those wrote:

[Storyboard]

1. a-1.png - at 30120, you should keep scaling up until 34708 where fade is 0. This is to differentiate between the length of the held syllable "gu" (1/1) and "n" at 37532 (2/1). http://puu.sh/a3iaP.png
2. a-3.png - the same. http://puu.sh/a3ic7.png
3. 47061 - Consider scaling the large a-4.png from 1 to 1.2, and starting the fade of the smaller one at 0.8 instead of 1. http://puu.sh/a3huv.png and http://puu.sh/a3hvk.png.
4. d-2.png, d-3.png, d-4.png should read from RIGHT to LEFT, since you are using the Eastern vertical bracket. http://puu.sh/a3hJR.jpg makes more sense.
5. d-6.png, d-7.png, d-8.png should have the same treatment.

Great map. Top 5 short maps 2014 彡

1. Your NCing is all over the place o_O
   a good pattern to follow for NCing is just every downbeat (every big white tick) ofc doesn't HAVE to be but it makes sense, makes it consistent, and it's easy to do
2. 00:30:650 - there should be something here imo i mean, you mapped a weaker sound (00:31:708 (1) - ) so why not map out the vocal?
3. ah im just gunna say this now, but you have many downbeats mapped out as a slider end like here 00:49:179 - which isn't really good since downbeat's usually have a really strong sound that should be mapped out
4. hmm ah this map is rly good xD can't find any real problems other than the weird NCing
   i did notice however, that you don't have any claps i recommend you use this kick sound as a clap and add them in as there is a constant 1/1 kick beat
   http://puu.sh/a8BLD/173034a757.wav <-- kick sound c:

1. 00:35:061 (1,2) - use 1.65 ds here as well? looks a bit weird not to
2. 00:46:708 (1,1) - nazi but these are a bit too close imo xP space them out?
3. 01:05:591 (4) - use 1.1 spacing like you did here? 01:04:532 (2) -
4. 01:10:885 (7,8,1) - i really don't understand the spacing change here O_o why did you all of a sudden jump to 1.4 DS rather than 1.1 which seems to be the constant?
5. 01:48:120 (5,1) - this really isnt a good pattern :/ hard to read and doesn't flow well
6. this diff also has some places with weird NCing, i suggest the same as i did for insane, every 1 or 2 downbeats.
   other than that in general, i'm confused by some of the spacing changes you made but i suppose it doesn't matter that much
   
   same as in insane, i suggested a clap sound you guys can use

Kibbleru wrote:

[Another]

1. Your NCing is all over the place o_O
   a good pattern to follow for NCing is just every downbeat (every big white tick) ofc doesn't HAVE to be but it makes sense, makes it consistent, and it's easy to do
2. 00:30:650 - there should be something here imo i mean, you mapped a weaker sound (00:31:708 (1) - ) so why not map out the vocal?
3. ah im just gunna say this now, but you have many downbeats mapped out as a slider end like here 00:49:179 - which isn't really good since downbeat's usually have a really strong sound that should be mapped out
4. hmm ah this map is rly good xD can't find any real problems other than the weird NCing
   i did notice however, that you don't have any claps i recommend you use this kick sound as a clap and add them in as there is a constant 1/1 kick beat
   http://puu.sh/a8BLD/173034a757.wav <-- kick sound c:

[Hyper]

1. 00:35:061 (1,2) - use 1.65 ds here as well? looks a bit weird not to
2. 00:46:708 (1,1) - nazi but these are a bit too close imo xP space them out?
3. 01:05:591 (4) - use 1.1 spacing like you did here? 01:04:532 (2) -
4. 01:10:885 (7,8,1) - i really don't understand the spacing change here O_o why did you all of a sudden jump to 1.4 DS rather than 1.1 which seems to be the constant?
5. 01:48:120 (5,1) - this really isnt a good pattern :/ hard to read and doesn't flow well
6. this diff also has some places with weird NCing, i suggest the same as i did for insane, every 1 or 2 downbeats.
   other than that in general, i'm confused by some of the spacing changes you made but i suppose it doesn't matter that much
   
   same as in insane, i suggested a clap sound you guys can use

Both normal and easy diff are really good, couldn't find anything in them sry x_x
storyboard is also nice! fix some of ur nc inconsistencies and maybe add that clap i recommended
but go get yourself a bat! this map needs to be ranked!
sry if mod was poor xP this map is good

also, wow to get a compliment from those that is quite something q:

I have to admit that I've made some serious mistakes hope they are rankable

Accel World wrote:

[让我们来摸一波]

[General]

看了一下AImod, Display epilepsy warning (这个需要勾上?)

