hi,m4m~ sometimes my english will be weird... don't care and if you couldn't understand,say me.
[General]
Normal(lowest diff) must be lower than 3.60 star. please try to make easier.
And this Normal mustn't have overlap circles with 1/1 divisor and it must be same spacing
[Normal]
00:17:222 (2) move slider turn point to x:272 y:234.
about many short sliders00:20:022 (2,3) maybe this short slider is not for normal so change slider to circle and you should use 1.0x distance snap
00:21:622 (2,3) same(change slider to circle) maybe these slider makes diff 3.90star
00:23:222 (2,3) same
00:36:822 (1,2,3,4) same
01:02:422 (1,2,3,4) same these slider are beautiful but it's not for normal..;
01:04:822 (2) same
01:08:022 (2) same
01:11:222 (2) same
01:14:422 (2) same
01:24:022 (2) same
01:47:222 (1,2,3,4) same,acutally it is not for lowest diff.
01:53:622 (1,2,3,4) same
02:00:022 (1,2,3,4) same
02:08:822 (2,3) same
02:10:422 (2,3) same
02:12:022 (2,3) same
02:15:622 (3) same
02:17:222 (3) same
02:18:822 (3) same
02:22:022 (3) same
02:23:222 (2,3) same
02:25:222 (3) same
02:28:022 (2,3) same
02:30:022 (3) same
sorry for writing same and long problem
00:25:422 (2) move slider end to x:298 y:135
00:33:622 (5) this part is overlap and maybe it is for unranked.so i guess you should move slider point to x190 y202 like this
00:52:422 (2) overlap so move to x:366 y:85
00:57:022 (2) uhm.. is that okay for normal? maybe it is hard to put circle.
01:05:622 (4) overlap i think it's better that first slider point moves to x:110 y:140 then change slider form.
01:12:022 (4) same
01:15:222 (4) same, move to somewhere
01:20:022 (1) same,01:22:622 this overlap is okay(because these timing are on the 1/2 divisor)
01:56:422 (3) same
02:04:822 (1,2) same
02:14:222 (2) maybe this circle shouldn't put for normal
02:27:022 (2) same
other is perfectly and i like your map style
[Hard]
00:18:422 (4,5) maybe everyone doesn't care these slider's curve,better to change straight line
00:20:422 (5,6) i think this spacing is too big,move to x:288 y:319
00:25:222 (5,1) maybe this overlap makes player weird. also other part is so.
02:13:522 (4) kick slider is too long i think it is better.
02:19:922 (4) same
02:26:322 (4) same
[Insane]
00:26:522 (4,5,6,7) it looks better
00:43:622 (3,4) it looks better
01:06:422 (5) from 4's slider end to 5's slider first and from 5's slider end to 6's slider first are compared wrong spacing with timing ,i got weird
i think it looks better
01:08:822 (1) this slider is hard to keep combo i want this slider to rotate anticlock wise on same point or change to something.
01:14:022 (3) from 2 to 3's spacing is too big. you should change better. overlap is the easiest.
Good luck!