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Kuba Oms - My Love

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Topic Starter
Jenny
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Dienstag, 17. März 2015 at 16:37:10

Artist: Kuba Oms
Title: My Love
Tags: ADHD MBC MBC4 MBC#4 Monthly Beatmapping Contest
BPM: 128
Filesize: 5933kb
Play Time: 03:32
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,55 stars, 171 notes)
  2. Hard (2,85 stars, 358 notes)
  3. Insane (3,41 stars, 447 notes)
  4. Normal (1,93 stars, 235 notes)
Download: Kuba Oms - My Love
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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forever pending
I hate not winning.

Finished and submitted three days after announcement



Alternative, slightly more cyan BG: http://puu.sh/gqaQM/7880db8c26.jpg
Original wallpaper: http://puu.sh/gqaTS/0b188e1367.jpg


Feb 26th '15: had to reencode .mp3 because of the bitrate limit being more important than sound quality even if it's just like 650kb - also, +58 on the offset

March 6th '15: added custom drumwhistle for the end section, taken from mm201's Lemon Tree (which there happens to be one of my favorite maps ever)

March 7th '15: I hate onotol, always spamming me with his .flac fetish special encoded .mp3s after maps are already done for ages :[

March 16th '15: finished Easy - gave it my best to make it less monotonous than one would initially think, though people will probably hate on me for using different snaps even though it's only for 2/1 gaps and all :p
YGOkid8
me too
those
This one should have won
cheesiest
^^^^^^^^should've won ):
those
ADHD goes in tags

kd pls
Konei

those wrote:

This one should have won
I like w h i t e's mapset better, to be honest.
those
Why would anyone want an overmapped entry to win \o/
Konei

those wrote:

Why would anyone want an overmapped entry to win \o/
Since when do we have the term "overmapped" defined?
Topic Starter
Jenny
Since when is my mapset's thread a place for terminology bitching..
I said what I have to say on White's set in it's respective thread, so go there if you want that.

If anything, it belongs there <_<
TheVileOne
A less than thorough mod for this map.

