Updated!EcchiKing- wrote:
Yo, Tio Fenrir
00:01:032 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Did you used distance snap here? it doesn't look like that you used expecialy when it passes of the stream to the slider
Thanks. L=
Updated!EcchiKing- wrote:
Yo, Tio Fenrir
00:01:032 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Did you used distance snap here? it doesn't look like that you used expecialy when it passes of the stream to the slider
Hmm...I don't think that fits with the entire map style, 'cause even in the "pain" diff I've made a pause there. But thanks, feel free to post your opinions. L=Celeress wrote:
Very nice map, I really like it!
Adore Difficulty
At 1:43:461 (46.8%) you should put another circle
And at 1:43:604 (46.8%) another note
I added them and then listened to it or whatever and I THINK it sounds a better instead of that pause
Idk how to link the actual spot or whatever like what was posted above so I just put the exact time
Ok NP, I'll tell you if I run into anything else i guess.. Is there anything in particular that you think needs work?Tio Fenrir wrote:
Hmm...I don't think that fits with the entire map style, 'cause even in the "pain" diff I've made a pause there. But thanks, feel free to post your opinions. L=
RenzMichael wrote:
Hi~~
found it on #modreqs
For your free mods!
Its a very nice song
[General]
*pls fix sv
*i got a feeling that the offset is 1023 , not 1033. try it.
*fix ds . most rhythm cant be understand
[Normal]
00:17:889 (4) - this is very near, try putting near the pink slider
00:30:461 (2) - i think there is really no reason for abnormalizing slider
00:34:175 (5,1) - swap nc
00:43:318 (5) - use 3 gray points only
00:45:604 (1,2) - i think you want this on the middle. but its not exactly on middle
00:51:318 (1) - near
00:52:746 (3) - ^
00:55:604 (2,3,4,5,6) - if i were you , i wont stack them
01:03:604 - its very annoying you ignored the note here
01:26:461 (3) - equalise ds
01:48:461 - you ignore note
02:02:032 (6) - i guess this far is not for normal?
02:48:461 (3) - near
02:49:746 (7) - ^
02:52:175 (1) - ^
03:08:175 (2) - ^
03:09:461 (3) - far
03:09:461 (3) - ignored note
03:15:604 (5) - near
03:19:889 (5) - ^
03:20:889 (1) - far
03:25:318 (1,2) - naer
[Hard]
too low OD
00:14:032 (5) - cant understand rhythm
00:15:032 (7,8,9) - sudden ds change make me lose combo
00:19:032 - ignored note
00:31:889 (1) - near
00:43:318 (1) - ^
00:51:604 (4,5,6) - ^
01:15:532 (1) - i think you dont need nc. its hard diff
01:31:032 (3) - no need to make it like that shape
01:38:175 (1,2,3,4) - cant understand .really
02:41:818 (1) - why does this start on blue tick?
02:45:318 (4) - ignored note
02:46:461 (7,1) - ^
03:15:889 (1) - remove nc
03:19:889 (1,2,3) - naer to pink circle
Taeyang wrote:
Nomal
00:51:889 (2,3) - recommend put circle between 2 and b
00:55:604 (2,3,4,5,6) - not fun you should distance
01:25:604 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - rythem so hard ,recommend slide
01:37:889 (5) - not good
01:41:604 (4,5,6) - use distance
02:07:318 (3,4,5) - use distance
02:26:746 (1,2,3,4) - use distance
02:48:461 (3,4,5) - use distance
02:48:461 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - rythm hard, you should use slide
overall,normal distance not good
Valeu japinha! o/[Japinha CPM22] wrote:
Bom, eai Fenrir tudo certo? Curti muito esse teu mapa, e vou "tentar" modar ele, entao me desculpe por qualquer coisa ou se eu for muito exigente também, é normal em mim. Uma hora ou outra eu preciso aprender a modar ( ._.)SPOILER00:19:461 - tenta posicionar esses jumps um pouco diferente que soou meio estranho.
