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Tamura Yukari - MERRY MERRY MERRY MENU... Ne!

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Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

Okoratu wrote:

Hi!

This one is from my modding Queue:

[Insane]
Because this one is very well made I'd just like to drop by some suggestions:
  1. 00:40:734 (3) - You might consider moving this one away from 00:40:067 (2) - for those reasons: - i think no problem for DS
    1. The jump from 00:39:400 (2) - to 00:39:734 (1) - is bigger than the jump from 00:40:067 (2,3) -
    2. The first jump ^ only needs half the time and thus it might cause the player to have to wait for some time
  2. 01:00:400 - For the part that starts here and ends 01:05:734 -, You might try the following --- noisy , so no fix
    1. Set the Volume to 80%
    2. Add a finish on every white tick
    3. See how it sounds
  3. 01:01:900 (3) - You might want to try to stack this one with the end of 01:01:067 (3) - properly because you're stacking alot in this map ---fix
  4. 01:10:484 - You might Switch to the drumset from here to 01:10:984 - and do the following: --- i don't know how to do , so no fix
    1. Set the volume to 60%
    2. 01:10:734 - add a clap
    3. 01:10:900 - add a finish
打包615

thanks for modding ^^/
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to Fluttershy03

all fix , except
[General]
The spinner in all difficulties but easy seems quite unnecessary, you should make it so that the spinner is at 01:21:734 (1) - in all diffs and map the parts that were previously part of the spinner with other notes. --i want to spinner to end , and the music fade in start here


[Hard]

00:20:734 (5,2) - Not too fond of how these notes overlap in a bad way inside the editor. You should move some notes around so that 00:22:067 (2) - is stacked with the start of 00:22:067 (2) - and is still spaced properly. --- haven't undersand , so no fix


to tellertheworld

all fix except

[Insane]

00:08:234 - 加個音 節奏沒在這裡斷開吧 ---不加

00:44:067 (3) - 試下刪除這個 --- 不删

[Normal]

00:21:400 - 加個圈試試 ---不加



thanks for modding ^^/
Koiyuki
will check mod soon
Koiyuki

-Neipezi wrote:

[Yuki's Easy]
00:24:400 (1) - add whistle tail
01:19:067 (1) - placed in the center? add whistle tail not necessary imo, and the songs' volume is low so no whi ><

[Hijiri Byakuren] wrote:

[Yuki's Easy]
00:48:400 (2) - 节奏应该在这里 00:48:234 (2)
00:59:067 (2) - ……………………00:58:900 (2)
看来认为这样的人多,so fixed

yanlu wrote:

[Yuki's Easy]
00:00:401 (1) - nazi--:第5個點位置x304/140 第六個點x396/y228
00:24:400 (1) -
00:36:400 (2) - end in 00:36:900 - ? 改了下pattern
00:48:400 (2) - 取消來回 然後從00:48:567 - 開始 前面节奏改了
00:52:400 (1) - 我覺得這slider不要來回 然後拉個特殊形狀會比現在好:v 嗯,还是来回吧,来回拉个特殊形状好了><
00:59:067 (2) - 跟前面一樣的問題? ^
01:19:067 (1) - 放對稱??
>>呒啥問題ˊwˋ
( ´ ▽ ` )ノ nazi懒改了

ts8zs wrote:

[Yuki's Easy]
00:47:067 (1,2) - ._. .-.
00:57:734 (1,2) - ^ ^
01:19:067 (1) - M 可以理解成marry也可以理解成mtb,yeah
._.

Fluttershy03 wrote:

Yuki's Easy

00:05:734 (1) - This note seems a bit too close to the slider head of 00:05:734 (1) - and you can even see a tiny overlap you should move this further away imo fixed

00:11:067 (1,2) - Maybe you could make these two blanket eachother? Just a suggestion~ unnecessary

00:13:734 (1) - Would be better flow if you ctrl+g this then move it so the spacing is fine. easy is with no flow lol

00:15:067 (2) - If you did what I've posted before then ctrl+g this as well to retain the pattern you had before. ^

00:20:400 (3) - I can see you were trying to have this in the same spot as the slider end of 00:17:734 (2) - , but it's not spaced too correctly, and the triangle isn't looking too good either. I keep that

A large portion of the map plays well after that.

