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Hidamari Sketch Cast - Open*Canvas (TV Size)

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Akemi_Homura
1,509 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Akemi_Homura
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017년 3월 4일 토요일 at 오후 8:38:57

Artist: Hidamari Sketch Cast
Title: Open*Canvas (TV Size)
Source: ひだまりスケッチ×ハニカム
Tags: Hidamari Sketch x honeycomb opening Sonnyc
BPM: 183
Filesize: 14432kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.46 stars, 100 notes)
  2. Insane (4.37 stars, 312 notes)
  3. Normal (1.96 stars, 155 notes)
  4. Sonnyc's Hard (3.41 stars, 250 notes)
Download: Hidamari Sketch Cast - Open*Canvas (TV Size)
Download: Hidamari Sketch Cast - Open*Canvas (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Hidamari Sketch~~! :3
,, - Done by Me
- Done by Sonnyc
Last edited by Akemi_Homura , edited 29 times in total.
kintyan
150 posts
Joined September 2010
kintyan
1st <3
hi~~! thank you for request 8-)

[General]
source:ひだまりスケッチ×ハニカム
tags:Hidamari Sketch x honeycomb

[Easy]
00:27:676 (2) - revers it, i like this flow XD http://puu.sh/87MKJ.jpg
01:20:627 (2) - 01:22:431 (1,2) - 01:25:054 (4) - some spacing,

[Normal]
00:49:972 (1) - suggestion, add whistle? 00:51:283 (1) - this change sound or end to volume down


[Hard]
00:05:054 (5,1) - flow suggestion, http://puu.sh/87RY7.jpg how about this?
00:07:349 (3) - ctrl+G
00:13:742 (2) - ^ ? which change, you select it :3 i like both
00:30:299 (1) - remove NC
00:32:922 (1) - ^
00:43:414 (1) - ^

[Insane]
00:42:758 (3) - revers it, http://puu.sh/87QXe.jpg
00:46:365 (5,6) - suggestion, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1510668
01:10:791 (5) - remove it?
01:13:906 (2) - ctrl+G
01:17:513 (1,2,3) - the some space http://puu.sh/87Rgx.jpg
01:20:627 (2,3,4,5,1) - hmm... i want clean star
01:23:250 (2,3,4,5,1) - ^
01:27:840 (6) - remove it?

cute song XD i like hidamari sketch member!!
Little
2,509 posts
Joined November 2012
Little
Hi, modding as you requested.

[General]
  1. Are you sure you can use "Hidamari Sketch Cast" as the artist name? I think you should use these instead:
    Artist: ゆの（阿澄佳奈）、宮子（水橋かおり）、ヒロ（後藤邑子）、沙英（新谷良子）、乃莉（原田ひとみ）、なずな（小見川千明）
    Romanised Artist: Yuno (Asumi Kana), Miyako (Mizuhashi Kaori), Hiro (Gotou Yuuko), Sae (Shintani Ryoko), Nori (Harada Hitomi), and Nazuna (Omigawa Chiaki)
    I think this is the official artist because it was listed this way on the anime's opening and other sources.
  2. Source should be: ひだまりスケッチ×ハニカム
  3. Consider adding some tags to make your map easier to find, for example, "honeycomb" and "opening" and other things related to the song.
  4. Disable countdown and widescreen support for all diffs since there is no time before the map for countdown, and there is no storyboard so widescreen support is unnecessary.
  5. 01:28:004 - In Easy, Normal, Insane this inheriting section (green line) doesn't change anything. Remove it for those diffs.
[Easy]
  1. Please use consistent distance spacing. The way you switch between 1.0x and 1.2x can be very confusing for beginners. I suggest that you make the entire map in 1.3x distance spacing to prevent overlap on 1/1 beat spacings. A remap may be needed to accomplish this.
  2. 00:03:742 (2,3,1) - Here's an example of where you would confuse beginner players. (2,3) is 1.2x spacing, and (3,1) is 1.0x spacing, so the player will likely hit (1) too early. Increase spacing between (3,1) to match (2,3) and use the same spacing for the whole map.
  3. 00:10:955 (4) - New Combo for consistency with previous combos.
  4. 00:13:250 (1,1) - There is not enough time between the end of the spinner and the start of the slider for the player to react. I think you should shorten the spinner to 00:14:890 to give the player more time, and it also matches with the end of the pitched instrument in the background.
  5. 00:23:742 (1) - Remove New Combo to match other combos like 00:34:234
  6. 00:27:676 (2) - Try this rhythm: http://puu.sh/87S8o.jpg I think it matches better with the music.
  7. 00:30:299 (3) - Remove whistle from repeat for consistency?
  8. 00:48:660 (1,1) - Not enough time between the spinner and slider. Maybe shorten the spinner to 00:49:972
  9. 00:51:283 - For kiai section, I can hear claps in music on beats 2 and 4, so try to place the hitwhistles on those beats. For example, 00:51:283 (1) remove whistle from end, 00:52:267 (2) add whistle, 00:52:595 (3) remove whistle from end. etc... for the rest of kiai section. I hope you can understand. If you need clarification, ask me in game.
Overall, this diff has some nice ideas, but has some major spacing issues that need to be fixed.

