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Komatsu Mikako & Ishihara Kaori - Dazzling

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Tari
Dazzling map!

Have this!
koreapenguin
Congratz!
Topic Starter
P A N
thank you <3
Asagi
wow
nice map
wow
gratz
10nya
yey gz
Oyatsu
Congratz!+
Meg
Gratz!!
Lanturn
Congrats! Awesome mapset PAN and friends :3
Irreversible
Hi there, quick unrank because of the spinner in normal - the volume is messed up, and this can be fixed really easily. (Either use a constant or decreasing volume, but not such spikes)

Other mentionable things

- Are so many KIAI-flashes needed? Some are okay, but it's quite a bunch you've got there.
- We suggest you to raise the OD in all maps (+0.5 on normal, +1 on hard, +1 on insane) to get better spread settings.
- Remove the eptileptic warning, it's not really needed.

Rest is fine, cool mapset actually!

Lanturn
Hey PAN, sorry about completely missing the timing at the end there.

The main problem with the spinner in Normal is that you have green lines overlapping with the red ones. So the volume constantly jumps between 20/30% to 80%



The best solution is to get rid of the green lines selected in the picture above completely and if you want, you can slightly lower the red timing volume like Irre is saying or just leave it at 80% like Hard/Insane. If you do make changes to the red timing volume, then please do it on all diffs as well.


Sorry for the inconvenience :(
Asagi
That was unexpected

#rekt
koreapenguin
Ohhhhh orz
Topic Starter
P A N
mhmm I think the kial fountain is fit with music so I don't want to reduce them.
about OD, imo I think they are already fit with calm music (3,5,7) or it maybe don't fit somehow? >_> I need more opinion.
other are fixed, thank you Irre.
10nya
pan #rekt
Natsu
We did a small IRC

  1. raised OD in every diff, Normal 3.5, Hard 6 and Insane 8
  2. We removed some kiai flash that was overdone
  3. some NC in hard diff for consistency
  4. and we fixed some nazi things


