1. Marathon - 4Key (3.73 stars, 4265 notes)

00:00:000 to 03:34:283 - DJ Noriken - Hold On Me
02:51:626 to 06:03:584 - M-Neko - Luminism Pt. II
04:59:598 to 08:27:552 - M-Project - Kidz War (JAKAZiD Remix)

yoshilove wrote:

hi~ from queue :3

BPM : OK
offset : 998 OK! Fixed

4K

[Marathon]
(X)! Nope: 01:00:984 (60984|1) - remove the 3-noted note represents the strong sound:cymbals+beatsound+melody
(X)! Nope: 01:03:984 - add note to 3 No other instruments along with the vocals
(X)! Nope: 01:04:317 - add note to 1 same above
OK! Fixed: 01:24:146 (84146|1) - end 01:24:646
OK! Fixed: 01:24:729 (84729|2) - start 01:24:646

OK! Fixed: 03:36:950 - add LN to 2 end 03:37:116
OK! Fixed: 03:36:950 (216950|0) - LN start 03:37:116
OK! Fixed: 03:47:614 - add LN to 2 end 03:47:780
OK! Fixed: 03:47:614 (227614|3) - LN start 03:47:780

OK! Fixed: 06:36:493 - add note to 3
OK! Fixed: 06:44:908 - add LN to 4 end 06:45:241
OK! Fixed: 06:45:241 - add note to 1?
OK! Fixed: 06:55:905 - add note to 2
OK! Fixed: 07:06:570 - add note to 3
OK! Fixed: 07:06:903 - add note to 1
OK! Fixed: 07:09:402 (429402|2) - start 07:08:902

nice map!!!! App gogo~ Thank you so much!

arviejhay wrote:

Star!

YunoFanatic wrote:

moe BAT arc ;V

vocaloid1anime2 wrote:

star~ shoot~ ===> :3

YunoFanatic wrote:

Hi~! Mods for your et chart. arc4BAT

[Marathon]

SPOILER

(X)! Nope: 00:41:655 (41655|3) - A bit useless note, you could have gone straight to the stream. I suggest you to delete this one. There's a beat sound along the drum roll sound. It adds difficultness.

(X)! Nope: 00:41:988 (41988|0,41988|1) - Hmmm bakit kapa nag double? ilipat mo nalang ung clap dun sa isang note then delete mo ung isang note much better. kase straight stream.katulad ng nasa taas, tunog ng drum roll dagdag pa ng tunog ng beat kaya naging doble-nota at dagdag hirap sa mapa.

(X)! Nope: 01:06:483 (66483|3,66816|1,66983|2) - pwede mong imiror to like 01:05:317 (65317|0,65483|2,65816|1) - para mas maganda ung flow ng pattern. siya yung mirror version nyan, at iba din yung pitch nya kaya hindi ko pinag parehas. para din sa balanse ng mga kamay


OK! Fixed: 01:21:813 (81813|2) - maybe move mo to sa 1st para sa flow kase ung stack hindi masyadong bagay.
pero hindi ko nilagay sa 1st kundi sa 2nd para katulad ng 01:22:979 (82979|1)

(X)! Nope: 01:24:729 (84729|0) - misplaced ba ito or intention? either way hindi masyadong suitable delete mo nalang or imove mo sa 01:24:646 hindi siya misplaced, kung papakinggan mo siya sa 25% playback maririnig mong nasa 1/4 ang piano sound + yung LN ay tumunog sa 1/2 kaya nagkaron ng ganyan na parang misplaced. epik nga e but that's how it is :/


OK! Fixed: 01:52:723 (112723|2,112806|1,112889|3,113139|2,113306|1) - according to your previous pattern 01:52:306 (112306|1,112473|3,112556|1) - pwede mo ring itry tong pattern na ito. para lang maging mas maganda ung placement.
ayos to ayos to

Clicky :3

(X)! Nope: 02:08:969 (128969|3) - pwede mo itong pahabaan hanggang 02:09:302 kahit itong ln lang na ito. para mas fit dun sa music. kase parang bitin :V. Katulad siya ng ibang synthesizers on that part kaya pare pareho sila ng haba ng LN. Sa tingin ko kaya mo na suggest yan dahil sa finish-cymbal sounds :v

