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Tamura Yukari - MERRY MERRY MERRY MENU... Ne!

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00:12:400 (3) - 这里不知这样如何http://puu.sh/7Us0c.jpg ---没改

其他fix

thanks for modding ^^/
YoshinoSakura

OblivioN wrote:

[615'sinsane]
00:21:067 (3,4,5,6) - 凶残…………排列顺一点吧……这么治愈的歌 原来的太难了才改成这样的
00:26:400 (3,4) - ………………为何这么难orz【无视我 其实不难
00:31:900 (4) - 这个音效可以去掉…… 鼓点
00:42:900 (8) - finish
01:00:067 (4) - NC吧……柑橘没必要

Wafu wrote:

[615's Insane]

00:30:234 (2,3) - Consider this pattern, because current flow was not correct and additionally the overlap was just like blah to be honest. Also makes a jump that imo fits more to your style. fixed
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00:33:734 (1) - CTRL+G makes a better flow, anyway just a little detail and not important suggestion. ctrlg the next slider
00:50:234 (3) - Make more neat slider like your other sliders are. This is really different from others. They were sensible, but this seems like random shape that reminds me 2007 maps, but might be just presonal feeling. I think it seems good in a happy song
01:00:067 (4,5,6,7,1) - Flowbreak in kiai is really aggressive thing. I really highly recommend to use regular spacing instead of stacking it. I hope you understand that it is really wrong when you play kiai, and you just see jump, jump, jump, jump, jump, now you have stop moving your mouse so you loose that feel of flow, and again jump, jump jump... Kiai should be lively all the time to make player enjoy that map.actually i can't understand,but will fix it

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

615's Insane卡在3.49星了, 建议再加几个大跳这样就可以到达3.50星, 升级为X级
本来是3.5啊但是有modder闲难我就降回去惹
thx for your mod

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osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: MARRY ME.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 43184
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.4

[Metadata]
Title:MERRY MERRY MERRY MENU... Ne!
TitleUnicode:MERRY MERRY MERRY MENU...ね!
Artist:Tamura Yukari
ArtistUnicode:田村ゆかり
Creator:moonlightleaf
Version:615's Insane
Source:
Tags:[Minakami Yuki] 615915887
BeatmapID:395511
BeatmapSetID:161089

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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
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131,324,57067,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,108,57234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,280,57400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,148,57567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,172,57734,6,0,B|28:120|104:116|104:116|104:52|168:24,1,215.999993408203,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,148,58234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,268,58400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,108,58567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,48,58734,1,8,0:0:0:0:
100,296,58900,6,0,B|112:348|112:348|176:368,1,107.999996704102,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,108,59234,2,0,B|408:56|408:56|344:36,1,107.999996704102,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,308,59567,2,0,P|376:259|364:208,1,107.999996704102,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,240,59900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,308,60067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,308,60150,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,292,60234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,268,60317,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,240,60400,6,0,P|200:200|184:136,1,107.999996704102,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,224,60734,2,0,P|36:272|40:332,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,216,61067,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,44,61234,2,0,P|424:92|428:156,2,107.999996704102,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,260,61734,6,0,B|404:316|352:316|352:316|304:364|256:344,1,215.999993408203,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,204,62234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,320,62400,2,0,P|96:352|96:380,3,53.9999983520508,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,176,62734,2,0,P|24:192|0:212,3,53.9999983520508,8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,60,63067,6,0,P|204:56|276:72,1,107.999996704102,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,328,63400,2,0,P|340:332|268:316,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,204,63734,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,204,63900,2,0,P|395:193|341:197,2,107.999996704102,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,328,64400,6,0,B|344:344|312:312|312:312|280:320|280:320|248:256|188:304,1,215.999993408203,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,372,64900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,220,65067,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,64,65234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,204,65400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,40,65567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,212,65734,6,0,P|384:262|376:328,1,107.999996704102,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,288,66067,1,2,0:0:0:0:
468,236,66234,1,0,1:0:0:0:
240,288,66567,5,2,0:0:0:0:
468,236,66734,1,2,0:0:0:0:
324,24,66900,2,0,B|256:32|232:92|232:92|180:72|140:116,1,215.999993408203,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
336,136,67400,1,0,1:0:0:0:
116,324,68067,1,2,0:0:0:0:
116,324,68234,1,2,0:0:0:0:
116,324,68400,6,0,P|116:280|128:228,1,90,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
176,124,68734,1,10,0:0:0:0:
128,328,68900,6,0,P|128:284|140:232,1,90,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
188,128,69234,1,2,0:0:0:0:
140,332,69400,6,0,P|140:288|152:236,1,90,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
204,132,69734,1,2,0:0:0:0:
156,336,69900,6,0,P|156:292|168:240,1,90,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
220,136,70234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,296,70400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,168,70567,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,168,70650,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,168,70734,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,68,70900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,336,71067,6,0,B|200:336|200:336|248:356,1,90,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
176,240,71567,2,0,B|220:240|220:240|268:260,1,90,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
196,144,72067,2,0,B|240:144|240:144|288:164,1,90,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
220,48,72567,2,0,B|264:48|264:48|312:68,1,90,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
156,336,73067,1,0,1:0:0:0:
68,40,73400,1,4,0:0:0:0:
344,296,73734,5,4,0:0:0:0:
328,132,73900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,292,74067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
412,192,74234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,136,74400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,380,74567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,92,74734,1,8,0:0:0:0:
108,100,74900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,352,75067,5,0,0:0:0:0:
412,192,75234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,192,75317,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,192,75400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,256,75567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,92,75734,2,0,P|368:100|328:140,2,90,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,196,76400,5,0,0:0:0:0:
72,228,76484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,260,76567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,292,76650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,210,76734,2,0,P|182:166|160:128,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,332,77067,5,0,0:0:0:0:
384,300,77150,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,300,77233,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,268,77317,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,100,77400,2,0,B|340:124|356:144|356:144|368:164|356:188,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
334,233,77734,5,0,0:0:0:0:
140,130,77900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
357,99,78067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
199,251,78234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
237,36,78400,2,0,P|224:88|264:208,1,180,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,79067,12,0,81734,0:0:0:0:
Rizia
[Insane]
00:13:734 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 突然就變大了 讓人有點不習慣
00:20:734 - 試試 http://puu.sh/7UvrZ.jpg
00:22:484 (6) - 試試移到00:22:650 -
00:23:817 (7) - ^一樣做法
00:36:734 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/7UvBM.jpg
00:51:400 (3) - x252 y156
00:51:567 (4) - x120 y172
00:54:734 (4,5,6) - 換成5連
00:59:900 - add note
00:51:567 (4) - 這樣NC http://puu.sh/7UvMA.jpg
01:03:984 (7) - 刪掉
01:08:400 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 有幾個相同的節奏能用這NC梗, 自己參詳
01:10:484 (1) - remove nc
01:18:400 (5) - whistle
01:18:900 - ^

[615]
01:02:400 (3,4) - 換成3連slider http://puu.sh/7Uwd9.jpg
01:16:400 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 我不會跟你說我恨這個 建議改改 改成00:13:734 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 一樣也好

[Hard]
00:11:734 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - http://puu.sh/7UwlW.jpg 有看不懂的話找我
00:35:734 (1) - 第三錨點 x144 y176
00:38:734 (5,6,7,8) - 可以考慮跟00:37:734 (1,2,3,4) - 對稱
00:44:400 (7,1,1) - http://puu.sh/7UwxE.jpg
00:48:567 - 這vol. 5%有點怪
- TiRaFiouS -
[General]
我愛飛球((喂
又是1kds....

[NM]
像EZ...
00:03:067 (1,2) - 抱歉...強迫症00:00:401 (1,2) -不和這個一樣接受不了_(:3JL)_
00:24:400 (1) - 縮短到00:25:400 - 加circle在00:25:567 - (NM這像EZ...)
00:32:400 (1,2,3,4) -ds 要一樣
00:27:067 (1,2) - (2)取代(1)然後,00:27:900 - 加circle
00:29:734 (1,2,3) - ^
00:36:567 - 加circle
00:40:734 (1) - 縮短到紅線,00:40:734 (1) - 加circle(原本的感覺不對)
00:47:734 (3) - 延長到00:48:734 - 結束(完全不對喔...)
00:54:234 (2) - del reveres,00:54:734 - 滑條結束位+00:55:067 - 加circle
00:58:400 (3) - end at 00:59:400 - add circle
01:11:067 (1,2) - 球繼承傳統((X ---->01:11:067 (1,2) -

[615 baka]
臥感覺太跳?((撒...我就是說說=3=還可以
感覺flow不太好?
感覺不太好

00:10:900 (4) - del
00:12:067 (4) - x:112 y:200

00:21:067 (3,4,5,6,1) - 太密了而且好難按
00:23:067 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這5角形滑條折點放中間(4)和(5)間距不一樣故意的?
00:26:400 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 太密,(5)根本看不見2個短滑條又不是早消失能而看的見加上連打順著去停在(3)尾就像停了一樣,你讓我吐糟什麼((我在說什麼
00:28:234 (5) - 移到00:21:567 (6) - , 00:28:400 (1,2) - 移到本來(5)的位置
00:29:067 (4) - Ctrl G
00:39:734 (1) - x:152 y:176
00:40:067 (2) - x:88 y:344
00:46:400 (2) - 不在三角形中間...
00:47:734 (3) - Ctrl G? 都好像flow不好?
00:48:900 (3) - 滑條折點不在中間+不在(2)的正後方....
00:59:567 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 同樣,滑條(不正常地)擋住連打難讀圖,還有(4)好奇怪...
01:02:400 (3,4) - 各縮小一個返回
01:13:734 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 這音樂給我的感覺是越縮越小诶
01:19:067 (1) - end at 01:21:067 -

[HD]
00:00:401 (1,2) - 不是對著的
00:01:900 (4) - 還是順著比較好
00:48:067 (5) - 感覺漏音
00:48:567 (6,7) - (7)取代(6)
00:51:067 (1,2,3) - 跟著前面比較好00:49:734 (1,2,3) -
01:07:234 (6) - NC
01:09:900 (4) - 還是順著比較好

ds像ins 但似乎只是難一點的NM.....((我感覺

[ins]
00:07:734 (5) - 0.5x把畢竟是長音
00:11:067 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - 這是在旋轉?中間沒轉啊!?
00:33:067 (3) - 彎點QAQ
00:37:650 (6) - del
00:42:067 (4) - 在三角形中間比較好

