2014-07-08 12:04 Kinshara: hey are you free for irc mod?
2014-07-08 12:09 pishifat: yeah sure
2014-07-08 12:09 pishifat: was getting food, so sorry for the delay
2014-07-08 12:09 Kinshara: no problem
2014-07-08 12:10 Kinshara: ah sorry
2014-07-08 12:10 Kinshara: downloading your map
2014-07-08 12:10 Kinshara: oh quick dl e.e nvm
2014-07-08 12:10 pishifat: take your time i'm eating lol
2014-07-08 12:11 pishifat: also while modding, ignore the hitsounds
2014-07-08 12:11 pishifat: they're going to be changed
2014-07-08 12:11 Kinshara: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/431999 Torleif Thedeen - Suite No. 1 BWV 1007: Prelude I [Normal]]
2014-07-08 12:11 Kinshara: ok what is up with these timing points
2014-07-08 12:11 Kinshara: there are like so many lol
2014-07-08 12:11 Kinshara: and okay
2014-07-08 12:11 pishifat: 320 i think
2014-07-08 12:11 pishifat: they are beauty
2014-07-08 12:11 Kinshara: wow
2014-07-08 12:11 Kinshara: anyway i guess this song's just messed up
2014-07-08 12:11 Kinshara: so i won't comment :p
2014-07-08 12:12 pishifat: yeah there's pretty much no consistent timing
2014-07-08 12:12 pishifat: a few sections near the end stay stable for about 5 seconds though
2014-07-08 12:12 pishifat: which is pretty impressive
2014-07-08 12:12 Kinshara: dang
2014-07-08 12:12 Kinshara: well props to you
2014-07-08 12:12 Kinshara: for being able to time like a pro
2014-07-08 12:13 Kinshara: btw i suggest 1/2 snap divisor
2014-07-08 12:13 pishifat: well thanks
2014-07-08 12:13 Kinshara: just so you don't make 1/4 rhythm mistakes lol
2014-07-08 12:13 pishifat: yeah... that won't ever happen
2014-07-08 12:13 pishifat: when making sliders i use 1/16 snapping
2014-07-08 12:13 pishifat: since i have to snap all sliders manually anyway
2014-07-08 12:14 Kinshara: ah ok
2014-07-08 12:14 Kinshara: if i am not talking
2014-07-08 12:14 Kinshara: it's because i am taking screen pics
2014-07-08 12:14 Kinshara: to show you lol
2014-07-08 12:14 pishifat: lolk
2014-07-08 12:15 pishifat: i will eat my sandwich in the meantime
2014-07-08 12:15 Kinshara: this rhythm is so messed up because of timing
2014-07-08 12:15 Kinshara: this will be hard to mod
2014-07-08 12:15 Kinshara: but i never back down from a challenge e.e
2014-07-08 12:16 pishifat: lol
2014-07-08 12:16 pishifat: good luck
2014-07-08 12:17 Kinshara: so far nothing bad o:
2014-07-08 12:17 Kinshara: nice mapping
2014-07-08 12:17 Kinshara: 00:04:025 (3,1) -
2014-07-08 12:17 Kinshara: although here
2014-07-08 12:17 Kinshara: i know this is nitpicky
2014-07-08 12:17 Kinshara: but
2014-07-08 12:17 Kinshara: 00:04:025 (3) - shape this a bit more
2014-07-08 12:17 Kinshara: so it sorta fits in with the other slider's curve
2014-07-08 12:18 pishifat: hmm yeah
2014-07-08 12:18 pishifat: i think the manual snapping broke that -.-
2014-07-08 12:18 pishifat: i'll have to change
2014-07-08 12:18 Kinshara: also
2014-07-08 12:18 Kinshara: 00:05:024 (1) - i'd suggest moving this a bit further away
2014-07-08 12:18 Kinshara: it's too close to the 3 slider
2014-07-08 12:18 Kinshara: doesn't look too good imo
2014-07-08 12:19 pishifat: you mean 00:02:980 (3) - or 00:07:055 (3) -
2014-07-08 12:19 Kinshara: well
2014-07-08 12:20 Kinshara: no
2014-07-08 12:20 Kinshara: 00:04:025 (3,1) -
2014-07-08 12:20 Kinshara: either the 3 slider or 1 slider
2014-07-08 12:20 Kinshara: they're too close together
2014-07-08 12:20 pishifat: so 00:02:980 (3) -
2014-07-08 12:20 pishifat: k
2014-07-08 12:21 pishifat: does look kind of bad. will get rid of the ovelrap
2014-07-08 12:21 Kinshara: swait
2014-07-08 12:21 Kinshara: i feel like w're not looking at the same map
2014-07-08 12:21 Kinshara: or you changed something
2014-07-08 12:21 Kinshara: btw showed your map to a BAT lol
2014-07-08 12:22 pishifat: i've got the latest pending version so i dunno what you're tlaking about o.o
2014-07-08 12:22 Kinshara: he wanted to see the 320 timing pts
2014-07-08 12:22 pishifat: lol...
2014-07-08 12:22 pishifat: who
2014-07-08 12:22 Kinshara: mmzz
2014-07-08 12:23 Kinshara: 00:04:025 (3) -
2014-07-08 12:23 Kinshara: this slider
2014-07-08 12:23 Kinshara: let me take a pic
2014-07-08 12:23 Kinshara: http://puu.sh/a2umC/66e31714d3.jpg
2014-07-08 12:23 Kinshara: these two sliders are a bit too close
2014-07-08 12:23 pishifat: i see...
2014-07-08 12:23 pishifat: are you sure you have the updated version
2014-07-08 12:24 pishifat: cuz 3 should be 4 there
2014-07-08 12:24 Kinshara: eh
2014-07-08 12:24 Kinshara: i just downloaded it lol
2014-07-08 12:24 Kinshara: let me check
2014-07-08 12:24 Kinshara: oh no
2014-07-08 12:24 Kinshara: it was my fault lol