SPOILER
2014-11-22 23:16 P A N: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/419451 Komatsu Mikako & Ishihara Kaori - Dazzling]
2014-11-22 23:16 P A N: XD
2014-11-22 23:16 Natsu: dling hahah
2014-11-22 23:17 P A N: hehe
2014-11-22 23:27 Natsu: ah you wanted why the od have to be up right?
2014-11-22 23:30 P A N: yep
2014-11-22 23:30 P A N: why OD 8
2014-11-22 23:31 P A N: isn't it already hard with hr :X
2014-11-22 23:31 Natsu: since you are using AR9 the hit window of OD7 doesn't fit the ar
2014-11-22 23:31 Natsu: AR -2 respect to OD is bad, that's why AR9 - OD8 is nice
2014-11-22 23:32 P A N: i get it
2014-11-22 23:33 P A N: 8 6 4 then
2014-11-22 23:34 P A N: or 4 is too much for normal >_>
2014-11-22 23:34 Natsu: yes!!! 4 is common for normal diff lol
2014-11-22 23:34 Natsu: try 3.5 if you feel is better
2014-11-22 23:34 Natsu: that's what Irre suggest as well
2014-11-22 23:35 P A N: if you say 4 is common for normal diff
2014-11-22 23:35 P A N: it's ok then
2014-11-22 23:35 Natsu: use 3.5 to be safe
2014-11-22 23:36 P A N: what about 7.5 5.5 3.5
2014-11-22 23:37 Natsu: 3.5 6 8, od8 more pp ljk
2014-11-22 23:38 Natsu: about the kiai flash there are some that doesn't fit and feel overdone :l
2014-11-22 23:38 P A N: which?
2014-11-22 23:38 Natsu: I can make some suggestions tho
2014-11-22 23:39 Natsu: 01:05:710 (1) - this one is great but
2014-11-22 23:39 Natsu: 01:07:047 (3) - this one doesn't
2014-11-22 23:39 Natsu: 01:57:493 (3) - remove this one as well
2014-11-22 23:40 Natsu: 02:47:939 (3) - ^
2014-11-22 23:40 Natsu: normal diff ^
2014-11-22 23:45 P A N: alright
2014-11-22 23:45 P A N: updated
2014-11-22 23:45 Natsu: wait let me check hard and insane, normal diff seems really nice <3
2014-11-22 23:46 Natsu: btw did u fixed the spinner thing?
2014-11-22 23:46 P A N: yep
2014-11-22 23:46 P A N: the volume on spinner
2014-11-22 23:46 Natsu: kk
2014-11-22 23:52 Natsu: wait me a bit I'll post in a moment and rebubbled it
2014-11-22 23:53 P A N: yeaa :3
2014-11-22 23:53 Natsu: need to pvp first lol
2014-11-22 23:53 P A N: pvp?
2014-11-22 23:53 P A N: D:
2014-11-22 23:54 Natsu: player vs player in some rpg
2014-11-22 23:54 P A N: lol i see
2014-11-23 00:35 Natsu: k back lol
2014-11-23 00:41 Natsu: pan xD!!!!!
2014-11-23 00:41 P A N: yea hi
2014-11-23 00:41 P A N: XD
2014-11-23 00:41 Natsu: 00:25:009 (2,3) - fix this blanket in hard lol, is really off hahaha
2014-11-23 00:43 P A N: :'(
2014-11-23 00:43 P A N: fixed
2014-11-23 00:44 Natsu: 01:05:327 (1,2) - swap NC like the other diffs?
2014-11-23 00:44 Natsu: 01:05:710 (2) - make more sense having one here with the stanza
2014-11-23 00:44 P A N: fixed
2014-11-23 00:45 Natsu: kawaii
2014-11-23 00:54 Natsu: 01:21:952 (5,7) - blanket pls this is not kawaii
2014-11-23 00:55 P A N: fixed
2014-11-23 00:55 Natsu: 01:32:843 (4,1) - stack this properly, god naztu is nazi :D
2014-11-23 00:56 P A N: :D
2014-11-23 00:57 Natsu: 02:36:665 (1) - why this NC?
2014-11-23 00:58 P A N: I love it
2014-11-23 00:58 P A N: well, I think it fit with vocal
2014-11-23 00:58 P A N: lol
2014-11-23 00:59 Natsu: if u love it keep it lol, and love me too
2014-11-23 00:59 P A N: ok i love you
2014-11-23 00:59 Natsu: wait need to check general stuff
2014-11-23 01:00 Natsu: k upload it
2014-11-23 01:03 P A N: k

GL with Re-Rank
Topic Starter
P A N
thanks :3
Umi
We fixed somes Rythm/pattern/NC through an IRC