OK! Fixed: 03:36:950 mag lagay ka ng green timing point dito. tapos set mo yung volume to 20% ung current volume mo di masyadong fit dun sa music na, ang hina na kase nung sound pakpakpak. tapos ibalik mo ung current volume mo sa 03:55:612 oha oha boom vanezzz! HAHA! tama tama lakas nga nung pakpakpak, maganda to, BOOM VANEZZ HAHA XD

(X)! Nope: 04:38:269 (278269|1,278269|3) - try mo ito . just to fill the emptiness inisip ko na din to kaso wala talaga vocal lang sya tapos hindi sya ganung konsistent. wala kasing kahalong bass yung boses nya e :/ ang weird sa feeling pag nag ka LN dun so iniwan ko sya as empty

Clicky :3

(X)! Nope: 04:59:598 (299598|3,299764|2) - move mo at i extend mo ung ln sa 04:59:931 for me mas fit omfg boom tinde! dat tinde xD nowp katulad ng sinabi ko kanina para sa synth yung mga habaers na to xD

(X)! Nope: 05:48:920 (348920|0) - change mo ito sa ln inconsistent na yung pattern mo, parehas lang to ng sound na sinusundan ng lns mo. Ibang variation na to, nag hahanda na sa susunod na mp3, mixed na sila kasi, ayaw kong maging repetitive yung patterns and stuffs here. Its like magiging inulit ko lang yung patterns before this. Iba na yung volume level pati nya. yung mga LN there is for the synth-voiced[/color ]

[color=#BF0000](X)! Nope: 07:35:230 (455230|1,455230|3,455397|0,455397|2,455563|3,455563|1) - bakit hindi mo nalang finollow ung long sound? lagyan mo nalang ng lns like those previous patterns my long sound naman din ih inisip ko na din yan kaso bitin kasi yung sound ng synth. not like dun sa mga ine LN kong synthesizer talagang 1/2 LN size. eto kasi biglaang synth sound. So hindi ko na sya nilagyan ng LN

(X)! Nope: ET BITMAPUR. Nowp plz XD

- R u m i a - wrote:

hi senpai >~< a little suggestion
why no 7k /slap

SPOILER

OK! Fixed: 00:19:660 - i guess you should start 1/4 stream here , better to read on double line though
(X)! Nope: 00:45:988 (45988|0,46154|1) - ctrl + j? 00:46:154 (46154|1,46321|0) - repeated sound It will ruin the hand balance
(X)! Nope: 01:02:650 - 1/4 stream start here The drum roll in this part is not that consistent yet and still low volume
OK! Fixed: 01:08:649 - add a note?
(X)! Nope: 01:11:482 - ^ I heard the sound but its very low volume and not consistent anymore
OK! Fixed: 01:13:148 - ^
OK! Fixed: 01:19:313 - ^
(X)! Nope: 01:21:146 - ^ I heard the sound but its very low volume and not consistent anymore
01:32:644 (92644|1) - ? for the bass sound, its very clear o.o
OK! Fixed: 01:44:974 - stream start here x.x
OK! Fixed: 01:49:307 (109307|0) - move to 4 , its a repeated sound
OK! Fixed: 01:50:473 (110473|0) - ^
OK! Fixed: 01:55:972 - add a note
OK! Fixed: 01:56:722 - ^
OK! Fixed: 01:56:888 - ^
OK! Fixed: 02:01:887 (121887|0,122054|1) - ctrl + j , better pattern
OK! Fixed: 02:02:554 - add a note
(X)! Nope: 02:02:887 - ^ the synth sound is at 1/2 beat line
OK! Fixed: 02:03:887 - ^
(X)! Nope: 02:04:053 - ^ the synth sound is at 1/2 beat line
OK! Fixed: 02:05:220 - ^
OK! Fixed: 102:06:553 - ^
(X)! Nope: 02:21:216 (141216|2) - as hold too?
(X)! Nope: 02:25:549 - add a note
(X)! Nope: 02:41:629 (161629|2) - move this to 02:41:545
OK! Fixed: 02:50:627 (170627|1) - at here 02:50:543
03:32:284 (212284|0,212284|1,212284|3) - you made 3 notes here so why not at 03:30:284 , 03:31:617 and 03:32:950 too?
Its already 3-noted notes, the other one you mentioned just have mini LN but still 3-noted notes if you press it