2014-07-08 12:24 Kinshara: i accidentally changed something
2014-07-08 12:24 pishifat: okay lol
2014-07-08 12:24 pishifat: i'll make them further apart
2014-07-08 12:24 pishifat: no reason not to
2014-07-08 12:24 Kinshara: anyway but yea
2014-07-08 12:25 Kinshara: 00:09:742 (5,2) -
2014-07-08 12:25 Kinshara: this is unrankable
2014-07-08 12:25 pishifat: oh yeah
2014-07-08 12:25 pishifat: oops -.-
2014-07-08 12:25 Kinshara: lol
2014-07-08 12:27 Kinshara: i like pointing out things i like
2014-07-08 12:27 Kinshara: 00:30:623 (2,3,4) -
2014-07-08 12:27 Kinshara: i like this pattern a lot
2014-07-08 12:27 pishifat: well thanks :3
2014-07-08 12:28 Kinshara: 00:33:440 (2,4) - these two sort of overlap in a bad way
2014-07-08 12:28 pishifat: yes
2014-07-08 12:28 pishifat: yes they do
2014-07-08 12:28 Kinshara: if you can
2014-07-08 12:28 Kinshara: and if you want to do overlaps
2014-07-08 12:29 Kinshara: do overlaps like these: http://puu.sh/a2uOj/5f0c47d673.jpg
2014-07-08 12:29 pishifat: what is wrong with that screenshot o.o
2014-07-08 12:29 pishifat: and i'll try tha
2014-07-08 12:29 Kinshara: hmm? .o.
2014-07-08 12:29 pishifat: screenshot has some exploding text on it
2014-07-08 12:30 Kinshara: god your patterns fit this song really nicely
2014-07-08 12:30 Kinshara: oh
2014-07-08 12:30 Kinshara: yea
2014-07-08 12:30 Kinshara: i see it
2014-07-08 12:30 Kinshara: must be a glitch lol
2014-07-08 12:30 pishifat: yeah o.o
2014-07-08 12:32 Kinshara: 00:53:798 (3) -
2014-07-08 12:32 Kinshara: wow i don't know what to say
2014-07-08 12:32 pishifat: you either think it's gross or it's good
2014-07-08 12:32 pishifat: there is no inbetween
2014-07-08 12:33 Kinshara: well it's neither
2014-07-08 12:33 Kinshara: oh fck
2014-07-08 12:33 pishifat: _there is no inbetween_
2014-07-08 12:33 Kinshara: in terms of flow and rankability
2014-07-08 12:33 Kinshara: your normal seems good so far
2014-07-08 12:34 pishifat: woo
2014-07-08 12:34 pishifat: and rankability
2014-07-08 12:34 pishifat: that reverse slider would disagree
2014-07-08 12:34 Kinshara: yea
2014-07-08 12:34 Kinshara: but you fixed it
2014-07-08 12:34 Kinshara: right? o.o
2014-07-08 12:34 pishifat: yes of course
2014-07-08 12:37 Kinshara: okay
2014-07-08 12:38 Kinshara: 01:32:815 -
2014-07-08 12:38 Kinshara: after here
2014-07-08 12:38 Kinshara: try varing your rhythm
2014-07-08 12:38 Kinshara: too many 1/1 sliders
2014-07-08 12:38 Kinshara: it'll get boring
2014-07-08 12:38 pishifat: yeah probably
2014-07-08 12:38 pishifat: you won't like what's in the insane difficulty
2014-07-08 12:38 Kinshara: you can also try 1/1 reverse
2014-07-08 12:39 Kinshara: Lel
2014-07-08 12:39 pishifat: saving the reverses for 01:38:144 (4) -
2014-07-08 12:39 pishifat: makes a lot more sense there
2014-07-08 12:39 Kinshara: oh okay
2014-07-08 12:39 Kinshara: still try having longer sliders in between
2014-07-08 12:39 Kinshara: or shorter ones
2014-07-08 12:39 pishifat: but yeah i'll change stuff
2014-07-08 12:40 Kinshara: 01:34:188 (1) -
2014-07-08 12:40 Kinshara: like for this you can do
2014-07-08 12:40 Kinshara: http://puu.sh/a2vQk/b2827e7c16.jpg
2014-07-08 12:40 Kinshara: a 2 beat length slider
2014-07-08 12:41 Kinshara: 01:34:188 (1) - and over here you can do something like
2014-07-08 12:41 pishifat: uh
2014-07-08 12:41 Kinshara: http://puu.sh/a2vUw/dc477493b4.jpg
2014-07-08 12:41 pishifat: thats the same timestamp
2014-07-08 12:41 Kinshara: woops
2014-07-08 12:41 Kinshara: 01:35:007 (2) -
2014-07-08 12:41 Kinshara: i meant that
2014-07-08 12:41 Kinshara: or well
2014-07-08 12:41 Kinshara: at this point in the song: 01:35:007 -
2014-07-08 12:42 pishifat: yeah i got it
2014-07-08 12:42 pishifat: rhythms will be less meh there
2014-07-08 12:42 Kinshara: i actually take back the ranking thing because i am not sure about the timing of this song
2014-07-08 12:43 pishifat: https://i.ppy.sh/053e37fb685c73ac510207 ... 342e706e67
2014-07-08 12:43 pishifat: giant link
2014-07-08 12:43 pishifat: i put that in the map description box tho
2014-07-08 12:43 pishifat: for you non-believers
2014-07-08 12:43 Kinshara: okay
2014-07-08 12:44 Kinshara: it wasn't that i didn't believe you o:
2014-07-08 12:44 Kinshara: it was just that i don't know
2014-07-08 12:44 Kinshara: \\not so good at timing heh\\
2014-07-08 12:44 pishifat: lol
2014-07-08 12:44 Kinshara: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/446461 Torleif Thedeen - Suite No. 1 BWV 1007: Prelude I [Hard]]
2014-07-08 12:45 pishifat: my body is ready
2014-07-08 12:45 Kinshara: 1/16th snap divisor lel
2014-07-08 12:45 Kinshara: okay i know why you did it though
2014-07-08 12:45 Kinshara: so not gonna comment
