1. Easy (1,62 stars, 107 notes)
2. Hard (3,1 stars, 212 notes)
3. Insane (4,1 stars, 351 notes)
4. Normal (1,83 stars, 118 notes)

Mashiro-tan ♥

Marinska wrote:

Mashiro-tan...

woooo...

Insane

00:05:249 - i think better like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1490846
and 00:05:624 - slider like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1490850
00:29:436 (4) - x:244 y:104 ?
01:02:061 (2) - x:392 y:192 ?
01:02:624 (5) - x:240

sheela901 wrote:

Hey. M4M request.

[General]
Pour les hitsounds, tu peux mettre des claps à chaque note qui sont sur la deuxième et quatrième tiges blanches, des finishs sur les grandes tiges blanches. Je ferait sa plus tard quand j'aurais le temps

[Easy]
00:07:874 (1) - Bouge-la vers x:100 y:156. Ok
00:09:374 (3) - Tu peux fix la blanket en bougeant le deuxième carré vers x:364 y:168 et la dernière vers x:340 y:248. Cette suggestion va affecter la distance entre 00:10:874 (1) , alors bouge-le vers x:172 y:268. Ok
00:12:374 (4) - Il peut avoir la même motif du slider 00:13:124 (5) . Peut-être quelque chose comme ça: Ok

SPOILER

00:15:749 (4) - Courber cet slider en le bougeant vers x:156 y:56, le deuxième carré vers x:248 y:40 et le dernier vers x:320 y:96. Il doit être comme ça: Ok

SPOILER

00:18:374 (4) - Met le second carré en rouge en maintenant Ctrl et en cliquant le carré. Ok
00:19:124 (5) - Bouge le dernier carré vers x:272 y:142 pour que la queue soit sur la même ligne que la tête. Ok
00:19:874 (6) - Met le second carré en rouge et met la new combo et enlève la new combo de 00:20:624 (1) . Ok
00:21:374 (2) - Fix le slider en bougeant le deuxième carré vers x:194 y:221 et la troisième vers x:194 y:81. Ok
00:24:374 (6) - Copier 00:22:874 (4) et faisez Ctrl+H et Ctrl+J et bouge la vers x:156 y:161. Ok
00:27:749 (4,5) - Essayer celui-ci: Ok

SPOILER

211,194,27749,2,0,P|257:176|287:142,1,90.0000005960464
280,56,28499,2,0,P|329:66|364:104,1,90.0000005960464

00:29:249 (1) - Essayer celui-ci: Ok

SPOILER

396,173,29249,6,0,B|339:210|314:282|236:273,1,180.000001192093

00:30:374 (2) - Essayer celui-ci: Ok

SPOILER

00:31:874 (3) - Il doit avoir la new combo. Bouge-la vers x:122 y:72, le deuxième carré vers x:169 y:64 et la dernière vers x:212 y:82. Ok
00:34:499 (2) - Bouge la deuxième carré vers x:285 y:162 et la dernière vers x:338 y:148. Si oui, bouge 00:35:249 (3) vers x:399 y:199. Ok
00:37:499 - Ajoute une note? Add
00:38:249 (2) - C'est mieux si tu la bouge x:156 y:209, le deuxième carré x:180 y:243 et la dernière vers x:178 y:293. Si oui deuxième carré de 00:36:374 (5) vers x:201 y:146 et la dernière vers x:121 y:100 pour avoir la distance constante 00:36:374 (5) vers x:201 y:146 et la dernière vers x:121 y:100 pour avoir la distance constante. Pas changer
00:39:749 (4) - Si la suggestion précédante te convient, bouge celui-ci vers x:134 y:123.Pas changer
00:40:124 (5) - Bouge la vers x:222 y:137. Ok
00:40:874 (1) - Bouge la vers x:353 y:216. Ok
00:41:999 - Ajoute une note. Add
00:42:374 (2) - Créez un slider aléatoire sur x:130 y:91 comme ceci: Ok

