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YUZU - REASON

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neurosis
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Chewin
I wait Trust update my diff first
Oracle
hi~

bold=highly recommended
red=unrankable issue
Others are all suggestions. Feel free to reject!

General
  1. emmy's diff has different kiai time than other diffs.
  2. Not sure if you forgot to mute the sliderslide. Sounds a bit noisy especially in Insane diff.
Easy
  1. 00:08:431 (1) - I suggest a whistle on slider end which gives the similar effect as 00:00:690 (1) - . You also have whistle here on Insane diff. Better keep it consistent!
  2. 00:06:496 (2) - I suppose you want to emphasize symmetry here while this slider is not at the centre of the screen. It does feels a bit out of place. I tried to rearrange the spacing a bit to achieve this. (no need to worry about 00:04:077 (3,2) - not landing on the same position. The time interval between is too large to be noticed in AR3)
    Coordinates: 00:04:077 (3) - 388|256 00:04:560 (1) - 452|184 00:06:496 (2) - 364|224
    Make sure you fix the spacing for the following patterns if you apply this.
  3. 01:23:915 (1) - You could end this spinner at 01:25:851 - if you want. The sound on 01:25:851 - is much stronger. Works pretty fine for me with a whistle.
Normal
  1. 00:09:883 (3) - A whistle here for the same reason as Easy
  2. 00:37:464 (5,6) - Spacing inconsist here and it's actually pretty hard to read(red ticks). Could probably try something like this:
  3. 00:45:206 (4) - 79|144 is visually much better imo. I consider this quite important for lower diffs...
  4. 01:23:915 (1) - Same suggestion as Easy. Make it end at 01:25:851 - ?
emmy's Hard
This diff is more like a light insane lol.
  1. 00:34:802 (1,2) - This 1/4 jump is very tricky for a Hard diff. The distance between 00:34:802 (1,2) - is the same as 00:35:528 (3,1) - while the rhythm is totally different.(I misread the rhythm here when testing) Consider stacking 00:34:802 (1) - on 00:35:407 (2) - to avoid the 1/4 jump.
  2. 00:42:060 (6,1) - This gap is easily to be misread as 1/4 due to your previous usage of overlapping (00:15:448 (1,1) - 00:45:931 (3,4) - 00:46:899 (6,1) - ). Do you mind changing the position of the reverse a bit?
  3. 01:22:948 (3) - If you are aiming for a perfectly symmetrical one:
    310,138,82948,2,0,P|256:122|202:138,1,114,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  4. 01:23:794 (1) - It'd be great to make it end at 01:25:851 -. The sound on 01:25:851 - is much stronger. Works pretty fine for me with a whistle.
  5. 01:24:399 - No idea why you're ending the kiai on half way of a spinner. Can you make kiai time the same as other diffs?
Insane
  1. 00:14:480 (2,3,4) - Mind adding NC for SV change?
  2. 00:16:657 (3,5) - & 00:17:141 (4,6) - The overlapping bothers me a bit as i see you're rarely presenting this kind of overlapping. I'd suggest adjusting these 2 to avoid the overlapping.
  3. 00:24:883 (4) - Whistle on the head? Refer to 00:26:819 (5) -
  4. 00:27:302 (6,7) - Whistles? Similar pattern as 00:25:367 (5,6) -
  5. 01:14:238 (1,2,3,4) - 40% volume works better for me. The current setting for 1/8s is a bit too loud.
  6. 01:23:915 (1) - Same as i mentioned in Easy.
Chewin's Insane
  1. 00:15:206 (1) - Try 504|261? flows better imo. The current one flows too sharply
  2. 00:25:125 (6,7) - This jump is too intense compared to 00:26:819 (2,3,4) - as i can't hear anything in the song here calls for such a large jump. You may want to nerf it.
  3. 00:51:738 (1,2,3,4) - This part feels a bit bland without hitsounds... Consider adding whistles on 00:51:738 (1) - ,00:51:980 (3) - slider head,00:52:343 (4) - slider head and tail.
  4. 01:23:673 (1) - Remove NC? Didn't see any reason for NC here.
  5. 01:23:915 (1) - A whistle on the end of the spinner would be nice.
very solid mapset+elite song choice!! i love yuzu songs
good luck!!!!
neurosis
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Topic Starter
Trust
11t

11t wrote:

Because emmy requested like, 5 years ago,

[Easy]
■ 00:20:044 (1,2) - Nice~ \:D/
Easy difficulties are always a lot more fun when the mapper brings in some red ticks, and what you've done here is a really good way to do that without compromising the difficulty level.