2014-07-08 12:45 pishifat: yeah lol
2014-07-08 12:47 Kinshara: 00:13:820 (2) - maybe blanket this
2014-07-08 12:47 Kinshara: 00:13:068 (1) - around this
2014-07-08 12:47 Kinshara: if possible for you
2014-07-08 12:47 pishifat: looks blanketted to me o.o
2014-07-08 12:47 pishifat: http://i.gyazo.com/99c02f2383a5d71469cc232a1d05f389.png
2014-07-08 12:48 Kinshara: eh nvm
2014-07-08 12:48 Kinshara: i wasn't looking lol
2014-07-08 12:48 pishifat: lolz
2014-07-08 12:48 Kinshara: so far so good o:
2014-07-08 12:48 pishifat: i already know where the first problem will be
2014-07-08 12:48 pishifat: just waiting for it
2014-07-08 12:49 Kinshara: shit don't say
2014-07-08 12:49 Kinshara: if i don't mention it
2014-07-08 12:49 Kinshara: then it'll look bad xD
2014-07-08 12:49 pishifat: you will
2014-07-08 12:49 pishifat: i know you will
2014-07-08 12:49 Kinshara: so much pressure q.q
2014-07-08 12:50 Kinshara: i am really looking for flow and things that make this map unrankable
2014-07-08 12:50 Kinshara: 00:36:716 (2,3) - when doing things like this
2014-07-08 12:50 Kinshara: do ctrl g on the next slider
2014-07-08 12:51 Kinshara: it makes it flow better
2014-07-08 12:51 Kinshara: http://puu.sh/a2wMy/456dbb3a0b.jpg so like this
2014-07-08 12:51 pishifat: works in that case
2014-07-08 12:51 pishifat: but the next one
2014-07-08 12:51 pishifat: not so much
2014-07-08 12:51 Kinshara: 00:38:019 (2,3) - you mean these?
2014-07-08 12:51 pishifat: ya
2014-07-08 12:52 Kinshara: oh no
2014-07-08 12:52 Kinshara: that's a diff pattern all together lol
2014-07-08 12:52 Kinshara: although you know what'll look good let me take a pic
2014-07-08 12:52 pishifat: k
2014-07-08 12:53 Kinshara: http://puu.sh/a2wWq/01c56641c3.jpg
2014-07-08 12:53 Kinshara: doing something like that
2014-07-08 12:53 pishifat: so just angling differently
2014-07-08 12:53 Kinshara: yea and straight lines
2014-07-08 12:53 Kinshara: not bent
2014-07-08 12:54 pishifat: i'd rather keep straight lines
2014-07-08 12:54 pishifat: sicne every other instance is already bent and that would look weird
2014-07-08 12:54 pishifat: but i'll do that angling stuff since i like
2014-07-08 12:54 Kinshara: okay
2014-07-08 12:55 Kinshara: 00:39:401 (2,3) -
2014-07-08 12:55 Kinshara: try the ctrl + g thing here as well
2014-07-08 12:55 Kinshara: but make 3 bend the other way
2014-07-08 12:55 Kinshara: or well no don't do ctrl +g
2014-07-08 12:56 pishifat: you sure o.o
2014-07-08 12:56 Kinshara: but just make 3 bend in a way
2014-07-08 12:56 Kinshara: to make it blanket 2
2014-07-08 12:56 Kinshara: sort of
2014-07-08 12:56 Kinshara: http://puu.sh/a2xg0/178a3d1649.jpg
2014-07-08 12:56 pishifat: so it's like a refelction of 2 k
2014-07-08 12:57 Kinshara: yea and it helps when you do these types of patterns to copy the same slider :3
2014-07-08 12:57 Kinshara: sorry i am being so nit picky
2014-07-08 12:57 Kinshara: there aren't any major problems yet
2014-07-08 12:58 pishifat: yet
2014-07-08 12:58 pishifat: ;-;
2014-07-08 13:00 Kinshara: http://puu.sh/a2xg0/178a3d1649.jpg
2014-07-08 13:00 Kinshara: ugh
2014-07-08 13:00 Kinshara: forgot to copy lol
2014-07-08 13:00 Kinshara: 01:47:022 (1,2) -
2014-07-08 13:00 Kinshara: breaks flow
2014-07-08 13:00 pishifat: yeah supposed to do that
2014-07-08 13:01 Kinshara: eh
2014-07-08 13:01 Kinshara: why do you want to break flow?
2014-07-08 13:01 pishifat: that part of the song breaks flow
2014-07-08 13:01 Kinshara: or well
2014-07-08 13:01 Kinshara: i guess it's okay
2014-07-08 13:01 Kinshara: yea
2014-07-08 13:01 Kinshara: that part of the song is different
2014-07-08 13:01 Kinshara: it's okay to break flow to emphasize certain part of a sang
2014-07-08 13:02 pishifat: again, on insane, flow break is way more... umm...
2014-07-08 13:02 pishifat: interesting
2014-07-08 13:02 Kinshara: you might have to remap
2014-07-08 13:02 Kinshara: *song
2014-07-08 13:02 Kinshara: why did i write sang
2014-07-08 13:02 Kinshara: oh god
2014-07-08 13:02 Kinshara: this is what 4 hours of sleep does to you e.e
2014-07-08 13:02 pishifat: lol...
2014-07-08 13:02 pishifat: also
2014-07-08 13:02 pishifat: "you might have to remap"
2014-07-08 13:02 Kinshara: 01:54:815 (2,3,1) - i like this pattern
2014-07-08 13:02 pishifat: what referring to
2014-07-08 13:03 Kinshara: the insane
2014-07-08 13:03 pishifat: lol
2014-07-08 13:03 pishifat: k maybe it's not that bad
2014-07-08 13:03 Kinshara: okay
2014-07-08 13:03 pishifat: and you like the dick pattern
2014-07-08 13:03 pishifat: marvelous
2014-07-08 13:03 Kinshara: lol
2014-07-08 13:03 Kinshara: yea
2014-07-08 13:03 Kinshara: i do e.e
2014-07-08 13:03 Kinshara: fite me
