1. I recommend to use normal-hitsound. soft is not suitable for this song

1. for easy-diff, you should conform DS(DistanceSpacing) constantly. for example, 00:12:385 (3,1) - is not good
2. I recommend to set DistanceSnap at all times while mapping
3. for easy-diff, you should not change SV. beginner player is very confused by it
4. why not decrease CS(CircleSize) a little?
5. 00:28:339 (3,5) - avoid overlapping like this
6. 00:52:885 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think it is better to suit to vocal in this part. for example...
   
   in the chorus part of easy-diff, hard to find rhythm, imo. I suggest to suit to vocal more like above
7. 02:16:749- whistle?
8. 03:12:794 (1) - delete

1. for normal-diff, you should comform DS as far as possible, too
2. SV changing from x0.9 to x1.0 is necessary at normal-diff?
3. 00:54:112 (3,4) - it is better to suit to vocal more at the same way as easy. suggetion~
   
4. 02:38:703 (2,3) - I prefer not to stack
5. 03:12:794 (1) - delete. too soon between spinner and next note

1. increase DS overall and avoid overlapping of 1/2 rhythm like 00:09:794 (2,1) -
2. close pattern like 00:25:203 (2,3,4) - is very confusing...
3. 00:33:521- add a note
4. 01:27:794 (1) - many reverse pattern is confusing. how about this?
   
5. 02:46:339 (1) - ^
6. 01:41:430 (2,3) - 1/2 slider is better

1. 01:27:794 (1) - same as hard.
2. 03:47:294 (4) - move to x:392 y:200 (make symmetric pattern)

1. 00:46:476 (2,5) - avoid overlapping like this
2. 01:53:976- custom hitsound is nothing in your mapset?
3. 03:47:021 (1,1,1) - I prefer to remove NC.

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[General]

1. I recommend to use normal-hitsound. soft is not suitable for this song I dont really like the normal hitsounds in this case, as those do not fit with the song properly, plus the high frequency of notes in Extra make it sound very bad.

[Easy]

1. for easy-diff, you should conform DS(DistanceSpacing) constantly. for example, 00:12:385 (3,1) - is not good I decided to remap this intro as it didn't look like the rest of the map
2. I recommend to set DistanceSnap at all times while mapping Well i do...
3. for easy-diff, you should not change SV. beginner player is very confused by it I have used players with less than 200-500 plays to test my map and it is fine and even easy to FC, the kiai parts with 0,1x only slider speed more are the most fun parts as well, or the 0,9x for the calmer part before last kiai time fits well.
4. why not decrease CS(CircleSize) a little? Because i mapped as a CS3 map, so it would look alot different if i changed it
5. 00:28:339 (3,5) - avoid overlapping like this I tried to, but that is hard :S
6. 00:52:885 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think it is better to suit to vocal in this part. for example...
   
   in the chorus part of easy-diff, hard to find rhythm, imo. I suggest to suit to vocal more like above I personally don't like focusing on lyrics, specially in Easy, and Red Ticks on easy are even worse to follow, as well as the way you said, it wouldn't follow the voice part very well as 00:54:112 - is another part of the lyrics, so it would sound bad when playing
7. 02:16:749- whistle? Yea forgot about it there
8. 03:12:794 (1) - delete Ok

Edit (12/10/2014) - As of this day, I redesigned Easy, adding a 1,1x to spacing and fixing those major problems, as well as keep everything 1,0x speed (except for a slow part which is still 0,9x)
[Normal]

1. for normal-diff, you should comform DS as far as possible, too
2. SV changing from x0.9 to x1.0 is necessary at normal-diff? In this case yes, to make the short sliders longer, but it doesn't affect when playing.
3. 00:54:112 (3,4) - it is better to suit to vocal more at the same way as easy. suggetion~ Too many red notes, sorry, but for osu, it is better to follow the beat always.
   
4. 02:38:703 (2,3) - I prefer not to stack I agree
5. 03:12:794 (1) - delete. too soon between spinner and next note Done

[Hard]

1. increase DS overall and avoid overlapping of 1/2 rhythm like 00:09:794 (2,1) - Ahm, i am really not sure if it would ne ok to change overall DS, so if more people say this then i might do it, as the whole map was based to exactly have that 1.0x spacing, though i can fix the overlaps ofc. Edit, took a good hard look on the map and fixed what i saw was wrong.
2. close pattern like 00:25:203 (2,3,4) - is very confusing... Made it even closer
3. 00:33:521- add a note Done, had do change whole pattern ofc
4. 01:27:794 (1) - many reverse pattern is confusing. how about this?
   
   The problem isn't really rhythm wise, its patterns to look good for it, and really, it isn't that confusing, and fits best with lyrics
5. 02:46:339 (1) - ^ ^
6. 01:41:430 (2,3) - 1/2 slider is better Ok

[Insane]

1. 01:27:794 (1) - same as hard. Again it fits better with lyrics, its not confusing, its just a hold.
2. 03:47:294 (4) - move to x:392 y:200 (make symmetric pattern) Yea didn't notice it was placed wrong.

[Extra]

1. 00:46:476 (2,5) - avoid overlapping like this Fixed
2. 01:53:976- custom hitsound is nothing in your mapset? Fixed. This was a mistake, as i was testing different hitsounding for this song, but failed to find a good one, and forgot to edit it.
3. 03:47:021 (1,1,1) - I prefer to remove NC.Ok

you can use "finish-hitsound" much more because of heavy metal!!!
~Good Luck~

KSHR wrote:

Metadata stuff is correct as it is. Good luck.

