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1. 00:00:923 (1) - is this honestly needed?
2. 00:05:209 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - I feel like the emphasis here is at the wrong spots, I would rather have the jumps on white ticks. Can be done by removing (5) and adding a note between (6) & (1) this would also make this section consistent with 00:08:466 (2,3,4,5) -
3. 00:16:352 (3,1,2) - minor thing but this flows a little awkward since its different jumps in the same direction, changing this would also add consistency to overall map structure because throughout the map you do a lot of back and forth or square patterns.
4. 00:23:895 (5) - this slider feels awkward, it needs to be rotated clockwise so it connects with the previous one a little better
5. 00:30:581 (2) - I'd move this up for overall distance consistency and make reading better (so this time your map won't cause a shitstorm aahehueaeheae)
6. 00:31:438 (3,1,2) - saame point as earlier, i suggest ctrl g 1 and 2
7. 01:00:238 (6,7) - weird flow, should honestly move (7) away a little
8. 01:02:638 (1,2,3,4) - personal grudge against overcurved sliders grrrr looks like shit fixpls
9. 01:12:066 (7,1) - these dont connect very well with eachother, to not break the pattern too much i suggest moving (7) to the remaining empty spot in the hexagon.
10. 01:25:952 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this is fine but for consistency id rather have you change this into another back and forth by swapping the order of the notes around. Swap these: 01:26:124 (2,3) - and reorder 01:26:638 (1,2,3,4) - as 3-1-4-2
11. 01:44:466 (1,2) - there is nothing in the song at 01:44:724 (2) - you should make (1) 1/4 and start (2) on the red tick.
12. 01:52:524 (4,5) - ctrl g?
13. 02:06:752 (3,4,1) - this lower distance kinda makes you feel disapointed, you expect bigger distance and then the notes are all so close and easy to hit, I don't like it.
14. 02:14:809 (2,3) - ctrl g? only do so if you did so earlier.
15. 02:28:009 (2,3,4) - these emphasize the wrong parts, the slider finishes when the synth is at its quietest point. You should change (1) into a circle and move those three sliders to start at 02:27:838 - (and obviously fill the gap this creates after the pattern)
16. 02:37:609 (2,3) - this should be flipped! something like this
    
    image

    
17. 02:40:352 (3,4) - these also dont really connect well into eachother, change (4)s position and angle imo
18. 02:54:666 (3,4,5,6,7) - this is just... wat remap this completely. missing the two biggest emphasis points (white ticks) wow it's actually this entire section. I would seriously consider remapping the whole thing. what youre mapping to is so much quieter than what you hear in gameplay and it just feels like random overmapping. From 02:54:666 - to 03:05:895 - . The doubles are fine as long as you map the white ticks, the emphasized points in the music. The problem mostly lies in sliders completely skipping them.
    Additionally, if you choose not to, then consider changing 02:48:238 - 02:50:981 to reflect the same rhythm pattern because this part is mapped more appropriately to the song and conflicts with the following part which isn't.
19. 03:16:352 (1,2) - these are too close to eachother and based on the the rest of the section I automaticly assumed the second slider was going to start earlier than it currently it. Increase distance or change slider angles to reflect that this is a 1/2 gap in the rhythm.
20. 03:19:781 (1) - move further away from 03:19:952 (2) - same reason.
21. 03:34:352 (2) - replace with a circle. There is nothing in the song that would make sense for this to be a 1/4 slider.
22. 03:37:952 (3) - move this to the left. This would fix the awkward flow and make it more pleasing to connect with the next slider.
23. 03:41:981 (2) - make 1/4? youre missing a strong emphasis point on the white tick.