http://puu.sh/81kVQ.txt
cheesiest
mod
17:21 cheesiest: okay, can i do an IRC mod?
17:21 cheesiest: also i KD dumped w/ 10 stars
17:23 cheesiest: idk about you but like
17:23 cheesiest: 00:12:482 (6,7,1) -
17:23 cheesiest: I get the accenting on 6 -> 7
17:24 cheesiest: but then i feel as if 7 -> 1 is not accented enough
17:24 cheesiest: i like this though: 00:16:232 (3,4,1) -
17:24 cheesiest: this is kinda how i imagine it, but it's really just your choice here. i figure it's just me
17:25 cheesiest: and then same thing here: 00:18:107 (4,5,1) -
17:26 Jenny: 00:12:716 - I don't really want to map this vocal since it's just a connecting one with no real pressure indication (also, it's a grammatical conjunctor aswell!)
17:27 cheesiest: true
17:27 Jenny: idk I feel like the vocals there are way less pressured
17:27 Jenny: and like this I get it set with vocals and main beatline at the same time
17:28 cheesiest: oh
17:28 cheesiest: okay yeah
17:28 Jenny: does that make sense to you? . 3.
17:29 cheesiest: yeah
17:29 cheesiest: like, you were layering the vocals and the beatline
17:29 cheesiest: but since the vocals are in the forefront
17:29 cheesiest: you placed pressure on the vocals
17:29 Jenny: and then it goes in the background
17:30 Jenny: and then you transition to play the main beatline
17:30 Jenny: . 3.
17:30 cheesiest: ye :3
17:30 Jenny: I do those things all the time!
17:30 Jenny: same combo, transitioning foreground rhythm
17:30 Jenny: omg it's so sex
17:30 cheesiest: ye omg
17:30 cheesiest: although
17:30 cheesiest: i do that sometimes
17:31 cheesiest: if i find that layering the two proves to be complicated
17:31 cheesiest: 00:20:920 (5) - hmm
17:31 cheesiest: do you have a reason as to why the beginning and ends of the slider curve more than the middle?
17:31 cheesiest: i assume you did that purposely for the vocals
17:33 cheesiest: i think it'd be a bit more aesthetically pleasing if you rounded out the curves on the wave
17:33 cheesiest: but there's valid reason not to
17:33 Jenny: ?!
17:33 Jenny: idk it feels wonderful!!
17:34 cheesiest: 01:41:076 (4) - at the point, you have 4 being the same distance from 3's end, but over here, at: 00:41:076 (4) - the start of 4 is 1.2x, and the end is 1x
17:35 Jenny: thas
17:35 Jenny: cuz the kiais build up
17:36 cheesiest: umm
17:36 cheesiest: ???
17:36 cheesiest: idk what you mean by that
17:37 Jenny: well
17:37 Jenny: the first one uses a lot more 1.0x
17:37 Jenny: the second uses more 1.2x
17:37 cheesiest: ah
17:37 cheesiest: i see
17:37 Jenny: and more jumpiness
17:37 Jenny: and sharper angles
17:37 cheesiest: B)
17:38 cheesiest: cool
17:38 Jenny: at least that's how I meant it to be ._ .
17:38 Jenny: like
17:38 cheesiest: 00:42:248 (6) - touching hp but idk it's an insane lol
17:38 Jenny: it feels more and more roomy, free-flowy but keeps focus through angles
17:40 cheesiest: i guess that kinda nullifies my next point, which is to consider a direction change at 3 in 01:06:857 (3,4,5) -
17:40 Jenny: yeah that one bugged me
17:40 Jenny: I could fix it by breaking the triangle here 00:39:670 (1,2,3) -
17:40 cheesiest: so, like, at 01:06:857 (3,4,5) -
17:40 cheesiest: you ctrl+g 4 and 5?
17:40 cheesiest: lol
17:40 cheesiest: idk
17:41 Jenny: oh..
17:41 cheesiest: and then find a new position for 6
17:41 Jenny: that jump could be a bit much?
17:41 Jenny: the triangle-jump thing looks funny tho..
17:41 Jenny: I'll leave 6 as is and ctrl-g 4+5
17:42 cheesiest: perhaps you can make 6's new starting position at
17:42 Jenny: nuu
17:42 Jenny: I wanna keep the V
17:42 cheesiest: 180 341
17:42 cheesiest: oh
17:42 cheesiest: ok lol
17:43 cheesiest: and yeah, don't forget hitsounding on 01:07:091 (4,5) -
17:43 cheesiest: because ctrl+g does stuff
17:43 Jenny: fixed :V:V
17:43 Jenny: I ain't newb
17:44 cheesiest: 01:35:451 (7,1) - these are not parallel?
17:44 cheesiest: they seem to not be parallel
17:45 Jenny: but they are
17:45 cheesiest: oh
17:45 Jenny: I took 7 and enlarged it 100% overlaying with the original :[