■ 00:31:657 (1,2) - <3 \:D/
These double repeats are just great overall, both for rhythm and for flow.

■ 01:14:238 (1) - ahahaha \:D/
This is wonderful!
[Normal]
■ 00:50:286 (4) - I think you should switch to the drum sampleset for hitsound additions here and use Claps/Finishes. Something like, Clap on start, Clap + Whistle on repeat, and Finish on end works well I think. It's an interesting approach however I would prefer to keep the htisounds I'm using currently if that's ok, I feel they fit pretty nicely already.

■ I'm actually really impressed by this Normal. A lot of Normals suffer from looking inconsistent, even with consistent distance snapping. But, structurally, this one looks very neatly arranged, and on top of that, the rhythms all make sense. And like, a good 90% of Normals out there consist entirely of flow that has the player going around in large circles in a single direction around the border of the map. So I'm really glad that you didn't do that here! Thank you! I really appreciate the kind words.

■ You're really really good at making lower difficulty maps. Yay :)
[Insane]
■ 00:14:238 (1,2,3,4) - Okay this might not seem like a big deal but I actually think that it's extremely noticeable during play.

The gap between (3,4) looks inconsistent with the other gaps. If you were going for decreasing spacing here, try making the gap between (2,3) smaller. Otherwise, if you wanted the gaps to be the same, then move (4) to somewhere like 70,154. Made the gap between (2,3) a bit smaller.

■ 00:29:722 (1) - I think you should add a whistle onto the repeat here. This makes the hitsound gap less... gappy. And it makes the clap skip less awkwardly noticeable. Also it does fit the instrumentation. Sounds nice~

■ 00:43:028 (7,8,1) - I think you should make this triple linear. Try moving (8) to 317,178. Done.

■ 00:46:173 (4) - I'd move this up a bit to be more consistent in spacing with the gap between 00:45:689 (2,3) . Something like 374,134 would work I think. Yep, done.

■ 01:11:093 (3,4,5) - This triple is also a bit unsettling. See the image.

So I think move (4) to the left a bit here. Done.

■ 01:19:802 (8,9,1) - I think that you should make this triple linear, because the slight curve here doesn't really seem to fit with the slider's actual curve, but it's not different enough either. Try (9) at 222,332. Looks good!

All of the difficulties played smoothly and I didn't find any major flow or rhythm issues. A great mapset overall! Here, have one of these:
( ・ω・)ノ☆ Thanks!!
Oracle

Oracle wrote:

hi~
General
  1. emmy's diff has different kiai time than other diffs. Yep, fixed.
  2. Not sure if you forgot to mute the sliderslide. Sounds a bit noisy especially in Insane diff. Hmm, I'll consider adding them.
Easy
  1. 00:08:431 (1) - I suggest a whistle on slider end which gives the similar effect as 00:00:690 (1) - . You also have whistle here on Insane diff. Better keep it consistent! Ahh I actually removed the whistle on 00:00:690 (1) from a previous mod so it should be consistent now.
  2. 00:06:496 (2) - I suppose you want to emphasize symmetry here while this slider is not at the centre of the screen. It does feels a bit out of place. I tried to rearrange the spacing a bit to achieve this. (no need to worry about 00:04:077 (3,2) - not landing on the same position. The time interval between is too large to be noticed in AR3)

    Coordinates: 00:04:077 (3) - 388|256 00:04:560 (1) - 452|184 00:06:496 (2) - 364|224
    Make sure you fix the spacing for the following patterns if you apply this. Wasn't going for symmetry. The idea behind the shape was to make sharp bend fit with the music is all. Although symmetry would look really nice it would be extremely difficult to rework around the current structure.
  3. 01:23:915 (1) - You could end this spinner at 01:25:851 - if you want. The sound on 01:25:851 - is much stronger. Works pretty fine for me with a whistle.
Normal
  1. 00:09:883 (3) - A whistle here for the same reason as Easy Left empty for reason mentioned above~
  2. 00:37:464 (5,6) - Spacing inconsist here and it's actually pretty hard to read(red ticks). Could probably try something like this: Fixed.
  3. 00:45:206 (4) - 79|144 is visually much better imo. I consider this quite important for lower diffs... Gave the slider a different angle instead to avoid uneven spacing in the triangle formation. Hopefully better now.
  4. 01:23:915 (1) - Same suggestion as Easy. Make it end at 01:25:851 - ?
Insane
  1. 00:14:480 (2,3,4) - Mind adding NC for SV change? It should be ok. I mention why in my reply to Natsu's mod.
  2. 00:16:657 (3,5) - & 00:17:141 (4,6) - The overlapping bothers me a bit as i see you're rarely presenting this kind of overlapping. I'd suggest adjusting these 2 to avoid the overlapping. Made some rearrangements~
  3. 00:24:883 (4) - Whistle on the head? Refer to 00:26:819 (5) - Sure.
  4. 00:27:302 (6,7) - Whistles? Similar pattern as 00:25:367 (5,6) - Added one on (7). Decided to remove on (5) for 00:25:367 (5,6) so I left (6) for 00:27:302 (6,7) without one.
  5. 01:14:238 (1,2,3,4) - 40% volume works better for me. The current setting for 1/8s is a bit too loud. 40% is a bit too low for me but I agree that it's too loud so I dropped it 10%
  6. 01:23:915 (1) - Same as i mentioned in Easy.
very solid mapset+elite song choice!! i love yuzu songs haha thanks!
good luck!!!! <3

