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Sellenite

Joined September 2013

Sellenite 2014-04-08T14:12:54+00:00

地下城啊，真怀念
你这首歌剪切的时候最后做一些处理吧，渐弱什么的，突然美丽2333，至少也要让转盘结尾落在大白线上啦

[General]
AudioLeadIn不要为0，你的offset已经是0了,立即开始玩家怎么玩

[Basic]
00:02:057 add note，因为00:04:800 (2) 也加了
00:05:485 (1) - 尾巴remove whistle，太大声了，或绿线小声点
00:08:228 (1) - 这个节奏不好。删除它，可以改为00:07:542这里加滑条，在00:08:228折返，折返后00:08:914这里加whistle，然后00:09:600 add whistle note.因为00:07:542这里开始有个骤降音，用滑条比较好
00:30:857 后面节奏满满的这里却空了，不自然
00:35:657 (1,3) - 不推荐，或者两个头重合
01:33:257 (1) - 推荐每个大白线加个绿线骤降音

[Medium]
00:01:028 (2) - remove whistle，听着怪
00:02:057 改为whistle
00:03:771 add note,这里不需要空
00:05:485 (1) - 尾巴太大声，移除whistle
00:09:600 (1) - 尾巴remove whistle,听着超不自然
00:12:000 为何空
00:31:885 add note，这里不需要空
00:33:257 这里注意，这里和00:28:457的节奏是不一样的，也就是说你空的节奏不一样，会觉得有违和感
01:05:828 (1) - 01:06:857停在这里
01:05:828 (1) - 这个看了不怎么舒服..建议改一下
01:07:885 (3) - 头移除clap，改为normal sampleset
01:27:771 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 我觉得过多的连续单点在normal比较难而且看起来不怎么好看
01:33:257 (1) - 删去然后统一转盘开始比较好

[Regraz's Advanced]
cs+1
Finish下得比较单一，有很多大白线不必要放的，听着怎么舒服怎么删，你这样放整首歌会比较吵.我听了一下一些红线上的音是都不用加finish的，把他们删去
00:02:514 (4) - add clap
00:10:628 add whistle
00:19:542 (2) - 移开它
00:20:571 (1,2) - 注意2踩不了音，把1改为滑条会好点
00:23:314 (3) - 头改为clap
00:26:057 (3) - 改为clap
00:26:314 (4,5) - 不要在蓝线上下短滑条
00:37:371 (2) - 删除clap
01:18:171 (1) - 连续两个大跳了，减少些距离
01:32:228 (3,4,5,3,4,5) - 这两个三连音效用在这里不好听

[Difficult]
这个我就水摸了..感觉前面下whistle有些违和感
00:00:685 (2) - 太远了
01:26:057 (3,4) - 都加whistle

好难啊1111

- Tu -

132 posts

Joined September 2012

- Tu - 2014-04-08T14:37:56+00:00

Difficult
00:03:428 (2) -http://puu.sh/80NKh.jpg 放平均點
00:10:628 (2,3,4,1) - DS好像不太好
00:13:371 (6) - 包一下?
00:14:228 (3) - ^
00:27:771 (2) - ^

medium
00:12:000 - 加個圈吧
00:17:828 (3) - 包
00:45:257 (1) - 放平均點
00:45:257 (1) - 包?

basic
00:28:800 (3) - 未包好吧

advanced找不到問題

ZZHBOY

1,649 posts

Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

ZZHBOY 2014-04-08T15:18:48+00:00

updated, fix some

thank for mod.-.

YoshinoSakura

472 posts

Joined January 2011

YoshinoSakura 2014-04-09T04:01:07+00:00

窝乙醛大宝聪明波

[General]
没啥

[Insane]
00:02:117 (1,2) - 这么好的3/4咋不要了啊
00:07:831 (3,4) - 第一次读不出来，建议slider
00:10:174 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - 我柑橘不好，前面1/4和后面1/3都长一个样，可以把1/4叠一下
00:39:831 (1,2) - 这种东西很不爽的，高速slider后突然停一下，简直吃电视
00:47:888 (1) - 建议拉远一点
00:48:402 (3) - ^
00:52:174 (1) - 我柑橘多半会打早
后面有些连打莫名，不过目押的话也没啥问题

[Hard]
这本来就是张标准set的map，这diff来个cs3是要闹哪样spread会被喷的，但是意外的能接受
00:04:002 (4,2) - 这两个碰到了
00:19:602 (2,4) - ^
00:48:402 (2) - ctrl+G
01:03:660 (2,3) - 这两个重音都在滑条尾
还不错，局部排版和滑条有些欠佳。