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"babymetal.jpg",0,125
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

Genocide wrote:

hi from moe request


[Cheese's inner oni]
00:40:067 (215) - don | it's following the pattern imo ~ Changed, also there was a finisher a little bit up ahead that didn't sound right at all!!! I'm surprised to one caught that xD
01:10:339 (445) - K? it's better for me Both really work for me, I have custom hit sounds, so finishers actually sound like crash symbols. If it does seem to flow better, i'll change it.


ok that's all
good luck chocolate

Kazamastar11 wrote:

The Taiko mapset is perfect..
I'm trying to mod the Taiko, but i can't .. It's already perfect.. What to mod ?

Take my star

kamikin wrote:

Hi hi! From my queue!

Easy

1. 01:07:612 (2) - Maybe turn this into a repeat to be consistent with the other sliders Done
2. 00:59:703 (3) - You could copy 00:58:612 (2) - for a more symmetrical pattern fixed
3. 02:41:976 (1) - You need to give an Easy player more recovery time so I suggest ending it at 02:44:158, you could put it a bit father forward though (1-2 ticks) The map already has -40 seconds of total play time so already has too many breaks.
4. 02:46:339 (1) - you could use this to blanket 1 Well it kinda is, just dont see the point in bringing it even closer.
5. 02:50:703 (1) - you could put this where 02:46:339 (1) - ended Didn't do it because of spacing, 02:51:249 (2) - wouldnt be on the same place and i like it there on the y axis
   
   I didn't really find anything wrong in this diff, the only thing it doesn't have are fun sliders
   
   For example

   

True lol, I am not the slider art enthusiast thats why i dont go over myself into making stuff that i dont really like to play. But i will try getting better at it in the future.

Normal

1. AR is a bit high? Fits the BPM and overall speed of the map.
2. Why is there an epilepsy warning when they is no storyboard? No storyboard, but the Video contains flashing colors, that's why.
3. 00:44:158 (1) - This could be made to look better (e.g. having a kink) Ohhh that looks nice, never knew that simple move. Thanks! : D
   
   For example

   
4. 00:46:339 (1) - Same Done
5. 00:47:976 (5,2) - Overlap fixed
6. 00:54:112 (3) - The second part of this doesn't map a sound, it's also confusing to play 00:54:112 - There is a Drum Kick here, 00:54:249 - There is a Drum Snare here. Although you say it is confusing, i need more modders to confirm this because i've tested with other low rank players and they did it just fine, not to mention it's a Normal and not Easy.
7. 01:02:839 (4,6,7) - these are also confusing, some parts map things in the song and some don't I can assure you it follows the song.
8. 01:07:203 (3) - Same ^
9. 01:08:294 (2) - Maybe extend it to 01:08:567 using a repeat or just making the slider longer, you could do that for all that I mentioned above as it makes it, in my opinion, less awkward to play 01:08:430 - Then it would miss this snare for hitsound. So it follows the song better.
10. 01:25:612 (1,2) - kinks? kinky
11. 01:29:976 (1) - You could make this blanket 2 No because it always overlaps 01:31:885 (4) - , so instead i made it blanket 01:29:703 (4) -
12. 01:32:158 (1,2,3,4) - Here is an example of 1/4 sliders I don't find awkward to play as they follow an obvious sound in the song Those are easy to follow because those aren't so close to each other, and it doesn't really follow the beat, follows more of the vocals.
13. 01:37:749 (4) - ^ This is the same as all the others, why is it easier for you to follow now? Could it be that you got used to the map? Maybe that was why it was strange at first because it was different from usual.
14. 03:04:339 (2) - Little kink ok
15. 03:05:430 (2,2) - ^ ^
16. 03:11:430 (1) - Move the start to 03:11:294 Fixed
17. 03:14:158 (3) - Use a copied version of 03:13:067 (1) - to make it more symmetrical-ish -ish done
18. 03:19:612 (4) - Turn into a repeat slider for consistency Fixed, i guess, needed to redesign that part to fit the rest of the map.
19. 03:22:476 (3) - It might be that I'm the only one with issues when itcomes to this So far yes, but it's ok to mention it.
20. 03:28:339 (2) - Copy and paste 03:27:249 (2) - I thought i had, fixed.
21. 03:46:885 (1) - I would add a clap+finish at the end Yea, ok.

Hard

1. 00:46:885 (1,2) - These don't fit the pattern, maybe make them repeat sliders? No, i think those are fine, though what i could do is some kinks! (Believe it or not it worked lol)
2. 01:27:249 (3) - Doesn't fit the pattern Gave it a little shape and now it fits haha
3. 02:04:339 (5) - This is close to my health bar, maybe move it down a smidge? Ok
4. 02:09:658 (4) - ^ Done
5. 02:29:976 (4) - Move it up by one as the start is a bit lower than the end of 2 My mistake.
6. 02:50:703 (1,2,1,2) - I don't think these should have repeats as it brings more focus to the sharpness of the lyrics if you do I like it that way, its better for playing
7. 02:53:430 (3) - make this curved as well Mini curve done!
   
   I didn't see much wrong with hard (I don't map them very often )

I couldn't mod Insane and Extra as I cant play them, BUT!!! I think you should give Extra a custom name (e.g. ChOcOlAtE) I hate custom difficulty names like that, i like it simple as it is now.

I hope I was useful!

Owntrolf wrote:

Im not even sure How I mod this .-. sry if its bad

General
It looks like when the vocals are on the mapping is better but then when its off I get confused at which one you're trying to follow
I guess the parts i mapped more with vocals were the kiai times.

