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cYsmix - Heian Alien (MYTK Remix)

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Nazalion
204 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
Nazalion
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, August 31, 2014 at 1:11:36 PM

Artist: cYsmix
Title: Heian Alien (MYTK Remix)
Source: Touhou
Tags: House MYTK Seirensen Undefined Fantastic Object 電子祝祭 -Electro Festival- complextro Nue Houjuu UFO
BPM: 128
Filesize: 6442kb
Play Time: 06:30
Difficulties Available:
  1. Lunatic (4.39 stars, 1090 notes)
Download: cYsmix - Heian Alien (MYTK Remix)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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For Approval
Lunatic : Done
Changelog :
5 - 6 - 2014 = Change The BG
5 - 8 - 2014 = Change The BG and Removing Ctb Diff [Re DL Please 8')]
Last edited by Nazalion , edited 38 times in total.
Sonico Makaron
731 posts
Joined March 2011
Sonico Makaron
Timing check
BPM: 128
Offset: 252

Good luck~
Nazalion
204 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
Nazalion

Sonico Makaron wrote:

Timing check
BPM: 128
Offset: 252

Good luck~
Thanks for ur help :D
-Neipezi
2,246 posts
Joined October 2011
-Neipezi
this dubstep song?

Edit : then, dubstep to add tags:3
Last edited by -Neipezi , edited 1 time in total.
Nazalion
204 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
Nazalion

-Neipezi wrote:

this dubstep song?
Yep
Bloodmoon_old_1
75 posts
Joined March 2013
Bloodmoon_old_1
Hi hi!~ :)
cYsmix saiko!!

I might recommend either AR8 or a larger circle size so that people can use mods on this. Prob too hard for DT though idk.

05:02:127 (4) - objects end is not snapped

00:56:970 (5) - i think you could curve this slider more to make it flow better
01:04:002 (3) - and this one, it looks too flat
02:45:252 (6) - weird slider shape that's all
02:50:408 (1) - move this down one
02:52:517 (9,1) - rotate these two sliders 33 degrees, move about 10 to the right

break is so long T_T

03:43:377 (6) - rotate -3 degrees to straighten up
03:44:548 (3) - rotate -4
03:45:017 (5) - move 5 left, down 2
03:53:689 (8) - super awkward XD

2nd break is k

04:47:595 (6) - too awkward, could replace with a repeating slider
05:04:236 (2) - doesn't line up with the song quite right

nice ending.

Very long map though, i would have shortened the song before mapping, but i guess this is aimed at approval rather than ranked?
Nazalion
204 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
Nazalion

Bloodmoon wrote:

Hi hi!~ :)
cYsmix saiko!!

I might recommend either AR8 or a larger circle size so that people can use mods on this. Prob too hard for DT though idk.

05:02:127 (4) - objects end is not snapped

00:56:970 (5) - i think you could curve this slider more to make it flow better
01:04:002 (3) - and this one, it looks too flat
02:45:252 (6) - weird slider shape that's all
02:50:408 (1) - move this down one
02:52:517 (9,1) - rotate these two sliders 33 degrees, move about 10 to the right

break is so long T_T

03:43:377 (6) - rotate -3 degrees to straighten up
03:44:548 (3) - rotate -4
03:45:017 (5) - move 5 left, down 2
03:53:689 (8) - super awkward XD

2nd break is k

04:47:595 (6) - too awkward, could replace with a repeating slider
05:04:236 (2) - doesn't line up with the song quite right

nice ending.

Very long map though, i would have shortened the song before mapping, but i guess this is aimed at approval rather than ranked?
thx for ur mod & yes , this map aimed for approval :D
wetdog123
286 posts
Joined December 2012
wetdog123
For a map to be approved, it need 6 minutes of drain time, this map only has 5m46s of drain time. You need atleast 14 more second of playtime for this to be able to get approved.
Decipher
617 posts
Joined December 2010
Decipher
only come here to point out obvious stuffs since I'm not good at modding and mapping myself :o

Tags: remove Touhou since it's already on source; add Seirensen and Undefined Fantastic Object (the game name)
I also did some research, you might want to add 電子祝祭 -Electro Festival- as well because this song was came from that album

Lunatic
  1. volume is a bit too quiet.. or probably just my ears
  2. 00:22:517 (4,5) - following your previous patterns and the song, this pattern suits more
  3. streams from 00:45:252 - 00:58:377 should be 1/6 stream instead of 1/4, listen to it closely
  4. 02:15:252 ~ 02:28:377 - should be 1/6 streams as well
  5. 02:43:377 (7,8,9,10) - these are 1/3..
  6. 03:20:877 (5) - slider should ends at 03:21:658
  7. 03:22:048 (1,2,3,4,5) - maybe.. make it like this
  8. move 04:52:283 (6) to 04:52:205 and 04:52:517 (7) to 04:52:439
  9. 05:26:267 - add a note or extend 05:26:033 (4) I think it fits the song more
  10. 05:52:283 (4) - what are you trying to follow? you might want to drag it to 05:52:048 and make it ends at 05:52:752
  11. 06:29:783 (7) - I don't think finisher fits here, the song is getting quiter

