1. Easy (1.36 stars, 62 notes)
2. Hard (3.03 stars, 178 notes)
3. Insane (4.9 stars, 299 notes)
4. Normal (1.79 stars, 114 notes)

1. Check AIMod for unsnapped objects
2. 00:27:923 (1,2) - only repeat once, more repeats are confusing since they are repeating after the lyrics
3. 00:38:770 (1,2) - same as above
4. 01:08:089 (1,2) - same as above
5. 00:35:380 (2,3,4,5) - the music is 1/2 a beat earlier than these
6. 01:15:547 (3,4,5) - same as above

1. 00:01:313 (2) - shorten the end of this slider to 00:01:652
2. 00:02:838 (4) - 00:04:872 (7) - NC's here to break up the first portion
3. 00:13:346 (2,4,2,4) - the notes of the music are 1/2 beat earlier
4. 00:30:635 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this is really hard to read
5. 00:58:599 (1,1) - at least 1 beat after a spinner
6. 01:03:344 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this is also hard to read

1. 00:44:363 (6,7) - these don't match the beat
2. 00:48:580 (1,2,3) - make this similar to 00:44:872 (1,2,3) so that the hitcircle is on the same tick as the voice
3. 00:58:599 (1,1) - at least 1 beat after a spinner
4. 01:07:411 (3,4,5,6) - a couple back and forth 1/2 beat hits that far from each other is too hard a pattern for hard difficulty

1. 00:03:516 (3) - the music is on the red ticks on both sides of the beginning of the slider, so the slider's first tick and repeat tick feel off rhythm
2. 01:02:417 (5) - NC here to stay consistent with other NC's in the previous stream
3. 01:14:192 (5) - same here
4. 01:06:734 (3,4,5,6,7) - a stream spaced this far is a bit hard compared to the rest of the map

Star Stream wrote:

1. Offset: 121ms BPM: 177.00
2. Offset: 52,324ms BPM: 176.00
3. Offset: 53,346ms BPM: 175.00
4. Offset: 54,374ms BPM: 174.00
5. Offset: 55,408ms BPM: 173.00
6. Offset: 56,448ms BPM: 171.00
7. Offset: 57,500ms BPM: 169.00
8. Offset: 58,565ms BPM: 173.00
9. Offset: 60,645ms BPM: 177.00

1. you don't have a storyboard, therefore disable widescreen support in all difficulties
2. also, disable countdown? it doesn't even show up, so there's no need for that

1. hmh, sounds harsh but I'd suggest to remove SV changes completely from this diff. >:
   It's a nice idea, but beginner players won't notice the difference in Slider Ticks at 00:44:872 (1) - eg. - and might miss it/hit it too early.
   and if they get it, they most likely get confused by it, especially at 00:47:245 (2,3,4) - they'll hit them to early, cause the distance is so different
   
2. 00:00:127 (1,2) - fix DS? it has to be 100% consistent in E/N diffs
3. 00:06:906 (4) - improves movement/flow if you rotate by 50° (sel centre) and ctrl+g afterwards
   plus - ^ why do you use DS 1.0 here and 1.1 after the spinner? it's confusing. |:
4. 00:17:754 (1) - do you notice that small 'edge' in the curved part of the slider? you can fix it by moving the 3rd anchor two grids to the left
   this messes up the shape a bit, so move the 2nd anchor a bit to the left as well, so it's circular again
5. 00:23:516 (2,3) - you could blanket them perfectly
   screen

   
   and you might wanna stack 00:25:889 (1) - with the end of 00:23:516 (2) - it's much easier to create nice patterns that way, imo
6. 00:29:279 (2) - blanket 00:27:584 (2) - better, the slider's end is further away from the circle
7. 00:30:635 (3) - ^
8. 00:35:720 (2) - ^
   should look more like this, imo

   
   don't forget to adjust 00:38:431 (2) - if you change this
9. 00:36:737 (1) - ctrl + j and move further down to improve the movement by a lot
   example

   
10. 00:43:177 (2,1) - fix DS (or preferable: don't change SV. x: )
11. 00:52:324 (1) - ctrl + g and rotate by a bit, you get a better flow from 00:51:652 (4) - to this to 00:54:374 (2) -
    screen

    
12. 00:54:374 (2) - snap red anchor to white tick at 00:54:718 - sliders look in general more balanced if you pay attention to this
13. 01:06:068 (1,2) - movement is so abrupt here. >: you could change this up by moving 2 to 416|312 and reverse 01:08:102 (1) -
    you just had to change up the following objects as well, then. x:

