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fripSide - black bullet [Osu|Taiko]

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KinomiCandy
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KinomiCandy

IamKwaN wrote:

[Kinomi]
  1. 00:31:173 (3) - Separate it into a circle and a 1/2 slider like this: http://puu.sh/daXKI.jpg coz you have finish on 00:31:366 - which means it's a heavy stress, using clicky sliderhead is more comprehensible Done.
  2. 00:40:076 - Why missing this? Added a 5-circle stream, so fixed I guess.
  3. 00:40:850 (1) - Why starting a slider where it's neither vocal nor drum? CTRL+G 00:40:657 (7,1) - Changed.
  4. 00:41:044 - Missing whistle. Fixed.
  5. 00:49:560 (8) - Wrong snapped, it should be 1/4 snapped Fixed.
  6. 00:53:818 (4) - http://puu.sh/daY3r.jpg to stick to the vocal like 00:54:205 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - Same for 01:06:205 (4) - Done.
  7. 01:12:398 (3) - Again, it starts on either vocal nor drum nor any other stresses http://puu.sh/daYcA.jpg Did a bit of changes there, yeah.
http://puu.sh/dbQuP.osu
Thanks for modding. I also did change a few parts on my own by improving a bit of the flow and jumps. :)
Julie
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Topic Starter
Julie

IamKwaN wrote:

I love holes

[Insane]
  1. 00:09:302 (7) - Change it to a 1/2 slider like what you did on 00:07:560 (2,3,4,5) - , the halt is unnatural now. Fix
  2. 00:12:205 (4) - Chopping it into a circle and a 1/2 slider for the vocal sounds more comprehensible as the stress of 00:12:398 - is even heavier than 00:12:205 - which shouldn't be captured by a slidertail.Fix
  3. 00:14:624 (2,3) - 00:19:366 (3,4,5) - Why are all 1/4 and some other rhythms so crowded, it's quite difficult to read, but nvm
  4. 00:49:173 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - The pattern looks crap, i mean the flow, try this and 00:50:528 (1) - blanket with 00:51:108 (1) - : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2294139 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2294141 Fix
  5. 00:51:495 (3) - Jumps are more comfortable if the angle is acute rather than obtuse, so stack this with head of 00:50:528 (1) - Changed something out
  6. 00:52:657 (1,2) - This should be a jump by the stress of vocal like 00:50:528 (1) - I made it here 00:52:850 (2,3) , for vocal and finish sound, well I'm not sure if is good >,<
  7. 01:18:786 (2) - CTRL+G this, 01:19:173 (3) - too like 01:19:560 (4,5) - Maybe 00:20:915 (3) - can also CTRL+G like 00:40:657 (1,2,3) - I rechanged the pattern for this one, because of your last comment of insane mod xD
  8. 01:12:786 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Hitsounds here are too hollow provided the ambient is similar to rhythms before, you need normal sampleset and soft additions on each object. Fix
  9. You need more intentions and ideas on the placements of objects, they are now placed like randomly and it's difficult to understand some jumps. I know ur a new mapper, so my standard is much looser. Since this map is being bubbled before, so I will be less picky and you should try to improve in your next map.CHnaged a lots of pattern, I'd rather make a good insane then just an insane for rank, so I hope is ok if I changed a lots of pattern, learned a lots after mapping this insane xD
[Hard]
  1. 00:15:302 (5) - You shouldn't start a slider without any stress of drums or vocals. Split it into 2 sliders: http://puu.sh/db0tN.jpgFix
  2. 00:36:302 (2) - More spacing is needed to distinguish the 3/4 gap like 00:34:463 (1,2) - .Fix
  3. 00:42:979 (4,1) - ^ Fix
  4. 00:47:624 (1,2,3) - Triplets starting on white tick and ending on red tick is really awful, you either use kick sliders (http://puu.sh/db0I1.jpg) or CTRL+G these stuff (http://puu.sh/db0Fu.jpg). Fix
  5. 01:00:398 - As mentioned in Insane. Fix
  6. 01:12:786 - ^ Fix
  7. 01:16:269 (1) - Something clicky is needed at 01:17:818 - like 00:06:592 - Try this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2294306 Fix but end at red tick
  8. 01:24:011 - You can use kick slider to capture those instruments even it's a Hard and prevent the long pause. http://puu.sh/db0U6.jpg Added
[Normal]
  1. 00:26:721 (1) - You don't NC at 00:14:334 (2) - , so do here.Fix
[Easy]
  1. 01:00:786 (1) - No need to NC.Fix
  2. 01:12:786 - As mentioned in Insane, keep it N:C6 and use soft additions.Fix
Lower diffs are much better, you need more practices on mapping Insane o.O
Also added some hitsound on my insane I put them in blue stick for all hitsound added~
+ update kinomi's insane
IamKwaN
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IamKwaN
Why do I have to update even it's just redownloaded from the web? ;w;
Also the video button disappears on the beatmap's information page.
Can u please submit fully once more?
Julie
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Julie
Hmm okii done, and for the video button issue :