低难度不看了，我要去吃饭惹。。

GL

Mafumafu

Beatmap Nominator

3,367 posts

Joined August 2013

Mafumafu 2014-04-09T04:28:24+00:00

Fix many. 然后我cs4了。。。。。。。。。。
不要打我我请你吃桶还不行吗

CS4然后DT hhhh

osu file format v12

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Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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ZZHBOY

1,649 posts

Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

ZZHBOY 2014-04-09T04:34:53+00:00

Regraz wrote:
Fix many. 然后我cs4了。。。。。。。。。。
不要打我我请你吃桶还不行吗

cs3就好

Mafumafu

Beatmap Nominator

3,367 posts

Joined August 2013

Mafumafu 2014-04-09T04:50:56+00:00

ZZH啊，那就搞回来CS3把，刚刚又看了一下，cs4排版确实不好看了。。

ZZHBOY

1,649 posts

Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

ZZHBOY 2014-04-09T04:53:48+00:00

Regraz wrote:
ZZH啊，那就搞回来CS3把，刚刚又看了一下，cs4排版确实不好看了。。

cs3一直没动

BeatofIke

4,166 posts

Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 2014-04-10T04:15:05+00:00

IRC mod with ZZHBOY. We fixed some minor stuff.

IRC Mod

21:48 ZZHBOY: hi ike.-. can u have a check of my map if u r free now?
21:48 BeatofIke: Whoa, I just checked 2 maps already. D:
21:49 ZZHBOY: QAQ
21:50 ZZHBOY: so after you take a break then can i come to ask you again?
21:50 BeatofIke: sure

21:51 ZZHBOY: ._.
21:51 BeatofIke: I'm just clearing all of my mod requests

21:51 ZZHBOY: wow
21:52 BeatofIke: I have like....3~4 more mods to clear XD
21:52 ZZHBOY: ......
22:05 ZZHBOY: wa you are idle again o.o So if you are free now?
22:07 BeatofIke: Yup!
22:07 BeatofIke: yes*
22:07 *ZZHBOY is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/392637 NEXON - Evil Tower 2]
22:07 ZZHBOY: ↑my map o.o
22:07 BeatofIke: yay!

22:08 ZZHBOY: `w`
22:18 BeatofIke: Whoa D;
22:18 ZZHBOY: o.o
22:19 BeatofIke: lol
22:19 ZZHBOY: i think 1/4slider x 4 is difficult but cool`_>`
22:19 BeatofIke: yeah XD
22:20 ZZHBOY: ._.
22:22 ZZHBOY: o.o
22:23 ZZHBOY: whether this set in this diff is really suitable?
22:24 BeatofIke: Hmm...maybe >.<
22:25 BeatofIke: Is a jump map

22:25 ZZHBOY: `w`
22:26 BeatofIke: 01:11:031 (1,2,3) - o.o
22:27 BeatofIke: for advanced diff
22:28 ZZHBOY: 4x3stream is not good?
22:29 BeatofIke: it's good, but the last one has inconsistent spacing D:
22:29 BeatofIke: other than that, this diff is already good XD
22:29 ZZHBOY: em...let me fix it~
22:30 ZZHBOY: ._.
22:32 BeatofIke: 01:07:260 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Try moving this whole thing at 244|228
22:33 ZZHBOY: 01:07:945 (2) - after move it if this slider is offscreen?
22:34 BeatofIke: nope

22:34 ZZHBOY: XD
22:37 BeatofIke: then move 01:11:203 (3) - at 312|20
22:37 BeatofIke: htat's it for Advanced!

22:37 BeatofIke: that's*
22:38 ZZHBOY: yea
22:39 BeatofIke: Don't forget to add "Regraz" in tags since he made a guest difficulty.

22:39 ZZHBOY: of course.-.
22:41 BeatofIke: soft-slidertrick2? o.o
22:41 BeatofIke: should the name be "soft-slidertick2" ? o.o
22:42 ZZHBOY: ...i was fool
22:44 ZZHBOY: fixedXD
22:44 BeatofIke: okay lol
22:45 BeatofIke: o.o remove "NEXON" from tags since you already have the name as the artist

22:45 ZZHBOY: fixed~
22:46 BeatofIke: okay, make sure to do the thing in all diffs

22:46 BeatofIke: do the same thing*
22:47 ZZHBOY: yeah let me upload.-.
22:47 BeatofIke: okay, I'll re-download once you are done

22:47 ZZHBOY: done~
22:48 BeatofIke: okay

22:51 BeatofIke: Remove soft-slidertrick2 from song folder

22:52 ZZHBOY: i used it in Basic diffo.o
22:52 ZZHBOY: o no....
22:52 ZZHBOY: i deleted it`_>`
22:52 BeatofIke: okay >w<
22:54 BeatofIke: 00:00:060 (1) - move this slider to 256|180 for better stacking with 00:00:060 (1).
22:54 BeatofIke: Difficult diff

