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Eiko Shimamiya - Last Regrets [Xmas Dance Mix]

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Zla Minister
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 9 marca 2010 at 19:28:43

Artist: Eiko Shimamiya
Title: Last Regrets [Xmas Dance Mix]
Source: Game Opening
Tags: eiko shimamiya kanon
BPM: 125
Filesize: 3537kb
Play Time: 01:30
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (0,39 stars, 46 notes)
  2. Hard (4,76 stars, 217 notes)
  3. Normal (2,22 stars, 100 notes)
Download: Eiko Shimamiya - Last Regrets [Xmas Dance Mix]
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My first beatmap (0.0). Enjoy~!
Andrea
Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions, you don't have to fix, your choice.
Orange: You don't have to fix too, but is better if you do it.
Red: You have to fix this for sure!

Starts Suggestions:

- Set a preview point on all difficulties.


BPM: 125,00
Offset: 516 (Remember to resnap all notes.)


[Easy]

After all this fix, you have to adjust the spacing. ^^

00:26:091 (1) - End 1/4 forward. Where you end the spinner sounds weird.
00:31:035 (1) - ^

00:40:035 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:42:027 (1) - Sounds weird. Change it.
00:46:011 (1) - End 1/4 forward. Same as 00:26:091.
00:49:071 (1) - Start this here : 00:49:475 (1) and extend by 1/2.
00:55:047 (3) - Extend by 1/4.
00:57:003 (1) - 1/4 forward.
01:12:087 (1) - ^
01:14:067 (1) - Out of place. Delete.
01:15:015 (2) - Move this 1/2 backward.
01:15:075 (1) - Start this 1/4 backward and extend it by 1/2.
01:18:087 (1) - Start this 1/4 backward and shorten it by 1/4.
01:29:043 (1) - 1/4 backward.
01:29:067 (2) - 1/4 forward.
01:30:015 (1) - Start this 1/4 forward and shorten it by 1/4.


[Normal]

After all this fix, you have to adjust the spacing. ^^

Slider tick 3 sounds weird. Use 2 or 4 please.

00:11:043 (1) - Start this 1/4 forward.
00:13:011 (2) - Delete.
00:13:035 (3) - Start this 1/4 forward and shorten it by 1/4.
00:28:023 (5) - 1/4 forward.
00:28:047 (6) - Delete.
00:29:091 (4,5,6) - Replace correctly. Sounds weird.
00:31:035 (1) - 1/4 backward and extend by 1/4.
00:33:063 (5) - Extend by 1/4.
00:39:003 (3) - 1/4 backward.
00:40:023 (1,2) - 1/4 forward.
00:42:027 (1) - Extend by 1/4.
00:46:023 (1) - Start this 1/4 backward.
00:49:083 (3) - 1/4 forward.
01:11:019 (2) - 1/4 backward.
01:14:067 (1,2) - 1/2 backward.
01:15:075 (3) - 1/4 forward and extend by 1/2.
01:21:003 (4) - 1/4 forward and shorten it by 1/4.
01:26:031 (1) - 1/4 forward.
01:28:011 (1) - Out of place. Delete.
01:28:047 (2) - 1/4 forward.
01:29:043 (5) - 1/4 backward.
01:30:027 (1) - Extend by 1/4.


[Hard]

After all this fix, you have to adjust the spacing. ^^

00:09:087 (1) - Shorten it by 1/4.
00:10:071 (5) - ^
00:31:035 (1) - 1/4 forward.
00:40:035 (1) - Extend by 1/4.
00:42:027 (1,2,3,4) - Sounds weird. Adjust all the notes.
00:45:003 (1) - 1/4 forward and extend by 1/4.
00:48:087 (1) - 1/4 forward.
00:57:027 (1) - 1/4 backward and extend by 1/4.
00:57:099 (2,3,4) - 1/4 backward.
00:58:059 (1) - Shorten it by 1/4.
01:01:035 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 1/4 backward.
01:02:313 (X) - Add a note here for complete the stream.
01:04:047 (4) - Delete.
01:13:083 (1,2,3) - 1/4 forward.
01:14:055 (1) - Delete.
01:15:003 (2) - 1/4 backward.
01:17:091 (1) - 1/4 backward.
01:22:071 (2) - 1/4 backward.
Topic Starter
Zla Minister
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Kytoxid
Sleepy mod follows:

[General]

Preview points need to be set. This is what the player hears when the song is first selected from the song select menu, and can be set from Timing -> Set Current Position as Preview.

