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Narcissu

1,744 posts

Joined August 2012

Narcissu 2014-04-02T07:08:13+00:00

为什么你们都能把图做的这么欢快……我就弄的死气沉沉……

那个“耶”的变速滑条最好额外分配一个颜色比如粉色或者白色红色，其他的时候都跳过那个颜色，还有1.5的变速线用完最好用1.0的线换回去，因为对太鼓有影响【喂！

moonlightleaf

2,155 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

moonlightleaf 2014-04-02T08:12:26+00:00

to Narcissu

变速滑条我之前都换了不同颜色的绿线方面追加惹

感谢mod ^^/

（这个应该不能给KD,

Edit: 好的我会那样弄了

Koiyuki

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Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2014-04-02T10:17:22+00:00

Title Change:
MERRY MERRY MERRY MENU・・・ね!

moonlightleaf

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Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

moonlightleaf 2014-04-02T11:32:14+00:00

to Minakami Yuki

= =原来歌名都错了么

MutoMagic

28 posts

Joined September 2013

MutoMagic 2014-04-02T11:37:21+00:00

[General]
感觉easy可以不需要了。
别的难度没看出来问题，打起来很流畅。

[615's Insane]
突然发现这个难度跳跃复读略大，感觉另一个insane打起来正好。
00:21:067 (3,4) - 这个地方感觉打出300比较费劲。
00:26:734 (5) - 这个5被滑条埋了，对于hd来说建议放出来。
01:16:400 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - seems not good,蓝色到红色跑起来感觉很别扭，而且之后一个平行的1-2和3-4，很有可能会断掉。（有可能是错觉吧，至少第一次没读出来，直接挂掉了。。。）

01:16:400 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) -

别的木有什么问题。总之感觉还不错。
这个必须射，祝rank

moonlightleaf

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Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

moonlightleaf 2014-04-02T13:25:54+00:00

to MutoMagic

感谢mod ^^/

打包615 赶紧修

YoshinoSakura

472 posts

Joined January 2011

YoshinoSakura 2014-04-02T15:16:58+00:00

MutoMagic wrote:
[General]
感觉easy可以不需要了。
别的难度没看出来问题，打起来很流畅。

[615's Insane]
突然发现这个难度跳跃复读略大，感觉另一个insane打起来正好。
00:21:067 (3,4) - 这个地方感觉打出300比较费劲。改了下
00:26:734 (5) - 这个5被滑条埋了，对于hd来说建议放出来。不要啦
01:16:400 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - seems not good,蓝色到红色跑起来感觉很别扭，而且之后一个平行的1-2和3-4，很有可能会断掉。（有可能是错觉吧，至少第一次没读出来，直接挂掉了。。。）果然1/4circle jump又失败了么
01:16:400 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) -

别的木有什么问题。总之感觉还不错。
这个必须射，祝rank

谢mod

哟~~~~蹦！

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288,288,51567,2,0,B|232:224|160:244|160:244|144:224|144:224|136:176,1,215.999993408203,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,348,52067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
428,72,52400,5,0,0:0:0:0:
456,244,52567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,80,52734,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,296,52900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,80,53067,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,304,53234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,72,53400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,260,53567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,48,53734,6,0,P|236:36|184:60,2,107.999996704102,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,148,54234,2,0,B|216:208|260:248|260:248|304:296|272:356,1,215.999993408203,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,316,54734,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,184,54900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,160,55067,6,0,B|64:116|100:76|100:76|168:128|164:28|248:96,1,215.999993408203,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,324,55734,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,168,55900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,336,56067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
504,248,56234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,256,56400,6,0,B|248:284|244:336|244:336|216:352|184:332|184:332|152:312|124:328,1,215.999993408203,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
131,324,57067,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,108,57234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,280,57400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,148,57567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,172,57734,6,0,B|28:120|104:116|104:116|104:52|168:24,1,215.999993408203,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,148,58234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,268,58400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,108,58567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,48,58734,1,8,0:0:0:0:
100,296,58900,6,0,B|112:348|112:348|176:368,1,107.999996704102,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,108,59234,2,0,B|408:56|408:56|344:36,1,107.999996704102,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,208,59567,2,0,P|376:264|340:324,1,107.999996704102,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,308,60067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,308,60150,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,292,60234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,268,60317,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,240,60400,6,0,P|200:200|184:136,1,107.999996704102,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,224,60734,2,0,P|36:272|40:332,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,216,61067,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,44,61234,2,0,P|424:92|428:156,2,107.999996704102,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,260,61734,6,0,B|404:316|352:316|352:316|304:364|256:344,1,215.999993408203,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,204,62234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,320,62400,2,0,P|96:352|96:380,3,53.9999983520508,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,176,62734,2,0,P|24:192|0:212,3,53.9999983520508,8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,60,63067,6,0,P|204:56|276:72,1,107.999996704102,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,328,63400,2,0,P|340:332|268:316,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,204,63734,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,204,63900,2,0,P|395:193|341:197,2,107.999996704102,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,328,64400,6,0,B|344:344|312:312|312:312|280:320|280:320|248:256|188:304,1,215.999993408203,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,372,64900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,220,65067,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,64,65234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,204,65400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,40,65567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,212,65734,6,0,P|384:262|376:328,1,107.999996704102,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,288,66067,1,2,0:0:0:0:
468,236,66234,1,0,1:0:0:0:
240,288,66567,5,2,0:0:0:0:
468,236,66734,1,2,0:0:0:0:
324,24,66900,2,0,B|256:32|232:92|232:92|180:72|140:116,1,215.999993408203,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
336,136,67400,1,0,1:0:0:0:
116,324,68067,1,2,0:0:0:0:
116,324,68234,1,2,0:0:0:0:
116,324,68400,6,0,P|116:280|128:228,1,90,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
176,124,68734,1,10,0:0:0:0:
128,328,68900,6,0,P|128:284|140:232,1,90,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
188,128,69234,1,2,0:0:0:0:
140,332,69400,6,0,P|140:288|152:236,1,90,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
204,132,69734,1,2,0:0:0:0:
156,336,69900,6,0,P|156:292|168:240,1,90,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
220,136,70234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,296,70400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,168,70567,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,168,70650,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,168,70734,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,68,70900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,336,71067,6,0,B|200:336|200:336|248:356,1,90,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
176,240,71567,2,0,B|220:240|220:240|268:260,1,90,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
196,144,72067,2,0,B|240:144|240:144|288:164,1,90,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
220,48,72567,2,0,B|264:48|264:48|312:68,1,90,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
156,336,73067,1,0,1:0:0:0:
68,40,73400,1,4,0:0:0:0:
344,296,73734,5,4,0:0:0:0:
328,132,73900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,292,74067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
412,192,74234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,136,74400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,380,74567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,92,74734,1,8,0:0:0:0:
108,100,74900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,352,75067,5,0,0:0:0:0:
412,192,75234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,192,75317,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,192,75400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,256,75567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,92,75734,2,0,P|368:100|328:140,2,90,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,196,76400,5,0,0:0:0:0:
72,228,76484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,260,76567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,292,76650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,128,76734,2,0,P|184:172|172:228,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,332,77067,5,0,0:0:0:0:
384,300,77150,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,300,77233,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,268,77317,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,100,77400,2,0,B|340:124|356:144|356:144|368:164|356:188,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
334,233,77734,5,0,0:0:0:0:
140,130,77900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
357,99,78067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
199,251,78234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
237,36,78400,2,0,P|224:88|264:208,1,180,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,79067,12,0,81734,0:0:0:0:

Yumeno Himiko

Elite Storyboarder

1,168 posts

Joined August 2012

Yumeno Himiko 2014-04-02T16:25:25+00:00

~~其实我是来要一个M4M的~~

[General]
hhh uccu

SPOILER

kiai 统一一下
前奏时间太短

[Normal]
00:00:401 (1,2) - 造一个完美的弧形吧

SPOILER

00:48:734 (4) - 拉到2拍听起来比较顺
00:57:734 (2,3) - 歪了;w;
01:11:067 (1,2) - 这两个可以弄下对称

[Hard]
00:05:734 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个五角星是要逼死强迫症吗(╯°口°)╯(┴—┴
00:06:400 (5,6) - 对称啦对称
00:11:734 (3,4,5,6) - 也是对称这样放;w;