Easy
I think it would be better to use all 1/1 instead of using all these strange feeling 3/2 slider
No, that would be boring.

Normal[b]
01:02:430 (3,4,6,7) - I think its best to stick with 1/1 circles Again.i think that is boring and also not that forgiving to beginners.
01:40:339 (4,2) - Nazistack Ok


[b]Insane
00:19:612 (4) - I think this starts too early That wasn't actually the problem, it should repeat actually only 2 times instead of 4 and add a circle to the next slider to follow the rhythm better.

Extra
00:58:749 - Is it missing a note here? No, that would be following the voice and that wasn't my plan
01:03:112 - ^ ^
01:16:749 (1,2) - Blanketnazi Yes
01:23:158 (8) - Maybe separate a little bit more from 6,7 so they're not touching Fixed

Theres some other parts that feel like theyre missing a note

02:04:476 - Maybe map this part to suit the special effects .-. them pew pews No because i mapped all with the beat so that would mean i would have to change every single one of these and i like to follow the beat better.
02:18:794 (7,1) - Naziblanket Ok

Fort wrote:

hello. cool song

Extra:
- okay "overlaps is cute" hahaha
-- lots of this blaketed slider has didnt blanketed perfectly (idk you just do it or just an accident) Accident XD
--- some combo are inconsistant lot of them is messy, i didnt really know your pattern if you doing this Fixed, as seen below.
---- some overlap is not really fun to play, or just reducing aesthetic in this map If you could tell me a specific pattern like this i woulld at least know what you were talking about and fix the rest.
----- Nice pattern, im appreciate this mapping thing. and pls keep your patterning thing

00:11:294 (2) - why no NC this? (you just NC both of this sliders 00:10:203 (1,1) - ) Because i don't like 2 combo color stacks, doesn't look good imo
00:13:612 (6,1) - NC 6 pls, it has finish hitsound Did that and fixed the whole pattern around that area as well.
NC is messy i think, so keep your NC consistant with your own pattern I fixed all of the combo colors yay!
02:20:294 (3,3,3,3) - i think add 1 reverse arrow sound good, since you mapped this slider 02:21:794 (1,1) - have 3/4 stream pattern, i think you need to do this Well as long as it doesn't combo break im fine with it, but only if it doesnt affect the difficulty of the jump streams.
02:26:158 (9) - make this 2 sliders of this http://puu.sh/femun/e17ced2fee.jpg (i hear some strong guitar sound in 02:26:430 - Done, also had to increase spacing on the next stream, wasn't on purpose, it's just so it slightly fits back to the rest of the map. Also noticed previous stream was missing grid snap off.
02:37:612 (1,1,1,1) - GOD SLIDERS !!! OMG so good lol imo they are copy paste xD

pm me if you get 3 mods i will check it again

[Animeniac] wrote:

This mapping is great! I'm really impressed. I love Babymetal and I'm really glad to see this mapped. been playing a while, figured I'd reply and let you know the map's good.

Naitoshi wrote:

Short lil mod from queue~ late sooorry
[General]
I think you could make more use of the normal sampleset throughout all diffs. those hitsounds are kind of quiet


[Easy]
you're using ~1.10ds throughout right? Yes
00:09:249 (1,2) - fix spacing between these two? Fixed
02:18:249 (3,1) - get rid of this overlap somehow? It's visible in game and looks a bit messy It doesn't overlap ingame, and its really far from each other in timing, the pattern itself wouldn't let me.

not sure how to mod easies

[Normal]
00:58:612 (3,4) - fix blanket if that's what you were going for Ok
01:04:339 (1,1) - the overlap looks a bit messy Fixed i guess...
01:40:339 (4,2) - I'm alright with it but I feel that this might confuse normal players The map has been playtested by beginners and they played fine.
01:47:703 (1) - Maybe move to x:253 y:234 ? It's a bit more on the ds but the triangle looks kinda cool Fixed but with different coordinates

saaame

[Hard]
01:07:612 (6,7,1,2) - I don't recommend changing up the rhythm like that as it could confuse the player expecting to click on the strong offbeat

try this rhythm?

Ok

Heh hard is my least-explored diff >.< ...

[Insane]
00:23:294 (1) - Maybe move this? It's like smack-dab in the middle of some other objects. Makes it look a bit messy The problem is i don't really know where to put it.
00:29:430 (5) - try just one repeat and then a circle? The second repeat just seems to be confusing; it lacks direction.The circle you could stack here 00:30:112 (1) - Cause 1/1 pauses are the best I stacked here 00:29:158 (2) -
01:07:339 (7,9) - I don't recommend stacking these. It stops the flow a bit Stacked on the next slider then.
01:45:658 (2) - uncurve this a bit for visual appeal? It's fine

EX

01:54:521 (3,4) - if this is supposed to be a blanket, it could be better K

bad EX

http://puu.sh/flLV1/3bef7cd11a.jpg

02:01:476 (3) - make this a 1/1 slider to go along with the vocal? No, its to fit the Cymbal and no beat.
02:12:794 (2) - Uncurve for visual appeal? Did something different

EX

02:20:158 - give this section some sort of hitsounding. For a guitar solo there should at least be some impact one clicking circles. Literally 17 seconds without hitsounds lol I would if i only had better hitsounds for this song, because the ones in osu are terrible for this song.
03:18:249 (5) - don't stack this? It's fine
03:24:249 (4) - ^ Stacked on next slider then

[Extra]
00:54:249 (5,7) - again. slider end stacks like this just give really awkward flow to a map. create some sort of jumps? Kinda, just made it stack to the next slider
02:52:885 (1,2,3,4) - for these you could use one slider and copy/paste ctrl J+H so they'd all look the same Ok

EX

03:11:294 (1) - finish spinner like in other diffs? Forgot about it
03:03:794 (1) - finish this? Ok
03:08:158 (1) - ^ ^

Over all I think that there should be more impactful hitsounds and, well, more hitsounds in general, though I'm not sure how to go about the specifics... If i knew other hitsounds to add to the map i would to make it better, bu havent really found them yet.

