1. 00:02:376 (1) - Don't you think a Normal finish fits much better because of the enduring sound?
2. 00:29:624 (3) - Add a whistle to the start emphasize the sync?
3. 00:35:074 (3) - Same as above.
4. 00:45:519 (4) - Doesn't look really clean since it overlaps with the previous note, move it more to the left?
5. 00:50:287 (2) - Add a whistle to the start to catch the piano?
6. 00:51:422 (3) - Same, but to the end.
7. 01:04:138 (1) - Add a finish to emphasize the power reset?
8. 01:18:670 (1,2) - Move them like shown below to preven that overlap.
   
   example

   
9. 01:21:849 (5) - Missing hitsounds on this one.
10. 01:25:482 (4) - Make the start a hitnormal with clap soft addition, fits the drum hit in the background.

1. 00:01:922 (1,1) - Missing hitsounds on those two, also same thing as for Easy for the Slider.
2. 00:09:188 (4) - How about moving this a bit down for a better transition to the next Slider?
3. 00:31:441 (1) - Looks weird since 2's angle is totally in another way than 1's. Change this to a curved Slider instead?
4. 01:04:138 (1) - Same as on Easy.
5. 01:25:482 (5) - Same on the repeat as on Easy.

1. 00:02:376 (1) - Same as for Easy.
2. 00:08:507 (2) - This is not a good idea. You just did it for the sake of having symmetry which seems odd since the rhyhtm doesn't fit. Try to just make an 1/1 Slider like below.
   
   example

   
3. 00:22:244 (5,1) - Space them out for a better readability and smoother movement?
   
   example

   
4. 01:04:138 (1) - Same thing as on Easy.
5. 01:20:260 (1) - Remove the whistle from the start, it's way too single and inconsistent in this section.
6. 01:25:482 (2) - Same as on Easy.

Konei wrote:

Hey.


[Easy]

1. 00:02:376 (1) - Don't you think a Normal finish fits much better because of the enduring sound? right
2. 00:29:624 (3) - Add a whistle to the start emphasize the sync? doesn't fit imo
3. 00:35:074 (3) - Same as above. ^
4. 00:45:519 (4) - Doesn't look really clean since it overlaps with the previous note, move it more to the left? we can't notice this when we play so it's okay
5. 00:50:287 (2) - Add a whistle to the start to catch the piano? added
6. 00:51:422 (3) - Same, but to the end. ^
7. 01:04:138 (1) - Add a finish to emphasize the power reset? not needed
8. 01:18:670 (1,2) - Move them like shown below to preven that overlap. okay
   
   example

   
9. 01:21:849 (5) - Missing hitsounds on this one. fixed
10. 01:25:482 (4) - Make the start a hitnormal with clap soft addition, fits the drum hit in the background. yup

[Normal]

1. 00:01:922 (1,1) - Missing hitsounds on those two, also same thing as for Easy for the Slider.fixed
2. 00:09:188 (4) - How about moving this a bit down for a better transition to the next Slider? nop i prefer the current way
3. 00:31:441 (1) - Looks weird since 2's angle is totally in another way than 1's. Change this to a curved Slider instead? yeah better
4. 01:04:138 (1) - Same as on Easy. nop
5. 01:25:482 (5) - Same on the repeat as on Easy. fixed

[Insane]

1. 00:02:376 (1) - Same as for Easy. fixed
2. 00:08:507 (2) - This is not a good idea. You just did it for the sake of having symmetry which seems odd since the rhyhtm doesn't fit. Try to just make an 1/1 Slider like below. alright changed the rythm
   
   example

   
3. 00:22:244 (5,1) - Space them out for a better readability and smoother movement? kay
   
   example

   
4. 01:04:138 (1) - Same thing as on Easy.nop
5. 01:20:260 (1) - Remove the whistle from the start, it's way too single and inconsistent in this section. well yeah
6. 01:25:482 (2) - Same as on Easy.fixed

Good luck, sorry for that poor mod, I got a fever while I was modding it.

waxman wrote:

QQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQ

[Insane]

01:12:540 (4) - stack on the end of 01:13:221 (1)? I think you placed randomly because of no idea. So I help you.♥ yeah it was a bit random lol so fixed ;3

awesome! @@

GOOD LICK!