(X)! Nope: 03:37:949 - add a hold here not going to do 3-hold noodles ;w;
(X)! Nope: 03:40:949 - ^
(X)! Nope: 03:46:447 - ^
(X)! Nope: 04:19:107 - a 1/2 hold here~ the LNs are focused on synthesizers
(X)! Nope: 04:21:773 - ^
(X)! Nope: 04:24:439 - ^
(X)! Nope: 04:27:105 - ^ at 3
OK! Fixed: 04:58:765 - add a note
OK! Fixed: 04:58:848 - ^

NaxelCL wrote:

marked :v of mod later

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Various Artists - J-Core Mix [BPM Checked]
===o0o===
Hi arcwinolivirus,
I think this map has multi-bpms!
So I suggested you some:
Kiai time 1:
BPM: 180.000
Offset: 1042

Kiai time 2:
BPM: 180.000
Offset: 129021

Kiai time 3:
BPM: 180.000
Offset: 171687

Kiai time 4:
BPM: 180.000
Offset: 235666

Kiai time 5:
BPM: 180.000
Offset: 342311

Kiai time 6:
BPM: 180.000
Offset: 432956

Kiai time 7:
BPM: 180.000
Offset: 454268

I love this song! Good luck! Will make SB for you map!

REDYUMiKA wrote:

Hello guys, I came here to prior-mod by request. (Column:1,2,3,4)
---> Type:GM, Language:

[General]
OK! Fixed: Offset has been applied incorrect value, change to 1040ms

[Marcthon's patterns]
*The below mods were done under the 1040ms conditions.

SPOILER

OK! Fixed: 00:06:538 (6538|3) - move to 2
OK! Fixed: 00:06:705 (6705|2,6705|1) - move to 1&4
OK! Fixed: 00:06:872 (6872|3) - move to 3
OK! Fixed: 00:10:038 - to 00:12:204 - I'm just showing an example of (*1) pattern as modification.
To put "double-notes per 1 measure" would be a good patterning in this section. Great suggestion as it fits to the first 3 mod you suggested there
OK! Fixed: 00:22:035 (22035|1) - remove, overmapped for existing sounds.Im also thinking of this, as it sounds like double snare occured on this part and really strong sound. But nah removed as no cymbals xD
00:31:699 - to 00:33:199 - ^(*2) pattern I dont think this overmapped though, but followed some of you patterns. I made the 1st 2 LNs for vocals to be same length as the last 2 LNs since they have the same vocal sound length and it fits rather than mini holds which feels weird since its not the synthesizer. Thank you for the suggestion
OK! Fixed: (01:10:191 - add a note to optional column, I was able to hear double-emphasized sounds of shynth & electric-piano.)
OK! Fixed: (01:12:857 - ^The same reason as above mod.)
OK! Fixed: 01:23:688 - to 01:25:021 - Such a complicated pattern (these LNs are followed high-scale synth,
moreover combined with 2 different sounds using normal notes.) are not comfortable on playing,
then I recommend you make LNs follow the vocal as one of the solution. ---> (*3) Another great suggestion! I followed the synth and single piano sounds here, but it seems weird to play. I didnt thought of vocals on this part. Thanks~!
OK! Fixed: 02:11:427 - add a note to 1
OK! Fixed: 02:16:759 - add a note to 4
OK! Fixed: 02:16:926 - add a note to 2
OK! Fixed: 02:22:092 - add a note to 4
OK! Fixed: 02:27:424 - add a note to 2
OK! Fixed: 02:27:507 (147507|1) - move to 3
OK! Fixed: 02:27:590 - add a note to 2
OK! Fixed: 03:32:326 (212326|1) - remove, overmapped for existing sounds. actually not overmapped since I make beatsound+cymbals+any other instrument 3-noted. But in these part, it feels weird to hit with 3-note the cymbals. followed your suggestion to remove.
(X)! Nope: 03:36:992 (216992|1) - remove, do you really feel the necessity to put this short LN? Yes I feel it somehow, since the pitch of synth here is different before the long synth one. This is suggested by Rumia in his mod. I might reconsider this if other modders will notice and mention this part. Thank you :3
(X)! Nope: 03:47:656 (227656|1) - ^
OK! Fixed: 05:47:296 (347296|1) - move to 4, mini-jacks will be a good spice toward these monotonous section.
OK! Fixed: 05:52:628 (352628|2) - move to 1, ^
OK! Fixed: 05:57:960 (357960|2) - move to 1, ^
OK! Fixed: 06:51:948 (411948|0) - move to 2
OK! Fixed: 06:52:281 (412281|1) - move to 3