感覺所又能變難的位置都被來回滑條取代喔.....
感覺你叫我試那張好一點
節奏感覺沒問題,就是簡單了點

就醬

don't forget my kds!~
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to Kawaiwkyik

[Insane]

00:22:484 (6) - 試試移到00:22:650 - 之前就是这么放的 扔给几个人play 发现那边有几率掉 于是改掉的, fix
00:23:817 (7) - ^一樣做法

其他fix

to Piyoko_9796

[insane]

00:11:067 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - 這是在旋轉?中間沒轉啊!? ---没改额

其他fix

感谢mod ^^/
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

Sakaue Nachi wrote:

好像是M4M_(:з」∠)_
[Yuki's easy]
00:05:734 (1) - 滑条尾whistle
00:07:067 (2) - ^
00:11:067 (1,2) - ^
00:08:400 (1) - 这个头也换成finish怎样,可以这个声音小点,然后2大点有个递进
00:13:734 (1) - ^
00:16:400 (1) - 尾whistle
00:16:400 (1) - 可以微调下包的好点
00:21:734 (1) - 换成finish好点?
00:24:400 (1) - 这样会不会好看点?http://puu.sh/7UrnV.jpg
00:44:400 (1) - 头finish
00:48:234 (2) - 中间whistle
00:58:900 (2) - ^

to Minakami Yuki

[hard]

00:11:734 (3,4,5,6) - 在hard是不是跳了点,缩小为大概0.85倍差不多感觉 ---没改

GL~这是我的图http://osu.ppy.sh/s/141354 --等我闲下来就摸
感谢补充H和I的摸~
Koiyuki
http://puu.sh/7Vsar.osu
Thanks for modding. Sry no time to reply.
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to yuki

下次贴代码到这里吧 puush的有乱码诶 arist 什么的不识别 我每次还要改一下

:?
DreaM117er
For NM from PM

這首歌是屬於很俏皮的歌,最適合頓點然後再接拍子,我會依照這個原則幫你Mod

Insane
點我打開
00:18:900 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 這裡單點太多了,顯得很沒特色,反而沒有最一開始的開頭好(00:16:067 之前 )
00:20:400 (5,6) - 擺成平行
00:21:067 (1,2,3,4) - 變形的風車!!?? 把它擺正
00:21:734 (1,2,3,4,5) - 單點太多了,大大你要知道前面的風車已經很難了,後面又接連跳,不人道啊= " =
00:22:900 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:25:734 (2) - 這個刪掉再做跳點
00:29:067 (1,3) - 平行,有點歪了
00:29:734 (1,3,4,5) - 這四個都是直Slider,弄彎一點比較好看
00:37:234 (1,2,3,4,5) - 太彎了太彎了,圓滑一點(把DS調一下再做調整)
00:40:484 (3,4,5) - 這裡只有一個聲音,接連打好怪
00:47:067 (5,6,1) - 組成一個大Slider,不要全跳
00:50:900 (6) - 這裡沒有任何聲音,刪掉這個
00:52:234 (2) - ^
00:57:734 (5,6,1) - 組成一個大Slider
01:00:734 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 還有 01:03:400 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - 統一一起說比較好,跟著歌詞還有鼓,多運用點1/2 Slider,和前面一樣,不要全跳
01:07:400 (7) - 換成circle
01:18:567 (6) - 刪掉,01:18:400 (5) - 換成3/4 Slider


Hard
點我打開
00:07:067 (7) - 換成1/2 Slider + 1/1 Slider
00:12:400 (7) - ^
00:15:067 (5) - 四個鼓聲,分開來吧
00:16:567 - 漏掉一個音,建議放Slider
00:17:900 (2) - ^
00:16:734 (3) - 這裡有很多分音,像00:23:067 (4,5,6) 一樣分開
00:18:067 (3) - ^
00:22:067 (2) - ^
00:28:567 (6,7) - 組成Slider
00:37:567 (5) - 刪掉
00:43:900 (4,5) - Hard照著順序來就好了,Reverse Selection
00:48:067 (5) - 中間還有一個音,不要漏掉了
00:53:734 (5) - 換成circle
00:54:234 (1,2) - 換成這樣??


※Hard記得DS從頭到尾全開,除非要跳點按著Alt在去做調整,你有些地方跳得很兇,提醒一下


Normal
點我打開
00:40:734 (4,1) - 換成這樣↓

00:49:734 (1) - 換成下面這樣??

00:51:067 (2) - ^


615's Insane
點我打開
00:06:900 (6) - 三角形沒有排好
00:15:734 (5) - 太遠了,Reverse Selection
00:18:900 (6) - 疊在00:19:067 (1) 頭上
00:22:900 (6,1,2,3,4) - 正五角形擺好
00:26:567 (4) - 移到x144 y68
00:37:400 (4) - 減少一次折返
00:42:567 (6,7,8) - 重新做這三個點,跳太遠了
00:43:234 (1,2) - ^
00:45:567 (5,1) - ^
00:47:567 (2,3) - ^
00:52:567 (2,4,6,8) - 網內拉近距離,同上
00:57:067 (2,3,4,5) - 太遠了
00:58:234 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - ^
01:00:734 (2,3) - ^
01:02:400 (3,4) - 這種滑條不是給你這樣擺的,你打的到就當我沒Mod過
01:10:567 (4,5,6,7,1) - 太遠了
01:13:734 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^,要求重製
01:16:400 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 重製,這裡你打的到??

歌開始前10秒我還以為是神圖,不合格 :(
BPM180跳這麼遠,除非你打的過,否則我不會要求重製

抱歉。

Easy沒有問題,有一些怪怪的地方,請別的大大幫你吧 :D
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to m1223961117

都fix

感谢mod ^^/
Ozato Fumika
Hi

[Yuki's Easy]
The way you mapped, I think HP OD AR should be reduced by 1 tick.
00:48:400 (2) - I couldn't figure out why you placed it here. It should be moved to 00:48:234 - to follow vocal or guitar or the music itself.
But the way you mapped, I don't know if you should make this part 1/2 beat or not.
00:59:067 (2) - This again. same opinion as above. I don't think it follows the music at all. I really don't know your intention.. Maybe you are following the drum, that that isn't the dominant beat here imo.
01:21:734 (1) - How about adding timing sections to add fade out effect like the music does.

[Normal]
Your NC needs a lot of work
00:02:400 (3,1) - this can be really confusing for inexperienced players sometimes, I strongly recommend that you unstack these.
00:27:900 (2,3) - I think this would flow better. And also, this stack might be a little too hard
00:37:734 (1,2) - shouldn't these 2 be 2/1 slider? or have circle after them
01:12:067 (2,1) - they overlap, but I guess you can keep it. I wouldn't recommend, though.

[Hard]
Same as normal. Your NC needs a lot of work
00:36:234 (2) - this stack really doesn't fit at all imo. There really isn't much of a thing going on here, so you can delete this and 00:35:734 (1,1) - spread this out.
00:38:234 (3,4) - Try crtl + g. Fits very well and flows better imo
00:43:234 (1,2) - I think you should merge these to a 1/1 slider. this vocal is holding, and 2 circles don't fit imo.
00:48:400 (6) - you can delete this note. I can't think of a reason why you would want to add a circle here. Unless you were trying to make this diff harder
01:00:400 (2,3) - How about merge thee to a 1/2 slider? according to 01:03:067 (2) -
01:01:234 (4,1,2) - you should either stack these 3 or unstack 01:01:401 (1,2) - to fit vocal more. having.
01:03:400 (3) - crtl + g please. extremely boring flow
01:04:067 (1) - ^
01:10:900 (1) - this part feels very awkward. you're starting the slider which i part of 01:10:567 (2) - this melody, which makes the vocal start from the reverse. Try this
SPOILER
mine
yours

01:13:734 (1,2,3,4) - to be honest, this part seems really boring. you could probably remap this section and come up with better pattern!

[Insane]
NC....
00:07:734 (1) - I don't think this SV change makes any sense at all.
00:17:067 (5) - crtl + g?
00:17:400 (6) - ^ (only if you did above)
00:25:567 (1,2,3,4) - I think you can do a better job with this distance problem here. kind of confusing imo.
00:26:067 (3,4,1) - awkward flow imo. try to bring 00:26:234 (4) - down left a little?
00:33:067 (3) - move it a bit up for smooth transition 00:32:400 (1,2,3) -
00:35:067 (8) - this 1/2 reverse doesn't fit, and is ruining the calmness of these part imo. replace it with 1/1 slider?
00:40:567 (3) - I really don't see a point with this circle. delete? if you do, don't forget distance here 00:40:067 (2,4) -
00:40:734 (4,5) - not the best flow imo.
00:55:067 (6) - I'd call this bad flow. it's completely breaking the flow from this stream 00:54:734 (2,3,4,5) -
01:10:400 (3,4,5,6) - spacing disaster, also shape
01:10:901 (6,1,2) - I think this might be a bit hard to play. but it's ok
01:18:234 (4,5) - not the best flow, but it's acceptable

Good luck!!
CrazyErrorMan
Hello, Mod from my que.
Normal Diff
These circles are a little hard compared to other maps I have seen.
00:25:567
00:36:567
00:59:567
00:59:567

These circles are too quick I think for a normal diff.
That's all I've got to say.
If you don't find this mod helpful, don't worry.
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to No Dap

all fix

to CrazyErrorMan

yep, a llttle hard , i changed~


thanks for modding ^^/
10crystalmask01
Hey, mod from queue 8-)
[General]
01:13:734 - Kai time should end here, since this is officially where the chorus is done.
[Insane]
00:00:900 (3) - , 00:01:400 (5) - and 00:02:400 (8) - NC for a more vibrant color effect for the objects? (Similar to what you did for 01:11:067 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - )
00:03:567 (3) - ,00:04:067 (5) - and 00:04:567 (7) - - ^ Same suggestion.

00:44:400 (4) - NC Because it's the first object to appear in Kai.

00:55:067 (8) - Add finish for the cymbal crash heard in the music.
01:00:400 (1) - ^ On the head.

[615's Insane]
00:00:900 (2,3,4) - NC for those consecutive overlaps. I hate them
00:03:567 (2,3,4) - ^

00:22:900 (6,1,2,3,4) - Fix the star formation with these notes ,they're just really messy atm;


00:33:734 (1,3) - Random overlap, don't use this type of flow on this part of the music, it doesn't fit in the same rhythm with where 00:00:401 (1,1,1,1) - was.

