1. Easy (1.78 stars, 101 notes)
2. Hard (4.8 stars, 273 notes)
3. Insane (5 stars, 379 notes)
4. Normal (3.43 stars, 134 notes)

Kiiwa wrote:

aaa

[Insane]

1. 00:19:965 (2,3) - Starting (3) so far for no real reason is strange. Wouldn't this position be so much better? hmm, this responds to the flash in the video.. I'll consider further about it
   
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2. Match 00:21:482 - this hitsound with 00:16:089 (6) - this one. I tried and found its effect not as good as expected. changed to finish
3. 00:36:651 (1) - Maybe delete this and listen to the music again. There is no real sound at 00:36:651 - so maybe just have a note at 00:36:819 - ? I suggest to play around with this part :3 hmm, there's a strong drum here... I don't know but you maybe have labelled wrong time.
4. 00:37:662 (3) - Finish? nope i think
5. 01:33:280 - Missed a clap? ww yes, my osu misses claps at times for no reason
6. 01:35:302 - Again, clap orz fixed
7. 01:47:774 - Start your stream here instead of 01:48:111 - according to music. You did it in Hard so why not here too? there's no sound here. I'll check on the hard
8. 01:45:583 (6) - Add whistle. I tried this at very first, but thought that didn't fit, so...
9. 01:51:145 - why no finish here? too intense too me ;p
10. 01:57:718 (6,1,1) - Make these hitsounds all match pleaseeee~ fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:42:381 - Add note? k
2. 00:45:078 - Really do think finish sounds better here. k
3. 01:47:774 (3,4) - Nicer if these two have same hitsounds maybe? not to me...
4. 01:57:718 (1,2,3) - Same as Insane. And shouldn't they be all new combo too? ww changed :3 but not new combo, which looks too intense[/color]

[Normal]

1. pro
2. HD-1? k
3. 01:57:718 (3) - Same as others plz

[Easy]

1. 01:57:718 - 01:58:055 - 01:58:392 - same as others plzzzzzzzzzzasiazx

NICE MAP!

Okoratu wrote:

Hi there.
Upon ingame request:

[Insane]
This map is nice, here are some suggestions:

1. 00:15:920 (5) - Remove this circle and listen again, at least i don't hear the sound you're mapping here (because you're mapping vocals here, right?) hmm, I literally hear a "wa" in the vocal, so maybe just keep this :>
   You could move that one or replace the first 2 circles with a slider and have that end in 00:16:005 -, because there actually are vocals for that
   
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   you could also use a slider over there
   (I have no clue if what i'm suggesting here is right btw)
2. 01:15:752 (6,7,8,9,1) - I don't really like this one because it's so "crowded" in there D:
   Would be easier to read if you made a stream like that one 01:23:673 (4,5,6,7) - out of it I made some minor adjust, but a large space stream looks ugly and hard to make blanket, so nope
3. 01:47:774 (3) - might consider starting that stream 01:48:111 (5,6,7,8) - here, the sounds for that are there I wanted to emphasise the vocal here, and I don't find a beat at this point

Overall beautiful map

Mintong wrote:

HIHIHIHI

[Insane]

00:08:673 (1) - 这个slider对 00:07:156 (4) - 来说会不会稍微的太curve点了? 应该没吧……
01:03:280 (3) - 同感觉太curve了, 试试用01:04:628 (3) - 的slider? 我是随手拉的……已调整
01:10:696 (5) - NC? 11combo感觉有点大 没有吧233 我问问别人怎么看

sad那么神怎么找

[Hard]

00:32:606 (4) - 其实我觉得这个CTRL+G会比较好玩 0.0 真鬼畜

然后我找不到了sad...
射个星助攻rank Good Luck!@

Fycho wrote:

[Mod Info]

1. Black: Suggestions
2. Bold: Importance.You might consider
3. Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix

[General]

1. Unrankable sampleset: soft-custom2. Ranking criteria告诉我You cannot silence both slider ticks and slider slides together. 如果是刚又改的规则那就算了 已改
2. 视频不换个720P的？反正现在允许用了，现在的画质和码率都太渣了啊 什么你说我亲手压的视频画质渣我希望能保持一个比较小的大小，随随便便就24M的话玩的人会减少的

[Insane]