2014-07-08 13:04 Kinshara: okay i am done with hard
2014-07-08 13:04 pishifat: i can't say it's bad either
2014-07-08 13:04 Kinshara: what was the part
2014-07-08 13:04 Kinshara: i should have mentioned btw?
2014-07-08 13:04 pishifat: oh yeah
2014-07-08 13:04 pishifat: you didn't
2014-07-08 13:04 Kinshara: can you copy paste
2014-07-08 13:04 pishifat: 00:40:437 (2,3,4,5,6,7) -
2014-07-08 13:04 Kinshara: let me see if it's a big problem
2014-07-08 13:05 pishifat: just the single taps
2014-07-08 13:05 Kinshara: oh that
2014-07-08 13:05 Kinshara: well i thought you were going for stream effect
2014-07-08 13:05 pishifat: yeah
2014-07-08 13:05 pishifat: it's not necessarily a problem but i expected you to point it out
2014-07-08 13:06 Kinshara: well not a problem in my book
2014-07-08 13:06 Kinshara: streams
2014-07-08 13:06 Kinshara: lot of players can singletap
2014-07-08 13:06 Kinshara: :p
2014-07-08 13:06 pishifat: you have a good book
2014-07-08 13:06 Kinshara: but
2014-07-08 13:06 Kinshara: i will suggest
2014-07-08 13:06 Kinshara: you kind of restructure it in a way
2014-07-08 13:07 Kinshara: doesn't look so appealing
2014-07-08 13:07 Kinshara: and slightly breaks flow imo
2014-07-08 13:07 pishifat: i'll do a slider to stream thingy then
2014-07-08 13:07 pishifat: would hopefully look better
2014-07-08 13:07 Kinshara: you can try that
2014-07-08 13:08 Kinshara: ok onto insane
2014-07-08 13:08 pishifat: this may be a struggle
2014-07-08 13:08 pishifat: since i dont know if you can play it
2014-07-08 13:08 Kinshara: you want me to test play after?
2014-07-08 13:08 pishifat: if you think you can do it sure
2014-07-08 13:10 Kinshara: well i'll say one thing
2014-07-08 13:10 Kinshara: that isn't unrankable
2014-07-08 13:10 Kinshara: it might be difficult to play for some
2014-07-08 13:10 pishifat: of course i know that hard songs are rankable lol
2014-07-08 13:11 pishifat: i'm saying it may be hard to mod if you cant' play it though
2014-07-08 13:11 Kinshara: yea that's true
2014-07-08 13:12 Kinshara: 00:10:775 (2,3,4) -
2014-07-08 13:12 Kinshara: i have always wanted to try this
2014-07-08 13:12 Kinshara: and i always forget e.e
2014-07-08 13:13 pishifat: triangles are hot
2014-07-08 13:13 Kinshara: sexy pattern
2014-07-08 13:13 Kinshara: like my calculus teacher used to say
2014-07-08 13:13 Kinshara: math is sexy \(^.^)/
2014-07-08 13:14 pishifat: i may have to kill your calculus teacher
2014-07-08 13:14 Kinshara: dang she's 70 years old
2014-07-08 13:14 Kinshara: you want to kill an old lady? e.e
2014-07-08 13:14 pishifat: on normal/hard difficulties i had to do math to figure out the slider velocities
2014-07-08 13:14 pishifat: for every
2014-07-08 13:14 pishifat: single
2014-07-08 13:14 pishifat: timing point
2014-07-08 13:14 pishifat: yes i do
2014-07-08 13:15 Kinshara: that's what you get for picking such a song lol
2014-07-08 13:15 pishifat: yes
2014-07-08 13:15 pishifat: i've also got another song with a stupid amount of timing points that i mapped
2014-07-08 13:15 pishifat: still have not done math tho
2014-07-08 13:16 Kinshara: why do you like to sacrifice yourself to satan?
2014-07-08 13:16 Kinshara: seriously man map easier songs :p
2014-07-08 13:17 pishifat: seems lame to do that
2014-07-08 13:17 pishifat: "here is my TV size map that 20 other people have already made hurhur"
2014-07-08 13:17 pishifat: rather not
2014-07-08 13:17 Kinshara: well
2014-07-08 13:17 Kinshara: doesn't have to be a song others have mapped o:
2014-07-08 13:18 Kinshara: lot of songs have simpler rhythms that haven't been mapped o:
2014-07-08 13:18 pishifat: that was just for emphasis
2014-07-08 13:18 Kinshara: btw insane looks good so far
2014-07-08 13:18 pishifat: but yeah still, i'd rather map songs that are different than the usual jpop/rock fare
2014-07-08 13:19 pishifat: since tehre's already enough of that for years
2014-07-08 13:20 Kinshara: LOL
2014-07-08 13:21 Kinshara: okay insane
2014-07-08 13:21 Kinshara: seems fine
2014-07-08 13:21 Kinshara: btw
2014-07-08 13:21 Kinshara: i think 01:52:013 (4) - kiai should end here
2014-07-08 13:21 pishifat: end there
2014-07-08 13:22 pishifat: wat
2014-07-08 13:22 Kinshara: wait wtf
2014-07-08 13:22 Kinshara: 02:02:847 -
2014-07-08 13:22 Kinshara: here sorry
2014-07-08 13:23 Kinshara: set preview point here 01:53:016 -
2014-07-08 13:23 pishifat: i'll change the kiai
2014-07-08 13:23 Kinshara: no
2014-07-08 13:23 Kinshara: 01:52:528 - here
2014-07-08 13:23 Kinshara: preview point
2014-07-08 13:23 pishifat: preview point staying where it is though
2014-07-08 13:23 pishifat: everyone recognizes the beginning of the song