Just one thing to mention about the spinner. I'm not really sure about ending the spinner there as the mp3 is actually cut from the full version of the song so that sound shouldn't really even be there lol :3

Thanks for the mods and stars! Both were very helpful!

All diffs updated~
Chewin
Fixed almost everything! Thank you guys -w-

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432,272,38673,5,2,0:0:0:0:
320,172,38915,1,2,0:0:0:0:
296,356,39157,1,2,0:0:0:0:
296,356,39278,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,356,39399,2,0,L|192:360,1,91,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,244,39883,6,0,P|76:236|136:248,1,91,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,264,40246,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,264,40367,2,0,L|256:256,1,91,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,104,40851,2,0,L|237:110,1,91,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,240,41335,6,0,P|408:256|496:240,2,136.5,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,204,42181,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,204,42302,2,0,L|216:208,1,91,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,344,42786,2,0,P|116:324|224:356,1,182,8|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,320,43512,5,0,0:0:0:0:
224,360,43754,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,240,43996,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,240,44117,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,240,44238,2,0,P|216:192|224:128,1,91,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,16,44722,1,8,0:0:0:0:
428,204,44964,5,0,0:0:0:0:
428,204,45085,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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224,360,45810,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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224,360,46052,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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48,160,46899,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,160,47020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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160,244,47504,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,244,47625,2,0,L|280:248,1,91,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,148,47988,5,0,0:0:0:0:
264,148,48109,2,0,L|384:140,1,91,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,232,48472,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,232,48593,2,0,L|496:236,1,91,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,356,49077,5,4,0:0:0:0:
319,335,49198,1,0,0:0:0:0:
303,356,49319,5,0,0:0:0:0:
303,336,49440,1,0,0:0:0:0:
290,358,49560,5,8,0:0:0:0:
290,338,49681,1,0,0:0:0:0:
278,360,49802,5,2,0:0:0:0:
278,339,49923,1,0,0:0:0:0:
265,361,50044,5,8,0:0:0:0:
265,341,50165,1,0,0:0:0:0:
249,362,50286,5,2,0:0:0:0:
249,342,50407,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,364,50527,5,8,0:0:0:0:
236,343,50648,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,365,50769,5,2,0:0:0:0:
224,345,50890,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,68,51738,5,2,0:0:0:0:
72,68,51859,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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48,264,53915,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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220,128,54278,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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408,188,54883,5,2,0:0:0:0:
328,8,55125,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,208,55367,2,0,P|284:256|296:316,1,91,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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216,136,57302,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,344,57544,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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92,252,58270,2,0,L|200:248,1,91,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,316,58633,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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480,200,59238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,100,59480,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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272,88,60085,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,100,60206,2,0,L|259:190,1,91,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,276,60569,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,288,60689,6,0,B|144:304|144:304|32:288,1,136.5,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,204,61173,2,0,L|168:220,1,91,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,100,61657,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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208,288,62020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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408,168,62625,5,6,0:0:0:0:
352,356,62867,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,56,63109,1,6,0:0:0:0:
500,256,63351,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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212,56,64439,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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196,356,65044,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,176,65286,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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304,316,66012,6,0,L|308:372,1,45.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,316,66254,6,0,L|320:372,1,45.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,316,66496,6,0,L|328:204,1,91,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,240,66859,2,0,L|340:120,1,91,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,156,67222,2,0,L|328:96,1,45.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,32,67464,5,0,0:0:0:0:
440,200,67706,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,200,67827,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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376,352,68310,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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32,232,68915,2,0,P|88:228|144:248,1,100.10000305481,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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368,272,69883,1,8,0:0:0:0:
460,72,70125,1,2,0:0:0:0:
460,72,70246,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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272,144,70851,2,0,P|220:152|152:128,1,100.10000305481,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,80,71214,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,80,71335,1,2,0:0:0:0:
384,160,71577,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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384,160,71819,1,8,0:0:0:0:
48,176,72060,1,2,0:0:0:0:
48,176,72181,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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224,384,72786,2,0,P|228:328|216:248,1,100.10000305481,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,220,73149,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,220,73270,2,0,L|180:108,1,100.10000305481,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
267,100,73633,1,0,0:0:0:0:
267,100,73754,2,0,L|260:200,1,100.10000305481,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,176,74117,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,176,74238,2,0,L|356:64,1,100.10000305481,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,240,74722,5,10,0:0:0:0:
469,264,74842,1,0,0:0:0:0:
471,289,74963,1,2,0:0:0:0:
471,314,75084,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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288,320,75569,2,0,L|148:336,1,100.10000305481,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,348,75931,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,352,76052,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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208,108,76657,2,0,P|216:168|208:224,1,100.10000305481,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,168,77141,1,2,0:0:0:0:
164,36,77383,2,0,L|224:28,1,50.0500015274048
284,72,77625,2,0,L|392:80,1,100.10000305481,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,308,78109,5,4,0:0:0:0:
196,140,78351,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,352,78593,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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288,48,78956,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,48,79077,1,4,0:0:0:0:
296,248,79319,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,244,79560,1,4,0:0:0:0:
420,72,79802,5,2,0:0:0:0:
420,72,79923,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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292,348,80528,2,0,L|296:248,1,100.10000305481,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,52,81012,2,0,L|200:156,1,100.10000305481,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,328,81496,2,0,L|79:227,1,100.10000305481,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,52,81980,6,0,L|200:144,1,91,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,216,82343,2,0,P|280:236|376:208,1,136.5,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,352,82948,1,4,0:0:0:0:
204,52,83189,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Unsfamiliar
Because emmy requested like, 6 years ago,