Sakura wrote:

KinomiCandy
798 posts
Joined June 2010
KinomiCandy

IamKwaN wrote:

Also the video button disappears on the beatmap's information page.
If you're talking about the novideo button missing. This bug has been happening a few times already on other beatmaps as well and I talked with a few BATs and others regarding about this and we know that this will be fixed upon ranking the map.



So yeah, even after like 3214512th time fully submitting it, it doesn't fixes this problem.

EDIT: Welp, Julios ninja'd me.
IamKwaN
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IamKwaN
[Insane]
  1. 00:10:076 (2) - Take a look at previous and next DS and I believe you can figure out the problem.
[Normal]
  1. 00:14:334 (1) - i forgot to tell u to remove this NC.
let me know
Julie
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Julie
All fix~
IamKwaN
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IamKwaN
If anyone is interested
2014-12-07 12:00 IamKwaN: hi i would like to ask one question on the hard
2014-12-07 12:00 IamKwaN: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/453781 fripSide - black bullet [Hard]]
2014-12-07 12:01 IamKwaN: what are the finishes on 00:15:108 (4,5) - 's slidertails for?
2014-12-07 12:02 Julie: hmm
2014-12-07 12:02 Julie: I head some soft finish, but I didnt add for previous one lolol
2014-12-07 12:02 Julie: so I guess imma remove
2014-12-07 12:02 IamKwaN: LOL its up to u
2014-12-07 12:03 Julie: is better without xD
2014-12-07 12:03 IamKwaN: LOL
2014-12-07 12:03 IamKwaN: update and then tell me :3
2014-12-07 12:04 Julie: 00:18:786 (5) -  should I remove on this one too? O.O
2014-12-07 12:04 Julie: since was same sound as those one you point out
2014-12-07 12:04 IamKwaN: this one sounds great lol
2014-12-07 12:04 IamKwaN: yea as u like :3
2014-12-07 12:04 IamKwaN: u can remove it for consistency :3
2014-12-07 12:07 Julie: okii will do :3
2014-12-07 12:07 IamKwaN: i go for lunch first :3
2014-12-07 12:07 Julie: okii take your time :D!! and thanks again for all those recheck :3!!
2014-12-07 12:21 IamKwaN: ur welcome :3
2014-12-07 12:23 IamKwaN: 00:15:302 - remove the green line?
2014-12-07 12:23 IamKwaN: and the next one
2014-12-07 12:23 Julie: yep :3
2014-12-07 12:34 IamKwaN: done :3?
2014-12-07 12:34 Julie: yep update :3!
2014-12-07 12:34 IamKwaN: ok :3
2014-12-07 12:34 Julie: if there anything else you think is bad feel free to point it out :3
2014-12-07 12:34 IamKwaN: :3
2014-12-07 12:41 IamKwaN: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/402496 fripSide - black bullet [Insane]]
2014-12-07 12:42 IamKwaN: 00:33:689 (6) - sliderend is unsnapped :3
2014-12-07 12:42 IamKwaN: if u can make kiai times consistent, it would be great too
2014-12-07 12:43 Julie: LOL woah nice spot fix
2014-12-07 12:43 Julie: and like lower my 2nd kiai part?
2014-12-07 12:43 IamKwaN: u like LOL
2014-12-07 12:43 IamKwaN: some unused hitsounds are detected
2014-12-07 12:43 IamKwaN: should i redownload
2014-12-07 12:43 Julie: probably LOL
2014-12-07 12:43 Julie: just in case
2014-12-07 12:44 IamKwaN: http://puu.sh/dkgoI.png
2014-12-07 12:44 IamKwaN: yea i will do it after checking all stuff lol
2014-12-07 12:45 IamKwaN: i think i should redownload lol
2014-12-07 12:45 Julie: okii
2014-12-07 12:45 Julie: nah was in my folder too idk why O.O
2014-12-07 12:46 IamKwaN: LOL
2014-12-07 12:46 IamKwaN: delete them :3
2014-12-07 12:46 Julie: yeah LOL
2014-12-07 12:46 Julie: note to self never spam to much custom hitsound XD
2014-12-07 12:46 IamKwaN: LOL u put them when u start hitsounding?
2014-12-07 12:47 Julie: yeah but when I 1st try to map, I went omg let's try this this this and this xDDD
2014-12-07 12:47 Julie: wait I'm going to call kinomi for kiai, hope his not asleep =w=
2014-12-07 12:48 IamKwaN: LOL
2014-12-07 12:49 IamKwaN: replace the hitsoftclap2 with this http://puu.sh/dkgH3.wav
2014-12-07 12:49 IamKwaN: i have removed the delay
2014-12-07 12:50 Julie: okiiii, so I should also put it as hitsoftclap8 too right?
2014-12-07 12:50 IamKwaN: yep!
2014-12-07 12:52 Julie: okii thanks :D, i'm going to talk with kinomi for the kiai as well, so will probably be in a few more hours because his still asleep =w=
2014-12-07 12:52 IamKwaN: okay :D
2014-12-07 12:53 IamKwaN: that's all i believe :3
2014-12-07 13:00 Julie: thanks a whole lots!!!! :D!! updated with the kiai inconsistent, I'll poke you when this will be fix :3
2014-12-07 13:01 IamKwaN: sure :3
have this back :3
samplefish
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samplefish
omg omg its back
Julie
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Julie