1. 00:16:089 (6) –音量到20%吧，略吵，所有diff一样 k
2. 00:36:651 (1) –滑条尾加点什么音效？像01:57:718 (6) –一样 你是说加个normal sample？我在几个mod之间来回摇摆最后还是觉得跟最后不一样，还是不加
3. 00:36:651 (1) –换成两个圈，00:36:819 –这里搞个跳也可以 感觉缺少连贯的感觉
4. 00:37:156 (2) –尾巴左上角sampleset换成drum 过于突兀
5. 00:59:909 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) –三句节奏完全一样真是极其无聊，可以换点滑条circle组合 这里本来歌曲的意境就是一种回转反复的感觉，我想把这种感觉带给玩家
6. 01:09:010 (4,5) –这也靠太近了吧=。=打着太压抑，试试（192，80） 嗯终于有人吐槽这个了……看了下19280好像太挤了，稍微增加了一点间距
7. 01:10:527 (4) –这颗明显S;C1的clap更好，你仔细听听曲子 好球
8. 01:10:696 (5) –new combo美丽 之前kiiwa说过了我没改，现在还是改吧，我终于发现之前加了薪combo的违和感在哪了，和背景视频太接近了，现在我调了下combo顺序应该可以了
9. 01:13:898 (4,5,6) –音量太小，这一串整体可以加个10% k
10. 01:24:347 (1) –转盘whistle 我思考了下改成了drum，whistle有点响
11. 01:31:594 (3) –滑条尾sampleset换soft，这音乐里啥鼓音都没。 没有发现什么违和感，至于overmap的话bat应该没法说这个事overmap
12. 01:43:729 (3) –overmap=.=我推荐把01:43:392 (2,3) –节奏上ctrl+g 很明显的一个钹声，我认为不存在overmap
13. 01:53:757 (5) –缺normal sampleset 猴

[Hard]

1. 00:30:920 (3) –尾巴漏音效 猴，不知道为什么音效复制工具总是漏音
2. 01:13:729 (2,3,4) -音量太小了根本听不见，特别是后面加finish的那个。这又不是insane那个7个单点那梗，没必要搞音量渐弱 提升了音量。我还是坚持用渐减的音量，而且我认为后面的finish音量足够
3. 01:14:740 (1) –overmap，我建议这样，
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   ，大白线没音，所以放滑条尾没啥打击感的说法。 这个我没法否认，但是打着没有违和感，我看看接下来怎么说
4. 01:35:976 (3) -01:41:370 (4) –有很多类似这种的，我是不喜欢这种重音滑条尾的，我情愿用1/1滑条 我在考虑下

[Normal]

1. 00:35:639 (3) –滑条尾巴音效不对，你自己check下 已改，肯定是音效复制工具的错
2. 01:12:381 (4) –尾巴上whistle去掉，听着别扭 k
3. 01:13:392 (1,2) –中间音量太小，同hard k
4. 01:23:505 (4) –尾巴漏finish k
5. 01:34:965 (1) –尾加个clap什么的好点 加上背景音有些违和
6. 01:41:370 (2) –不跟这个01:41:538 -红线音？和这个01:30:752 (3) –01:44:235 (2) -前后统一 猴
7. 01:54:853 (2) –对着折返箭头，shift+W然后ctrl+E k
8. 01:55:864 (3) –把clap去掉=。= k

[Easy]

1. 可以用x1.1的DS 你想杀死我吗

另外关于白丝自爆，第一我没有白丝，第二除了duca我也没有其他需要mod的图=-=

Sagisawa-Yukari wrote:

[General]
Red: Must fix
Blue: Suggestion only


[Easy]
一上来我怎么觉得完全可以无视音乐玩了，又不是跟背景又不是跟歌词
00:20:808 (3,1) - 这个3直接可以结束在00:21:819 - 然后1从长白线开始，至于究竟怎么搞你自己决定 做了点不同的改动，现在让重音放在滑条开头，应该比较舒服
00:33:954 (2) - 这个clap太响了，当然后面还有许多类似的地方 其他难度也是这样了，我觉得没啥违和的，不然还要种草
01:41:033 (2) - 延长到后面的长白线 本来这边一个锣