[Comment]
Wow..what a cool song this is, and really nice chart arcwin. Thank you so much for the feedback
I hope, you will take it for rank as 2nd approval in mania.
Good Luck, and give a star to your poet chart omg Im no poet >w<

[Shi-Ra] wrote:

Hello arcwin, there are mods for your mania chart ^w^

Shi-Ra's Pattern Review:
(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 for 4K diff)
Marathon

Inside :3

OK! Fixed: 00:06:372 (6372|0,6538|2) - I think you need to switrh the places of these notes to 3rd and 1st columns, it'll be more suitable pattern here and less repetitive like previous

(X)! Nope: 00:07:871 (7871|1) - this one I recommend you to move to 2nd column here, it'll be less repetitive pattern too This is the mirror version of 00:08:538 (8538|2,8705|0,8705|3,8871|2) - and also if I move it, It'll just repeat the previous pattern at 00:01:873

(X)! Nope: 00:08:871 (8871|2) - and this one you can move to 1st column, same reason like for two previous notes If I will apply the previous one and this, they are the same pattern o.o

OK! Fixed: 00:21:868 (21868|1,21868|2) - hm...I think you can open this chord by moving these notes to 0 and 3rd columns and then close the next going chord, it'll be more comfortable to play such chords after previous triplet here

(X)! Nope: 00:31:033 (31033|0) - you can delete this note, it's unnecessary to place here coz there's no strong beat which you need to accent, it's already accented with next going chord correctlyI made the beat sounds 2-noted for difficultness, also its reasonable since there's a synthesizer at the BGM which makes beat+synth

(X)! Nope: 01:01:026 (61026|1) - I see your intention here to accent this strong beat, but I think that two notes + LN are enough for it and you can delete this extra noteI also thought about this, but still it feels weird without 3-noted emphasizing that strong sound. Also it gives density to that part and its actually fun to hit.

(X)! Nope: 01:03:109 (63109|2) - this trill begins earlier - here 01:02:526 - so you maybe need to place more notes according to the sounds? it'll be suitable with them I knew it starts earlier but the volume of that drum roll is still low compared to where I noted for it. It feels weird to note for the low volumed drum roll since its not consistent imo. I test play. :3

OK! Fixed: 01:10:357 (70357|3) - there goes another sound, not like for previous note, so you need to move it to another column to accent it correctly and avoid double noting, move to 2nd column for example

OK! Fixed: 01:42:517 - you can add one more note here to 1st column according to the piano sound which goes there, check that Oh yeah didnt noticed that. Thanks~!

(X)! Nope: 01:49:182 (109182|3) - I suggest you to move this note to 2nd column, it'll be more suitable with your next going pattern, no need to place double note here The double note here are same instrument and pitch and to add spice, suggested by Rumia's mod

(X)! Nope: 01:50:515 (110515|3) - again, this one you can move to 2nd column too and see that it's more comfortable to play with your patterns in this part

OK! Fixed: 02:04:845 (124845|2) - move this one to 0 column to make this pattern more balanced and suitable with next going part, now it's a little uncofortable

OK! Fixed: 02:25:674 (145674|3) - I suggest you to move this one to 1st column, it's more suitable for it according to your next goint pattern here

OK! Fixed: 02:43:170 (163170|0,163253|2) - I recommend you to move these notes to 2nd and 0 columns accordingly to perform here more smooth transition with next going part

(X)! Nope: 02:47:669 (167669|1) - hm...these patterns are hard already, maybe delete this note and make this pattern easier? it's good for accent this strong beat with chord + LN without extra notes Same reason before, emphasizing strong sound:beat+cymbals+vocal

OK! Fixed: 02:58:667 (178667|1,179333|2) - you've already used such kind of patterns in the beginning, so I recommend you to move these notes to 2nd and 1st columns to make more different pattern here

OK! Fixed: 03:12:330 - and here you can add one more note to 0 column to accent the strong beat correctly, like you did it in previos pattern, it'll be fine Didnt notice, thanks o/