00:11:773 (1) - Don't think this NC is necessary, just a small notice, to make it more consistent.
00:15:842 (1) - For me this would be better placed at x:124 y:88 to follow better with previous slider, which makes it easier to read and hit at the right time, also meaning 00:17:365 (1) - slider end has to be placed behind it.
**^ if above was fixed, 00:18:054 (2) - this slider should be rotated -15* to selection center, it would all look like this now: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4925684
****^Unless of course you just decide to blanket better this 00:18:718 (1) - to end of slider 00:18:054 (2)
00:26:647 (5) - Would be easier to hit this if you add a NC kinda like 00:27:449 (6,1) - to notice the change of rhythm.
00:38:740 (1) - This slider felt a bit long but because between 00:39:401 and 00:39:701 the timing is faster than the parts around it, just wanted to point this out, because it feels like some rhythm is being skipped there, nothing bad.
00:44:498 (1) - Give this a bit more space from the previous by placing slider start at x:236 and slider end at x:333 y:75 (if you can)
00:53:985 (3) - NC again
01:00:536 (4) - Give this slider more space? placing at x:412 y:88 should be good, it is due to the pauses on the song.
01:49:027 (2,3) - I would give these 2 sliders a new combo because the slider speed change is very noticeable
01:52:013 (5) - To me a better way to improve the distancing to the next slider would be to place this circle at x:444 y:248 to give time to prepare for rhythm change.

