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Tokisawa Nao - BRYNHILDR IN THE DARKNESS -Ver. EJECTED- (TV

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FlowHomie
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FlowHomie
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 9. juni 2014 at 12:03:30

Artist: Tokisawa Nao
Title: BRYNHILDR IN THE DARKNESS -Ver. EJECTED- (TV Size)
Source: Gokukoku No Brynhildr
Tags: Darkness Witch Horror Drama Romance Kenssai Zinsser Piano Dubstep Key Anime Julie Lordraika
BPM: 99
Filesize: 17132kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.12 stars, 97 notes)
  2. Hard (1.73 stars, 191 notes)
  3. Insane (-1 stars, 341 notes)
  4. Julie's Normal (1.19 stars, 109 notes)
  5. LordRaika's Easy - 7Key (0.99 stars, 234 notes)
  6. LordRaika's Hard - 7Key (1.39 stars, 434 notes)
  7. LordRaika's Insane - 7Key (2.22 stars, 661 notes)
  8. LordRaika's Normal - 7Key (1.13 stars, 345 notes)
  9. zinsser's Insane (2.83 stars, 296 notes)
Download: Tokisawa Nao - BRYNHILDR IN THE DARKNESS -Ver. EJECTED- (TV Size)
Download: Tokisawa Nao - BRYNHILDR IN THE DARKNESS -Ver. EJECTED- (TV Size) (no video)
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Man, i love this freaking series. This OP is FANTASTICO!
This map ain't dead. I'm having a hard time obtaining mods tho.

Special thanks to LordRaika, zinsser and Julie for the GD's!

Insane DONE!
Hard DONE!
Easy DONE!
Last edited by FlowHomie , edited 36 times in total.
R801
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Joined April 2013
R801
Hello :)

"◾Eastern artists must be written in the proper 'surname firstname' format (e.g. Japanese/Chinese/Korean). For artists which have a preferred romanisation, use this one. If you're unsure of your artist's name, then check previously ranked maps, Google, Wikipedia, or ask a BAT for help."

Source: http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria

Click Me :D


オープニングテーマ ("Opening theme").



Apparently, the title of the song is "BRYNHILDR IN THE DARKNESS -Ver. EJECTED-"

You can check it on this page: http://vgmdb.net/album/44565


And the arranger is Tokisawa Nao (鴇沢 直)
http://vgmdb.net/artist/8992


Click me again :)
The audio you have is less than 192 kbps. The background image is smaller than 1366x768 or 1024x768.
In the folder is audio (192 kbps) and picture in jpg format (1024x768), if you want to use them.
http://www.mediafire.com/download/atrnf ... rkness.zip


Good Luck! :D
FlowHomie
97 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
FlowHomie

R801 wrote:

Hello :)

"◾Eastern artists must be written in the proper 'surname firstname' format (e.g. Japanese/Chinese/Korean). For artists which have a preferred romanisation, use this one. If you're unsure of your artist's name, then check previously ranked maps, Google, Wikipedia, or ask a BAT for help."

Source: http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria

Click Me :D


オープニングテーマ ("Opening theme").



Apparently, the title of the song is "BRYNHILDR IN THE DARKNESS -Ver. EJECTED-"

You can check it on this page: http://vgmdb.net/album/44565


And the arranger is Tokisawa Nao (鴇沢 直)
http://vgmdb.net/artist/8992


Click me again :)
The audio you have is less than 192 kbps. The background image is smaller than 1366x768 or 1024x768.
In the folder is audio (192 kbps) and picture in jpg format (1024x768), if you want to use them.
http://www.mediafire.com/download/atrnf ... rkness.zip


Good Luck! :D
Thanks for the help, i'll keep that with the eastern artitst in mind!
FlowHomie
97 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
FlowHomie
I broke this post~
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R801
220 posts
Joined April 2013
R801

FlowHomie wrote:

Thanks for the help, i'll keep that with the eastern artitst in mind!
You're welcome :D
Flanster
5,938 posts
Joined August 2010
Flanster
As promised, timing check!

Your first 99bpm offset seems to be correct though your 109bpm one is off, set it to 10273~
Your timing bpm-wise is correct.
FlowHomie
97 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
FlowHomie

LoliFlan wrote:

As promised, timing check!