[Normal]
  1. AR4 is too low. It makes the map look messy and difficult to read. Increase to AR5.
  2. 00:14:234 (1) - I suggest placing and circle here and starting the spinner at 00:14:562 instead. http://puu.sh/87SIp.jpg
  3. 00:16:529 (2,3) - You can improve the blanket here like this: http://puu.sh/87SMF.jpg To do this, select (3,4) and move to x:432|y:28 and mote (5) to x:240|y:160.
  4. 00:23:742 (1) - I suggest removing the repeat and adding a circle instead to emphasize the strong beat like this: http://puu.sh/87STf.jpg
  5. 01:12:758 (2,3) - Make a better blanket: http://puu.sh/87T4r.jpg Move (3) to x:60|y:188 and adjust the other notes to keep distance spacing.
  6. 01:20:627 (2,3) - This rhythm really doesn't match the music and is confusing. Please try to use the same rhythm as the next combo 01:23:250 (2,3,4,5,6)
[Sonnyc's Hard]
  1. Disable letterbox.
  2. Unsnapped slider ends! Check Aimod
  3. 00:38:168 (1,1) - I think the ends of these sliders should also be drum whistle. If not, then the end of 00:43:414 (1) should be soft whistle?
[Insane]
  1. 00:27:676 (5) - Add NC
  2. 00:25:054 (5) - Add New Combo here and remove NC from 00:25:709 (1)
  3. 00:46:365 (5,6) - Make a nicer blanket: http://puu.sh/87UNW.jpg
  4. 01:14:234 (3) - Try Ctrl+G?
  5. 01:18:004 (2) - Move this down and left a bit for better flow. Try x:136|y:240 which also makes blanket and flows nicely in my opinion.
  6. 01:27:349 (5,6) - I think you should replace these with two 1/2 sliders with increasing spacing for an interesting pattern: http://puu.sh/87V4V.jpg
Good luck.
Akemi_Homura
1,509 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Akemi_Homura
Sheryl

Sheryl wrote:

1st <3
hi~~! thank you for request 8-) Hi~~! :3

[General]
source:ひだまりスケッチ×ハニカム
tags:Hidamari Sketch x honeycomb Thank you~! Fixed!!!

[Easy]
00:27:676 (2) - revers it, i like this flow XD http://puu.sh/87MKJ.jpg You're right~ Fixed
01:20:627 (2) - 01:22:431 (1,2) - 01:25:054 (4) - some spacing, Fixed

[Normal]
00:49:972 (1) - suggestion, add whistle? Add whistle, and remove finish :3
00:51:283 (1) - this change sound or end to volume down :| All diff use this sound.. o.o If someone tell this again, I'll think change about that.

[Insane]
00:42:758 (3) - revers it, http://puu.sh/87QXe.jpg okay~
00:46:365 (5,6) - suggestion, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1510668 Change that part~
01:10:791 (5) - remove it? okay~
01:13:906 (2) - ctrl+G fixed
01:17:513 (1,2,3) - the some space http://puu.sh/87Rgx.jpg fixed
01:20:627 (2,3,4,5,1) - hmm... i want clean star fixed them..but not clean I think D; I'm baka..
01:23:250 (2,3,4,5,1) - ^ Fixed..!
01:27:840 (6) - remove it? okay~

cute song XD i like hidamari sketch member!!

