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Modding queue <3
Overall
Pink hitcircle colors? Use white and red like the BG D:
Please don't use so much inconsistent spacing.
Soft
Slider velocity SO HIGH
00:20:075 (1) - This is Easy, right? So move it to the center, because it's really close to the end of spinner
00:56:043 (4,1) - REALLY HIGH JUMP ORZ
00:59:002 (4,1) - ^
01:30:081 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ...easy difficulty?
Medium
Blue hitcircles? WHY
00:46:005 (15,1) - spacing wtf
01:26:027 (2,3) - ^
01:33:024 (9,1) - ^
Tough
No comments @spacing...
Go, have a star(ite olololol) for start.
Overall
Pink hitcircle colors? Use white and red like the BG D:
Please don't use so much inconsistent spacing.
Soft
Slider velocity SO HIGH
00:20:075 (1) - This is Easy, right? So move it to the center, because it's really close to the end of spinner
00:56:043 (4,1) - REALLY HIGH JUMP ORZ
00:59:002 (4,1) - ^
01:30:081 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ...easy difficulty?
Medium
Blue hitcircles? WHY
00:46:005 (15,1) - spacing wtf
01:26:027 (2,3) - ^
01:33:024 (9,1) - ^
Tough
No comments @spacing...
Go, have a star(ite olololol) for start.
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Soft:
00:10:037 (1,1,1,1) - You definitely took the easy way out here.
Slider velocity is way too high.
DISTANCE SNAP THIS AT A CONSTANT! It is an easy map, we can't be confusing beginners now, can we?
01:28:021 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - An example of the inconsistent distancing.
01:33:040 (1,2) - Another example...
You get the point.
Medium:
00:10:005 (4) - Not snapped right.
00:15:056 (1,1) - What the is a jump like this doing in Medium?
00:56:075 (16,1) - Again, why?
Distancing :/
Compare:
00:25:094 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
To
00:51:089 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
Examples of variable distancing.
01:23:067 (1,2) -
01:25:062 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
01:28:021 (1,2,3,4) -
01:30:081 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
THESE ARE ALL DIFFERENT! WHY?
Tough:
Increase the circle size, :O
00:28:054 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - Insane maps should have their "easy" points as well. Clearly, this is well beyond most people's abilities.
00:51:024 (15) - Not quite under 14.
01:05:051 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - What is this even doing in a map?
01:21:072 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Too hard, again.
01:28:021 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - This is a mess of unsnapped notes.
01:43:078 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - I don't even have to say what's wrong with this.
The distance snap is again not constant. Unless there are jumps, it should be constant.
This map is ok. Personally, I think you should fix everything I've said, and after, PM me and I'll star this map.
Oh also, I strongly suggest that you don't turn the stacks into snakes, as said above.
00:10:037 (1,1,1,1) - You definitely took the easy way out here.
Slider velocity is way too high.
DISTANCE SNAP THIS AT A CONSTANT! It is an easy map, we can't be confusing beginners now, can we?
01:28:021 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - An example of the inconsistent distancing.
01:33:040 (1,2) - Another example...
You get the point.
Medium:
00:10:005 (4) - Not snapped right.
00:15:056 (1,1) - What the is a jump like this doing in Medium?
00:56:075 (16,1) - Again, why?
Distancing :/
Compare:
00:25:094 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
To
00:51:089 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
Examples of variable distancing.
01:23:067 (1,2) -
01:25:062 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
01:28:021 (1,2,3,4) -
01:30:081 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
THESE ARE ALL DIFFERENT! WHY?
Tough:
Increase the circle size, :O
00:28:054 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - Insane maps should have their "easy" points as well. Clearly, this is well beyond most people's abilities.
00:51:024 (15) - Not quite under 14.
01:05:051 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - What is this even doing in a map?
01:21:072 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Too hard, again.
01:28:021 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - This is a mess of unsnapped notes.
01:43:078 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - I don't even have to say what's wrong with this.
The distance snap is again not constant. Unless there are jumps, it should be constant.
This map is ok. Personally, I think you should fix everything I've said, and after, PM me and I'll star this map.
Oh also, I strongly suggest that you don't turn the stacks into snakes, as said above.
[Overall]
BPM: 185,00 - Offset: 10.370 (Remember to resnap all notes.)
[Soft]
Spacing is huge for an easy map. Reduce it.
00:05:019 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - You have some notes before the first offset here.
00:22:070 (3) - Partially offscreen.