Notes may need to be resnapped. This is also under the Timing menu, Resnap All Notes.

Many of the notes are placed weirdly, including the first note on Easy (just as an example). Please let Auto play through the song, and make sure the map is musically logical; if you were to play drums, that would be a possible set of accompaniment to the music that is predictable for the player. I actually didn't precisely mod the whole thing (way too tired right now, and osuplayer111 already gave a very nice mod), but from test-playing the difficulties, many parts need rhythmic work.

Good luck!
al2e10
BY AL2e10's Mod Queue

[Hard]
00:28:593 (5,1) specing
00:51:873 (1) remove new combo
01:09:153 (1) ^
01:11:073 (1) ^
01:13:953 (1) ^
01:15:633 (2) It is out of the areas !!
01:22:353 (1) remove new combo
01:24:993 (1,1) ^

[Normal]
00:26:913 (1) specing !!
00:27:993 (4,5,1) ^
00:41:193 (2) move to 00:41:073

HOLD ON !!
Your note is not fixed to the music !!!

Please change it first !!
Lokamp
Easy
00:15:039 (1,2) - clap the beat and the slider's end
00:19:023 (1,2) - ^
00:23:007 (1,2) - ^
00:49:047 (1) - shrink this slider by moving its end a timing tick before
00:53:055 (1,2,3,1,2) - fix timing and spacing for these beats...
01:12:087 (1) - move it a timing tick later and shrink its lenght of a timing tick
01:15:063 (spinner) - make it longer of a timing tick
01:30:003 (spinner) - silence this spinner's end (no hitsound volume :3)

Normal
[General] set slider tick rate = 2
01:30:003 (1) - move it a timing tick forward and shrink it to the previous white timing tick
00:38:019 (2) - move it to 00:38:043
00:38:091 (3) - move it to 00:39:015
00:42:027 (1) - make it longer (next red timing tick) and move it a square right
00:49:083 (3) - start it on 00:49:095 (white timing tick)
01:05:031 (3) - make it longer (next white timing tick)
01:18:075 (5) - ^
01:28:047 (1) - move it to 01:28:035 (previous white timing tick)
01:28:095 (2) - move it to 01:28:083 (previous white timing tick)
01:29:067 (4) - move it to 01:29:079 (next white timing tick)
01:30:027 (spinner) - like on Easy mode, remove hitsounds's volume from this spinner

Hard
[General] custom whistles are pretty ugly on this mode... >.<
00:09:087 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - move them a square down
00:21:075 (2) - move it a square left
01:30:027 (spinner) - like on Easy and Normal.

...there is still work to do with spacing and maybe with general offset, but for your first map, this is really good! A star for you. ;3
Topic Starter
Zla Minister
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Hanyuu
Hi :)

1:17:796: Kiai time should start here

all diffs: i would not use any whistles of the custom sounds. its so loud and hurts my ears Q_Q

Easy:

00:26:091 (1) - move the timing section for the custom sounds to the slider end
00:42:027 (1) - this is not fitting. should be like 1 of the 2 sliders before it
00:52:035 (1) - 00:53:031 (2) - 00:54:027 (3) - should be placed here
00:55:023 (4) - slider length to white tick
00:57:015 (1) - 00:57:063 (2) - should be placed here

Normal:

00:31:035 (1) - better if you move it forward to blue tick
00:38:043 (2) - 00:39:015 (3) - 00:40:035 (1) - 00:41:007 (2) -
00:28:083 (1) - need a bigger spacing from circle 5

also try to find a structured placing for your hitsounds :)
Topic Starter
Zla Minister