22:55 ZZHBOY: done~
22:57 BeatofIke: 00:27:831 (2) - You can blanket this slider better: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1498233
22:57 BeatofIke:

22:58 ZZHBOY: done~
22:58 BeatofIke: okay
23:04 BeatofIke: Try getting some testplays on the difficulty difficulty

23:05 ZZHBOY: `_>`
23:05 BeatofIke: Basic, Medium, and advanced diffs are good

23:06 ZZHBOY: so the last diff has some problem?
23:07 BeatofIke: a little >.<
23:07 ZZHBOY: em...
23:07 BeatofIke: not much
23:07 ZZHBOY: how can i fix it?
23:07 BeatofIke: that's why i recommend testplays

23:08 BeatofIke: It's hard for me to mod this diff because I can't even pass it lol
23:09 BeatofIke: I need some testplays to confirm that this difficulty is okay for ranking.
23:09 ZZHBOY: em.....
23:10 BeatofIke: Try asking RIP for testplay

23:12 BeatofIke: Polishing the map is one thing, but playing the map is more important.

Good map, but I recommend some testplays in the hardest difficulty and more mods in general. Putting a star icon for now due to it's potental. Good luck with this map.

EDIT: Considering that this map is only 2 weeks old, you should probably take the time to improve the map.

Oracle

571 posts

Joined April 2012

Oracle 2014-04-10T06:24:29+00:00

BeatofIke wrote:
EDIT: Considering that this map is only 2 weeks old, you should probably take the time to improve the map.

IRC(QQ) modded

log

浮世滙 1:03:33
00:00:402 - 这个很明显的音漏了
浮世滙 1:03:43
00:03:145 - 同上
浮世滙 1:03:55
滑条在红tick结束不太好
浮世滙 1:04:28
00:07:602 - 滑条尾压重音不好
浮世滙 1:04:38
三个whistle的音应该用三个note
浮世滙 1:05:07
你现在的clap
浮世滙 1:05:09
声音太小了
浮世滙 1:05:12
用一个重一点的
浮世滙 1:05:24
我打滑条头基本没感觉
浮世滙 1:05:38
滑条尾反而全是whistle
浮世滙 1:05:48
本末倒置了
ZZH 1:06:27
应该怎么办啊
浮世滙 1:06:52
我建议你连打加whistle
浮世滙 1:07:09
要换一个重一点的clap
浮世滙 1:07:14
找小船要一个
浮世滙 1:07:21
你就问他有没有重的clap
浮世滙 1:07:31
00:10:174 (2,3) - 这两个加whistle
浮世滙 1:07:39
连打一般都加whistle的
ZZH 1:07:47
好
浮世滙 1:08:07
然后到后面24白线的段
浮世滙 1:08:34
你24白线
浮世滙 1:08:36
13就用clap
浮世滙 1:09:06
00:10:688 (2,3,4) - 这个1/3
浮世滙 1:09:08
太难读了
浮世滙 1:09:16
干脆换成一个reverse
浮世滙 1:09:52
00:21:317 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这一串的音效有点怪怪的
主要原因是你的clap比较垃圾太轻了
浮世滙 1:10:15
重音反而更轻
浮世滙 1:10:19
whistle又很大声
浮世滙 1:10:33
解决办法就是找一个更重的clap
ZZH 1:10:58
唔...
ZZH 1:11:16
我clap好像是从烤肉那偷来的
浮世滙 1:11:24
不适合你这曲子
浮世滙 1:11:32
00:43:088 (4,5,6,7,8) -
浮世滙 1:11:35
这一段什么声音都没有
浮世滙 1:11:41
我像在打孔器
浮世滙 1:11:45
打空气
浮世滙 1:12:05
你干脆别用soft 用drum
浮世滙 1:12:18
用drum加上你现在的whistle
浮世滙 1:12:22
再找个重点的clap
浮世滙 1:12:24
差不多就行了
浮世滙 1:12:38
00:47:545 (2) - 漏whistle
浮世滙 1:12:54
00:48:059 (2) - clap换成whistle
ZZH 1:13:30
好
浮世滙 1:13:34
01:05:545 (5,1) - 要叠尾就叠好点这样难看
浮世滙 1:13:51
01:14:802 (4) - 漏clap
ZZH 1:14:02
叠不了
浮世滙 1:16:23
就移一下尾巴
ZZH 1:16:29
好
浮世滙 1:17:24
01:23:717 (1,2,3,4) - overmap
浮世滙 1:17:26
不允许的
ZZH 1:17:41
就是这个啊
ZZH 1:17:55
我后来还是加上去了
ZZH 1:17:59
本来都是单点
浮世滙 1:18:02
01:25:774 (3,4,5,6) -
浮世滙 1:18:06
这个也是overmap
浮世滙 1:24:44
我跟你说我也觉得不爽
浮世滙 1:24:47
玩起来
浮世滙 1:24:54
尤其是
浮世滙 1:24:56
你overmap没音效
浮世滙 1:25:09
打空气就算了
浮世滙 1:25:14
还要我打overmap的空气
ZZH 1:25:35
有没有建议啊
ZZH 1:25:40
我换anti jump好不好啊
浮世滙 1:25:59
01:22:345 (1,2) -
浮世滙 1:26:04
换成这样的都好
浮世滙 1:28:23
你还是换成4个圈吧
浮世滙 1:28:28
8圈之后两个slider
浮世滙 1:28:30
感觉好点
ZZH 1:28:36
好了
ZZH 1:28:39
妈蛋
ZZH 1:28:40
苦苦
浮世滙 1:29:46
开头
浮世滙 1:29:50
浮世滙 1:29:52
这样改
浮世滙 1:29:54
跟音
ZZH 1:31:48
我开头就是想把鼓点空出来啊
ZZH 1:31:51
跟那个乐器
浮世滙 1:31:54
不好
浮世滙 1:33:46
空音很几把
ZZH 1:33:57
....
ZZH 1:34:04
我觉得跟乐器更带感啊
浮世滙 1:34:33
。。。
浮世滙 1:34:37
不好
ZZH 1:35:05
先放这吧.-.
浮世滙 1:35:23
没啥了主要就是那个overmap
ZZH 1:35:35
hou
浮世滙 1:35:37
操这个开头我真接受不了
浮世滙 1:35:44
怎么重音空了
浮世滙 1:35:53
跟了个啥都没有的红线
ZZH 1:35:53
唔...
浮世滙 1:36:22
你能不能改了
ZZH 1:36:31
模仿兴业!
浮世滙 1:36:47
。。。还是改了吧
ZZH 1:36:55