Your first 99bpm offset seems to be correct though your 109bpm one is off, set it to 10273~
Your timing bpm-wise is correct.
Thanks Flan!
-Kanzaki
889 posts
Joined June 2012
-Kanzaki
nice map but insane could be more harder
FlowHomie
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Topic Starter
FlowHomie

-Kanzaki wrote:

nice map but insane could be more harder
Im scared to make the insane harder with all those 1/4 jumps. I'll keep it as it is for now.
ryno3no
5 posts
Joined August 2013
ryno3no
Its hard to describe but i feel like the sliders are done awkardly. When i click on them i just dont Feel it. maybe the sliders should be a little faster??? i also feel the map was kinda small and the keys should be more spaced out. This is just my opinion and its your choice to act on it. But sorry if this isnt a help im not good at this.
blissfulyoshi
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Joined July 2008
blissfulyoshi
zinsser told me to time this, and admittedly this is pretty hard to time

I got 575 for the first section and this second section is a mess. I am starting out with 10267 to follow the drums and +5 more to follow the reverbs/echos (these usually fall on eights) Then there are a few notes that lie outside of these 2 offsets. Play around a bit in the 2nd section to see what you think is best.
FlowHomie
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Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
FlowHomie

blissfulyoshi wrote:

zinsser told me to time this, and admittedly this is pretty hard to time

I got 575 for the first section and this second section is a mess. I am starting out with 10267 to follow the drums and +5 more to follow the reverbs/echos (these usually fall on eights) Then there are a few notes that lie outside of these 2 offsets. Play around a bit in the 2nd section to see what you think is best.
Took on your timing points, couldn't find anything better myself >.<

Thanks for looking into it though!

Updated~

Insane, zinsser's Insane and Hard ready for modding, Easy WIP.
-Kanzaki
889 posts
Joined June 2012
-Kanzaki
nice guest diff zinsser i like it
zinsser
52 posts
Joined December 2013
zinsser

-Kanzaki wrote:

nice guest diff zinsser i like it
xD thanks.

FlowHomie, I fixed the unsnapped notes caused by offset change. Also, I changed the name of the diff to make it clear
http://puu.sh/8bh5u.osu
You need to manually delete the previous .osu file since they have different name! xD

Also the break at the beginning is rankable, confirmed

Best =w=
-Kanzaki
889 posts
Joined June 2012
-Kanzaki
still saying to flowhomie insane is dt able easly so adding some faster streams could be nice
FlowHomie
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FlowHomie

-Kanzaki wrote:

still saying to flowhomie insane is dt able easly so adding some faster streams could be nice
I'll see what i can do
NaxelCL
NaxelCL
i'm can used your mp3?
FlowHomie
97 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
FlowHomie

NaxelCL wrote:

i'm can used your mp3?
Go for it mate.
Pho
1,785 posts
Joined November 2013
Pho
Just dropping by to notie some things out. Most things are just suggestions, the BM's are pretty good so far :)

[Easy]

I haven't noticed any problems in here yet, just need to finish it. :)

[Hard]

00:10:542 (3) - Add a circle here maybe
00:13:156 (3) - ^
00:32:835 (2,3) - you should let slider start at the strong beat, better switch
00:52:514 (5) - start the slider at 00:52:652 -
01:17:835 (7,8,1) - make the distance bigger to the other circles

[zinsser's Insane]
00:05:424 (1) - I'd let the slider end on 00:05:424 (1) - , fits better to the rhythm of the song
00:07:848 (1) - ^
00:27:606 - add a circle here maybe
00:53:202 (1,2,3,4,1) - Try this out: You could make this a 1/8 beat string, make 00:53:753 (1,2,3) - to a backward slider. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1538212

Otherwise, this map is good and fun to play, nice work!

[Insane]

I saw too many 100's when playing this, but still fun to play :D Only two points i want to notice:

00:47:835 (1) - delete this circle
00:44:533 (1) - replace with circle only

Good job and GL getting the beatmap ranked! ;)
zinsser
52 posts
Joined December 2013
zinsser

paseli wrote:

[zinsser's Insane]
00:05:424 (1) - I'd let the slider end on 00:05:424 (1) - , fits better to the rhythm of the song well, slider tail has no sense of hit so I don't really like to put that on the down beat.
00:07:848 (1) - ^ ^
00:27:606 - add a circle here maybe i make the slider return once. I find nowhere to put that circle xD
00:53:202 (1,2,3,4,1) - Try this out: You could make this a 1/8 beat string, make 00:53:753 (1,2,3) - to a backward slider. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1538212 i didn't use 1/8 streams because I think that might be too difficult. Well you give a good choice

Otherwise, this map is good and fun to play, nice work! Thanks, GL on your map too.
Good job and GL getting the beatmap ranked! ;)
Also, made some hitsound changes.

FlowHomie~ updates here: http://puu.sh/8jHRB.osu Thanks

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