1. 00:16:524 (1) - /
2. 00:16:695 (2) - +
3. 00:17:209 (1) - /
4. 00:17:381 (2) - +
5. 00:19:438 (4) - +
6. 00:23:038 (1) - /
7. 00:28:181 (1) - /
8. 00:28:352 (2) - +
9. 00:30:238 (1) - /
10. 00:37:438 (1) - /
11. 00:37:781 (1) - /
12. 00:40:181 (1) - /
13. 00:40:524 (1) - +
14. 00:41:038 (1) - /
15. 00:44:466 (1) - /
16. 00:50:124 (1) - /
17. 00:52:695 (1) - /
18. 01:05:724 (1) - /
19. 01:13:266 (1) - /
20. 01:13:609 (3) - +
21. 01:13:952 (1) - /
22. 01:14:295 (4) - +
23. 01:19:095 (4) - +
24. 01:36:581 (1) - /
25. 01:39:324 (1) - /
26. 01:41:038 (6) - +
27. 01:41:724 (1) - /
28. 01:44:466 (5) - /
29. 01:45:152 (7) - +
30. 01:45:666 (1) - /
31. 01:46:524 (7) - +
32. 01:47:209 (1) - /
33. 01:49:266 (6) - +
34. 01:49:438 (1) - /
35. 01:51:666 (1) - /
36. 01:52:009 (2) - +
37. 01:53:038 (1) - /
38. 01:54:752 (6) - +
39. 01:55:438 (1) - /
40. 01:56:124 (4) - +
41. 01:56:638 (1) - /
42. 01:57:495 (9) - +
43. 01:57:838 (1) - /
44. 02:00:924 (1) - /
45. 02:09:666 (1) - /
46. 02:09:838 (2) - +
47. 02:12:581 (5) - +
48. 02:12:752 (1) - /
49. 02:15:324 (1) - / (or 02:15:666 (1) - / )
50. 02:49:609 (6) - +
51. 02:49:781 (1) - /
    I'm expecting everything between these too will hopefully be remapped and fixed anyways so I won't comment on combos since it's useless
52. 03:11:209 (1) - /
53. 03:11:552 (3) - +
54. 03:13:095 (7) - +
55. 03:13:438 (1) - /
56. 03:15:324 (1) - / ( or 03:14:809 (1) - / )
57. 03:18:409 (5) - +
58. 03:18:581 (1) - /
59. 03:57:324 (1) - /
60. 03:59:552 (1) - /
    could comment on a lot more but they mostly make sense

1. 00:59:209 (2) - missing whistle
2. 00:59:895 (4) - ^
3. 01:23:895 (2) - ^
4. 01:35:209 (5) - add clap
5. 01:56:124 (4) - use normal set? random drum feels out of place
6. 02:03:666 (3) - missing whistle

AllStar12 wrote:

ヾ(´･ω･｀)

Just going through it quickly and wondering if these are intentional or not.

[Daybreak]

1. 00:59:209 (2) - Missing whistle on the head?
2. 00:59:895 (4) - Missing whistle?
3. 01:23:895 (2) - Missing whistle on the head?
4. 01:56:124 (4) - intentional drum sampleset? oops ^
5. 04:05:045 (1,2,3) - The approach circle from the storyboard seems to be widen by a bit but placing it at x: 368 y: 227 would be the most accurate center spot of the circle if you want it like that. Can see you made a star formation there so if you ignore this if you want :S i think its actually placed correctly, but in the editor the storyboard is offset from where it actually is in play mode
   
6. 00:30:409 - Thinking of having a circle note here and 00:30:752 - to continue going along with the piano? Unless you intended to have those empty. I think it seem more fitting to add notes there to continue along with the piano. maybe, i wanted to follow the vocal here
7. 00:41:381 - and 00:41:724 - as well
8. 01:38:638 (3) - add a finish since there's a cymbal sound?
9. 02:40:009 (1) - ^
10. 02:41:381 (3) - ^fixed all

Now I rest. Did not sleep at all.
_(:3」∠)_

Saturnalize wrote:

some sb thing to mention

1. 00:22:866 - recolor the bluething to white since the background next is grayscale. hnmmm i like it this way so its less as bright

2. 00:44:809 - the background turns darker so it wouldn't be wise to flash it to max. Reduce the opacity would help. ok

3. 00:56:124 - I just don't like the pulse, making it looks like old nightcore sb. removed

4. 02:00:924 - You could put a slow bright effect instead of sudden flash at 02:01:609 ok

5. 02:23:552 - Those white thingy looks weird, put fade code to 1,0 since the difference is clearly visible (and also continue the rotate) ok

6. 03:32:124 - The rings looks weird because it's fading away after the scale ends. extend the scale duration and set speed to 2 (fast to slow, iirc). Also, move it somewhere else, the placement is too monotonous and weird :S changed