SPOILER

00:12:400 (7,8,9) - 间距感觉偏大
00:36:067 - 少了个note吧0.0
00:49:734 (1,2,3) - 一条直线上比较好？
00:52:400 (1,2,3,4) - 中心对称（严肃）
00:59:567 (5) - 其实换成circle感觉更好

阿拉我不看I的图哟 ~~因为我根本打不动;w;~~

好听的歌~
Good luck~

moonlightleaf

2,155 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

moonlightleaf 2014-04-02T16:57:27+00:00

to examination

all fix

感谢mod ^^/

OblivioN

OblivioN 2014-04-02T17:55:11+00:00

[Normal]
00:07:067 (3) - 转个方向看着要舒服点【哪里来的强迫症;w;】看起来像这样

SPOILER

00:15:067 (1) - x:320 Y:320
00:20:400 (3,4,5) - 觉得排成三角形可爱一些【咦？会吗？
00:31:734 (4) - 音效用finish吧
00:36:900 (2) - 包好 2的尾巴是x:232 y:128

[Hard]
觉得cs可以大一号……

[Insane]
00:02:400 (8) - 音效用finish
00:05:734 (2) - NC一下吧
00:28:900 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 以player的视角来说这里没必要stream啊……;w;这样就好了：

00:30:234 & 00:30:567 & 00:30:900 可配合clap
00:58:900 (1,2,3) - ^
01:19:067 finish

[615'sinsane]
00:21:067 (3,4,5,6) - 凶残…………排列顺一点吧……这么治愈的歌
00:26:400 (3,4) - ………………为何这么难orz【无视我
00:31:900 (4) - 这个音效可以去掉……
00:42:900 (8) - finish
01:00:067 (4) - NC吧……

[Other]
田村很可爱的歌，祝rank .w.

moonlightleaf

2,155 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

moonlightleaf 2014-04-02T18:23:03+00:00

to OblivioN

[Insane]

00:28:900 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 以player的视角来说这里没必要stream啊……;w;这样就好了 ---没改和后面是一样的跟嘀嘀嘀嘀嘀嘀

其他都 fix

感谢mod ^^/

Ozato Fumika

Beatmap Nominator

3,379 posts

Joined July 2013

Ozato Fumika 2014-04-03T05:42:32+00:00

Do you need an Easy diff? if so may I try GD?

moonlightleaf

2,155 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

moonlightleaf 2014-04-03T06:12:29+00:00

No Dap wrote:
Do you need an Easy diff? if so may I try GD?

oh,,,i am sorry to say Easy GD will be maped by my friend before you post ~

anyway , thanks for your GD request

Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2014-04-03T07:33:04+00:00

Easy Finished: http://puu.sh/7Ucur.osu

音效从normal复制的，应该没问题
别忘了把我和615的id加到tag里面去

Wafu

1,703 posts

Joined June 2011

Wafu 2014-04-03T14:20:39+00:00

Red - Unrankable
Blue - Highly recommended
Black - Suggestion

[General]

Main thing I want to recommend here is to make the same kiai as it is in 615's Insane. He had quite good idea about it, he just used kiai only for parts where were all the instruments and removed kiai from part where were only drums and vocal. I think you should inspirate by this.
Use custom combo colors. Currently it uses default ones, meaning it depends on the skin you are using and unfortunatelly some skins might conflict with the background. I still know there is Dim function, but there are still players who prefer to use background on.
Some hitsounds are barely audiable, meaning it is near to be unrankable. Please increase volume of all green lines and take any program which can edit .wav files (for example Audacity) and use amplitude for the hitsound files.

[Insane]

00:41:067 (7) - It is just a detail but you should remake this slider to slider similar to 00:40:734 (6) with another rotation. Reason is that currently it looks quite unpolished and random, when this slider is curved a lot while the previous one is almost flat, additionally the flow was really unnatural. I suggest you to change it like this, but it's all just a detail suggestion.

SPOILER

00:43:484 (2,3,4) - This part is overly overmapped to be honest. There's no sound on 00:43:650, 00:43:984, 00:43:484, what is a lot. You added 3 non-existing notes on just one second. I think this is a lot more sensible.

SPOILER

00:44:400 (4) - I think NC on these notes is more viable than on 00:44:734 (1), mainly because there starts the kiai. Anyway your comboing here is quite weird, I'd suggest you to make it more sensible, sometimes you place NC on downbeat so it follows music, but then you change it so it follows vocal. Either make NCs related to music or related to voice, not both.

[Hard]

Well... first think that bothers me a lot... settings. CS+1, please. Currently it makes the spread just insensible, considering you've got this CS in normal and easy. However other difficulty settings are making very big gap between normal diff. Put -1 on all other settings so it makes the gap a bit lower and there is not so big difference between diffs.
00:43:567 (2,3,4,5,6) - Just a little suggestion here. Consider CTRL+G on 00:43:734 (3,5). It makes the jump progressive and you won't start with a jump so suddenly, because of pregressivity, player will detect better that there's a jump near, like this it is just sudden and he needs to know music or follow the approach circle properly. But that's not much issue.
00:48:067 (5,6) - The same issue as insane had, overmapped for no reason. Just decrease each of these two sliders by 1/4 so there will be 2 1/2 sliders to fit music well. Remember that this is not fantasy, but rhythm game.
00:54:067 - Add a circle. When playing I just feel there's something missing. Considering it is kiai, in my opinion, you shouldn't remove notes on 1/1 tick, when they are in music.
00:59:900 - Similar issue as ^
01:00:234 - Similar issue as ^, but if you put the circle on ^, this doesn't feel much needed.
01:15:900 - ^

[615's Insane]

00:30:234 (2,3) - Consider this pattern, because current flow was not correct and additionally the overlap was just like blah to be honest. Also makes a jump that imo fits more to your style.

SPOILER

00:33:734 (1) - CTRL+G makes a better flow, anyway just a little detail and not important suggestion.
00:50:234 (3) - Make more neat slider like your other sliders are. This is really different from others. They were sensible, but this seems like random shape that reminds me 2007 maps, but might be just presonal feeling.
01:00:067 (4,5,6,7,1) - Flowbreak in kiai is really aggressive thing. I really highly recommend to use regular spacing instead of stacking it. I hope you understand that it is really wrong when you play kiai, and you just see jump, jump, jump, jump, jump, now you have stop moving your mouse so you loose that feel of flow, and again jump, jump jump... Kiai should be lively all the time to make player enjoy that map.

[Normal]

00:03:067 (4) - New combo. There's bigger gap between NC than on Insane, so this should be definitely fixed.
00:15:067 (1) - Remove NC for consistency with other NCs. You always put NC after every 2/1 tick, but now you put it after 1/1 tick.
00:24:400 (4) - NC for consistency. It doesn't matter that it will be just one slider in this. Consistency of hitsounds is really important on easier diffs, because it gives you HP frequently, not randomly, so players are not required to play all parts pretty well, but it is enough to play just same all the time so he won't fail. All I want to say is that newbies might be stressed or confused of variable benefit of HP. Obviously swap NCs on 00:26:734 (1,2) for pretty same reason.
00:35:067 (5,1) - Swap the NCs, still same reason.
00:40:734 (4) - There also should be NC for consistency, especially when there is spinner after it, which doesn't give you HP instantly.
00:46:734 (1,2) - Also should be swapped NCs.
00:52:400 (3) - There should be NC and 00:54:234 (1,2) - Should be swapped.

[Yuki's Easy]

00:21:734 (1) - Just a little issue about symmetry. Attempt to fix the shape like this.

SPOILER

00:23:067 (2) - ^
00:24:400 (1) - Just fix that ugly overlap
00:38:734 (2) - CTRL+G and fix distance snap makes the flow much better, what is especially important on easier diffs.
00:47:067 (1,2) - This is easy diff, right? Try to follow music more than vocals, because the music is more consistent, so it is easier for players. Currently he has to finish the slider on red tick and start next slider on another red tick. This is nightmare for a lot of newbies, so please, increase end of 00:47:067 (1) to 00:48:067 and move 00:48:234 (2) on 00:48:400.
00:57:734 (1,2) - ^
01:11:067 (1) - Use just one point. The shape will be sure symmetric, what means much better than current one, but it's not gameplay issue anyway.

Just a short mod because map is quite good and sure ready for ranking, however I pointed out even some important stuff (NCs, flow, spread), but evne some details. If you need any help with a map or you just don't understand something I said in a mod, feel free to contact me on PM or ingame if I'm online.