SPOILER

00:43:874 (3) - Ajoute la new combo. Ok
00:44:249 (4) - Bouge la vers x:323 y:345 pour éviter l'empile. Ok
00:45:374 (1) - Move the second tick to x:136 y:194. Comme ça ? Screen
00:46:874 (3) - Bouge le deuxième carré vers x:224 y:97 et ajouter la new combo. Ok
00:47:249 (4) - Bouge-le vers x:134 y:100, bouge la seconde carré vers x:48 y:158 et le dernier vers x:7 y:238. Ajouter aussi la new combo. Ok
00:48:374 (5) - Bouge-le vers x:90 y:264, bouge la seconde carré vers x:191 y:283 et la dernière vers x:277 y:256. Ok
00:52:499 (5) - Bouge-le vers x:336 y:276 pour avoir une meilleure flow. Ok
00:55:874 (4,5,6) - Fait un autre motif que de répéter 00:52:874 (1,2,3) . Et 00:55:874 (4) doit avoir un new combo.Ok
01:01:874 (4) - Comme le kiai time commence ici, met un new combo. Ok
01:04:874 (2) - New combo et enlever-le de 01:03:374 (1) . Ok
01:06:749 (1) - Enlève la new combo et mettez-le sur 01:07:874 (2) . Ok
01:07:874 (2) - Bouge-le vers x:440 y:276 pour avoir un blanket. Ok
01:08:624 (3) - Copiez 01:07:874 (2) et faizez Ctrl+J. Puis, bouge-le vers x:272 y:236. Aussi, bougez 01:09:374 (4) vers x:108 y:188.Ok
01:10:124 (1) - Enlève la new combo. Ok
01:13:874 (5) - Ajouter la new combo et enlevez-le de 01:14:624 (1) . Ok
01:16:874 (3) - Ajouter la new combo. Ok
01:23:999 (2) - Bougez-la vers x:204 y:76, bougez le second carré vers x:164 y:104 et le dernier vers x:156 y:148 pour qu'il soit symmétrique à 01:22:874 (1) . Ok
01:24:749 (3) - Bouge-la vers x:156 y:232. Ok
-De ce que je vois qu'avec les new combo, tu ne l'utilise pas bien. Les new combo sont plus utilisés quand une note est sur les grandes tiges blanches.

[Normal]
Je vais refaire cette Difficulté
00:07:874 (3) - Ajoutez un new combo.
00:09:374 (1,2,3) - Les distances doivent être constantes.
00:11:999 (3,4) - ^
00:15:374 (4) - ^
00:34:311 (5) - Enlève cette note.
00:38:436 (2) - ^
00:40:124 (1) - La distance doivent être constante et faisez Ctrl+J.
00:43:874 (1) - La distance doivent être constante.
00:45:186 (5) - Enlève cette note.
00:55:874 (1) - La distance doivent être constante.
01:01:311 (6) - ^
01:15:936 (1) - ^
-Je crois que tu dois refaire cette difficulté avec la distance snap activé.
-De ce que je vois qu'avec les new combo, tu ne l'utilise pas bien. Les new combo sont plus utilisés quand une note est sur les grandes tiges blanches.

[Hard]
00:11:999 (4) - Il peut avoir le même motif que 00:11:624 (3) . Ok
00:34:686 (2) - Bouge le vers x:72 y:64. Ok
Je ne suis pas vraiment un spécialiste en Hard, mais il doit avoir plus de travail à faire.

[Insane]
00:06:655 (4) - Bouge la vers x:320 y:208 pour que 00:06:374 (1,2,3,4) aient une même distance. Ok
00:16:311 (6) - Bouge la vers x:232 y:108. Ok
00:17:061 (1) - Bouge la vers x:168 y:268 et retourne la de -21°. Ok
00:18:561 (7) - Bouge la vers x:276 y:328. Ok
00:39:936 (4) - Ctrl+G? Ok
00:44:999 (6,7,8) - Bouge les vers x:348 y:252. Ok

N'hésite pas à me demander des questions. Bonne chance pour avoir la map ranked.