[Mei's Beginner]

00:08:944 (5) - 为什么我感觉是这个note需要nc....
↑↑↑↑↑↑↑如果这面的改了就取消00:10:003 (1) 的nc。
00:11:061 (2) 和 00:11:414 (3) - 我觉得这两个需要交换一下，就是说让(3)这个滑条从 00:11:061 开始，到 00:11:767 结束。(2)这个note移到 00:12:120 。
00:48:120 (4) - 要不要nc一下呢。

基本上就这些了√

[Normal]

话说N就用变速没问题吗O.O 我不太清楚....

01:36:826 (2) - 嗯.... 这里加个nc或者换个地方比较好...?

节奏没什么问题,排列也合格√

[wantuole's Hyper]

Impressive

01:19:356 (1) - 01:20:994 (4) 这里处理的非常棒:D

没有什么可以挑的,非常棒的一个hyper。

[Another]

00:14:061 (2) - 我觉得这个跳可以弄的大一点。
00:24:826 到 00:25:885 的节奏改成这样如何---->http://puu.sh/agBXR/8519c221ad.jpg , 然后00:25:003 (2) 这个短滑条可以与 00:24:473 (3) 重叠。
00:41:016 (2) - 我觉得它和(1)之间的间距可以再大一点....

还有就是总感觉打起来不太舒服....可能是排列方向问题和有几个滑条刻意的ctrl-g了。
感觉你还需要再琢磨一下_(:з」∠)_，但是应该是没有unrank的地方。


以上

应该会有Bat来了..到时候等他说话。

依然感谢你百忙之中抽空帮我看图。Thanks for your mod!

1. 可以把"Shimotsuki Haruka Nekomata Master Beatmania Element of SPADA"从tags里去掉 因为已经存在于title和artist中了

1. 00:25:885 (1,2,3,4) - 不是正三角形显得不是很好看 建议把2和3ctrl+g一下然后调整2右上角的prev和next都到1.2x
2. 00:48:120 (4,5) - 包好一点
3. 01:33:650 (1) - 虽然音乐中此处没有重音 但我觉得这样的音效不具有足够的打击感 打起来不够舒服

1. 可以改diff名为standard配合其它三个难度
2. 00:26:944 (1,2) - 不是很好看
3. 01:21:297 (2) - 有点不舒服 可以直接改为一个1/1滑条 因为在这里突然有三个1/2音有些突兀

1. hard里一个转盘都没有柑橘不太好

1. Good job

Bungaku Shounen wrote:

[General]

1. 可以把"Shimotsuki Haruka Nekomata Master Beatmania Element of SPADA"从tags里去掉 因为已经存在于title和artist中了

[Mei's Beginner]

1. 00:25:885 (1,2,3,4) - 不是正三角形显得不是很好看 建议把2和3ctrl+g一下然后调整2右上角的prev和next都到1.2x
2. 00:48:120 (4,5) - 包好一点
3. 01:33:650 (1) - 虽然音乐中此处没有重音 但我觉得这样的音效不具有足够的打击感 打起来不够舒服

[Normal]

1. 可以改diff名为standard配合其它三个难度
2. 00:26:944 (1,2) - 不是很好看
3. 01:21:297 (2) - 有点不舒服 可以直接改为一个1/1滑条 因为在这里突然有三个1/2音有些突兀

[wantuole's Hyper]

1. hard里一个转盘都没有柑橘不太好

[Another]

1. Good job

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO~

[General]
* Source : beatmania IIDX (remove 21 SPADA and put to tags)

[Normal]
01:12:473 (4,1) - Swap new combo for new emphasing?
01:22:532 (4) - I would like to remove this because it doesn't follow the vocal. But it just my opinion though
01:30:297 (5) - ^
01:55:885 (2) - I had difficult to understand this because I thought the end slider is land on white tick. How about shorten it to previous white tick and add note at red tick? So it match with vocal

[wantuole's Hyper]
00:11:061 (3) - Add new combo here for your combo pattern?
00:21:120 (4,1) - This two object makes the circular flow goes off that makes uncomfortable during gameplay. How about change the pattern into like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1878502
00:31:179 (3) - Reverse this slider to make a bouncy flow?
00:46:003 (1,1,1) - Any reason why you spam this new combos?
01:49:885 (5) - New combo here for shorten the long combos
02:01:179 (1,2,3) - Add new combo for every slider for difference slider speed and preventing players from confusion

Good luck~

Thanks for your modding! Have a nice day!