samplefish wrote:

yeye~ Thanks IamKwaN
PatZar
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PatZar

samplefish wrote:

omg omg its back
Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani
*African American bullet

Insane:
00:10:076 (2,3) - Would prefer this jump to not be so large.
01:16:269 - Add a note on here and then have the spinner!!
01:23:624 (5) - same as first

Kinomi:
00:41:237 (2) - Like why is this so huge?
01:17:044 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Would prefer the start of this to be a jump similar to (1,2) and (3,4)

Easy:
01:14:721 (1) - make this something more interesting. Multiple repeats are no fun.

fix these then FORUM PM me.
KinomiCandy
798 posts
Joined June 2010
KinomiCandy
ayeeee cdfa

CDFA wrote:

*African American bullet

00:41:237 (2) - Like why is this so huge?
01:17:044 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Would prefer the start of this to be a jump similar to (1,2) and (3,4)

fix these then FORUM PM me.
Fixed everything. http://puu.sh/dzu6l.osu
Julie
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Julie
All fix + update! \o/

Sorry kinomi took me some times because last exam today ;w;
meii18
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Rank this ! Rank this ! This map desearves a heart \:3/
Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani
thx for naming your pm African American bullet that means a lot to me.
meii18
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meii18
yay ! congrats on your first ranked map Julie ! You deserved this heart ( when my map will be ranked ? :( )
toybot
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toybot
JUUUUUUUUUUUULIEEEEEEE
Julie
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Julie
Thanks CDFA, best end school session present, just end few minute ago >//<
kakifly
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YES YES FINALLY ~ congrats Julie :D
KinomiCandy
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KinomiCandy
LET ME HEAR YOU SAY AYEEEEEEEEEEEE

aye
Ayachi-
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Congratz
Aldwych
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Aldwych
Gratz Julie! :>
Edit: 999 reverse evil. :<
sheela
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sheela
Finally! Congratulations!
Sakura
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Congratz!
hehe
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hehe
like finally lol
toara_fict
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toara_fict
Finally. :3

Gratz Julie san :3
Shapy
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Shapy
OH FINALLY x3

Congratz Julie \o/
Nardoxyribonucleic
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Congratulations to Julie for your 1st ranked map~
Hanjamon
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Hanjamon
wow finally :3 Gratz!
Charlotte
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Charlotte
Gratz :)
Kyouren
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Kyouren
Gratzz for your ranked maps~
Kanari
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Kanari
congratsss ~ >w<!
Irreversible
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Irreversible
Finally, congratz Julie! :DD
Squigly
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Squigly
omg julie it finally happened ;w; so happy! :oops:
PatZar
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congrazt julie ;w;
Kin
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Kin
GRATZ
OnosakiHito
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OnosakiHito
Nice Taiko diffs. Just try to make oox patterns not a thing in Muzukashii.
Nardoxyribonucleic
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OnosakiHito wrote:

Nice Taiko diffs. Just try to make oox patterns not a thing in Muzukashii.
Thanks Ono~ I used such patterns cautiously in Muzukashii.
-Sh1n1-
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Yay, Julie and Nardo *-*/ Congratz :3 :)
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