7. 03:54:066 - Please fade out that dead color because the transition looks terrible (either this is intentional or not). Also, the white ball stuff's opacity should've ended here imo. Second, you can max the opacity of the burst here, but fade is as the black sprite appears (04:04:352)
fixed
8. 04:05:038 - The rings looks weird, try to make it hit-lightning-like.
i think they look right in play
9. These code looks wrecked out, even though it does nothing in your sb, but I think you should fix this.
sorry im noob but whats wrong with it Dx

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Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\black.png",320,240
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Azer wrote:

hi im bored have a super rare azer mod

[Daybreak]

[Objects]

1. 00:00:923 (1) - is this honestly needed?
2. 00:05:209 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - I feel like the emphasis here is at the wrong spots, I would rather have the jumps on white ticks. Can be done by removing (5) and adding a note between (6) & (1) this would also make this section consistent with 00:08:466 (2,3,4,5) - ok
3. 00:16:352 (3,1,2) - minor thing but this flows a little awkward since its different jumps in the same direction, changing this would also add consistency to overall map structure because throughout the map you do a lot of back and forth or square patterns. changed
4. 00:23:895 (5) - this slider feels awkward, it needs to be rotated clockwise so it connects with the previous one a little better ok
5. 00:30:581 (2) - I'd move this up for overall distance consistency and make reading better (so this time your map won't cause a shitstorm aahehueaeheae)
6. 00:31:438 (3,1,2) - saame point as earlier, i suggest ctrl g 1 and 2 sure
7. 01:00:238 (6,7) - weird flow, should honestly move (7) away a little ok
8. 01:02:638 (1,2,3,4) - personal grudge against overcurved sliders grrrr looks like shit fixpls hehe fixed
9. 01:12:066 (7,1) - these dont connect very well with eachother, to not break the pattern too much i suggest moving (7) to the remaining empty spot in the hexagon. sure
10. 01:25:952 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this is fine but for consistency id rather have you change this into another back and forth by swapping the order of the notes around. Swap these: 01:26:124 (2,3) - and reorder 01:26:638 (1,2,3,4) - as 3-1-4-2
11. 01:44:466 (1,2) - there is nothing in the song at 01:44:724 (2) - you should make (1) 1/4 and start (2) on the red tick. she says 'see' on the blue tick thats what I was following
12. 01:52:524 (4,5) - ctrl g? i kinda like it how it is
13. 02:06:752 (3,4,1) - this lower distance kinda makes you feel disapointed, you expect bigger distance and then the notes are all so close and easy to hit, I don't like it. moved
14. 02:14:809 (2,3) - ctrl g? only do so if you did so earlier.
15. 02:28:009 (2,3,4) - these emphasize the wrong parts, the slider finishes when the synth is at its quietest point. You should change (1) into a circle and move those three sliders to start at 02:27:838 - (and obviously fill the gap this creates after the pattern) changed this
16. 02:37:609 (2,3) - this should be flipped! something like this sure
    
    image

    
17. 02:40:352 (3,4) - these also dont really connect well into eachother, change (4)s position and angle imo changed differently
18. 02:54:666 (3,4,5,6,7) - this is just... wat remap this completely. missing the two biggest emphasis points (white ticks) wow it's actually this entire section. I would seriously consider remapping the whole thing. what youre mapping to is so much quieter than what you hear in gameplay and it just feels like random overmapping. From 02:54:666 - to 03:05:895 - . The doubles are fine as long as you map the white ticks, the emphasized points in the music. The problem mostly lies in sliders completely skipping them.
    Additionally, if you choose not to, then consider changing 02:48:238 - 02:50:981 to reflect the same rhythm pattern because this part is mapped more appropriately to the song and conflicts with the following part which isn't. changed a lot
19. 03:16:352 (1,2) - these are too close to eachother and based on the the rest of the section I automaticly assumed the second slider was going to start earlier than it currently it. Increase distance or change slider angles to reflect that this is a 1/2 gap in the rhythm. ok
20. 03:19:781 (1) - move further away from 03:19:952 (2) - same reason.
21. 03:34:352 (2) - replace with a circle. There is nothing in the song that would make sense for this to be a 1/4 slider. ok
22. 03:37:952 (3) - move this to the left. This would fix the awkward flow and make it more pleasing to connect with the next slider. ok
23. 03:41:981 (2) - make 1/4? youre missing a strong emphasis point on the white tick.sure

[Combos]

Remove: /
Add: +
Don't waste your time adding individual replies to these, just change them or don't.