CloudSplash16

CloudSplash16 wrote:

Hi, modding as you requested. Hi~~! :3

[General]
  1. Are you sure you can use "Hidamari Sketch Cast" as the artist name? I think you should use these instead:
    Artist: ゆの（阿澄佳奈）、宮子（水橋かおり）、ヒロ（後藤邑子）、沙英（新谷良子）、乃莉（原田ひとみ）、なずな（小見川千明）
    Romanised Artist: Yuno (Asumi Kana), Miyako (Mizuhashi Kaori), Hiro (Gotou Yuuko), Sae (Shintani Ryoko), Nori (Harada Hitomi), and Nazuna (Omigawa Chiaki)
    I think this is the official artist because it was listed this way on the anime's opening and other sources.
  2. Source should be: ひだまりスケッチ×ハニカム
  3. Consider adding some tags to make your map easier to find, for example, "honeycomb" and "opening" and other things related to the song. add 'opening'
  4. Disable countdown and widescreen support for all diffs since there is no time before the map for countdown, and there is no storyboard so widescreen support is unnecessary. Fixed~
  5. 01:28:004 - In Easy, Normal, Insane this inheriting section (green line) doesn't change anything. Remove it for those diffs. Fixed~!
[Easy]
  1. Please use consistent distance spacing. The way you switch between 1.0x and 1.2x can be very confusing for beginners. I suggest that you make the entire map in 1.3x distance spacing to prevent overlap on 1/1 beat spacings. A remap may be needed to accomplish this.
  2. 00:03:742 (2,3,1) - Here's an example of where you would confuse beginner players. (2,3) is 1.2x spacing, and (3,1) is 1.0x spacing, so the player will likely hit (1) too early. Increase spacing between (3,1) to match (2,3) and use the same spacing for the whole map. replace all note 1.3x~
  3. 00:10:955 (4) - New Combo for consistency with previous combos. Fixed~
  4. 00:13:250 (1,1) - There is not enough time between the end of the spinner and the start of the slider for the player to react. I think you should shorten the spinner to 00:14:890 to give the player more time, and it also matches with the end of the pitched instrument in the background. Fixed~
  5. 00:23:742 (1) - Remove New Combo to match other combos like 00:34:234 Fixed~
  6. 00:27:676 (2) - Try this rhythm: http://puu.sh/87S8o.jpg I think it matches better with the music. Fixed~
  7. 00:30:299 (3) - Remove whistle from repeat for consistency? Fixed~
  8. 00:48:660 (1,1) - Not enough time between the spinner and slider. Maybe shorten the spinner to 00:49:972 okay~
  9. 00:51:283 - For kiai section, I can hear claps in music on beats 2 and 4, so try to place the hitwhistles on those beats. For example, 00:51:283 (1) remove whistle from end, 00:52:267 (2) add whistle, 00:52:595 (3) remove whistle from end. etc... for the rest of kiai section. I hope you can understand. If you need clarification, ask me in game.replace hit-sounds~ =w=/
Overall, this diff has some nice ideas, but has some major spacing issues that need to be fixed.

