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Kuba Oms - My Love

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Beige
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014년 4월 28일 월요일 at 오후 8:48:53

Artist: Kuba Oms
Title: My Love
Source: ADHD
Tags: Monthly Beatmapping Contest Electronic folk pop w_h_i_t_e
BPM: 128
Filesize: 6588kb
Play Time: 03:47
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.59 stars, 374 notes)
  2. Insane (4.94 stars, 566 notes)
  3. Normal (2.95 stars, 269 notes)
Download: Kuba Oms - My Love
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Kuba Oms - My Love

Monthly Beatmapping Contest #4 1st!
Leader
Congratulations!
Irreversible
:D
Charles445
That hitsounding though

EDIT: On Insane you should remove 02:25:490 (3) -
No KD
Freya

Leader wrote:

Congratulations!
Asagi
Gratz <3
Gero
Congrats!
Andrea
Good job~
Pawsu
Congratulations! <3
Piine
Gratz White. Enjoy~
RevolverSkyVR
Dude this Beatmaps is friggin' awesome!
Keep up the good work, W h i t e! :)
captin1
congrats!!
DingGGu
congrats my bro
Rukaru
congratulation! :D
Topic Starter
Beige
Thanks ~ xD
Muya
congrats!
Kenezz
Congratz :D
Ozato Fumika
흰둥이님 매핑 가르쳐주세요 허엉거거어어억
Kibbleru
Grats
Akiyama Mizuki
Wow W h i t e you're famous
Topic Starter
Beige
lol... Really Thanks...
Sonnyc
General:

-- 하하 이페머럴 192kbps 이하로 부탁합니다.

Normal:

00:21:857 (2) - 개인적으로 큰 박자 따라 00:14:357 (2) 처럼 1/2 줄이는게 어울릴거 같습니다.
00:37:560 (3) - 다른 난이도랑 똑같이 30%이긴 한데, 이거는 슬라이더가 아니라서 유독 힛사가 잘 안들리는듯 싶습니다. 음량을 좀 늘려보는게 어떨까요?
01:04:513 (2) - (164,280)에 두셔서 01:02:170 (1,2,3) 처럼 지그재그 만드는게 흐름 따르는거 보다는 나을거 같아요
03:15:295 (1) - 모양이 좀 아쉬운데 02:22:795 (2) 이거 -117도 돌려서 재활용하시는게 어때요??

Hard:

01:04:748 - 계속 박자 비우는 곳 없이 만드시다가 여기를 비우는거는.. 조금 부자연스러웠던듯 합니다. (난이도 조절 목적이라고 하셔도) (228,56)에의 노트 추가 추천합니다.
02:04:748 - 유사한 제안.
02:13:420 (1) - 삼각형 패턴이라고 해도 좀 이전 슬라와 거리가 멀어보입니다. 한 02:17:170 (1) 처럼 정도로만 조절해주시면 감사하겠습니다<<
02:52:326 (4) - 지금 상태로 (3)이 좀 부자연스러워 보이는데, (4) 자리에 (3)을 -20도 회전시킨 것을 (304,144)에 놓아보면 어때요?
02:57:248 - 일관되게 비우긴 하셨네요 ㅇㅅ
03:03:341 (2,3) - 일단은 이 구절에는 점프를 안넣어오셨기 때문에 약간 부담스러워보인다는 의견을 내 봅니다.

Insane:

00:32:052 (7) - 드럼 휘슬 빼먹으신듯요.
01:30:177 (7) - 여기도 앞구간 처럼 드럼휘슬 추가?
01:32:052 (7) - ^
01:32:638 (3) - 끝에 드럼휘슬?
02:09:670 (1) - 위로 굽히는게 흐름이 더 좋을듯 합니다.
02:46:232 (1,2) - 개인적으로 여기는 어느정도의 감속이 효과적일거 같은데 알아서 판단<<



우승 축하합니다!! :)
peppy
Please use the provided album art for this map, or incorporate it in a prominent way (and then get my approval).

http://puu.sh/7XPpP/a1309b1de3.jpg
Topic Starter
Beige

peppy wrote:

Please use the provided album art for this map, or incorporate it in a prominent way (and then get my approval).

http://puu.sh/7XPpP/a1309b1de3.jpg
ok ;_;
peppy
[Normal]
Plays perfectly.

[Hard]
03:15:529 (1,2,3,4,5) - This sudden stream section feels way to bunched up, and doesn't suit the rest of the difficulty.