Change AR to 7.5 (Max 8), on a map like this it makes it easier to read patterns that have all these rhythm changes, even though its more reaction based, unstable rate gets improved alot for everyone that don't misclick for having too many objects on the screen that were planning ahead on when to time it right. CS3 also make approach circles occupy too much screen space.

01:07:159 (3) - Replace with 2 small sliders same size as 01:06:844 (2) because this slider felt a bit too long, Like this: http://puu.sh/oh9nc/11bfc01aa5.jpg as in for position, i guess something as simple as this but you can figure out a better placement http://puu.sh/oh9te/a171e77ef4.jpg adding higher speeds like in 01:08:250 (2,3,4) - would be cool as well but as it is fits good
While on this subject, add NC to 01:06:844 (2,2) - due to slider speed changes being more drastic than the following ones
01:44:020 (2,1) - Replace these 2 NCs because of slider speed of 1 is the same as 2 while the previous 01:43:320 (1) - is fairly slow.
01:45:792 (1) - Remove NC

That's it really for Hard, it's mostly nitpicking but that's the best i could find.

00:26:818 (1) - Remove NC as it follows same instrument as 00:26:647 (2) - so the combo becomes more consistent.
00:28:080 (1) - Same as before
**^ To add on this, you could alternaly make these two circles 00:26:647 (2,2) - have NC so sliders 00:26:130 (1,1) - are on its own, looks good and also makes the violin more noticeable from the change of tone.
01:03:330 (4) - NC?
01:28:009 (6,1) - Replace these 2 NCs to make it easier to read the previous circle, it caught me offguard that stacking and makes this now more consistent as to the rest of the map.
02:02:125 (1) - NO, remove that sound, remember this map? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4925970 there's a reason it got removed, earrapes are not allowed in osu.