[Normal]
  1. AR4 is too low. It makes the map look messy and difficult to read. Increase to AR5. Fixed~
  2. 00:14:234 (1) - I suggest placing and circle here and starting the spinner at 00:14:562 instead. http://puu.sh/87SIp.jpg Fixed~
  3. 00:16:529 (2,3) - You can improve the blanket here like this: http://puu.sh/87SMF.jpg To do this, select (3,4) and move to x:432|y:28 and mote (5) to x:240|y:160. That's nice~~~! Fixed~!!
  4. 00:23:742 (1) - I suggest removing the repeat and adding a circle instead to emphasize the strong beat like this: http://puu.sh/87STf.jpg Fixed~
  5. 01:12:758 (2,3) - Make a better blanket: http://puu.sh/87T4r.jpg Move (3) to x:60|y:188 and adjust the other notes to keep distance spacing. Fixed~~
  6. 01:20:627 (2,3) - This rhythm really doesn't match the music and is confusing. Please try to use the same rhythm as the next combo 01:23:250 (2,3,4,5,6) hmm..I try many rhythm..but I can't find better one. If you have nice one please tell me.. :3
[Insane]
  1. 00:27:676 (5) - Add NC Fixed~
  2. 00:25:054 (5) - Add New Combo here and remove NC from 00:25:709 (1) Fixed~
  3. 00:46:365 (5,6) - Make a nicer blanket: http://puu.sh/87UNW.jpg change some~
  4. 01:14:234 (3) - Try Ctrl+G? Changed (2)... orz
  5. 01:18:004 (2) - Move this down and left a bit for better flow. Try x:136|y:240 which also makes blanket and flows nicely in my opinion.replace that note~!
  6. 01:27:349 (5,6) - I think you should replace these with two 1/2 sliders with increasing spacing for an interesting pattern: http://puu.sh/87V4V.jpg I removed (6), now fine it seems.. imo..
Good luck.

Thank you for modding~~!!
Update~!
Kiiwa
928 posts
Joined January 2010
Kiiwa
from #modreqs

[Insane]
  1. AR+1 (CS-1???)
  2. 00:14:234 (3) - Remove finish! It should be at 00:14:562 - if you want to have one.
  3. 00:38:988 (8) - Shorten to 00:39:152 - and add clap at end.
  4. I don't really agree with all these 3/4 sliders that don't the music, but your choice.

[Sonnyc's Hard]
  1. 01:21:939 - Sounds better as finish.
  2. 01:24:562 - ^
  3. Great diff, not so keen on hitsounds :3
[Normal]
  1. 00:14:234 (3) - Same as Insane.
  2. 00:14:562 (1) - Maybe too short for a Normal.
  3. 00:24:726 (1,1) - Maybe too soon for a Normal.
  4. 00:48:660 (1,1) - Probably better as one single spinner.
  5. 00:52:595 - Finish shouldn't be here.
  6. 01:03:086 - ^
  7. 01:08:332 - Add finish.
  8. 01:09:644 - Add finish.
  9. 01:20:955 - Remove finish!
[Easy]
  1. 00:04:070 (3) - Maybe extend till 00:05:381 - and add finish to end is better for rhythm?
  2. 01:07:021 - Add finish.
  3. 01:21:283 - Remove finish!
  4. 01:28:004 (1) - Probably too short for an Easy.
Good luck~
Akemi_Homura
1,509 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Akemi_Homura
Kiiwa

Kiiwa wrote:

from #modreqs

[Insane]
  1. AR+1 (CS-1???) Just AR +1 :3
  2. 00:14:234 (3) - Remove finish! It should be at 00:14:562 - if you want to have one. Remove~
  3. 00:38:988 (8) - Shorten to 00:39:152 - and add clap at end. remained now.. I think it's follow vocal
  4. I don't really agree with all these 3/4 sliders that don't the music, but your choice. Thank you for your advice~! :3

[Normal]
  1. 00:14:234 (3) - Same as Insane. Fixed~
  2. 00:14:562 (1) - Maybe too short for a Normal. umm...no change. I think it can be played..?
  3. 00:24:726 (1,1) - Maybe too soon for a Normal. it's too..?
  4. 00:48:660 (1,1) - Probably better as one single spinner. Fixed~
  5. 00:52:595 - Finish shouldn't be here. Fixed~
  6. 01:03:086 - ^ Fixed~
  7. 01:08:332 - Add finish. Fixed~
  8. 01:09:644 - Add finish. Fixed~
  9. 01:20:955 - Remove finish! Fixed~!!
[Easy]
  1. 00:04:070 (3) - Maybe extend till 00:05:381 - and add finish to end is better for rhythm? okay~~
  2. 01:07:021 - Add finish. Fixed~
  3. 01:21:283 - Remove finish! Fixed~
  4. 01:28:004 (1) - Probably too short for an Easy. when someone tell me about this again, I'll consider again.
Good luck~