Sorry for short bad mod Hope I helped even a little bit >.>

Fun maps gl!

1. Missing video on all taiko diifs
2. Disable letterbox on osu! mapsets or enable on taiko mapsets.
3. Use more blanketing and improve patterns on Easy and Normal.

1. 02:45:794 (1) - Remove to have safe recovery time after spinner.

1. Set Distance snapping to 1.1 x to avoid overlapping.

1. Why not replace shakers with drumrolls instead?

Neil Leo wrote:

From NLOMQ, as you requested:
[General]

1. Missing video on all taiko diifs It's intentional
2. Disable letterbox on osu! mapsets or enable on taiko mapsets. ^
3. Use more blanketing and improve patterns on Easy and Normal. That's too vague, you should at least say where it needs the blanketing instead of saying just that.

[Easy]

1. 02:45:794 (1) - Remove to have safe recovery time after spinner. Ok

[Hard]

1. Set Distance snapping to 1.1 x to avoid overlapping. It was already 1.1x

1. tick rate 2 fits with this song best
2. 00:11:158 (1) - remove this whistle and add it on next slider's head to follow your hitsound pattern
3. 00:28:680 (8) - since there isn't any proper sound for this note how about removing? and i prefer 5 notes stream rather than 7 notes lol (pls chekc 02:17:771 (9) - this as well)
4. 00:50:021 (1) - removing this note fits with the vocal better, current one feels kind of weird because you didn't add notes at 00:48:930 - here and 00:49:476 - here.
5. 01:10:885 (4,5,6,1) - according to the guitar sound, it would be better if these objects have same distance among them.
   
   example

   
6. 01:42:521 (1,4) - swap NC for consistency
7. 02:04:749 (2,3) - i recommend you to reverse this rhythm by using ctrl g. it seems that you followed the guitar sound while mapping, but i think following the mainstream sound feels better because i (and maybe most of players) can rarely hear the guitar sound because its volume is too low. oh and you'd better fix the same sliders like 02:09:112 (1) - and 02:13:476 (2) - etc. as well
8. 02:23:567 (16) - consider adding NC for rhythm change
9. 02:32:158 (11) - ^
10. 02:36:521 (5) - ^
    
    
    overall, some of sudden empty spaces (00:58:749 - or 03:28:203 - etc.) make me feel uncomfortable, they doesn't fit with the song well and seem out of place, so i highly recommend adding some objects to feel them up. i also think adjustments on NC are needed even it's the highest diff on this mapset because some of NCs look randomly

Alex Li wrote:

from paper modding team
wtf this group lololol

Easy

1. 00:09:249 (1) - I think a soft finish is better than a whistle here because the bgm is more like a whistle(if you fixed this plz fix them all) Are you referring to start or finish of slider? All maps start with a soft finish and at that particular red tick it's a whistle.
2. I think you need a drum sound for your clap Wish i could find a good one, honestly...
3. 01:46:885 (3,4) - weird pattern, suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2696465 done
4. 02:08:430 (3,4,5) - ds Ok

Normal

1. ai mod and check ds Those are intentional.
2. 00:23:703 (4,5,6) - ds Fixed
3. 00:45:794 (5,2) - ... Redid the pattern.
4. 00:47:976 (5,1) - stack Don't understand why...
5. 02:37:067 (1) - why nc Yea removed it...
6. 03:08:158 (1,1) - ... Stacked it then.

Hard

1. 00:14:021 (2,1) - ... Fixed
2. 00:16:203 (3,4,5,1) - ds Fixed
3. 00:32:430 (2) - idk if its allowed in hard It is, so are triples or small streams.
4. 00:53:839 (1) - you should add a soft finish for thins kind of bgm here(same as other diff) I'll think of doing a more heavy hitsounding then once i find new sounds for it as well...
5. 00:55:339 (2,3,4,1) - not a square Fixed
6. 00:55:749 (3,4,2,3) - ... And reworked the pattern.
7. 00:57:249 (4,5) - ... This one hsa to stay though
8. 01:00:385 (1,2) - same as 3 What did you mean by this?
9. 02:07:885 (4,2,1,2) - ... something like this really hurts my brain Don't think what i did was much better, but stacked it on the reversing small slider.
10. 02:10:203 (1,5) - ^^^^^ Stacked.
11. 03:19:749 (4,1) - blanket No
12. 03:22:067 (3,3,1,2) - ... won't say problem like this any more because there is too much of them (in Insane and extra too)
13. 03:33:112 (4,4) - blanket maybe? Wouldn't look that well honestly

Insane

1. 00:28:203 (3,1) - blanket Ok
2. 01:02:567 (6,7) - ^ It's fine as it is
3. 01:06:930 (6,8) - so weird Fixed
4. 01:49:203 (4,1) - blanket It's fine
5. 01:54:521 (3,4) - blanket ^
6. 02:02:839 (1,2) - blanket It's fine, but i did notice circle 2 and slider 2 weren't on the same line
7. 02:10:203 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - ... ds Fixed
8. 03:09:249 (1,2,3,4) - not square fixed, and some patterns around that area
9. 03:22:067 (4,4) - stack Ok
10. 03:30:658 (4,5) - blanket Done i guess...
11. 03:44:839 (2,5) - blanket It's ok as it is