1. 00:16:524 (1) - /
2. 00:16:695 (2) - +
3. 00:17:209 (1) - /
4. 00:17:381 (2) - +
5. 00:19:438 (4) - +
6. 00:23:038 (1) - /
7. 00:28:181 (1) - /
8. 00:28:352 (2) - +
9. 00:30:238 (1) - /
10. 00:37:438 (1) - /
11. 00:37:781 (1) - /
12. 00:40:181 (1) - /
13. 00:40:524 (1) - +
14. 00:41:038 (1) - /
15. 00:44:466 (1) - /
16. 00:50:124 (1) - /
17. 00:52:695 (1) - /
18. 01:05:724 (1) - /
19. 01:13:266 (1) - /
20. 01:13:609 (3) - +
21. 01:13:952 (1) - /
22. 01:14:295 (4) - +
23. 01:19:095 (4) - +
24. 01:36:581 (1) - /
25. 01:39:324 (1) - /
26. 01:41:038 (6) - +
27. 01:41:724 (1) - /
28. 01:44:466 (5) - /
29. 01:45:152 (7) - +
30. 01:45:666 (1) - /
31. 01:46:524 (7) - +
32. 01:47:209 (1) - /
33. 01:49:266 (6) - +
34. 01:49:438 (1) - /
35. 01:51:666 (1) - /
36. 01:52:009 (2) - +
37. 01:53:038 (1) - /
38. 01:54:752 (6) - +
39. 01:55:438 (1) - /
40. 01:56:124 (4) - +
41. 01:56:638 (1) - /
42. 01:57:495 (9) - +
43. 01:57:838 (1) - /
44. 02:00:924 (1) - /
45. 02:09:666 (1) - /
46. 02:09:838 (2) - +
47. 02:12:581 (5) - +
48. 02:12:752 (1) - /
49. 02:15:324 (1) - / (or 02:15:666 (1) - / )
50. 02:49:609 (6) - +
51. 02:49:781 (1) - /
    I'm expecting everything between these too will hopefully be remapped and fixed anyways so I won't comment on combos since it's useless
52. 03:11:209 (1) - /
53. 03:11:552 (3) - +
54. 03:13:095 (7) - +
55. 03:13:438 (1) - /
56. 03:15:324 (1) - / ( or 03:14:809 (1) - / )
57. 03:18:409 (5) - +
58. 03:18:581 (1) - /
59. 03:57:324 (1) - /
60. 03:59:552 (1) - /
    could comment on a lot more but they mostly make sense

[Hitsounding]

1. 00:59:209 (2) - missing whistle
2. 00:59:895 (4) - ^
3. 01:23:895 (2) - ^
4. 01:35:209 (5) - add clap
5. 01:56:124 (4) - use normal set? random drum feels out of place
6. 02:03:666 (3) - missing whistle

[/color]

Niokin wrote:

i knew what to expect from this after seeing miss you and i was right damn this is beautiful

waxman wrote:

QQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQ



[Daybreak]

00:02:431 (1) - This vol. is too low. Add Green Line has vol. 25% NOT 20%. Because the melody is started here. ok!
00:08:602 - Green Line has 25%. This sound is louder than 00:08:431 (5).
00:15:459 (1) - ^ (50%) fixed both ^
00:31:916 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Increase distance between 00:31:916 (1,1) 00:32:088 (2,2) etc. Because it's different blank from 00:31:745 (2,3,1). fixed i think
00:59:516 (5,3) - you can understand what I want to say. fixed
01:03:116 (4,2) - stack perfectly? then move 01:03:459 (1,2,3,4). i wanted to but it's impossible without remapping the entire pattern and I don't think anyone would notice xD
01:26:088 (1) - Miss Whistle oops