Insane
  1. 00:06:254 (4,5,1) - I believe the flow here can be improved ever so slightly. You could utilise the circular flow you've built up here 00:04:560 (1,2) and continue it into this triplet. The current positioning is too linear from 00:06:012 (3) imo. Additionally, since the notes of the triplet are placed on the left of each other and then curved upwards, it screams circular flow! If you agree, try position 00:06:254 (4,5,1) at x:76 y:160 and then maybe experiment with rotation to optimise it.
  2. 00:26:698 (4,5) - Perhaps you can ctrl+g this rhythm. In my opinion, it would play a lot better if you had the hold from the kick slider starting on 00:26:698 where the long vocal starts. The kick still accounts for the beat on the white tick, so I think it will still work.
  3. 00:27:544 (7,2) - Maybe place these where 00:26:214 (2) was to keep it cleaner aesthetically (in edit mode haha)
  4. 00:38:189 (4,1) - Possibly increase the spacing between the slider and the following anti-jumps. At the moment, coming straight from a jump from 00:37:948 (3) negates the effect of the anti-jumps. If you increase the spacing a bit between 00:38:189 (4,1) it will give your cursor a nice swing into 00:38:673 (1) which is emphasised by the anti-jump sequence.
  5. 01:04:560 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The (6) kick slider lacks any kind of purpose where it's placed. Haha I don't even know what I'm talking about! Maybe try something like this:
  6. 01:07:706 (1) - Cool!
  7. 01:14:722 (2,3) - I suggest you decrease the spacing between these two a bit. It's really easy to combo break here (for me anyway) and the sudden movement between them is fairly jarring to play.
  8. 01:19:802 (2,3,1) - Since the (1) slider is curved, I recommend you also curve this triplet slightly. The linearity doesn't flow as well as it could for me.
  9. 01:23:189 (2) - Having such an important beat 01:23:310, on a slider end, makes the powerfulness of this ending fall short from it's potential. I would suggest maybe you could remove 01:23:189 (2), then replace 01:22:948 (1) by a slider ending at 01:23:189. Then you could add a note with the finish at 01:23:310.