Extra

1. 00:19:476 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - blanket https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2696831 Made it parallel instead.
2. 00:28:544 (6,1) - stack Stream is better.
3. 00:32:022 (2,4,5,6,7,8) - stack https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2696835 Ups didn't notice this until now, fixed.
4. 00:37:203 (2,2) - stack Done, and blanketed.
5. 02:36:521 (5) - idk if this is allowed now It could be.
6. 03:46:885 (1,2,3,4) - not square Fixed

others

should improve on the patterns
other than the patterns are okay

HelloSCV wrote:

from my queue

[Extral]

1. tick rate 2 fits with this song best I guess it would fit the map as well because of lots of 1/1 sliders.
2. 00:11:158 (1) - remove this whistle and add it on next slider's head to follow your hitsound pattern Mistake, fixed.
3. 00:28:680 (8) - since there isn't any proper sound for this note how about removing? and i prefer 5 notes stream rather than 7 notes lol (pls chekc 02:17:771 (9) - this as well) Alright, fixed both.
4. 00:50:021 (1) - removing this note fits with the vocal better, current one feels kind of weird because you didn't add notes at 00:48:930 - here and 00:49:476 - here. Removed then.
5. 01:10:885 (4,5,6,1) - according to the guitar sound, it would be better if these objects have same distance among them. I did a better jump between circle 6 and slider 1, It is waaaay better now.
   
   example

   
6. 01:42:521 (1,4) - swap NC for consistency Ok
7. 02:04:749 (2,3) - i recommend you to reverse this rhythm by using ctrl g. it seems that you followed the guitar sound while mapping, but i think following the mainstream sound feels better because i (and maybe most of players) can rarely hear the guitar sound because its volume is too low. oh and you'd better fix the same sliders like 02:09:112 (1) - and 02:13:476 (2) - etc. as well I don't agree with this, as following the rhythm as it was now was more simple when playing as you would be clicking to the beat and hold on the guitar.
8. 02:23:567 (16) - consider adding NC for rhythm change Done
9. 02:32:158 (11) - ^ ^ And moved the circle behind slider to stack on top of next slider.
10. 02:36:521 (5) - ^ Fixed
    
    
    overall, some of sudden empty spaces (00:58:749 - or 03:28:203 - etc.) make me feel uncomfortable, they doesn't fit with the song well and seem out of place, so i highly recommend adding some objects to feel them up. i also think adjustments on NC are needed even it's the highest diff on this mapset because some of NCs look randomly Alright, made some mapping on those empty bits and fixed the combo colors.

i'll finish this by tomorrow

-Anhedonia- wrote:

I deserve honor.

SPOILER

http://puu.sh/fxnPN/eb4c871d8f.txt

1. Remove epilepsy warning and widescreen support on all diff since there's no storyboard
2. Those which still have 5% volume in every diff since it's unrankable. Raise those for around 15% volume

1. 00:09:249 (1,2) - Turn those into 1/2 slider to keep the rhythm consistency
2. 00:10:203 (1,2,3,4,5) - You can tweak the pattern to make better flow on this, for example
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:11:294 (2,3) - This is the example on how the pattern will make it uncomfortable to play. The two sliders doesn't align well that it makes an awkward flow. Let's see how it works here
   
   SPOILER

   
   Normally the flow will go following the blue line, but here, the pattern enforce player to follow the sharp turn indicated by the orange flow and getting a very sharp turn on the next slider (and that overlap as well, in addition), which is really awkward. Well, there's always an exception but I think it's not really fit in this case
4. 00:13:612 (1,2) - Problematic flow here as well, actually pattern on 00:13:067 (4,5,1) - make a good flow with each slider's tail facing to another slider's head, so why not figuring another nice pattern from this?
5. 00:16:749 (1,2,3,4) - Judging from the spacing rate on this diff, the spacing between these notes is kinda mediocre so mind make it bigger?
6. 00:18:930 (1) - ctrl+J then move it a bit, to make the flow better (or let me know if you can figure out a better pattern)
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:20:430 (2,3,4,5,1) - Let's tweak it out, shall we?
   Before:
   
   SPOILER

   
   After:
   
   SPOILER

   
   The rest can follow lol
8. 00:22:885 (3,4) - Cmon, I don't see any reason to stack those. I find the flow kinda bad that way (btw 00:23:158 (1,2) - is fine because I agree it's a good place to put an antijump)
9. 00:26:976 (2,3,4,5,6) - It's crowded srsly, and it's not good to put much sharp flows in such small area imo. If you wanna keep it, try to make the spacing bigger
10. 00:31:885 (1,2) - Try giving some thought into it?
    
    SPOILER

    
11. 00:36:112 (5,6) - It's not that good to start the sliders on the red tick in this case, while the strong beat is located on the white tick. Bring the click action into the white tick instead. There's some more example where the white tick is emphasized with a slider tail, which doesn't feel right
    00:37:885 (1,2,3) -
    00:40:067 (3,4) -
12. 00:50:021 (1) - Why there's a circle here while 00:48:385 00:48:930 00:49:476 doesn't have any? Try to be consistent or it will make an awkward rhythm otherwise
13. 00:58:749 Inconsistent rhythm here
14. 01:00:112 (4,5) - ctrl+G to make the flow a little bit better
15. 01:01:612 (1) - Move to x:356|y:236 since I can't bear watching an awkward flow anymore
16. 01:03:112 I don't know if this is intended or not but one thing I believe is it will be a better rhythm if you at least put any note here. Letting it noteless makes the rhythm sounds awkward
17. 01:28:885 Why you have to leave this stanza without note? Generally it's a serious rhythm problem since the strong beat is usually located there. Btw I don't blame vocal mapping on 01:27:930 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - but really, following drum always better on this kind of genre since you'll always know which one has a strong beat and which one isn't
18. 01:39:658 (1) - Move it further from 01:39:112 (3) - because of strong beat, otherwise it will feel like an antijump
19. 02:36:521 (5) - Maybe it sounds a bit rude, but wtf with this slider. Pls make a consistent zigzag on the anchor or it would be unrankable