Thank you for your modding~!
wetdog123
286 posts
Joined December 2012
wetdog123
From #modreqs
[Insane]
Playtest
http://puu.sh/89kX0.jpg LOL

Don't have a lot of these, remove half of them or something. They're uncomfortable to play and they make me and probably many other players sad. You could delete the circle and lengthen the slider

01:00:955 - have a stream that goes to 01:01:693 or do a spinner like 01:10:955 (1) -
01:14:899 - You could do a stream bit that ends at 01:19:972


[Hard]
AR8
01:06:857 (6) - Move it out from the slider
01:15:546 (3) - ^
01:16:857 (3) - ^
01:26:857 - Put a circle

[Easy]
01:21:611 (3) - Move it back by a half
01:23:086 (2) - Remove this slider and but a circle at 01:23:414


Sorry for small mod, there weren't many things wrong with the beatmap that i could see, but PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE remove alot of these and make the slider one longer so it's like this
Chirony
390 posts
Joined June 2012
Chirony
Hi~
from my modding form!

[Insane]
  1. 00:25:709 (5,6) - I think better to use circle because melody will change.
  2. 00:48:332 (6) - add finish on head or tail?
  3. 00:52:267 (1) - remove finish(tail) and add finish(head) 00:52:595 (2)
  4. 00:57:840 (1,3) - add finish(head)?
  5. 01:09:644 (1) - add finish(head)?
  6. 01:04:890 (3) - remove finish(return)
[Sonnyc's Hard]
  1. 00:05:054 (5) - remove clap (tail)?
  2. 01:20:627 (1,2,3,4,5) - Please try it (same 01:23:250 (1,2,3,4,5) )
  3. 01:25:873 (2) - remove finish and add clap (head)
  4. 01:27:021 (2) - remove finish (head)
[Normal]
  1. 00:18:004 (5) - add whistle (head)
  2. 00:34:234 (1) - remove finish and add clap?
  3. 00:48:332 (2) - add finish? It might feel noisy because there are many finish.
  4. 00:52:267 (3) - add finish (return)
[Easy]
  1. 00:04:070 (3) - add whistle (head)
  2. 00:47:349 (3) - add whistle (tail)
  3. 00:53:906 (1) - add finish (head)
I hope you helps :D
nice mapset! good luck~
Akemi_Homura
1,509 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Akemi_Homura
Endemic

Endemic wrote:

From #modreqs Hi~~~
[Insane]
SPOILER
http://puu.sh/89kX0.jpg LOL so pro~ xD

Don't have a lot of these, remove half of them or something. They're uncomfortable to play and they make me and probably many other players sad. You could delete the circle and lengthen the slider I fix some~! :3

01:00:955 - have a stream that goes to 01:01:693 or do a spinner like 01:10:955 (1) -
01:14:899 - You could do a stream bit that ends at 01:19:972

[Easy]
01:21:611 (3) - Move it back by a half
01:23:086 (2) - Remove this slider and but a circle at 01:23:414 I think slider is more follow vocal ;w;


Sorry for small mod, there weren't many things wrong with the beatmap that i could see, but PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE remove alot of these and make the slider one longer so it's like this
okay~ I fix some that slider part..!

Chirony

Chirony wrote:

Hi~
from my modding form! Hi~~!

[Insane]
  1. 00:25:709 (5,6) - I think better to use circle because melody will change. hmm.. I think that slider part is follwing the music o.o/
  2. 00:48:332 (6) - add finish on head or tail? add tail
  3. 00:52:267 (1) - remove finish(tail) and add finish(head) 00:52:595 (2) tail is emphasize vocal imo~
  4. 00:57:840 (1,3) - add finish(head)? Fix~
  5. 01:09:644 (1) - add finish(head)? Fix~
  6. 01:04:890 (3) - remove finish(return) Fix~
[Normal]
  1. 00:18:004 (5) - add whistle (head) Fix~
  2. 00:34:234 (1) - remove finish and add clap? Fix~
  3. 00:48:332 (2) - add finish? It might feel noisy because there are many finish. I think too many finished used.. sorry D;
  4. 00:52:267 (3) - add finish (return)I removed that before modding~ lol
[Easy]
  1. 00:04:070 (3) - add whistle (head) Fix~
  2. 00:47:349 (3) - add whistle (tail) Fix~
  3. 00:53:906 (1) - add finish (head) Fix~
I hope you helps :D
nice mapset! good luck~