01:45:974 (1) - add Finish. According to 01:40:488 (1) - 01:41:859 (1) - 01:43:231 (1) - 01:44:602 (1) - fixed
01:46:316 (2) - delete Finish fixed
01:50:688 (3,4) - change to long slider(I mean change SV) because circle hit sound is not fit imo. (High recommended) i really like to follow the synth here with these notes x-x
01:57:631 (3,4) - idea. I used 01:58:602 (4)'s beginning and end position. cool idea, changed this differently

bad image

02:32:774 - Maybe add green line has 65%. because you always placed it on the end of slider. sure
02:44:516 (4,1) - Take more distance. Because you decreased spacing at 02:44:174 (4,1). So? ok
02:47:002 (1) - LOL TOO GOOD! I LOVE IT. <3
02:51:031 (3,4,5,1,2) - I'm so confused. Those Whistles are louder than 02:52:402 (1,2,3,4,5,6). weird >_>
02:56:259 (2) - delete circle. Yours seems not to be fix imo. ok
03:15:631 - add circle then stack on 03:15:288 (7). i really like the pause here x_x
03:21:974 (7) - NC? i dont think its consistent ><
03:33:974 (1,3,4) - spacing. But it's intentional tho. not too bad. I prefer regular spacing only this section. 03:34:316 (3,4)'s spacing is longer than between 03:33:974 (1) and 03:34:316 (3)'s end of slider. i might change this a little
04:04:488 (1,2,3) - REVERS SLIDER! OD10 on HR. BECAUSE OF END OF THIS SONG. If this map had OD7 it's ok. (High recomended) (High recomended) (High recomended) (High recomended)
ok
I'll give a star and waxman's Bubble after you wrote your thinking.
GOOD LUCK!

waxman wrote:

(ﾉ≧∇≦)ﾉ

HanzeR wrote:

waxman wrote:

(ﾉ≧∇≦)ﾉ

1. What the fuck is that girl's head nvm it's a traffic light
2. The storyboard sprites and skin elements could be I mean must be converted to JPG for filesize optimization (some png elements here exceeds 1.5mb)
3. black.png could be resized to 1x1 and rescaled back ingame via scripting, for maximum file size optimization. When you're done with the rescaling, put this line below the Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\black.png",320,240
   

    V,0,-550,,1366,768

4. 02:44:945 - Maybe you could reconsider of smoother background transition here like fade out or something, right now it feels too sudden to have it suddenly goes to black
5. sex.jpg
6. Volume 69%

1. I think tickrate 1 should be enough, this 2 feels too much
2. 00:03:117 (1) - Too far from spinner centre, Idk.
3. 00:16:832 (3,4) - Why this overlap? e it's bad
4. 00:59:346 (1) - You missed the customwhistle thingy (that clubkick sound or smth)
5. 01:22:660 (1) - Missed one too on slidertail.
6. 01:36:032 (4,2) - Why don't you just stack
7. 02:44:259 (4,1) - I don't think this is a good idea...
8. 02:57:288 (3,4) - YEah, it['s nonsense.
9. 03:16:489 (3,1) - Too close bby
10. 04:04:489 (1) - out of place, see sb

1. 00:06:374 (2,3) - Blanket could be done better.
2. 00:35:345 (2) - It's unreadable. If you insist on keeping it on it's place atleast Ctrl+G it, so it flows the way people think how it supposed to flow
3. 00:45:288 (2,3) - Blankedt
4. 00:54:716 (1,1) - I would rather stack. With this spacing people will assume the slider starts right away after the kickstream
5. 01:14:945 (4,1) - If you stack, it would flow way better and readability would be easier.
6. 01:17:174 (4,1) - Stack too?
7. 01:25:402 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I hate this. It flows good but it's... jhsdfgjjhsd.
8. 01:29:688 (1) - put on x:296 y:196? Would look way better.
9. 01:33:459 (5) - If you could put this like http://puu.sh/8XC13.jpg it would be way more readable.
10. 02:12:716 (3) - http://puu.sh/8XC45.jpg maybe
11. 04:04:488 (1) - Out of place

1. Dur why tickrate 2? This is too much
2. i'm dead here
3. If I proceed, most of the mods would be very subjective (in my point of view) and I'm not even sure you're going to follow. Your style has grown very distinctive here and I can't really see the map right from your perspective and viewpoint of mapping so no mod here okthank
4. Hur the storyboard ripple at the end is out of place in every diff?