1. 00:48:249 (6) - If this is a vocal mapping, change it to circle. If it's a drum mapping, keep it. But since rhythm before and after this is a vocal mapping, then change it to circle instead
2. 00:50:567 (1,2) - In case you intend to do a vocal mapping, this is an overmap so delete it
3. 01:27:794 (1) - Bring more click action, bring less uncreative repeating slider
4. 01:45:385 (1,2) - Try not to start slider on the red tick, for example you can put circle on 01:45:385 and the rest of sliders beginning from 01:45:521
5. 02:05:839 (1,2) - Personally I'd like it to be overlapped like this
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 02:29:567 Add note here since I don't see any reason to leave it empty, it will help the flow actually
7. Unused green timing points on 02:38:430 02:38:703 02:39:521 and blabla, you can find the rest by rechecking all diff
8. 03:05:294 (5,6,1,2,3,1,2) - I don't like an out of place vocal mapping, really. Just look for the reference on 03:08:158 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
9. 03:41:294 (5,6) - Sliders on red tick, start those from 03:41:158 and move the circle to 03:41:703 instead (well, the rest of vocal mapping on this section is fine)

1. 00:11:976 (4,5,6) - This kind of antijump in hard diff is annoying imo, why these are the only one with lower than 1.0x spacing while the others have mostly more than 1.0x spacing anyway. While the song contains of high beat sound, this kind of spacing really make this diff feels really mediocre. More of them
   00:29:567 (3,4) -
   00:34:885 (1,2,3,4,5) -
   00:44:158 (1,2,3,4) -
   00:45:521 (7,8,9) -
   01:29:158 (3,4,5) -
   01:31:339 (4,5,6) -
   01:38:158 (3,4) -
   etc.
2. 00:54:794 (4,1) - You should put more spacing here, the current spacing feels so awkward. More of them
   00:57:249 (1,2) -
   01:05:976 (1,2) -
   01:40:885 (1,2) -
   01:49:612 (6,1) -
   etc.

1. Having multiple SV in normal diff is not encouraged, so make all the SV to be 1.00x please
2. 01:07:203 (3,4) - Spacing inconsistency, we have an unwritten rule that a normal diff should have a consistent spacing throughout the diff (which means change the pattern as well). More of them
   01:07:885 (5,6) -
   01:44:294 (8,9) -
   03:03:794 (1,2) -

1. Here as well, make all the SV to be 1.00x please

El SolarBeam wrote:

[General]

1. Remove epilepsy warning and widescreen support on all diff since there's no storyboard It's for the video, not the sb
2. Those which still have 5% volume in every diff since it's unrankable. Raise those for around 15% volume Ok

[Extra]

So, the main problem here is how the flow to be turn out since there's some incomfortable turn between notes. Anyway let's just see what I can do for you

1. 00:09:249 (1,2) - Turn those into 1/2 slider to keep the rhythm consistency Turned everything to circles then, it was better.
2. 00:10:203 (1,2,3,4,5) - You can tweak the pattern to make better flow on this, for example Fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:11:294 (2,3) - This is the example on how the pattern will make it uncomfortable to play. The two sliders doesn't align well that it makes an awkward flow. Let's see how it works here
   
   SPOILER

   
   Normally the flow will go following the blue line, but here, the pattern enforce player to follow the sharp turn indicated by the orange flow and getting a very sharp turn on the next slider (and that overlap as well, in addition), which is really awkward. Well, there's always an exception but I think it's not really fit in this case Inverted then
4. 00:13:612 (1,2) - Problematic flow here as well, actually pattern on 00:13:067 (4,5,1) - make a good flow with each slider's tail facing to another slider's head, so why not figuring another nice pattern from this? Slider 1 and 2 are supposed to break the flow here. to change rotation.
5. 00:16:749 (1,2,3,4) - Judging from the spacing rate on this diff, the spacing between these notes is kinda mediocre so mind make it bigger? Inverted selection of circle 2 and 3 so it no longer gives that illusion.
6. 00:18:930 (1) - ctrl+J then move it a bit, to make the flow better (or let me know if you can figure out a better pattern) What you did is good, i'll keep that.
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:20:430 (2,3,4,5,1) - Let's tweak it out, shall we?
   Before:
   
   SPOILER

   
   After:
   
   SPOILER

   
   The rest can follow lol fixed
8. 00:22:885 (3,4) - Cmon, I don't see any reason to stack those. I find the flow kinda bad that way (btw 00:23:158 (1,2) - is fine because I agree it's a good place to put an antijump) Replaced with slider then.
9. 00:26:976 (2,3,4,5,6) - It's crowded srsly, and it's not good to put much sharp flows in such small area imo. If you wanna keep it, try to make the spacing bigger Fixed and changed the order of the jumps
10. 00:31:885 (1,2) - Try giving some thought into it?Fixed
    