[Insane]
Please adjust your stacking. Most of the places you have overridden stacking feels really bad and doesn't add any difficulty or style to the map. Examples are:

00:11:076 (6,1) -
00:18:576 (6,1) -
00:19:513 (3,1) -
00:24:670 (1,2) - fine because of direction, but spacing is too large. make it the same as an osu! stack
00:26:545 (1,2) -
00:28:420 (1,2) -
.. etc etc (i'm sure you get the idea) ..

01:35:685 (5,6,1) - change that to let osu! stack it? i could tell it was done manually (spacing wrong)
01:33:107 (4,5,6) - is wrong spacing. compare to the combo before

02:06:857 (3,4) - REALLY bad overlap too

Basically



to



There's a lot more I didn't mention here. Please go through the map with a fine comb and fix these.
DingGGu
maybe ppy love this songs.
Sylith
you are famous from now on! lol
(you were always the best in my mind though haha)
congratulations!
Topic Starter
Beige
Thanks for modding! Update!

Sonnyc

Sonnyc wrote:

General:

-- 하하 이페머럴 192kbps 이하로 부탁합니다.

Normal:

00:21:857 (2) - 개인적으로 큰 박자 따라 00:14:357 (2) 처럼 1/2 줄이는게 어울릴거 같습니다. 사운드가 묻히지만 그래도 안바꾸는게 좋을것 같아요.
00:37:560 (3) - 다른 난이도랑 똑같이 30%이긴 한데, 이거는 슬라이더가 아니라서 유독 힛사가 잘 안들리는듯 싶습니다. 음량을 좀 늘려보는게 어떨까요? 수정
01:04:513 (2) - (164,280)에 두셔서 01:02:170 (1,2,3) 처럼 지그재그 만드는게 흐름 따르는거 보다는 나을거 같아요 더 어색해지는 느낌...
03:15:295 (1) - 모양이 좀 아쉬운데 02:22:795 (2) 이거 -117도 돌려서 재활용하시는게 어때요?? 수정

Hard:

01:04:748 - 계속 박자 비우는 곳 없이 만드시다가 여기를 비우는거는.. 조금 부자연스러웠던듯 합니다. (난이도 조절 목적이라고 하셔도) (228,56)에의 노트 추가 추천합니다. 조절 목적이 아니라 나름 쉬라고 만든 파트입니다. 이해해주세요 ㅋ...
02:04:748 - 유사한 제안.
02:13:420 (1) - 삼각형 패턴이라고 해도 좀 이전 슬라와 거리가 멀어보입니다. 한 02:17:170 (1) 처럼 정도로만 조절해주시면 감사하겠습니다<< 대칭이동 이라서...
02:52:326 (4) - 지금 상태로 (3)이 좀 부자연스러워 보이는데, (4) 자리에 (3)을 -20도 회전시킨 것을 (304,144)에 놓아보면 어때요? 수정
02:57:248 - 일관되게 비우긴 하셨네요 ㅇㅅ
03:03:341 (2,3) - 일단은 이 구절에는 점프를 안넣어오셨기 때문에 약간 부담스러워보인다는 의견을 내 봅니다. 뒷부분 하이라이트 인데 ㅋ...

Insane:

00:32:052 (7) - 드럼 휘슬 빼먹으신듯요. 어색한 느낌...
01:30:177 (7) - 여기도 앞구간 처럼 드럼휘슬 추가?
01:32:052 (7) - ^
01:32:638 (3) - 끝에 드럼휘슬? 수정
02:09:670 (1) - 위로 굽히는게 흐름이 더 좋을듯 합니다. 흠... 그닥 어색한 부분이 아니라서...
02:46:232 (1,2) - 개인적으로 여기는 어느정도의 감속이 효과적일거 같은데 알아서 판단<< ㄴㄴ



우승 축하합니다!! :)

감사합니다!!


peppy

peppy wrote:

[Normal]
Plays perfectly.

[Hard]
03:15:529 (1,2,3,4,5) - This sudden stream section feels way to bunched up, and doesn't suit the rest of the difficulty.

[Insane]
Please adjust your stacking. Most of the places you have overridden stacking feels really bad and doesn't add any difficulty or style to the map. Examples are:

00:11:076 (6,1) -
00:18:576 (6,1) -
00:19:513 (3,1) -
00:24:670 (1,2) - fine because of direction, but spacing is too large. make it the same as an osu! stack
00:26:545 (1,2) -
00:28:420 (1,2) -
.. etc etc (i'm sure you get the idea) ..