Thanks For Help

sheela901 wrote:

Re-allo. Juste repasser la difficulté Easy. Ne me donne pas un kudosu.
C'est ce que je me suis dis pour le kudosu mais je ne sais pas comment en donner deux x)
[Easy]
00:31:874 (1) - Fait attention à la distance entre 00:30:374 (2) . Les distances doivent être tous constants. Tu peux le savoir avec
et avec
Je pense que sa devrais aller comme sa: Screen
00:45:374 (1) - Au fait, j'ai oublié de dire qu'il faut bouger le dernier carré vers x:106 y:227. Fixed

Merci de m'avoir rappeler pour la distance constante je ferais plus attention a l'avenir

sheela901 wrote:

Tu n'as que pas cliquer. Lol

skybluedestiny wrote:

Love mashiro world

[Hard]
00:12:749 (6) - the beat doesn't fit the music, can be changed to a single beat instead of a slider. Change
00:15:561 (3) - The triplet doesn't make sense, once again does not fit the music.Ok
00:16:499 (6,7,1) - Once again triplet Ok
00:17:061 (2,3) - the double beat does not fit the music, you can omit the"2"Ok
00:20:249 (1) - once again double beat slider is unneeded as it does not fit the music Ok
00:22:124 (2,3,4) - triplet again Ok
00:23:061 (1) - slider is not in time with the music Change
00:23:436 (2) - not following the music Change
00:25:499 (1,2,3,4,5) - In this section i think it would sound better if you shortened the slider ending it with a "soft" hit sound and adding an extra beat to the stack like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1524057 not sure I understood
00:29:249 (2,3) - The "gahh" would be a stronger starting point rather than an ending point, i'd say play around until it sounds right I prefer to leave it like this
00:30:936 (1) - slider doesnt need to come back, it fits the music better that way Ok
00:32:155 (6) - try to extend the beat by one and push it back by one beat Ok
00:34:124 (1) - might want to sync this slider in with the beat of the music No Change
00:40:874 (1,2,3) - whole section is not in time with the music (slow it down and listen) not understood
01:00:561 (1,2,3) - you can choose to or not choose to omit the "2", i like the feeling i get from it but it also goes more smoothly without it, So, it's your choice. Delete
01:17:999 (1,2,3) - If you deleted the triplet from above do it for this one as well so it's consistent. Ok
Overall i quite liked the kai time, i thought it was done well

I will mod the other difficulties later on (within a week probably)

Thanx For Help

Kenssai wrote:

ALLO !!
Merciii d'avoir accepter un M4M, une de tes première map, pis un de mes première, on est des ptits nouveaux :3
Les mots en crochets sont en anglais, pour être sure que je ne me trompe pas xD

[Easy]
00:25:874 (1) - faire un "reverse slider" Je préfaire laisser comme ça

[Normal]
00:18:749 (2,3) - alterner de place Ok
00:54:374 (3,4) - alterner de place, et le 4 rajoute un "finish" (hitsound) Ok
00:55:874 (1) - rajoute un "finish" sur la tête du slider Ok

[Hard]
00:22:686 - ajouter une cercle Add
00:24:186 - ^ Add
00:28:686 - ^Add
00:28:874 (3) - replamcer par un "slider", jusqu'à 00:29:061 Ok
00:29:811 (6) - bouge le à 00:29:999 J'ai fait autrement
00:40:592 - ajoute un cercle Pas Add
00:40:686 - ^ Pas Add
00:51:936 - Add
01:23:249 (2) - faire un "reverse slider", ça serait un peu plus long Ok

[Insane]
00:09:374 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - pourrait replacer a la place que ça fait juste une ligne droite Sa ira comme ça: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1531672
00:13:124 (2) - ya rien de mauvais, c'est juste pour suivre un peu le début, on pourrait rajouter 2 cercle, un au début et un à la fin Pas compris
00:16:686 (8) - met un cercle Ok
00:16:874 - fait un "slider" jusqu'à 00:17:061 Ok
00:17:249 - un autre "slider" jusqu'à 00:17:436 Ok
00:18:186 (14) - met un cercle Ok
00:18:374 - fait un "slider" jusqu'à 00:18:561 Ok
00:18:749 - fait un "slider" jusqu'à 00:18:936 Ok
00:18:936 (1,2,3,4) - l'espace entre les objets n'est pas bien répartie Fixed
00:24:842 - pourrait avoir un cercle ici Add
00:25:030 - ^Add
00:29:061 (1,2,3) - ce triple est un peu aléatoire, faudrait peut-être enlever 00:29:155 (2) Delete
00:30:843 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - celuii là aussi est un peu aléatoire. Remplacer
00:33:655 - rajouter un cercle Pas Add
00:35:249 (4) - pourrait rajouter des notes à la place de un slider Ok
00:35:999 (6) - ^ Pour ce slider je ne l'ai pas fait
00:50:436 (2,3,4,5) - l'espace entre les objets n'est pas bien répartieFixed
01:01:874 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ Fixed
01:22:686 (4,5,6,7) - ^ Fixed
01:24:936 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ Fixed
01:25:030 - j'entend du son qu'on peut rajouter si tu l'écoute en ralentie Je pense que sa devrait le faire comme sa