    SPOILER

    
11. 00:36:112 (5,6) - It's not that good to start the sliders on the red tick in this case, while the strong beat is located on the white tick. Bring the click action into the white tick instead. There's some more example where the white tick is emphasized with a slider tail, which doesn't feel right In this case it's to fit the strong guitar. Which is more noticeable than the beat
    00:37:885 (1,2,3) -
    00:40:067 (3,4) -
12. 00:50:021 (1) - Why there's a circle here while 00:48:385 00:48:930 00:49:476 doesn't have any? Try to be consistent or it will make an awkward rhythm otherwise Yea this was fixed already. Sorry
13. 00:58:749 Inconsistent rhythm here Here you probably mentioned something that i fixed already as well from the previous mod.
14. 01:00:112 (4,5) - ctrl+G to make the flow a little bit better ^
15. 01:01:612 (1) - Move to x:356|y:236 since I can't bear watching an awkward flow anymore Fixed
16. 01:03:112 I don't know if this is intended or not but one thing I believe is it will be a better rhythm if you at least put any note here. Letting it noteless makes the rhythm sounds awkward I already had
17. 01:28:885 Why you have to leave this stanza without note? Generally it's a serious rhythm problem since the strong beat is usually located there. Btw I don't blame vocal mapping on 01:27:930 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - but really, following drum always better on this kind of genre since you'll always know which one has a strong beat and which one isn't Fine, replaced circle 7 with a short slider, though it will be a big jump.
18. 01:39:658 (1) - Move it further from 01:39:112 (3) - because of strong beat, otherwise it will feel like an antijump Ok
19. 02:36:521 (5) - Maybe it sounds a bit rude, but wtf with this slider. Pls make a consistent zigzag on the anchor or it would be unrankable I'll get help with this later then

[Insane]

1. 00:48:249 (6) - If this is a vocal mapping, change it to circle. If it's a drum mapping, keep it. But since rhythm before and after this is a vocal mapping, then change it to circle instead I just replaced with 2 circles then, as it will start a rhythm change.
2. 00:50:567 (1,2) - In case you intend to do a vocal mapping, this is an overmap so delete it That wasn't vocal mapping.
3. 01:27:794 (1) - Bring more click action, bring less uncreative repeating slider I guess, fixed
4. 01:45:385 (1,2) - Try not to start slider on the red tick, for example you can put circle on 01:45:385 and the rest of sliders beginning from 01:45:521 Ok, reversed the sliders as well.
5. 02:05:839 (1,2) - Personally I'd like it to be overlapped like this Yea that looks ok, fixed.
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 02:29:567 Add note here since I don't see any reason to leave it empty, it will help the flow actually Ok
7. Unused green timing points on 02:38:430 02:38:703 02:39:521 and blabla, you can find the rest by rechecking all diff fixed
8. 03:05:294 (5,6,1,2,3,1,2) - I don't like an out of place vocal mapping, really. Just look for the reference on 03:08:158 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Ok
9. 03:41:294 (5,6) - Sliders on red tick, start those from 03:41:158 and move the circle to 03:41:703 instead (well, the rest of vocal mapping on this section is fine) All the sliders around that part are on red ticks, so im not changing that

[Hard]

1. 00:11:976 (4,5,6) - This kind of antijump in hard diff is annoying imo, why these are the only one with lower than 1.0x spacing while the others have mostly more than 1.0x spacing anyway. While the song contains of high beat sound, this kind of spacing really make this diff feels really mediocre. More of them I'm not changing these, most people liked it specially since it's 220bpms its like really slow streams, lot's of hard players can't single tap them yet, and it's even better when using DT.
   00:29:567 (3,4) -
   00:34:885 (1,2,3,4,5) -
   00:44:158 (1,2,3,4) -
   00:45:521 (7,8,9) -
   01:29:158 (3,4,5) -
   01:31:339 (4,5,6) -
   01:38:158 (3,4) -
   etc.
2. 00:54:794 (4,1) - You should put more spacing here, the current spacing feels so awkward. More of them These are also staying, i didn't want to abuse spacing on hard difficulty, the slider speed is hard enough for it.
   00:57:249 (1,2) -
   01:05:976 (1,2) -
   01:40:885 (1,2) -
   01:49:612 (6,1) -
   etc.

Nah, this spacing and pattern style is out of my specialty. Try to find chinese modder instead, they might understand better than me in this case

[Normal]

1. Having multiple SV in normal diff is not encouraged, so make all the SV to be 1.00x please Ok
2. 01:07:203 (3,4) - Spacing inconsistency, we have an unwritten rule that a normal diff should have a consistent spacing throughout the diff (which means change the pattern as well). More of them Yea i know these, but i am still not sure if because being small sliders it is ok to add them like that. Though i fixed the other 2.
   01:07:885 (5,6) -
   01:44:294 (8,9) -
   03:03:794 (1,2) -

[Easy]

1. Here as well, make all the SV to be 1.00x please Fixed

Well then, not much problem on EZ and NM so I'll just leave the blanket and hitsound checking to other modders, since I don't like being fussy for every small things. Hope this helps~

1. disable the epilepsy warning and wide screen support on all of diffs, they are needed when diff has stroyboard