Nymph wrote:

hi.

[General]
sb文件夹的thumb文件应该没用吧


[wantuole's Hyper]
这种难度我建议AR8吧 比AR7好读不少

mapset基本没什么问题 hitsound上稍微有点建议: 最后音乐在减缓 我建议在音量上做出渐变降低来迎合音乐 效果应该比保持音量不变更好


nothing important, call me back if you have any reply, btw gj for a 1st map

Cherry Blossom wrote:

Time to get a bubble Frey ;w;

Nymph wrote:

hi

there are 2 osb files in the folder, delete the unnecessary one so I can bubble this

Frey wrote:

:? ...what should I do now?

huafenshaonv wrote:

Frey wrote:

:? ...what should I do now?

go cry ;w;

Kibbleru wrote:

i think we can do this again hue

1. if you have link to metadata itll be helpful q:
2. can u make the Storyboard so that it works for widescreen users as well D:? i don't think it'd be that hard to do.

1. i still suggest you try to keep your NC to every measure (like i suggested a while ago lol). But as long as you can justify it i won't force you.

1. 00:08:061 (2) - should be 1/6!
2. 00:19:003 (4) - space this out a bit so that the jump to 00:19:179 (5) - would be smoother
   
   SPOILER

   
3. uhh NCing for this diff is also kinda inconsistent :X it seems like you're jumping from every 1 measure/NC to every 3 measures/NC..
4. 01:02:767 - i found it weird that you would leave this empty but map a weaker sound like 01:02:591 (5) -

1. 01:28:356 (4,1) - i really don't know why you would stack these :X makes it rather awkward to play
   01:36:826 (3,4) - ^
   01:46:356 (3,1) - ^
2. 02:02:040 (1,1) - i think you can change the SV for these sliders to make them play more consistently (as in the slider speed).

1. 00:49:179 (5) - nazi - blanket :C
2. 00:59:767 (1,1) - so like the guideline told us 4 beats after a spinner for easy diff but i will ask around to see if it's acceptable in a case like this :X
   01:16:708 (1,1) - ^
   01:33:650 (1,1) - ^ etc lol
   01:50:591 (1,1) - ^

Kibbleru wrote:

[general]

if you have link to metadata itll be helpful q:
https://remywiki.com/Element_of_SPADA

can u make the Storyboard so that it works for widescreen users as well D:? i don't think it'd be that hard to do.
For now, I just untick the widescreen support, cuz with it on would be worse... More importantly,I don't know how to deal with sb actuallly...

[another]

i still suggest you try to keep your NC to every measure (like i suggested a while ago lol). But as long as you can justify it i won't force you.
OK, I fixed most of them. I still leave some unfixed for clear pattern

[hyper]

00:08:061 (2) - should be 1/6! Fixed

00:19:003 (4) - space this out a bit so that the jump to 00:19:179 (5) - would be smoother Fixed

uhh NCing for this diff is also kinda inconsistent :X it seems like you're jumping from every 1 measure/NC to every 3 measures/NC..
I think his NC looks more reasonable than mine. so I fixed several but not too much (1-3 NC changes).

01:02:767 - i found it weird that you would leave this empty but map a weaker sound like 01:02:591 (5)
It's fine, the blank between 01:02:591 (5) and 01:02:944 (1) is a good intro for incoming 1/1

[normal]

01:28:356 (4,1) - i really don't know why you would stack these :X makes it rather awkward to play
01:36:826 (3,4) - ^
01:46:356 (3,1) - ^
Fixed

02:02:040 (1,1) - i think you can change the SV for these sliders to make them play more consistently (as in the slider speed).
No, if that, people can't figure out if there is a sv change

[Mei's Easy]

00:49:179 (5) - nazi - blanket :C Fixed

00:59:767 (1,1) - so like the guideline told us 4 beats after a spinner for easy diff but i will ask around to see if it's acceptable in a case like this :X
01:16:708 (1,1) - ^
01:33:650 (1,1) - ^ etc lol
01:50:591 (1,1) - ^[/
I wonder this too, cuz it's waltz beat.

Kibbleru wrote:

the current ranked version has SPADA

but I will ask somebody to check.