00:29:104 essa "mini stream" está um pouco mal posicionadaSPOILERdaqui 00:35:032 ate aqui 00:37:318 acho que as notas estavam um pouco fora , nao no tempo, mas no mapa mesmo nao sei como te mostrar isso mas deixei um pouco mais alinhadas nos slides:SPOILER00:45:032 Essas 3 notas mova ate aquiSPOILER00:46:961 Essa stream também pode ficar um pouquinho mais alinhada
01:06:461 Mesma coisa^
01:15:318 ^
01:24:746 ^
Essa stream ta bem mais alinhada 01:33:032 mas tem algumas notas "cinzas" que estao um pouco foraSPOILEREsse slide aqui 01:34:175 pode ficar alinhado com a ultima nota da streamSPOILEREssa nota 01:43:318 movi pra cáSPOILERE esses 01:43:461 "mini slides" movi também pra cá porque estavam meio "confusos" ( nao sei se vai dar pra entender ._.)SPOILERA partir daqui 01:51:175 ate aqui 01:52:032 eu mudei a posição das notas soltas e das streams, ficou assim:SPOILER01:52:746 Essa stream também esta um pouco desalinhadaSPOILER01:54:032 Esse slide também movi um pouco mais pro lado e pra baixoSPOILER02:01:032 Essa sequencia de slides apenas alinhei um pouco (deixei um em baixo do outro se é que me entende, diferente do jeito que eu tinha feito no meu mapa)SPOILER02:02:318 Essa stream tbm da pra alinhar um pouquinho
03:13:889 Essa "mini stream" tbm pode ser alinhada com o slide em seguidaSPOILEREssas 3 notas tbm mudei um pouco o posicionamento 03:20:746SPOILEREssa nota a 3 - 03:23:818 Movi ela pra cáSPOILER03:24:175 Essa stream tbm da pra alinhar
Bom acho que pra essa diff é isso, me perdoe se ficou um pouco confuso ou se modei de mais
Boa sorte no seu mapa Tio Fenrir realmente ficou muito bom!
Thanks a lot! Your mod was VERY helpful! Updated.Ediisme wrote:
normal00:11:318 and 00:12:461 - I think these two sliders can be added with the reversal arrow
00:14:461 - try to add a single note here
00:26:746 - this place is something missing. try adding a slider, ending at 00:27:032 with the reversal arrow
00:29:318 - from this place, I cant understand what's going on. notes correspond to vocal or something else? some sliders to fit vocal, others are not. I propose to follow the vocals.
00:29:318 - move this slider to 00:29:604 and ending at 00:30:175 . also add a note here 00:29:318
00:31:604 - move this slider to 00:31:318
00:31:889 - add note here
00:36:461 - this slider is too short. it ends before the vocals, and it creates a void until the next note. if it ends here 00:37:032 you can add one more in 00:37:318 ending at 00:37:604
00:44:175 - in my opinion this spinner should be replaced by slider of the same length
00:51:032 - add note here
00:54:175 - add note here
01:04:746 - i think there is not enough circle
01:07:032 - this spinner must be ending here 01:07:889
01:08:175 - add note here
01:08:746 - add note here or replace this slider 01:09:032 on this place. if you replace slider, don't forget add add to it reversal arrow
01:13:318 - replace this circle on slider with ending at 01:13:604
01:15:604 - add note here
01:46:175 - this slider must be ending at 01:46:604 with the reversal arrow
02:41:889 - during torsion of the spinner starts vocals. suggest a bet on it and change this place
02:52:461 - add for this slider with two reversal arrows
03:12:746 - add note here
03:19:604 - add note here
I hope my advice will help you. good luck with your map!
P.S. My English is not good, and I hope you understand what I wrote here
Thanks for the mod again. Don't worry about the Flow stuff, I'm not planning to do such strong changes on the map, It will lose totally his style, I know that it's important, but I don't want to change any of the points you've warned about flow, even thought the map are going to "feel better" if I do it.Shinobu Oshino wrote:
Here's another mod for you. Make sure you read this: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/86329
[ Pain]
[*]00:23:032 (4) - isn't it's own combo like the rest of these, and needs to be rotated.
[*]00:24:746 (2) - needs more spacing
[*]00:24:746 (2,3,4) - feels really empty
[*]00:27:604 (2) - stack this under the end of 00:27:032 (4) -
[*]00:28:746 (3,4) - you placed these near the end of the previous sliders. Put them as if you were continuing the pattern at the start of the next sliders.
[*]00:29:032 (1) - uneven curve
[*]00:32:175 (1,2,3,4) - just make a triangle using Ctrl+Shift+D, rotate it with Ctrl+Shift+R if you want, and place the 4 under the 1. Didn't knew about this shortcut, very useful, thanks.
[*]00:32:746 (5) - too low of distance snap
[*]00:33:604 (1,2,3) - for real though, Ctrl+Shift+D
[*]00:34:461 (4,5,6,7) - sloppy
[*]00:35:889 (2,3,4) - Feels bad stopping cursor.
[*]00:37:389 - you have a inherited point here. Inherited points will change anything ON or AFTER the tick it is placed on until there is another inherited point. It'd be better to place them on the tick they become useful.