Daybreak

Hard

Asphyxia's Normal

inverness wrote:

Mod request from my queue

Guide

Red is unrankable and must be fixed.
Pink is you should apply this to any similar notes/parts/patterns/whatever it was stated on it.
Mods with question marks (?) are only suggestion/opinion. You're free to choose whether you're going to apply it or not.

Additional notes:
I cannot mod another game modes.
Please reply to my mods, I always looking forward to the replies so I could improve better.
If you think one or more points on my mod is unclear, feel free to ask about it.

Some useful links for mapping:
Analyzing flow in beatmaps
Mapping polarity
How to make beautiful sliders
How to make beautiful sliders (advanced)
Difficulty naming
Advanced Timing

the color of the night is pink my firiend..,,,,.. here hold my beer im going to mod

General

1. What the fuck is that girl's head nvm it's a traffic light
2. The storyboard sprites and skin elements could be I mean must be converted to JPG for filesize optimization (some png elements here exceeds 1.5mb) reencoded the storyboard elements to jpg.. cant do anything about the skin because osu only accepts .png
3. black.png could be resized to 1x1 and rescaled back ingame via scripting, for maximum file size optimization. When you're done with the rescaling, put this line below the Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\black.png",320,240
   

    V,0,-550,,1366,768

   thats a neat trick ok
4. 02:44:945 - Maybe you could reconsider of smoother background transition here like fade out or something, right now it feels too sudden to have it suddenly goes to black lol i figured theres a spinner in every diff here no one would really notice... ill fix that
5. sex.jpg
6. Volume 69% :}

assfix

1. I think tickrate 1 should be enough, this 2 feels too much
2. 00:03:117 (1) - Too far from spinner centre, Idk.
3. 00:16:832 (3,4) - Why this overlap? e it's bad
4. 00:59:346 (1) - You missed the customwhistle thingy (that clubkick sound or smth)
5. 01:22:660 (1) - Missed one too on slidertail.
6. 01:36:032 (4,2) - Why don't you just stack
7. 02:44:259 (4,1) - I don't think this is a good idea...
8. 02:57:288 (3,4) - YEah, it['s nonsense.
9. 03:16:489 (3,1) - Too close bby
10. 04:04:489 (1) - out of place, see sb

Hard

1. 00:06:374 (2,3) - Blanket could be done better. fixt
2. 00:35:345 (2) - It's unreadable. If you insist on keeping it on it's place atleast Ctrl+G it, so it flows the way people think how it supposed to flow fixt
3. 00:45:288 (2,3) - Blankedt fixed
4. 00:54:716 (1,1) - I would rather stack. With this spacing people will assume the slider starts right away after the kickstream ok
5. 01:14:945 (4,1) - If you stack, it would flow way better and readability would be easier. i think not having the jump here makes the transition to really large spaced sliders 01:15:116 (1,2,3,4) - awkward
6. 01:17:174 (4,1) - Stack too? sure
7. 01:25:402 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I hate this. It flows good but it's... jhsdfgjjhsd. changed this pattern
8. 01:29:688 (1) - put on x:296 y:196? Would look way better. was worried about readability but sure
9. 01:33:459 (5) - If you could put this like http://puu.sh/8XC13.jpg it would be way more readable. cool
10. 02:12:716 (3) - http://puu.sh/8XC45.jpg maybe ok
11. 04:04:488 (1) - Out of place i think it looks right in play mode... but i really have no idea how to make it perfect

i love you this diff is sex
<3
Dayberak

1. Dur why tickrate 2? This is too much changed
2. i'm dead here
3. If I proceed, most of the mods would be very subjective (in my point of view) and I'm not even sure you're going to follow. Your style has grown very distinctive here and I can't really see the map right from your perspective and viewpoint of mapping so no mod here okthank
4. Hur the storyboard ripple at the end is out of place in every diff? someone help me pls i cant get it right at all

illuminati

Mira-san wrote:

Noob mod about stacks and blankets. Yeah.