Hanyuu wrote:

Hi :)

1:17:796: Kiai time should start here

all diffs: i would not use any whistles of the custom sounds. its so loud and hurts my ears Q_Q

Easy:

00:26:091 (1) - move the timing section for the custom sounds to the slider end
00:42:027 (1) - this is not fitting. should be like 1 of the 2 sliders before it
00:52:035 (1) - 00:53:031 (2) - 00:54:027 (3) - should be placed here
00:55:023 (4) - slider length to white tick
00:57:015 (1) - 00:57:063 (2) - should be placed here

Normal:

00:31:035 (1) - better if you move it forward to blue tick
00:38:043 (2) - 00:39:015 (3) - 00:40:035 (1) - 00:41:007 (2) -
00:28:083 (1) - need a bigger spacing from circle 5

also try to find a structured placing for your hitsounds :)
Fixed
Azurek_old
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Andrea
New "Detailed" modding style for help maps <3

You don't have to follow my post, remember there are not directions, but suggestions!

[File Checking...]

Video: No.
Storyboard: Yes.
Custom Skin: Yes.
Background: Yes.
Source: No. (Add some source.)
Tags: Yes. (Capitalize the tags.)
File Size: 3,52MB/24,00MB

[Overall]

Timing is good.

[Difficulties]

[Easy]

Lower by 1 or 2 ticks Overall difficulty.

00:34:011 (2,3) - Adjust spacing.
00:49:047 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:53:031 (2) - New combo.

01:12:087 (1) - 1/4 forward and adjust spacing.

[Normal]

Increase HP Drain by 1 tick for balance with Overall difficulty.

00:13:035 (2) - 1/4 forward and shorten it by 1/4.
00:26:091 (1,2) - Partially offscreen.
00:30:063 (6) - 1/4 forward and adjust spacing.
00:31:035 (1) - 1/4 forward and adjust all combo spacing.
01:12:075 (1) - Shorten it by 1/4.


[Hard]

00:28:059 (5,1) - Spacing.
00:42:027 (1,2,3,4) - Sounds weird.
00:57:099 (2,3,4) - 1/4 forward.
Topic Starter
Zla Minister
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Kitty McWittles
[Normal]
00:42:027 (1,1,2) - Spacing

[Hard]
00:21:015 (1,2,3) - Spacing

Maybe you can tone down the volume of your soft-hitwhistle.wav so it's not so overpowering, because as Hanyuu said the whistles do get quite loud in places.

Can't find anything that I really dislike, so have a star.
quintessence
All suggestion
<Easy>
1:29:676(2) This note move to 1:29:556

<Normal>
1:28:713(2) This note move to 1:28:593

<Hard>
1:19:473(4) This slider's end extend to 1:19:953

Good song!

☆Star
Topic Starter
Zla Minister

quintessence wrote:

All suggestion
<Easy>
1:29:676(2) This note move to 1:29:556

<Normal>
1:28:713(2) This note move to 1:28:593

<Hard>
1:19:473(4) This slider's end extend to 1:19:953

Samurai_X wrote:

[Normal]
00:42:027 (1,1,2) - Spacing

[Hard]
00:21:015 (1,2,3) - Spacing
Fixed
Yes_old
hard
00:34:083 (3) - too far
00:53:007 (4) - ^

normal
00:13:047 (2) - this combination hitsound at the end sounds odd
01:10:011 - add a note here?
01:15:087 (3) - start at 01:15:063, end at 01:17:031 -
01:17:079 - add note

what do you mean you don't know to do a spinner? like putting one in the map? putting your mouse over the Spinner icon on the left tells you all you need to do.

n_n good start. i like the storyboarding :)
Topic Starter
Zla Minister

Yes wrote:

hard
00:34:083 (3) - too far
00:53:007 (4) - ^

normal
00:13:047 (2) - this combination hitsound at the end sounds odd
01:10:011 - add a note here?
01:15:087 (3) - start at 01:15:063, end at 01:17:031 -
01:17:079 - add note
Fixed