(X)! Nope: 04:47:309 (287309|2,287476|0) - I think you can swith the places for these notes to 1st and 2nd column accordingly and perform more comfortable stair transition here it became weird to press after rearrange like this :/ seems the hand balance got off a bit (because of 1st column and 3rd column 2-noted notes)

OK! Fixed: 05:35:632 (335632|0,335632|3,335798|1) - I recommend yuo to mirror this pattern to make it less repetitive, I've seen such alot of such kind of pattern in this song, make it more different although I made some pattern repetitive since it have same sound patterns and also not that long to be repetitive :/ its like only 2 measures and done~

OK! Fixed: 07:02:945 (422945|1,424279|2) - make some difference again, move these notes to 2nd and 1st columns accordingly, previously you've placed many notes into 0&1st columns

OK! Fixed: 07:23:441 - you can add at least one more note here to 1st column according to the sound, and also check previous chord, you can place note here too Oh I didnt notice this, thanks!

OK! Fixed: From 07:34:272 to 07:36:772 - I suggest you to change LN positions, they looks too repetitive and it's not so good for your patterns here, you know Fixed these notes, as after the sound of this, with the same sound, I didnt made it repetitive, silly me

Yay, that's all, hope it hepls ^w^

Take my star for this marathon owo Thank you so much >w<)/
Good luck :3/

Simple_Star wrote:

Hello.arc~Here is mod!
I hope I'm not too late
[Marathon]

SPOILER

OK! Fixed: 00:42:447 - How about add 2 Notes at 1 and 2?Because here is a heavy beat. Wow I didnt noticed this. Thanks~!

(X)! Nope: 00:52:361 - Remove 1 of them as I made the consistent beat sounds 1/2 2-noted

OK! Fixed: 01:07:191 - Add a Note at 4

OK! Fixed: 01:18:522 - Add a Note at 1

OK! Fixed: 01:21:188 - Add a Note at 2

OK! Fixed: 01:23:355 (83355|2) - Move to 1 is more comfortable in my opinion

OK! Fixed: 01:34:352 - Here you can set like this in my opnion: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1550996 good suggestion~

OK! Fixed: 02:32:756 (152756|0,152839|2) - Ctrl+J First

OK! Fixed: 02:32:922 - And Add a Note at 3

OK! Fixed: 02:35:422 (155422|0,155505|2) - Ctrl+J

OK! Fixed: 02:35:588 - And add a Note at 3

OK! Fixed: 02:38:088 - ~ 02:38:255 - The same likes ^

OK! Fixed: 02:39:504 (159504|1) - Move to 1

OK! Fixed: 02:39:588 - Add a Note at 2

OK! Fixed: 02:43:587 - Add a Note at 4

OK! Fixed: 02:46:253 - Add a Note at 3

OK! Fixed: 02:48:919 - Add a Note at 2

OK! Fixed: 05:30:633 (330633|2,330800|3) - Exchange

OK! Fixed: 07:12:277 - ~ 07:12:860 - All Double Notes i recommend

OK! Fixed: 07:19:609 - I suggest you catch this beat. Yeah~!

OK! Fixed: 08:26:927 (506927|0,507094|3,507260|0,507427|3,507594|2) - Move to 2 and 3.The last 2 Exchange.

That's all.What the Shiren map it is Lol Shiren XDD thanks~ :3

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Hi arcwinolivirus,
After you accpected mods, can you fix BPMs?
If you done, can you call me to begin make SB?
Thanks!

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

SB Done! Have fun! Hope you like it!
Link Download: http://puu.sh/8rUcF.zip

For beatmap

BG (1024 x 768)
SB's code

SB's Stuff

1. Artist_Title.png
2. Beatmap by arcwinolivirus.png
3. BG1.jpg
4. BG1-Black.jpg
5. BG2.jpg
6. BG2-Black.jpg
7. BG3.jpg
8. BG3-Black.jpg
9. Black.png
10. white.jpg
11. dot.png
12. flash.png
13. Hold on Me.png
14. kiai.png
15. Kidz War (JAKAZiD Remix).png
16. Luminism Pt.png
17. SB by KK.png
18. sideglow.png
19. Thanks.png

If you has feelbacks or somethings wanted to fix like your thinks, just call me