Thank you for modding~ :D
kuroanchan
110 posts
Joined July 2012
kuroanchan


[Easy]
00:13:250 (1) - should be start at 00:13:578 end at 00:15:217
00:23:742 (4) - NC
00:34:234 (3) - NC

[Normal]
AR -1
00:33:742 (5) - NC
00:34:234 (1) - remove NC

[Sonnyc's Hard]
AR -1
00:22:595 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - why not like this http://puu.sh/8bVC0.jpg
00:09:152 (5) - NC
00:09:316 (1) - remove NC

[Insane]
Ar -1
nice~

well, that's all :D
good luck~
Akemi_Homura
1,509 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Akemi_Homura
kuroanchan

kuroanchan wrote:



[Easy]
00:13:250 (1) - should be start at 00:13:578 end at 00:15:217 I use that previousely.. I think now is better~
00:23:742 (4) - NC Fix~
00:34:234 (3) - NC Fix~

[Normal]
AR -1 When I go AR -1... It's too messy D;
00:33:742 (5) - NC Fix~
00:34:234 (1) - remove NC Fix~

[Insane]
Ar -1 umm..It's remained now..!
nice~

well, that's all :D
good luck~

Thank you~! :3
keeeeeeko
353 posts
Joined May 2012
keeeeeeko
Hi~

[General]
  1. add tags 'Sonnyc'
  2. add AudioLeadIn +1500~2000.
  3. PreviewTime is unsnaped. 00:51:283 - is better.
[Easy]
  1. 00:22:103 (2,3) - nazi.00:22:103 (2) - move to 16,156.00:22:431 (3) - Rotate 17°+move to 76,88. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1514619
  2. 00:34:562 (4) - add finish slider end.(and add whistle? other diffs already are added.)
  3. 00:52:595 (3) - remove finish
  4. 01:03:086 (3) - ^
  5. 01:04:398 (1) - add finish slider head & remove end
  6. 01:17:840 (5) - NC
[Normal]
  1. 00:04:070 (3,4,5,6) - add whistle
  2. 00:14:234 (3) - ^
  3. 00:35:217 (3) - add finish is better imo.
  4. 00:57:840 (4) - How about this? follow vocal. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1520161
[Hard]

  • Please check AImod. seems not yet updated?
  1. 01:15:054 (2) - remove slider whistle
  2. 01:16:365 (2) - ^
[Insane]
  1. 00:04:070 (5,6,7,8,9) - add whistle
  2. 00:05:709 (2) - remove clap. only use whistle here.
  3. 00:21:119 (1) - add clap slider end.
  4. 00:34:890 (3) - same as E,N
  5. 00:40:791 (6) - move to 120,158
cute song<3
Good Luck
Sonnyc
7,753 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
Sheryl

Sheryl wrote:

[Hard]
00:05:054 (5,1) - flow suggestion, http://puu.sh/87RY7.jpg how about this? // Good point, but sorry. I don't want a stack here.
00:07:349 (3) - ctrl+G // Prefer a fixed distance.
00:13:742 (2) - ^ ? which change, you select it :3 i like both // Wanted a blanket with (2).
00:30:299 (1) - remove NC // Will prefer to prevent comboes getting too long.
00:32:922 (1) - ^
00:43:414 (1) - ^
CloudSplash16

CloudSplash16 wrote:

[Sonnyc's Hard]
  1. Disable letterbox.
  2. Unsnapped slider ends! Check Aimod // Fix.
  3. 00:38:168 (1,1) - I think the ends of these sliders should also be drum whistle. If not, then the end of 00:43:414 (1) should be soft whistle? // Idk. Made some adjustemtns.
Kiiwa

Kiiwa wrote:

[Sonnyc's Hard]
  1. 01:21:939 - Sounds better as finish. // Agree. Fixed
  2. 01:24:562 - ^
  3. Great diff, not so keen on hitsounds :3
Endemic

Endemic wrote:

[Hard]
AR8 // Nope. That's too fast.
01:06:857 (6) - Move it out from the slider // Not sure what you want since slider stack isn't nonsense.
01:15:546 (3) - ^
01:16:857 (3) - ^
01:26:857 - Put a circle // I wanted to follow the vocal, but it seems the clap is too strong to ignore. Added.
Chirony

Chirony wrote:

[Sonnyc's Hard]
  1. 00:05:054 (5) - remove clap (tail)? // Hmm removed.
  2. 01:20:627 (1,2,3,4,5) - Please try it (same 01:23:250 (1,2,3,4,5) ) // Your pattern looks fine, but sorry I want to keep this. This little distance reduction was a relative action to emphasis the stronger sound after this.
    SPOILER
  3. 01:25:873 (2) - remove finish and add clap (head) // No. There's a strong beat to follow.
  4. 01:27:021 (2) - remove finish (head)
kuroanchan

kuroanchan wrote:

[Sonnyc's Hard]
AR -1 // Nah, that's too easy.
00:22:595 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - why not like this http://puu.sh/8bVC0.jpg // For symmetry.
00:09:152 (5) - NC // I NC'ed every new stanza, and this isn't the place.
00:09:316 (1) - remove NC
keeeeeeko

keeeeeeko wrote:

[Hard]

  • Please check AImod. seems not yet updated?
  1. 01:15:054 (2) - remove slider whistle // Well fixed.
  2. 01:16:365 (2) - ^

난
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Open_Canvas.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 51283
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 5383,15875,26367,35711,44728,51285,61777
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.300001

[Metadata]
Title:Open Canvas (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:おーぷん☆きゃんばす (TV Size)
Artist:Hidamari Sketch Cast
ArtistUnicode:ひだまりスケッチキャスト
Creator:Akemi_Homura
Version:Sonnyc's Hard
Source:ひだまりスケッチ×ハニカム
Tags:Hidamari Sketch x honeycomb opening Sonnyc
BeatmapID:402922
BeatmapSetID:164824

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.40000000596046
SliderTickRate:1

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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
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Akemi_Homura
1,509 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Akemi_Homura
keeeeeeko

keeeeeeko wrote:

Hi~

[General]
  1. add tags 'Sonnyc' Fix~!
  2. add AudioLeadIn +1500~2000. Fix~!
  3. PreviewTime is unsnaped. 00:51:283 - is better. Fix~!
[Easy]
  1. 00:22:103 (2,3) - nazi.00:22:103 (2) - move to 16,156.00:22:431 (3) - Rotate 17°+move to 76,88. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1514619 Fix~!
  2. 00:34:562 (4) - add finish slider end.(and add whistle? other diffs already are added.) just use clap & whistle~ ;_; finish is very loud...
  3. 00:52:595 (3) - remove finish Fix~!
  4. 01:03:086 (3) - ^ Fix~!
  5. 01:04:398 (1) - add finish slider head & remove end Fix~!
  6. 01:17:840 (5) - NC Fix~!
[Normal]
  1. 00:04:070 (3,4,5,6) - add whistle Fix~!
  2. 00:14:234 (3) - ^ Fix~!
  3. 00:35:217 (3) - add finish is better imo. ;_;
  4. 00:57:840 (4) - How about this? follow vocal. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1520161 Fix~!
[Insane]
  1. 00:04:070 (5,6,7,8,9) - add whistle Fix~!
  2. 00:05:709 (2) - remove clap. only use whistle here. Fix~!
  3. 00:21:119 (1) - add clap slider end. Fix~!
  4. 00:34:890 (3) - same as E,N Fix~!
  5. 00:40:791 (6) - move to 120,158 Fix~!
cute song<3
Good Luck

Arigato~! :3
Ujimatsu Chiya
2,480 posts
Joined December 2013
Ujimatsu Chiya
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Last edited by Ujimatsu Chiya , edited 3 times in total.
Ujimatsu Chiya
2,480 posts
Joined December 2013
Ujimatsu Chiya

Einess wrote:

Hi~

[Easy]
  1. 01:20:135 (1,2,3) - - this parts seems ambiguous. i feel unnautual.