Yes wrote:

what do you mean you don't know to do a spinner? like putting one in the map? putting your mouse over the Spinner icon on the left tells you all you need to do.
With this spinner, I mean that I don't know how do skin for this, but I don't want doing it now.
PS. Can I put this for pending?
kino77
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Topic Starter
Zla Minister

kino77 wrote:

;)

[Easy]
00:37:071(1)-Move 1 lv.2 grid up?
00:54:027(2)-Use custom hitsound?
01:10:059(1)-Doesn't fit here

[Normal]
00:15:51-Turn volume down a little bit?too noisy...
00:30:63-Timing secion 00:30:99 start from here?
00:35:031(1)-end here 00:35:031?
00:42:027(1)-BPM 0.5x for this slider?
00:53:007(x)-Add a note here?
00:53:055(1)-Use custom hitsound?
01:15:063(3)-BPM 0.5x for this slider?
01:28:059(2)-Spacing?

[Hard]
00:09:087(1)-End here 00:09:087?
00:54:027(2)-Use custom hitsound?
00:58:011(2)-Move 1 lv.3 grid left?
00:58:059(1)-End here 01:00:993?
01:15:063(2)-BPM 0.5x for this slider?
01:28:083(1)-Add one repeat?
01:30:027(1)-End with white tick?

Star~
Fixed
Essien_old
Easy:
00:15:396 (1,2,1,2,1,2): Maybe move them around?
00:46:116 (1): Spinner should end earlier. Might be too hard for new players.
01:15:636 (1): ^
01:26:916 (1): Slider looks kind of sloppy, fix.

Normal:
No problems found.

Hard:
00:58:593 (1,1): Kind of too close?


Suggestions ^.^ not orders
star~
Topic Starter
Zla Minister

Essien wrote:

Easy:
00:15:396 (1,2,1,2,1,2): Maybe move them around?
00:46:116 (1): Spinner should end earlier. Might be too hard for new players.
01:15:636 (1): ^
01:26:916 (1): Slider looks kind of sloppy, fix.
Fixed
Diasios
Mod Infos:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Start Suggestions:

All seems ok.

[Easy]

01:26:091 (1) - End this slider at 01:28:596

[Normal]

It's ok

[Hard]

00:10:233 (x) - add a circle

Starred~
Card N'FoRcE
LOL i HAD to mod this map xD

- Easy:
  • .Opinions:
    The KIAI section starts better at 01:18:75
    .Suggestions:
    00:31:47 (1) - feels a bit out of place
    00:34:59 (3) - try to make it end at 00:37:23
    00:37:71 (1) - try to make it end at 00:39:87
    00:49:47 (2) - long suggestion: move it to 00:49:95, then add a beat to 00:49:47. If you do this, move 00:52:35 (1) to 00:52:83.
    00:57:015 (1,2) - come on, move them a bit higher, you have the whole playfield >.<
    .Errors/Mistakes:
    00:42:27 (2) - this one sounds really wrong. Extend by 1/4 and add two more repetitions
    00:54:27 (2) - move it to 00:53:79. Also, try to make a batter shape
    01:10:59 (1) - shorten by 1/4 please
    01:12:099 (1) - ^
- Normal:
  • .Opinions:
    The KIAI section starts better at 01:18:75
    .Suggestions:
    00:13:47 (2) - CLAP??? O.O
    01:22:35 (1) - long suggestion: delete this; then add one more repetition to 01:21:15 (4)
    .Errors/Mistakes:
    00:15:39 - seriously, delete this timing section, it will also fix "00:13:047 (2) - CLAP??? O.O"
    00:42:27 (3,4,5) - move them all to the right (spacing issue)
    01:15:63 (3) - move it to the left (spacing issue)
- Hard:
  • .Opinions:
    00:17:31 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern isn't so bad. It's original and sounds cool, so keep it ^^
    The KIAI section starts better at 01:18:75
    .Suggestions:
    00:31:47 (1) - do you REALLY have to put it there? D:
    .Errors/Mistakes:
    00:10:35 (3) - seriously, delete this one
    00:33:63 (1,2) - move 2 farther, please
    00:44:19 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this combo is too close to the previous one. Please move it
    01:17:07 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
Also, i don't understand why you switched hitsounds o.o
The custom hitsounds you used fit well, but i think you have to turn volume down a bit (you can do that in the Timing setup panel)
Also, you should do many other minor fixes here and there (especially in new combos)