01:01:734 (2) - I think this would look slightly better as a curved slider imo. :P

01:04:401 (2) - ^ :P
Thanks for modding

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ArtistUnicode:田村ゆかり
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desudesud
[Easy]

00:00:401 (1) - I would probably make this slider symmetrical instead of the current shape, or at least make it horizontally flat rather than a horizontal tilt, to make the slider look more presentable and easy for a new player while still looking awesome and cool.

00:24:400 (1) - I would change the end of the slider since new players don't really know how to deal with end sliders like that, and they may just continue going in the curve resulting in an easy fail. I would move the end so it isn't overlapping with the other parts of the slider.

[Normal]

00:33:734 (3) - I would probably add a finish here to keep hitsound consistency and to build up to Kiai Time.

01:01:734 (3) - ^^, but more for consistency and just general build up to the ending

[Hard]

Just because it's a hard diff doesn't mean you should not follow DS at all. At least keep a somewhat consistent spacing excluding jumps and breaks. I can't really mod this too much atm due to inconsistent spacing.

[615's Insane]

00:06:067 (2,3,4,5,6) - I would make this star formation equally spaced to keep the formation beautiful and still a good challenge due to jumps rather than ugly, unequal spacing.

00:12:400 (1,2,3,4) - I would probably change this to a square formation to make the shape of the 4 circles something common and expected.

00:17:900 (2,3,4,5) - Evenly space the star formation for same reason as earlier.
YoshinoSakura
麻麻二妹真能找mod

yanlu wrote:

[615's Insane]
00:18:400 (5) - 跟前面的一樣弄彎的? 弄湾了就不对称惹
00:25:234 (4) - ctrl+g
00:26:067 (2) - ctrl+g 就不顺惹
00:37:400 (4) - 結束在00:37:567 - 紅線就好
00:43:734 (2) - nc 破坏规律惹
01:16:400 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 233333 咦这里很难么
*kiai副歌的地方我很喜歡'w'* 谢谢baka璐璐

ts8zs wrote:

[615]
……难度……都od8了= =b
00:18:400 (5,6) - flow 没看懂orz
00:39:734 (1,2) - 稍微歪一下吧 好的
话说kiai那段奇葩的滑条为了凸显啥……你是想拉着玩么 抄的。。
01:08:734 (2,2,2,2) - 都去掉= = 这里有音才加的。。
01:15:734 (6) - ……Ctrl+G能好些 改了下
01:16:400 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:17:067 (1,2,3,4,5) - ………………算了 :o 这里很难么

Okoratu wrote:

[615's Insane]

General:
Your Kiai Time should be consistent with the other Diffs in this mapset, so you should consult moonlightleaf about it in order to reach a consistent solution actually i think my kiai time is better /me runs

00:26:567 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - This one annoys me a bit because it overlaps: did you try to use something similar to this one (with not that much spacing) to this one there already 00:14:400 (1,2) - , if not i suggest you move this whole pattern up a bit
decided to keep this
I suggested the following for the Insane Diff aswell
01:00:400 - For the part that starts here and ends 01:05:734 -, You might try the following
Set the Volume to 80%
Add a finish on every white tick
See how it sounds GD has more freedom,especially hitsound.I needn't follow Insane's hitsound completely.

Fluttershy03 wrote:

615's Insane

00:09:066 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think it would flow a lot better if you ctrl+g this entire stream. it's okay imo

00:45:734 (1) - I'm not really a fan of this slider shape personally. Try this maybe: just a blanket

xVirtualNinjax wrote:

[615's Insane]

00:06:067 (2,3,4,5,6) - I would make this star formation equally spaced to keep the formation beautiful and still a good challenge due to jumps rather than ugly, unequal spacing. sorry i like unequal spacing jump :o

00:12:400 (1,2,3,4) - I would probably change this to a square formation to make the shape of the 4 circles something common and expected. at least it's in a good shape

00:17:900 (2,3,4,5) - Evenly space the star formation for same reason as earlier. then there will be no space for the slider
thx for your mod~

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Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to xVirtualNinjax

all fix

thanks for modding ^^/
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

- KaTZ - wrote:

[Insane]
00:54:567 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 排成直線吧 ---好的 仔细一看还真的歪了= = 因为改mod的时候缩小 为了方便看网页,没注意

新人mod完全看不出有什麼問題啊 :(
祝早日rank
[改了N次MP3了啊 还是原来的好 orz 求不说最后转盘部分]
Cloudchaser
M4M from your queue o/

General
  • Spinners are a bit inconsistent in all the diffs.
    You need to work more in the NCs in your diffs! (Insane and Normal)