[Noraml]
  1. 00:10:627 (1,2,3,4) - More'd rather think I need to return the slider. like http://puu.sh/8eJ17.jpg
  2. 01:20:627 (2,3) - i think a little unnautual. xD



[Hard]
  1. 01:26:529 (1,2,3,4) - Why not try a bit more natural relocation?
  2. This video can not be played


[Isane]
  1. 00:15:873 (1) - remake one by little shorter
  2. 00:17:185 (1) - same here
  3. 00:21:775 (3) - same here
  4. 00:24:726 (4) - same here
  5. 00:40:791 (6) - same here
  6. 00:45:873 (3) - same here
  7. 01:02:922 (1) - same here
  8. 00:24:726 (4,1) - What do you think about changing your slide one.
  9. 00:55:217 (1,2) - remake one by little shorter or (4)circle the slider to change it.


[Want to say]

well done make map~

good luck with your beat map~ xD



I'll request if you have time Mod~

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/166579
Akemi_Homura
1,509 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Akemi_Homura
모딩 감사합니다~!
arviejhay
1,413 posts
Joined August 2009
arviejhay
hi from my modding queue

[General]
non

[Easy]
00:09:644(3) - make this slider same as the 00:07:021
00:30:955(5) - remove whistle not fitted then put circle in 00:31:283 with whistle

[Normal]
00:08:004(1) - remove finish. its better

It's too good
I like the song
STAR
but good luck mapping
Akemi_Homura
1,509 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Akemi_Homura
arviehay

arviejhay wrote:

hi from my modding queue

[General]
non

[Easy]
00:09:644(3) - make this slider same as the 00:07:021 okay~
00:30:955(5) - remove whistle not fitted then put circle in 00:31:283 with whistle no change..I think it's okay now.. :/

[Normal]
00:08:004(1) - remove finish. its better Fixed

It's too good
I like the song
STAR
but good luck mapping

Thank you for your modding and star...!! :)

Not updated yet... D:
eironeia
88 posts
Joined June 2013
eironeia
Hi, from my queue :3
Easy
00:52:595 (3) - I think it would be a better transition here to move this object to x:254 y:43 since it will be straighter in relation to circle 2. Then move 00:53:906 (1) to x:31 y:227 and 00:54:890 (2) to x:216 y:340 and there should be no spacing problem then onwards.
Nice map. That is all.
01:08:824 (2) - Strongly consider adding an object here that has a finish since it felt very empty without it imo.
Normal
00:10:627 (1,2) - I don't know if you want this straight, but as of now it isn't. To straighten, move 00:10:955 (2) to x:206 y:114
00:28:988 (1) - Finish here is a bit weird, since you didn't put one in 00:31:611 (1)
00:35:217 (3) - Use finish?
00:48:660 (1) - I felt kinda awkward on this slider because the cuties scream in the middle of it and it's kinda awkward to have the spinner go on from before that and onwards. I suggest either ending the spinner at 00:49:972 or ending the spinner at 00:49:890 and adding a new one that lasts from 00:49:972 to 00:50:955 (1)
01:08:660 (2) - Add a finish at the tail of this for emphasis
Sonnyc's Hard
I recommend AR8. It is a fast song, and I felt a little like I was in 2010 playing with AR7 for some reason :v
00:43:086 (4) - I felt like the blanketing for this could be improved by moving the tail end to x:228 y:56
Very nice map. That is all.
01:08:824 (2) - Add a finish here for emphasis (head)
Insane
00:14:234 (3) - I personally think this and slider 2 is too close together. For an anti-jump it's better if you stack this directly onto the tail of 2 or make a trolly big jump altogether. KILL ALL THE DT PLAYERS
01:08:332 (2) - Add a finish here
01:08:824 (3) - And a finish at the head of this for good emphasis
Very good maps and very cute hitsounding. This I pray will get ranked in no time. Good luck!
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