ginkiha - EOS -Long Version-

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captin1
how about you find some manners and keep needless hate comments to yourself, thanks
Topic Starter
HanzeR

Sephibro wrote:

why don't you guys go ask meiikyuu or galvenize to teach you how to make good maps and stop making this crap

edgy sliders + ridiculous streams + senseless spacing + brainlessly slow sliders != creative mapping
thx 4 ur complaint
waxman
 

captin1 wrote:

how about you find some manners and keep needless hate comments to yourself, thanks

HanzeR wrote:

thx 4 ur complaint
Stealing my idea is fking great bro~. ^^


waxman wrote https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/3050319

          After 69 days ........

you wrote https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/3070106



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Azer

Sephibro wrote:

why don't you guys go ask meiikyuu or galvenize to teach you how to make good maps and stop making this crap

edgy sliders + ridiculous streams + senseless spacing + brainlessly slow sliders != creative mapping
Who are you to say what a good map is? There's nothing fundamentally wrong here. It's just a different mapping style.
Lust
#mapdrama #yolo
69653863
why so much hate
B^)

Also HanzeR, I personally feel that the title text should be moved to 00:22:316 - it would fit better with SB. Just ask the BATs about it.
no kd thank
sex
Sephibro
you're welcome, im glad to help :)
Yoeri
23:06 Yoeri: moezer
23:06 *Yoeri is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/392028 ginkiha - EOS -Long Version- [Daybreak]]
23:06 HanzeR: !
23:10 Yoeri: That storyboard glow thingy is that supposed to be in the middle
23:11 Yoeri: Oh I see now that's neat
23:11 HanzeR: wher
23:15 Yoeri: 01:57:631 (3,4,5,6,1) - This part here is super confusing
23:16 Yoeri: Maybe you can ctrl+g (6) or turn (5) and (6) around
23:17 HanzeR: hmmmmmmmmmmm
23:17 Yoeri: ctrl+g plays nice
23:17 Yoeri: 01:55:059 (2,3) - Oh and this keeps tripping me up
23:19 HanzeR: sec
23:20 HanzeR: im just gonna
23:20 HanzeR: change that part
23:20 HanzeR: alot
23:20 Yoeri: Lol
23:22 Yoeri: I think that's all actually
23:22 Yoeri: This is a lot less confusing to read than I expected lol
23:24 HanzeR: yeah i wasnt really going for hard to read on this map LOL
23:24 HanzeR: well some parts are i guess
23:24 Yoeri: 02:47:688 - Mostly this part because of the rhythms
23:24 HanzeR: yeah
23:25 HanzeR: post again and i can send you cute star points yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
23:25 Yoeri: Nahh it's the same mod

Don't you dare kd me
KuroSenpai112
Hi there from modding queue. These are just suggestions, you don't need to follow them!

Alright, let's get started.

[Normal]
00:17:174 (4) - Tilt this slider a bit so it's more visible for normal players. Example: http://gyazo.com/4a85a60d2610392e618e51623a7bd97e
01:59:088 (2,3,4,5) - Change the pattern to a triangular form like this: http://gyazo.com/213da4ad9919e7cea347ecc4992e7fc4

[Hard]
Seems ok.

[Daybreak]
Seems good. Got some funky patterns here haha!

That's it from me! Good luck!
Topic Starter
HanzeR

TheForgotten5 wrote:

Hi there from modding queue. These are just suggestions, you don't need to follow them!

Alright, let's get started.

[Normal]
00:17:174 (4) - Tilt this slider a bit so it's more visible for normal players. Example: http://gyazo.com/4a85a60d2610392e618e51623a7bd97e
01:59:088 (2,3,4,5) - Change the pattern to a triangular form like this: http://gyazo.com/213da4ad9919e7cea347ecc4992e7fc4

[Hard]
Seems ok.

[Daybreak]
Seems good. Got some funky patterns here haha!

That's it from me! Good luck!
fixed thx for mod!
Irreversible
It plays really cool.