MASHIROOOOO-TAAAAAN <3!!!!!!!!! Best Loli EVER ♥!

1. 00:13:124 (5) - I don't like to put a slider tail at a downbeat. Thought it make noise, it has no sense of hit/click. Consider change it to a slider and a circle on the downbeat.
2. 00:22:874 (5) - NC
3. 00:28:499 (5) - slider tail @ downbeat
4. 00:33:374 (1) - Cancel NC
5. 00:34:499 (2) - slider tail @ downbeat
6. 00:35:249 (3) - NC
7. 01:06:749 (1) - Cancel NC, the sentence of vocal hasn't finished
8. 01:07:874 (2) - NC
9. 01:09:374 (1) - Cancel NC
10. 01:10:874 (4) - NC
11. 01:18:749 (1) - Cancel NC
12. 01:19:874 (2) - NC

• 
  Normal needs to be strictly distance snapped(DS) (except for stack)

1. 00:12:749 (4,5) - not DS
2. 00:53:624 (2,3) - not DS

1. 00:14:249 (2) - The turn is sharp. Make it more smooth.
2. 00:50:999 (3,4,5,6) - the pause between 3 and 4 is confusing. 4 synthesizes the drum but 5 synthesizes the vocal. Add a circle at 00:51:561 - may be better.
3. 01:10:874 (1,2,3) - AR is low to read this stack while time gaps are not the same. Put 1 somewhere else.

1. 00:09:374 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - make the upper line closer to the lower line. Area overlaps is small makes the stream hard.
2. 00:36:842 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - shape of the stream is not that beautiful. And the NC here is confusing, cancel the NC and improve the shape
   
3. Generally speaking this diff is good. The main problem is the differences between left side and right side.

zinsser wrote:

M4M accepted in #modreqs. Sorry for the late mod.

[General]
A pretty good beatmap. Fun to play.
Only one problem to mention here:
All diffs have the same problem: Notes on the left side are much more and harder than the notes on the right side.
Especially in the Insane diff. Notes often appear at the left edge of the play field, streams and jumps are usually on the left side. but the right half is relatively empty and easy. There are some hard patterns on the right side but all of them are close to the center.

Two ways to solve the problem:
1. (recommended) Flip some part horizontally (Ctrl-H) and make some small adjustment. (e.g. select all notes from 00:19:874 - to 00:25:499 - and flip them over. And adjust the notes around 00:19:874 - and 00:25:499 -).
2. (easy, but not recommended) Select all notes and move them a little bit to the right.

I did it only for hard and insane

[Easy]
Your combo pattern is not consistent. You can take my advise to NC or cancel NC. Or you can check it up by yourself.

1. 00:13:124 (5) - I don't like to put a slider tail at a downbeat. Thought it make noise, it has no sense of hit/click. Consider change it to a slider and a circle on the downbeat. Fixed
2. 00:22:874 (5) - NC Ok
3. 00:28:499 (5) - slider tail @ downbeat Fixed
4. 00:33:374 (1) - Cancel NC Ok
5. 00:34:499 (2) - slider tail @ downbeat Fixed
6. 00:35:249 (3) - NC Ok
7. 01:06:749 (1) - Cancel NC, the sentence of vocal hasn't finished Ok
8. 01:07:874 (2) - NC Ok
9. 01:09:374 (1) - Cancel NC Ok
10. 01:10:874 (4) - NC Ok
11. 01:18:749 (1) - Cancel NC Ok
12. 01:19:874 (2) - NC Ok

[Normal]

• 
  Normal needs to be strictly distance snapped(DS) (except for stack)