00:44:075 (6) - ^
01:15:089 (2) - ^
01:34:005 (2) - ^
[Medium]
Some combos are too long. Follow my suggestions for improve :3
00:05:019 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4) - You have some notes before the first offset here.
00:07:078 (9) - New combo.
00:09:008 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:43:078 (8) - New combo.
00:48:097 (8) - ^
00:54:016 (8) - ^
[Tough]
Some combos are too long. Follow my suggestions for improve :3
00:06:048 (9) - New combo.
00:07:078 (17) - ^
00:44:010 (9) - ^
00:49:029 (9) - ^
00:54:048 (9) - ^
00:59:067 (9) - ^
01:25:062 (6) - ^
01:30:081 (9) - ^
01:36:000 (9) - ^
01:41:019 (9) - ^
BPM: 185,00 - Offset: 10.370 (Remember to resnap all notes.)
[Soft]
Spacing is huge for an easy map. Reduce it.
00:05:019 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - You have some notes before the first offset here.
00:22:070 (3) - Partially offscreen.
00:44:075 (6) - ^
01:15:089 (2) - ^
01:34:005 (2) - ^
[Medium]
Some combos are too long. Follow my suggestions for improve :3
00:05:019 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4) - You have some notes before the first offset here.
00:07:078 (9) - New combo.
00:09:008 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:43:078 (8) - New combo.
00:48:097 (8) - ^
00:54:016 (8) - ^
[Tough]
Some combos are too long. Follow my suggestions for improve :3
00:06:048 (9) - New combo.
00:07:078 (17) - ^
00:44:010 (9) - ^
00:49:029 (9) - ^
00:54:048 (9) - ^
00:59:067 (9) - ^
01:25:062 (6) - ^
01:30:081 (9) - ^
01:36:000 (9) - ^
01:41:019 (9) - ^
= =
It is a UNrankcerble map = =
I'm not thing to mod ...
Sorry !!
It is a UNrankcerble map = =
I'm not thing to mod ...
Sorry !!
Topic Starter
It's ok............
[Soft]
00:10:037 (1,1,1,1) - I find it kinda boring with four spinners in a row......
01:02:026 (1) - Offscreen Slider!
[Medium]
00:10:037 (1,1,1) - Also boring >.> Please meake somthing more intresting than long 1/4 repeating sliders....
01:02:026 (1,1,1) - Please add some circles between the sliders... (maybe every white tick
)
[Tough]
00:20:075 (1,1,1) - Same as soft! (BORING)
1:02:026 to 1:21:407 - This part is LAME... make this section so there is no breaks and is somewhat tough...
01:24:032 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - *Yawn...*
This map could be much better i like some parts so i star this.
I would recomend that you redo allot of parts and make them less repetitive....
*star*
00:10:037 (1,1,1,1) - I find it kinda boring with four spinners in a row......
01:02:026 (1) - Offscreen Slider!
[Medium]
00:10:037 (1,1,1) - Also boring >.> Please meake somthing more intresting than long 1/4 repeating sliders....
01:02:026 (1,1,1) - Please add some circles between the sliders... (maybe every white tick
)[Tough]
00:20:075 (1,1,1) - Same as soft! (BORING)
1:02:026 to 1:21:407 - This part is LAME... make this section so there is no breaks and is somewhat tough...
01:24:032 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - *Yawn...*
This map could be much better i like some parts so i star this.
I would recomend that you redo allot of parts and make them less repetitive....
*star*
Most of these things are going to be restatements of what everyone said before.
Soft:
00:10:370 (1,1,1,1) - 4 spinners in a row is boring and probably considered slider abuse, so this is probably unrankable. Please get rid of at least 2 spinners
00:21:397 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This part plays like a metronome with every beat 2 whole notes apart, please put something more original here
00:41:505 (1) to 01:01:613 (4) - ^ and make your combos follow a constant pattern. You started out with your combos being every 16 whole notes, but you switched to 8 whole notes per combo as the song went on. To solve this problem make each combo be equal in length
01:02:261 (1) - Since this slider is offscreen, it is unrankable. Please change the slider
01:43:775 (1) - add an inherited timing section and silence the end of the slider?
Since the other 2 diffs have large problems similar to Soft's issues, I am going to quickly cover the flaws of the other 2 diffs.
Medium:
A lot of the parts play like a metronomes, so please change it.
01:02:261 (1,1,1) - long sliders with large breaks between them is quite boring, please change this.