浮世滙 1:36:56
兴业不会空这个音
ZZH 1:37:00
...
ZZH 1:37:27
我还是觉得开头节奏松散一些然后越来越....
ZZH 1:37:32
那样比较爽啊
浮世滙 1:37:46
00:00:402 - 那你就把滑条在这里结束
浮世滙 1:37:53
更松
浮世滙 1:37:56
爽吧
ZZH 1:38:17
额...
ZZH 1:41:08
好好 fixed
ZZH 1:41:19
上传噜
浮世滙 1:41:35
01:19:860 (2,3) -
浮世滙 1:41:37
没用drum
浮世滙 1:41:44
补上drum sample
浮世滙 1:41:47

[Hijiri Byakuren]

169 posts

Joined April 2010

[Hijiri Byakuren] 2014-04-10T08:05:07+00:00

[Difficult]
00:10:688 (2,3,4) - 有i前面的1/4在我实在读不出来这里是1/3 我还以为是1/6呢。为什么1/4的间距比1/3大？建议改成折返滑条

00:36:574 (2,3) - ctrl G？

01:22:174 (6) - 这个其实HD超坑。。再配上前面的滑条简直更坑

Zero__wind

osu! Alumni

3,314 posts

Joined August 2012

Zero__wind 2014-04-11T01:46:36+00:00

实在是恶俗音效简直没法听怀疑关掉音乐加的

Fycho

Global Moderator

2,479 posts

Joined August 2012

Fycho 2014-04-11T01:49:01+00:00

Zero__wind wrote:
实在是恶俗音效简直没法听怀疑关掉音乐加的

cant agree more

Oracle

571 posts

Joined April 2012

Oracle 2014-04-11T02:25:19+00:00

Fycho wrote:
Zero__wind wrote:
实在是恶俗音效简直没法听怀疑关掉音乐加的
cant agree more

pretty much this

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 2014-04-11T14:07:25+00:00

Zero__wind wrote:
实在是恶俗音效简直没法听怀疑关掉音乐加的

Agree add one.