Good luck!

Sakaue Nachi

558 posts

Joined September 2012

Sakaue Nachi 2014-04-03T15:04:44+00:00

~~好像是M4M~~_(:з」∠)_
[Yuki's easy]
00:05:734 (1) - 滑条尾whistle
00:07:067 (2) - ^
00:11:067 (1,2) - ^
00:08:400 (1) - 这个头也换成finish怎样，可以这个声音小点，然后2大点有个递进
00:13:734 (1) - ^
00:16:400 (1) - 尾whistle
00:16:400 (1) - 可以微调下包的好点
00:21:734 (1) - 换成finish好点？
00:24:400 (1) - 这样会不会好看点？http://puu.sh/7UrnV.jpg
00:44:400 (1) - 头finish
00:48:234 (2) - 中间whistle
00:58:900 (2) - ^
[normal]
00:12:400 (3) - 这里不知这样如何http://puu.sh/7Us0c.jpg
00:16:400 (1) - （444.180）
00:16:734 (2) - （468,104）
00:23:067 (2) - 这个是不是往下弯好点
00:36:900 (2) - 这样好看点http://puu.sh/7Usvq.jpg
00:41:484 (1) - 00:42:900 在这里结束
00:47:400 (3) - 感觉这个节奏好点http://puu.sh/7UsUP.jpg
[hard]
00:01:900 (4) - 也保持1.36x的间距好点？
00:03:234 (2) - 放在（1）右边大概（245,274）怎样？
00:11:734 (3,4,5,6) - 在hard是不是跳了点，缩小为大概0.85倍差不多感觉
00:13:734 (1,3) - 这两个平行一下
00:16:400 (1) - 这个重叠打起来不太好，建议和下一part00:17:734 (1,2,3,4) - 的排列差不多，然后旋转个角度
00:27:067 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 摆成这样打起来更好读和顺手http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1479926
00:36:234 (2) - 和这个叠00:36:400 (1) -
00:37:734 (1,2) - 和前面两个拉开点距离
00:45:734 (4) - ctrl+g
00:49:400 加个note
00:53:734 (5) - 换成一个折返slider感觉不错，然后把6删掉
01:05:234 (4,5,6,1,2) - 这里略坑，可以删掉这个01:05:567 (6) -
01:08:900 (2) - 弄成和1对称吧
[Insane]
00:10:067 (3,4,5) - 这里建议改下，我打了3次都miss了（4）感觉这样好多了 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1479952
00:07:734 (1) - 这个减速太多打起来有点怪
00:16:734 (3,4) - ctrl+g 好多了
00:24:067 (9) - 换成slider会不会好点
00:36:900 (3) - ctrl+g
00:39:400 (2) - 这个移去下一个有点不顺，这样？http://puu.sh/7VkeH.jpg 或者你想想别的吧
00:49:234 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 这里我柑橘三连+2单点好点
01:00:400 (1) - 换滑条
01:10:484 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - 这个连打感觉换别的更好，感觉可以这样http://puu.sh/7VkMN.jpg

GL~这是我的图http://osu.ppy.sh/s/141354

Last edited by Sakaue Nachi 2014-04-04T05:33:27+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

[CSGA]Ar3sgice

4,298 posts

Joined July 2011

[CSGA]Ar3sgice 2014-04-03T15:10:00+00:00

615's Insane卡在3.49星了, 建议再加几个大跳这样就可以到达3.50星, 升级为X级

moonlightleaf

2,155 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

moonlightleaf 2014-04-03T15:25:47+00:00

to Wafu

all fix

to Sakaue Nachi

[normal]

00:12:400 (3) - 这里不知这样如何http://puu.sh/7Us0c.jpg ---没改

其他fix

thanks for modding ^^/

YoshinoSakura

472 posts

Joined January 2011

YoshinoSakura 2014-04-03T15:32:07+00:00

OblivioN wrote:
[615'sinsane]
00:21:067 (3,4,5,6) - 凶残…………排列顺一点吧……这么治愈的歌原来的太难了才改成这样的
00:26:400 (3,4) - ………………为何这么难orz【无视我其实不难
00:31:900 (4) - 这个音效可以去掉…… 鼓点
00:42:900 (8) - finish 猴
01:00:067 (4) - NC吧……柑橘没必要

Wafu wrote:
[615's Insane]

00:30:234 (2,3) - Consider this pattern, because current flow was not correct and additionally the overlap was just like blah to be honest. Also makes a jump that imo fits more to your style. fixed
collapsed text

00:33:734 (1) - CTRL+G makes a better flow, anyway just a little detail and not important suggestion. ctrlg the next slider
00:50:234 (3) - Make more neat slider like your other sliders are. This is really different from others. They were sensible, but this seems like random shape that reminds me 2007 maps, but might be just presonal feeling. I think it seems good in a happy song
01:00:067 (4,5,6,7,1) - Flowbreak in kiai is really aggressive thing. I really highly recommend to use regular spacing instead of stacking it. I hope you understand that it is really wrong when you play kiai, and you just see jump, jump, jump, jump, jump, now you have stop moving your mouse so you loose that feel of flow, and again jump, jump jump... Kiai should be lively all the time to make player enjoy that map.actually i can't understand,but will fix it

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:
615's Insane卡在3.49星了, 建议再加几个大跳这样就可以到达3.50星, 升级为X级
本来是3.5啊但是有modder闲难我就降回去惹

thx for your mod

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osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 43184
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 1
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TitleUnicode:MERRY MERRY MERRY MENU...ね!
Artist:Tamura Yukari
ArtistUnicode:田村ゆかり
Creator:moonlightleaf
Version:615's Insane
Source:
Tags:[Minakami Yuki] 615915887
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328,184,54900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,160,55067,6,0,B|64:116|100:76|100:76|168:128|164:28|248:96,1,215.999993408203,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,324,55734,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,168,55900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,336,56067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
504,248,56234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,256,56400,6,0,B|248:284|244:336|244:336|216:352|184:332|184:332|152:312|124:328,1,215.999993408203,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
131,324,57067,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,108,57234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,280,57400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,148,57567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,172,57734,6,0,B|28:120|104:116|104:116|104:52|168:24,1,215.999993408203,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,148,58234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,268,58400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,108,58567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,48,58734,1,8,0:0:0:0:
100,296,58900,6,0,B|112:348|112:348|176:368,1,107.999996704102,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,108,59234,2,0,B|408:56|408:56|344:36,1,107.999996704102,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,308,59567,2,0,P|376:259|364:208,1,107.999996704102,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,240,59900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,308,60067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,308,60150,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,292,60234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,268,60317,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,240,60400,6,0,P|200:200|184:136,1,107.999996704102,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,224,60734,2,0,P|36:272|40:332,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,216,61067,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,44,61234,2,0,P|424:92|428:156,2,107.999996704102,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,260,61734,6,0,B|404:316|352:316|352:316|304:364|256:344,1,215.999993408203,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,204,62234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,320,62400,2,0,P|96:352|96:380,3,53.9999983520508,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,176,62734,2,0,P|24:192|0:212,3,53.9999983520508,8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,60,63067,6,0,P|204:56|276:72,1,107.999996704102,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,328,63400,2,0,P|340:332|268:316,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,204,63734,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,204,63900,2,0,P|395:193|341:197,2,107.999996704102,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,328,64400,6,0,B|344:344|312:312|312:312|280:320|280:320|248:256|188:304,1,215.999993408203,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,372,64900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,220,65067,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,64,65234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,204,65400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,40,65567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,212,65734,6,0,P|384:262|376:328,1,107.999996704102,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,288,66067,1,2,0:0:0:0:
468,236,66234,1,0,1:0:0:0:
240,288,66567,5,2,0:0:0:0:
468,236,66734,1,2,0:0:0:0:
324,24,66900,2,0,B|256:32|232:92|232:92|180:72|140:116,1,215.999993408203,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
336,136,67400,1,0,1:0:0:0:
116,324,68067,1,2,0:0:0:0:
116,324,68234,1,2,0:0:0:0:
116,324,68400,6,0,P|116:280|128:228,1,90,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
176,124,68734,1,10,0:0:0:0:
128,328,68900,6,0,P|128:284|140:232,1,90,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
188,128,69234,1,2,0:0:0:0:
140,332,69400,6,0,P|140:288|152:236,1,90,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
204,132,69734,1,2,0:0:0:0:
156,336,69900,6,0,P|156:292|168:240,1,90,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
220,136,70234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,296,70400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,168,70567,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,168,70650,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,168,70734,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,68,70900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,336,71067,6,0,B|200:336|200:336|248:356,1,90,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
176,240,71567,2,0,B|220:240|220:240|268:260,1,90,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
196,144,72067,2,0,B|240:144|240:144|288:164,1,90,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
220,48,72567,2,0,B|264:48|264:48|312:68,1,90,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
156,336,73067,1,0,1:0:0:0:
68,40,73400,1,4,0:0:0:0:
344,296,73734,5,4,0:0:0:0:
328,132,73900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,292,74067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
412,192,74234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,136,74400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,380,74567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,92,74734,1,8,0:0:0:0:
108,100,74900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,352,75067,5,0,0:0:0:0:
412,192,75234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,192,75317,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,192,75400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,256,75567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,92,75734,2,0,P|368:100|328:140,2,90,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,196,76400,5,0,0:0:0:0:
72,228,76484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,260,76567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,292,76650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,210,76734,2,0,P|182:166|160:128,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,332,77067,5,0,0:0:0:0:
384,300,77150,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,300,77233,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,268,77317,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,100,77400,2,0,B|340:124|356:144|356:144|368:164|356:188,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
334,233,77734,5,0,0:0:0:0:
140,130,77900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
357,99,78067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
199,251,78234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
237,36,78400,2,0,P|224:88|264:208,1,180,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,79067,12,0,81734,0:0:0:0:

Rizia

3,114 posts

Joined January 2012

Rizia 2014-04-03T16:05:25+00:00

[Insane]
00:13:734 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 突然就變大了讓人有點不習慣
00:20:734 - 試試 http://puu.sh/7UvrZ.jpg
00:22:484 (6) - 試試移到00:22:650 -
00:23:817 (7) - ^一樣做法
00:36:734 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/7UvBM.jpg
00:51:400 (3) - x252 y156
00:51:567 (4) - x120 y172
00:54:734 (4,5,6) - 換成5連
00:59:900 - add note
00:51:567 (4) - 這樣NC http://puu.sh/7UvMA.jpg
01:03:984 (7) - 刪掉
01:08:400 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 有幾個相同的節奏能用這NC梗, 自己參詳
01:10:484 (1) - remove nc
01:18:400 (5) - whistle
01:18:900 - ^

[615]
01:02:400 (3,4) - 換成3連slider http://puu.sh/7Uwd9.jpg
01:16:400 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 我不會跟你說我恨這個建議改改改成00:13:734 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 一樣也好

[Hard]
00:11:734 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - http://puu.sh/7UwlW.jpg 有看不懂的話找我
00:35:734 (1) - 第三錨點 x144 y176
00:38:734 (5,6,7,8) - 可以考慮跟00:37:734 (1,2,3,4) - 對稱
00:44:400 (7,1,1) - http://puu.sh/7UwxE.jpg
00:48:567 - 這vol. 5%有點怪

- TiRaFiouS -

128 posts

Joined November 2012

- TiRaFiouS - 2014-04-03T18:05:28+00:00

[General]
我愛飛球((喂
又是1kds....

[NM]
像EZ...
00:03:067 (1,2) - 抱歉...強迫症00:00:401 (1,2) -不和這個一樣接受不了_(:3JL)_
00:24:400 (1) - 縮短到00:25:400 - 加circle在00:25:567 - (NM這像EZ...)
00:32:400 (1,2,3,4) -ds 要一樣
00:27:067 (1,2) - (2)取代(1)然後,00:27:900 - 加circle
00:29:734 (1,2,3) - ^
00:36:567 - 加circle
00:40:734 (1) - 縮短到紅線,00:40:734 (1) - 加circle(原本的感覺不對)
00:47:734 (3) - 延長到00:48:734 - 結束(完全不對喔...)
00:54:234 (2) - del reveres,00:54:734 - 滑條結束位+00:55:067 - 加circle
00:58:400 (3) - end at 00:59:400 - add circle
01:11:067 (1,2) - 球繼承傳統((X ---->01:11:067 (1,2) -

[615 baka]
臥感覺太跳?((撒...我就是說說=3=還可以
感覺flow不太好?
感覺不太好

00:10:900 (4) - del
00:12:067 (4) - x:112 y:200

00:13:734 (1,2,3) -美麗的路程曲折!

00:21:067 (3,4,5,6,1) - 太密了而且好難按
00:23:067 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這5角形滑條折點放中間(4)和(5)間距不一樣故意的?
00:26:400 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 太密,(5)根本看不見2個短滑條又不是早消失能而看的見加上連打順著去停在(3)尾就像停了一樣,你讓我吐糟什麼((我在說什麼
00:28:234 (5) - 移到00:21:567 (6) - , 00:28:400 (1,2) - 移到本來(5)的位置
00:29:067 (4) - Ctrl G
00:39:734 (1) - x:152 y:176
00:40:067 (2) - x:88 y:344

00:43:234 (1,2,3,4,5,1) -美麗好麼hhh

00:46:400 (2) - 不在三角形中間...
00:47:734 (3) - Ctrl G? 都好像flow不好?
00:48:900 (3) - 滑條折點不在中間+不在(2)的正後方....
00:59:567 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 同樣,滑條(不正常地)擋住連打難讀圖,還有(4)好奇怪...
01:02:400 (3,4) - 各縮小一個返回

01:08:067 (5,6,1) -啦啦啦啦

01:13:734 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 這音樂給我的感覺是越縮越小诶
01:19:067 (1) - end at 01:21:067 -

[HD]
00:00:401 (1,2) - 不是對著的
00:01:900 (4) - 還是順著比較好
00:48:067 (5) - 感覺漏音
00:48:567 (6,7) - (7)取代(6)
00:51:067 (1,2,3) - 跟著前面比較好00:49:734 (1,2,3) -
01:07:234 (6) - NC
01:09:900 (4) - 還是順著比較好

ds像ins 但似乎只是難一點的NM.....((我感覺

[ins]
00:07:734 (5) - 0.5x把畢竟是長音
00:11:067 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - 這是在旋轉?中間沒轉啊!?
00:33:067 (3) - 彎點QAQ
00:37:650 (6) - del

00:37:734 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 你那個略醜....

00:42:067 (4) - 在三角形中間比較好

00:44:734 (1) - 00:46:067 (1) - 00:55:400 (1) - 00:56:734 (1) - 在變速滑條要凸顯那個"ye"音我認為最好在變速滑條前加個滑條

感覺所又能變難的位置都被來回滑條取代喔.....
感覺你叫我試那張好一點
節奏感覺沒問題,就是簡單了點

就醬

~~don't forget my kds!~~~

moonlightleaf

2,155 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

moonlightleaf 2014-04-04T01:34:44+00:00

to Kawaiwkyik

[Insane]

00:22:484 (6) - 試試移到00:22:650 - 之前就是这么放的扔给几个人play 发现那边有几率掉于是改掉的, fix
00:23:817 (7) - ^一樣做法

其他fix

to Piyoko_9796

[insane]

00:11:067 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - 這是在旋轉?中間沒轉啊!? ---没改额

其他fix

感谢mod ^^/

moonlightleaf

2,155 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

moonlightleaf 2014-04-04T06:57:12+00:00

Sakaue Nachi wrote:
~~好像是M4M~~_(:з」∠)_
[Yuki's easy]
00:05:734 (1) - 滑条尾whistle
00:07:067 (2) - ^
00:11:067 (1,2) - ^
00:08:400 (1) - 这个头也换成finish怎样，可以这个声音小点，然后2大点有个递进
00:13:734 (1) - ^
00:16:400 (1) - 尾whistle
00:16:400 (1) - 可以微调下包的好点
00:21:734 (1) - 换成finish好点？
00:24:400 (1) - 这样会不会好看点？http://puu.sh/7UrnV.jpg
00:44:400 (1) - 头finish
00:48:234 (2) - 中间whistle
00:58:900 (2) - ^

to Minakami Yuki

[hard]

00:11:734 (3,4,5,6) - 在hard是不是跳了点，缩小为大概0.85倍差不多感觉 ---没改

GL~这是我的图http://osu.ppy.sh/s/141354 --等我闲下来就摸

感谢补充H和I的摸~

Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2014-04-04T09:04:48+00:00

http://puu.sh/7Vsar.osu
Thanks for modding. Sry no time to reply.