Tough:
A lot of the parts play like a metronomes, so please change it.
You don't have to use only straight sliders to make streams. Please use curved sliders too. It might be nice to have some of the streams to be purely beats too because having mostly sliders for 20s is also pretty boring.
Areas of few notes separated by breaks is very boring, so please remove some of the breaks and map them.
--
This map needs quite a bit of work, so please make the necessary corrections. Feel free to ask me to mod the map again once you fixed it.
Soft:
00:10:370 (1,1,1,1) - 4 spinners in a row is boring and probably considered slider abuse, so this is probably unrankable. Please get rid of at least 2 spinners
00:21:397 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This part plays like a metronome with every beat 2 whole notes apart, please put something more original here
00:41:505 (1) to 01:01:613 (4) - ^ and make your combos follow a constant pattern. You started out with your combos being every 16 whole notes, but you switched to 8 whole notes per combo as the song went on. To solve this problem make each combo be equal in length
01:02:261 (1) - Since this slider is offscreen, it is unrankable. Please change the slider
01:43:775 (1) - add an inherited timing section and silence the end of the slider?
Since the other 2 diffs have large problems similar to Soft's issues, I am going to quickly cover the flaws of the other 2 diffs.
Medium:
A lot of the parts play like a metronomes, so please change it.
01:02:261 (1,1,1) - long sliders with large breaks between them is quite boring, please change this.
Tough:
A lot of the parts play like a metronomes, so please change it.
You don't have to use only straight sliders to make streams. Please use curved sliders too. It might be nice to have some of the streams to be purely beats too because having mostly sliders for 20s is also pretty boring.
Areas of few notes separated by breaks is very boring, so please remove some of the breaks and map them.
--
This map needs quite a bit of work, so please make the necessary corrections. Feel free to ask me to mod the map again once you fixed it.
Tough:
00:29:839 (1-7): I'm not sure if you're trying to be aligned, but it isn't.
Medium:
00:24:315 (4-5): Spacing.
Soft:
01:05:505 (2-4): Spacing.
Suggestions, not orders xD
like the map. star~
00:29:839 (1-7): I'm not sure if you're trying to be aligned, but it isn't.
Medium:
00:24:315 (4-5): Spacing.
Soft:
01:05:505 (2-4): Spacing.
Suggestions, not orders xD
like the map. star~
add source and tags
offset 2583 sounds ok for me
the sound level is also too high. use 7 or so
also try to think of some patterns for tough difficulty not only circles on full beats and streams...
the first offset hast to be set before the notes!osuplayer111 wrote:
[Overall]
BPM: 185,00 - Offset: 10.370 (Remember to resnap all notes.)
offset 2583 sounds ok for me
the sound level is also too high. use 7 or so
also try to think of some patterns for tough difficulty not only circles on full beats and streams...
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This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Topic Starter
All DONE!!!!!Kytoxid wrote:
[General]
Tags?
[Soft]
01:02:025 (1,2) - Horrid jump.
01:27:055 (5,1) - Add a note between these.
[Medium]
As a whole, please make spacing more consistent.
00:10:004 (8,1) - Too close.
00:23:001 (8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Irregular spacing.
00:44:074 (4,8) - Stack these together, form a diamond with 5,6,7?
01:12:031 (8,1) - Much too close.
01:17:082 (1) - Long spinner; map it instead?
01:33:006 (8,9,1) - Stretch into a line?
[Tough]
Drain's too high, Auto loses half the bar when you're in a slow section.
00:43:012 (6,7,8) - Irregular pattern, occurs several times in these sliders.
01:24:031 (2) - Boring. Do something more interesting?
Hello~
[Soft]
00:15:555 (3) New combo?
00:21:393 - 01:01:610 Oh, There are boring. Because there are only 1/1 beat note. Add another note in some part which is 1/2 note or repeat slide note or whatever.
[Medium]
What is basis of spacing? Spacing is different. For example, in 00:28:204 (4,5,6,7,8); spacing is changed suddenly. This factor make to confuse this difficulty player.
Kytoxid said please make spacing more consistent. I didn't see this beatmap old ver, but you need to solve and consider more this spacing problem and spacing basis.
[Tough]
Hmm. No problem in this beatmap. However, note forms are boring. Beacause note forms are simple in Tough. Note form is squarely 1/2 and 1/4 or for example only simple slide notes are covered in 00:51:880 - 01:02:150. These consistently form are make boring. I suggest that you need to make more special form note.