Insane
  1. I suggest you make the combos a bit more higher x_x
  2. 00:19:733 (1) - remove NC
  3. 00:20:400 (8) - Add NC
  4. 00:21:067 (3) - Remove NC
  5. 00:22:900 (1) - Remove NC
  6. 00:33:067 (3,4,5) - I suggest you something like this
  7. 00:40:734 (3) - NC because of downbeat in 00:40:067 (2) -
  8. 00:41:567 (1) - NC
  9. 00:51:900 (1) - This NC is senseless, remove it.
  10. 00:54:234 (1) - Make a better blanket please with (5)
  11. 01:18:400 (5) - I hate being so nazi but can you make this more curved? just for make a better blanket.
  12. 01:19:817 (1) - ? I think this spinner is so forced here x_x

    Funny diff.


Hard
  1. 00:49:650 (2,3) - Stack this note, actually is confusing current spacing.
  2. 01:14:900 (4,5) - Make something like this


615's insane
  1. Remove the last kiai
  2. 00:50:234 (3) - Ugly ;w; it doesn't fit with your other sliders! Can you make another shape?
  3. 00:00:401 (1,2,3,4,5) - Add NCs as you did here: 01:08:400 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) -

Normal
  1. 00:08:400 (1) - Move the slider's tail a grid right
  2. 00:25:234 (2) - blanket
  3. 00:41:650 (1) - This spinner is too sudden, move it at least to the red line


Good luck!
PinkHeart
某人的request转移给我了 不过我不大会mod图 随便看着改吧

[Easy]

00:54:234 - 新人打图也是跟vocal吧 这里应该可以加东西

[Normal]

00:25:234 (2) - blanket明显歪了 往右偏一点
00:39:734 (3) - 这也不太好看 是不是干脆连带后面的note一起往右移再重新摆这个slider
00:39:734 (3) - normal好像不能接这么紧的spinner

[Hard]
好难
00:49:650 (2,3) - 这么大间距?

[Insane]

00:22:067 (2) - 这好卡手……
01:19:150 - 这里为啥空下了?
说实话我感觉卖萌歌应该多弄点好看的梗 现在这个嘛……

[615]
跳下这么大 真是可怕
00:13:067 (5,6,1) - 1后面挺好的 但是前面一直到56都是逆时针转圈 这接不上吧
00:23:067 (1,2,3,4,5) - 我觉得应该在这用五边形 而不是最后那个
00:45:734 (1) - 是想和4做blanket吗?歪了
01:14:567 (6,7,8,1) - 这么大跳
最后那段大连打感觉没前面那么好……叫做有失水准?(咦你有什么资格谈论别人的水准
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to Cloudchaser

all fix

to PinkHeart

all fix

[Insane]

说实话我感觉卖萌歌应该多弄点好看的梗 现在这个嘛…… ---我也说实在的 我不怎么会作图= = 就这点水平惹暂时 好看的梗不会整, 你有啥好梗吗 求图片

thanks for modding ^^/
PinkHeart

moonlightleaf wrote:

[Insane]

说实话我感觉卖萌歌应该多弄点好看的梗 现在这个嘛…… ---我也说实在的 我不怎么会作图= = 就这点水平惹暂时 好看的梗不会整, 你有啥好梗吗 求图片 我也不会摆好看的梗 只能说说 帮不上忙= =
Koiyuki
currently no change
YoshinoSakura
no change except the blanket

osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 43184
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
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TitleUnicode:MERRY MERRY MERRY MENU...ね!
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ArtistUnicode:田村ゆかり
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212,364,47067,6,0,B|184:320|204:264|204:264|152:232|96:268,1,215.999993408203,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,356,47567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,72,47734,2,0,P|88:120|88:180,1,107.999996704102,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,40,48067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,64,48234,6,0,P|392:76|376:124,1,107.999996704102,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,264,48567,2,0,P|230:261|229:212,1,107.999996704102,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
135,176,48900,2,0,P|126:280|198:357,1,215.999993408203,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,360,49400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,320,49567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,320,49650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,320,49734,6,0,P|404:268|404:212,1,107.999996704102,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,92,50067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,40,50234,2,0,B|240:64|265:103|265:103|297:147|223:181|288:228,1,215.999993408203,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,225,50734,1,8,0:0:0:0:
52,248,51067,6,0,B|56:280|56:280|88:304|84:352,1,107.999996704102,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,348,51400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,288,51567,2,0,B|232:224|160:244|160:244|144:224|144:224|136:176,1,215.999993408203,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,348,52067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
428,72,52400,5,0,0:0:0:0:
456,244,52567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,80,52734,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,296,52900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,80,53067,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,304,53234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,72,53400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,260,53567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,48,53734,6,0,P|236:36|184:60,2,107.999996704102,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,148,54234,2,0,B|216:208|260:248|260:248|304:296|272:356,1,215.999993408203,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,316,54734,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,184,54900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,160,55067,6,0,B|64:116|100:76|100:76|168:128|164:28|248:96,1,215.999993408203,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,324,55734,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,168,55900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,336,56067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
504,248,56234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,256,56400,6,0,B|248:284|244:336|244:336|216:352|184:332|184:332|152:312|124:328,1,215.999993408203,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
131,324,57067,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,108,57234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,280,57400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,148,57567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,172,57734,6,0,B|28:120|104:116|104:116|104:52|168:24,1,215.999993408203,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,148,58234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,268,58400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,108,58567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,48,58734,1,8,0:0:0:0:
100,296,58900,6,0,B|112:348|112:348|176:368,1,107.999996704102,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,108,59234,2,0,B|408:56|408:56|344:36,1,107.999996704102,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,48,59567,2,0,P|168:97|180:148,1,107.999996704102,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,168,59900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,308,60067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,308,60150,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,292,60234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,268,60317,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,240,60400,6,0,P|200:200|184:136,1,107.999996704102,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,224,60734,2,0,P|36:272|40:332,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,216,61067,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,44,61234,2,0,P|424:92|428:156,2,107.999996704102,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,260,61734,6,0,B|404:316|352:316|352:316|304:364|256:344,1,215.999993408203,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,204,62234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,320,62400,2,0,P|96:352|96:380,2,53.9999983520508
56,176,62734,2,0,P|24:192|0:212,2,53.9999983520508
156,60,63067,6,0,P|204:56|276:72,1,107.999996704102,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,328,63400,2,0,P|340:332|268:316,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,204,63734,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,204,63900,2,0,P|395:193|341:197,2,107.999996704102,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,328,64400,6,0,B|344:344|312:312|312:312|280:320|280:320|248:256|188:304,1,215.999993408203,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,372,64900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,220,65067,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,64,65234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,204,65400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,40,65567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,212,65734,6,0,P|384:262|376:328,1,107.999996704102,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,288,66067,1,2,0:0:0:0:
468,236,66234,1,0,1:0:0:0:
240,288,66567,5,2,0:0:0:0:
468,236,66734,1,2,0:0:0:0:
324,24,66900,2,0,B|256:32|232:92|232:92|180:72|140:116,1,215.999993408203,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
336,136,67400,1,0,1:0:0:0:
116,324,68067,1,2,0:0:0:0:
116,324,68234,1,2,0:0:0:0:
116,324,68400,6,0,P|116:280|128:228,1,90,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
176,124,68734,1,10,0:0:0:0:
128,328,68900,6,0,P|128:284|140:232,1,90,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
188,128,69234,1,2,0:0:0:0:
140,332,69400,6,0,P|140:288|152:236,1,90,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
204,132,69734,1,2,0:0:0:0:
152,336,69900,6,0,P|152:292|164:240,1,90,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
220,136,70234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,296,70400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,168,70567,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,168,70650,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,168,70734,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,68,70900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,340,71067,6,0,B|204:340|204:340|252:360,1,90,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
176,240,71567,2,0,B|220:240|220:240|268:260,1,90,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
196,144,72067,2,0,B|240:144|240:144|288:164,1,90,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
220,48,72567,2,0,B|264:48|264:48|312:68,1,90,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
156,336,73067,1,0,1:0:0:0:
68,40,73400,1,4,0:0:0:0:
344,296,73734,5,4,0:0:0:0:
328,132,73900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,292,74067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
412,192,74234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,136,74400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,380,74567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,92,74734,1,8,0:0:0:0:
108,100,74900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,352,75067,5,0,0:0:0:0:
412,192,75234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,192,75317,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,192,75400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,256,75567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,144,75734,2,0,P|448:112|416:92,2,90,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,196,76400,5,0,0:0:0:0:
56,244,76484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,280,76567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,328,76650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,352,76734,2,0,P|156:328|172:280,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,352,77067,5,0,0:0:0:0:
388,304,77150,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,304,77233,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,256,77317,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,256,77400,2,0,B|270:235|258:215|258:215|242:195|258:171,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,256,77734,5,0,0:0:0:0:
66,153,77900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
283,122,78067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
125,274,78234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
163,59,78400,2,0,P|150:111|190:231,1,180,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,79067,12,0,81067,0:0:0:0:
Squichu
hellow,
mod from queue. c:
I don't really like the pitch of the song, but it has such a happy melodyyyy. ;w;
& skipping both Insanes, cause I died playing them after several tries. :c
can't say much about diffs I don't get, sorry