Chewin's Insane
  1. Not much to say here xD
  2. 00:51:859 (2) -Although, this note is unnecessary in my opinion. There is nothing in the song to support a note being placed here. I believe just a 1/2 stack would suffice and would work just as well (if not, better).

emmy's Hard
  1. 00:14:238 (1) - Maybe move this down and left, so that the outer arc of the slider is on the same vector as the line of flow. "Like wtf Unsfa?" you ask. I'll just show you:
    I cannot draw with a mouse, sorry ;w;
    Anyway, something like this would flow much better imo. Also, you may have to adjust some of the spacing, so that the jump between 00:14:238 (1,2) is not too large!
  2. 00:15:448 (1) - Unnecessary new combo I think. Not sure why you want this, unless maybe you want to isolate the cluster of synth notes you can hear.
  3. 00:48:835 (1,3) - Swap new combos for new measure and pattern structure?
  4. 01:02:625 (1,1,1) - Wheee~ I really like how this plays and flows!
  5. 01:08:431 (2) - Hmmm... 1.5x sv. I'm not entirely convinced that this is necessary. Sure, it works, but since you have the slow slider beforehand at 01:07:706 (1) (which is really cool btw), normal sv would work just as well.
  6. 01:14:238 (1,2) - omg, please blanket this ;w; please please please
  7. 01:18:109 (1,1,1) - わーい!And again :)
  8. 01:21:980 (1,3) - Slight blanket issue. Try 01:21:980 (1) - red anchor x:381 y:196, third point x:416 y:149, end point x:388 y:88.
  9. 01:22:948 (3) - For the same reason as I discussed in Trust's Insane, maybe you could split this 3/4 slider into a 1/2 slider ending at 01:23:189, with a note at 01:23:310. Would work wonders :3
Normal and Easy are both incredibly neat and polished. Good job! No complaints from me :D

Great map set and groovy song. Good luck!

Here, have one of these:
( ・ω・)ノ☆
neurosis
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Topic Starter
Trust
Unsfamiliar

Unsfamiliar wrote:

Because emmy requested like, 6 years ago,

Insane
  1. 00:06:254 (4,5,1) - I believe the flow here can be improved ever so slightly. You could utilise the circular flow you've built up here 00:04:560 (1,2) and continue it into this triplet. The current positioning is too linear from 00:06:012 (3) imo. Additionally, since the notes of the triplet are placed on the left of each other and then curved upwards, it screams circular flow! If you agree, try position 00:06:254 (4,5,1) at x:76 y:160 and then maybe experiment with rotation to optimise it. Nice, I moved it to a position close to what you mentioned but would like to avoid rotating it for style purposes.
  2. 00:26:698 (4,5) - Perhaps you can ctrl+g this rhythm. In my opinion, it would play a lot better if you had the hold from the kick slider starting on 00:26:698 where the long vocal starts. The kick still accounts for the beat on the white tick, so I think it will still work. Hmm this actually plays really well for me so I'd like to keep it if that's ok. Also i would prefer to have the beat on the white tick mapped with a sliderhead.
  3. 00:27:544 (7,2) - Maybe place these where 00:26:214 (2) was to keep it cleaner aesthetically (in edit mode haha) Yess agreed!
  4. 00:38:189 (4,1) - Possibly increase the spacing between the slider and the following anti-jumps. At the moment, coming straight from a jump from 00:37:948 (3) negates the effect of the anti-jumps. If you increase the spacing a bit between 00:38:189 (4,1) it will give your cursor a nice swing into 00:38:673 (1) which is emphasised by the anti-jump sequence. Cool, done.
  5. 01:04:560 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The (6) kick slider lacks any kind of purpose where it's placed. Haha I don't even know what I'm talking about! Maybe try something like this: Lol, I hope I did it right
  6. 01:07:706 (1) - Cool! weeeeee
  7. 01:14:722 (2,3) - I suggest you decrease the spacing between these two a bit. It's really easy to combo break here (for me anyway) and the sudden movement between them is fairly jarring to play. True, my fault there for mostly testing this on DT haha, reduced a bit.
  8. 01:19:802 (2,3,1) - Since the (1) slider is curved, I recommend you also curve this triplet slightly. The linearity doesn't flow as well as it could for me. Made it flowy~
  9. 01:23:189 (2) - Having such an important beat 01:23:310, on a slider end, makes the powerfulness of this ending fall short from it's potential. I would suggest maybe you could remove 01:23:189 (2), then replace 01:22:948 (1) by a slider ending at 01:23:189. Then you could add a note with the finish at 01:23:310. nice, made some changes here.

Normal and Easy are both incredibly neat and polished. Good job! No complaints from me :D Thanks!

Great map set and groovy song. Good luck! \:D/

Here, have one of these:
( ・ω・)ノ☆ Yay thanks for the star!

Thank you for the mod!!

Updated.
Kuron-kun
Aye, modding because nobody requested like 0 years ago

General

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Easy

00:08:431 (1,2) - You can improve this blanket orz http://puu.sh/8T2lW.png.

