01:23 *Irreversible is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/426359 ginkiha - EOS -Long Version- [Hard]]
01:23 Irreversible: 00:04:145 (3) - improve this blanket
01:24 HanzeR: mkl
01:24 HanzeR: ok
01:24 Irreversible: 00:39:974 (2,3,4,5) - I think this pattern is a bit unsuitable for a hard, i'm sure you can make it easier w/o changing too much
01:25 HanzeR: i did this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/164491101:25 Irreversible: k
01:26 Irreversible: 00:43:402 (2) - Not suitable for hard, looks more like 1/4 here (you've got stuff like that before too), move it a bit further away?
01:26 HanzeR: okk
01:26 HanzeR: i spaced it 1.2x like the rest
01:27 Irreversible: 00:53:859 (1,2,3,4,5) - patterns like these play horrendous, especially in a hard diff. Reason is that it's quite uhm.. like a circle shape, it doesn't feel well if you don't use it too much
01:27 Irreversible: Either go for zigzag, or triangle, or something else, but not "circle"shape with jumps in it
01:28 HanzeR: i can just change it to sliders
01:28 Irreversible: Sure.
01:28 Irreversible: 01:18:545 (4) - How about making the first bit paralell? seems cleaner to me.
01:28 Irreversible: 01:21:288 (1) - add NC
01:29 Irreversible: 01:22:145 (3) - reove NC
01:29 Irreversible: 01:22:659 (5) - ad NC
01:29 HanzeR: qk
01:29 HanzeR: k
01:29 Irreversible: 01:29:174 (4) - This spacing change seems a bit too high for me again, it's a hard diff. I suggest CTLR + g, but problem is the circle afterward.
01:29 Irreversible: 01:29:688 (1) - Spacing seems a bit weird to me anyway.
01:30 HanzeR: yeah i was worried about that one lol
01:31 HanzeR:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/164492101:31 HanzeR: i think youll probably hate this one too lol 01:59:688 (4,5,6,7) - ..
01:32 Irreversible: 01:34:316 (3,4,5) -
01:32 Irreversible:
http://puu.sh/91gBm/9508c351d7.jpg you can slightly adjust it bu t i'd go for something like this, because the jump is quite high again here.
01:32 Irreversible: and also,
01:32 Irreversible: 01:35:516 (6,7,8) - i thik you won't have too many problems to fix these
01:32 Irreversible: well.
01:32 Irreversible: just get rid of the jump
01:33 HanzeR: cool pattern
01:33 Irreversible: 01:41:859 (1) - ctrl 1 g?
01:33 Irreversible: 01:43:231 (5) - try to move that one closer? I mean. that jump LOL
01:35 HanzeR: k
01:35 Irreversible: 01:50:774 - That rhythm seems odd to me, because you seem to ignore the strong beats here, how about something like
http://puu.sh/91gLp/b0bf1a3138.jpg ? The screen starts here: 01:50:088 -
01:36 Irreversible: 01:59:688 (4,5,6,7,8) - hi i'm a jum- ~~ELIMINATED~~
01:36 HanzeR: yeahhh
01:36 Irreversible: also, NC01:59:688 (4) -
01:38 Irreversible:
http://puu.sh/91gWj/f89444111c.jpg 02:03:802 (3,4,5) -
01:38 Irreversible: 02:09:288 (1) - i would rotate that one a bit, to the right, in order to get a better flow here.
01:38 Irreversible: 02:09:288 (1) - you should also move it a bit down so it's exactly in the middle of those
01:38 HanzeR: which way
01:39 Irreversible: 02:11:859 (6) - stack with 02:10:316 (3) -
01:39 Irreversible: +
01:39 Irreversible: not -
01:39 Irreversible: 13°
01:39 Irreversible: or so
01:39 HanzeR: k
01:40 Irreversible: 02:12:545 (2,3,4) -
http://puu.sh/91h61/3dafb7bb17.jpg 02:13:402 (5,6,7,8) -
http://puu.sh/91h8f/9acbaff028.jpg to make it easier again
01:42 Irreversible: 02:15:116 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - 1) pretty jumpy 2) i don't understand the sense of this pattern, shouldn't 02:16:145 (1,2,3) - these be like a bit different and not belonging to the previous pattern due to its .. other vocals ?
01:42 HanzeR: kkkkkkkkk
01:43 Irreversible:
http://puu.sh/91hiV/bb77550353.jpg make it like this or so,
01:43 Irreversible: so itca n be differed from the rest
01:44 Irreversible: 02:23:002 (1) - should be upwards, not on the same line as 6 to avoid a weird flow, , 164 88 or something like this?
01:44 HanzeR: sure
01:44 HanzeR: ok
01:45 Irreversible: 02:42:888 (7,8) - keep spacing
01:46 Irreversible: 02:42:030 (4) - i don't like how you ignore the downbeat here. make it a clickable action, please.
01:47 HanzeR: ok
01:48 Irreversible: 02:54:374 (4) - hanzer is everything ok with you, this is a hard diff
01:48 HanzeR: i havent mapped a hard in like a yearr
01:48 HanzeR: .____________________________>
01:49 Irreversible: 03:43:574 (4) - stack slider end with 1
01:49 HanzeR: lol ok
01:49 Irreversible: 03:43:916 (5) - move closer
01:49 Irreversible: that the kiai is at the end is really nonsense
01:49 HanzeR: it fits the sb
01:49 Irreversible: even if it should emphasize the dawn or whatever this is called
01:49 HanzeR: because the notes glow
01:49 HanzeR: when its dawn
01:50 HanzeR: its coooool
01:50 HanzeR: i like it
01:50 HanzeR: :<<<
01:50 Irreversible: k
01:51 *Irreversible is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/392028 ginkiha - EOS -Long Version- [Daybreak]]
01:51 Irreversible: i find ar9 really.. unfitting lol
01:52 HanzeR: .-.