Hmm.....I can't give you star..T.T
However, if you make beatmap more awesome, then I will give you star. Sorry.
[Soft]
00:15:555 (3) New combo?
00:21:393 - 01:01:610 Oh, There are boring. Because there are only 1/1 beat note. Add another note in some part which is 1/2 note or repeat slide note or whatever.
[Medium]
What is basis of spacing? Spacing is different. For example, in 00:28:204 (4,5,6,7,8); spacing is changed suddenly. This factor make to confuse this difficulty player.
Kytoxid said please make spacing more consistent. I didn't see this beatmap old ver, but you need to solve and consider more this spacing problem and spacing basis.
[Tough]
Hmm. No problem in this beatmap. However, note forms are boring. Beacause note forms are simple in Tough. Note form is squarely 1/2 and 1/4 or for example only simple slide notes are covered in 00:51:880 - 01:02:150. These consistently form are make boring. I suggest that you need to make more special form note.
Hmm.....I can't give you star..T.T
However, if you make beatmap more awesome, then I will give you star. Sorry.
SOFT mod is gogo
[soft]
needs hitsounding better, atm theres very little so it makes the map boreing
01:02:025 (1,2) - spacing too close, this must be fixed for a easy diff
01:15:055 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - make more simple and fix spacing, its completely out and without this being fixed makes the diff horrid
[Medium]
01:11:033 (5,6) - horrid spacing, fix plz
your note patterns are very very repetative, please spice it up more
[Tough]
hmmm not very hard for its name
hitsound it better
00:44:009 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ugly pattern change in this, remap
00:56:009 (6) - horridly made slider, remake
00:59:033 (8) - ^
01:01:028 (6,7) - ^
01:23:066 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - toooooooooooooo much, remap and make fun
_________________________-
srry if what i say in my mod is offencive, it dont mean it to be i just mod hard
anyway you need to do alotta work on making these maps funner
[soft]
needs hitsounding better, atm theres very little so it makes the map boreing
01:02:025 (1,2) - spacing too close, this must be fixed for a easy diff
01:15:055 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - make more simple and fix spacing, its completely out and without this being fixed makes the diff horrid
[Medium]
01:11:033 (5,6) - horrid spacing, fix plz
your note patterns are very very repetative, please spice it up more
[Tough]
hmmm not very hard for its name
hitsound it better
00:44:009 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ugly pattern change in this, remap
00:56:009 (6) - horridly made slider, remake
00:59:033 (8) - ^
01:01:028 (6,7) - ^
01:23:066 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - toooooooooooooo much, remap and make fun
_________________________-
srry if what i say in my mod is offencive, it dont mean it to be i just mod hard
anyway you need to do alotta work on making these maps funner
Finally You solved spacing problem...
Then..I remod from Your PM.
[Soft]
Fine.
[Medium]
00:31:123 (1) Remove clap, and add finish
[Tough]
First, You need to arrange grid level 3.
00:17:501 (13) 1 grid left.
00:31:123 (17) Finish.
01:46:447 (18) ^
01:46:691 Remove Break.
However, not enough rankable map because this note pattern still isn't interesting. So you need to make more special.
Starred.
Then..I remod from Your PM.
[Soft]
Fine.
[Medium]
00:31:123 (1) Remove clap, and add finish
[Tough]
First, You need to arrange grid level 3.
00:17:501 (13) 1 grid left.
00:31:123 (17) Finish.
01:46:447 (18) ^
01:46:691 Remove Break.
However, not enough rankable map because this note pattern still isn't interesting. So you need to make more special.
Starred.
Mod Info's:
Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.
Starts Suggestions:
All seems ok.
[Soft]
It's ok
[Medium]
It's ok
[Tough]
01:36:055 (7,8,9) - 1/4 ->
Starred~
Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.
Starts Suggestions:
All seems ok.
[Soft]
It's ok
[Medium]
It's ok
[Tough]
01:36:055 (7,8,9) - 1/4 ->
Starred~
[Soft]
00:22:069 (3,4,5,1) - Spacing between (5) and (1) is perfect, but may be a little confusing since this is an 'easy' difficulty - maybe change it a little?
00:25:028 (4,5,6,1) - ^ between (6) and (1)
00:41:050 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Overused claps?
00:46:069 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Overused whistles?