Log
2014-11-23 09:24 Umi: hello PAN 
2014-11-23 09:54 P A N: hello
2014-11-23 09:54 P A N: HELLOOOO
2014-11-23 09:54 Umi: oh u there finally
2014-11-23 09:54 P A N: yes ><
2014-11-23 09:55 Umi: well having my breakfast first, then what about an irc after ? :3
2014-11-23 09:55 P A N: okkk
2014-11-23 09:55 Umi: i'll call u back
2014-11-23 09:55 P A N: ok thank you
2014-11-23 10:02 Umi: k rdy ?
2014-11-23 10:03 P A N: so fast
2014-11-23 10:03 Umi: yeah lol it was already ready, just had to eat it :p
2014-11-23 10:03 Umi: also i'm leaving soon
2014-11-23 10:03 Umi: that's why
2014-11-23 10:03 P A N: I SEE
2014-11-23 10:03 Umi: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/394023 Komatsu Mikako & Ishihara Kaori - Dazzling [Normal Collab]]
2014-11-23 10:04 Umi: 00:04:563 (1) - and 00:07:620 (1) - delete this both NC not needed
2014-11-23 10:05 P A N: ok
2014-11-23 10:06 Umi: 00:47:175 (2) - whistle on the end ?
2014-11-23 10:06 P A N: not too often right?
2014-11-23 10:07 Umi: yeah it really need something here imo
2014-11-23 10:07 Umi: but*
2014-11-23 10:07 Umi: 01:30:168 - also for this part i'd reduce the volum to 60%
2014-11-23 10:08 Umi: clap is too noisy
2014-11-23 10:09 P A N: ok
2014-11-23 10:10 Umi: 02:41:060 (3,4) - how about stack, it'll look and play better
2014-11-23 10:10 P A N: mhmm
2014-11-23 10:10 P A N: it easiest diff so
2014-11-23 10:10 P A N: I don't want to stack
2014-11-23 10:10 P A N: >_>
2014-11-23 10:10 Umi: well k
2014-11-23 10:11 Umi: then why 03:10:869 (5,1) - ;p
2014-11-23 10:11 Umi: so better to unstack this for the consistency
2014-11-23 10:12 P A N: mhmmm
2014-11-23 10:14 P A N: I will ask hinsvar
2014-11-23 10:14 P A N: about that
2014-11-23 10:14 Umi: k do it
2014-11-23 10:14 Umi: i'm leaving in 20min
2014-11-23 10:23 Umi: ok so let's continue
2014-11-23 10:23 Umi: hinsvar told me that he unstack the last one
2014-11-23 10:23 P A N: oh lol
2014-11-23 10:23 P A N: he told me to fix too
2014-11-23 10:24 Umi: next is
2014-11-23 10:24 Umi: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/396695 Komatsu Mikako & Ishihara Kaori - Dazzling [Hard Collab]]
2014-11-23 10:24 Umi: 00:09:913 (3,1) - blanket is kinda massed here
2014-11-23 10:24 Umi: try to do like this more or less
2014-11-23 10:25 Umi: http://puu.sh/d23xO/fe9e647287.jpg
2014-11-23 10:25 Umi: the (1) less curved
2014-11-23 10:27 P A N: ok
2014-11-23 10:28 Umi: 00:26:538 (3,4) - move this 2 note to x:436,y:132
2014-11-23 10:28 Umi: and then ctrl g on 00:26:920 (5) - so the end of this slider go toward 00:27:493 (1) -
2014-11-23 10:30 P A N: oh yea nice
2014-11-23 10:30 P A N: 0.0
2014-11-23 10:30 Umi: :3
2014-11-23 10:30 Umi: 00:33:226 (3) -
2014-11-23 10:30 Umi: how about ctrl g on this
2014-11-23 10:30 Umi: it'll flow better don't u think ?
2014-11-23 10:32 P A N: mhmm sec
2014-11-23 10:32 P A N: trying
2014-11-23 10:33 P A N: yea fixed
2014-11-23 10:33 P A N: for cyambal too
2014-11-23 10:33 Umi: k
2014-11-23 10:33 Umi: yup it give a little jump
2014-11-23 10:33 Umi: rpetty nice
2014-11-23 10:33 Umi: pretty*
2014-11-23 10:34 Umi: 00:37:812 (3,4,1) - well it play nice but isn't thoses jump too big ?
2014-11-23 10:34 Umi: let me try a pattern
2014-11-23 10:35 P A N: ok