01:11:567 (2,3,4) - NC?

[Hard]
00:00:900 (2,3,4) - Add finish on the head.
00:02:400 (5) - ^
00:03:567 (3) - ^
00:04:234 (5) - ^

00:44:400 (6) - NC because it's the first object to appear in Kai time.

00:45:734 (4,2,3) - Please move more apart to avoid that unnecessary overlap.

01:06:234 (2) - Add finish
01:06:900 (5) - ^
01:07:234 (1,2) - ^

[Normal]
00:21:734 (1) - Kinda forms an awkward flow. This is because it's reverse end is closer to the previous object, then it's actual head itself.
Here's an idea - Replace with 00:23:067 (2) - flipped horizontally (CTRL + H) and re-position it a bit. T Hat way, not only does it solve the issue, but it forms a pretty neat symmetry with 00:23:067 (2) - too!
SPOILER


*NOTE: You're going to hafta move the next objects just a bit for this to work

00:25:234 (1) - Remove NC, not necessary here.

00:27:900 (2,3) - This stack is very random, considering that none of your previous objects were stacked. Consider unstacking.

00:30:567 (2,3) - Stack, only if you disagree to my suggestion above. You want to keep the flow consistent.

00:40:734 (6) - NC instead of 00:41:234 (1) - .

00:41:650 (1) - Add whistle?

00:44:400 (1) - Add finish on the head.

01:00:400 (5) - NC instead of 01:01:067 (1) - , since it appears no the new rhythm cycle (on the long white tick mark).

01:19:067 (4) - Add finish.

[Yuki's Easy]
Okay.

Good luck!
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to 10crystalmask01

all fix

but here

[Normal]

00:40:734 (6) - NC instead of 00:41:234 (1) - . (6)fix , but (1) i think should NC also for next( appear spinner

thanks for modding ^^/

add Teller's Insane , map by tellertheworld
Koiyuki
No Dap:
about following the vocal, I put the slider on 00:48:234 - before, but I finally accept Wafu's suggestion to make it on 1/2 beats.
I will condiser to change it or not if some others give me suggestions.

I think it's not necessary to add timing sections.

Currently, no change
Rizia
no kds

[Teller's Insane]
01:13:734 - 完在這裡
YoshinoSakura

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

[615]
01:02:400 (3,4) - 換成3連slider http://puu.sh/7Uwd9.jpg
01:16:400 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 我不會跟你說我恨這個 建議改改 改成00:13:734 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 一樣也好 稍稍改了下

Piyoko_9796 wrote:

[615 baka]
臥感覺太跳?((撒...我就是說說=3=還可以
感覺flow不太好?
感覺不太好 只是稍微跳一点吧

00:10:900 (4) - del 有音的
00:12:067 (4) - x:112 y:200 那也太近
00:13:734 (1,2,3) -美麗的路程曲折! 美丽!

00:21:067 (3,4,5,6,1) - 太密了而且好難按 改了下
00:23:067 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這5角形滑條折點放中間(4)和(5)間距不一樣故意的? 你输得对,这里是渐开
00:26:400 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 太密,(5)根本看不見2個短滑條又不是早消失能而看的見加上連打順著去停在(3)尾就像停了一樣,你讓我吐糟什麼((我在說什麼 这是我改变的米桶的梗。。
00:28:234 (5) - 移到00:21:567 (6) - , 00:28:400 (1,2) - 移到本來(5)的位置 没看懂。。
00:29:067 (4) - Ctrl G 感觉不错
00:39:734 (1) - x:152 y:176 更不好看了。。
00:40:067 (2) - x:88 y:344 叠到1上了更不好看惹,,
00:43:234 (1,2,3,4,5,1) -美麗好麼hhh 。。

00:46:400 (2) - 不在三角形中間... 本来就没设计在中间。。
00:47:734 (3) - Ctrl G? 都好像flow不好? 555怎么修都修不好。。
00:48:900 (3) - 滑條折點不在中間+不在(2)的正後方.... 两次ctrl+g即可解决
00:59:567 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 同樣,滑條(不正常地)擋住連打難讀圖,還有(4)好奇怪... 改了
01:02:400 (3,4) - 各縮小一個返回
01:08:067 (5,6,1) -啦啦啦啦 港妹baka

01:13:734 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 這音樂給我的感覺是越縮越小诶 渐开跳而已
01:19:067 (1) - end at 01:21:067 -

m1223961117 wrote:

00:06:900 (6) - 三角形沒有排好 不是三角。。
00:15:734 (5) - 太遠了,Reverse Selection 不远
00:18:900 (6) - 疊在00:19:067 (1) 頭上 no
00:22:900 (6,1,2,3,4) - 正五角形擺好 不是五角形
00:26:567 (4) - 移到x144 y68 那也太远
00:37:400 (4) - 減少一次折返 感觉没必要,这里有音的
00:42:567 (6,7,8) - 重新做這三個點,跳太遠了
00:43:234 (1,2) - ^
00:45:567 (5,1) - ^
00:47:567 (2,3) - ^ sorry no change
00:52:567 (2,4,6,8) - 網內拉近距離,同上
00:57:067 (2,3,4,5) - 太遠了
00:58:234 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - ^
01:00:734 (2,3) - ^
01:02:400 (3,4) - 這種滑條不是給你這樣擺的,你打的到就當我沒Mod過 改了
01:10:567 (4,5,6,7,1) - 太遠了
01:13:734 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^,要求重製
01:16:400 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 重製,這裡你打的到?? 改了

歌開始前10秒我還以為是神圖,不合格
BPM180跳這麼遠,除非你打的過,否則我不會要求重製
不是你打不到的地方就不能打,不是我打不了的图我就不能做
抱歉。抱歉了没改多少

10crystalmask01 wrote:

[615's Insane]
00:00:900 (2,3,4) - NC for those consecutive overlaps. I hate them sorry for these patterns.I'm just copying them from others map.But I think NC is not needed here.
00:03:567 (2,3,4) - ^

00:22:900 (6,1,2,3,4) - Fix the star formation with these notes ,they're just really messy atm; it's not a star pattern


00:33:734 (1,3) - Random overlap, don't use this type of flow on this part of the music, it doesn't fit in the same rhythm with where 00:00:401 (1,1,1,1) - was. fixed

01:11:567 (2,3,4) - NC?^
thx for mod
to all the coming modder
I'll probably not reduce the difficulty of my diff.Sorry for that.If you can't play,just skip my diff.