01:23 *Irreversible is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/426359 ginkiha - EOS -Long Version- [Hard]]
01:23 Irreversible: 00:04:145 (3) - improve this blanket
01:24 HanzeR: mkl
01:24 HanzeR: ok
01:24 Irreversible: 00:39:974 (2,3,4,5) - I think this pattern is a bit unsuitable for a hard, i'm sure you can make it easier w/o changing too much
01:25 HanzeR: i did this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1644911
01:25 Irreversible: k
01:26 Irreversible: 00:43:402 (2) - Not suitable for hard, looks more like 1/4 here (you've got stuff like that before too), move it a bit further away?
01:26 HanzeR: okk
01:26 HanzeR: i spaced it 1.2x like the rest
01:27 Irreversible: 00:53:859 (1,2,3,4,5) - patterns like these play horrendous, especially in a hard diff. Reason is that it's quite uhm.. like a circle shape, it doesn't feel well if you don't use it too much
01:27 Irreversible: Either go for zigzag, or triangle, or something else, but not "circle"shape with jumps in it
01:28 HanzeR: i can just change it to sliders
01:28 Irreversible: Sure.
01:28 Irreversible: 01:18:545 (4) - How about making the first bit paralell? seems cleaner to me.
01:28 Irreversible: 01:21:288 (1) - add NC
01:29 Irreversible: 01:22:145 (3) - reove NC
01:29 Irreversible: 01:22:659 (5) - ad NC
01:29 HanzeR: qk
01:29 HanzeR: k
01:29 Irreversible: 01:29:174 (4) - This spacing change seems a bit too high for me again, it's a hard diff. I suggest CTLR + g, but problem is the circle afterward.
01:29 Irreversible: 01:29:688 (1) - Spacing seems a bit weird to me anyway.
01:30 HanzeR: yeah i was worried about that one lol
01:31 HanzeR: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1644921
01:31 HanzeR: i think youll probably hate this one too lol 01:59:688 (4,5,6,7) - ..
01:32 Irreversible: 01:34:316 (3,4,5) -
01:32 Irreversible: http://puu.sh/91gBm/9508c351d7.jpg you can slightly adjust it bu t i'd go for something like this, because the jump is quite high again here.
01:32 Irreversible: and also,
01:32 Irreversible: 01:35:516 (6,7,8) - i thik you won't have too many problems to fix these
01:32 Irreversible: well.
01:32 Irreversible: just get rid of the jump
01:33 HanzeR: cool pattern
01:33 Irreversible: 01:41:859 (1) - ctrl 1 g?
01:33 Irreversible: 01:43:231 (5) - try to move that one closer? I mean. that jump LOL
01:35 HanzeR: k
01:35 Irreversible: 01:50:774 - That rhythm seems odd to me, because you seem to ignore the strong beats here, how about something like http://puu.sh/91gLp/b0bf1a3138.jpg ? The screen starts here: 01:50:088 -
01:36 Irreversible: 01:59:688 (4,5,6,7,8) - hi i'm a jum- ~~ELIMINATED~~
01:36 HanzeR: yeahhh
01:36 Irreversible: also, NC01:59:688 (4) -
01:38 Irreversible: http://puu.sh/91gWj/f89444111c.jpg 02:03:802 (3,4,5) -
01:38 Irreversible: 02:09:288 (1) - i would rotate that one a bit, to the right, in order to get a better flow here.
01:38 Irreversible: 02:09:288 (1) - you should also move it a bit down so it's exactly in the middle of those
01:38 HanzeR: which way
01:39 Irreversible: 02:11:859 (6) - stack with 02:10:316 (3) -
01:39 Irreversible: +
01:39 Irreversible: not -
01:39 Irreversible: 13°
01:39 Irreversible: or so
01:39 HanzeR: k
01:40 Irreversible: 02:12:545 (2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/91h61/3dafb7bb17.jpg 02:13:402 (5,6,7,8) - http://puu.sh/91h8f/9acbaff028.jpg to make it easier again
01:42 Irreversible: 02:15:116 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - 1) pretty jumpy 2) i don't understand the sense of this pattern, shouldn't 02:16:145 (1,2,3) - these be like a bit different and not belonging to the previous pattern due to its .. other vocals ?
