Thanks so much for the mod moeri! let me know if you get the chance to play it again!
Why are the Kiai parts so weird? Faust had this amazing idea to have kiai only at the end to emphasize the 'dawn' part of the storyboard
00:45:975 (2) - Would be better to have a circle at 00:46:316.
00:48:717 (2) - Same at 00:49:059.
00:59:345 (1,2,3) - Distance
01:02:088 (1,2,3) - Put the end of (1) in the middle of (3)'s track? http://puu.sh/8ZcyC.png
01:35:002 (3) - Remove clap from the end.
01:46:660 (3,4) - This blanket could be improved.
02:39:460 (1) - Not sure about this.
03:10:660 (2,4) - This overlap.
03:26:089 (1,2,3) - Make a regular triangle down here?
03:28:832 (1,2,3) - ^
03:41:175 (3,1) - Distance.
03:50:089 (3,1) - Blanket?
OD 5 too easy. changed
00:10:659 (5,1) - This is not very nice. ><
00:37:744 (2,3) - Slider and then a circle instead? changed this pattern
00:52:145 (1,2,3,4,1) - Looks a bit cramped. i wanted it to stand out from the 1/2 note streams
01:06:202 (3) - New combo since there's a jump? oops
01:46:916 (8) - I wouldn't put this here just quite yet, it's too faint. changed
03:37:745 (1,2) - This blanket could be better. fixt
03:39:802 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Maybe too close together? They confuse me. fixt
03:50:774 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Put these so close together that they look like they're stacked in different directions. watt
This is really hard to judge with this mouse. I'll poke you in-game when I get the opportunity to play this properly for hopefully more suggestions.
00:31:574 (1,2,3,1) - Put the triple first or make it a stream of 5. >< i dont hear it that way
00:47:002 (1) - Put an object starting at 00:47:516. i really like the the feeling of this slider with beats on both ends
02:33:974 - I'm kind of sad that this part isn't streamy like the music would imply. :/ >< i just wanted to follow the drum beats strictly after mapping the doubles synth part
02:54:116 (3) - Put a circle here instead, move the slider to 02:54:031 and make it 1/2 long. hm maybe
02:54:716 (5,6,1) - Maybe put this triple in a straight line? I feel it'd look better. i tried making the curve more pronounced instead