1. 00:12:749 (4,5) - not DS Fixed
2. 00:53:624 (2,3) - not DS Fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:14:249 (2) - The turn is sharp. Make it more smooth. Fixed
2. 00:50:999 (3,4,5,6) - the pause between 3 and 4 is confusing. 4 synthesizes the drum but 5 synthesizes the vocal. Add a circle at 00:51:561 - may be better. Add
3. 01:10:874 (1,2,3) - AR is low to read this stack while time gaps are not the same. Put 1 somewhere else. Move it

[Insane]

1. 00:09:374 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - make the upper line closer to the lower line. Area overlaps is small makes the stream hard. I made at best: Screen
2. 00:36:842 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - shape of the stream is not that beautiful. And the NC here is confusing, cancel the NC and improve the shape Fixed : Screen
   
3. Generally speaking this diff is good. The main problem is the differences between left side and right side.

Thanks for the mod.
Good luck on your map~

lightr wrote:

Hi from #modreqs

Just check hitsound with Insane:

00:04:874 - to 00:10:499 - :Since this part is clam part,90%Vol. is too large,try to lower the volume. Ok
00:04:874 (1) - 00:06:374 (1) - 00:07:874 (1) - 00:08:624 (3) - add whistle Fixed
00:14:624 (6) - remove clap Fixed
00:15:749 (4) - remove finish and add clap on slider head Fixed
00:16:124 (5) - remove clap Fixed
00:16:499 (7) - add clap Fixed
00:17:624 (3) - remove clap Fixed
00:19:124 (3) - remove clap Fixed
00:19:874 (1) - add clap on slider tail Fixed
00:20:624 (3) - remove clap Fixed
00:20:811 (4) - add clap on reverse arrow Fixed
00:21:749 (1) - add clap on slider head Fixed
00:22:686 (1) - add clap on slider tail Fixed
00:23:811 (5) - add clap on slider tail Fixed
00:25:499 (1) - remove finish Fixed
00:25:874 (2) - add clap Fixed
00:26:249 (6) - add clap Fixed
00:26:436 (7) - add clao on tail Fixed
00:26:811 (8) - ^ Fixed
00:28:499 (7) - ^ Fixed
00:30:374 (1) - add clap on head and tail Fixed
00:30:936 (2) - add clap on tail Fixed
00:31:499 (4) - add clap on head Fixed
00:32:436 (5) - add clap on tail Fixed
00:33:374 (3) - remove finish and add clap Fixed
00:34:686 (2) - add clap on tail Fixed
00:35:061 (3) - ^ Fixed
00:35:436 (4) - ^ Fixed
00:35:811 (5) - ^ Fixed
00:37:499 (1) - remove finish Fixed
00:38:624 (3) - remove clap Fixed
00:39:186 (1) - remove finish from tail Fixed
00:40:874 (1) - remove clap from head Fixed
00:41:249 (2) - add clap Fixed
00:41:624 (4) - remove clapFixed
00:42:374 (1) - remove finish Fixed
00:42:561 (2) - add clap on tail Fixed
00:43:124 (4) - remove clap Fixed
00:45:374 (1) - remove finish Fixed
00:45:561 (2) - add clap on tail Fixed
00:46:124 (5) - remove clap Fixed
00:46:499 (7) - add clap on head Fixed
00:46:874 (1) - remove finish Fixed
00:47:624 (5) - add clap on tail Fixed
00:48:374 (1) - ^ Fixed
00:49:124 (5) - add clap Fixed
00:49:874 (1) - add clap on head Fixed
00:51:374 (1) - add clap on head and tail Fixed
00:52:686 (7) - add clap on tail Fixed
00:53:061 (8) - ^ Fixed
00:53:811 (3) - ^ Fixed
00:54:374 (6) - ^ Fixed
00:55:874 (1) - ^ Fixed
00:56:999 (4) - ^ Fixed
00:59:061 (5) - ^ Fixed
00:59:811 (8) - ^ Fixed
01:01:124 (7) - add clap and finish Fixed
01:02:624 (5) - remove clap Fixed
01:03:186 (7) - remove finish from tail Fixed
01:03:749 (2) - add clap Fixed
01:04:124 (4) - remove clap from head and add clap on tail Fixed
01:06:186 (2) - remove finish from tail Fixed
01:07:124 (5) - remove clap Fixed
01:07:499 (7) - add clap on head and add finish on tail Fixed
01:10:124 (4) - remove finish from head adn add clap on tail Fixed
01:11:811 (1) - add clap on tail Fixed
01:12:749 (6) - add clap Fixed
01:12:936 (1) - add finish on head Fixed
01:14:624 (4) - remove clap from head and add clap on tail Fixed
01:15:374 (1) - ^ Fixed
01:16:124 (3) - ^ Fixed
01:21:374 (1) - add clap on tail Fixed
01:21:374 (1) - remove finish from head and add clap on tail Fixed
01:22:874 (1) - remove clap and add finish Fixed
01:23:436 (4) - add clap Fixed
01:23:624 (1) - remove clap from head and add clap on tail Fixed
01:23:999 (2) - remove clap from head and add clap and finish on tail Fixed
01:26:061 - add green line to decrease the volume Fixed