I won't star now. Read my suggestions and fix the map as well as you can. When you're done, call me and i'll check again ^^
Topic Starter
Zla Minister

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

LOL i HAD to mod this map xD

- Easy:
  • .Opinions:
    The KIAI section starts better at 01:18:75
    .Suggestions:
    00:31:47 (1) - feels a bit out of place
    00:34:59 (3) - try to make it end at 00:37:23
    00:37:71 (1) - try to make it end at 00:39:87
    00:49:47 (2) - long suggestion: move it to 00:49:95, then add a beat to 00:49:47. If you do this, move 00:52:35 (1) to 00:52:83.
    00:57:015 (1,2) - come on, move them a bit higher, you have the whole playfield >.<
    .Errors/Mistakes:
    00:42:27 (2) - this one sounds really wrong. Extend by 1/4 and add two more repetitions
    00:54:27 (2) - move it to 00:53:79. Also, try to make a batter shape
    01:10:59 (1) - shorten by 1/4 please
    01:12:099 (1) - ^
- Normal:
  • .Opinions:
    The KIAI section starts better at 01:18:75
    .Suggestions:
    00:13:47 (2) - CLAP??? O.O
    01:22:35 (1) - long suggestion: delete this; then add one more repetition to 01:21:15 (4)
    .Errors/Mistakes:
    00:15:39 - seriously, delete this timing section, it will also fix "00:13:047 (2) - CLAP??? O.O"
    00:42:27 (3,4,5) - move them all to the right (spacing issue)
    01:15:63 (3) - move it to the left (spacing issue)
- Hard:
  • .Opinions:
    00:17:31 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern isn't so bad. It's original and sounds cool, so keep it ^^
    The KIAI section starts better at 01:18:75
    .Suggestions:
    00:31:47 (1) - do you REALLY have to put it there? D:
    .Errors/Mistakes:
    00:10:35 (3) - seriously, delete this one
    00:33:63 (1,2) - move 2 farther, please
    00:44:19 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this combo is too close to the previous one. Please move it
    01:17:07 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
Also, i don't understand why you switched hitsounds o.o
The custom hitsounds you used fit well, but i think you have to turn volume down a bit (you can do that in the Timing setup panel)
Also, you should do many other minor fixes here and there (especially in new combos)

I won't star now. Read my suggestions and fix the map as well as you can. When you're done, call me and i'll check again ^^
Fixed

I will be fixing combos.
Card N'FoRcE
There's still something to fix, as you can see below

- General:
  • Every difficulty has different offset. Please choose one and use it for every difficulty. (I guess 514 is OK)
- Easy:
  • .Suggestions:
    00:42:27 (2) - you didn't fix this. Ok, i gave a suggestion you are not supposed to follow if you don't like, but you have to change this somewhat. It sounds odd.
    00:52:83 (1) - uhmuhmuhm, i don't like the position of this beat, really misreadable
    .Errors/Mistakes:
    00:31:47 (1) - move 1/4 after
    00:53:91 (2) - move 1/4 before, then make it 1/4 longer
    01:12:99 (1) - move 1/4 after
- Normal:
  • .Errors/Mistakes:
    00:35:31 (1) - make it 1/4 longer
    01:15:63 (3) - wrong spacing. i guess that happened because of the 0.5x section
- Hard:
  • .Suggestions:
    00:39:63 (1) - uhmuhmuhmuhm, it's readable thanks to the overall difficulty, but i think you should move this one farther
    00:48:99 (1) - ^
    01:15:63 (2) - Was this one supposed to be at 0.5x?
    .Errors/Mistakes:
    00:43:23 (4) - make it 1/4 longer
Topic Starter
Zla Minister