00:51:088-01:23:001 - Lack of hitsounds
[Medium]
01:05:082 (4) - Move back to 01:05:066
01:16:020 (4) - Move back to 01:16:004
Add some more hitsounds in places, mainly around the beginning - don't go crazy, but a few more would be nice
[Tough]
00:28:052 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - Stack these to mimic the original map?
01:43:077 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - ^
Consider linking all your sliders too, one after another, to mimic the original
Hitsounds (see above)
Star~
00:22:069 (3,4,5,1) - Spacing between (5) and (1) is perfect, but may be a little confusing since this is an 'easy' difficulty - maybe change it a little?
00:25:028 (4,5,6,1) - ^ between (6) and (1)
00:41:050 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Overused claps?
00:46:069 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Overused whistles?
00:51:088-01:23:001 - Lack of hitsounds
[Medium]
01:05:082 (4) - Move back to 01:05:066
01:16:020 (4) - Move back to 01:16:004
Add some more hitsounds in places, mainly around the beginning - don't go crazy, but a few more would be nice
[Tough]
00:28:052 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - Stack these to mimic the original map?
01:43:077 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - ^
Consider linking all your sliders too, one after another, to mimic the original
Hitsounds (see above)
Star~
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sorry,coz of my study,i'm late.
[Soft]
01:02:025 (1) - move 1 grid to the up~nazi~(level 2)
01:23:066 (1,2) - spacing or new combo on 2
[Medium]
01:05:098 (x) - add a circle
01:06:015 (6) - remove the circle
01:06:031 (x) - add a circle
01:16:036 (x) - ^
01:16:052 (6) - remove the circle
01:16:069 (x) - add a circle
01:17:082 (1) - remove clap and add finish.it will sound better.
[Tough]
no problems found.but this diff is kinda...hmm...
its monotone and tedious for now.
you should add more different patterns.
i advise you to map it better.
star.
[Soft]
01:02:025 (1) - move 1 grid to the up~nazi~(level 2)
01:23:066 (1,2) - spacing or new combo on 2
[Medium]
01:05:098 (x) - add a circle
01:06:015 (6) - remove the circle
01:06:031 (x) - add a circle
01:16:036 (x) - ^
01:16:052 (6) - remove the circle
01:16:069 (x) - add a circle
01:17:082 (1) - remove clap and add finish.it will sound better.
[Tough]
no problems found.but this diff is kinda...hmm...
its monotone and tedious for now.
you should add more different patterns.
i advise you to map it better.
star.
Offset: 2577 (-6 from current)
Turn the hitsound volume up a bit? Or is there really just a lack of hitsounds? o_o
Turn the hitsound volume up a bit? Or is there really just a lack of hitsounds? o_o
Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these, but you may be able to get away with not changing it
Red = major issues. you need to change these
timing seems fine
[SOFT]
00:28:004 (5,6) - Remove these? these are too fast for an easy difficulty imo.
00:51:039 (9,11) - Same as above. maybe remove these 2 beats to make it easier?
[MEDIUM]
Too hard for a Normal difficulty i think. i'd remove some of the beats so the streams of beats are shorter
[TOUGH]
01:02:025 (1) - These long sliders cam get pretty boring. maybe remove these and map these with some beats?
01:07:044 (1) - ^
01:12:063 (1) - ^
Really, there are not many technical problems, but the long streams of beats in all 3 difficulties are pretty repetitive and boring. You should experiment more. Put some other patterns in instead of long streams of beats.
I don't like this map enough to star it im afraid
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these, but you may be able to get away with not changing it
Red = major issues. you need to change these
timing seems fine
[SOFT]
00:28:004 (5,6) - Remove these? these are too fast for an easy difficulty imo.
00:51:039 (9,11) - Same as above. maybe remove these 2 beats to make it easier?
[MEDIUM]
Too hard for a Normal difficulty i think. i'd remove some of the beats so the streams of beats are shorter
[TOUGH]
01:02:025 (1) - These long sliders cam get pretty boring. maybe remove these and map these with some beats?
01:07:044 (1) - ^
01:12:063 (1) - ^
Really, there are not many technical problems, but the long streams of beats in all 3 difficulties are pretty repetitive and boring. You should experiment more. Put some other patterns in instead of long streams of beats.
I don't like this map enough to star it im afraid
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nice map
star
star
This song...might be a bad choice for a beginner mapper..
