check you are pattern. 01:15:861 (2) -
10. 01:31:946 (3) - Try to " Ctrl + G " ? I think more better flow.
11. 01:38:452 (1) - This circle should more jump better. I think more fit For example move X : 386 Y : 271
12. 02:14:596 (1) - Missing rhythm ? I'm not sure this rhythm. but I think this rhythm more better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
    
13. 02:25:259 - Same as before suggestion.
14. 02:32:126 (2,3) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
    
15. 02:55:078 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern is kind of questionable for me. Please changed another pattern.
16. 02:59:144 (7) - Remove note. It's overmapped.

Ohhh. sorry late recheck >_>
If you are question. Please send me " Forum - PM " Good luck 4anke san

Satellite wrote:

sorry! I can't login osu! ...

T^T

Satellite wrote:

Work is busy, there is no time T^T

If you are find new BN. please find new BN...
or Please wait T^T

IamKwaN wrote:

hi there, metadata check as requested.

SPOILER

Reference: http://chata.moo.jp/uk7/music.html
Unicode Title: 滑稽というなかれ
Romanised Title: Kokkei to Iu Nakare
Unicode Artist: 茶太
Romanised Artist: Chata
Tags: '落日', 'Rakujitsu', 'ウサギキノコ', 'Usagikinoko', 'bassy', 'Regraz'.

Basically everything is correct, just need confirmation on the romanisation of both title and ウサギキノコ in tag. I guess Satellite can do it! X)
Good luck on qualification!

1. Easy and Normal AR+1 better imo. because AR 3/5/7/9 is best spread.

1. 01:37:006 (2) - The contact with the Hp bar. It should be lowered a little more.
2. nice easy

1. looks fine

1. 00:38:632 (2) - Not stack this circle. because Shape is changed by Stack leniency.
   
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2. 00:51:825 (4) - Ctrl+G better.
3. 02:35:922 (4) - Same as above.

1. 00:36:102 - add note better.　(my suggestion x:20 y:256)
2. 01:09:536 (1,2,3,4) - Why interval is falling apart?
3. 01:14:054 (2,3) - Try ctrl+g I think more better flow!
4. 01:15:138 (8,9) - add clap
5. 01:18:573 (4,8) - Try changed rhythm ? about 1/2 slider :3
   
6. 01:21:463 (4,8) - Same as above.
7. 01:25:259 - add note
8. 01:26:885 (8) - add Nc. 01:27:428 (1) - remove Nc
9. 01:38:090 (6,7,1) - Jump placement suggestion.
   
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10. 02:11:705 (1) - add finish
11. 02:12:428 (5) - same as above.
12. 02:18:934 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Overmapped. please do this rhythm.
    
13. 02:21:825 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Same as above.
    
14. 02:30:229 (7) - Remove note. it is overmapped imo.
15. 02:35:560 (5) - add clap ?
16. 02:39:355 (2) - not much this rhythm. try this
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17. 03:01:946 (1) - Remove Nc
18. 03:04:837 (1) - same as above.
19. 03:09:536 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Mmmm... too big jump orz Please be a little more small ;_;

1. Easy diff remove widescreen support check.
2. normal-hitnormal.wav is not use this map. remove this wav file.
3. soft-sliderslide and soft-sliderslide3 is must be use 44byte file. try used this wav. http://puu.sh/hJgLP/842271a41e.zip

2015-05-10 22:14 Satellite: hi
2015-05-10 22:14 Satellite: keep is ok
2015-05-10 22:14 4anke: hi
2015-05-10 22:18 Satellite: insane
2015-05-10 22:18 Satellite: 02:22:186 (3) - 
2015-05-10 22:18 Satellite: clap
2015-05-10 22:18 Satellite: 02:22:908 (11) - clap
2015-05-10 22:18 Satellite: 02:23:090 (12) - remo clap
2015-05-10 22:19 Satellite: 02:24:536 (5) - overmapped. remove note
2015-05-10 22:19 4anke: fixed
2015-05-10 22:20 Satellite: 02:24:626 (5) - add whistle
2015-05-10 22:21 4anke: fixed
2015-05-10 22:21 Satellite: 02:24:355 (4) - m0ve x256 y352 ? because
2015-05-10 22:21 Satellite: 02:24:355 (4,5) - this spacing hard to read
2015-05-10 22:22 4anke: fixed
2015-05-10 22:22 Satellite: 02:33:211 (7) - move x164 y292 
2015-05-10 22:22 Satellite: ?
2015-05-10 22:23 Satellite: 02:35:018 (2,3) - Ctrl+G better
2015-05-10 22:23 4anke: fixed
2015-05-10 22:25 Satellite: 02:56:343 (6) - stack is not fit this melody
2015-05-10 22:25 Satellite: move x:108 y:340 better
2015-05-10 22:25 02:58:693 (3,4,5) - please use distance *1.0
2015-05-10 22:26 Satellite: 03:10:801 (10) - not fit this slider. i think circle + circle better (jump
2015-05-10 22:27 Satellite: http://puu.sh/hIbxJ/376a745480.jpg
2015-05-10 22:27 Satellite: jump suggestion
2015-05-10 22:29 Satellite: that's all update pls
2015-05-10 22:30 4anke: I can watch the photo from punsh now ;w;
2015-05-10 22:30 Satellite: other puush http://puu.sh/hIbHs/52e8927570.jpg
2015-05-10 22:30 4anke: cann't
2015-05-10 22:30 4anke: can't
2015-05-10 22:32 4anke: ;w;my computer have some problem that can't watch the photo from punsh ;w;
2015-05-10 22:33 4anke: can you say the (x,y) for me?
2015-05-10 22:34 Satellite: k
2015-05-10 22:34 Satellite: 03:10:259 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 
2015-05-10 22:35 Satellite: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3112262
2015-05-10 22:35 4anke: thank