[Difficult] 排版有點擠，看了一下的確亂加音效，reset all samples吧。下面小噴幾行音效。

00:01:431 (5) - 為何不NC? 然後00:02:117 (1) 取消NC使一致。(5.6的音效也很突兀)
00:05:545 (1) - 為何開頭不是finish而是clap
00:27:831 (2) - 這樣擺會給人感覺作的蠻粗糙不如疊起來，如果是說故意這也很不好看。
00:31:088 (6) - ^
00:41:031 (6) - 這一段怎麼這麼擠，放在(308|28)吧 (這幾個可以大跳)
00:41:202 (1) - (196|272)然後ctrl+g
00:43:088 (4,5,6) - 跟上面不要這麼擠呀，使用ctrl+h然後丟到(53|281)。然後00:43:602 (7) - 疊00:42:917 (3) 。
00:43:774 (8) - (8|160)，順弧度
00:43:945 (1) - 也是開頭怎會是clap
00:44:974 (5) - 要就跟前面統一樣直條，這樣pattern看得有點怪。
00:46:174 (4) - 有點難讀，疊6看看?
00:47:888 (1,2) - 刪掉，複製00:47:374 (1,2) ，用ctrl+< 2次或ctrl+h對稱。
00:48:402 (3) - 先疊前面的2 然後ctrl+h。
00:50:288 (5) - 疊00:49:431 (1) 比較好讀
00:52:517 (2) - 尾端疊好
00:55:431 (2) - (308|48)
00:55:945 (4) - 前端stack
00:58:345 (3) - ^
00:59:717 (3) - 稍微移上面點還可以做點跳。
01:02:974 (6) - 跟下一個靠太近了，stack到01:01:088 (3) 的頭上。
01:05:545 (5) - stack
01:22:345 (1,2) - 注意這兩個滑條是跟 01:11:374 (1,2) - 同個音軌，你這樣放藍線，這樣音效會加不到，建議改掉，後面跟前面不一樣的節奏也建議替換下。
01:23:717 (1,2,3,4) - Test了幾次還是覺得難讀。
01:29:202 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 前面有這種梗了，我想應該可以再換一個。

http://puu.sh/84HPD.osu 這是我加的音效，後面有一點忘了加~~因為有人要水煎所以沒放完~~

我加的音效方法是clap和whistle混合，和有些大白線finish，沉穩的part建議用clap，你可能要點每個音效來聽看看，祝從01那邊 pass。

Chloe

1,160 posts

Joined April 2011

Chloe 2014-04-12T06:32:24+00:00

irc log

00:30:231 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
13:53:33
ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 13:53:33
首先你这组

ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 13:53:45
有2种方法可以搞的质量更高

ZZH 2014/4/12 13:53:54
随机跳不好?

ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 13:54:06
00:30:231 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 一种是这个为正三角

ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 13:54:17
然后78跟着56做正方

ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 13:54:38
另外一种是复制12各转90 180 270

ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 13:55:01
随机跳只是FLOW 没有任何逻辑可言在我看来死的不能再死
13:56:28
ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 13:56:28

ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 13:57:00
我觉得这样质量比前面那种搞点不过都是工程量巨大啊少年

ZZH 2014/4/12 13:57:00
唔..

ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 13:57:15
其实图快泡了也没啥看你要质量还是要偷懒了

ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 13:57:19
我的话肯定是偷懒

ZZH 2014/4/12 13:57:27
唔...

ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 13:57:36
但是我可以保证

ZZH 2014/4/12 13:57:44
?

ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 13:57:52
如果你跟着我的思路来 1st里没几张可以比这张好

ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 13:58:21
唉还是算了吧
13:58:41
ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 13:58:41
00:37:774 (4) - 这个blanket太近了啊

ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 14:00:30
00:38:460 (1,2,3) - 这个没放好减速没啥感觉而且和下面那组衔接起来不顺

ZZH 2014/4/12 14:00:30
...
14:03:15
ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 14:03:15
00:44:803 (4) -

ZZH 2014/4/12 14:03:17
应该怎么改啊

ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 14:03:22
我觉得这个应该加whistle

ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 14:03:29
而不是后面那白线

ZZH 2014/4/12 14:03:22

ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 14:03:34
同理……

ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 14:03:37
00:46:174 (4) - ^

ZZH 2014/4/12 14:04:50
...

ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 14:05:05
我感觉这个方向就可以了
14:05:52
ZZH 2014/4/12 14:05:52
直接crtl+h可以吗

ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 14:06:08
行啊

ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 14:06:13
顺便00:41:031 (6) - 漏了whistle

ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 14:06:15
音乐有

ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 14:06:33
00:38:802 (1) - ^
14:08:52
ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 14:08:52
00:43:260 (6) - 考虑一下包3

ZZH 2014/4/12 14:09:08
唔///

ZZH 2014/4/12 14:09:19
这个还没包好?

ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 14:10:28
包3

ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 14:10:35
不是包你后面那NOTE
14:11:11
ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 14:11:11
其实BLANKET要用来包前面的而不是后面的包后面的话由于弧度问题FLOW其实被毁

ZZH 2014/4/12 14:11:25
唔...

ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 14:12:24
00:46:345 (5) - clap 00:46:517 (6) - whistle 00:46:688 (1) - 拿掉开头的clap

ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 14:12:38
00:47:031 (2) - clap替换whistle

ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 14:13:04
00:47:374 (1) - 拿掉clap
14:13:34
ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 14:13:34
00:47:888 (1) - whistle

ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 14:13:40
clap替换whistle

ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 14:13:50
00:48:402 (3) - clap

ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 14:14:02
我00:48:059 (2) - clap替换whistle

ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 14:14:11
我怎么感觉你这段音效有点乱加啊

ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 14:14:56
00:49:774 (1) - NC 前面那个NC去掉

ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 14:15:54
00:52:002 (5) - 这里可以考虑加个NOTE

ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 14:16:05
不然这小段太空了

ZZH 2014/4/12 14:16:07
好

ZZH 2014/4/12 14:16:29
不对

ZZH 2014/4/12 14:16:36
感觉这样会有段落感...

ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 14:16:43
感觉这里这段做的挺一般

ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 14:17:11
01:02:974 (6) -

ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 14:17:15

ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 14:17:31
现在这样明显间距不一样改成到34相等

ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 14:17:36
稍微移一下就可以了

ZZH 2014/4/12 14:18:12
移哪个?

ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 14:18:16
01:05:545 (5,1) - 这俩OVERLAP是故意还是不小心

ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 14:18:22
6

ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 14:18:45
这样就可以了啊
14:18:43
ZZH 2014/4/12 14:18:43
故意

ZZH 2014/4/12 14:18:51
不然会偏更多

ZZH 2014/4/12 14:19:05
图美丽

ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 14:19:26
01:04:860 (2,5,1) - 那就搞成这3个一起偏移

ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 14:19:36
补前面的6

ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 14:20:02
01:06:745 (4,5) - CTRLG 音效自己动一下

ZZH 2014/4/12 14:20:44
唔...
14:23:36
ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 14:23:36
整个KIAI段

ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 14:23:44
我建议全程红线CLAP强调

ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 14:23:59
01:25:088 (1) - 这种改掉就放普通的1/2

ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 14:25:25
01:12:403 (4) -

ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 14:26:00
然后长白线内的每组在这种白线位置多放一个CLAP

ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 14:26:23
也就是红红红白红红红红白红红红红白红红红红白红

ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 14:26:27
的CLAP循环

ZZH 2014/4/12 14:26:30
唔...

ZZH 2014/4/12 14:27:13
我音效大改了下

ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 14:27:29
音效有点乱

ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 14:27:31
别的还行

ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 14:27:35
其他也没啥了吧

ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 14:27:46
就是排列有点乱

ZZH 2014/4/12 14:27:47
好

ZZH 2014/4/12 14:27:52
QAQ

ZZH 2014/4/12 14:27:57
我排列一直乱...

ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 14:28:02
不过这个其实也没啥改头要改就要REMAP了

ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 14:28:10
以后注意点细节和美观就行了

ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 14:28:17
图不错比我1ST强多了

ZZH 2014/4/12 14:28:44
为何屡次忽略我的小圆ed

ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 14:29:01
01:08:631 (1) - 忘了说这个尾巴whistle

ZZH 2014/4/12 14:29:39
加了

ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 14:29:50
maya

ChLOeleTa 2014/4/12 14:30:03
其实我真想帮你重加一遍音效

from qq chat log, so picture beaufiful, sad

Selisi

721 posts

Joined October 2012

Selisi 2014-04-14T02:01:53+00:00

~~占坑> <。。~~
M4M sorry for so late> <~~~
[General]

auto whistle（soft-hitwhistle）感觉音量是不是有些大了而且一直在24音上哒哒哒的很不舒服，可以试试一些轻一些的鼓声，现在用的这个有些重
letterbox好像不用的因为没有break time（这个只是提一下

[Difficult]

test play

00:05:545 - 滑条头auto clap
00:06:917 - ^
00:14:460 - 这个音效加的不是击打点，00:14:288 (3,4) - ctrl+G试试？（这样的话音效要加到4的头上
00:31:260 (7) - 这个为什么不是跳呢前面00:30:231 (1,3,5) - 都跳了
00:51:488 (4) - 这里的节奏为什么放缓了 00:52:345 - 这个节奏建议map上因为这里实质和00:53:031 - 00:53:717 - 00:54:402 - 都一样
00:53:374 - ^这个和上面一样
01:25:002 (5) - 额这个circle不太理解不是和01:27:745 - 一样么？一个加了一个没加
01:20:117 (1) - whistle
01:21:660 - 头auto whistle