Frostings wrote:

hi there from my queue

this map is probably too good for me to mod ;w;
only have one suggestion:

[Insane]
00:40:523 (1) - ctrl G for flow? yeah it play a lot better

no kudosu please I usually give kd if i fixed something, and since i did, have a kd x)

shoot a star ~
good luck

xclaudioh wrote:

Good map :3

pishifat wrote:

hai, from queue

Insane

1. 00:00:673 (1) - not really sure why this starts on the blue tick when there actually is noise starting from the white tick for me it start on the blue tick
2. 00:15:546 (5) - should add a clap here considering the same rhythm has one at 00:37:344 (5) - doesn't fit imo
3. 00:40:069 (5,6) - when testplaying, i thought these two notes were spaced oddly. (6) seems a little too close to (5). i thought this seemed better, but that's just me the current one is better for me
   
   nsfwbox

   
4. 00:42:340 (1,2,3) - feels weird having a triplet where the spacing from (1) to (2) is different from (2) to (3). both underneath the slider end or both spaced would be best. examples of both that you've mapped: it play well even it's not stacked so i keep it
   
   spaced

   
   under

   
5. 00:44:156 (1) - missing a clap added
6. 01:10:042 (3,4,5,6,7) - it doesn't sound like there's anything at this part in the song to indicate a stream, while at 01:10:496 it seems like there should be a stream. listen carefully
7. 01:24:801 (3) - too far to the right. looks weird since it doesn't line up with 01:25:255 (1) - and 01:25:709 (3) - in the triangle pattern fixed

Vicho's Hard

1. 00:00:673 (1) - see comment on insane
2. 00:09:642 (1,10) - while the previous combos in this intro section are all in 4 bar intervals, this one is 2. would be good to start a NC somewhere in the middle
3. 00:23:720 (5) - passive slider here -- since there's emphasis on the downbeat at 00:24:174 it would be best to not have it on the tail of a slider. (same thing is handled better at 00:16:908 (1) - )
4. 00:42:340 (1) - 00:49:152 (8) - combo consistency is broken here as well.
5. 00:55:055 (1) - from the center of the previous spinner to this circle is a pretty large jump. the player's cursor is going to be in the center for the spinner, so if you were to put a circle in the center and end it at the same point when the spinner ends, it's a 2.10x jump. i'm also not too sure about the distance between 00:55:055 (1,2,3,4) - since the "intense part" (kiai time) has a lower distance snap than the build up (those 4 circles)
   combo consistency gets off a few more times that i didn't mention, so i'd go through and find those yourself

Normal

1. 00:03:284 (2) - every time this sort of syllable orientation happens in the vocals, you've got two 1/2 sliders in a row, but for this first one you've just got a circle and it feels like something's missing i'm for the diversity of rythm x)
2. 00:15:092 (3) - switch off of vocals seems really abrupt here. 00:13:275 (1,2) - these two seem to be following it, while 00:15:092 (3) - isn't. added a note here
3. 00:28:262 (2) - another place where vocals are being followed, but then switched to something else. awkward switch not for me
4. 00:34:847 - seems like there's something missing here considering 00:34:165 (4) - follows vocals, which are continued on this red tick. i'd say doing that
5. double 1/2 slider thing like earlier in the map would fit better same reason as 00:03:284 (2) -
   
   boxzor

   
   there's a more times where the change between vocals and instruments feels weird, so i won't mention every single one
6. 01:01:413 (2,3,4) - would be best to line these up vertically fixed

Easy
01:18:670 (1) - stupid thing here, but i think it would be nice if you stacked the end of the slider with the "O" in the background. it just works too well i always play with the video so it's not really needed imo, but still nice catch lol

not a box

01:25:482 (4) - seems like a pretty large jump from the end of this note to the spinner, so i'd say it's best to turn this towards the spinner center (or anything else to lessen the jump) fixed

4

gl

Ringating wrote:

bg mod comes bundled with pishifat's NM (since he hosts his mini queue through my bg queue)

your bg had a lot of compression artifacts, so I filtered those out of the image. Here is that version:

original bg, just cleaner

I also made 2 more versions out of a version of your bg that I found online that didn't have the logo in the center, just in case that was something you might prefer. One version is more color-saturated than the other. Here are those versions:

w/o logo

w/o logo and w/ saturation boost

• 
  Good!