ummm,except for those , maybe you should add some whistle on 1st and 3rd withe line.
Good luck~

Thanks For Help

Willjoy wrote:

Hi from #modreqs ) It's my M4M. Accepted ^^
[General]
Change your combo colors on all diffs. Ok
Combo1 : 232,232,0
Combo2 : 255,112,43
Combo3 : 143,71,71
[Easy]
1) 00:12:374 (4,5) - Check distance snap here (AiMod help you) Ok
2) 00:35:624 (2,3) - ^ Ok
3) 00:55:874 (1) - Change length slider and put circle. (http://puu.sh/8uyAg.jpg) Change
4) 00:59:624 (2,3) - Fix length slider to 1/1. Fixed
Check your map's flow. (t/86329 help you)
[Normal]
Nothing to see)
[Hard]
1) 00:11:624 (2,3) - Check distance snap here. Ok
2) 01:11:436 (3,4) - ^ Ok
3) 01:25:124 (5,6) - ^ Ok
4) 00:17:436 (2) - Put circle here Ok
5) 00:31:405 (4) - delete, overmapping Delete
6) 00:44:905 (4) - put circle here No Change
7) 00:55:874 (1,2) - change it. (example: http://puu.sh/8uzKK.jpg) Ok
8) 01:01:874 (1,3) - fix it, overlap (http://puu.sh/8uzMq.jpg) Fixed Screen
9) 01:12:374 (1) - put slider here. Ok
10) 01:19:874 (1,3) - fix it. (http://puu.sh/8uzS9.jpg) Fixed Screen
[Insane]
Check your distance snap, if you want make jumps, change snap to 1.5-1.7. If streams - 0.5 - 0.6.

Good luck ~

My map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/100511
I hope, you mod it.

RenzMichael wrote:

[General]
from modreq!
pls change combo colors a bit lighter, too vibrant Change
rhythm awesome focusing more on design

[Easy]
00:12:374 (4,5) - it would be great if you use straight https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1708406 Fixed
00:19:874 (1) - this is way too slanted Fixed
00:19:874 (1) - rotate a bit counterclockwise like 30 deg Fixed
00:59:624 (2,3) - do it like this, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1708413 Fixed
01:02:624 (2) - dont do that,make it curve slider Fixed
01:05:624 (3) - maybe 30 deg clockwise No Change
01:19:874 (1) - this should be curved as nexxt slider looks better Fixed

[Normal]
ughh. needs to cantain more 1/2 before i can mod it fully

[Hard]
00:14:249 (2) - looks weird change to 3 points only Fixed
00:22:124 (5) - make this a curfv not understood :/
00:22:874 (1) - wrong,should be this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1708423 Yes
00:24:374 (1,2,3) - dont straight this look awkward No Change
00:33:374 (1) - change pls slider shape Fixed
00:34:686 (3) - players will be confuse of this 5 reverse 1/4 and clicking early the next beat. extnd for nother 1/4 or reposition.I made otherwise
00:40:874 (4,5) - look mod number 3 Change
00:45:374 (1) - slant counterclockwise Ok

[Insane]
00:09:374 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - awkward stream Fixed
00:12:374 (7,1,2,3) - reposition I did not change because it is a jump
so that is all i could find.
dont forget kudos!No Probleme