[Yuki's Easy]
  1. no combo colours? why? ;n;
  2. 00:09:734 (2) - flows better/better movement if you place it further to the right (~ 169|84)
    and it forms triangle with 00:07:067 (2,1) - then \:D/
  3. 00:12:400 (2,1) - don't like movement here as well >< maybe point slider in a different direction, not against previous movement?
    if you change, don't forget to adjust 00:15:067 (2) -
  4. 00:21:734 (1,2) - curve looks better imo if you use circular shape instead of oval
  5. 00:37:734 (1) - place further down for better movement from 00:36:400 (2) - , adjust 00:38:734 (2,3) -
  6. 00:44:400 (1,2) - use same shape for both? preferably both curved to create more variety
  7. 01:06:900 (2) - move to 9|281? improves movement


[Normal]
  1. 00:00:401 (1,2) - it's just personal taste, but you could bend one of them in the different direction
    it adds variety and looks better overall, imo
  2. 00:03:067 (1,2) - ^
  3. 00:05:734 (1,2,3) - change up the pattern a bit, maybe? -
  4. 00:13:734 (1,2) - curve them slightly to match better with 00:15:067 (3) - ?
  5. 00:47:734 (3,4) - blanket better
  6. 01:08:067 - add circle? matches to vocals, so I'd expect an object here
  7. 01:08:400 (1,2) - ^ same as in the beginning
  8. 01:11:067 (1,2) - ^
  9. 01:15:067 (3,4) - overlap slightly, fix?


[Hard]
this diff is fun to play. gj. :3
  1. 00:01:900 (4) - ctrl+g? flows better imo (and the jump is fine)
  2. 00:07:734 (3) - use same shape as for 00:07:067 (1) - looks better
  3. 00:11:734 (3,4,5,6) - round out the curve they create
    4 - 224|185
    5 - 136|210
  4. 00:15:400 (2) - ctrl+g and stack 00:15:734 (3) - above 00:16:067 (4) - (-> both to 220|196), has a nicer flow, imo
  5. 00:19:067 (1) - ctrl+g, enhances movement
  6. 00:44:400 (6) - blanket start of 00:44:067 (5) - ?
  7. 01:09:900 (6) - ^ same as in the beginning


good luck with this!
*squee* o/
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to Squirrel

all fix but :

[Normal]

00:00:401 (1,2) - it's just personal taste, but you could bend one of them in the different direction it adds variety and looks better overall, imo ---no change

00:05:734 (1,2,3) - change up the pattern a bit, maybe? - this looks so beautiful

[Hard]

00:44:400 (6) - blanket start of 00:44:067 (5) - ? ----no change this is a star for 12345
01:09:900 (6) - ^ same as in the beginning ----^

thanks for modding ^^/
hopperhtkn
hi from PM

[General]
Last spinner is very very funny!!
It's unnecessary for many player imo.
If you want to put spinner, you should make 01:19:067 to 1:21:650 and put spinner 01:21:734 - 01:23:734

[Normal]
00:15:067 (1,1) - - fix to 0.8x
00:47:400 (3) - ^
00:47:400 - it's more fit to rhythm imo
 or use same pattern 00:58:400 (3) - if you think that is hard

other diff are looks so fine!!
gl :)
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to hopperhtkn

OKOK, i remake the mp3, please redownload it thank you~
sjoy
[Insane]
00:10:395 (5) -用ctrl+h+j的弧度感觉会好很多
00:08:729这里可以加FIN ,其他不说了
00:15:729 (5) - FIN
00:18:395 (5) - ctrl+h 的弧度
00:19:062 (2,3) - 改成1/1+单点
00:22:895 (5) - NC
00:40:895 (5) - ctrl+g
00:50:895 加个NOTE
00:53:729 (5) - .. ctrl+g
00:54:562 (2) - 离1太近了会造成错觉
00:58:895 (1,2,3) - 头 whis
01:13:728 (1) - 1这个位置真是好贱
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to sjoy

all fix

感谢mod ^^/
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