1. AR -1, current AR seems a bit faster than i expected
2. other opinions are the same with Normal diff

1. using tick rate 2 on low diffs isn't really good idea because they are a bit annoying
2. also, using various distance snap isn't recommended unless it has consistent pattern so how about fixing 01:02:839 (4,5,6) - this kind of patterns?
3. keeping consistency on low diffs (Easy and Normal) is really important (at the least i think) so try adjusting NCs on this diff
   
   i wish this diff had more 1/2 beats

1. 00:11:976 (4,5,6,1) - anti jump makes the diff hard. i don't recommend using this type of anti jump on hard diff unless it fits really nicely with the song because it's kind of weird and hard pattern
2. 00:25:203 (5,6,1) - ^ and this just looks like a kind of triplet in my opinion
   
   well there are more anti jumps on this diff, i hope that all of them are fixed. but oh well it's just my opinion, which can be different with most of players, so you don't have to fix them. just consider it. i won't mention it from now on
3. 01:18:521 (1) - what about spliting this into 2 1/2 sliders? it would be better if you fix this kind of sliders on latter part of this song, like 01:27:794 (1) - , 01:29:976 (1) - . etc (except 02:26:703 (1,2,3,4) - these lol)
   
   example

   
4. 03:37:885 (2) - add NC for consistency
   
   same overall opinion as other diffs

1. 00:28:339 (4) - i think 1/4 slider with a repeat and a note are better. since you mostly used triplet or 1/4 slider with a repeat arrow, this slider feels kind of weird
   
   try this

   
2. 00:29:839 (7) - missed whistle
3. 00:48:521 (1) - , 00:50:703 (3) - , etc. i'm not sure if these objects are intended to be there without whistle. you added them on Extra diff and the latter part of this diff
4. 01:10:067 (1) - stacking it with 01:09:385 (2) - this feels a bit better than current one. well it's just my feeling of this part
5. 01:23:430 (1) - whistle
6. 02:05:839 (1,2) - this sudden anti jump may cause confusion to players because they look like a kind of 1/4 beats, so that most of players notice them as 1/4 beat pattern
7. 02:17:430 (3) - same opinion as 00:28:339 (4) -
8. 02:32:158 (1) - i'm not sure this type of slider is still acceptable, try adjusting that slider's shape for sure
9. 03:03:794 (1) - add finish?
10. 03:11:158 (4) - ^ on slider's tail
11. 03:29:976 (1) - ^ on slider's head at this time
12. 03:38:703 (1) - dividing this slider into a 1/2 slider and a note would be better due to the vocal sound
    
    some adjustments on NC, empty space and hitsound are needed like Extra as well

HelloSCV wrote:

here's the rest

[General]

1. disable the epilepsy warning and wide screen support on all of diffs, they are needed when diff has stroyboard No because of video.

[Easy]

1. AR -1, current AR seems a bit faster than i expected Ok
2. other opinions are the same with Normal diff

[Normal]

1. using tick rate 2 on low diffs isn't really good idea because they are a bit annoying Ok, changed it back
2. also, using various distance snap isn't recommended unless it has consistent pattern so how about fixing 01:02:839 (4,5,6) - this kind of patterns? Fine i fixed these finally
3. keeping consistency on low diffs (Easy and Normal) is really important (at the least i think) so try adjusting NCs on this diff Done
   
   i wish this diff had more 1/2 beats

[Hard]

1. 00:11:976 (4,5,6,1) - anti jump makes the diff hard. i don't recommend using this type of anti jump on hard diff unless it fits really nicely with the song because it's kind of weird and hard pattern I want to keep these, but i fixed the distancing that was wrong.
2. 00:25:203 (5,6,1) - ^ and this just looks like a kind of triplet in my opinion Fixed the distance as well
   
   well there are more anti jumps on this diff, i hope that all of them are fixed. but oh well it's just my opinion, which can be different with most of players, so you don't have to fix them. just consider it. i won't mention it from now on
3. 01:18:521 (1) - what about spliting this into 2 1/2 sliders? it would be better if you fix this kind of sliders on latter part of this song, like 01:27:794 (1) - , 01:29:976 (1) - . etc (except 02:26:703 (1,2,3,4) - these lol) Fixed
   
   example

   
4. 03:37:885 (2) - add NC for consistency Fixed
   
   same overall opinion as other diffs

[Insane]

1. 00:28:339 (4) - i think 1/4 slider with a repeat and a note are better. since you mostly used triplet or 1/4 slider with a repeat arrow, this slider feels kind of weird The sole purpose of this particular slider is to avoid repeting patterns, so it gives more diversity, but ok changed it to that.
   
   try this

   
2. 00:29:839 (7) - missed whistle Done
3. 00:48:521 (1) - , 00:50:703 (3) - , etc. i'm not sure if these objects are intended to be there without whistle. you added them on Extra diff and the latter part of this diff Forgot about these, and also i was going to look for better hitsounds to add on this mapset aanyway.
4. 01:10:067 (1) - stacking it with 01:09:385 (2) - this feels a bit better than current one. well it's just my feeling of this part Yea, could work.
5. 01:23:430 (1) - whistle Ok
6. 02:05:839 (1,2) - this sudden anti jump may cause confusion to players because they look like a kind of 1/4 beats, so that most of players notice them as 1/4 beat pattern Maybe not, because i haven't dont any sort of slider like that so far, so if more people complain then i will change.
7. 02:17:430 (3) - same opinion as 00:28:339 (4) - Ok
8. 02:32:158 (1) - i'm not sure this type of slider is still acceptable, try adjusting that slider's shape for sure Fixed the shape only a bit, but i am maintaing the wiggles.
9. 03:03:794 (1) - add finish? Forgot, done.
10. 03:11:158 (4) - ^ on slider's tail Ok
11. 03:29:976 (1) - ^ on slider's head at this time Ok
12. 03:38:703 (1) - dividing this slider into a 1/2 slider and a note would be better due to the vocal sound Seems good, fixed
    
    some adjustments on NC, empty space and hitsound are needed like Extra as well Done.

good luck

Nwolf wrote:

what did you do to the stream in the Inner Oni .-.