00:20:044 (1,2) - Same as above.

01:10:367 (3,4) - \:D/ ^

I'm nazi blanket and this easy is love

Normal

00:32:867 (2) - Why don't you make a curving slider like this http://puu.sh/8T31Z.png? Keeps the consistence with the other curving sliders, just pick this 00:34:802 (4) - and rotate 40 degrees.

00:52:948 (1,3) - You can improve this stack by moving (3) to x322 y290, yes 1 pixel left, 1 pixel down.

01:00:206 (5,6,1) - Isn't this spacing a bit different if you compare with the others?

01:20:044 (1,2,3) - Nothing wrong with this pattern, I just love it.

Best Normal I've ever seen.

Hard

00:04:560 (1) - What do you think about Ctrl + G for better flow? Feels better imo.

00:08:431 (1,2) - You can improve this blanket.

00:10:367 (4,5) - You should keep the consistence with Long slider, Long slider, an example of pattern that fits well imo http://puu.sh/8T4sJ.png.

00:34:319 (3,2) - You can stack better moving (2) to x255 y309, moving (3) to x277 y235, or you can copy (3) and paste in (2)'s place.

00:39:399 - I love the hitsounds at this part of the song ♥

00:42:786 (6,7,1) - - The spacing is a bit inconsistent, move (7) to x336 y250, should be fixed now.

00:44:964 (6,7,1) - Here again, move (1) to x296 y224

00:49:077 (1,2,3,4) - Same thing as above, just move (4) to x348 y36

01:12:786 (2,3,6) - Blankets!

01:20:044 (1,2,4) - Blankets again!

Moe

Insane

00:06:375 (5) - This note sounds like overmap, or I'm deaf.

00:25:609 (6) - You can stack better moving to x82 y171.

00:28:270 (2) - Stack?

00:42:786 (6) - Can stack better moving to x365 y38 aka 1 pixel right.

00:43:270 (1) - Stack better moving 1 pixel down.

00:49:319 (2,5) - Stacks orz

01:03:351 (2,2) - The spacing with those 2 notes, if you compare with 01:02:867 (2,2) - is a bit inconsistent, just move 01:04:319 (2) - to x369 y195.

Moe

Chewin's Insane

00:15:448 (2,3,1,2,1,2) - I really like this kind of pattern.

Nothing here, good diff \:D/

Good luck with this Trust, emmy and Chewin <3
neurosis
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Topic Starter
Trust

Kuron-Kun wrote:

Normal
00:32:867 (2) - Why don't you make a curving slider like this http://puu.sh/8T31Z.png? Keeps the consistence with the other curving sliders, just pick this 00:34:802 (4) - and rotate 40 degrees. I like some slider variety~

Insane
00:06:375 (5) - This note sounds like overmap, or I'm deaf. Following the strumming guitar with this one.

Good luck with this Trust, emmy and Chewin <3 Thanks!!
Thanks for modding Kuron! Aside from the two points mentioned above everything was fixed~

Updated mine and emmy's difficulties.
Chewin
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Elily
req from emmy~~

Black : suggestion
Pink : should be fixed

[General]
Last spins lack uniformity through the whole map.

[Easy]
Remove Widescreen Support
01:14:238 (1) - Add Finish.

[Normal]
00:29:722 (4) - Add Whitstle on reverse point.
00:38:431 (6) - Add note.
01:06:496 (4) - ^

[emmy's Hard]
00:50:528 (4) - Follow the earlier placement.
00:59:117 (2) - Fix placement.
01:06:496 (6) - Add note.
01:20:044 (1) - Add Finish.
How about remove 01:23:673 (4) and change 01:22:948 (3) to reverse slider?

[Insane]
00:29:722 (1) - Add Whistle on reverse point.
00:31:657 (1) - Add finish.
00:33:351 (5) - Move to starting point of 00:32:504 (3)
01:06:496 (7) - Add note.

[Chewin's Insane]
There's nothing to be desired.

I couldn't find a lot ><
Good Luck~!
neurosis
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Xiaolin
Hi Trust ~ <3 Random mod ~ :3
[General]
  1. 01:22:948 - 01:23:069 - I don't think its necessary to add a kiai time here, I suggest that you remove it ~

[Easy]
  1. 00:02:625 (2) - Whistle at the end of the slider? It sounded more suitable though, well, your choice ~ o3o
  2. 00:06:496 (2) - ^
  3. 00:31:657 (1) - Move to x:228 y:196 for better blanket for (4) and (2) OwO
SPOILER
1.