17:45 cheesiest: whoops, disregard lol
17:46 cheesiest: [01:54:201 (8) - perhaps you could keep the spacing the same from 7
17:46 cheesiest: but to the next 1
17:46 cheesiest: i think you should increase the spacing
17:47 Jenny: wat? . 3.
17:47 cheesiest: 01:49:045 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - amazing lol
17:47 cheesiest: umm
17:47 cheesiest: what i mean is
17:47 Jenny: 01:54:201 (8,1) - is higher than 01:53:732 (7,8) -
17:47 Jenny: it's just 1.2x
17:47 Jenny: but the kiai is 1.2x inherit
17:48 cheesiest: i was thinkign this: [http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1494966 this]
17:48 cheesiest: yeah, but i was thinking perhaps the spacing could be increased to accent the start of the kiai?
17:48 Jenny: :[
17:48 cheesiest: idk lol
17:49 Jenny: makes 7-8 too superparallel
17:49 Jenny: which is static and bleh
17:49 cheesiest: ];
17:49 cheesiest: lol
17:49 cheesiest: umm, this is kind of a dumb suggestion but
17:49 cheesiest: 01:55:607 (3,5) - make 3 blanket 5?? and ofc change 4 if u do
17:50 Jenny: well
17:50 Jenny: that is just
17:50 Jenny: ._ .
17:50 Jenny: 5 is there when 3 is long gone!!
17:50 Jenny: ..but yeah . 3.
17:50 cheesiest: ): i noticed it lol
17:51 cheesiest: 02:09:201 (8) - big jump the real, the very big deal
17:51 Jenny: yes big
17:51 Jenny: but I have not seen anyone have problems with it yet..
17:51 Jenny: 02:06:623 (2,3) - big too
17:51 Jenny: same size actually
17:52 cheesiest: yeah true
17:52 Jenny: just 2-3 doesn't SEEM as big due to the sliderbody from 1
17:52 cheesiest: mhmm
17:52 Jenny: but still gets you warned for the spacing to come
17:52 Jenny: SUBCONSCIOUS WARMUP OMG
17:52 cheesiest: flow has a very weird visual aspect
17:52 cheesiest: !!!!!
17:52 cheesiest: yes
17:52 Jenny: THE MINDGAMES
17:52 cheesiest: LOL
17:52 cheesiest: this is some sorcery shit
17:52 Jenny: VISUAL PERCEPTION HAXX
17:53 cheesiest: 02:48:107 (3,4) - i'd kinda like this to be more circular
17:53 cheesiest: like
17:54 Jenny: you mean
17:54 cheesiest: the space b/t the sliders looks more circleish
17:54 Jenny: instead of just a pair
17:54 Jenny: a pair that forms a consistent curve movement
17:54 cheesiest: like this: 02:49:982 (7,8) -
17:54 cheesiest: yeah
17:54 cheesiest: what you said lol
17:54 Jenny: 02:49:982 (7,8) - those have more echo uprising pressure tho
17:55 cheesiest: true, like
17:55 cheesiest: the first part sound like it's going down
17:55 cheesiest: and then the sound covered by 8 sound like it's rising
17:56 cheesiest: so yeah idk i suppose so, but it'd still be a nice aesthetic for 02:48:107 (3,4) - to have that consistent curve
17:56 cheesiest: do what you want to do w/ it
17:56 Jenny: it's hard to do and to keep the triangle at the same time
17:57 Jenny: [http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1494982 but I can do it]
17:57 Jenny: genius shit
17:57 cheesiest: ploop
17:57 cheesiest: you did it
17:58 cheesiest: [http://i.imgur.com/a8bTQzf.jpg you did it]
17:59 Jenny: omg
17:59 Jenny: [http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1494985 aligning objects is art]
17:59 cheesiest: structure is magic
17:59 Jenny: HEY
17:59 Jenny: I USED TO WONDER WHAT STRUCTURE COULD BE
18:00 cheesiest: ?!?!?
18:00 Jenny: MY LITTLE EDIT
18:00 cheesiest: LOL
18:00 cheesiest: im legit screaming
18:00 cheesiest: LOL
18:00 Jenny: oo
18:01 Jenny: BIGGER PATTERNS
18:01 Jenny: TONS OF CLIX
18:01 cheesiest: 02:57:248 (1,6) -
18:01 Jenny: IDFK WHAT IM DOING
18:01 cheesiest: stack it PROPERLY
18:02 Jenny: did that
18:02 Jenny: BEFORE YOU TOLD ME
18:02 cheesiest: ok and umm
18:02 Jenny: GET ON MY LEVEL
18:02 Jenny: SCRUB
18:02 cheesiest: ):
18:02 cheesiest: omg
18:02 Jenny: 224 CONVERT IT
18:02 cheesiest: 02:53:498 (6,7) - !?!?! weirdish flow
18:03 Jenny: not weird
18:03 cheesiest: i think ^^^^^^^^ would work better if 7 was a bit lower
18:03 Jenny: this is more like
18:03 cheesiest: +to the right a bit
18:03 Jenny: a phrase-phrase thing
