Nozhomi
Nozhomi wrote:
Heyo~ I'm finaly here for my second mod, bigger this time
Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why to improve my futur mods.
If you've any question, ask me in-game like always ^^- General :- Insane :
- Timming point at 01:26:331- is useless because you don't place elements after. It is needed to follow the current song rhythm without any elements on it
- Hard :
- 00:06:953 (4,5)- Nazi stack. Fixed~
- 00:11:273 (1,2,3)- make a true triangle. Atm he just look weird. Fixed~
- 00:19:273 (4)- Place it at x:204/y:112 to stak it with 00:17:773 (3)-. Fixed~
- 00:20:023 (6,7,1,2)- Flow on this part is really ugly. I'm sure you can do a better pattern here. Fixed based on this article Analyzing Flow in Beatmaps
- 00:23:273 (4,5)- Improve blanket. Blanket removed for a good flow
- 00:24:273 (2,3)- ^ Improved
- 00:28:023 (3,4)- ^ Blanket removed for a good flow
- 00:31:273 (1,3)- Make them with same form. Improved for good flow
- 00:33:273 (3)- Place it at x:144/y:100 (you will saw why). For 00:33:273 (4,5,1) - I changed the position, so no change
- 00:42:273 (5,6)- Blanket ? Yeah
- 00:45:773 (3,4)- Improve blanket. I changed the blanket to make a good flow
- 00:53:523 (6,8)- This overlap not look good. Overlap removed
- 00:54:523 (9,10)- Blanket ? Yeah
- 01:07:273 (1,2)- Blanket it it's ugly right now. Blanket removed for flow
- 01:12:773- NC ? Fixed~
- Normal :
- 00:02:288 (3,4)- Make them similar ? Fixed~
- 00:17:523 (2)- I don't like this reverse slider here. I suggest 2 sliders but do what you want. Agreed. Fixed~
- 00:20:523- Rhythm is strange here. Would see more it like this : http://puu.sh/9BliN/3b859b5513.jpg. I follow the backup vocal for the circles and sliders, so no change
- 00:29:273- NC ? Fixed~
- 00:45:523 (5,6)- Blanket ? Yeah
- 00:50:023 (8,9)- ^ ^
- 00:58:523 (7,8,9)- Do a triangle. It's already a triangle
- 01:06:523 (4)- http://puu.sh/9BlBY/f109b5924f.jpg. Fixed~
- 01:14:273 (9,10)- Nazi stack. I think it's normal and I like this stack, so sorry no change
- Easy :
- Inconsistent DS on your map. For a Normal / Easy diff, spacing need to be the same. So check it again (use AiMod to see it quickly). Fixed all of them (I hope)
- 00:15:273 (1,2)- Improve blanket. Blanket removed for better flow
- 00:19:773 (2,3)- Bad flow here. Fixed~
- 00:34:023 (4,1)- Avoid this kind of overlap. Fixed~
- 00:38:773 (6,1,2)- Look example to get better flow -> http://puu.sh/9BmbA/76331f1b7c.jpg. Agreed, fixed~
- 00:41:273 (4)- Place it at x:60/y:184 for better flow. Fixed~
- 00:47:273 (1,2,3)- Rhythm is strange here. Suggest this : http://puu.sh/9BmlD/d1b32a21c9.jpg. Fixed~
- 00:53:273- Add circle here. Added
- 00:54:773 (6,1)- Rhythm looks better like this : http://puu.sh/9BmBl/3f52966646.jpg. Fixed~
- 00:57:773 (5,6,7)- http://puu.sh/9BmFA/e0ea0fb7ce.jpg. I think it's better this way, so no change
- 01:05:273 (4,5)- Blanket ? Yeah
- CS : 2 is more adapted for an Easy. Fixed~
- 2 inconsistent DS on your map. Fix them (use AiMod to see it quickly). Fixed~
- 00:13:273 (3,1)- Make them with same shape. Fixed~
- 00:20:773 (2)- Place it at x:433/y:196 for a better flow. Agreed, fixed
- 00:46:773 (4,1)- Blanket Fixed~
- 00:48:773 (2,3)- ^ Fixed~
- 00:57:273 (4,5)- ^ (won't point other fix them by yourself). Fixed all sliders that I can found
What can i say... First it's much better than the first time i mod it, and that a good point.
Second, i can still saw a lack of pattern and flow on your mapset. I suggest you to go read some stuff like this :
- t/86329
- viewtopic.php?f=56&t=58959
- 61
And ofc you can ask me ig if you need me Good luck buddy.
MisakiYuri
MisakiYuri wrote:
From Queue~
Hard:
00:16:865 Maybe not start a new combo there, since it confused me into thinking it wasn't a triple. Fixed~
00:45:231 Add something here? It feels empty. Yeah it feels empty because it is empty white tick and it's epic. Thanks for reminding me
01:01:160 ^ Added
01:16:151 Pull these one tick back on the timeline? Completely follow the vocal, so no change
Normal:
00:46:634 One tick back on timeline? I completely follow the current vocal for this slider
00:53:137 Maybe distance snap slider 4 slightly more to the left/right? Fixed~
00:56:651 Move all one tick back? Sorry, but the rhythm will feels strange if I put this, so no change
Easy:
Replace with slider? 00:58:164 Yeah fixed
Insane:
suggestion: to make harder, since I found it be kinda like hard mode, try flipping this slider round? 00:47:720 I do this on purpose to make sure a new player that Insane is not crazy
Thanks for modding my beatmap