Endemic wrote:

For a map to be approved, it need 6 minutes of drain time, this map only has 5m46s of drain time. You need atleast 14 more second of playtime for this to be able to get approved.
the girl on bg should be Houjuu Nue instead of Youmu.. but well, this one is up to you :o
DenoisoGoiso
681 posts
Joined April 2013
DenoisoGoiso

Endemic wrote:

For a map to be approved, it need 6 minutes of drain time, this map only has 5m46s of drain time. You need atleast 14 more second of playtime for this to be able to get approved.

wow what

starvfox
starvfox
[Random Mod]
Lunatic
The volume is too damn quiet o.O
00:02:127 New Combo here :D
00:02:830 Delete this nc
00:22:752 NC
03:40:916 (7,6) maybe decrease the distance between 7 and 6
03:52:752 whistle here
03:57:361 add circle here
04:50:408 this jump is so creepy o.O
Nazalion
204 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
Nazalion
Dechiper , Starfox thx to ur mod , Update :D
seovince
seovince
hello.. random modding here hehe xD

Lunatic

1. Err.. i think CS 5 is too small.. try to reconsider it into CS 4 :D
2. 00:46:423 (4,5) - add spacing here? it's okay if you did it on purpose xD but i find it's hard to guess it
3. 00:47:361 (4,5) - ^
4. 00:48:298 (4,5) - ^
5. 00:49:236 (4,5) - ^
6. 00:50:173 (4,5) - ^
7. 00:51:111 (4,5) - ^
8. 00:52:986 (4,5) - ^
9. 00:53:923 (4,5) - ^
10. 00:54:861 (4,5) - ^
11. 00:55:798 (4,5) - ^
12. 00:56:736 (4,5) - ^
13. 00:57:673 (4,5) - ^
14. 01:43:845 (1) - blanket this?
15. 01:56:502 - 01:59:080 - i can't follow the note.. because they doesn't fits to the music.. using 'slider' and 'reverse-slider' combination will do i think (i tried it and yeah.. it's better xD)
16. 02:15:486 (4,5,4,5,4,5) - same as point 2
17. 02:19:705 (4,5,4,5,4,5,4,5,4,5,4,5,4,5) - ^
18. 04:42:752 (2) - hard to read.. maybe remove this?

yeaaaaayy.. nice dubstep song, hope my 'poor' mod will help you.. :D
NB : i only mod Lunatic diff since i don't understand anything in CTB.. (i'm STD player) xD
primrose
primrose
why dubstep is in the tags? o.o
ono
57 posts
Joined August 2013
ono
first time modding. sorry not really sure what i'm doing hahah i'll try my best

can't really play this song, so i cant say much

ps: i'm using 1/6 beatsnap

1. i think the volume is really too low in most sections, please increase it

2. 04:00:720 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - sounds awkward. maybe this?


3. 04:11:502 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - maybe this?


4. 05:46:189 (3,1,2,3,4) - similar to number 2
Nazalion
204 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
Nazalion

onoz wrote:

first time modding. sorry not really sure what i'm doing hahah i'll try my best

can't really play this song, so i cant say much

ps: i'm using 1/6 beatsnap

1. i think the volume is really too low in most sections, please increase it

2. 04:00:720 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - sounds awkward. maybe this?


3. 04:11:502 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - maybe this?


4. 05:46:189 (3,1,2,3,4) - similar to number 2
Thx For modding , UpDate :D
WVS
547 posts
Joined May 2012
WVS
To be honest; there is still so many thing that needs to be fixed - but I'll just point out pretty much the important thing.