1. DS has to be consitent throughout the whole diff, you use 1.5 and 1.0 at some parts, stick to one and fix everything else
2. 00:04:872 (1,2) - if you bend each of them in the other direction they look better, imo, cause atm they oppose each other and give a really inharmonic feeling
3. 00:13:686 (3) - basically ^, just bend in opposite direction
4. 00:18:770 (2,3) - don't make them overlap randomly
   you might let them overlap intentionally, but if you only do this here it looks kinda "messy" (no offense x3)
   so either do itmore often or remove?
5. 00:20:465 (1,2,1) - stack 1 and 1 or at least don't let them overlap
   it looks ugly, imo, sorry. >< and confusing)
   plus keep DS consistent at 00:21:821 (1,2,1) -
6. 00:38:771 (1,2,1) - I really like the idea of them overlapping like this, unfortunately there is a reverse arrow,
   which becomes hardly visible cause of the overlap. and reverse arrows have to be visible

   Standard Ranking Criteria wrote:

   All repeat arrows on sliders must be visible. Make sure that hitbursts (100s/300s/etc) from previous notes are not covering the repeat arrows or even the paths/ends of sliders (use the default skin to check if using hitbursts from another skin). This way, all sliders will be easily visible and playable. However, very short repeating sliders (e.g. 1/4 or 1/8 sliders, generally called "kick" sliders) only require the first repeat arrow to be visible (since it's nearly impossible to see any other repeats due to the short length and the cursor covering most of the visible space).

7. 00:43:516 (5,1) - fix DS
8. 00:52:324 (1,2,3) - .. ^
   not going to point them out anymore. x:

1. decrease AR
   atm you have a 'bad' AR spead overall, it's 3/4/8/9.. extremely unbalanced. x:
2. 00:03:177 (2,1) - overlap doesn't look good to me
   consider sth like this, maybe

   
3. 00:24:872 (7,1) - shape 7 bit differently so they don't overlap?
4. 00:28:262 (2,3) - basically ^, overlap
5. 00:54:374 (5) - snap red anchor to red tick?
6. 00:56:460 (1) - blanket 00:55:408 (6) - better? end is far too close
7. 01:11:492 (3,4) - change shape of 4 so it won't overlap with start of 3? looks meh right now. ><
8. 01:20:814 (2,3) - ^, overlap (it doesn't look good if it's just the borders touching slightly)

1. 00:14:194 (3) -
2. 00:15:550 (2) -
3. 00:27:245 (8) -
4. 00:54:374 (1) - snap anchor?
5. 00:56:460 (1) - ^

Squirrel wrote:

hellow. :3
mod from queue.
.. and keep in mind that I'm just making suggestions. you can follow them or not, it's totally up to you. :3

[General]

1. you don't have a storyboard, therefore disable widescreen support in all difficulties
2. also, disable countdown? it doesn't even show up, so there's no need for that

[Easy]

1. hmh, sounds harsh but I'd suggest to remove SV changes completely from this diff. >:
   It's a nice idea, but beginner players won't notice the difference in Slider Ticks at 00:44:872 (1) - eg. - and might miss it/hit it too early.
   and if they get it, they most likely get confused by it, especially at 00:47:245 (2,3,4) - they'll hit them to early, cause the distance is so different
   
2. 00:00:127 (1,2) - fix DS? it has to be 100% consistent in E/N diffs
3. 00:06:906 (4) - improves movement/flow if you rotate by 50° (sel centre) and ctrl+g afterwards
   plus - ^ why do you use DS 1.0 here and 1.1 after the spinner? it's confusing. |:
4. 00:17:754 (1) - do you notice that small 'edge' in the curved part of the slider? you can fix it by moving the 3rd anchor two grids to the left
   this messes up the shape a bit, so move the 2nd anchor a bit to the left as well, so it's circular again
5. 00:23:516 (2,3) - you could blanket them perfectly
   screen

   
   and you might wanna stack 00:25:889 (1) - with the end of 00:23:516 (2) - it's much easier to create nice patterns that way, imo
6. 00:29:279 (2) - blanket 00:27:584 (2) - better, the slider's end is further away from the circle
7. 00:30:635 (3) - ^
8. 00:35:720 (2) - ^
   should look more like this, imo

   
   don't forget to adjust 00:38:431 (2) - if you change this
9. 00:36:737 (1) - ctrl + j and move further down to improve the movement by a lot
   example

   
10. 00:43:177 (2,1) - fix DS (or preferable: don't change SV. x: )
11. 00:52:324 (1) - ctrl + g and rotate by a bit, you get a better flow from 00:51:652 (4) - to this to 00:54:374 (2) -
    screen