01:35:685 (5,6,1) - change that to let osu! stack it? i could tell it was done manually (spacing wrong)
01:33:107 (4,5,6) - is wrong spacing. compare to the combo before

02:06:857 (3,4) - REALLY bad overlap too

Basically



to



There's a lot more I didn't mention here. Please go through the map with a fine comb and fix these.

I tried all fix it really thanks :D
Alarido
Add something to tags:

→ Monthly Beatmap Contest Winner
→ Electronic folk funk pop soul
→ Canada

(the last items are based upon http://kubaoms.bandcamp.com/track/my-love )

Att.

EDIT:

→ Added a Star. And How AMAZING is your [Hard] diff ♥ I loved it!
Topic Starter
Beige

Alarido wrote:

Add something to tags:

→ Monthly Beatmap Contest Winner
→ Electronic folk funk pop soul
→ Canada

(the last items are based upon http://kubaoms.bandcamp.com/track/my-love )

Att.

EDIT:

→ Added a Star. And How AMAZING is your [Hard] diff ♥ I loved it!
Why add the country..?

Anyway Really Thanks! xD
Flask
Hi White! Congratz :D
Just passing by for some suggestions~

[General]
  • Add w_h_i_t_e to tags. Don't forget the most important information of this map - the creator!
[Insane]
  1. 00:04:045 (1) - / 00:05:920 (1) - / 00:07:795 (1) - At these sliders' sliderhead, you can clearly hear the same sound that goes for a finish sound or something near to that. In my opinion, you should add some hitsounds on them because that sounds really empty without any hitsound, and that sound should be emphasized. Perhaps add finishes sound on them, and add 30% (or less) vol. for that? (This goes for all the diffs if you want to fix that)
  2. 00:49:513 (3) - This is kinda a nazi stuff, but current the distance between (1,3) is 1.27x. (You can switch (1,2) and check it) That's different as the spacing you're using for the most of the objects, which is 1.20x. Just move (3) to x:136, y:112, and the problem will be fixed nicely. (This is really nazi >_<)
    Also to 00:50:450 (3) -, this object should be moved to x:145, y:104 because of the same reason above.
  3. 01:41:310 (6) - To compare with 01:40:373 (3) -, I'd say (2,3) has a larger spacing, but (5,6) doesn't. It was really weird if you're playing two same parts, one of them has a jump, but the other doesn't (cuz this is a rhythm game). To make the consistency between them, move (6) to 01:39:670 (1) - 's sliderhead might be a great idea.
  4. 01:45:763 (2,3) - Another nazi stuff. Personally I don't really like something just overlap under another objects, but obviously, that (2) is totally under (5). I'd suggest you to do something like this instead: Move (2) to x:64, y:284.
    Yeah this might be a bit "crowded", but that's the way to avoid overlap.
    And after that, you may want to re-place 01:45:998 (3) - to somewhere else to fix the spacing issue, so I'd recommend you to put (3) to x:184, y:168. So the spacing between (2,3) and (3,1) will be the same, and (3) doesn't overlap 01:45:060 (5) -, too!
  5. 02:04:982 (3,5) - This blanket can be better, move the third node of 02:05:451 (5) - to x:364, y:324.
  6. 02:42:482 (3,5,6) - The "red" line isn't as long as the "purple" line. Consider to fix them.
  7. 03:23:263 (3) - & 03:24:435 (4) - Is this overlap placed intentional? (3) should fully cover (4) imo.
[Hard]
  1. 01:38:966 (1) - The spacing. That's a bit obvious so..you'd better fix that you know.
  2. 03:31:232 (3) - Change this to a 1/4 slider with 3 reverses, and remove (4) instead? The music shows like that, so it would be great if you can follow it.
[Normal]
  1. 00:53:498 - I don't hear any sound here, perhaps combine 00:52:795 (1,2) - to a 1/2 slider but just with a reverse?
Nice job! I wanna love this map true, and I certainly did that.
Good luck!
YGOkid8
i'm disappointed that in your Normal and Hard, you copied and pasted effectively 3 full sections of mapping from 00:24:670 ~ 01:09:670 onto 01:24:670 ~ 02:09:670 - (and that judges didn't pick up on that, receiving 9/10 for creativity from 3 judges).

otherwise not a bad map at all, and is quite pleasant to play.
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