01:42 HanzeR: kkkkkkkkk
01:43 Irreversible: http://puu.sh/91hiV/bb77550353.jpg make it like this or so,
01:43 Irreversible: so itca n be differed from the rest
01:44 Irreversible: 02:23:002 (1) - should be upwards, not on the same line as 6 to avoid a weird flow, , 164 88 or something like this?
01:44 HanzeR: sure
01:44 HanzeR: ok
01:45 Irreversible: 02:42:888 (7,8) - keep spacing
01:46 Irreversible: 02:42:030 (4) - i don't like how you ignore the downbeat here. make it a clickable action, please.
01:47 HanzeR: ok
01:48 Irreversible: 02:54:374 (4) - hanzer is everything ok with you, this is a hard diff
01:48 HanzeR: i havent mapped a hard in like a yearr
01:48 HanzeR: .____________________________>
01:49 Irreversible: 03:43:574 (4) - stack slider end with 1
01:49 HanzeR: lol ok
01:49 Irreversible: 03:43:916 (5) - move closer
01:49 Irreversible: that the kiai is at the end is really nonsense
01:49 HanzeR: it fits the sb
01:49 Irreversible: even if it should emphasize the dawn or whatever this is called
01:49 HanzeR: because the notes glow
01:49 HanzeR: when its dawn
01:50 HanzeR: its coooool
01:50 HanzeR: i like it
01:50 HanzeR: :<<<
01:50 Irreversible: k
01:51 *Irreversible is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/392028 ginkiha - EOS -Long Version- [Daybreak]]
01:51 Irreversible: i find ar9 really.. unfitting lol
01:52 HanzeR: .-.
01:52 Irreversible: hm? ~
01:52 HanzeR: ar10 would be really silly!
01:52 Irreversible: what the fuck
01:52 Irreversible: i speak of ar8
01:52 Irreversible: XDD
01:53 Irreversible: hahahaha
01:53 HanzeR: ar8 doesnt exist
01:53 HanzeR: its evillllllllllll
01:54 Irreversible: i really prefer ar8, idk. .
01:54 Irreversible: well off we go then xD
01:54 Irreversible: 00:09:288 (1,2) - HanzeR - did you mean : HiddeN ?
01:54 Irreversible: this is unrankable for sure LOL
01:55 Irreversible: although.. it's ok in game
01:55 Irreversible: and leave ar9
01:55 HanzeR: i changed them anyways
01:55 Irreversible: 00:13:916 (4) - how about smth like 92 88
01:56 Irreversible: 00:22:831 (3,4) - i'd just stack it. you have enough special moments afterwards xD
01:56 Irreversible: 00:28:831 (5) - no extended slider, thanck
01:57 HanzeR: qq
01:57 Irreversible: 00:35:859 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - this moment when you're confused in the editor.. xDD
01:57 Irreversible: about the stack: if you insist leaving then leave it
01:57 Irreversible: about extended slider: need to change, i really dislike that, because it doesn't really suit the song.. and it doesn't not feel like 1/2 or such
01:58 HanzeR: i changed both dont worry
01:58 Irreversible: well you don't need to change anything i say. .
01:58 Irreversible: 00:53:859 (2,3) - how about stronger hitsound?
01:58 HanzeR: sure
01:59 Irreversible: 00:58:659 (2) - move MUCH closer to the previous slider, just like you did :
01:59 Irreversible: 01:00:716 (1,2) -
01:59 Irreversible: 01:12:031 (2) - would actually also go for this one
02:00 Irreversible: no. you can leave ^
02:00 Irreversible: 01:09:631 (2) - but this should be changed
02:00 Irreversible: i just testplaye,d felt weird
02:01 Irreversible: 01:31:231 (2) - >< closer please, reason should be obvious
02:01 Irreversible: 01:40:831 (2) - blanket
02:01 Irreversible: 01:44:174 (6) - 248 300 seems to be the perfect spot for that one
02:03 HanzeR: okok
02:03 Irreversible: 02:12:716 (3) - I wouldn't extend that one to follow consistency? You never had 3 extensions so far o.O
02:03 HanzeR: i wanted to follow vocalthingy
02:04 Irreversible: hn.. think better to keep it consistenc but up to you.. i suppose? xD