Daybreak

Timing point: 152774 / 02:32:774
I don't think this one is needed. Unless there's a purpose I don't know of. heh heh. i actually have no idea how that got there

01:03:974 (4) - Could be stacked on (4) but eh. Would cause distance inconsistency. its impossible to fix without remapping the whole patttern and im really lazy and nobody is going to notice it in game ^_^
01:53:174 (2) - Would be better if this was on x:56 y:125. ok
02:01:745 (3) - This blanket could be improved. fixed i think
02:34:659 (3) - Same here. ^ fixed
01:06:545 (2) - Ditto.
02:44:945 (1) - IMO I think it would be better here if only "soft-hitclap" can be heard. i think it is? not sure!
02:31:231 (1) - Make this parallel to 02:30:974 (1,2) maybe? ok
02:48:716 (4) - This one is too close to (2). fixt

Hard

01:01:402 (3) - Move to x:320 y:236 plez. ok
01:06:202 (3) - Improve blanket. heh heh. ;_;
01:44:602 (1) - Ditto. ,_,
02:37:574 (3,4,5,6) - Stacks. lel. oops
03:23:345 (1) - Stack on end of (6). sure
03:25:059 (1) - Improve blanket. improved
03:38:259 (2) - Move to x:156 y:92 yeahhh
04:01:059 (5) - Stack on end of (3) I guess. Unless it's intended. stacked it less

Asphyxia's Normal

01:37:746 (2) - Stack on (4).

Damn. Love this map. <3
Gonna shoot. heh

"sex.jpg"
also RIP ripples at the end of the map.

inverness wrote:

Mod request from my queue

assfix

1. I think tickrate 1 should be enough, this 2 feels too muchx yeah to be consistent, done
2. 00:03:117 (1) - Too far from spinner centre, Idk. I shortened the spinner, fits better now
3. 00:16:832 (3,4) - Why this overlap? e it's bad i love it though ::/
4. 00:59:346 (1) - You missed the customwhistle thingy (that clubkick sound or smth)
5. 01:22:660 (1) - Missed one too on slidertail. ^ done hitsounds
6. 01:36:032 (4,2) - Why don't you just stack
7. 02:44:259 (4,1) - I don't think this is a good idea...
8. 02:57:288 (3,4) - YEah, it['s nonsense.
9. 03:16:489 (3,1) - Too close bby
10. 04:04:489 (1) - out of place, see sb Fixed all either differently or like you suggested!

illuminati

Mira-san wrote:

Noob mod about stacks and blankets. Yeah.

Asphyxia's Normal

01:37:746 (2) - Stack on (4). Yeah fixed already on Inverness mod, thank you!

Damn. Love this map. <3
Gonna shoot. heh

"sex.jpg"
also RIP ripples at the end of the map.

inverness wrote:

I'll help with the ripples.

You have different endnotes on every diff, which means each diff needs a separate code placed on .osu to realign the end ripples
You have 4 ring.png line on .osb, delete the last 3 lines (so it wouldn't conflict with the lines added later on .osu).
Then add these lines to each diff's .osu file respectively

Normal

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Ring.png",434,299
 F,2,244488,247231,1,0
 S,1,244488,247231,0.2,1
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Ring.png",434,299
 F,2,244488,247231,1,0
 S,1,244488,247231,0.15,0.75
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Ring.png",434,299
 F,2,244488,247231,1,0
 S,1,244488,247231,0.1,0.5

Hard

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Ring.png",433,312
 F,2,244488,247231,1,0
 S,1,244488,247231,0.2,1
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Ring.png",433,312
 F,2,244488,247231,1,0
 S,1,244488,247231,0.15,0.75
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Ring.png",433,312
 F,2,244488,247231,1,0
 S,1,244488,247231,0.1,0.5

Daybrek

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Ring.png",433,308
 F,2,244488,247231,1,0
 S,1,244488,247231,0.2,1
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Ring.png",433,308
 F,2,244488,247231,1,0
 S,1,244488,247231,0.15,0.75
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Ring.png",433,308
 F,2,244488,247231,1,0
 S,1,244488,247231,0.1,0.5

I'm sure you know how and where to put it, right?
It's just below the //Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground) line
hope this helps (-:

Yoeri wrote:

MoezeR



[Asphyxia's Normal]
00:45:975 (2) - Would be better to have a circle at 00:46:316.
00:48:717 (2) - Same at 00:49:059. This one is fine imo D:
00:59:345 (1,2,3) - Distance
01:02:088 (1,2,3) - Put the end of (1) in the middle of (3)'s track? http://puu.sh/8ZcyC.png Kind of hard to do that due to the spacing... orz
01:35:002 (3) - Remove clap from the end.
01:46:660 (3,4) - This blanket could be improved.
02:39:460 (1) - Not sure about this.
03:10:660 (2,4) - This overlap.
03:26:089 (1,2,3) - Make a regular triangle down here?
03:28:832 (1,2,3) - ^
03:41:175 (3,1) - Distance.
03:50:089 (3,1) - Blanket?