Soft- zzz, guess its easy enough, but kinda boring for this fast song, oh well
and why did you use clap, then whistle, then finish for hitsound pace, stick with only one of them if you're ganna have 'em for each second note (I'd prefer clap, or whistle)
Medium- this could be so much more fun... not just a note per beat (with few exceptions)
hitsounds too plain, and don't use finish so much like that (same as Soft), use finish as a finishing hitsound (hence the name)
Anyways..
01:17:017 (8,9) - what is this mapped to? cuz the rest of the combo seems to be follow "vocal", shouldn't it be note on 01:17:017 and 01:17:033 then spinner starting on 01:17:066?
Don't hesitate to place a bit more notes and mixing short sliders in those notes instead of just continuous hitcircles
Tough- ow, do you know how hard it is to hit those streams at 185BPM? D:
I'm glad there are short (etna) sliders in this, but still, you should try mixing hitcircles and sliders together more, not an entire section full of circles and an entire section of sliders...
Like the other two, don't use paced finish hitsounds
and for harder diffs, use smaller grid size the whole way through
01:03:015 (4) - 1/4 to the right (on to the white tick)
01:23:000 - add note (even though I disagree with this stream)
01:36:055 (7,9) - 1/4 to the right (7 onto the white tick, and 9 onto the red)
Though technically "rankable", it needs work if you want people to like the map
Soft- zzz, guess its easy enough, but kinda boring for this fast song, oh well
and why did you use clap, then whistle, then finish for hitsound pace, stick with only one of them if you're ganna have 'em for each second note (I'd prefer clap, or whistle)
Medium- this could be so much more fun... not just a note per beat (with few exceptions)
hitsounds too plain, and don't use finish so much like that (same as Soft), use finish as a finishing hitsound (hence the name)
Anyways..
01:17:017 (8,9) - what is this mapped to? cuz the rest of the combo seems to be follow "vocal", shouldn't it be note on 01:17:017 and 01:17:033 then spinner starting on 01:17:066?
Don't hesitate to place a bit more notes and mixing short sliders in those notes instead of just continuous hitcircles
Tough- ow, do you know how hard it is to hit those streams at 185BPM? D:
I'm glad there are short (etna) sliders in this, but still, you should try mixing hitcircles and sliders together more, not an entire section full of circles and an entire section of sliders...
Like the other two, don't use paced finish hitsounds
and for harder diffs, use smaller grid size the whole way through
01:03:015 (4) - 1/4 to the right (on to the white tick)
01:23:000 - add note (even though I disagree with this stream)
01:36:055 (7,9) - 1/4 to the right (7 onto the white tick, and 9 onto the red)
Though technically "rankable", it needs work if you want people to like the map
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Sorry for the very late reply.
Here are some suggestions to make the map more interesting.
Soft:
Remove all the long sliders (Ex: 00:10:366 (1,2,1,2)) and just map those areas in a normal style
Also, there is a severe lack of shorter sliders in the map, so I advise you use some shorter sliders to replace some of the streams that are too hard for easy
Medium:
Again, remove all the long sliders.
This difficulty has the problem of playing like a metronome (esp the middle of the song), and this metronome is very noticeable because you have extended sections of pure circles in only diagonal and straight patterns. To make the metronome less apparent, I advise mixing in some short sliders into the streams and adding some curved patterns.
Tough:
I advise you focus on changing the first half of this difficulty.
This diff finally has short sliders, but when you use short sliders or streams, they are the only pattern that appears the entire section. Also in the first sections you have sliders, you only use straight sliders, so the amp feels very repetitive. To fix this, mix the streams with the sliders and add some curved sliders to your set.
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Sorry I am asking for a lot of remapping, but I believe that the map will greatly benefit from remapping the more monotonous parts of the map.
Feel free to ask me to look at the map again after you finish. (I will try to respond sooner next time)
Here are some suggestions to make the map more interesting.
Soft:
Remove all the long sliders (Ex: 00:10:366 (1,2,1,2)) and just map those areas in a normal style
Also, there is a severe lack of shorter sliders in the map, so I advise you use some shorter sliders to replace some of the streams that are too hard for easy
Medium:
Again, remove all the long sliders.
This difficulty has the problem of playing like a metronome (esp the middle of the song), and this metronome is very noticeable because you have extended sections of pure circles in only diagonal and straight patterns. To make the metronome less apparent, I advise mixing in some short sliders into the streams and adding some curved patterns.
Tough:
I advise you focus on changing the first half of this difficulty.
This diff finally has short sliders, but when you use short sliders or streams, they are the only pattern that appears the entire section. Also in the first sections you have sliders, you only use straight sliders, so the amp feels very repetitive. To fix this, mix the streams with the sliders and add some curved sliders to your set.