[Regraz's advanced]

test play

00:02:574 (4) - 这个spacing修复一下
01:05:888 (1) - 这个spinner有些意义不太大感觉挺突然的，背景音那么明显的额情况下这样处理感觉不太好
01:33:317 (1) - 去掉finish 吧这里已经声音渐小了
01:27:831 (1,2) - 这里的flow ctr+G貌似要好一些呢
l
01:28:860 - 从这里开始后面object全都堆到了偏右下角可以尝试好好利用左上角的空间让object铺展开来不至于堆到一起（提一下而已> <
show

[Medium]

00:12:060 - miss circle
00:28:517 - 00:31:945 - 00:33:317 - 这些地方不要空出来这么明显的鼓声
01:21:660 - 这个尾巴加个whistle？不然有些难掌握节奏的感觉
00:22:002 (1) - finish

[Basic]

00:22:174 (1) - finish?
00:30:917 - miss a circle

就这么多惹
很抱歉这么晚> < 前一阵子真的太忙惹

Last edited by Selisi 2014-04-15T05:27:36+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Atrue

osu! Alumni

1,017 posts

Joined July 2012

Atrue 2014-04-14T16:28:48+00:00

Hello~
From qq req.

[Notion]
This color means something you can either choose to fix or not to fix cause I prefer to do this.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.
[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
剩下的diff有时间再看吧。。今天略晚了。。（其实我感觉要说的话也没啥太多妨碍泡图和rank的地方可以说）
diff spread你想听么？估计不怎么想。。不过我感觉advanced还是难了点儿，也是不怎么能改的东西~
Good luck~

[Difficult]
General
实话说我觉得clap的音效有些莫名，因为可能更适合用作whistle，然后曲子本身好像没有出现这种类似的声音。。一家之言，仅供参考。
如果一定要这么用的话，我会根据你的想法推荐音效。。
其实
实话说我感觉这图做的除了乱一点，音效不怎么合适之外，其他还是不错的，沉住气看看能不能从音效上再改进改进啥的。。
Testplay
http://puu.sh/88uFZ.osr

SPOILER

Placement
00:10:688 (2,3,4) - 换拍了的地方是不是应该至少用nc来强调一下？不过我觉得最好的办法是要么stack，要么扯得开一些，总之跟前边1/4区别再大一些并且间距倾向于比1/4大，处理方式自己想一想吧~
00:29:374 (3,4) - 奇怪的flow。。我也是不怎么知道该怎么改，或许你需要换凹凸方向？不行，这一小段建议从新设计梗，打起来卡手

Hitsound
00:00:745 - 这里我觉得whistle会好听些
00:02:460 - 声音的减弱不是很明白
00:04:860 (3,4) - 这两个的头我觉得用sc1的whistle即可吧
00:06:231 - 这两个note的尾巴我觉得finish听上去舒服些，单finish
00:11:545 (3) - 欠缺打击感，只用soft音效实在是太软了类似这样的地方实在是太多，我觉得softhitnormal甚至弄成mormalhitnormal都行
00:22:002 - 这一小段的drum音效，whistle我觉得不怎么好听，不过要是让我再去找我也是找不着啥来代替的东西。。我觉得drum 的hitnormal就行。。
00:22:688 - 这个drumclap也是不好听，关键是从原曲找不到依据
00:27:145 (4,5,6,7) - 这四个我感觉应该是S:C1的whistle
00:38:802 (3,4,5) - 这三个地方的drumwhistle也是听着不舒服
后边的我也不知道应该怎么改惹。。实在是找不到太明显的思路。。。还是觉得你的那个SC1clap不好听

That's my suggestions. Thanks for requesting.If you have any questions feel free to send pm to me.

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Mafumafu

Beatmap Nominator

3,367 posts

Joined August 2013

Mafumafu 2014-04-15T13:32:31+00:00

Sweet Vanilla wrote:
[General]
[*]letterbox好像不用的因为没有break time（这个只是提一下[/list] Fixed!
[Regraz's advanced]
test play
00:02:574 (4) - 这个spacing修复一下好！
01:05:888 (1) - 这个spinner有些意义不太大感觉挺突然的，背景音那么明显的额情况下这样处理感觉不太好好的！
01:33:317 (1) - 去掉finish 吧这里已经声音渐小了改好了
01:27:831 (1,2) - 这里的flow ctr+G貌似要好一些呢好的
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01:28:860 - 从这里开始后面object全都堆到了偏右下角可以尝试好好利用左上角的空间让object铺展开来不至于堆到一起（提一下而已> < 稍微挪了一下最后，不想大改排列了
show

感谢MOD！

CODE:

Regraz's Advanced

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: eviltower_02.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 27488
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 15085,27428,49371,54857
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.4

[Metadata]
Title:Evil Tower 2
TitleUnicode:Evil Tower 2
Artist:NEXON
ArtistUnicode:NEXON
Creator:ZZHBOY
Version:Regraz's Advanced
Source:Dungeon and Fighter Dungeon
Tags:DNF Regraz
BeatmapID:398967
BeatmapSetID:160734

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.7
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[Events]
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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Sound Samples
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BeatofIke

4,166 posts

Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 2014-04-16T03:39:26+00:00

Map looks much better now! Good luck!