2014-11-23 10:35 P A N: i agreed but I can't think out of pattern
2014-11-23 10:35 P A N: lol
2014-11-23 10:35 Umi: how about this
2014-11-23 10:35 Umi: first http://puu.sh/d23Vt/8ce42d064c.jpg
2014-11-23 10:36 Umi: 00:36:665 (1) - is stack with 00:35:136 (1) -
2014-11-23 10:36 Umi: and then
2014-11-23 10:36 Umi: http://puu.sh/d23WU/acb922e148.jpg
2014-11-23 10:38 Umi: u have to replace a bit 00:38:767 (2,3) -
2014-11-23 10:40 P A N: mhmm
2014-11-23 10:40 P A N: confuse ahaha
2014-11-23 10:40 P A N: code please if possible? >_>
2014-11-23 10:40 Umi: yeah sure
2014-11-23 10:42 Umi: http://puu.sh/d24bX/9cab0d139a.txt
2014-11-23 10:42 Umi: well sadly i have to go
2014-11-23 10:43 Umi: i'll finish this tonight if you're here see if u liek the pattern
2014-11-23 10:43 P A N: ;w;
2014-11-23 10:43 P A N: c u soon
2014-11-23 10:43 P A N: ><
2014-11-23 10:44 Umi: yup see ya
2014-11-23 21:11 Umi: ok i'm back, poke when you're here o/
2014-11-23 21:12 P A N: ACTION poke poke
2014-11-23 21:12 Umi: oh okay
2014-11-23 21:12 Umi: then let's finish this
2014-11-23 21:12 P A N: okkkk
2014-11-23 21:12 P A N: Im surprise that I can stay till you are back ahaha
2014-11-23 21:13 P A N: I just gonna sleep but I watch something so not yet
2014-11-23 21:13 P A N: im lucky
2014-11-23 21:13 Umi: lol
2014-11-23 21:13 Umi: ok so, did u use the code that i gave u ?
2014-11-23 21:13 P A N: sure
2014-11-23 21:13 Umi: good
2014-11-23 21:14 Umi: 00:39:722 -
2014-11-23 21:14 Umi: same reflexion as normal diff
2014-11-23 21:14 Umi: use 60% volum
2014-11-23 21:14 P A N: ok
2014-11-23 21:15 P A N: 00:51:952 (1) -
2014-11-23 21:15 P A N: woops
2014-11-23 21:15 P A N: finish? XD
2014-11-23 21:15 Umi: well yeah why not but with low volum
2014-11-23 21:15 Umi: like 40% ~
2014-11-23 21:16 P A N: ok
2014-11-23 21:16 Umi: 01:00:933 (8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
2014-11-23 21:16 Umi: for this whole part i'll give u another code
2014-11-23 21:16 Umi: see if u like it
2014-11-23 21:16 Umi: ACTION working on right now
2014-11-23 21:17 P A N: ><
2014-11-23 21:17 P A N: btw I just fixed on 01:42:398 (1) - too
2014-11-23 21:17 P A N: 60% and finish stuff
2014-11-23 21:17 Umi: k =w=b
2014-11-23 21:21 Umi: here we go http://puu.sh/d2GqM/230afe83d2.txt
2014-11-23 21:25 P A N: mhmmm
2014-11-23 21:25 Umi: i was kinda disapointed that u didn't do a star's pattern
2014-11-23 21:26 P A N: LOL
2014-11-23 21:26 Umi: you went for it but at the end u end it to something else ><
2014-11-23 21:31 P A N: your code 01:04:945 - is 1/2 slider right?
2014-11-23 21:31 Umi: I didn't change anything here
2014-11-23 21:31 Umi: i just chnaged 01:00:933 (8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
2014-11-23 21:31 Umi: changed*
2014-11-23 21:31 Umi: the rest is the same
2014-11-23 21:32 P A N: oh yea
2014-11-23 21:32 P A N: that's mochi
2014-11-23 21:32 P A N: baka me
2014-11-23 21:32 Umi: x)
2014-11-23 21:32 Umi: well actually i'd prefer 2 note instead of 01:04:754 (4) -
2014-11-23 21:33 P A N: ikr
2014-11-23 21:33 P A N: so I wonder
2014-11-23 21:33 P A N: is it place like that since beginning
2014-11-23 21:34 Umi: like this http://puu.sh/d2HBv/aee9bfd49d.jpg
2014-11-23 21:35 Umi: and so if you do 01:04:945 (5,6,1) - stack them but well since it's momochikun's part dunno