哟~~~~蹦!
osu file format v12

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Countdown: 0
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160,76,28734,2,0,P|172:112|168:148,1,72,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,346,29067,2,0,P|122:349|172:300,1,144,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,52,29734,6,0,P|388:88|408:184,1,144,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,248,30234,2,0,P|384:212|324:244,1,144,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,312,30734,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,344,30900,6,0,P|208:296|192:196,1,144,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,124,31400,2,0,P|108:160|104:204,1,72,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,344,31734,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,184,31900,1,8,0:3:0:0:
116,124,32067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
444,60,32400,6,0,P|460:104|456:152,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,120,32900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,120,33067,2,0,L|344:212,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,188,33734,6,0,P|120:232|136:276,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,216,34234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
44,200,34400,2,0,P|44:244|60:296,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,332,35067,6,0,P|392:288|400:232,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,156,35567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,236,35734,2,0,P|306:280|306:325,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,192,36400,6,0,P|80:232|80:288,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,260,36734,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,160,36900,2,0,P|128:100|36:120,1,180,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,192,37400,2,0,L|80:240,3,45,8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,260,37734,5,0,1:0:0:0:
320,312,37900,1,0,1:0:0:0:
176,260,38234,5,0,1:0:0:0:
392,244,38401,1,0,1:0:0:0:
176,260,38734,5,0,1:0:0:0:
412,152,38900,1,0,1:0:0:0:
176,260,39234,5,0,1:0:0:0:
376,64,39400,1,0,1:0:0:0:
176,260,39734,6,0,L|176:312,1,45,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,260,40067,2,0,L|176:212,1,45,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,260,40400,6,0,P|88:308|16:372,1,144,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,284,40900,2,0,P|0:236|72:172,1,144,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,160,41400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,196,41567,6,0,P|300:252|304:352,1,144,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,148,42067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,196,42234,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,196,42317,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,196,42400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,32,42567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,256,42734,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,268,42900,1,4,0:0:0:0:
160,268,43234,6,0,P|156:316|176:364,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,96,43734,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,152,43900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,232,44067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,80,44234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,308,44400,6,0,B|304:364|336:300|336:300|396:336|452:288,1,215.999993408203,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,196,45067,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,328,45234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,184,45400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,348,45567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,108,45734,6,0,B|256:152|236:208|236:208|244:224|244:224|292:200|332:228,1,215.999993408203,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
329,226,46400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,308,46567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,128,46734,1,8,0:0:0:0:
444,260,46900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,364,47067,6,0,B|184:320|204:264|204:264|152:232|96:268,1,215.999993408203,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,356,47567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,72,47734,2,0,P|88:120|88:180,1,107.999996704102,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,40,48067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,64,48234,6,0,P|392:76|376:124,1,107.999996704102,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,264,48567,2,0,P|230:261|229:212,1,107.999996704102,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
135,176,48900,2,0,P|126:280|198:357,1,215.999993408203,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,360,49400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,320,49567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,320,49650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,320,49734,6,0,P|404:268|404:212,1,107.999996704102,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,92,50067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,40,50234,2,0,B|240:64|265:103|265:103|297:147|223:181|288:228,1,215.999993408203,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,225,50734,1,8,0:0:0:0:
52,248,51067,6,0,B|56:280|56:280|88:304|84:352,1,107.999996704102,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,348,51400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,288,51567,2,0,B|232:224|160:244|160:244|144:224|144:224|136:176,1,215.999993408203,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,348,52067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
428,72,52400,5,0,0:0:0:0:
456,244,52567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,80,52734,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,296,52900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,80,53067,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,304,53234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,72,53400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,260,53567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,48,53734,6,0,P|236:36|184:60,2,107.999996704102,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,148,54234,2,0,B|216:208|260:248|260:248|304:296|272:356,1,215.999993408203,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,316,54734,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,184,54900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,160,55067,6,0,B|64:116|100:76|100:76|168:128|164:28|248:96,1,215.999993408203,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,324,55734,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,168,55900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,336,56067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
504,248,56234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,256,56400,6,0,B|248:284|244:336|244:336|216:352|184:332|184:332|152:312|124:328,1,215.999993408203,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
131,324,57067,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,108,57234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,280,57400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,148,57567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,172,57734,6,0,B|28:120|104:116|104:116|104:52|168:24,1,215.999993408203,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,148,58234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,268,58400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,108,58567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,48,58734,1,8,0:0:0:0:
100,296,58900,6,0,B|112:348|112:348|176:368,1,107.999996704102,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,108,59234,2,0,B|408:56|408:56|344:36,1,107.999996704102,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,48,59567,2,0,P|168:97|180:148,1,107.999996704102,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,168,59900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,308,60067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,308,60150,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,292,60234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,268,60317,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,240,60400,6,0,P|200:200|184:136,1,107.999996704102,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,224,60734,2,0,P|36:272|40:332,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,216,61067,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,44,61234,2,0,P|424:92|428:156,2,107.999996704102,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,260,61734,6,0,B|404:316|352:316|352:316|304:364|256:344,1,215.999993408203,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,204,62234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,320,62400,2,0,P|96:352|96:380,2,53.9999983520508
56,176,62734,2,0,P|24:192|0:212,2,53.9999983520508
156,60,63067,6,0,P|204:56|276:72,1,107.999996704102,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,328,63400,2,0,P|340:332|268:316,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,204,63734,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,204,63900,2,0,P|395:193|341:197,2,107.999996704102,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,328,64400,6,0,B|344:344|312:312|312:312|280:320|280:320|248:256|188:304,1,215.999993408203,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,372,64900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,220,65067,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,64,65234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,204,65400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,40,65567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,212,65734,6,0,P|384:262|376:328,1,107.999996704102,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,288,66067,1,2,0:0:0:0:
468,236,66234,1,0,1:0:0:0:
240,288,66567,5,2,0:0:0:0:
468,236,66734,1,2,0:0:0:0:
324,24,66900,2,0,B|256:32|232:92|232:92|180:72|140:116,1,215.999993408203,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
336,136,67400,1,0,1:0:0:0:
116,324,68067,1,2,0:0:0:0:
116,324,68234,1,2,0:0:0:0:
116,324,68400,6,0,P|116:280|128:228,1,90,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
176,124,68734,1,10,0:0:0:0:
128,328,68900,6,0,P|128:284|140:232,1,90,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
188,128,69234,1,2,0:0:0:0:
140,332,69400,6,0,P|140:288|152:236,1,90,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
204,132,69734,1,2,0:0:0:0:
152,336,69900,6,0,P|152:292|164:240,1,90,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
220,136,70234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,296,70400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,168,70567,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,168,70650,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,168,70734,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,68,70900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,336,71067,6,0,B|200:336|200:336|248:356,1,90,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
176,240,71567,2,0,B|220:240|220:240|268:260,1,90,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
196,144,72067,2,0,B|240:144|240:144|288:164,1,90,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
220,48,72567,2,0,B|264:48|264:48|312:68,1,90,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
156,336,73067,1,0,1:0:0:0:
68,40,73400,1,4,0:0:0:0:
344,296,73734,5,4,0:0:0:0:
328,132,73900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,292,74067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
412,192,74234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,136,74400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,380,74567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,92,74734,1,8,0:0:0:0:
108,100,74900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,352,75067,5,0,0:0:0:0:
412,192,75234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,192,75317,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,192,75400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,256,75567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,92,75734,2,0,P|368:100|328:140,2,90,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,196,76400,5,0,0:0:0:0:
56,244,76484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,280,76567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,328,76650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,352,76734,2,0,P|156:328|172:280,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,352,77067,5,0,0:0:0:0:
388,304,77150,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,304,77233,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,256,77317,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,256,77400,2,0,B|270:235|258:215|258:215|242:195|258:171,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,256,77734,5,0,0:0:0:0:
66,153,77900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
283,122,78067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
125,274,78234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
163,59,78400,2,0,P|150:111|190:231,1,180,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,79067,12,0,81067,0:0:0:0:
smallboat
嗨二妹,好多post,懷疑要sprank 直覺。 干 作了一周BAT美麗check就這樣塔馬的放兩周還等不到check真SAD

[General]

1.我之前拿的是舊檔案up過了後,現在tag還是不一致,試著再重新貼上一次GDer使一致。
2.Widescreen support 不一致,ins忘了勾。

[Yuki's Easy]

00:29:067 (2) - 這個人聲加whistle似乎有不錯的效果。
00:31:734 (2) - 我覺得應該能跟上面對應是加whistle,而不是finish。
00:47:067 (1) - 或許應該尾端要空一格白線比較好掌握下一個節奏,個人意見。
00:59:067 (2) - 感覺尾端忘了加whistle強調vocal
01:19:067 (1) - 為何不讓中間描點對準Y軸成一個對稱圖形? 然後左邊尖端高了點.

Nazi,後面那一根草歪了。

[Normal]

SPOILER
00:09:067 (2) - 前端+whistle可突出音樂
00:11:067 (1,2) - 兩個硬包不太好看
00:14:400 (2) - 同00:09:067
00:24:067 (3) - 故意沒疊好?
00:30:567 (2) - 覺得這也是重音能加finish突顯效果。
00:38:234 (2,4) - 不如都換成1/2跟人聲
00:47:734 (3) - 尾端去掉finish,沒重音,無理由加。
00:58:400 (3,4) - 1都有加whistle,這邊全加whistle強調人聲。
01:17:067 (2) - 前端whistle

後面也是一根草歪。

[Hard] 00:48:734 timing線可刪去

SPOILER
00:03:234 (2) - 加whistle與4對應
00:06:734 (6) - 前端whistle
00:11:900 (4) - 加whistle節奏聽的會舒服點。
00:23:067 (1) - 尾端沒重音為何finish,無理。
00:30:067 (1,2,3) - 1尾端,2和3加finish試試? 重音。
00:33:067 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 或許間距能再放小一點作anti-jump.
00:50:567 (5) - 為何不ctrl+g?
00:52:400 (1,2,3,4) - 沒互相對稱呢
00:59:234 (4) - Ctrl+G比較好點5。

後面也是一根草歪。

[615's Insane]

就只有615的轉盤結束跟大家不一樣。

SPOILER
00:10:984 (5) - (388|332)做個弧度?
00:13:067 (5) - Ctrl+g不就順flow了?
00:27:567 (3) - 重音怎不加finish?
00:28:400 (1) - (28|128)比較順暢flow。
00:30:234 (2) - 重音怎不加finish?
00:41:567 (1) - 可以加個finish或whistle強調人聲。
00:58:900 (1,2,3) - 這邊都唱出來的vocal所以我覺得可以加finish在這裡。
01:15:234 (2) - 不完全重疊嗎?
01:18:400 (5) - 或許開頭能加whistle。

[Teller's Insane]

有些重音加得很奇怪,聽得有些吵雜。

SPOILER
00:02:067 (8) - 紅線不需要加finish,這邊無重音,無理。連續3個finish有點noisy。
00:04:234 (6,8) - 藍線whistle聽的不是很舒服,remove it?
00:05:067 (9) - 少一個note跟vocal。
00:06:567 (3) - 不是重音,搬去finsh。(搬去這個會聽得比較流暢)
00:10:900 (7) - 這個1/4note間距有點小,放大到0.80x比較好讀。(個人意見,可能我喜歡作圖連打間距比較大一點。)
00:11:734 (2) - 加finish也是可以,不過建議還是remove。
00:12:400 (3) - 中間和尾端去掉finish,連續3個也是太吵雜。
00:15:734 (5) - 全去finish,頭尾whistle。
00:21:900 (2,3,4) - 23那麼遠,34又那麼近,不如放在(228|152)來平均間距,順便5包3。00:22:400 (5) 可以移到(152|68)試試。
00:26:817 (3,4,5,6) - 不好看的slider,而且又容易miss,還是用1/4比較適當。
00:37:900 (2,2,2,2) - finish的音效都把音樂蓋住了,建議可以remove藍線的finish。
00:43:234 (1,2) - 2個之間怎這麼近,明明之間還有一個白線的距離。
00:43:567 (2,3) - 這2跟3之間跟vocal的這段怎沒做? (會讓玩家沒辦法掌握何時click)
00:44:734 (1) - 尾端沒重音remove finish。
00:45:234 (2) - 沒疊好
00:59:234 (2) - 疊00:58:400 (2) 會很flow。
01:01:067 (6) - 紅線不需要finish。
01:02:400 (4) - ^
01:04:067 (6) - 疊01:02:400 (4) 。
01:08:567 (2,4,6,8) - 一樣remove藍線finish,不然很吵。
01:11:400 (2,4,6) - overmap,沒節奏在這裡。(參考615 ins diff 和 二妹 diff )
01:16:400 (1,2,3,4) - 節奏是可以,但這個pattern似乎不太好看。

[Insane]

SPOILER
00:07:567 (4) - 為何不移到(252|220)左右位置成個圓形? 這樣看起來覺得好像放歪。
00:08:734 (5) - 尾端去掉whistle,與後面的whistle相對應這樣音效比較好聽。
00:11:400 (3) - 有點突出的感覺。
00:14:067 (5) - 尾端疊好?
00:18:067 (3,4) - 2個ctrl+g不就flow?
00:23:400 (4) - 我覺得ctrl+g比較順。
00:23:734 (5) - 如果上面那個用了這個疊 00:22:234 (2) 頭。
00:30:567 (4,5) - 尾端whistle感覺有點違和。
00:35:067 (1) - 尾端whistle去掉?
00:36:900 (6) - 再跳一點,移到(68|96)包3?
00:40:067 (2) - 覺得疊00:38:734 (1) 比較有感覺。
00:45:067 (1) - 再稍微調一下就變五角了
00:48:234 (1,2) - 也是覺得尾端whistle有點違和
00:50:234 (4) - 開頭忘了finish?
00:51:567 (4) - ^
00:58:900 (1,2) - 也是覺得尾端whistle有點違和
01:08:900 (1,1) - 加finish
01:09:900 (1) - ^
01:11:734 (2,2) - ^

後面草歪。


二妹Good Luck ~ !