Selisi

721 posts

Joined October 2012

Selisi 2014-04-16T07:23:15+00:00

哇泡了> <

ZZHBOY

1,649 posts

Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

ZZHBOY 2014-04-16T07:25:10+00:00

Sweet Vanilla wrote:
哇泡了> <

>,>

rinsukir

385 posts

Joined March 2012

rinsukir 2014-04-18T05:22:48+00:00

恭喜rank

liaoxingyao

864 posts

Joined November 2013

liaoxingyao 2014-04-21T05:58:01+00:00

恭喜rank

lkx_Shore

1,453 posts

Joined January 2010

lkx_Shore 2014-04-21T12:21:04+00:00

一周没上，泡了啊，那我就不摸了，gl

ZZHBOY

1,649 posts

Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

ZZHBOY 2014-04-21T12:23:35+00:00

lkx_Shore wrote:
一周没上，泡了啊，那我就不摸了，gl

别跑啊先给我点个rank啊

YoshinoSakura

472 posts

Joined January 2011

YoshinoSakura 2014-04-23T02:05:46+00:00

恭喜rank

Mafumafu

Beatmap Nominator

3,367 posts

Joined August 2013

Mafumafu 2014-04-24T22:32:14+00:00

sad，看错了竟然

huixuanjiasuqi

14 posts

Joined February 2013

huixuanjiasuqi 2014-04-25T06:23:51+00:00

什么时候rank啊````

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

2,568 posts

Joined February 2010

jonathanlfj 2014-05-06T01:41:20+00:00

lets see

[General]
add 2000ms of audio lead-in, it currently starts too suddenly

if you dont know how to, go into your .osu files and change this line

[Difficult]
00:10:688 (1,2,3) - its really hard to notice that this is in 1/3, either use more spacing than 00:10:174 (3,4,5) or swap for a repeat slider instead
there are some missing whistles:
00:09:660 (1) - on slider end
00:28:174 (3) - on end
00:29:202 (2) -
00:29:888 (5) -
01:26:460 (1) - bring this a bit closer to 01:26:288 (6), the jump feels really extreme

[Regraz's Advanced]
00:02:117 (3,4,1) - keep these at a consistent spacing to avoid confusion
01:16:174 (3) - clap on end

[Medium]
00:05:545 (1) - whistle on end
01:05:888 (1) - clap on start
01:14:802 (3) - ^

[Basic]
00:08:288 (4) - should have a NC here
00:30:917 - consider adding a note here, the pause feels a bit weird since the music is really consistent
01:02:460 (2) - clap
01:29:202 (2,3,1) - why the spacing change here? newbies will be tempted to hit these earlier because they look closer together

just some minor stuff that you should clean up, let me know afterwards

ZZHBOY

1,649 posts

Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

ZZHBOY 2014-05-06T03:31:21+00:00

jonathanlfj wrote:
lets see

[General]
add 2000ms of audio lead-in, it currently starts too suddenly
if you dont know how to, go into your .osu files and change this line

[Difficult]
00:10:688 (1,2,3) - its really hard to notice that this is in 1/3, either use more spacing than 00:10:174 (3,4,5) or swap for a repeat slider instead
there are some missing whistles:
00:09:660 (1) - on slider end
00:28:174 (3) - on end
00:29:202 (2) -
00:29:888 (5) -
01:26:460 (1) - bring this a bit closer to 01:26:288 (6), the jump feels really extreme

[Regraz's Advanced]
00:02:117 (3,4,1) - keep these at a consistent spacing to avoid confusion
01:16:174 (3) - clap on end

[Medium]
00:05:545 (1) - whistle on end
01:05:888 (1) - clap on start
01:14:802 (3) - ^

[Basic]
00:08:288 (4) - should have a NC here
00:30:917 - consider adding a note here, the pause feels a bit weird since the music is really consistent
01:02:460 (2) - clap
01:29:202 (2,3,1) - why the spacing change here? newbies will be tempted to hit these earlier because they look closer together

just some minor stuff that you should clean up, let me know afterwards