[Normal]
00:05:302 (1,2,3) - 我怎么觉得那么别扭，我试着自己摆了下你可以参考参考 上来就一个塞满节奏我也是十分佩服，不要

SPOILER

00:08:673 (1,2) - 这两个明显该一个结束在白线一个从白线起头吧，2结束也应该是结束在00:10:358 - 吧，怎么会在00:10:696 - 这里结束，听着怎么感觉就像把一段音乐腰斩了一样。 跟vocal啊
00:15:415 (2) - ^
00:28:561 (3) - 你这里不是单纯跟鼓却用了鼓的音效听起来很违和 不就是单纯跟鼓么
00:42:718 (3) - 这个和00:38:336 (1,2,3) - 的3一个节奏怎么突然要拉长一段 我觉得这跟vocal就行了，如果非要我改的话我只能横平竖直，节奏也没有好多少，还是不改
01:10:358 (4,1) - 改成折返滑条 我想强调那个锣，你不说理由我肯定不同意
01:48:448 (4) - 这个4可以不要了，直接转盘从这里开始 为什么？


[Hard]
这开头还行，起码我能听出个所以然来
00:22:999 (2,3) - 这里为什么要用两个circle 跟vocal
00:32:269 (3) - 去掉，无意义的塞满节奏 背景一声钹不是在那里么？我开电视机都能听见
00:33:448 - 为什么要空出来，这里加个circle然后00:33:617 (2) - 去掉 你问我为什么要出来，那为什么红鹅的jb谱不200bpm16分音塞满，本来我这里跟的乐器跟你以为我跟的就不一样
00:34:965 (2) - 移动到00:34:797 - 当然如果你这么做了记得去掉whistle 同上
01:29:403 (4) - 这个多出来的clap？ 改了
01:38:336 (2) - 我没听错的话这个红线这里是有clap的 没有，至少我的小电视认为即使有也不足够加clap，现在用normal已经足够了
01:52:325 (3,2) - 我觉得你这两个可以去掉了 与01:50:302 - 对应


[Insane]
00:10:696 (3,4) - 你这种间距给我感觉就是想跳又不想跳出去，放的这样又感觉还不如排的紧凑甚至重叠。用你懂得词就是立定跳楼。 要是图都是爽歪歪的还不都长一个样子，我觉得这可以算花式蛋疼
00:22:156 (1,2) - 我觉得这种你最好横跨整个屏幕 同上
00:26:538 (2,3,4) - 这种根本不适合排多边形啊，当然像五条学姐那样几乎大半个屏幕跳还是可以 不就是这么摆么，或者你摆一个，我打赌比现在的难看
00:29:572 (3) - 这个完全可以不要 理由同其他难度
00:32:269 (3,4) - 这两个还不如换下位置 不要，我之前能FC的，我希望我改了还是能FC
00:59:909 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这一段我说猴，要是那帮家伙有什么问题直接一句你灼热AAA了吗甩过去
01:15:415 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这里我觉得不适应跳，直接复制345按着间距来 基本没看懂，调近了一点
01:23:673 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 这里为什么突然放那么远bfbyw啊，反正我试的时候一下就打中了，也就是坑一坑DT狗
01:29:740 (2) - 去掉 你让我这一大串怎么弄，我再想想
01:36:988 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 这里我也觉得不适合跳的那么远不过你都定型了我估计是不大会换了 这边是滑条+串啊，我觉得老年人都能随便打


最后你是怎么想到用白色做note颜色的，结合那137CM的女主我test的时候白花花一片
人艰不拆，老婆加油

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

實在摸不出什麼;w;
太神了
sry

[Easy]
01:55:864 - remove這個clap? 好

[Insane]
01:23:673 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 試試Ctrl+J, flow比較好 感觉有些重心太偏上，还是算了（

-Asagi wrote:

Hello Flower :3
as requested, sorry for being late
just minor suggestions

[Insane]

1. 00:10:696 (3) - you forgot the water-like hitsound here, i think it fits much better than the bell don't feel like adding them, because I only added that sound corresponding to the music. same for below
2. 00:20:808 (3) - ^
3. 00:38:336 (1) - ^
4. 00:41:033 (1) - ^
5. 00:43:729 (1) - ^ im not gonna point it all out, maybe some of them are intentional
6. 01:13:392 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - the audio here is getting lower and lower here, why not making the spacing is decreasing too? like this? Click not bad, but personally I like to keep it consistent.
7. 01:23:673 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - i dont like the flow break here, how bout ctrl+j? for a circular flow it's less balanced for having too many notes on upper half imo

I checked the other diffs, just nazi stuff, maybe needs a little polish :3
Awesome map :3
Good Luck

1. 01:35:471 (2) - i suppose here could apply a ctrl+g
2. 01:39:684 (3) - ^

1. 00:37:156 (5) - may be a NC here to highlight beat change?