01:52 Irreversible: hm? ~
01:52 HanzeR: ar10 would be really silly!
01:52 Irreversible: what the fuck
01:52 Irreversible: i speak of ar8
01:52 Irreversible: XDD
01:53 Irreversible: hahahaha
01:53 HanzeR: ar8 doesnt exist
01:53 HanzeR: its evillllllllllll
01:54 Irreversible: i really prefer ar8, idk. .
01:54 Irreversible: well off we go then xD
01:54 Irreversible: 00:09:288 (1,2) - HanzeR - did you mean : HiddeN ?
01:54 Irreversible: this is unrankable for sure LOL
01:55 Irreversible: although.. it's ok in game
01:55 Irreversible: and leave ar9
01:55 HanzeR: i changed them anyways
01:55 Irreversible: 00:13:916 (4) - how about smth like 92 88
01:56 Irreversible: 00:22:831 (3,4) - i'd just stack it. you have enough special moments afterwards xD
01:56 Irreversible: 00:28:831 (5) - no extended slider, thanck
01:57 HanzeR: qq
01:57 Irreversible: 00:35:859 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - this moment when you're confused in the editor.. xDD
01:57 Irreversible: about the stack: if you insist leaving then leave it
01:57 Irreversible: about extended slider: need to change, i really dislike that, because it doesn't really suit the song.. and it doesn't not feel like 1/2 or such
01:58 HanzeR: i changed both dont worry
01:58 Irreversible: well you don't need to change anything i say. .
01:58 Irreversible: 00:53:859 (2,3) - how about stronger hitsound?
01:58 HanzeR: sure
01:59 Irreversible: 00:58:659 (2) - move MUCH closer to the previous slider, just like you did :
01:59 Irreversible: 01:00:716 (1,2) -
01:59 Irreversible: 01:12:031 (2) - would actually also go for this one
02:00 Irreversible: no. you can leave ^
02:00 Irreversible: 01:09:631 (2) - but this should be changed
02:00 Irreversible: i just testplaye,d felt weird
02:01 Irreversible: 01:31:231 (2) - >< closer please, reason should be obvious
02:01 Irreversible: 01:40:831 (2) - blanket
02:01 Irreversible: 01:44:174 (6) - 248 300 seems to be the perfect spot for that one
02:03 HanzeR: okok
02:03 Irreversible: 02:12:716 (3) - I wouldn't extend that one to follow consistency? You never had 3 extensions so far o.O
02:03 HanzeR: i wanted to follow vocalthingy
02:04 Irreversible: hn.. think better to keep it consistenc but up to you.. i suppose? xD
02:04 HanzeR: i really like that pattern ! q-q
02:04 Irreversible: ok
02:04 Irreversible: ah
02:04 Irreversible: but this part
02:04 Irreversible: needs fixes definitely
02:04 Irreversible: the rhythm goesa bit very wtf here
02:04 Irreversible: 02:50:774 (2,3,4,5) - this is still ok
02:05 Irreversible: 02:53:516 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
02:05 Irreversible: but this , also the spacing, that's not really readable
02:05 Irreversible: 02:54:716 (5,6,1) - this slight curve is very misleading also, and looks a bit messy
02:05 Irreversible: 02:54:888 (1) - extension feels quite weird
02:05 Irreversible: 02:55:916 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - pattern looks awesome but the rhythm seems a bit misinterpreted to me
02:06 Irreversible: i would really stick to previous rhythm patterns to all these ^
02:07 Irreversible: (change the name of the jpg, i keep getting unranks because of things like this all time XD)
02:08 Irreversible:
http://puu.sh/8XBz3.jpg hahahahahahah
02:08 Irreversible: 02:59:002 (2,3) - weird.. :/ how about making a bit more regular? ><
02:09 Irreversible: about this part before, can you change it or do you need help with it
02:09 Irreversible: because i think this is actually wrong placed
02:09 Irreversible: 02:59:345 (4,5,6,7) - this is better, but the placement is upsetting
02:10 Irreversible: 03:04:488 (3,4,5,6) - can you make something like this?
02:11 HanzeR: m
02:12 Irreversible:
02:12 Irreversible: i'm pretty not-strict with funny patterns and stuff, but i'm really strict and serious about clean rhythm and extension of sliders
02:14 HanzeR: ok i changed a
02:14 HanzeR: lot of things
02:15 Irreversible: 03:20:516 (4) - are you sure you wanna make ppl rage with circle jump?
02:15 Irreversible: 03:22:488 (1,2,3) - make it straight not slightly curved
02:15 HanzeR: i love that
02:15 HanzeR: lool
02:15 Irreversible: i mena
02:15 Irreversible: 03:22:659 (3) -
02:15 Irreversible: move this to 325 290
02:15 Irreversible: well many people hate it
02:16 Irreversible: lol up2u
02:16 Irreversible: 03:23:259 (5) - 272 136
02:16 Irreversible: 03:27:459 (2) - 378 136
02:16 Irreversible: 03:36:888 (5,6,1) - LOL
02:17 HanzeR: 03:23:259 (5) - wait wat
02:17 Irreversible: it this triplet has this slight curve in it
02:17 Irreversible: i mean 172
02:17 Irreversible: lXD
02:17 HanzeR: do u mean
02:17 HanzeR: 172
02:17 HanzeR: LOL
02:17 HanzeR: i was like
02:17 HanzeR: 272 uhhhhhhhhh
02:17 Irreversible: that would've been funny
02:17 Irreversible: hahahahaha
02:18 Irreversible: ye rest is okk, i like asphyxias
02:18 HanzeR: yay