Satellite wrote:

no kds

insane
02:22:547 (7) - whistle
02:22:908 (11) - unsnap

poke me

Satellite wrote:

wheeee

good luck on 1st ranked o/

smallboat wrote:

Confirm mapset fine and my suggestion almost fixed.

Qualified ~ !

1. 00:17:307 (6,7,1) –The triplet doesn’t fit the music well. It's overmapped and un-stack of the triplet doesn't fit the "calm" part of the song.
2. why do the beginning is harder than KIAI? You’d better use larger space in KIAI instead of in the calm part like 00:14:596 (1,2,3,4) -00:16:765 (3,4,5,6,7,1) –
3. 00:44:958 (1,3) –avoid slight overlapping
4. 00:49:295 (1,2,3) –can you please make the slider shape same? It’s supposed to be same.
5. 01:12:428 (1,2,3,4,5,6) –Why do you use so small space at the climax?

1. The way you uses space is inconsistent: 00:25:440 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2) -01:31:223 (1,2) - 01:57:066 (4,1) - 01:57:608 (2,3) - 01:58:693 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - 02:09:536 (3,4,1) - 02:47:849 (1,2,3,4,5) - 03:02:308 (1,2,3) – why all of these are 1.0 spaces? The sudden changing from 1.1x space makes it more random, which cause slight overlapping which looks bad.
2. These slight overlapping can be avoided: 00:35:560 (3,1) –
   01:31:223 (1,2,3) –
   01:50:018 (1,2,3) - Unpolished spacing usage.
   01:57:066 (4,1,2) -
   02:09:536 (3,4) -
   02:21:825 (1,2,3) - unbalanced spacing.
   02:39:175 (1,2,3) -
   02:47:849 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - too crowd?
   02:51:464 (3,4,1) - Something same as 02:21:825 (1,2,3) - .
   03:02:307 (1,2,3,4) -
   03:05:199 (1,2,3,4) -

1. I personally hope you can use 1/2x space in the difficulty to avoid 1/1 objects’ overlapping.
2. 01:29:054 (3) –why is this curved so much? it looks a bit weird comparing with your former slider.

Fycho wrote:

Hello, your map has to be taken away from the Qualified section by the QAT due to the following justifications:

1. The gap between Normal and Hard is large which can’t be accepted. Hard has quite a number of jumps and a few 1/4 rhythms, while Normal is almost 1/1, with a few 1/2 rhythm. The best way to fix the issue is increasing 1/2 rhythm in normal difficulty.

Additionally, we hope you fix the following things(it’s not a must, depending on you). Please take below as a modding, take them into consideration ranther than ignoring them, to make your map better.

下面的部分你最后好考虑一下，尽管它们不是作为DQ的理由。

[Insane]

1. 00:17:307 (6,7,1) –The triplet doesn’t fit the music well. It's overmapped and un-stack of the triplet doesn't fit the "calm" part of the song.
2. why do the beginning is harder than KIAI? You’d better use larger space in KIAI instead of in the calm part like 00:14:596 (1,2,3,4) -00:16:765 (3,4,5,6,7,1) –
3. 00:44:958 (1,3) –avoid slight overlapping
4. 00:49:295 (1,2,3) –can you please make the slider shape same? It’s supposed to be same.
5. 01:12:428 (1,2,3,4,5,6) –Why do you use so small space at the climax?

[Hard]

1. The way you uses space is inconsistent: 00:25:440 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2) -01:31:223 (1,2) - 01:57:066 (4,1) - 01:57:608 (2,3) - 01:58:693 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - 02:09:536 (3,4,1) - 02:47:849 (1,2,3,4,5) - 03:02:308 (1,2,3) – why all of these are 1.0 spaces? The sudden changing from 1.1x space makes it more random, which cause slight overlapping which looks bad.
2. These slight overlapping can be avoided: 00:35:560 (3,1) –
   01:31:223 (1,2,3) –
   01:50:018 (1,2,3) - Unpolished spacing usage.
   01:57:066 (4,1,2) -
   02:09:536 (3,4) -
   02:21:825 (1,2,3) - unbalanced spacing.
   02:39:175 (1,2,3) -
   02:47:849 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - too crowd?
   02:51:464 (3,4,1) - Something same as 02:21:825 (1,2,3) - .
   03:02:307 (1,2,3,4) -
   03:05:199 (1,2,3,4) -

[Easy]

1. I personally hope you can use 1/2x space in the difficulty to avoid 1/1 objects’ overlapping.
2. 01:29:054 (3) –why is this curved so much? it looks a bit weird comparing with your former slider.

For further assistance, please contact with BNG members. Good luck.
you really need to thank to Satellite, this map is MUCH better than what I saw last time.
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