Yoeri wrote:

MoezeR

[General]
Why are the Kiai parts so weird? Faust had this amazing idea to have kiai only at the end to emphasize the 'dawn' part of the storyboard

[Asphyxia's Normal]
00:45:975 (2) - Would be better to have a circle at 00:46:316.
00:48:717 (2) - Same at 00:49:059.
00:59:345 (1,2,3) - Distance
01:02:088 (1,2,3) - Put the end of (1) in the middle of (3)'s track? http://puu.sh/8ZcyC.png
01:35:002 (3) - Remove clap from the end.
01:46:660 (3,4) - This blanket could be improved.
02:39:460 (1) - Not sure about this.
03:10:660 (2,4) - This overlap.
03:26:089 (1,2,3) - Make a regular triangle down here?
03:28:832 (1,2,3) - ^
03:41:175 (3,1) - Distance.
03:50:089 (3,1) - Blanket?

[Hard]
OD 5 too easy. changed
00:10:659 (5,1) - This is not very nice. ><
00:37:744 (2,3) - Slider and then a circle instead? changed this pattern
00:52:145 (1,2,3,4,1) - Looks a bit cramped. i wanted it to stand out from the 1/2 note streams
01:06:202 (3) - New combo since there's a jump? oops
01:46:916 (8) - I wouldn't put this here just quite yet, it's too faint. changed
03:37:745 (1,2) - This blanket could be better. fixt
03:39:802 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Maybe too close together? They confuse me. fixt
03:50:774 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Put these so close together that they look like they're stacked in different directions. watt

[Daybreak]
This is really hard to judge with this mouse. I'll poke you in-game when I get the opportunity to play this properly for hopefully more suggestions.
00:31:574 (1,2,3,1) - Put the triple first or make it a stream of 5. >< i dont hear it that way
00:47:002 (1) - Put an object starting at 00:47:516. i really like the the feeling of this slider with beats on both ends
02:33:974 - I'm kind of sad that this part isn't streamy like the music would imply. :/ >< i just wanted to follow the drum beats strictly after mapping the doubles synth part
02:54:116 (3) - Put a circle here instead, move the slider to 02:54:031 and make it 1/2 long. hm maybe
02:54:716 (5,6,1) - Maybe put this triple in a straight line? I feel it'd look better. i tried making the curve more pronounced instead

Sephibro wrote:

why don't you guys go ask meiikyuu or galvenize to teach you how to make good maps and stop making this crap

edgy sliders + ridiculous streams + senseless spacing + brainlessly slow sliders != creative mapping

captin1 wrote:

how about you find some manners and keep needless hate comments to yourself, thanks

HanzeR wrote:

thx 4 ur complaint

Sephibro wrote:

why don't you guys go ask meiikyuu or galvenize to teach you how to make good maps and stop making this crap

edgy sliders + ridiculous streams + senseless spacing + brainlessly slow sliders != creative mapping

TheForgotten5 wrote:

Hi there from modding queue. These are just suggestions, you don't need to follow them!

Alright, let's get started.

[Normal]
00:17:174 (4) - Tilt this slider a bit so it's more visible for normal players. Example: http://gyazo.com/4a85a60d2610392e618e51623a7bd97e
01:59:088 (2,3,4,5) - Change the pattern to a triangular form like this: http://gyazo.com/213da4ad9919e7cea347ecc4992e7fc4

[Hard]
Seems ok.

[Daybreak]
Seems good. Got some funky patterns here haha!

That's it from me! Good luck!

inverness wrote:

yes
gogogo

dont forget the title text ok B)

captin1 wrote:

couple missed hitsounds in daybreak and fixed an unsnapped slider in normal, should be good to go!

ranked

this is fine to be ranked now