• 
  Good!

1. 00:04:647 (2) - symmetric curved slder as 00:04:193 (1) - is better
2. 01:11:404 (1) - I prefer Ctrl+G
3. 01:14:129 (3,4,5) - I prefer to comform DS (move 01:14:356 (4) - to x:443 y:334)

1. 00:51:195 (1) - I suggest leftward slider for smoother cursor moving
2. 00:51:195 (1) - end at 00:51:422 and add clap at 00:51:422

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[Easy]

• 
  Good!

[Normal]

• 
  Good!

[Insane]

1. 00:04:647 (2) - symmetric curved slder as 00:04:193 (1) - is better
2. 01:11:404 (1) - I prefer Ctrl+G
3. 01:14:129 (3,4,5) - I prefer to comform DS (move 01:14:356 (4) - to x:443 y:334)
   
   All fixed ;3

that's exellent! I'm respecting your mapping thx :3
~☆
~Good Luck~

1. 00:33:257 (3) - i think straight slider looks better
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:06:009 (1) - Make shape same with 00:04:193 (4) - will looks nice
2. 00:53:012 (6) - Add clap
3. 01:04:138 (1) - how about move slder's red point to slider's middle
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:25:709 (6) - Add clap

1. 00:04:193 (1) - bend little more like 00:05:782 (1) -
2. 00:09:642 (1) - Add whistle on start of slider
3. 01:22:303 (1) - ^

1. 00:36:890 (1,2,3,4,5) - this stream looks weird now here's some coordinates
   
   coordinate

   00:36:890 (1) - 290,246
   00:37:004 (2) - 260,228
   00:37:117 (3) - 232,212
   00:37:231 (4) - 204,196
   00:37:344 (5) - 176,180
2. 00:37:344 (5) - little unbend this like 00:38:253 (8) - will be nice
3. 00:42:113 (8) - move to 244, 32 looks nice

Neta wrote:

ya~ from PM req


[Easy]

1. 00:33:257 (3) - i think straight slider looks better fixed
   SPOILER

   

[Normal]

1. 00:06:009 (1) - Make shape same with 00:04:193 (4) - will looks nice nop i the current shape is good imo
2. 00:53:012 (6) - Add clap there is no clap here '-'
3. 01:04:138 (1) - how about move slder's red point to slider's middle nop intentionnal
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:25:709 (6) - Add clap same as before

[Vicho's Hard]

1. 00:04:193 (1) - bend little more like 00:05:782 (1) -
2. 00:09:642 (1) - Add whistle on start of slider
3. 01:22:303 (1) - ^

[Insane]

1. 00:36:890 (1,2,3,4,5) - this stream looks weird now here's some coordinates it looks good for me D:
   
   coordinate

   00:36:890 (1) - 290,246
   00:37:004 (2) - 260,228
   00:37:117 (3) - 232,212
   00:37:231 (4) - 204,196
   00:37:344 (5) - 176,180
2. 00:37:344 (5) - little unbend this like 00:38:253 (8) - will be nice i don't really get it :/
3. 00:42:113 (8) - move to 244, 32 looks nice the current pattern is better

GOOD LUCK~

Laurier wrote:

from my queue~ :3

General
Clean

Easy
00:07:826 (3) - end at 00:08:280 - beginners get more easier rhythm. yup right fixed
00:31:441 (1,2,3) - how about symmetry pattern? http://puu.sh/8CEpw.jpg fixed
01:25:028 (3,4) - it be better follow the vocal. you should add note at 01:25:255 - or change to pattern. okay

Normal
00:07:826 (4) - same as easy. blue tick is okay on normal diff imo
00:11:913 (5) - make a curve ? makes good flow for next note http://puu.sh/8CEJf.jpg the current shape flow make a better flow
00:15:092 (4) - make 1/2 reverse slider. it fit to vocal. too hard imo

Vicho
00:13:956 (2) - add finish with bit lower sound
00:15:546 (2) - add whistle on head.
00:16:227 (5) - same as adove
00:18:725 (1,2) - use same pattern as 00:16:908 (1,2) - ? I mean stack (2) on (1)'s end.
01:22:985 (2) - add whistle on end ?