Not much to say on this either, you're a really good mapper and i knew this would happen so i still tried my best at finding some things remotely noticeable.

Chloe's iNsAnE


01:16:197 (1) - is this NC necessary? rip i thought it looked cool
01:47:921 - fill in something here pls unless you have a solid reason to why u don't want to fill this in with a circle. its the same reason why this is the only 1/1 slider in the whole map trying to make the broken sounding stuff stand out
00:53:483 (4,1) - this is actually very difficult to anticipate since you haven't been using any 3/4 sliders and then suddenly there's this circle and a jump. Your choice to change it or not. this one at 01:28:009 (6,1) - is fine tho because the object following the 3/4 slider is ANOTHER slider so it's kind of fine to play. it's a 3/8 slider not a 3/4 slider B) but ya making a slider after it would mean strong sound on tail and making 4 a circle would mean hard-to-interpret gap between 4 and 1 so 3/4 3/8 best option
01:22:818 (1,2) - same
01:22:818 (1,2) - me irl etc those are the saem timestamsp pls
01:41:953 (1) - space this out even further for the increase of pitch in violin? i did
00:55:287 (2) - make this into 2 circles to give 00:55:639 (1) - more impact? i would if timing weren't retarded. everyone would get 100 on the second circle lol
00:59:759 (5) - 2 circles pls to stay consistent with 00:58:186 (4,5) - and 01:01:210 (4,5) - since these basically sound the same right? 4 circles in a row nogood unless it's super intense
01:37:509 (1,2) - violin is 1/2s, u have no reason to use a repeat here xd its a transition ((((((((((
02:02:125 (1) - From the depths of my mind
Your face rises
Angelic kindness, a halo of light
Bringing me out from the depths of my hell. how did that normal sampleset get there huh weird ????


For approval



Hard


01:25:406 (1) - not making this a 1/1 would be nice r:3 establishes bpm for scrubs after long break scrubs are bad
01:29:368 (3) - w a s t e d. just make this one like 01:27:452 (2,3) - ? the slider end on a strong point makes me want to kill myself xd i cant put a repeat through timing points ik how u feel
02:02:125 (1) - thank you. foxed!



Normal


01:02:658 (2) - instead of making this one long slider that ends where it ends right tnow, why not make the rhythm go like this instead? (BTW THE SLIDER LANDED ON THE BLUE TICK AND THAT'S TOTALLY NOT INTENTIONAL LMFAO) bpm too variable for scary things
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Normal
00:11:773 (1) - Don't think this NC is necessary, just a small notice, to make it more consistent.tru
00:15:842 (1) - For me this would be better placed at x:124 y:88 to follow better with previous slider, which makes it easier to read and hit at the right time, also meaning 00:17:365 (1) - slider end has to be placed behind it. tru
**^ if above was fixed, 00:18:054 (2) - this slider should be rotated -15* to selection center, it would all look like this now: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4925684 visually i dont really like when head/tail are close to symmetrical like that im dumb
****^Unless of course you just decide to blanket better this 00:18:718 (1) - to end of slider 00:18:054 (2)
00:26:647 (5) - Would be easier to hit this if you add a NC kinda like 00:27:449 (6,1) - to notice the change of rhythm.yes
00:38:740 (1) - This slider felt a bit long but because between 00:39:401 and 00:39:701 the timing is faster than the parts around it, just wanted to point this out, because it feels like some rhythm is being skipped there, nothing bad. timing was too complex so i decided to just undermap it lolz
00:44:498 (1) - Give this a bit more space from the previous by placing slider start at x:236 and slider end at x:333 y:75 (if you can) o ke
00:53:985 (3) - NC again y es
01:00:536 (4) - Give this slider more space? placing at x:412 y:88 should be good, it is due to the pauses on the song. yes
01:49:027 (2,3) - I would give these 2 sliders a new combo because the slider speed change is very noticeable 4 one object combos in a row i dont think so lol
01:52:013 (5) - To me a better way to improve the distancing to the next slider would be to place this circle at x:444 y:248 to give time to prepare for rhythm change. ok