18:03 cheesiest: a bit a bit
18:03 cheesiest: yeah
18:03 Jenny: so I like the leftwards transition
18:03 cheesiest: okay
18:03 cheesiest: yeah
18:03 Jenny: also, it feels like mm201
18:03 cheesiest: i feel you on that lol
18:03 Jenny: which is always a good thing
18:03 cheesiest: ^^^^^^^^^^^ i was gonna say
18:03 cheesiest: that exact line
18:03 cheesiest: you are on point today Jenny
18:03 Jenny: i come on point every day cheesiest
18:04 Jenny: ..wait no
18:05 cheesiest: and umm
18:05 cheesiest: i guess that's all for object placement in Insane
18:05 cheesiest: AR 8 ON AN INSNAE?!?!?!
18:05 cheesiest: what were you even thinking
18:05 cheesiest: do you know how much of a problem this is for regular players?!?!?
18:05 cheesiest: put ar 7
18:06 Jenny: wat
18:06 Jenny: . 3.
18:06 cheesiest: B)
18:06 cheesiest: ar 8 is okay actually
18:06 cheesiest: actually, ar 8 is good
18:06 Jenny: yes it is :[
18:07 cheesiest: add cheesiest to tags
18:07 cheesiest: okay next diff
18:07 *cheesiest is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/397556 Kuba Oms - My Love [Hard]]
18:08 cheesiest: really nice Insane diff!! btw
18:08 cheesiest: 00:42:482 (8) - hmmmmmmmm
18:08 cheesiest: i think maybe you could make this two circles instead
18:08 cheesiest: and usually what i'd do is like
18:09 cheesiest: make 8 in a smooth flow w/ 5-6-7
18:09 cheesiest: and then the 9, which would be at 00:42:716
18:09 cheesiest: would be in a triangle w/ 7's end and 8
18:09 cheesiest: to give a sharp direction change
18:09 cheesiest: because the syllable at 00:42:716
18:10 cheesiest: but since you're not me
18:10 cheesiest: you can do w/e idk
18:11 Jenny: neh . 3.
18:11 cheesiest: 01:00:998 (6,7) - continual circle movement here? idk lol
18:12 Jenny: neh
18:12 Jenny: i'm mm201
18:12 Jenny: #whenimmm201
18:12 Jenny: #whenimsprosive
18:12 cheesiest: #whenimD33d
18:12 Jenny: #whenimcyclone
18:12 Jenny: 1*100 awh
18:12 cheesiest: B)
18:13 Jenny: errr... whatever, continue!
18:13 cheesiest: i can't find any problems in the hard anymore?
18:13 cheesiest: idk
18:13 Jenny: I can tell you why
18:13 Jenny: it is because I'm perfect :^)
18:13 cheesiest: B^)
18:13 cheesiest: im at 02:39:670
18:14 cheesiest: again that 03:17:170 (1,2) - circular movement thing
18:14 cheesiest: idk
18:14 cheesiest: lol
18:15 Jenny: circular nazi chesist
18:15 cheesiest: you do the circle thing here: 03:28:420 (1,2) -
18:15 cheesiest: and 03:20:920 (1,2) -
18:15 cheesiest: idk
18:15 *cheesiest the circular nazi
18:15 Jenny: neh
18:15 cheesiest: hmmmmmmm
18:15 cheesiest: nice
18:15 Jenny: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1495008 see
18:15 Jenny: is not circle
18:15 cheesiest: nice diff
18:16 cheesiest: )::::::::::::::::
18:16 Jenny: it's just a sliderpair!
18:16 cheesiest: yeah but
18:16 cheesiest: it has a close circle
18:16 cheesiest: B)
18:16 Jenny: NO
18:17 cheesiest: now, the normal
18:17 cheesiest: since i didn't really find anything wrong w/ diff settings on hard
18:17 cheesiest: umm
18:17 cheesiest: 00:15:295 (1,2) - blanket? idk
18:18 Jenny: what diff m8
18:18 cheesiest: normal
18:18 cheesiest: whoop
18:18 cheesiest: my bad
18:18 Jenny: thers no blanket
18:18 Jenny: thas
18:18 Jenny: sliders
18:18 Jenny: a pair
18:18 Jenny: :[
18:19 cheesiest: i mean like
18:19 cheesiest: can u make 1 blanket 2? lol
18:19 cheesiest: the red slider 1
18:19 cheesiest: blanket the start of orange 2
18:19 Jenny: CHESIST
18:19 Jenny: THAT 1
18:19 Jenny: IS LONG GONE
18:19 Jenny: OMG
18:19 Jenny: UR LIK
18:19 Jenny: ONLI THINKIN IN EDIT
18:19 Jenny: ;_;
18:19 cheesiest: oope
18:19 cheesiest: ):
18:20 Jenny: BUT K
18:20 Jenny: I FIXD
18:20 Jenny: BUT NO
18:20 Jenny: THEN IT LOOKS BAD
18:20 Jenny: W/ SLIDERPATH
18:20 Jenny: OMG
18:20 Jenny: IT BLANKETS 2 ALREADY
18:20 Jenny: PATH > START
18:20 Jenny: OMG
18:20 *cheesiest not really
18:20 cheesiest: B)
18:20 cheesiest: (B
18:21 cheesiest: the normal is
18:21 cheesiest: really good!??????as expected
Topic Starter
Jenny