moonlightleaf

2,155 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

moonlightleaf 2014-04-04T10:42:08+00:00

to yuki

下次贴代码到这里吧 puush的有乱码诶 arist 什么的不识别我每次还要改一下

DreaM117er

1,594 posts

Joined September 2012

DreaM117er 2014-04-04T14:05:15+00:00

For NM from PM

這首歌是屬於很俏皮的歌，最適合頓點然後再接拍子，我會依照這個原則幫你Mod

Insane

點我打開

00:18:900 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 這裡單點太多了，顯得很沒特色，反而沒有最一開始的開頭好(00:16:067 之前 )
00:20:400 (5,6) - 擺成平行
00:21:067 (1,2,3,4) - 變形的風車!!?? 把它擺正
00:21:734 (1,2,3,4,5) - 單點太多了，大大你要知道前面的風車已經很難了，後面又接連跳，不人道啊= " =
00:22:900 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:25:734 (2) - 這個刪掉再做跳點
00:29:067 (1,3) - 平行，有點歪了
00:29:734 (1,3,4,5) - 這四個都是直Slider，弄彎一點比較好看
00:37:234 (1,2,3,4,5) - 太彎了太彎了，圓滑一點(把DS調一下再做調整)
00:40:484 (3,4,5) - 這裡只有一個聲音，接連打好怪
00:47:067 (5,6,1) - 組成一個大Slider，不要全跳
00:50:900 (6) - 這裡沒有任何聲音，刪掉這個
00:52:234 (2) - ^
00:57:734 (5,6,1) - 組成一個大Slider
01:00:734 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 還有 01:03:400 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - 統一一起說比較好，跟著歌詞還有鼓，多運用點1/2 Slider，和前面一樣，不要全跳
01:07:400 (7) - 換成circle
01:18:567 (6) - 刪掉，01:18:400 (5) - 換成3/4 Slider

Hard

點我打開

00:07:067 (7) - 換成1/2 Slider + 1/1 Slider
00:12:400 (7) - ^
00:15:067 (5) - 四個鼓聲，分開來吧
00:16:567 - 漏掉一個音，建議放Slider
00:17:900 (2) - ^
00:16:734 (3) - 這裡有很多分音，像00:23:067 (4,5,6) 一樣分開
00:18:067 (3) - ^
00:22:067 (2) - ^
00:28:567 (6,7) - 組成Slider
00:37:567 (5) - 刪掉
00:43:900 (4,5) - Hard照著順序來就好了，Reverse Selection
00:48:067 (5) - 中間還有一個音，不要漏掉了
00:53:734 (5) - 換成circle
00:54:234 (1,2) - 換成這樣??

※Hard記得DS從頭到尾全開，除非要跳點按著Alt在去做調整，你有些地方跳得很兇，提醒一下

Normal

點我打開

00:40:734 (4,1) - 換成這樣↓

00:49:734 (1) - 換成下面這樣??

00:51:067 (2) - ^

615's Insane

點我打開

00:06:900 (6) - 三角形沒有排好
00:15:734 (5) - 太遠了，Reverse Selection
00:18:900 (6) - 疊在00:19:067 (1) 頭上
00:22:900 (6,1,2,3,4) - 正五角形擺好
00:26:567 (4) - 移到x144 y68
00:37:400 (4) - 減少一次折返
00:42:567 (6,7,8) - 重新做這三個點，跳太遠了
00:43:234 (1,2) - ^
00:45:567 (5,1) - ^
00:47:567 (2,3) - ^
00:52:567 (2,4,6,8) - 網內拉近距離，同上
00:57:067 (2,3,4,5) - 太遠了
00:58:234 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - ^
01:00:734 (2,3) - ^
01:02:400 (3,4) - 這種滑條不是給你這樣擺的，你打的到就當我沒Mod過
01:10:567 (4,5,6,7,1) - 太遠了
01:13:734 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^，要求重製
01:16:400 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 重製，這裡你打的到??

歌開始前10秒我還以為是神圖，不合格

BPM180跳這麼遠，除非你打的過，否則我不會要求重製

抱歉。

Easy沒有問題，有一些怪怪的地方，請別的大大幫你吧

moonlightleaf

2,155 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

moonlightleaf 2014-04-04T15:20:25+00:00

to m1223961117

都fix

感谢mod ^^/

Ozato Fumika

Beatmap Nominator

3,379 posts

Joined July 2013

Ozato Fumika 2014-04-04T18:36:00+00:00

Hi

[Yuki's Easy]
The way you mapped, I think HP OD AR should be reduced by 1 tick.
00:48:400 (2) - I couldn't figure out why you placed it here. It should be moved to 00:48:234 - to follow vocal or guitar or the music itself.
But the way you mapped, I don't know if you should make this part 1/2 beat or not.
00:59:067 (2) - This again. same opinion as above. I don't think it follows the music at all. I really don't know your intention.. Maybe you are following the drum, that that isn't the dominant beat here imo.
01:21:734 (1) - How about adding timing sections to add fade out effect like the music does.

[Normal]
Your NC needs a lot of work
00:02:400 (3,1) - this can be really confusing for inexperienced players sometimes, I strongly recommend that you unstack these.
00:27:900 (2,3) - I think this would flow better. And also, this stack might be a little too hard

SPOILER

00:37:734 (1,2) - shouldn't these 2 be 2/1 slider? or have circle after them
01:12:067 (2,1) - they overlap, but I guess you can keep it. I wouldn't recommend, though.

[Hard]
Same as normal. Your NC needs a lot of work
00:36:234 (2) - this stack really doesn't fit at all imo. There really isn't much of a thing going on here, so you can delete this and 00:35:734 (1,1) - spread this out.
00:38:234 (3,4) - Try crtl + g. Fits very well and flows better imo
00:43:234 (1,2) - I think you should merge these to a 1/1 slider. this vocal is holding, and 2 circles don't fit imo.
00:48:400 (6) - you can delete this note. I can't think of a reason why you would want to add a circle here. Unless you were trying to make this diff harder
01:00:400 (2,3) - How about merge thee to a 1/2 slider? according to 01:03:067 (2) -
01:01:234 (4,1,2) - you should either stack these 3 or unstack 01:01:401 (1,2) - to fit vocal more. having.
01:03:400 (3) - crtl + g please. extremely boring flow
01:04:067 (1) - ^
01:10:900 (1) - this part feels very awkward. you're starting the slider which i part of 01:10:567 (2) - this melody, which makes the vocal start from the reverse. Try this

SPOILER

mine

yours

01:13:734 (1,2,3,4) - to be honest, this part seems really boring. you could probably remap this section and come up with better pattern!

[Insane]
NC....
00:07:734 (1) - I don't think this SV change makes any sense at all.
00:17:067 (5) - crtl + g?
00:17:400 (6) - ^ (only if you did above)
00:25:567 (1,2,3,4) - I think you can do a better job with this distance problem here. kind of confusing imo.
00:26:067 (3,4,1) - awkward flow imo. try to bring 00:26:234 (4) - down left a little?

SPOILER

00:33:067 (3) - move it a bit up for smooth transition 00:32:400 (1,2,3) -
00:35:067 (8) - this 1/2 reverse doesn't fit, and is ruining the calmness of these part imo. replace it with 1/1 slider?
00:40:567 (3) - I really don't see a point with this circle. delete? if you do, don't forget distance here 00:40:067 (2,4) -
00:40:734 (4,5) - not the best flow imo.
00:55:067 (6) - I'd call this bad flow. it's completely breaking the flow from this stream 00:54:734 (2,3,4,5) -
01:10:400 (3,4,5,6) - spacing disaster, also shape
01:10:901 (6,1,2) - I think this might be a bit hard to play. but it's ok
01:18:234 (4,5) - not the best flow, but it's acceptable

Good luck!!

