Hi
General:
General:
- add 1500 of Audioleadin, the diffs are starting too sudden
- you have some unsnapped green lines, them doesn't affect nothing, but anyways:SPOILER00:11:748 - snap to 00:11:745
00:13:993 - snap to 00:13:990
00:40:319 - snap to 00:40:316 - 00:01:745 a bit nazi, but moving this to x:436 y:64 will look better, I meant 00:01:337 (2,3,1) - the triangle will be perfect
- 00:02:561 add whistle in the tail? it fit a lot with the melody imo, also it will be consistent with 00:04:194
- 00:03:888 (2) - this should end in 00:03:990 -, since I can't hear nothing in 00:04:092 -, if you really don't want to map 00:03:990 -, I guess something like 00:02:255 (2) - will fit better the music, instead of 00:03:888 (2,3) -
- 00:05:521 (2) - similar as above
- 00:12:051 (2) Unsnapped slider tail
- 00:13:582 (2,3,4) - mm this triplet doesn't fit the music IMO, since I can't hear music in 00:13:786 -, is not better to bring more emphasis to the vocals? like this:
- 00:18:276 (1,2) - ah I don't know, I like the cursor movement here, but at the same time I feel a regular circle triplet will fit the music better IMO
- 00:21:133 (3) - don't kill me pls, 1 grid to the left for better blanket xD
- 00:33:684 (3,5) - can you avoid this tiny overlap? doesn't look nice IMO, but if is on purpose okay
- 00:34:398 (6,2) - ^
- 00:40:623 (4) - I can't hear nothing in 00:40:827 -, but yes in 00:40:725 -, is not better to follow the vocals in this part? like this:
- 00:52:561 add NC, since the music change here a bit, also is a bit consistent with 00:47:663 (1,2,3) - and 00:37:868 (1,2,3) -
- 01:04:806 (3) - maybe move this to x:152 y:104 to be stacked with the previous 01:02:970 (3,4,5) -
- really fun
- 00:01:949 (1,2,3) - not a fan of this rhythm, mainly cuz you're ignoring the sound in 00:02:153 - and it make really difficult to click 00:02:255 in time, consider to change this rhythm, maybe something similar to what Nyquill did:SPOILER
or - 00:03:582 (3,4) - similar as above, your rhythms are not consistent in similar parts of the song, remove 00:04:194 (4) - and add a repeat in 00:03:582 (3) - to be consistent with 00:00:317 (1) -
- 00:05:623 (6) - missing whistle in the head, I guess, since the sound is similar to others spots where you added whistles
- 00:06:031 remove whistle from the head and add it in the tail, fit better with the melody, also it will be consistent with 00:06:439
- 00:06:643 if you did the previous one, add whistle here too.
- 00:09:908 (4) - try to don't end slider in strong beats like the one in 00:10:112 due to the strong sound and the change of the music there it need a clickable action, also 00:10:112 is the place where you NC should be, try this:SPOILER
also you don't need to break your symmetry - 00:12:051 (1,2,1,2) - I like this
- 00:13:786 nothing in the music here <:, is better to follow the vocals at this part IMO, try this:
- 00:17:255 remove finish and add whistle fit better the music, also you forget a whistle here 00:16:643
- 00:19:500 (6) - almost the same as 00:09:908 -, for this case try this:
- 00:21:133 (6) - ^
- 00:21:949 (2,3) - spacing pls, they are too close each other :<
- 00:26:031 (4) - same as 00:19:500
- 00:34:500 remove this circle? since there is nothing in the music
- 00:37:663 (7) - same as 00:19:500 -, try to don't end sliders in strong beats, specially when the vocals and music change there, this is the case here 00:37:868 - this beat should be mapped as slider head or circle, but not as a tail, also that rhythm is always breaking your combo pattern
- 00:48:276 (3,4) - nazi, but this blanket is really off, consider to improve it
- 00:49:092 (6) - same as 00:37:663
- 00:49:500 (1,2,3,4) - fix the spacing here, actually this is really hard to read
- 00:57:868 (2,3,4) - spacing~
- 01:15:419 you're missing a NC here, since you're adding them every one stanza
- 01:18:480 remove NC and add one in 01:18:684 -, following your combo pattern?
- 01:21:949 (3,4) - Nyquill did a drain zone here, that fit the music pretty nice IMO, try the same for consistency?
- 00:06:850 - snap this green line to 00:06:847
- 00:10:112 (1,2) - a bit nazi, but you can improve this blanket
- 00:17:868 (3) - ending sliders on strong beats doesn't fit the music pretty nice, also I feel this part a bit hard to hit in time for non experienced players, try this rhythm instead:
- 00:24:398 (3) - similar as above, maybe try this:
- 01:02:357 (4) - this slider sound much better ending with the drums in 01:02:765 -, also it will fit the music better IMO
- 01:05:214 (3) - similar to 00:17:868 -, also I feel this part is a bit hard to know what are you following if vocals or instrument, maybe try to fit the vocal line better like this:
- 00:01:133 with the 5% here you're silencing both sliderslide and slidertick and that's unrankable, up the volume to 20% to be safe
- 00:02:765 same as above
- 00:04:398 ^
- 00:06:031 ^
- Adding new combos every 1 stanza in a easy diff, make them look really shorts, since most of your combos are about two objects, I highly suggest you to use a NC every 2 stanzas instead, like the normal diff
- 00:20:521 (2,1) - this blanket look a bit off, not really important, but will be nice if you improve it
- 00:49:296 (1) - remove this NC, is not even necessary
- 00:55:827 (1) - ^
- 01:15:419 (1) - ^
- 01:18:684 (1) - ^
- nice diff, but consider to recomboing it following 2 stanzas, some times you did that, but also some times you follow just 1 stanza pattern making your combos really shorts