Hard
Change AR to 7.5 (Max 8), on a map like this it makes it easier to read patterns that have all these rhythm changes, even though its more reaction based, unstable rate gets improved alot for everyone that don't misclick for having too many objects on the screen that were planning ahead on when to time it right. CS3 also make approach circles occupy too much screen space. .5

01:07:159 (3) - Replace with 2 small sliders same size as 01:06:844 (2) because this slider felt a bit too long, Like this: http://puu.sh/oh9nc/11bfc01aa5.jpg as in for position, i guess something as simple as this but you can figure out a better placement http://puu.sh/oh9te/a171e77ef4.jpg adding higher speeds like in 01:08:250 (2,3,4) - would be cool as well but as it is fits good would rather leave the 1/2 spam to the more intense build up stuff with 01:08:250 (2) - . most hards use constant 1/2 throughout, but since im using less dense rhythms throughout, gotta make it denser where it needs to be zz
While on this subject, add NC to 01:06:844 (2,2) - due to slider speed changes being more drastic than the following ones
01:44:020 (2,1) - Replace these 2 NCs because of slider speed of 1 is the same as 2 while the previous 01:43:320 (1) - is fairly slow. rather just nc every 4 beats, spamming ncs based on speed of sliders would mean a lot of hard to interpret stuff
01:45:792 (1) - Remove NC

That's it really for Hard, it's mostly nitpicking but that's the best i could find.


Insane
00:26:818 (1) - Remove NC as it follows same instrument as 00:26:647 (2) - so the combo becomes more consistent.
00:28:080 (1) - Same as before
**^ To add on this, you could alternaly make these two circles 00:26:647 (2,2) - have NC so sliders 00:26:130 (1,1) - are on its own, looks good and also makes the violin more noticeable from the change of tone. seems more intuitive for me to have new combos on white ticks when using lots of 1/2 circles, since the song is still emphasizing downbeats while the jumps start on the previous red tick id k
01:03:330 (4) - NC? probably
01:28:009 (6,1) - Replace these 2 NCs to make it easier to read the previous circle, it caught me offguard that stacking and makes this now more consistent as to the rest of the map. rip downbeats on the starts of measures
02:02:125 (1) - NO, remove that sound, remember this map? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4925970 there's a reason it got removed, earrapes are not allowed in osu. its just a prank bro
.

Hello, sorry if it doesn't help that much, your map is already pretty good


Normal
00:15:842 (1) - I suggest moving it sliiiiightly up to make it more intuitive to play yes
00:44:840 - hmm make a perfect square with that ? gotta have larger spacing from 3 to 4 tho
01:45:484 - I'd make it clickable dont really see why


Hard
00:15:842 (1) - Not that important but move it a bit to the left ? looks better imo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4927993 gotta keep it further cuz of timing being retarded lol
01:07:791 - nazi but it overlaps tru
01:08:890 (4) - It requires more emphasize imo, what about placing circles instead ? would make sense if 4->1 wasn't some weird gap timing wise again this song is evil
01:36:155 (1) - What about placing it at the "center" of 01:34:843 (1,2,3,4) - ? yes


Insane
00:45:152 (3) - I really think it'd flow better if you use CTRL+G here if i were going for circular flow ya
My ears... ): G

Insane (4.13 stars, 389 notes)

00:01:874 (1) - I want to see more of these uncommon sliders. [stolen]
00:54:311 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - patterns like this is really good. fits right into the music. yeeeeeeee
01:01:613 (1) - For more unique sounding parts like this, you should take advantage of the more "uncommon" sliders yeeeeeeeeeeeees
01:09:711 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Again, really good. it's an ugly shape at the most, maybe you could makes some minor adjustments >pishifat
>expecting good looking map
impossible
01:18:138 (4) - i'd like to see something like http://i.imgur.com/LBQyDtN.jpg . the current one take sharper angles when everything else before and after it is smooth as f. ur thing makes 3->4 sharp while mine is 4->1 having sharpness on the downbeat > some unimportant beat
01:40:048 (3,4,5,1,2) - gets louder here, it would be cool if you could spread these out a little. spread
02:02:125 (1) - fuck you ??? ? ?? ?? ???? ?????