1. Easy (1 stars, 70 notes)
2. Hard (4.59 stars, 244 notes)
3. Insane (4.9 stars, 254 notes)
4. Normal (3.54 stars, 148 notes)
5. Window Jumper (5 stars, 311 notes)

1. 00:22:434 (2) - what... make this easier to read by moving the little head out a bit more
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:22:167 (1,2) - you should try to make (1) parallel with the first part of (2), just looks better
3. 00:17:077 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - seems random, can you try using an organized pattern?
4. 00:22:970 (3,2,5) - stack?
5. 00:27:792 (1,3) - be careful not to overlap like this
6. 00:31:542 (7) - what is with your slider points... why cant you just use a red tick... the tip is to use as few slider points as possible to make the best sliders
7. 00:36:899 (2,3,4) - space these out, or they wont look nice
8. 00:39:577 (6,7) - these touch SPACE OUT!!
9. you should really try to copy paste sliders more and transform them with the commands (use ctrl shift r, which is a more complicated rotate)
10. 01:01:809 (1,2) - i question the length of your jumps tho lol... theyre almost 4.0

1. 00:10:381 (2) - bit of a overmap
2. 00:30:202 (3,4) - bad overlap
   yah there are alot more bad overlaps find them yourself tho
   I feel like you need more variety in rhythm. Your rhythm itself is fine and follows the music nicely, but i feel like you need a bit more variety to emphasize certain parts and such.
   Patterns are also a bit messy. Try to mod some maps and learn a bit of patterns from them ^o^

1. 00:06:363 (2) - reduce this slider 1/4 shorter...
2. 00:27:792 (1) - ^
3. 00:10:649 (1,2,3,4) - i wouldnt stack in normal
4. 00:12:792 - whats with the random pause here
5. 00:20:827 (1,2,3,4) - woah ok DEFINITELY do not stack like this especially in normal. It's not even a good stack either... stacking stops flow. but i don't hear a pause in music to stop flow
6. 01:07:970 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,3) - i can't even read this because of all the NCs and how messy it looks

1. 00:04:488 (2,3,4) - another reminder to fix all these stuff that barely overlap
2. 00:20:827 (3) - just use a 3 sliderpoint slider?
   many recurring problems so i won't state them

Kibbleru wrote:

m4m via queue

note: you should distinguish what you fixed or not fixed by colours ie red and blue. just makes it easier to read Will do.
Changed something due to wonderful suggestion Random comments DECLINED

Your offset may be off, recheck it please
.5 star to 3.5 star difficulty jump a bit big? It's not the pp rating if it's still showing up as bugged, it's the old star system. Would you think it's a problem? Can probably lower OD on normal or something

[Insane]

1. 00:22:434 (2) - what... make this easier to read by moving the little head out a bit more Done
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:22:167 (1,2) - you should try to make (1) parallel with the first part of (2), just looks better Done
3. 00:17:077 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - seems random, can you try using an organized pattern? Done
4. 00:22:970 (3,2,5) - stack? If you mean: stack this, then done. If you're questioning the stack, then it's still there
5. 00:27:792 (1,3) - be careful not to overlap like this Put them a little further
6. 00:31:542 (7) - what is with your slider points... why cant you just use a red tick... the tip is to use as few slider points as possible to make the best sliders Changed. Bad habit from when I was unaware of the magic red tick.
7. 00:36:899 (2,3,4) - space these out, or they wont look nice Changed, looks better indeed
8. 00:39:577 (6,7) - these touch SPACE OUT!! Done
9. you should really try to copy paste sliders more and transform them with the commands (use ctrl shift r, which is a more complicated rotate) Ah, thanks for the tip. I didn't know that was possible
10. 01:01:809 (1,2) - i question the length of your jumps tho lol... theyre almost 4.0Noted. If I'm getting a lot more comments on this, especially if people think it's unrankable then I'll ease it a bit in parts. Right now though I feel it's the core appeal of the map so losing it would be like losing the map

[Hard]

1. 00:10:381 (2) - bit of a overmap Changed it a bit, better?
2. 00:30:202 (3,4) - bad overlap Fixed, not sure how this one slipped through
   yah there are alot more bad overlaps find them yourself tho Spotted a couple more, changed
   I feel like you need more variety in rhythm. Your rhythm itself is fine and follows the music nicely, but i feel like you need a bit more variety to emphasize certain parts and such. Alright, like more notes in faster bits, even if I don't hear the notes well? Will think about it, but nothing jumps to mind right away.
   Patterns are also a bit messy. Try to mod some maps and learn a bit of patterns from them ^o^ I know a lot of common patterns and use a few but also like to experiment a bit, hoping to find some rather unique ones that work well. I guess most don't really, but the few that work make me want to keep trying.