草歪=綠線(草)歪了
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to smallboat

都修惹 我把提到的音效 其他diff没的也加惹

草歪惹 这个没看懂

感谢mod

太难rank惹 我还是不收GD惹= =对Teller感到非常抱歉

615你的已经mod很多了啊 再这么懒也不收你的GD惹

Teller's Insane dl here
-Teina-

moonlightleaf wrote:

to smallboat

都修惹 我把提到的音效 其他diff没的也加惹

草歪惹 这个没看懂

感谢mod

太难rank惹 我还是不收GD惹= =对Teller感到非常抱歉

615你的已经mod很多了啊 再这么懒也不收你的GD惹

Teller's Insane dl here
好吧~
那你繼續努力吧
-Teina-

smallboat wrote:

嗨二妹,好多post,懷疑要sprank 直覺。 干 作了一周BAT美麗check就這樣塔馬的放兩周還等不到check真SAD
SPOILER
[General]

1.我之前拿的是舊檔案up過了後,現在tag還是不一致,試著再重新貼上一次GDer使一致。
2.Widescreen support 不一致,ins忘了勾。

[Yuki's Easy]

00:29:067 (2) - 這個人聲加whistle似乎有不錯的效果。
00:31:734 (2) - 我覺得應該能跟上面對應是加whistle,而不是finish。
00:47:067 (1) - 或許應該尾端要空一格白線比較好掌握下一個節奏,個人意見。
00:59:067 (2) - 感覺尾端忘了加whistle強調vocal
01:19:067 (1) - 為何不讓中間描點對準Y軸成一個對稱圖形? 然後左邊尖端高了點.

Nazi,後面那一根草歪了。

[Normal]

00:09:067 (2) - 前端+whistle可突出音樂
00:11:067 (1,2) - 兩個硬包不太好看
00:14:400 (2) - 同00:09:067
00:24:067 (3) - 故意沒疊好?
00:30:567 (2) - 覺得這也是重音能加finish突顯效果。
00:38:234 (2,4) - 不如都換成1/2跟人聲
00:47:734 (3) - 尾端去掉finish,沒重音,無理由加。
00:58:400 (3,4) - 1都有加whistle,這邊全加whistle強調人聲。
01:17:067 (2) - 前端whistle

後面也是一根草歪。

[Hard] 00:48:734 timing線可刪去

00:03:234 (2) - 加whistle與4對應
00:06:734 (6) - 前端whistle
00:11:900 (4) - 加whistle節奏聽的會舒服點。
00:23:067 (1) - 尾端沒重音為何finish,無理。
00:30:067 (1,2,3) - 1尾端,2和3加finish試試? 重音。
00:33:067 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 或許間距能再放小一點作anti-jump.
00:50:567 (5) - 為何不ctrl+g?
00:52:400 (1,2,3,4) - 沒互相對稱呢
00:59:234 (4) - Ctrl+G比較好點5。

後面也是一根草歪。

[615's Insane]

就只有615的轉盤結束跟大家不一樣。

00:10:984 (5) - (388|332)做個弧度?
00:13:067 (5) - Ctrl+g不就順flow了?
00:27:567 (3) - 重音怎不加finish?
00:28:400 (1) - (28|128)比較順暢flow。
00:30:234 (2) - 重音怎不加finish?
00:41:567 (1) - 可以加個finish或whistle強調人聲。
00:58:900 (1,2,3) - 這邊都唱出來的vocal所以我覺得可以加finish在這裡。
01:15:234 (2) - 不完全重疊嗎?
01:18:400 (5) - 或許開頭能加whistle。

[Teller's Insane]

有些重音加得很奇怪,聽得有些吵雜。

00:02:067 (8) - 紅線不需要加finish,這邊無重音,無理。連續3個finish有點noisy。 :arrow: 紅線一直沒FINISH喔
00:04:234 (6,8) - 藍線whistle聽的不是很舒服,remove it? :arrow: 這個都一直沒whistle
00:05:067 (9) - 少一個note跟vocal。 :arrow: 00:05:067 - 加了圈
00:06:567 (3) - 不是重音,搬去finsh。(搬去這個會聽得比較流暢) :arrow: 搬了去00:06:400 (2) -
00:10:900 (7) - 這個1/4note間距有點小,放大到0.80x比較好讀。(個人意見,可能我喜歡作圖連打間距比較大一點。) :arrow: fixed
00:11:734 (2) - 加finish也是可以,不過建議還是remove。 :arrow: 改小聲一點吧
00:12:400 (3) - 中間和尾端去掉finish,連續3個也是太吵雜。 :arrow: 一直都是中間和尾端去finish喔
00:15:734 (5) - 全去finish,頭尾whistle。 :arrow: 抱歉 因為不會再改 不把新的hitsound pattern加入了 所以試不到這個效果
00:21:900 (2,3,4) - 23那麼遠,34又那麼近,不如放在(228|152)來平均間距,順便5包3。00:22:400 (5) 可以移到(152|68)試試。
:arrow: 00:22:400 (5,2) - 是blanket的 / 00:21:734 (1,2) - 和 00:22:067 (3,4) - 是平均的 這個排版出現了多次了喔
00:26:817 (3,4,5,6) - 不好看的slider,而且又容易miss,還是用1/4比較適當。 :arrow: fixed
00:37:900 (2,2,2,2) - finish的音效都把音樂蓋住了,建議可以remove藍線的finish。 :arrow: 藍線的finish 一直都是沒有喔
00:43:234 (1,2) - 2個之間怎這麼近,明明之間還有一個白線的距離。 :arrow: fixed
00:43:567 (2,3) - 這2跟3之間跟vocal的這段怎沒做? (會讓玩家沒辦法掌握何時click) :arrow: 個人節奏 覺得這樣比較好 抱歉 不能給你原因T_T
00:44:734 (1) - 尾端沒重音remove finish。 :arrow: 尾端一直沒finish喔
00:45:234 (2) - 沒疊好 :arrow: 疊好的話 stack leniency會發揮作用 令00:46:151 (2) - 會移位
00:59:234 (2) - 疊00:58:400 (2) 會很flow。 :arrow: thank~ fixed
01:01:067 (6) - 紅線不需要finish。 :arrow: 一直都是沒finish呀 尾端
01:02:400 (4) - ^:arrow: 一直都是沒finish呀 尾端
01:04:067 (6) - 疊01:02:400 (4) 。 :arrow: 節奏沒變 突然做個jump會很奇怪
01:08:567 (2,4,6,8) - 一樣remove藍線finish,不然很吵。:arrow: 一直都是沒finish的說 slider的尾端
01:11:400 (2,4,6) - overmap,沒節奏在這裡。(參考615 ins diff 和 二妹 diff ) :arrow: fixed
01:16:400 (1,2,3,4) - 節奏是可以,但這個pattern似乎不太好看。 :arrow: fixed

感覺大大耐心幫我mod
這是最後的修改吧....

音效方面 你可能需要redwonload喔~

祝小moon你rank圖成功~

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288,184,18234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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204,140,18900,21,0,0:0:0:0:
284,256,19067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,260,19234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,192,19400,2,0,P|24:144|24:104,1,95
144,260,19734,5,8,0:0:0:0:
120,116,19900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,64,20067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
284,256,20234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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196,236,22067,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,192,22234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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328,144,22900,5,0,0:0:0:0:
244,196,23067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
364,216,23234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,216,23317,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,216,23400,1,2,0:0:0:0:
348,328,23567,2,8,P|260:328|220:312,1,95
124,244,23900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,244,23984,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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236,176,25067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
124,244,25234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,164,25400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,44,25567,6,0,L|276:108,1,95
412,116,25900,1,2,0:0:0:0:
412,116,25984,2,0,L|344:116,1,47.5
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360,176,26234,2,0,L|420:176,1,47.5
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348,248,31567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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248,352,32150,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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264,352,32317,1,2,0:0:0:0:
268,352,32400,22,0,L|304:352|384:352,1,113.999996520996,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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384,232,32984,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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136,215,36067,2,2,P|90:223|48:204,2,95
144,212,36484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,208,36567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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264,240,38900,2,4,L|288:292,1,47.5
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356,228,39400,2,4,L|412:228,1,47.5
288,120,39734,6,0,P|216:92|176:112,1,95
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104,312,40400,5,0,0:0:0:0:
108,308,40484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,308,40567,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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124,316,40817,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,320,40900,2,2,P|176:332|224:324,1,95
296,264,41234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,216,41400,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,120,41567,6,0,P|372:128|412:160,3,95
412,272,42234,5,0,0:0:0:0:
404,276,42317,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,280,42400,1,2,0:0:0:0:
388,284,42484,1,2,0:0:0:0:
380,288,42567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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364,292,42734,1,2,0:0:0:0:
356,292,42817,1,2,0:0:0:0:
348,292,42900,2,0,L|236:292,1,95
208,72,43234,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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452,136,44567,1,2,0:0:0:0:
452,140,44650,1,2,0:0:0:0:
452,144,44734,6,4,P|416:216|368:232,1,113.999996520996
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232,160,45234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,132,45400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,180,45567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,72,45734,2,2,P|86:41|144:44,1,95,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,157,46067,5,0,0:0:0:0:
232,157,46151,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,157,46234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,264,46400,21,2,0:0:0:0:
232,160,46567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,204,46734,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,240,46900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,292,47067,2,2,P|256:332|320:356,2,95
320,264,47567,5,0,0:0:0:0:
224,196,47734,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,232,47900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,128,48067,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,196,48234,22,0,L|232:300,1,95,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,160,48567,2,0,L|318:208,1,95,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,76,48900,2,0,L|296:48,1,95
184,120,49234,2,0,L|112:120,2,47.5
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284,244,49650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,276,49734,1,4,0:0:0:0:
200,296,49900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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288,176,53400,5,0,0:0:0:0:
168,48,53567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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372,160,54984,1,2,0:0:0:0:
372,156,55067,2,4,P|326:103|280:88,1,95,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,256,55400,5,0,0:0:0:0:
220,256,55484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,256,55567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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0,220,56067,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,228,56234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,308,56400,2,2,P|248:280|292:240,1,95,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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396,176,57234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,200,57400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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204,256,58400,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,232,58567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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204,256,59234,2,0,L|136:344,1,95,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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376,140,59900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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328,48,60234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,48,60317,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,48,60400,2,4,P|284:36|236:48,1,95,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,212,60734,2,0,P|296:168|280:116,1,95
240,284,61067,2,4,P|284:296|332:284,1,95
204,168,61400,21,2,0:0:0:0:
284,212,61567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,248,61734,2,4,P|116:264|64:244,1,95
164,152,62067,5,0,0:0:0:0:
128,152,62150,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,152,62234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,64,62400,2,4,P|240:56|308:72,1,95
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260,196,64817,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,196,64900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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352,168,66234,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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104,160,67234,1,2,0:0:0:0:
104,88,67400,1,4,0:0:0:0:
360,44,68400,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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216,112,68900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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172,356,70317,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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492,208,71234,5,4,0:0:0:0:
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140,96,72984,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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288,300,73734,5,2,0:0:0:0:
380,264,73900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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148,248,74234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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312,80,74567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,264,74734,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,312,74900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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272,228,75567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,264,75734,2,2,P|428:228|448:188,2,95,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,292,76400,5,6,0:0:0:0:
152,292,76484,1,2,0:0:0:0:
148,292,76567,2,0,L|80:292,1,47.5
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80,48,77067,5,2,0:0:0:0:
84,48,77150,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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188,136,78400,2,2,P|168:88|124:60,2,95
256,192,78817,12,0,81734,0:0:0:0:
SPOILER
[Insane]