CrazyErrorMan

110 posts

Joined February 2013

CrazyErrorMan 2014-04-05T02:07:48+00:00

Hello, Mod from my que.
Normal Diff
These circles are a little hard compared to other maps I have seen.
00:25:567
00:36:567
00:59:567
00:59:567

These circles are too quick I think for a normal diff.
That's all I've got to say.
If you don't find this mod helpful, don't worry.

moonlightleaf

2,155 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

moonlightleaf 2014-04-05T05:24:37+00:00

to No Dap

all fix

to CrazyErrorMan

yep, a llttle hard , i changed~

thanks for modding ^^/

10crystalmask01

10crystalmask01 2014-04-05T05:53:51+00:00

Hey, mod from queue

[General]
01:13:734 - Kai time should end here, since this is officially where the chorus is done.
[Insane]
00:00:900 (3) - , 00:01:400 (5) - and 00:02:400 (8) - NC for a more vibrant color effect for the objects? (Similar to what you did for 01:11:067 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - )
00:03:567 (3) - ,00:04:067 (5) - and 00:04:567 (7) - - ^ Same suggestion.

00:44:400 (4) - NC Because it's the first object to appear in Kai.

00:55:067 (8) - Add finish for the cymbal crash heard in the music.
01:00:400 (1) - ^ On the head.

[615's Insane]
00:00:900 (2,3,4) - NC for those consecutive overlaps. ~~I hate them~~
00:03:567 (2,3,4) - ^

00:22:900 (6,1,2,3,4) - Fix the star formation with these notes ,they're just really messy atm;

SPOILER

00:33:734 (1,3) - Random overlap, don't use this type of flow on this part of the music, it doesn't fit in the same rhythm with where 00:00:401 (1,1,1,1) - was.

01:11:567 (2,3,4) - NC?

[Hard]
00:00:900 (2,3,4) - Add finish on the head.
00:02:400 (5) - ^
00:03:567 (3) - ^
00:04:234 (5) - ^

00:44:400 (6) - NC because it's the first object to appear in Kai time.

00:45:734 (4,2,3) - Please move more apart to avoid that unnecessary overlap.

01:06:234 (2) - Add finish
01:06:900 (5) - ^
01:07:234 (1,2) - ^

[Normal]
00:21:734 (1) - Kinda forms an awkward flow. This is because it's reverse end is closer to the previous object, then it's actual head itself.
Here's an idea - Replace with 00:23:067 (2) - flipped horizontally (CTRL + H) and re-position it a bit. T Hat way, not only does it solve the issue, but it forms a pretty neat symmetry with 00:23:067 (2) - too!

SPOILER

*NOTE: You're going to hafta move the next objects just a bit for this to work

00:25:234 (1) - Remove NC, not necessary here.

00:27:900 (2,3) - This stack is very random, considering that none of your previous objects were stacked. Consider unstacking.

00:30:567 (2,3) - Stack, only if you disagree to my suggestion above. You want to keep the flow consistent.

00:40:734 (6) - NC instead of 00:41:234 (1) - .

00:41:650 (1) - Add whistle?

00:44:400 (1) - Add finish on the head.

01:00:400 (5) - NC instead of 01:01:067 (1) - , since it appears no the new rhythm cycle (on the long white tick mark).

01:19:067 (4) - Add finish.

[Yuki's Easy]
Okay.

Good luck!

moonlightleaf

2,155 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

moonlightleaf 2014-04-05T06:23:12+00:00

to 10crystalmask01

all fix

but here

[Normal]

00:40:734 (6) - NC instead of 00:41:234 (1) - . (6)fix , but (1) i think should NC also for next（ appear spinner

thanks for modding ^^/

add Teller's Insane , map by tellertheworld

Last edited by moonlightleaf 2014-04-05T11:17:12+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2014-04-05T09:38:23+00:00

No Dap:
about following the vocal, I put the slider on 00:48:234 - before, but I finally accept Wafu's suggestion to make it on 1/2 beats.
I will condiser to change it or not if some others give me suggestions.

I think it's not necessary to add timing sections.

Currently, no change

Rizia

3,114 posts

Joined January 2012

Rizia 2014-04-05T14:23:14+00:00

no kds

[Teller's Insane]
01:13:734 - 完在這裡

YoshinoSakura

472 posts

Joined January 2011

YoshinoSakura 2014-04-05T16:55:48+00:00

Kawaiwkyik wrote:
[615]
01:02:400 (3,4) - 換成3連slider http://puu.sh/7Uwd9.jpg 猴
01:16:400 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 我不會跟你說我恨這個建議改改改成00:13:734 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 一樣也好稍稍改了下

Piyoko_9796 wrote:
[615 baka]
臥感覺太跳?((撒...我就是說說=3=還可以
感覺flow不太好?
感覺不太好只是稍微跳一点吧

00:10:900 (4) - del 有音的
00:12:067 (4) - x:112 y:200 那也太近
00:13:734 (1,2,3) -美麗的路程曲折! 美丽！

00:21:067 (3,4,5,6,1) - 太密了而且好難按改了下
00:23:067 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這5角形滑條折點放中間(4)和(5)間距不一樣故意的? 你输得对，这里是渐开
00:26:400 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 太密,(5)根本看不見2個短滑條又不是早消失能而看的見加上連打順著去停在(3)尾就像停了一樣,你讓我吐糟什麼((我在說什麼这是我改变的米桶的梗。。
00:28:234 (5) - 移到00:21:567 (6) - , 00:28:400 (1,2) - 移到本來(5)的位置没看懂。。
00:29:067 (4) - Ctrl G 感觉不错
00:39:734 (1) - x:152 y:176 更不好看了。。
00:40:067 (2) - x:88 y:344 叠到1上了更不好看惹，，
00:43:234 (1,2,3,4,5,1) -美麗好麼hhh 。。

00:46:400 (2) - 不在三角形中間... 本来就没设计在中间。。
00:47:734 (3) - Ctrl G? 都好像flow不好? 555怎么修都修不好。。
00:48:900 (3) - 滑條折點不在中間+不在(2)的正後方.... 两次ctrl+g即可解决
00:59:567 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 同樣,滑條(不正常地)擋住連打難讀圖,還有(4)好奇怪... 改了
01:02:400 (3,4) - 各縮小一個返回猴
01:08:067 (5,6,1) -啦啦啦啦港妹baka

01:13:734 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 這音樂給我的感覺是越縮越小诶渐开跳而已
01:19:067 (1) - end at 01:21:067 - 猴

m1223961117 wrote:
00:06:900 (6) - 三角形沒有排好不是三角。。
00:15:734 (5) - 太遠了，Reverse Selection 不远
00:18:900 (6) - 疊在00:19:067 (1) 頭上 no
00:22:900 (6,1,2,3,4) - 正五角形擺好不是五角形
00:26:567 (4) - 移到x144 y68 那也太远
00:37:400 (4) - 減少一次折返感觉没必要，这里有音的
00:42:567 (6,7,8) - 重新做這三個點，跳太遠了
00:43:234 (1,2) - ^
00:45:567 (5,1) - ^
00:47:567 (2,3) - ^ sorry no change
00:52:567 (2,4,6,8) - 網內拉近距離，同上
00:57:067 (2,3,4,5) - 太遠了
00:58:234 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - ^
01:00:734 (2,3) - ^
01:02:400 (3,4) - 這種滑條不是給你這樣擺的，你打的到就當我沒Mod過改了
01:10:567 (4,5,6,7,1) - 太遠了
01:13:734 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^，要求重製
01:16:400 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 重製，這裡你打的到?? 改了

歌開始前10秒我還以為是神圖，不合格
BPM180跳這麼遠，除非你打的過，否則我不會要求重製
不是你打不到的地方就不能打，不是我打不了的图我就不能做
抱歉。抱歉了没改多少

10crystalmask01 wrote:
[615's Insane]
00:00:900 (2,3,4) - NC for those consecutive overlaps. I hate them sorry for these patterns.I'm just copying them from others map.But I think NC is not needed here.
00:03:567 (2,3,4) - ^

00:22:900 (6,1,2,3,4) - Fix the star formation with these notes ,they're just really messy atm; it's not a star pattern

00:33:734 (1,3) - Random overlap, don't use this type of flow on this part of the music, it doesn't fit in the same rhythm with where 00:00:401 (1,1,1,1) - was. fixed

01:11:567 (2,3,4) - NC?^

thx for mod

to all the coming modder

I'll probably not reduce the difficulty of my diff.Sorry for that.If you can't play,just skip my diff.