[*]00:46:961 (1) - stream looks sloppy
[*]00:49:889 (3,4,5,6,7) - sloppy curve
[*]00:56:175 (2,3,4) - Citrl+Shift+D
[*]00:57:032 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Just redo this. Distance and grid snap it. Make it curve nicely.
[*]01:06:461 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - curve
[*]01:07:032 (3) - just.. no. look how many points you have on that slider. it's ugly.
[*]01:15:318 (3) - curve
[*]01:16:318 - add more notes and end on this tick.
[*]01:22:318 (5,6,7,1) - note on top of a slider
[*]01:24:318 (1) - dat one combo
[*]01:24:746 (2) - curve
P.S. Don't forget to fix your sliders.
Tarrasky wrote:
nice song and map, i like
primeiro eu vo colocar os nc da minha preferencia, caso vc queira usar, fica melhor pra players que jogam coop e fica mais dinamico e bonito o mapaSPOILERNORMAL
00:13:604 (3) - add
00:24:461 (1) - retira
00:27:604 (4) - add
00:31:889 (4) - add
00:32:318 (1) - retira
00:35:032 (1) - retira
00:36:461 (3) - add
00:43:318 (5) - add
00:44:175 (1) - retira
00:50:175 (3) - add
00:51:318 (1) - retira
00:52:461 (3) - add
01:05:889 (4) - talvez add
01:12:746 (1) - add
01:27:318 (1) - retira
01:41:604 (4) - add
03:08:461 (1) - retira
03:20:889 (1) - retira
03:25:318 (1) - retira
HARD
00:12:746 (1) - retira
00:14:032 (5) - add
00:26:889 (1) - retira
00:38:175 (1) - retira
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00:42:461 (1) - retira
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00:49:318 (1) - retira
00:50:175 (4) - add
00:50:746 (1) - retira
00:54:746 (6) - add
00:55:604 (1) - retira
01:02:318 (1) - retira
01:02:604 (3) - add
01:04:175 (1) - retira
01:05:032 (4) - add
01:06:461 (1) - retira
01:08:461 (1) - retira
01:10:746 (1) - retira
01:12:175 (4) - add
01:13:389 (1) - retira
01:14:104 (2) - add
01:15:532 (1) - retira (logico)
01:36:604 (1) - retira
01:37:032 (3) - add
01:45:889 (1) - retira
01:46:175 (2) - add
01:47:318 (1) - retira
01:48:461 (3) - add
01:49:604 (1) - retira
01:50:746 (8) - add
01:51:746 (1) - retira
01:55:318 (1) - retira
02:02:461 (1) - retira
02:07:318 (1) - retira
02:08:175 (1) - add
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02:53:175 (1) - retira
03:15:889 (1) - retira
03:18:746 (1) - retira
03:22:175 (1) - retira
03:23:318 (3) - add
03:24:746 (1) - retira
INSANE ( tentei seguir o ritmo do nc q vc colocou, bem curto )
00:50:175 (5) - add
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01:08:461 (3) - add
01:11:318 (1) - retira
01:11:746 (4) - add
01:13:889 (1) - retira
01:14:175 (2) - add
01:29:604 (1) - retira
01:30:461 (4) - add
01:31:032 (1) - retira
01:31:889 (1) - retira
01:39:604 (4) - add
01:40:032 (1) - retira
01:40:461 (1) - retira
01:45:889 (1) - retira
01:46:175 (2) - add
01:47:032 (1) - retira
01:52:746 (1) - retira
02:02:461 (1) - retira
02:09:889 (1,1,1,1) - isso fica esteticamente bonito, mas nao sei, nao me agradou mt de repende nc solos, de uma olhada ai se ta fluente nesse trecho
02:13:604 (1,1,1,1,2) - /\
02:25:604 (1) - retira
02:27:889 (1) - retira
02:28:604 (2) - add
02:29:746 (1) - retira
02:32:461 (1) - retira
lembrando, os fc alem de ser para deixar o mapa bonito, e feito para o mapa ser jogavel coop, ter um ritmo de nc e essencial para qualquer mapa
O mapa ta bom, gostei dele, tem algumas streams que sao muito detalhadas e nao simetricas que nao ficam tao bonitas em dificuldades baixas, como essas https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2050325 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2050349, mas nao ta errado, pode deixar elas ai, caso queira, e alguns circla soltos que tbm nao tao com uma aparencia agradavel em diff baixas, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2050345, mas ta bom o mapa, segue um fluxo bacana, boa sorte ae pro seu 1 mapa ranked
A dificuldade Pain ta mt boa, nem mechi nela pq me parece que ta perfeita