00:07:567 (4) - 為何不移到(252|220)左右位置成個圓形? 這樣看起來覺得好像放歪。
00:08:734 (5) - 尾端去掉whistle,與後面的whistle相對應這樣音效比較好聽。
00:11:400 (3) - 有點突出的感覺。
00:14:067 (5) - 尾端疊好?
00:18:067 (3,4) - 2個ctrl+g不就flow?
00:23:400 (4) - 我覺得ctrl+g比較順。
00:23:734 (5) - 如果上面那個用了這個疊 00:22:234 (2) 頭。
00:30:567 (4,5) - 尾端whistle感覺有點違和。
00:35:067 (1) - 尾端whistle去掉?
00:36:900 (6) - 再跳一點,移到(68|96)包3?
00:40:067 (2) - 覺得疊00:38:734 (1) 比較有感覺。
00:45:067 (1) - 再稍微調一下就變五角了
00:48:234 (1,2) - 也是覺得尾端whistle有點違和
00:50:234 (4) - 開頭忘了finish?
00:51:567 (4) - ^
00:58:900 (1,2) - 也是覺得尾端whistle有點違和
01:08:900 (1,1) - 加finish
01:09:900 (1) - ^
01:11:734 (2,2) - ^

後面草歪。


二妹Good Luck ~ !

草歪=綠線(草)歪了
-Neipezi
hihi:3/

[General]
- Audio lead-in conflicts with 615's Insane diff.
- Tags "tellertheworld" remove
- Color Settings
owo?


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,66,160
Combo2 : 255,128,192
Combo3 : 255,128,255
Combo4 : 255,77,255

[Yuki's Easy]
00:24:400 (1) - add whistle tail
01:19:067 (1) - placed in the center? add whistle tail

[Normal]
00:24:400 (1) - add whistle tail
00:25:234 (2) - whistle add
00:27:067 (1) - add whistle tail
00:27:900 (2) - whistle add
00:28:234 (3) - whistle add on the head
00:39:734 (5) - 1/1 slide short change? so, here's the vocals and fit it, then 00:40:400 (1) to move. and 00:41:234 (1) - NC remove
00:58:400 (3) - add whistle tail
00:59:234 (4) - whistle add

[Hard]
00:05:067 (7) - whistle add?
00:10:734 (4) - why soft:C2 did you use? i'm soft:C1 is recommended that you use.
00:48:067 (5) - then go to 00:48:234 - , 00:48:067 - to circle add. this vocal beat
01:08:067 - 01:08:234 - circle add? vocal
01:18:734 (4) - clap add on the head

[Insane]
00:05:400 - same as Hard
00:28:900 - here is circle add
00:52:400 (1) - finish add
00:52:734 (3,3) - clap add?

[615's Insane]
00:09:734 (1,2) - change location?
00:10:984 (5) - x384 y328 move
01:16:400 (1,2,3,4,5) - pattern is difficult to play x.x
01:17:067 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:19:067 (1) - 01:21:734 - spinner end?

good lucky'w'/
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to -Neipezi

color maybe no so fit , o.o 2pink ? so not change

all fix

thanks for modding ^^/

to yuki&615 好像loadin 得在txt里面改 还得复制别的难度的 ,直接改好像还是不行 我试过的 难道我bug了,你们看着改额
P A N
from my queue :3

[General]

I agree with 615, I think spinner end on 01:21:067 sounds better. but honestly I want you to map all of it even on the fade-out. you can map it while decrease the volume by up to the song's sound. :( because I think the spinner is a bit not fit with song well too. maybe consult with BAT about this.
btw what is this http://puu.sh/7XX4y.jpg it's look like... nah nevermind.

[Insane]

00:12:400 (3) - change to 1/2 slider and add note on 00:12:734 are more fit with the song imo.
00:16:400 (1,2,3,4,5) - star is not symmetry imo.
00:16:400 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - I fix this pattern to be symmetry and clean for you, pleaseeeee try it before reject, i'm try hard here.
128,224,16400,5,4,0:0:0:0:
192,84,16567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,80,16734,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,184,16900,1,8,0:0:0:0:
56,164,17067,2,0,P|32:208|40:260,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,244,17400,2,0,P|292:200|284:148,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,84,17734,5,2,0:0:0:0:
360,152,17900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,184,18067,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,52,18234,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,224,18400,2,0,P|368:272|352:320,2,95,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,84,18900,21,0,0:0:0:0:
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257,220,19234,2,0,L|352:224,2,95,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:21:234 (2,3,4) - try to make their spacing balance? like about 2.07x or 2.1x
00:30:900 (5) - you can make it more flow to change it like this http://puu.sh/7XVeH.jpg
00:35:567 - hmm add note here would be fit too but if you want to follow just a vocal it's ok.
00:45:234 (2,4) - move to 36|96 , 28|196 for better star.
00:55:734 (1,3,4) - move to 52|36 , 152|52 , 8|124 for better star.
01:06:734 (4,5) - try to to balance spacing. it would be great.

[615]

00:16:400 (1,2,4) - move to 452|344 , 484|256 , 405|200 for better star.
01:02:400 (3,4) - I think 1/2 is more fit on this part. please reconsider.
01:11:067 (1) - should be 160|340.
01:15:400 (4) - something funny here.

[Hard]

00:05:734 (1,2,3,4,5) - try this? better star imo http://puu.sh/7XXdy.jpg
256,160,5734,5,4,0:0:0:0:
316,268,5900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,216,6067,1,2,0:0:0:0:
328,192,6234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,284,6400,2,0,P|200:292|176:324,1,70
00:07:067 (7,8,9,10,11) - try this rhythm instead, it's really fit with the song. http://puu.sh/7XXhm.jpg
00:37:734 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - make a pattern here? example: http://puu.sh/7XXn5.jpg
00:47:567 (2,5) - move 67|131 , 152|96 for better star.

[Normal]

00:58:400 (3) - move center to 299|246 for better blanket.
looks fine for me :3

[Yuki]

00:44:400 (1) - what about just note here and add 1/2 slider or note on 00:44:734, I think yeah sound need to be click.
00:55:067 (1,2) - ^
nice easy diff :3

that's all GL
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to P A N

I agree with 615, I think spinner end on 01:21:067 sounds better. but honestly I want you to map all of it even on the fade-out. you can map it while decrease the volume by up to the song's sound. :( because I think the spinner is a bit not fit with song well too. maybe consult with BAT about this.---OK end at 01:21:067 , map all i think can be not , just in my opinion, maybe consult with BAT

btw what is this http://puu.sh/7XX4y.jpg it's look like... nah nevermind.---in fact , i don't know what it is ’= =‘ sorry

[Insane]

all fix then

00:16:400 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - your code is very nice~

[hard]

all fix then

00:05:734 (1,2,3,4,5) - nice code

00:37:734 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - make a pattern here? example: http://puu.sh/7XXn5.jpg --very beautiful :)

[Normal]

all fix

thanks for modding ^^/

PS: insane 的变速滑条没法换颜色了 (准确的说 我点NC小箭头完全没用,摁Q倒是能换色,但是全是按着颜色顺序的,bug了? 但是别人能弄 我却不可以,真美丽!等能弄了我再补上
Koiyuki
currently no change, thanks for modding :3
[Hijiri Byakuren]
[Yuki's Easy]
00:48:400 (2) - 节奏应该在这里 00:48:234 (2)
00:59:067 (2) - ……………………00:58:900 (2)

[Normal]
建议1.0 DS 太紧了.怎么做flow?

00:47:734 (3,4) - 是什么节奏? 不如模仿这段00:58:400 (3,4) - 的节奏呢

感觉就是太紧 看着很不舒服
我看你很多长滑条都是勉强拉出来的
没什么美感

[Hard]
建议多用clap
你自己摆的节奏用whistle太轻。不好找节奏
00:07:067 (1,2) - 建议折返条
或者这个00:07:567 (3) - 删了
不过还是建议00:07:067 (1,2,3,4,5) 和 00:08:400 (1,2) - 交换一下节奏 后面的到前面 前面的到后面

00:12:400 (1,2,3,4) - 柑橘节奏不对 怪怪的
改 or
00:12:900 (2) - 00:13:400 (4) -00:14:067 (2,4) - clap
00:16:067 (4) - finish
00:15:734 (3) - whistle

我觉得在歌手唱之前遵循00:05:734 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - 的节奏 就是 X X X X XX XX XXX XXX . XXX X XXX X X-X-X X
你自己摆的节奏实在是有点奇怪

00:17:234 (4) - 删
00:17:400 (5) - to 00:17:567
or
00:17:567 00:18:900 加note
or
00:17:400 (5) - 00:18:734 (5) - 不摆节奏
00:17:567 00:18:900 加note

00:22:900 (5) - 我发现你滑条前面的那根红线都不加节奏的 那里明明有个お

00:41:067 (5) - 删

00:42:567 (5) - 这种地方就应该强调啊 用finish啊 用什么whistle啊

00:48:067 (5,6) - CTRL G 这里你不觉得节奏怪吗?

00:58:734 (3) - 删
00:58:400 (2) - 单折返
00:58:900 (3) - NOTE

01:00:067 (1) - 这里应该slider啊

我觉得你HARD下节奏得花功夫。。各种不顺

[Insane]
00:00:401 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 我建议你这里 关掉DS 既然你12 12 都表示出来了 中间干嘛不拉开?