1.
00:09:158 (2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1634223 :-)?
2. 00:11:033 (1,2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1634230 :-)?
3. 00:13:142 (2) - Move to http://puu.sh/8XyYl :-)?
4. 00:45:252 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) -

These kind of pattern are just.. ugh.. so hard to read, unless you know how the music was at first try.
At least add a New Combo on the slider? or better yet - NC + stack it on the last circle? that would be somewhat better.
But even something far more better yet; don't use these kind of pattern. :(

5. 01:00:252 (1,1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1634241 :-)?
6. 01:56:658 (1) - New Combo -- and that sudden slider stream is a bit unexpected.. please fix this. (I don't have any suggestion for this sorry x_x)
7. 01:59:314 (9) - New Combo
8. 02:15:252 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Same goes to this. (Read mod #4)
9. 03:00:486 - Increase the volume used in this section by 10%? (so it will be 20%)
10. 03:22:048 (1,2,3,4) - ._. What's with this sudden stream..
11. 04:00:720 - Sane goes to this. (Read mod #9)
12. 06:11:502 (1) - Add a whistle on the slider's end just like what you did to 06:09:627 (2) -
13. 06:18:767 (5) - Add a whistle
14. 06:22:517 (2) - ^

(And there's actually so -- much -- more -- many that I want to nazi, but that will just make my mod seem bad. Lol.)

15. 06:30:017 - Add a note here?

I guess that's all.
Personally; I don't think this map is ready for approval at all - I don't say that it is bad;
though it is not really well polished since you may not have enough mapping experience -- I do recommend a remap once you think you're ready.

I really like this song btw! :D
Good luck Nazalion~
Nazalion
204 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
Nazalion

WVS wrote:

To be honest; there is still so many thing that needs to be fixed - but I'll just point out pretty much the important thing.

1.
00:09:158 (2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1634223 :-)?
2. 00:11:033 (1,2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1634230 :-)?
3. 00:13:142 (2) - Move to http://puu.sh/8XyYl :-)?
4. 00:45:252 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) -

These kind of pattern are just.. ugh.. so hard to read, unless you know how the music was at first try.
At least add a New Combo on the slider? or better yet - NC + stack it on the last circle? that would be somewhat better.
But even something far more better yet; don't use these kind of pattern. :(

5. 01:00:252 (1,1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1634241 :-)?
6. 01:56:658 (1) - New Combo -- and that sudden slider stream is a bit unexpected.. please fix this. (I don't have any suggestion for this sorry x_x)
7. 01:59:314 (9) - New Combo
8. 02:15:252 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Same goes to this. (Read mod #4)
9. 03:00:486 - Increase the volume used in this section by 10%? (so it will be 20%)
10. 03:22:048 (1,2,3,4) - ._. What's with this sudden stream..
11. 04:00:720 - Sane goes to this. (Read mod #9)
12. 06:11:502 (1) - Add a whistle on the slider's end just like what you did to 06:09:627 (2) -
13. 06:18:767 (5) - Add a whistle
14. 06:22:517 (2) - ^

(And there's actually so -- much -- more -- many that I want to nazi, but that will just make my mod seem bad. Lol.)

15. 06:30:017 - Add a note here?

I guess that's all.
Personally; I don't think this map is ready for approval at all - I don't say that it is bad;
though it is not really well polished since you may not have enough mapping experience -- I do recommend a remap once you think you're ready.

I really like this song btw! :D
Good luck Nazalion~

Thx ya mod nya
OTW Fixed ~ :D
LukerMaster
130 posts
Joined November 2012
LukerMaster
00:45:252 (1,2,3,4) - It's very easy to miss on patterns like this. (Or lose combo)
03:32:517 (7,8) - Remove jump.
04:38:689 (1,2,3) - Maybe a bit smaller jump?...
06:25:564 (5,6) - Move this to make a smooth pattern
04:26:033 (5) - Add NC?
05:16:892 (4) - Larger jump.
01:14:314 (3,4) - Invert this sliders on time line.
01:57:595 (1) - Move it closer to (2)
04:01:736 (3) - Remove this circle
04:05:408 (2) - Remove this slider and put http://puu.sh/9ArJt/19a8ddd79e.jpg
Nazalion
204 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
Nazalion

LukerMaster wrote:

00:45:252 (1,2,3,4) - It's very easy to miss on patterns like this. (Or lose combo)
03:32:517 (7,8) - Remove jump.
04:38:689 (1,2,3) - Maybe a bit smaller jump?...
06:25:564 (5,6) - Move this to make a smooth pattern
04:26:033 (5) - Add NC?
05:16:892 (4) - Larger jump.
01:14:314 (3,4) - Invert this sliders on time line.
01:57:595 (1) - Move it closer to (2)
04:01:736 (3) - Remove this circle
04:05:408 (2) - Remove this slider and put http://puu.sh/9ArJt/19a8ddd79e.jpg
All Done n Fixed , Thx to ur mod :D
CrazyrabbitKGE
89 posts
Joined June 2014
CrazyrabbitKGE
the song is epic and the beatmap as well, but i just feel like there are too many stops.
Nazalion
204 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
Nazalion

CrazyrabbitKGE wrote:

the song is epic and the beatmap as well, but i just feel like there are too many stops.
becos im following this song lol
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