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

There's still something to fix, as you can see below

- General:
  • Every difficulty has different offset. Please choose one and use it for every difficulty. (I guess 514 is OK)
- Easy:
  • .Suggestions:
    00:42:27 (2) - you didn't fix this. Ok, i gave a suggestion you are not supposed to follow if you don't like, but you have to change this somewhat. It sounds odd.
    00:52:83 (1) - uhmuhmuhm, i don't like the position of this beat, really misreadable
    .Errors/Mistakes:
    00:31:47 (1) - move 1/4 after
    00:53:91 (2) - move 1/4 before, then make it 1/4 longer
    01:12:99 (1) - move 1/4 after
- Normal:
  • .Errors/Mistakes:
    00:35:31 (1) - make it 1/4 longer
    01:15:63 (3) - wrong spacing. i guess that happened because of the 0.5x section
- Hard:
  • .Suggestions:
    00:39:63 (1) - uhmuhmuhmuhm, it's readable thanks to the overall difficulty, but i think you should move this one farther
    00:48:99 (1) - ^
    01:15:63 (2) - Was this one supposed to be at 0.5x?
    .Errors/Mistakes:
    00:43:23 (4) - make it 1/4 longer
Fixed
Card N'FoRcE
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Takuma
teehee it looks like it's snowing when i spin with kiai on

Easy:
00:53:796 ~ bad hitsound change.

Normal:
00:35:313 (1) - end 1/4th earlier. it should end up on the red tick.
00:53:553 ~ bad hitsound change. -__-
01:15:633 (3,4) - fix spacing; 0.5x forces half the distance snap, so double so it remains even.

Hard:
00:34:593 (2) - inconsistent; move away from (1).
00:53:553 ~ bad hitsound change. :\
01:19:233 (3) - 1/4th backwards, then readjust the spacing with distance snap.
01:24:993 (2) - 1 level 3 grid to the right? yknow, just so it can be even. :P

ps i didn't check timing
starred
Topic Starter
Zla Minister

Takuma wrote:

teehee it looks like it's snowing when i spin with kiai on

Easy:
00:53:796 ~ bad hitsound change.

Normal:
00:35:313 (1) - end 1/4th earlier. it should end up on the red tick.
00:53:553 ~ bad hitsound change. -__-
01:15:633 (3,4) - fix spacing; 0.5x forces half the distance snap, so double so it remains even.

Hard:
00:34:593 (2) - inconsistent; move away from (1).
00:53:553 ~ bad hitsound change. :\
01:19:233 (3) - 1/4th backwards, then readjust the spacing with distance snap.
01:24:993 (2) - 1 level 3 grid to the right? yknow, just so it can be even. :P

ps i didn't check timing
starred
Fixed
Topic Starter
Zla Minister

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

Ehm, you didn't fix some important things yet D:

- General:
  • Every difficulty has different offset. Please choose one and use it for every difficulty. (I guess 514 is OK, Easy has 516!)
- Easy:
  • .Suggestions:
    00:42:27 (2) - you didn't fix this yet. It's not bad, but it's still not so good D:
    .Errors/Mistakes:
    00:52:83 (1) - move a square to the left, to make it look better
- Normal:
  • .Errors/Mistakes:
    00:35:31 (1) - make it 1/4 longer
    01:15:63 (3) - wrong spacing. i guess that happened because of the 0.5x section
- Hard:
  • .Suggestions:
    00:48:99 (1) - uhmuhmuhmuhm, it's readable thanks to the overall difficulty, but i think you should move this one farther
    .Errors/Mistakes:
    00:39:63 (1) - Fix spacing here, move (1) farther
If there's something you don't understand, please ask someone in #polish to help you D:
Fixed
Breeze
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