00:05:067 (3) - 其实我觉得这个音完全不需要 在前面那根红线结束就行了

00:10:400 (5) - finish啊

00:12:400 (3) - 建议折返删4

00:36:400 (4) - NC

00:53:734 (5) - 建议去折返加NOTE

00:54:234 (1,2,3) - 1,2弄成滑条 3开始连打
00:55:067 (8) - 这应该是slider

01:08:400 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 2 2 2 2 关掉DS 要做出那种断的感觉 别是这样的啊

00:58:900 (1,2,3) - 这仨你不觉得关掉DS更有感觉吗?比如这样

总感觉没什么感觉啊。。。
感觉应该是关DS的 你都开着

[615's Insane]
00:10:817 加NOTE
or
00:10:900 (4) - NC
00:11:067 (1) - 去掉NC

00:13:400 (6) - 不觉得 CTRL G 打起来更顺吗?

00:21:067 (3,4,5,6,1) - 不好看
00:22:067 (3) - 而且这个也被挡住了

01:16:400 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 最后还摆这连打是要给一分的节奏吗?
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to Hijiri Byakuren

[Hard]

我觉得在歌手唱之前遵循00:05:734 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - 的节奏 就是 X X X X XX XX XXX XXX . XXX X XXX X X-X-X X
你自己摆的节奏实在是有点奇怪 ---没改

[Insane]

00:05:067 (3) - 其实我觉得这个音完全不需要 在前面那根红线结束就行了 ---没改

00:54:234 (1,2,3) - 1,2弄成滑条 3开始连打

00:55:067 (8) - 这应该是slider ---之前就是滑条被人说改单点 真是 还是滑条好

others fix

感谢mod ^^/
YoshinoSakura

P A N wrote:

[615]

00:16:400 (1,2,4) - move to 452|344 , 484|256 , 405|200 for better star. fixed
01:02:400 (3,4) - I think 1/2 is more fit on this part. please reconsider.1/2 is definitely better but i want some fast beats here
01:11:067 (1) - should be 160|340. ok
01:15:400 (4) - something funny here. haha fixed

-Neipezi wrote:

[615's Insane]
00:09:734 (1,2) - change location? nice idea
00:10:984 (5) - x384 y328 move ok
01:16:400 (1,2,3,4,5) - pattern is difficult to play x.x
01:17:067 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ just a stream x.x
01:19:067 (1) - 01:21:734 - spinner end? nope

[Hijiri Byakuren] wrote:

[615's Insane]
00:10:817 加NOTE
or
00:10:900 (4) - NC
00:11:067 (1) - 去掉NC 这里没啥问题啊

00:13:400 (6) - 不觉得 CTRL G 打起来更顺吗?有道理

00:21:067 (3,4,5,6,1) - 不好看 啊啊啊这里改了n次惹
00:22:067 (3) - 而且这个也被挡住了 有道理

01:16:400 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 最后还摆这连打是要给一分的节奏吗?正因为有这个给一分的player都给不出来
谢mod

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osu file format v12

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 43184
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.4

[Metadata]
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TitleUnicode:MERRY MERRY MERRY MENU...ね!
Artist:Tamura Yukari
ArtistUnicode:田村ゆかり
Creator:moonlightleaf
Version:615's Insane
Source:
Tags:[Minakami Yuki] 615915887
BeatmapID:395511
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[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
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SliderMultiplier:1.8
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304,316,25734,6,0,P|260:320|212:332,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,136,26067,2,0,P|317:172|351:207,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,232,26400,2,0,P|144:208|148:184,1,45,8|8,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
152,116,26567,2,0,P|140:140|136:164,1,45,8|8,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
148,192,26734,1,12,0:3:0:0:
176,216,26817,1,4,0:3:0:0:
212,232,26900,1,4,0:3:0:0:
248,232,26984,1,4,0:3:0:0:
280,223,27067,6,0,P|316:208|349:209,1,72,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,312,27400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,128,27567,2,0,P|290:101|361:100,1,144,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,312,28067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
92,264,28234,1,4,0:0:0:0:
92,264,28400,6,0,P|80:228|84:192,1,72,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,76,28734,2,0,P|172:112|168:148,1,72,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,346,29067,2,0,P|122:349|172:300,1,144,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,52,29734,6,0,P|388:88|408:184,1,144,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,248,30234,2,0,P|384:212|324:244,1,144,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,312,30734,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,344,30900,6,0,P|208:296|192:196,1,144,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,124,31400,2,0,P|108:160|104:204,1,72,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,344,31734,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,184,31900,1,8,0:3:0:0:
116,124,32067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
444,60,32400,6,0,P|460:104|456:152,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,120,32900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,120,33067,2,0,L|344:212,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,188,33734,6,0,P|120:232|136:276,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,216,34234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
44,200,34400,2,0,P|44:244|60:296,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,332,35067,6,0,P|392:288|400:232,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,156,35567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,236,35734,2,0,P|306:280|306:325,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,192,36400,6,0,P|80:232|80:288,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,260,36734,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,160,36900,2,0,P|128:100|36:120,1,180,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,192,37400,2,0,L|80:240,3,45,8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,260,37734,5,0,1:0:0:0:
320,312,37900,1,0,1:0:0:0:
176,260,38234,5,0,1:0:0:0:
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180,160,41400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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460,256,42734,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,268,42900,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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240,80,44234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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152,184,45400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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212,364,47067,6,0,B|184:320|204:264|204:264|152:232|96:268,1,215.999993408203,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,356,47567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,72,47734,2,0,P|88:120|88:180,1,107.999996704102,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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336,64,48234,6,0,P|392:76|376:124,1,107.999996704102,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,264,48567,2,0,P|230:261|229:212,1,107.999996704102,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
135,176,48900,2,0,P|126:280|198:357,1,215.999993408203,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,360,49400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,320,49567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,320,49650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,320,49734,6,0,P|404:268|404:212,1,107.999996704102,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,92,50067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,40,50234,2,0,B|240:64|265:103|265:103|297:147|223:181|288:228,1,215.999993408203,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,225,50734,1,8,0:0:0:0:
52,248,51067,6,0,B|56:280|56:280|88:304|84:352,1,107.999996704102,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,348,51400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,288,51567,2,0,B|232:224|160:244|160:244|144:224|144:224|136:176,1,215.999993408203,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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428,72,52400,5,0,0:0:0:0:
456,244,52567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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356,296,52900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,80,53067,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,304,53234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,72,53400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,260,53567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,48,53734,6,0,P|236:36|184:60,2,107.999996704102,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,148,54234,2,0,B|216:208|260:248|260:248|304:296|272:356,1,215.999993408203,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,316,54734,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,184,54900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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456,324,55734,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,168,55900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,336,56067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
504,248,56234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,256,56400,6,0,B|248:284|244:336|244:336|216:352|184:332|184:332|152:312|124:328,1,215.999993408203,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
131,324,57067,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,108,57234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,280,57400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,148,57567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,172,57734,6,0,B|28:120|104:116|104:116|104:52|168:24,1,215.999993408203,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,148,58234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,268,58400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,108,58567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,48,58734,1,8,0:0:0:0:
100,296,58900,6,0,B|112:348|112:348|176:368,1,107.999996704102,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,108,59234,2,0,B|408:56|408:56|344:36,1,107.999996704102,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,48,59567,2,0,P|168:97|180:148,1,107.999996704102,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,168,59900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,308,60067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,308,60150,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,292,60234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,268,60317,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,240,60400,6,0,P|200:200|184:136,1,107.999996704102,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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352,216,61067,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,44,61234,2,0,P|424:92|428:156,2,107.999996704102,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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196,204,62234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,320,62400,2,0,P|96:352|96:380,2,53.9999983520508
56,176,62734,2,0,P|24:192|0:212,2,53.9999983520508
156,60,63067,6,0,P|204:56|276:72,1,107.999996704102,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,328,63400,2,0,P|340:332|268:316,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,204,63734,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,204,63900,2,0,P|395:193|341:197,2,107.999996704102,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,328,64400,6,0,B|344:344|312:312|312:312|280:320|280:320|248:256|188:304,1,215.999993408203,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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100,220,65067,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,64,65234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,204,65400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,40,65567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,212,65734,6,0,P|384:262|376:328,1,107.999996704102,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,288,66067,1,2,0:0:0:0:
468,236,66234,1,0,1:0:0:0:
240,288,66567,5,2,0:0:0:0:
468,236,66734,1,2,0:0:0:0:
324,24,66900,2,0,B|256:32|232:92|232:92|180:72|140:116,1,215.999993408203,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
336,136,67400,1,0,1:0:0:0:
116,324,68067,1,2,0:0:0:0:
116,324,68234,1,2,0:0:0:0:
116,324,68400,6,0,P|116:280|128:228,1,90,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
176,124,68734,1,10,0:0:0:0:
128,328,68900,6,0,P|128:284|140:232,1,90,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
188,128,69234,1,2,0:0:0:0:
140,332,69400,6,0,P|140:288|152:236,1,90,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
204,132,69734,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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220,136,70234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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224,256,75567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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332,304,77233,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,256,77317,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,79067,12,0,81067,0:0:0:0:
yanlu
Hi.
mod from your pm.