哟~~~~蹦！

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: MARRY ME.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 43184
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.4

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Title:MERRY MERRY MERRY MENU... Ne!
TitleUnicode:MERRY MERRY MERRY MENU...ね!
Artist:Tamura Yukari
ArtistUnicode:田村ゆかり
Creator:moonlightleaf
Version:615's Insane
Source:
Tags:[Minakami Yuki] 615915887
BeatmapID:395511
BeatmapSetID:161089

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

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smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 2014-04-05T17:18:26+00:00

嗨二妹，好多post，懷疑要sprank 直覺。 ~~干作了一周BAT美麗check就這樣塔馬的放兩周還等不到check真SAD~~

[General]

1.我之前拿的是舊檔案up過了後，現在tag還是不一致，試著再重新貼上一次GDer使一致。
2.Widescreen support 不一致，ins忘了勾。

[Yuki's Easy]

00:29:067 (2) - 這個人聲加whistle似乎有不錯的效果。
00:31:734 (2) - 我覺得應該能跟上面對應是加whistle，而不是finish。
00:47:067 (1) - 或許應該尾端要空一格白線比較好掌握下一個節奏，個人意見。
00:59:067 (2) - 感覺尾端忘了加whistle強調vocal
01:19:067 (1) - 為何不讓中間描點對準Y軸成一個對稱圖形? 然後左邊尖端高了點.

Nazi,後面那一根草歪了。

[Normal]

SPOILER

00:09:067 (2) - 前端+whistle可突出音樂
00:11:067 (1,2) - 兩個硬包不太好看
00:14:400 (2) - 同00:09:067
00:24:067 (3) - 故意沒疊好?
00:30:567 (2) - 覺得這也是重音能加finish突顯效果。
00:38:234 (2,4) - 不如都換成1/2跟人聲
00:47:734 (3) - 尾端去掉finish，沒重音，無理由加。
00:58:400 (3,4) - 1都有加whistle，這邊全加whistle強調人聲。
01:17:067 (2) - 前端whistle

後面也是一根草歪。

[Hard] 00:48:734 timing線可刪去

SPOILER

00:03:234 (2) - 加whistle與4對應
00:06:734 (6) - 前端whistle
00:11:900 (4) - 加whistle節奏聽的會舒服點。
00:23:067 (1) - 尾端沒重音為何finish，無理。
00:30:067 (1,2,3) - 1尾端，2和3加finish試試? 重音。
00:33:067 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 或許間距能再放小一點作anti-jump.
00:50:567 (5) - 為何不ctrl+g?
00:52:400 (1,2,3,4) - 沒互相對稱呢
00:59:234 (4) - Ctrl+G比較好點5。

後面也是一根草歪。

[615's Insane]

就只有615的轉盤結束跟大家不一樣。

SPOILER

00:10:984 (5) - (388|332)做個弧度?
00:13:067 (5) - Ctrl+g不就順flow了?
00:27:567 (3) - 重音怎不加finish?
00:28:400 (1) - (28|128)比較順暢flow。
00:30:234 (2) - 重音怎不加finish?
00:41:567 (1) - 可以加個finish或whistle強調人聲。
00:58:900 (1,2,3) - 這邊都唱出來的vocal所以我覺得可以加finish在這裡。
01:15:234 (2) - 不完全重疊嗎?
01:18:400 (5) - 或許開頭能加whistle。

[Teller's Insane]

有些重音加得很奇怪，聽得有些吵雜。

SPOILER

00:02:067 (8) - 紅線不需要加finish，這邊無重音，無理。連續3個finish有點noisy。
00:04:234 (6,8) - 藍線whistle聽的不是很舒服，remove it?
00:05:067 (9) - 少一個note跟vocal。
00:06:567 (3) - 不是重音，搬去finsh。(搬去這個會聽得比較流暢)
00:10:900 (7) - 這個1/4note間距有點小，放大到0.80x比較好讀。(個人意見，可能我喜歡作圖連打間距比較大一點。)
00:11:734 (2) - 加finish也是可以，不過建議還是remove。
00:12:400 (3) - 中間和尾端去掉finish，連續3個也是太吵雜。
00:15:734 (5) - 全去finish，頭尾whistle。
00:21:900 (2,3,4) - 23那麼遠，34又那麼近，不如放在(228|152)來平均間距，順便5包3。00:22:400 (5) 可以移到(152|68)試試。
00:26:817 (3,4,5,6) - 不好看的slider，而且又容易miss，還是用1/4比較適當。
00:37:900 (2,2,2,2) - finish的音效都把音樂蓋住了，建議可以remove藍線的finish。
00:43:234 (1,2) - 2個之間怎這麼近，明明之間還有一個白線的距離。
00:43:567 (2,3) - 這2跟3之間跟vocal的這段怎沒做? (會讓玩家沒辦法掌握何時click)
00:44:734 (1) - 尾端沒重音remove finish。
00:45:234 (2) - 沒疊好
00:59:234 (2) - 疊00:58:400 (2) 會很flow。
01:01:067 (6) - 紅線不需要finish。
01:02:400 (4) - ^
01:04:067 (6) - 疊01:02:400 (4) 。
01:08:567 (2,4,6,8) - 一樣remove藍線finish，不然很吵。
01:11:400 (2,4,6) - overmap，沒節奏在這裡。(參考615 ins diff 和二妹 diff )
01:16:400 (1,2,3,4) - 節奏是可以，但這個pattern似乎不太好看。

[Insane]

SPOILER

00:07:567 (4) - 為何不移到(252|220)左右位置成個圓形? 這樣看起來覺得好像放歪。
00:08:734 (5) - 尾端去掉whistle，與後面的whistle相對應這樣音效比較好聽。
00:11:400 (3) - 有點突出的感覺。
00:14:067 (5) - 尾端疊好?
00:18:067 (3,4) - 2個ctrl+g不就flow?
00:23:400 (4) - 我覺得ctrl+g比較順。
00:23:734 (5) - 如果上面那個用了這個疊 00:22:234 (2) 頭。
00:30:567 (4,5) - 尾端whistle感覺有點違和。
00:35:067 (1) - 尾端whistle去掉?
00:36:900 (6) - 再跳一點，移到(68|96)包3?
00:40:067 (2) - 覺得疊00:38:734 (1) 比較有感覺。
00:45:067 (1) - 再稍微調一下就變五角了
00:48:234 (1,2) - 也是覺得尾端whistle有點違和
00:50:234 (4) - 開頭忘了finish?
00:51:567 (4) - ^
00:58:900 (1,2) - 也是覺得尾端whistle有點違和
01:08:900 (1,1) - 加finish
01:09:900 (1) - ^
01:11:734 (2,2) - ^

後面草歪。

二妹Good Luck ~ !

草歪=綠線(草)歪了

Last edited by smallboat 2014-04-06T01:56:27+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

moonlightleaf

2,155 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

moonlightleaf 2014-04-06T01:00:05+00:00

to smallboat

都修惹我把提到的音效其他diff没的也加惹

草歪惹这个没看懂

感谢mod

太难rank惹我还是不收GD惹= =对Teller感到非常抱歉

615你的已经mod很多了啊再这么懒也不收你的GD惹

Teller's Insane dl here

-Teina-

529 posts

Joined October 2013

-Teina- 2014-04-06T05:33:41+00:00

moonlightleaf wrote:
to smallboat

都修惹我把提到的音效其他diff没的也加惹

草歪惹这个没看懂

感谢mod

太难rank惹我还是不收GD惹= =对Teller感到非常抱歉

615你的已经mod很多了啊再这么懒也不收你的GD惹

Teller's Insane dl here

好吧~
那你繼續努力吧

-Teina-

529 posts

Joined October 2013

-Teina- 2014-04-06T06:02:50+00:00

smallboat wrote:

嗨二妹，好多post，懷疑要sprank 直覺。 ~~干作了一周BAT美麗check就這樣塔馬的放兩周還等不到check真SAD~~

SPOILER

[General]

1.我之前拿的是舊檔案up過了後，現在tag還是不一致，試著再重新貼上一次GDer使一致。
2.Widescreen support 不一致，ins忘了勾。

[Yuki's Easy]

00:29:067 (2) - 這個人聲加whistle似乎有不錯的效果。
00:31:734 (2) - 我覺得應該能跟上面對應是加whistle，而不是finish。
00:47:067 (1) - 或許應該尾端要空一格白線比較好掌握下一個節奏，個人意見。
00:59:067 (2) - 感覺尾端忘了加whistle強調vocal
01:19:067 (1) - 為何不讓中間描點對準Y軸成一個對稱圖形? 然後左邊尖端高了點.