Orange climax - check.
Lust

Konei wrote:

those wrote:

This one should have won
I like w h i t e's mapset better, to be honest.
ah, not to cause any arguments here or anything, but why say something like this if you know itll cause a problem? ><
Ozato Fumika

Lust wrote:

Konei wrote:

I like w h i t e's mapset better, to be honest.
ah, not to cause any arguments here or anything, but why say something like this if you know itll cause a problem? ><
good man

IRC with lewd Jenny
21:40 Jenny: hey
21:41 Jenny: you have some time
21:43 No Dap: for?
21:43 Jenny: opinions
21:43 No Dap: sure
21:43 Jenny: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/163126 contest loser map :V
21:44 No Dap: so you want my thoughts on this map?
21:44 Jenny: look, tell me if/what irks you
21:44 Jenny: basically, modding but without a lot of text and more spontaneous? lol.
21:45 No Dap: oh
21:46 Jenny: but yeah I want to get this ranked
21:46 Jenny: before White's set.
21:46 No Dap: 00:20:920 (5,6,7,8,1) - could have been shaped better
21:46 Jenny: what
21:47 No Dap: that overlap ugly tho
21:47 No Dap: i get the star
21:47 Jenny: hm.
21:47 Jenny: yeah the overlap happens because it's AR8
21:47 No Dap: 00:58:185 (10,1) - this flow
21:48 No Dap: 01:08:966 (8,9,10,11) - this spacing
21:48 Jenny: that one's not supposed to flow since the vocals have a strong snappy point there
21:50 No Dap: 02:54:435 (8,1) - you could have blanket this and emphasize with a jump
21:50 No Dap: that that would ruin da flow
21:50 No Dap: 03:08:966 (3) - crtl g?
21:51 Jenny: 1-2 are about the same distance from 8 and 3 is not visible at that time; going higher would screw with the pentagon
21:51 No Dap: 03:15:529 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - isnt this too much for hard diff
21:51 No Dap: yeah
21:51 Jenny: that's an 'Insane'
21:51 Jenny: not a '
21:51 Jenny: Hard
21:51 No Dap: oh is it
21:51 No Dap: lol didnt know
21:52 No Dap: 03:31:935 (13,14) - shouldnt this be triple
21:53 No Dap: 02:08:966 (7,8) - this flow
21:53 Jenny: 03:31:935 (13,14) - in the song there is a tripple yes; I find it featuring the drums way better when leaving that one beat open though
21:54 Jenny: and I go for atmosphere rather than taking over every beat >:
21:54 Jenny: 02:08:966 (7,8) - buildup-doublehit with lots of pressure, so that's super kk love . 3.
21:54 No Dap: just a thought
21:54 No Dap: the beginning could have been more fun if you followed lyrics :3
21:55 No Dap: 1/2 drums so boring
21:55 No Dap: 00:10:841 (5) - move it down for triangle?
21:56 Jenny: what
21:56 Jenny: triangle where
21:56 No Dap: 00:10:841 (5,6) -
21:56 No Dap: it would keep the flow from 00:10:138 (3,4) -
21:56 Jenny: the fuck is 5 supposed to triangle that
21:57 No Dap: lol wot
21:57 No Dap: http://puu.sh/81xRw.jpg is this not triangle
21:57 Jenny: 00:09:670 (1,2,3) - thas a triangle
21:57 No Dap: am i mentally retarded
21:57 Jenny: thas an arc
21:57 No Dap: oh ok
21:57 Jenny: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1495327 could do it like that a bit
21:57 Jenny: but I don't want to use higher spacing here
21:57 Jenny: it's the very beginning and suches
21:58 No Dap: yeah
21:58 Jenny: is meant to get you into the whole mainbeat
21:58 No Dap: k i think thats all i got
21:59 Jenny: I also arranged the streamthing at the end of last kiai a bit
21:59 Jenny: wanna forumpost?
21:59 No Dap: 03:31:935 (13,14) - I still think this should be triple
21:59 Jenny: no u~
22:00 No Dap: would be more fitting for ending
22:00 No Dap: fark
22:00 No Dap: ok
Konei

Lust wrote:

ah, not to cause any arguments here or anything, but why say something like this if you know itll cause a problem? ><

Because it's neither kind towards the winner to say.