2.
  1. 00:50:044 (3) - I think this slider should end at 00:51:012 for better rhythm
[Normal]
  1. Nothing, great diff ~ =^.^=
[emmy's Hard]
  1. 00:02:625 (5) - NC here? Well, its suitable, I think its better to add it ~ xD
  2. 00:06:496 (4) - ^
  3. 00:10:367 (4) - ^
  4. 00:12:665 (2) - Move this to x:184 y:228, cause the place that you added the note sounded odd
  5. 00:12:786 (3) - Move to x:196 y:296
  6. 00:15:448 (4) - 4 repeats sounded odd too, consider making it only with 1 repeat and make it like this:
  1. 00:59:238 (3) - Move to x:160 y:160 ?
[Insane]
  1. 00:12:786 (3) - Move to x:467 y:262 for better.. I dunno ~ xD
  2. 00:26:819 (5) - Move to x:482 y:134
[Chewin's Insane]
  1. Nothing
Goodluck ~ ! Nice song and map ~ <3
Topic Starter
Trust
Thank you for modding Meramin and Lapis Aoki! I'll check these soon.

Oh btw I got a little something to sit on my desk from Anime North ~

Xiaolin

Trust wrote:

Oh btw I got a little something to sit on my desk from Anime North ~

Thanks for making me jealous ~ ;w; I want an anime figma so badly right now ~ ;w;
Chewin

Lapis Aoki wrote:

Trust wrote:

Oh btw I got a little something to sit on my desk from Anime North ~

Thanks for making me jealous ~ ;w; I want an anime figma so badly right now ~ ;w;
me too..
neurosis
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Kuria
can't wait for this to be ranked so bad ;_;
Chewin

Kuria wrote:

can't wait for this to be ranked so bad ;_;
"Last updated 26 days ago" it looks it's dying D:
Natsu
Trust me this should be ranked <3
neurosis
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Xiaolin

Topic Starter
Trust
Meramin

Meramin wrote:

req from emmy~~ omg thank u emmy

Black : suggestion
Pink : should be fixed

[General]
Last spins lack uniformity through the whole map. Okay i'll make it consistent with emmy and Chewin since they both land theirs on the same tick.

[Easy]
Remove Widescreen Support Yep.
01:14:238 (1) - Add Finish. I prefer a whistle, finish feels like too much.

[Normal]
00:29:722 (4) - Add Whitstle on reverse point. Sure i'll try this.
00:38:431 (6) - Add note. I like the break in the rhythm here, fits the vocal hold nicely so i'll keep this.
01:06:496 (4) - ^ I'm following the bgm here so I would prefer to leave this as is~

[Insane]
00:29:722 (1) - Add Whistle on reverse point. Done.
00:31:657 (1) - Add finish. I prefer just a whistle here.
00:33:351 (5) - Move to starting point of 00:32:504 (3) Not necessary in my opinion
01:06:496 (7) - Add note. Same as Normal here.

I couldn't find a lot ><
Good Luck~! Thanks!
Lapis Aoki

Lapis Aoki wrote:

Hi Trust ~ <3 Random mod ~ :3 yay
[General]
  1. 01:22:948 - 01:23:069 - I don't think its necessary to add a kiai time here, I suggest that you remove it ~ But it looks cool :>

[Easy]
  1. 00:02:625 (2) - Whistle at the end of the slider? It sounded more suitable though, well, your choice ~ o3o I prefer to leave without, trying to keep them on instrument and really sharp vocal sounds only for this part so the whistles don't feel "spammed"
  2. 00:06:496 (2) - ^
  3. 00:31:657 (1) - Move to x:228 y:196 for better blanket for (4) and (2) OwO blankets are not my intention here.
SPOILER
1.


2.
  1. 00:50:044 (3) - I think this slider should end at 00:51:012 for better rhythm okay~
[Insane]
  1. 00:12:786 (3) - Move to x:467 y:262 for better.. I dunno ~ xD sure
  2. 00:26:819 (5) - Move to x:482 y:134 tried to clean this up a bit. i hope it's better now
Goodluck ~ ! Nice song and map ~ <3 Thanks! :)

Thank you both for the mods!

Finally updated :)
truonant
hello~ this is a m4m with emmy.

I'm a novice modder trying to improve, so I hope my mod will prove to be useful to you guys. Overall it looks solid so I can't really find much to say other than to give my perspective.

Easy & Normal - looks good.