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Sorry I am asking for a lot of remapping, but I believe that the map will greatly benefit from remapping the more monotonous parts of the map.
Feel free to ask me to look at the map again after you finish. (I will try to respond sooner next time)
Topic Starter
blissfulyoshi wrote:
Sorry for the very late reply.
Here are some suggestions to make the map more interesting.
Soft:
Remove all the long sliders (Ex: 00:10:366 (1,2,1,2)) and just map those areas in a normal style
Also, there is a severe lack of shorter sliders in the map, so I advise you use some shorter sliders to replace some of the streams that are too hard for easy
How?
Medium:
Again, remove all the long sliders.
This difficulty has the problem of playing like a metronome (esp the middle of the song), and this metronome is very noticeable because you have extended sections of pure circles in only diagonal and straight patterns. To make the metronome less apparent, I advise mixing in some short sliders into the streams and adding some curved patterns.
How?
Tough:
I advise you focus on changing the first half of this difficulty.
This diff finally has short sliders, but when you use short sliders or streams, they are the only pattern that appears the entire section. Also in the first sections you have sliders, you only use straight sliders, so the amp feels very repetitive. To fix this, mix the streams with the sliders and add some curved sliders to your set.
How?
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Sorry I am asking for a lot of remapping, but I believe that the map will greatly benefit from remapping the more monotonous parts of the map.
Feel free to ask me to look at the map again after you finish. (I will try to respond sooner next time)
delete two notes you have placed and then fill it up with one slider. To make a curve.... wait, you know this 
Anyway, just try to add some short sliders and patterns with 30 angle or interesting patterns you can see from other maps. People loves to play notes that aren't only up and down, right and left.
I believe you can think of some patterns you have seen before since you have 43 kudos (you have been modding!)
Anyway, just try to add some short sliders and patterns with 30 angle or interesting patterns you can see from other maps. People loves to play notes that aren't only up and down, right and left.
I believe you can think of some patterns you have seen before since you have 43 kudos (you have been modding!)
Sorry.coz of the bug of timings.all of timings are wrong i gave you before.i fix it now
dont give kds for this post.
[Soft]
01:02:25 (1) - move 1 grid to the up~nazi~(level 2)
01:23:66 (1,2) - spacing or new combo on 2
[Medium]
01:05:98 (x) - add a circle
01:06:15 (6) - remove the circle
01:06:31 (x) - add a circle
01:16:36 (x) - ^
01:16:52 (6) - remove the circle
01:16:69 (x) - add a circle
01:17:82 (1) - remove clap and add finish.it will sound better.
dont give kds for this post.
[Soft]
01:02:25 (1) - move 1 grid to the up~nazi~(level 2)
01:23:66 (1,2) - spacing or new combo on 2
[Medium]
01:05:98 (x) - add a circle
01:06:15 (6) - remove the circle
01:06:31 (x) - add a circle
01:16:36 (x) - ^
01:16:52 (6) - remove the circle
01:16:69 (x) - add a circle
01:17:82 (1) - remove clap and add finish.it will sound better.
Sorry I did not give an example to what I wanted. I remapped the first 8s of tough as an example of what I want to see. (I tried to keep your style, so the map does feel a little strange. I am sure you can adapt the sliders to your map better.)
No kds pls. Hope this helps and feel free to ask anymore questions.
Download: IOSYS (Remixed by Omega Letty X176) - Fascination Marisa (Leorda) [Tough].osu
No kds pls. Hope this helps and feel free to ask anymore questions.
Download: IOSYS (Remixed by Omega Letty X176) - Fascination Marisa (Leorda) [Tough].osu
Overall
Change the artist to IOSYS, and add Omega Letty X176 to the tags
And are you trying to give me seizures with that SB
Lazy
00:10:366 (1,2,3,4) - COnfusing combo
Sweat
I think it would be better if you stack combos like 00:14:907(10,11,12) instead
Hardcore
00:09:069 (1) - Ugly slider IMO
Change the artist to IOSYS, and add Omega Letty X176 to the tags
And are you trying to give me seizures with that SB
Lazy
00:10:366 (1,2,3,4) - COnfusing combo
Sweat
I think it would be better if you stack combos like 00:14:907(10,11,12) instead
Hardcore
00:09:069 (1) - Ugly slider IMO
This map wasn't made for my play style, but I'll do my best.