02:04 HanzeR: i really like that pattern ! q-q
02:04 Irreversible: ok
02:04 Irreversible: ah
02:04 Irreversible: but this part
02:04 Irreversible: needs fixes definitely
02:04 Irreversible: the rhythm goesa bit very wtf here
02:04 Irreversible: 02:50:774 (2,3,4,5) - this is still ok
02:05 Irreversible: 02:53:516 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
02:05 Irreversible: but this , also the spacing, that's not really readable
02:05 Irreversible: 02:54:716 (5,6,1) - this slight curve is very misleading also, and looks a bit messy
02:05 Irreversible: 02:54:888 (1) - extension feels quite weird
02:05 Irreversible: 02:55:916 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - pattern looks awesome but the rhythm seems a bit misinterpreted to me
02:06 Irreversible: i would really stick to previous rhythm patterns to all these ^
02:07 Irreversible: (change the name of the jpg, i keep getting unranks because of things like this all time XD)
02:08 Irreversible: http://puu.sh/8XBz3.jpg hahahahahahah
02:08 Irreversible: 02:59:002 (2,3) - weird.. :/ how about making a bit more regular? ><
02:09 Irreversible: about this part before, can you change it or do you need help with it
02:09 Irreversible: because i think this is actually wrong placed
02:09 Irreversible: 02:59:345 (4,5,6,7) - this is better, but the placement is upsetting
02:10 Irreversible: 03:04:488 (3,4,5,6) - can you make something like this?
02:11 HanzeR: m
02:12 Irreversible: :)
02:12 Irreversible: i'm pretty not-strict with funny patterns and stuff, but i'm really strict and serious about clean rhythm and extension of sliders
02:14 HanzeR: ok i changed a
02:14 HanzeR: lot of things
02:15 Irreversible: 03:20:516 (4) - are you sure you wanna make ppl rage with circle jump?
02:15 Irreversible: 03:22:488 (1,2,3) - make it straight not slightly curved
02:15 HanzeR: i love that
02:15 HanzeR: lool
02:15 Irreversible: i mena
02:15 Irreversible: 03:22:659 (3) -
02:15 Irreversible: move this to 325 290
02:15 Irreversible: well many people hate it
02:16 Irreversible: lol up2u
02:16 Irreversible: 03:23:259 (5) - 272 136
02:16 Irreversible: 03:27:459 (2) - 378 136
02:16 Irreversible: 03:36:888 (5,6,1) - LOL
02:17 HanzeR: 03:23:259 (5) - wait wat
02:17 Irreversible: it this triplet has this slight curve in it
02:17 Irreversible: i mean 172
02:17 Irreversible: lXD
02:17 HanzeR: do u mean
02:17 HanzeR: 172
02:17 HanzeR: LOL
02:17 HanzeR: i was like
02:17 HanzeR: 272 uhhhhhhhhh
02:17 Irreversible: that would've been funny
02:17 Irreversible: hahahahaha
02:18 Irreversible: ye rest is okk, i like asphyxias
02:18 HanzeR: yay

Fixes: A lot of jumps are now gone (Hard),
Fixed some weird rhythm patterns in Insane, as well as some nazi and polishment.

Spread should be fine now, and rest seems cool for me too.

Bubbled!
69653863
yes
gogogo

dont forget the title text ok B)
Topic Starter
HanzeR

inverness wrote:

yes
gogogo

dont forget the title text ok B)
BATman plsss ...
captin1
couple missed hitsounds in daybreak and fixed an unsnapped slider in normal, should be good to go!

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apaffy
congrats hanzer~!
Asphyxia
Graz HanzeR!
Topic Starter
HanzeR

captin1 wrote:

couple missed hitsounds in daybreak and fixed an unsnapped slider in normal, should be good to go!

ranked

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waxman
WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
Secretpipe
Yeah <3
Gratz Hanzer-kun <3
Rumia-
wtf gratz!!! Hanzerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
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