Hard by emmy
00:01:415 (2) - Maybe you can blanket this? 00:09:157 (2) - prior and latter notes had 1.1 DS except for this slider. Also, it could be blanketed better 01:07:706 (1) - it Was hard to read because at first because it appeared to be the same wiggle slider and length as 01:08:431 (2). I would suggest changing the slider velocity back to 1.0x or change the shape of that slider. Maybe something coming from a perpendicular direction

Insane
01:14:238 (1,2,3,4) - bring these back to blue ticks. I feel that this spot can easily combo break many players or unexpectedly get 100s. It may be fustrating for players to keep replaying just for this part

2nd Insane by Chewin
00:15:448 (2,3,1,2,1,2) - It may be just me but these were just impossible for me to do >.>
neurosis
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Sonnyc
Random modding~

Easy:

00:20:044 (1) - Although the reverse isn't the timing where a clap should appear, I think adding one there would sound nice with the song.
00:25:367 (2) - I don't think the whistle sound nice here.
00:50:044 (3,1) - Maybe this distance can be stressful as an [Easy] since the players have to move their cursor to (1) relatively sudden.

Normal:

00:48:593 (2) - I highly suggest to adjust your pattern starting here to avoid touching the hp bar. Since a short break appears at 00:51:133, it won't be too hard to fixing it.
00:51:012 (5) - I'm not sure if this note is necessary, since the drum ends at 00:50:891. But if you want to keep your note there, consider also adding at 01:06:496 to fit the vocal (and for consistency).

emmy's Hard:

00:02:141 (3,4) - I think rather keeping the distance would look better here.
00:06:496 (1) - Remove whistle at the end as other hitsound patterns. 00:02:625 (1) and 00:10:367 (4) for example.
00:31:536 - Consider adding a note here to fit the vocal better.
00:46:657 (6) - Keep distance here too.
01:04:319 (2) - Whistle sounds little loud here. Remove it?

Insane:

00:34:439 (4) - It seems moving a grid right by one or two would construct a better lineal flow with (2,3).
01:07:706 (1) - Personally, I'd expect something more abnormal a shape for the wiggling sound of the song xD Well current is fine though.

Chewin's Insane:

00:03:835 (4) - I'm not so sure about your hit sound pattern here, but hope you can check if the missing whistle at the end was an intention.
00:07:706 (4) - ^
00:15:689 (1,1) - Imo removing NCs at the little stream here would be more consistent with 00:26:093 (3,5). Though keeping it for users' iniuitive reading might also be a nice idea...
Topic Starter
Trust
Thanks Sonnyc and truonant! Will check and reply to these shortly. I'm currently putting a little bit of work into my Insane so I'll try to get them to you as soon as possible.
neurosis
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Chewin
will check asap, thank you guys (:
neurosis
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Chewin
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thanks :)
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YES

UPDATING THIS TOMORROW EVEN IF IT KILLS ME

Sorry, also trying to find a BAT to check this. Also.. irre and chewin omg
Chewin
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Love your avatars <3

I'll be online in a few hours to update this, thank you guys so much for being patient! This has been quite a busy summer so far.
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truoant & Sonnyc

truonant wrote:

Easy & Normal - looks good. \:D/

Insane
01:14:238 (1,2,3,4) - bring these back to blue ticks. I feel that this spot can easily combo break many players or unexpectedly get 100s. It may be fustrating for players to keep replaying just for this part Interesting, from the testplays I've seen it didn't appear to be an issue. Also I think the current fits the music best.

Sonnyc wrote:

Random modding~

Easy:

00:20:044 (1) - Although the reverse isn't the timing where a clap should appear, I think adding one there would sound nice with the song. Sounds a bit too loud and too much in my opinion. I would like to leave it without a hitsound.
00:25:367 (2) - I don't think the whistle sound nice here. Removed.
00:50:044 (3,1) - Maybe this distance can be stressful as an [Easy] since the players have to move their cursor to (1) relatively sudden. It's fine, there's a considerable amount of time to relocate.

Normal:

00:48:593 (2) - I highly suggest to adjust your pattern starting here to avoid touching the hp bar. Since a short break appears at 00:51:133, it won't be too hard to fixing it. But it's not even touching it: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1795135
00:51:012 (5) - I'm not sure if this note is necessary, since the drum ends at 00:50:891. But if you want to keep your note there, consider also adding at 01:06:496 to fit the vocal (and for consistency). Removed it.

Insane:

00:34:439 (4) - It seems moving a grid right by one or two would construct a better lineal flow with (2,3). Sure.
01:07:706 (1) - Personally, I'd expect something more abnormal a shape for the wiggling sound of the song xD Well current is fine though. Yeah I like the current.

Thanks for modding!

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