Lazy
Those large gaps are messing me up because I'm hearing strong beats that aren't supported.
00:09:006 (4,5,6,7) - These notes are a beat apart, but later in the map that spacing coincides with the 1/2 beat. Space them out so I can see the rhythm change that immediately follows.
00:20:009 (1,2,3) - These notes feel unintuitive.
00:27:023 (2) - example of a gap that messes me up
01:26:090 (2) - another gap that messes me up
01:29:050 (2) - and another
Sweat
Um, I'm not going to say to much for this or the next one. I think there are some points that would annoy me if I were playing, but that's how I play. Other players might enjoy it.
Hardcore
Gah, deathstreams.
Could you choose another set of colors for that storyboard or drop it altogether.
There are parts where you slow down after a 1/2 beat stream that I would find annoying (example: 01:09:071 (8,1)) Can you just add that extra half beat there?
Lazy
Those large gaps are messing me up because I'm hearing strong beats that aren't supported.
00:09:006 (4,5,6,7) - These notes are a beat apart, but later in the map that spacing coincides with the 1/2 beat. Space them out so I can see the rhythm change that immediately follows.
00:20:009 (1,2,3) - These notes feel unintuitive.
00:27:023 (2) - example of a gap that messes me up
01:26:090 (2) - another gap that messes me up
01:29:050 (2) - and another
Sweat
Um, I'm not going to say to much for this or the next one. I think there are some points that would annoy me if I were playing, but that's how I play. Other players might enjoy it.
Hardcore
Gah, deathstreams.
Could you choose another set of colors for that storyboard or drop it altogether.
There are parts where you slow down after a 1/2 beat stream that I would find annoying (example: 01:09:071 (8,1)) Can you just add that extra half beat there?
I think the storyboarding is gonna cause so many issues among players...
1) Seizures
2) Entirely distracting
1) Seizures
2) Entirely distracting
Topic Starter
Thanks! I already changes some artist but I can't upload with Full Submisson! Can you help me?NoHItter wrote:
Overall
Change the artist to IOSYS, and add Omega Letty X176 to the tags
And are you trying to give me seizures with that SB
Lazy
00:10:366 (1,2,3,4) - COnfusing combo
Sweat
I think it would be better if you stack combos like 00:14:907(10,11,12) instead
Hardcore
00:09:069 (1) - Ugly slider IMO
//Overall//
the spinner aproach circle is too hard to see :/ Maybe make it lighter?
//Lazy//
The aproach circle is tooo slow. makes the gameplay confusing =/ Please, rise it a little (like 3 or 4 points)
the spinner aproach circle is too hard to see :/ Maybe make it lighter?
//Lazy//
The aproach circle is tooo slow. makes the gameplay confusing =/ Please, rise it a little (like 3 or 4 points)
- 00:12:312(5) - The way is now, looks like that the slider end at 00:12:799 cuz it's touching on the (1). But i couldn't find anything too do, except really add one more loop on this slider. I think it's the best thing you can do this time =/
00:44:096(5) - New Combo~ - Hitsound mod: (Do them all and see if you like my idea)
- 00:54:474(1) - Whistle on the end
- 00:55:772(3) - ^
- 00:56:745(4) - Whistle~
- 00:59:339(x) - Add a note with whistle. - 01:11:339(7) - New Combo
- 01:17:826(1,2,3) - Finish Hitsound?
- Hitsound mod: (Do them all and see if you like my idea)
- 00:05:177(1) - Whistle
- 00:06:474(5) - ^
- 00:07:772(9) - ^
- 00:08:420(11) - ^
- 00:09:069(1) - ^
- 00:09:718(2) - Finish~ - 00:07:772(9) - New Combo
- 00:10:366(1,2,3,4,5,6) - Too confusing. Make something like [Lazy], please >_<
- 00:14:420(7) - New Combo
- 00:44:096(9) - ^
- 01:32:420(5) - Too close with the previous note.
- 00:13:934(7) - New Combo
- 00:16:529(4) - ^
- 00:21:718(5) - ^
- 00:23:339(1,2,3,4) - Too consfusing and is not really elegant >_<
- 00:26:907(7) - New Combo
- 00:28:204(x) - Add a note here.
- 00:49:447(9) - New Combo
- 00:54:474(9) - ^
- 01:05:177(5) - ^
- 01:10:042(7) - ^
- 01:15:555(8) - ^
- 01:37:285(6) - ^
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