    
12. 00:54:374 (2) - snap red anchor to white tick at 00:54:718 - sliders look in general more balanced if you pay attention to this
13. 01:06:068 (1,2) - movement is so abrupt here. >: you could change this up by moving 2 to 416|312 and reverse 01:08:102 (1) -
    you just had to change up the following objects as well, then. x:

[Normal]

1. DS has to be consitent throughout the whole diff, you use 1.5 and 1.0 at some parts, stick to one and fix everything else
2. 00:04:872 (1,2) - if you bend each of them in the other direction they look better, imo, cause atm they oppose each other and give a really inharmonic feeling
3. 00:13:686 (3) - basically ^, just bend in opposite direction
4. 00:18:770 (2,3) - don't make them overlap randomly
   you might let them overlap intentionally, but if you only do this here it looks kinda "messy" (no offense x3)
   so either do itmore often or remove?
5. 00:20:465 (1,2,1) - stack 1 and 1 or at least don't let them overlap
   it looks ugly, imo, sorry. >< and confusing)
   plus keep DS consistent at 00:21:821 (1,2,1) -
6. 00:38:771 (1,2,1) - I really like the idea of them overlapping like this, unfortunately there is a reverse arrow,
   which becomes hardly visible cause of the overlap. and reverse arrows have to be visible

   Standard Ranking Criteria wrote:

   All repeat arrows on sliders must be visible. Make sure that hitbursts (100s/300s/etc) from previous notes are not covering the repeat arrows or even the paths/ends of sliders (use the default skin to check if using hitbursts from another skin). This way, all sliders will be easily visible and playable. However, very short repeating sliders (e.g. 1/4 or 1/8 sliders, generally called "kick" sliders) only require the first repeat arrow to be visible (since it's nearly impossible to see any other repeats due to the short length and the cursor covering most of the visible space).

7. 00:43:516 (5,1) - fix DS
8. 00:52:324 (1,2,3) - .. ^
   not going to point them out anymore. x:

[Hard]

1. decrease AR
   atm you have a 'bad' AR spead overall, it's 3/4/8/9.. extremely unbalanced. x:
2. 00:03:177 (2,1) - overlap doesn't look good to me
   consider sth like this, maybe

   
3. 00:24:872 (7,1) - shape 7 bit differently so they don't overlap?
4. 00:28:262 (2,3) - basically ^, overlap
5. 00:54:374 (5) - snap red anchor to red tick?
6. 00:56:460 (1) - blanket 00:55:408 (6) - better? end is far too close
7. 01:11:492 (3,4) - change shape of 4 so it won't overlap with start of 3? looks meh right now. ><
8. 01:20:814 (2,3) - ^, overlap (it doesn't look good if it's just the borders touching slightly)

[Insane]
just some shapes you should refine -

1. 00:14:194 (3) -
2. 00:15:550 (2) -
3. 00:27:245 (8) -
4. 00:54:374 (1) - snap anchor?
5. 00:56:460 (1) - ^

that's all, nice mapset. ovo
sorry if I sound rude, I kinda feel like I do. I don't mean it, tho. |:
Good luck! *squee*

wow, fast mod request!
except for one or two suggest, almost everything fixed!
I welcome this mod.

but Sorry,I'm busy because of with Important school project
so It's difficult to comment on mod..

Though, Thank you very much for mod!
Good luck! Squee

piruchan wrote:

Hi there!
Saw this on #modreqs, decided to do a quick check.

[Easy]
00:41:482 (3) - It looks a little bit out of place imo, I recommend something like this. (Sorry, my slider is bad)

SPOILER

01:09:797 (2) - I recommend making it look more angled, like this.

SPOILER

[Normal]
I think slider velocity is a bit high. Consider reducing?

Aside from that, I think everything is fine.

[Hard]
00:52:324 (1,2,3) - Flow is a bit weird imo, placement change?
01:00:645 (1,2) - Why sliders? I think four hit circles fit well here.

Suggestion

Please tell me what you accept and don't accept so I can improve.

Nice map, hope it gets ranked soon.

Okoratu wrote:

If you respond to my mod half a year ago i would also mod the other diffs

Ranking Criteria wrote:

Uninherited timing sections must be the same in every difficulty of the mapset. That is, each section must have the same BPM and offset in each difficulty. Furthermore, there must not be extra or missing uninherited sections in any difficulty. A song's timing doesn't change between difficulties, so there's no sense in having different uninherited sections per difficulty.