LukerMaster wrote:

Insane:
00:19:686 (6,1) - You should make distance snap. Fixed
00:21:749 (1,2) - Add a small jump here. Add
00:48:842 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make a new distance snap. No Change
01:13:405 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ The same No Change
01:22:874 (1,2,3,4) - align this pattern Fixed
Hard:
01:25:124 (5,6) - Make a triple here. Ok
I'm not good in modding Normals and Easy so...

wuzzat wrote:

Yo! from #modreqs and Loliconteam

[General]
Offset:4908 (The metronome ticks before kiai time starts)
NC's are somewhat random in certain part of music,Generally it suit on Big whitetick.i saw this issues on insane diff only.
also,keeping DS constant can make your map even better.

This time i mod from insane

[Insane]
Use NC when it's neccessary,somewhat random NC's are not suits the map.
00:05:999 (1) - i don't think you need NC here Ok
00:07:124 (6) - ^ Ok
00:10:686 (1) - this NC should be removed and place it to 00:10:874.Ok
00:12:749 (1) - remove NC and place it here 00:12:374 Ok
00:13:874 (4) - NC Ok
00:21:749 (1) - Remove NC and place it here 00:21:374 Ok
00:25:499 (1) - this NC should be here 00:25:874 Ok
00:27:186 (1) - This NC should be here 00:27:374 Ok
00:32:811 (1) - remove NC Ok
00:33:374 (3) - NC Ok
00:34:499 (1) - this NC move to 00:34:686 ? Ok
00:37:499 (1) - This Nc should be here 00:37:874 Ok
00:54:374 (6) - NC here Ok
00:57:936 (1) - remove NC Ok
00:58:874 (4) - NC here Ok
01:04:124 (4,6) - This overlap doesn't seem right.considering it to not meet each other.Ok
01:04:874 (6) - NC here Ok
01:05:999 (1) - remove NC Ok
01:10:874 (6) - NC here Ok
01:11:811 (1) - remove NC Ok
01:12:374 (6) - NC Ok
01:16:874 (6) - NC Ok
01:17:436 (1) - remove NC Ok
01:18:374 (5) - NC Ok
01:23:624 (1) - I think you don't need NC here Ok
01:27:374 - Mute end of this Ok

[Hard]
Empty part when vocal sings doesn't seem right,consider to avoid this
00:25:499 - Add note here,slider or circle whatever.this empty part doesn't seem right imo Add
00:27:186 - ^ Add
00:28:874 (4) - NC ? Yes
00:33:936 - add note Add
00:34:874 (5) - NC ? Yes
00:40:686 - add note Add
00:55:311 (4,5) - make this spacing constant like 00:54:936 (2,3,4) - was not understood :/
00:56:624 (2,3) - i would blanket them Ok
01:19:874 (1,3) - bad overlaping It's good ?:Screen
01:24:749 - maybe this pattern better : http://puu.sh/9TU0v/54f841b9cc.jpg
01:27:374 - mute end of this ;w; Ok

[Normal]
You should bookmark this on your browser ^^ https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/208596
its about making common sliders neat.
00:09:374 (3) - i prefer "W" Shaped slider
00:16:499 (2) - this doesn't seem right.. use this pattern maybe ? Ok
00:32:999 (2,3) - blanket this. Fixed
00:46:124 (5,1) - this blanket could be better Fixed
00:59:624 (3) - use this pattern? Ok
01:04:124 (5) - place where 01:01:874 (1) was Not change
01:27:374 - mute end of this Ok x)

[Easy]
Such clean,much detail O/ i think you should arrange normal like this diff..
00:16:874 (1,2) - avoid antijumps, it may confuse beginers Fixed
00:25:499 - add note ? Add
00:29:249 (1) - this NC should be here 00:28:874 (6) Fixed
00:35:249 (1) - this NC should be here 00:34:874 (6) Fixed
00:37:874 (1,2) - avoid antijumps Fixed
01:12:749 (3,1) - blanket could be better I made at best
01:16:874 (1,2) - avoid antijumps Fixed
01:18:749 (1) - why NC here? remove this Fixed (my bad >.<)
01:27:374 - mute end of this Ok

I hope you rank this map ~
Goodluck