Insane
00:08:280 - I thought that you can add note at here because it is Insane diff. added
00:27:807 (1) - Ctrl+G i feel it is more better flow. fixed
00:33:711 (3,4,5,6) - how about this flow ? prefer mine >.< [url]http://puu.sh/8CFJ3.jpg　[/url]
00:58:688 (1) - end at 00:59:042 - you should use same pattern as 00:56:872 (1,2) - i could but the current one is good so no change
01:13:221 (1,2) - same as adove ^
01:20:260 (1) - add finish ? no finish here '-'

GL :3

1. This source should change it in upper case letters. so change "SOUL EATER NOT!" please.
   
   
2. Add "ソウルイーターノット！" to tags. It is a Japanese title of this anime.
3. Please uncheck Widescreen support.

1. HP drain is too high for this song. BPM is low, so I think that many players including the beginner play this map. I recommend that -1 HP drain.
2. 00:00:673 (1) - Move to spinner start 00:00:787 - here please. actually it I think that it is from 00:00:787 -here that a sound begins to sound.
3. 00:28:262 (2) - Sampleset Normal, Adittions Soft and Add clap to this note.
4. 00:55:055 (1) - Here is a similar sound, so Add a repeat to this slider?
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:56:872 (1) - Remove clap out of this slider. I prefer only finish here.
6. 01:11:177 (9) - Move to the left this note, more good flow and enjoyable.
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:25:028 (4) - Add clap

1. OD is too high for Hard diff. 6 is better for me.
2. 00:00:673 (1) - same as Insane diff.
3. 00:43:929 (5) - Remove clap out of this slider. doesn't fit the song imo.
4. 00:56:872 (1) - same as Insane diff.

1. 00:18:725 (3) - it looks weird that used red tick slider. The use of white tick is better here.
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:38:707 (1) - you forgot add finish to this slider?
3. 00:56:872 (1) - same as Insane diff.
4. 01:05:955 (4,5) - hmm, try to follow the vocal pattern.
   
   
   01:05:728 - 1/1 slider.
   01:06:409 - 1/2 slider.
   
5. 01:10:950 (5) - Add clap to slider end.

1. 00:56:872 (1) - same as Insane diff.

Guy wrote:

Hi!

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.


[General]

1. This source should change it in upper case letters. so change "SOUL EATER NOT!" please. changed
   
   
2. Add "ソウルイーターノット！" to tags. It is a Japanese title of this anime. added
3. Please uncheck Widescreen support. unchecked

[Insane]

1. HP drain is too high for this song. BPM is low, so I think that many players including the beginner play this map. I recommend that -1 HP drain. k fixed
2. 00:00:673 (1) - Move to spinner start 00:00:787 - here please. actually it I think that it is from 00:00:787 -here that a sound begins to sound. moved
3. 00:28:262 (2) - Sampleset Normal, Adittions Soft and Add clap to this note. fixed
4. 00:55:055 (1) - Here is a similar sound, so Add a repeat to this slider? okay
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:56:872 (1) - Remove clap out of this slider. I prefer only finish here. removed
6. 01:11:177 (9) - Move to the left this note, more good flow and enjoyable. right fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:25:028 (4) - Add clap added

[Vicho's Hard]

1. OD is too high for Hard diff. 6 is better for me.
2. 00:00:673 (1) - same as Insane diff.
3. 00:43:929 (5) - Remove clap out of this slider. doesn't fit the song imo.
4. 00:56:872 (1) - same as Insane diff.

All fixed as his request


[Normal]

1. 00:18:725 (3) - it looks weird that used red tick slider. The use of white tick is better here. yep i was thinking of change this
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:38:707 (1) - you forgot add finish to this slider? added
3. 00:56:872 (1) - same as Insane diff. fixed
4. 01:05:955 (4,5) - hmm, try to follow the vocal pattern. yep fixed play better
   
   
   01:05:728 - 1/1 slider.
   01:06:409 - 1/2 slider.
   
5. 01:10:950 (5) - Add clap to slider end. added

[Easy]

1. 00:56:872 (1) - same as Insane diff. removed

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Guy wrote:

cool, I give my first bubble to you!

Guy wrote:

cool, I give my first bubble to you!