Yo, as requested.
[General]
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Best of luck!
[General]
- Let's start with the fact, that every kiai appears to be 3ms earlier on the easy. Consider fixing it in order to keep consistency.
- Please, remove No game from the tags, since there's no point in using the same word twice. Id it's mentioned in metadata nce, the search engine will be able to find it.
- Either get rid of some of your 1/2 patterns or reduce OD by one tick to make the diff a bit more playable for the beginners.
Note: how to get rid of those 1/2 patterns like 00:06:847 (1,2,1,2) -ust use 3/2 sliders like this one. For the patterns, where using 3/2 sliders seems impossible to you, OD1 will help beginners to deal with 1/2 patterns. So, yeah, just TRY to avoid those 1/2s as much as possible.
Note: the Easiest diff of the mapset is supposed to be friendly towards the beginners! So, avoiding 1/2 beats as much as possible sounds like a good idea. Please, don't forget that beginners have poor reading/playing skills, so they can't understand hard patterns! - Try making your combos 2 times longer, so you'll be able to keep consistency and avoid short combos. Most of the time your map is just 1>2>1>2>1>2. I think that these combos are TOO short and may confuse beginners, the best solutuion is to make your combos longer, I think.
- 01:22:765 - it soulnds like a good idea to have a circle there, it'll work with the vocals pretty good and also it will help you to keep your rhythm a bit more consistent.
The diff appears to be fine, but you could make it a bit easier and the comboing looks a bit unpleasnt, imo. Not a big deal, but you can actually improve it!
- Due to low AR and pretty fast SV the diff feels a bit confusing in action. Try usig AR5 and probably you'll also have to use HP4 in order to keep the diff balanced!
- 00:05:214 (3,4) - and all the similar pattrerns. Consult soe low-skilled players about such patterns, see if those, who play Normal diffs are actually able to read/play 3/4 patterns. I am really unsure about the way you use them here.
- 00:35:419 (5) - minor - your flow here feels a little bit forced. THe transition from (3) to (4) plays kinda tough, imo. So, I've tried to improve it and got this pattern. See if you like it better or not!
- 00:46:643 (2) - the way how you map 00:46:847 - with just a tail of a slider sounds a bit strange to me. Since 00:46:847 - sounds really strong, it deserves a circle or a slider, so move the slider to 00:46:847 - please! Example!
- 00:52:561 (1) - I'd map the spinner properly. It seems a bit weird to me that you have a spinner there. The loud music beats end at 00:53:378 - ad vocals end at 00:53:582 - so, I see no point in ignoring them. Removing the spinner and mapping these beats should help, try it!
- 01:05:214 (3,4) - minor - the transition again. It is a bit out of your style, so as a player I'd intuitively hit (5). Maybe a star here would flow better, huh?
- 01:23:888 - consider starting s[inner there in order to keep consistency with the rest of the mapset. It is not so important for a GD, but it'd be cool, anyway!
I'm not sure about 3/4 beats, otherwise it is quite alright. Good job!
- There's no need to keep the HP Drain this low, settin g it to (7) might make the diff a bit better!
- 00:05:521 - since you're using triplets, use them constantly! There's a beat, so you might want to add a circle here. It'll give you more consistent rhythm, which is awesome for the diff!
- 00:21:949 (2,3,4,5) - minor - fixing blankets here would be a good idea. Appearance is also quite important for any map!
- 00:46:847 (4) - the 1/8 slider feels too hard there. Don't make this diff TOO hard, replace it with a 1/1 slider. It will reflect the sound and it is much more playable and fitting with the diff!
- 01:04:398 (3,4) - this pattern feels a bit out of your style and the flow doesn't feel so natural here. I would go with something more traditional here. Example
Note: maybe it's just me, but I feel like such patterns give uncomfortable cursor moves and hurt your flow. So, if you agree - 01:07:255 (1,2) - fix the same here!
Pretty nice diff. Feels more like a Hard+, but it's still a really good diff!
- 00:15:010 (5) - placing a new combo here might help you to emphasize this art of the music and will wotrk pretty nice with the patterns, so, try it!
- 00:28:786 (3) - minor - a little bit overlapped with the default HP-Bar. Looks rather messy, so I'd try to fix that.
- 00:43:990 (8) - try to emphasize these whistles somehow? I feel like the sound changes and it shouldn't be ignored. Maybe some 1/4 sliders with whistle hitsounds? See for yourself or contact me if you need an idea
Very impressive diff! Nice usage of the 1/4 sliders and everything is very fun to play, good job!
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Best of luck!