(我是接續幾天mod的有些你可能已經改掉了:o

[Insane]
00:07:067 (3) - 換個方向比較順... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1486415
00:08:734 (5,1) - 位置相對有點近...比較縮的感覺..感覺1應該放更下面一點
00:10:400 (5) - 弧度在大一點 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1486428
00:13:734 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1-4跟5的夾角讓我覺得很卡..
00:16:734 (3,4) - 對調位置
00:25:067 (4) - 為什麼這個是角角的其他是圓弧的呢
00:28:900 - add a note 在5的原地
00:32:900 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1486441
00:35:734 (2,3) - 拉開一點間距
00:54:734 (4,5,6,7,8) - 這個弧=-=好醜
01:08:234 (2) - 這個note我會建議你不要stack 因為跟後面幾個是不同的
>>有些地方不夠細緻...既然想直就要夠直 想做圓弧就要夠圓弧 歪斜什麼的...>~<;

[Hard]
00:40:900 (4) - 改成slider?
00:44:067 (4,5) - ^
00:46:400 (2,3,4,5,6) - 這裡頗難過的...
>>這個難度的排列感覺有些隨便...233

[615's Insane]
00:18:400 (5) - 跟前面的一樣弄彎的?
00:25:234 (4) - ctrl+g
00:26:067 (2) - ctrl+g
00:37:400 (4) - 結束在00:37:567 - 紅線就好
00:43:734 (2) - nc
01:16:400 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 233333
*kiai副歌的地方我很喜歡'w'*

[Normal]
00:11:734 (2) - x104/y296
00:25:734 - ~00:26:567 - 太空啦 加點甚麼吧
00:37:734 (1,2) - 怪怪的節奏(x)
01:06:234 (2) - 改成從01:06:067 - 開始的slider
01:06:567 - add note
01:15:067 (3) - 為什麼要來回 完全跟音樂不搭.-.
01:17:734 (3) - ^

[Yuki's Easy]
00:00:401 (1) - nazi--:第5個點位置x304/140 第六個點x396/y228
00:24:400 (1) -
00:36:400 (2) - end in 00:36:900 - ?
00:48:400 (2) - 取消來回 然後從00:48:567 - 開始
00:52:400 (1) - 我覺得這slider不要來回 然後拉個特殊形狀會比現在好:v
00:59:067 (2) - 跟前面一樣的問題?
01:19:067 (1) - 放對稱??
>>呒啥問題ˊwˋ
-----------------------
>>最想讓我吐槽的就是妳的combo color..!Orz
拜託既然不想讓紅色重複出現就整個改掉吧//弄跟BG相似的顏色不是更好嗎啊(喂
不多說..以上純屬個人意見僅供參考233
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to yanlu妹妹

[Hard]

>>這個難度的排列感覺有些隨便...233 ---233 满世界坑 就我掉惹进去 爬不出来 还越挖越深ww

[Normal]

00:37:734 (1,2) - 怪怪的節奏(x) ---滑条点+惹1 然后没改

其他的都改惹

感谢mod ^^/
- KaTZ -
[Insane]
00:54:567 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 排成直線吧

新人mod完全看不出有什麼問題啊 :(
祝早日rank
ts8zs
这个Insane槽点略多导致我想直接做个Insane……但是好懒 滚来滚去……~(~o ̄▽ ̄)~o 。。。滚来滚去……o~(_△_o~) ~。。。整个mapset都是槽点._.
[iNSANE]
00:01:900 (3) - DEL A REVERSE
……大写锁定了= =b
00:10:400 (5) - 提前1/4结束加个note
00:21:734 (1,2) - 节奏互换
00:41:067 (4,5) - ^
00:47:734 (2,3) - 换一下flow能(稍微)好一点
00:53:734 (5) - reverse
01:18:400 (5) - blanket & flow
总之就是flow问题很大,然后滑条头注意在重音上就好._.
[615]
……难度……都od8了= =b
00:18:400 (5,6) - flow
00:39:734 (1,2) - 稍微歪一下吧
话说kiai那段奇葩的滑条为了凸显啥……你是想拉着玩么
01:08:734 (2,2,2,2) - 都去掉= =
01:15:734 (6) - ……Ctrl+G能好些
01:16:400 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:17:067 (1,2,3,4,5) - ………………算了
[Hard]
00:12:900 (2) - 同insane 滑条头最好在重音上._.
00:43:234 (1) - ……有点难受
00:44:400 (1) - 意义何在
00:49:650 - 少点啥
[Normal]
00:24:067 (3) - 去掉吧
00:26:734 (5) - ^
00:47:734 (3) - 移开啦
[Yuki's Easy]
00:47:067 (1,2) - ._.
00:57:734 (1,2) - ^
01:19:067 (1) - M
._.
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to ts8zs

all fix except:

[Insane]

00:10:400 (5) - 提前1/4结束加个note ---不改

感谢mod ^^/
Okoratu
Hi!

This one is from my modding Queue:

[Insane]
Because this one is very well made I'd just like to drop by some suggestions:
  1. 00:40:734 (3) - You might consider moving this one away from 00:40:067 (2) - for those reasons:
    1. The jump from 00:39:400 (2) - to 00:39:734 (1) - is bigger than the jump from 00:40:067 (2,3) -
    2. The first jump ^ only needs half the time and thus it might cause the player to have to wait for some time
  2. 01:00:400 - For the part that starts here and ends 01:05:734 -, You might try the following
    1. Set the Volume to 80%
    2. Add a finish on every white tick
    3. See how it sounds
  3. 01:01:900 (3) - You might want to try to stack this one with the end of 01:01:067 (3) - properly because you're stacking alot in this map
  4. 01:10:484 - You might Switch to the drumset from here to 01:10:984 - and do the following:
    1. Set the volume to 60%
    2. 01:10:734 - add a clap
    3. 01:10:900 - add a finish

[615's Insane]

General:
Your Kiai Time should be consistent with the other Diffs in this mapset, so you should consult moonlightleaf about it in order to reach a consistent solution

  1. 00:26:567 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - This one annoys me a bit because it overlaps: did you try to use something similar to this one (with not that much spacing) to this one there already 00:14:400 (1,2) - , if not i suggest you move this whole pattern up a bit
  2. I suggested the following for the Insane Diff aswell
    01:00:400 - For the part that starts here and ends 01:05:734 -, You might try the following
    1. Set the Volume to 80%
    2. Add a finish on every white tick
    3. See how it sounds

I hope this was in some way helpful...
GL,
~Oko
Phos-
Hey there~

General

You should add some tags to your set that aren't guest mappers.

The spinner in all difficulties but easy seems quite unnecessary, you should make it so that the spinner is at 01:21:734 (1) - in all diffs and map the parts that were previously part of the spinner with other notes.

Yuki's Easy

00:05:734 (1) - This note seems a bit too close to the slider head of 00:05:734 (1) - and you can even see a tiny overlap you should move this further away imo

00:11:067 (1,2) - Maybe you could make these two blanket eachother? Just a suggestion~

00:13:734 (1) - Would be better flow if you ctrl+g this then move it so the spacing is fine.

00:15:067 (2) - If you did what I've posted before then ctrl+g this as well to retain the pattern you had before.

00:20:400 (3) - I can see you were trying to have this in the same spot as the slider end of 00:17:734 (2) - , but it's not spaced too correctly, and the triangle isn't looking too good either.

A large portion of the map plays well after that.

01:01:734 (2) - I think this would look slightly better as a curved slider imo.

01:04:401 (2) - ^

Normal

00:08:400 (1,2) - You could curve these sliders for better visuals imo, like this:

It would be a good idea to make the curved sliders the same as 00:07:067 (3) - to keep slider consistency.

00:39:734 (3) - You could move this around a bit so it blankets the slider end of 00:38:734 (2) - since I think it might look a bit better.

01:12:067 (2,1) - This overlap looks ugly in my opinion, and the typical normal player might not even be able to read it. So I think you should change it.

Hard

00:20:400 (4) - Move this to x:307 y:235 for a perfect stack with the slider end of 00:19:567 (2) -

00:20:734 (5,2) - Not too fond of how these notes overlap in a bad way inside the editor. You should move some notes around so that 00:22:067 (2) - is stacked with the start of 00:22:067 (2) - and is still spaced properly.

00:48:234 (6) - What is up with hat silent hitsound ;w; Personally I find it very confusing, and I'm sure other players do too. Please add a hitsound.

00:59:234 (4,5) - You could make these two notes a blanket or something? Just curve 00:59:234 (4) - so that it wraps around 00:59:567 (5) -

615's Insane

00:09:066 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think it would flow a lot better if you ctrl+g this entire stream.

00:45:734 (1) - I'm not really a fan of this slider shape personally. Try this maybe:


Insane

00:05:900 (2) - You should move this so it's not touching the slider end of 00:05:067 (3) - since it looks quite bad.

00:39:734 (1,2) - Not a fan of this stack, try moving 00:40:067 (2) - to a place like x:430 y:183


Well, I tried. Good luck on rank!
-Teina-
說好的mod~

From in-game mod request.

Insane
  1. 00:08:234 - 加個音 節奏沒在這裡斷開吧
  2. 00:36:900 (3) - ctrl + g 太遠了 這樣會更好flow?
  3. 00:44:067 (3) - 試下刪除這個

Hard
  1. 00:07:567 (2) - 放在X:308 Y:56 好似FLOW會更好.
  2. 00:34:400 (5) - NC

615's Insane
  1. 沒什麼大問題

Normal
  1. 00:21:400 - 加個圈試試

Yuki's Easy
  1. 00:19:734 (2) - 不要在easy難度做不同的距離. 可以放在x:276 y:312 . 或者將00:19:067 (1) - 放在x:412 y:340 和 00:19:734 (2) - 放在x:232 y:276
  2. 00:59:067 (2) - blanket it
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

Okoratu wrote:

Hi!

This one is from my modding Queue:

[Insane]
Because this one is very well made I'd just like to drop by some suggestions:
  1. 00:40:734 (3) - You might consider moving this one away from 00:40:067 (2) - for those reasons: - i think no problem for DS
    1. The jump from 00:39:400 (2) - to 00:39:734 (1) - is bigger than the jump from 00:40:067 (2,3) -
    2. The first jump ^ only needs half the time and thus it might cause the player to have to wait for some time
  2. 01:00:400 - For the part that starts here and ends 01:05:734 -, You might try the following --- noisy , so no fix
    1. Set the Volume to 80%
    2. Add a finish on every white tick
    3. See how it sounds
  3. 01:01:900 (3) - You might want to try to stack this one with the end of 01:01:067 (3) - properly because you're stacking alot in this map ---fix
  4. 01:10:484 - You might Switch to the drumset from here to 01:10:984 - and do the following: --- i don't know how to do , so no fix
    1. Set the volume to 60%
    2. 01:10:734 - add a clap
    3. 01:10:900 - add a finish
打包615

thanks for modding ^^/
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to Fluttershy03

all fix , except
[General]
The spinner in all difficulties but easy seems quite unnecessary, you should make it so that the spinner is at 01:21:734 (1) - in all diffs and map the parts that were previously part of the spinner with other notes. --i want to spinner to end , and the music fade in start here


[Hard]

00:20:734 (5,2) - Not too fond of how these notes overlap in a bad way inside the editor. You should move some notes around so that 00:22:067 (2) - is stacked with the start of 00:22:067 (2) - and is still spaced properly. --- haven't undersand , so no fix


to tellertheworld

all fix except

[Insane]

00:08:234 - 加個音 節奏沒在這裡斷開吧 ---不加

00:44:067 (3) - 試下刪除這個 --- 不删

[Normal]

00:21:400 - 加個圈試試 ---不加



thanks for modding ^^/
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