Nazi,後面那一根草歪了。

[Normal]

00:09:067 (2) - 前端+whistle可突出音樂
00:11:067 (1,2) - 兩個硬包不太好看
00:14:400 (2) - 同00:09:067
00:24:067 (3) - 故意沒疊好?
00:30:567 (2) - 覺得這也是重音能加finish突顯效果。
00:38:234 (2,4) - 不如都換成1/2跟人聲
00:47:734 (3) - 尾端去掉finish，沒重音，無理由加。
00:58:400 (3,4) - 1都有加whistle，這邊全加whistle強調人聲。
01:17:067 (2) - 前端whistle

後面也是一根草歪。

[Hard] 00:48:734 timing線可刪去

00:03:234 (2) - 加whistle與4對應
00:06:734 (6) - 前端whistle
00:11:900 (4) - 加whistle節奏聽的會舒服點。
00:23:067 (1) - 尾端沒重音為何finish，無理。
00:30:067 (1,2,3) - 1尾端，2和3加finish試試? 重音。
00:33:067 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 或許間距能再放小一點作anti-jump.
00:50:567 (5) - 為何不ctrl+g?
00:52:400 (1,2,3,4) - 沒互相對稱呢
00:59:234 (4) - Ctrl+G比較好點5。

後面也是一根草歪。

[615's Insane]

就只有615的轉盤結束跟大家不一樣。

00:10:984 (5) - (388|332)做個弧度?
00:13:067 (5) - Ctrl+g不就順flow了?
00:27:567 (3) - 重音怎不加finish?
00:28:400 (1) - (28|128)比較順暢flow。
00:30:234 (2) - 重音怎不加finish?
00:41:567 (1) - 可以加個finish或whistle強調人聲。
00:58:900 (1,2,3) - 這邊都唱出來的vocal所以我覺得可以加finish在這裡。
01:15:234 (2) - 不完全重疊嗎?
01:18:400 (5) - 或許開頭能加whistle。

[Teller's Insane]

有些重音加得很奇怪，聽得有些吵雜。

00:02:067 (8) - 紅線不需要加finish，這邊無重音，無理。連續3個finish有點noisy。

紅線一直沒FINISH喔
00:04:234 (6,8) - 藍線whistle聽的不是很舒服，remove it?

這個都一直沒whistle
00:05:067 (9) - 少一個note跟vocal。

00:05:067 - 加了圈
00:06:567 (3) - 不是重音，搬去finsh。(搬去這個會聽得比較流暢)

搬了去00:06:400 (2) -
00:10:900 (7) - 這個1/4note間距有點小，放大到0.80x比較好讀。(個人意見，可能我喜歡作圖連打間距比較大一點。)

fixed
00:11:734 (2) - 加finish也是可以，不過建議還是remove。

改小聲一點吧
00:12:400 (3) - 中間和尾端去掉finish，連續3個也是太吵雜。

一直都是中間和尾端去finish喔
00:15:734 (5) - 全去finish，頭尾whistle。

抱歉因為不會再改不把新的hitsound pattern加入了所以試不到這個效果
00:21:900 (2,3,4) - 23那麼遠，34又那麼近，不如放在(228|152)來平均間距，順便5包3。00:22:400 (5) 可以移到(152|68)試試。

00:22:400 (5,2) - 是blanket的 / 00:21:734 (1,2) - 和 00:22:067 (3,4) - 是平均的這個排版出現了多次了喔
00:26:817 (3,4,5,6) - 不好看的slider，而且又容易miss，還是用1/4比較適當。

fixed
00:37:900 (2,2,2,2) - finish的音效都把音樂蓋住了，建議可以remove藍線的finish。

藍線的finish 一直都是沒有喔
00:43:234 (1,2) - 2個之間怎這麼近，明明之間還有一個白線的距離。

fixed
00:43:567 (2,3) - 這2跟3之間跟vocal的這段怎沒做? (會讓玩家沒辦法掌握何時click)

個人節奏覺得這樣比較好抱歉不能給你原因T_T
00:44:734 (1) - 尾端沒重音remove finish。

尾端一直沒finish喔
00:45:234 (2) - 沒疊好

疊好的話 stack leniency會發揮作用令00:46:151 (2) - 會移位
00:59:234 (2) - 疊00:58:400 (2) 會很flow。

thank~ fixed
01:01:067 (6) - 紅線不需要finish。

一直都是沒finish呀尾端
01:02:400 (4) - ^:arrow: 一直都是沒finish呀尾端
01:04:067 (6) - 疊01:02:400 (4) 。

節奏沒變突然做個jump會很奇怪
01:08:567 (2,4,6,8) - 一樣remove藍線finish，不然很吵。:arrow: 一直都是沒finish的說 slider的尾端
01:11:400 (2,4,6) - overmap，沒節奏在這裡。(參考615 ins diff 和二妹 diff )

fixed
01:16:400 (1,2,3,4) - 節奏是可以，但這個pattern似乎不太好看。

fixed

感覺大大耐心幫我mod
這是最後的修改吧....

音效方面你可能需要redwonload喔~

祝小moon你rank圖成功~

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212,256,78234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,136,78400,2,2,P|168:88|124:60,2,95
256,192,78817,12,0,81734,0:0:0:0:

SPOILER

[Insane]

00:07:567 (4) - 為何不移到(252|220)左右位置成個圓形? 這樣看起來覺得好像放歪。
00:08:734 (5) - 尾端去掉whistle，與後面的whistle相對應這樣音效比較好聽。
00:11:400 (3) - 有點突出的感覺。
00:14:067 (5) - 尾端疊好?
00:18:067 (3,4) - 2個ctrl+g不就flow?
00:23:400 (4) - 我覺得ctrl+g比較順。
00:23:734 (5) - 如果上面那個用了這個疊 00:22:234 (2) 頭。
00:30:567 (4,5) - 尾端whistle感覺有點違和。
00:35:067 (1) - 尾端whistle去掉?
00:36:900 (6) - 再跳一點，移到(68|96)包3?
00:40:067 (2) - 覺得疊00:38:734 (1) 比較有感覺。
00:45:067 (1) - 再稍微調一下就變五角了
00:48:234 (1,2) - 也是覺得尾端whistle有點違和
00:50:234 (4) - 開頭忘了finish?
00:51:567 (4) - ^
00:58:900 (1,2) - 也是覺得尾端whistle有點違和
01:08:900 (1,1) - 加finish
01:09:900 (1) - ^
01:11:734 (2,2) - ^

後面草歪。

二妹Good Luck ~ !

草歪=綠線(草)歪了

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-Neipezi

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-Neipezi 2014-04-06T06:38:44+00:00

hihi:3/

[General]
- Audio lead-in conflicts with 615's Insane diff.
- Tags "tellertheworld" remove
- Color Settings

owo?

[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,66,160
Combo2 : 255,128,192
Combo3 : 255,128,255
Combo4 : 255,77,255

[Yuki's Easy]
00:24:400 (1) - add whistle tail
01:19:067 (1) - placed in the center? add whistle tail

[Normal]
00:24:400 (1) - add whistle tail
00:25:234 (2) - whistle add
00:27:067 (1) - add whistle tail
00:27:900 (2) - whistle add
00:28:234 (3) - whistle add on the head
00:39:734 (5) - 1/1 slide short change? so, here's the vocals and fit it, then 00:40:400 (1) to move. and 00:41:234 (1) - NC remove

box

00:58:400 (3) - add whistle tail
00:59:234 (4) - whistle add

[Hard]
00:05:067 (7) - whistle add?
00:10:734 (4) - why soft:C2 did you use? i'm soft:C1 is recommended that you use.
00:48:067 (5) - then go to 00:48:234 - , 00:48:067 - to circle add. this vocal beat
01:08:067 - 01:08:234 - circle add? vocal
01:18:734 (4) - clap add on the head

[Insane]
00:05:400 - same as Hard
00:28:900 - here is circle add
00:52:400 (1) - finish add
00:52:734 (3,3) - clap add?

[615's Insane]
00:09:734 (1,2) - change location?

image

00:10:984 (5) - x384 y328 move
01:16:400 (1,2,3,4,5) - pattern is difficult to play x.x
01:17:067 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:19:067 (1) - 01:21:734 - spinner end?

good lucky'w'/

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