[Normal]

1. 00:06:363 (2) - reduce this slider 1/4 shorter... Really? It feels like this fits more, got it right in the middle of the dingdongers
2. 00:27:792 (1) - ^ Changed this one
3. 00:10:649 (1,2,3,4) - i wouldnt stack in normal I see a lot of people doing stacks on normal, is it that bad of an idea?
4. 00:12:792 - whats with the random pause here Thought the normal players could just a minibreak, changed it to a long slider
5. 00:20:827 (1,2,3,4) - woah ok DEFINITELY do not stack like this especially in normal. It's not even a good stack either... stacking stops flow. but i don't hear a pause in music to stop flow Changed
6. 01:07:970 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,3) - i can't even read this because of all the NCs and how messy it looksI guess the previous change wasn't enough. Alright, changed it further, it's a lot better now

[Easy]

1. 00:04:488 (2,3,4) - another reminder to fix all these stuff that barely overlap Changed a bunch of places
2. 00:20:827 (3) - just use a 3 sliderpoint slider? Ok, simplified a couple others as well
   many recurring problems so i won't state them

Needs a bit of work but don't give up! I've remapped my first map more than 3 times to get it good and ready for ranking! Thanks! Certainly not giving up, I'm happy as long as it doesn't just disappear to the graveyard.

Lgndzr wrote:

Hi.
I've had slight fever and been bit tired lately so this is pretty short and unorganized but I hope it won't matter too much.

Also, if you feel that my some of these mods won't improve the map, please ignore them.

General

The offset sounds like it is kinda early, I tried to fix it and got 1580, but you should still ask someone who's more experienced with timing. Will trust you on this one, I don't notice the differences myself anymore when they're that small

You should probably find a higher res background, it gives bad first impression. Done. Added two better ones, one reserved for extra (now renamed to Window Jumper)

Try to structuralize the hitsounds more (like adding clap every two white ticks or something like that.) I'll try working with this during future updates, hitsounds require some work, I agree

Some patterns are pretty dull imo, try to use more imagination when positioning notes to make it look more aesthetic. Are there any particular ones you have in mind? At the start my patterns were actually more imaginative, but they've been standardized more to go along with the mods

Easy

Consider adding atleast one spinner. Don't really see a need nor an obvious spot (since easy sliders must be pretty long)

It seems you positioned some sliders (ex. 00:57:556 (1)) to follow the vocal line, I think they'd fit better on white ticks, but up to you. Changed

01:10:145 - Consider filling this section with something. Done

Normal

00:06:395 (2) - It sounds bit weird, why not make it reverse at white tick? It still sounds fine to me, but you're not the first to say it, so I'll change it

00:12:824 (6) - I think this slider needs some finetuning.Done

00:14:966 (2) - Again this kind of reverse slider, check above. Done

00:40:949 (3) - I think this should be farther away from the slider. Changed the area a bit

Hard

It could use more hitsounds. Will do in future

00:32:913 - I think this flow would sound better if you deleted this circle. Ok

00:58:659 (6) - This slider would sound better if you'd move it so it ends on the white tick. Hmm, it was there originally, don't remember why I changed it. Reverted.

01:05:088 (4,5,6,7) - I think this pattern could be little bit away from incoming the pattern.Changed

Insane

Didn't find much problems with this.

01:04:654 (4,5,6,1) - I don't like how this sounds. Seems ok to me, will change if others mention it as well

01:13:225 (5) - Would sound better to my ears if you added one circle and moved the slider on white tick. I don't really know what you mean

Extra

I think the jumps are way too big for such song, it's kind of awkward to play. Consider shortening the distance a bit. That being said, it's still pretty neat jump practice. Still? They've been tuned down already (if you don't count the couple of bugged 1/8 ones). I think the songs an excellent fit for jumps, it's sort of choppy in a way. Eased it up a bit again.

Unless you're aiming for real hard and weird patterns, try to make the lines smooth and clear to play. This part 00:34:520 (1,2,3,4) - wasn't exactly it. Perhaps it was only because of 1/8's and 1/4's were mixed together but it was still pretty frustrating part. The 1/8s weren't supposed to be there. Changed. Is it ok now? I am aiming a bit for hard and weird patterns, but it should still fit the song and they should be playable

00:17:141 (1) - It'd be better if you curved these sliders a little towards the next slider, it would be much more pleasant to play. Done and made jumps less challenging here

00:19:861 (2) - I think it'd be better if it were on white tick rather than yellow. Ok

00:29:966 (1,2,3,4) - A continuous flow would just be better, I don't feel it needs that kind of jump in the middle. Keeping the jump, but made a little easier

00:34:788 (2,3,4,5,6) - Please don't blend 1/4 and 1/8, really confusing to play. Changed, unintentional

00:41:784 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - ^ Made more continuous

00:47:182 (6) - Again, why yellow tick? Changed, unintentional

00:57:588 (4) - Pls no, atleast shorten the distance.Changed, unintentional

01:18:722 (1) - This is killer jump. 1/8 is too much. Changed, unintentional

01:19:788 (1) - ^ Changed, unintentional

01:28:391 (2) - ^ Changed, unintentional

I don't know why all these sliders decided to end on a 1/8 tick suddenly, perhaps the circle size change? Any jump following a note above 3.2x is unintentional and any jump after a mini-slider above 6.0x is unintentional (except the one at 1:10). Most jumps should be at 2x after a note and 4x after a minislider, which I'm basically considering as 1/2 notes, since players will move their mouse away from these before the end