"This one should've won"

Also to show that there are people who like w h i t e's mapset.

:>
SuperMIC
This is simply amazing!

Helped to integrate new hitsounds in the final kiai.

The fact this didn't win kind of let's me down, when playing it I felt like I was playing maps from 4 or so years ago, just the really simple, incredibly fun stuff that fits the music perfectly. Your mapping is enticing and amazing as always Jenny. :O

GL

-SMIC
ktgster
Hi :)

[General]

00:09:670 – this is a weird place to start a map since you’re suddenly jumping into the song right away yet the songs plays earlier and sounds more natural to start at the very beginning.

Hitsounds are pretty lacking to my taste. Why not use additional samples with drums and finish on the downbeat and the 3rd beat of every stanza. I also have no idea why you changed your hitsounding style at 02:47:170 and beyond. Is it to accommodate the final chorus of the song?

Try offset 2193. (+23ms)

[Insane]

00:09:670 – it feels weird to not be playing any of the doubles the vocalist are singing.
00:17:170 – same here
00:20:920 (5) – inconsistent with 00:13:420 (1,2) and please make the end of the slider a circle. Oh, put a NC too for consistency
00:22:813 – add some beats here please
00:40:607 (3,4) - why the jump here, pressure doesn’t change here
00:44:357 (2,3) - ^
00:47:873 (2,3) - ^ for a map being so consistent, this is just strange
00:58:185 (10) – stack this better with the end of 5
00:58:420 (1) – this touches the score which is basically saying that it touches the health bar
00:59:123 (2,3) – random 1.2x spacing, not going to point these out anymore
01:05:920 (1) – the only reverse slider in any of the kiai’s
01:05:920 (1) – you’re switching too much of what you’re following. Stick to one, the instrumentals or the vocals
01:31:935 – interesting to note that this is a 1/6 4 note place
01:37:795 (1) – extend this slider to 2 for better playing experience
01:45:763 (2) – stack this better with the end of 13
01:45:295 (1,3) – make 1 blanket the 3 although this looks intentional or unnoticed
01:45:998 (3,4,5) – weird to use a straight line when you started with the beginning of a curve
01:56:545 (5) – bad idea to use an overlap. Flip the slider and blanket the 5 with 3
02:02:873 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - you started this section with 1.2x spacing. Why the change back
02:06:623 (2) – making this an 1.2x spacing further emphasizes the next slider
02:08:263 (5,6,7) – I also suggest you make these 1.2x spacing
02:29:826 (4) – it’s weird that a slider is trying to map 2 different things one after another. Replace 4 with a circle and make a slider at 02:30:295
02:46:232 (1,2) – UNRANKABLE, silent notes which shouldn’t exist if you map them on 5%
02:47:170 (1,2) – bad flow
02:49:045 (5,7) – blanket better
02:50:451 (8) - ^
03:01:232 – surprising how you didn’t use a circle on this note. Also bad flow on the slider too
03:09:435 (4) – shouldn’t this be ½? Same with 03:11:545 (6) and 03:13:420 (6)
03:26:779 (4,5) – bad flow again
03:32:169 (14) – mind this go in a bit more instead of out due to the downbeat

Good map here, but I suggest you use NC per downbeat to keep a steady consistency on your NC’s.
Also lazy to do the other diffs. If you really need a mod on them, just PM me.
johnivan123
I really love this song but I cant find the lyrics ;)
ktgster
Jenny, plz rank this already.
Topic Starter
Jenny
^KD because the actual modpost was too old to give KD to
Avena

Well I mean the set is great, I know the Normal is a bit complex but the drain is low and it fits the song perfectly.
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