2014-11-23 21:38 P A N: they are mochi's style
2014-11-23 21:38 P A N: untidy style
2014-11-23 21:39 Umi: kk
2014-11-23 21:39 P A N: his style is really bother me
2014-11-23 21:39 P A N: lol
2014-11-23 21:40 Umi: well won't say that i don't like, but the way how he use the rythm is totally different than me
2014-11-23 21:40 P A N: exactly
2014-11-23 21:41 P A N: well what do you think if we leave it like that
2014-11-23 21:41 P A N: that 01:04:754 (4,5,1,2,3) - thing
2014-11-23 21:41 Umi: yeah just leave it
2014-11-23 21:43 Umi: ok i'm done with the hard
2014-11-23 21:43 P A N: ok
2014-11-23 21:43 P A N: done with rest of it are fine or enough with this
2014-11-23 21:43 P A N: LOL
2014-11-23 21:44 P A N: done mean*
2014-11-23 21:44 Umi: lol ~
2014-11-23 21:44 Umi: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/419451 Komatsu Mikako & Ishihara Kaori - Dazzling [Insane]]
2014-11-23 21:44 Umi: 00:26:538 (1) - useless NC '-'
2014-11-23 21:45 Umi: ah and before 00:22:716 (1,2) - switch NC here
2014-11-23 21:45 Umi: for the consistency
2014-11-23 21:48 P A N: about the second isn't it already consistent? >_>
2014-11-23 21:48 P A N: and maybe I should add finish on 1 as well
2014-11-23 21:48 Umi: nop NC on the big whitetick
2014-11-23 21:48 Umi: should be*
2014-11-23 21:49 Umi: ah
2014-11-23 21:49 Umi: nvm
2014-11-23 21:49 Umi: my bad
2014-11-23 21:49 Umi: yeah it's good, stupid me ..
2014-11-23 21:49 P A N: >_>
2014-11-23 21:49 P A N: lol
2014-11-23 21:50 Umi: from 00:51:952 - to 01:03:799 -
2014-11-23 21:50 Umi: i don't think all those NC are needed though ..
2014-11-23 21:50 P A N: b-b-but I really love that NC... ;w;
2014-11-23 21:50 Umi: it's fun i agree but u should better delte them
2014-11-23 21:50 P A N: ;w;
2014-11-23 21:51 Umi: hmm
2014-11-23 21:51 P A N: ; A ;
2014-11-23 21:51 Umi: k keep them
2014-11-23 21:51 Umi: but so didn't u miss one there 01:03:417 (3) - ?
2014-11-23 21:52 P A N: I didn't add it because it's kind of same stanza
2014-11-23 21:52 Umi: kk
2014-11-23 21:52 P A N: you didn't angry right? :(
2014-11-23 21:52 Umi: i'm not lol
2014-11-23 21:53 Umi: i thinki it's cool yeah but NC in general shouldn't be use like this that's all :)
2014-11-23 21:54 P A N: ;w;
2014-11-23 21:54 P A N: somehow it help hr players too
2014-11-23 21:54 P A N: >_>
2014-11-23 21:54 Umi: 02:42:015 (5,1) - NC switch
2014-11-23 21:54 Umi: because of the finish
2014-11-23 21:54 P A N: woops ok
2014-11-23 21:55 Umi: 03:18:512 (7,1) - same x)
2014-11-23 21:56 Umi: 03:21:570 (7,1) - and again
2014-11-23 21:56 Umi: that's what u did at the begining so do it at the end too
2014-11-23 22:01 P A N: alright
2014-11-23 22:02 Umi: ok noting to say about the structure, play really good
2014-11-23 22:02 Umi: nothing*
2014-11-23 22:03 Umi: you can update
2014-11-23 22:05 P A N: mhmm
2014-11-23 22:05 P A N: 02:54:054 (5) -
2014-11-23 22:05 P A N: need nc?
2014-11-23 22:06 Umi: ah yeah indeed i missed this one
2014-11-23 22:10 P A N: alright
2014-11-23 22:10 P A N: updated
2014-11-23 22:10 Umi: kay ~

Re-Qualified!
Zero__wind
congratz~
Asagi
re-gratz hentai

OD8 >.>
scanter
PAN-kun omedetou \o/
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